1. Lv.11 - 7Key (1.96 stars, 1254 notes)
2. Lv.25 - 7Key (3.63 stars, 2423 notes)
3. Lv.32 - 7Key (4.5 stars, 3021 notes)
4. Mage's Lv.19 - 7Key (2.99 stars, 2126 notes)

ArcherLove wrote:

hihi 2x
col 1~7

00:39:560 (39560|5,39759|1,39759|3,39957|0,39957|2) - http://puu.sh/toggE/317031e102.jpg ? sounds too low
00:43:732 (43732|1) - move to 1?
00:44:725 (44725|5) - move to 7?
01:00:619 - I think there is guitar and bass sound? like -> http://puu.sh/togk9/82af3c42eb.jpg ? but not piano
01:13:633 (73633|0,73633|6,73633|3,73633|1,73931|0,73931|6,73931|3,73931|1) - http://puu.sh/togmq/ea8296aa1c.jpg ?
01:15:321 (75321|3) - move to 3?
02:12:143 - this too guitar and bass sound like http://puu.sh/togk9/82af3c42eb.jpg ?
02:15:321 (135321|1) - add 1 note?
02:15:321 (135321|1,195719|0) - add 1 note?
03:16:513 (196513|5,196911|4) - http://puu.sh/togZ4/960cf90a66.jpg ?
03:17:308 (197308|0,197706|1) - http://puu.sh/togZZ/01156e4568.jpg ?
03:18:103 (198103|4,198500|4) - http://puu.sh/toh0Q/07d5384cb4.jpg ?
03:18:898 (198898|5,198898|0) - add 2 LN again? zz (all is suggestion only!)
03:27:441 (207441|1,207441|5) - move to 3 and 5?

good luckkk :3

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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: Horie Yui - Presenter (PP_Aika)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 3

Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.

[General]
Audio: The Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps, must fix.
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

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[Lv.11]

SPOILER

00:01:812 - add note since the starting sound is strong fitted to be double note. OK

00:10:057 - add note here since piano sound. I want to enphasize the sound here 00:09:759 - so no

00:14:328 - add note since kick sound double note same as 00:13:533 (13533|5,13533|1) - OK

00:23:864 - add note to 4 since loud kick sound same as 00:23:666 (23666|1,23666|5) - I want to enphasize the sound here 00:23:666 - so no

01:45:520 - add note to 4 since clap-like sound. same I want to emphasize the sound below

01:52:871 - ^ since kick sound. same

01:59:030 - ^ clap like sound feels empty without note while it is quite loud. rest part to be empty

02:27:242 - you can add LN to 4 here until 02:28:037 - for that raising sound also to fill the emptiness feeling here. rest part to be empty

02:49:692 (169692|6) - move to 5 to execute the upcoming notes better. nice, and change some pattern

04:09:162 (249162|0) - ^ to 3 same reason.

[Lv.25]

SPOILER

00:23:169 (23169|2,23268|4) - suggesting to move to 5 and 7 respectively so it can be executed in a lesser strain on left hand. ok, I change pattern

00:26:944 - add note since another tom sound can be heard here same as 00:26:845 (26845|1) - I only choose the loudest sound for one note, it's too low for a note

00:47:110 - suggesting: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7331129 fits with the piano sound and very neat to execute. okey, this diff should easier than MX too

00:49:394 (49394|2) - remove since Lv.32 do not have a note here. Or you might want to add note on Lv.32 You decide~ okey remove, and remove some note this part

01:00:321 - add note piano sound same as Lv.32's though optional. only ctrl+h this for balance 01:00:421 (60421|5,60421|1,60520|4,60520|0) -

01:00:818 - add note to 4? since hihat can be heard here. empty for better feeling

01:07:275 (67275|5) - move to 5 so it can be executed without vision problem 01:06:977 (66977|5,67275|5) - okey

01:11:348 (71348|6) - move to 2 same reason above break the feeling

01:12:937 (72937|6) - move to 6 counter part of 01:13:037 (73037|1) - okey

01:15:321 - suggesting to add note to 2 or 3 since a clap sound added here not like 01:15:123 (75123|4,75123|0,75123|3,75123|6) - which do not have clap sound. okey

01:18:898 (78898|5) - move to 7 since the column 7 is 1/1 measure unused. okey

01:28:633 (88633|0,88831|0) - move to 3 and 2 respectively to have that neat chord-stair pattern. putting them together for the feeling

01:41:944 - add note since strong sound cymbals, same as 01:45:123 (105123|5,105123|2,105123|0) - okey


03:18:500 (198500|4,198600|3,198699|2,198798|1,198898|0) - rearrange this as its different pitch than 03:18:103 (198103|4,198202|3,198302|2,198401|1,198500|0) - keep it, no idea now

03:59:626 (239626|6,239825|6) - move to 5 and 6 respectively same as previous. same

04:12:937 - add note strong sound cymbals. okey

[Lv.32]

SPOILER

00:10:156 - add LN to 7 for that sound effect? (optional) keep empty

00:11:348 (11348|3,11547|2,11745|1,11944|4,11944|3,11944|5,11944|0) - ctrl H? so it will be different than 00:10:553 (10553|3,10752|2,10951|1) - which is diffferent piano pitch. move one column to right

00:15:321 - add note to 1 since kick sound similar sound to 00:16:116 (16116|1,16116|3) - doubles. keep the pattern

00:15:719 - ^ to 4 same reason. keep the pattern

00:26:944 - add note, another tom sound here. i add here 00:27:043

00:49:394 - add note? since you add note on Lv.25 here for the hihat keep

00:52:573 - ^

00:54:957 - ^

00:55:057 - ^

01:00:818 - add note for the hihat? keep

01:03:798 - add note to 4 since same sound as 01:03:699 (63699|4,63699|2) - not the same level sound

01:37:474 (97474|5) - move to 5 for clearer vision. okey

01:58:037 - until 01:59:030 - add notes for those sounds as it feels empty here while hearing that without notes. feel empty here is better

02:27:043 - until 02:28:037 - Suggesting to add notes for the kick sounds. Too awkward without notes while you can hear them clearly. Umm, I always keep empty before kiai time, to emphasize the first sound in kiai, this is my special style

04:12:540 - add LN to 4 until 04:12:937 - for that sound effect.empty is better

[Overall]
Familiar voice, its Horie Yui its been a while~ Nice song choice!

Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~

Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~

DustMoon wrote:

(｡･∀･)ﾉﾞ嗨~PP_Aika
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Lv.11

00:01:812 - 00:02:408 - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8C3Q/04a13b58bf.jpg
00:02:606 - 00:03:202 - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8C9r/8d7b7b7bcb.jpg
00:03:401 - 00:03:997 - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8Cdj/9d0928e5df.jpg
00:12:739 (12739|4,12739|6) - 这两个note的间距是2，但是这里却是3 00:13:533 (13533|5,13533|1) - * 建议的键位是（2,5）
00:20:288 (20288|3) - 改成LN并持续到00:20:884 - 因为这里有一段明显的钢琴
00:53:268 (53268|2,53268|6,53467|0,53467|4) - 个人观点：Ctrl+H 反转也许会更好
00:47:209 - 00:47:904 - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8CH1/2323611f3a.jpg
01:03:600 (63600|5,63699|4) - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8CSj/8615e4c67e.jpg
01:06:778 (66778|1,66878|2,66977|3,67275|5) - ……
01:56:249 (116249|5,116249|0,116447|1,116447|6) - 01:56:845 (116845|2,116845|6,117043|4,117043|0) - 两组note间距不一致
这里却保持了间距02:02:408 (122408|6,122408|2,122606|0,122606|4) - 02:03:997 (123997|4,123997|0,124196|2,124196|6) -
02:04:792 (124792|4,124792|0,124990|6,124990|2) - 个人观点：Ctrl+H 反转也许会更好
02:15:123 (135123|1,135222|2) - 建议：https://puu.sh/u8D8v/b209ff99dc.jpg
02:18:302 (138302|5,138401|4,138500|3,138798|1) - ……
02:54:461 (174461|4,174659|4,174858|4) - https://puu.sh/u8DcM/13dcb621bf.jpg
03:47:507 (227507|0,227507|5,227904|6,227904|2) - l两组note间距不同
03:52:076 (232076|3,232474|3,232871|3) - 04:03:997 (243997|3,244394|3,244792|3) - - ……
04:09:957 (249957|1) - 建议移动到1
04:12:937 (252937|2,252937|5) - 建议移动到（2,6）
以上建议是基于铺面整洁度提出的，铺面本身并没有硬性问题。

祝你好运！

Kim_GodSSI wrote:

Modding From:

Kim_GodSSI's Mania Modding Queue

Modding

[Mage's Lv.19]

00:20:090 - Add a note I think it loud

00:35:785 - Add a note Like 00:35:189 -

00:38:566 - Add a note

01:07:275 - Add a note
01:08:864 - ^

01:15:520 - ~ 01:16:315 - how about put note on the vocal sound ?

01:24:162 - , 01:24:361 - I think add notes like 01:23:666 - ~ 01:24:063 -

01:25:951 - Add a note

01:41:149 (101149|3) - What does this follow? It have to definitely

01:48:302 (108302|1) - move to 1

01:49:096 - Add note 1

02:04:792 (124792|5) - move to 5

02:05:586 (125586|5) - move to 5

02:18:500 - ~ 02:19:096 - change pattern like 02:20:090 - ~ 02:20:686 -

03:17:308 - ~ 03:18:898 - change pattern it's too much same thing This patter took too much time to change it xd, if serious, i just don't see altarnative

03:29:924 - Add a note

03:38:765 (218765|1) - Move to 1 rip 2 column
03:39:063 (219063|5) - Move to 7

03:41:447 - Add a note 6

03:43:037 - Add a note 6 and 03:43:335 (223335|0) - move to 5

03:43:732 - add a note 1

03:45:917 (225917|5) - ghost note

03:47:507 - Add a note It's loud
03:50:686 - ^
04:04:990 - ^
04:06:182 - ^

04:07:374 (247374|3) - Delete it
04:08:964 (248964|2) - ^

oops The night got deeper... I have to go sleep Sorry for Can't modding another difficult good night owo

Good luck !

Kivicat wrote:

Hi! From cute queue :з
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Lv. 32

00:04:494 (4494|1,4494|2,4494|3,4792|2,4792|3,4792|4) - Ctrl+j for pitch? umm I think make a ladder is good, no change
00:07:970 (7970|0,7970|2,7970|1,8169|1,8169|3,8169|4,8169|2) - Is there any difference between theese and 00:09:560 (9560|5,9560|3,9759|2,9759|4,9759|1) - ? Why more notes? louder than before so more notes
00:10:057 - Piano sound, same pitch with one on barline before.
00:10:355 (10355|4,10355|1,10355|2) - And here pitch is higher, so i recommend to move at least one note to right.
00:13:931 (13931|1) - Piano stream starts here. But your pattern seems to fit more at 100% speed, so maybe you shouldn't change it. thanks notice this, and no change
00:17:408 (17408|2) - No sound and 00:17:507 (17507|0,17606|1,17706|3) - 1/8 drum stream. You can try something like this: https://puu.sh/vdoA1/2d30560634.png. It also needs some further restructuring, but i leave it to you, cause my style is different. nice
00:23:467 - You could add 1/4 hihat stream here.
00:23:268 (23268|3,23666|6) - No need for two LNs. There's just pure bass sound. but 1 LN is not balance
00:26:348 (26348|3,26348|6,26447|2,26447|0,26547|5) - Try 23-67-4. It's more comfortable and keeps some consistency. nice
00:29:229 - Piano. no sound here, maybe it's too low I can't heard it
00:46:315 - Some pitch following would be nice here. Try this: https://puu.sh/vdxpx/853d46ba84.png too rigid
00:55:752 (55752|3) - Better delete since you ignore similar ghosts before.
00:57:341 (57341|2) - Same.
00:49:096 (49096|4,49295|5,49494|4) - Try 6-5-4 for more balance.
00:49:891 (49891|3,50090|1,50189|3) - 3-7-2 if accept previous. In common, try slightly reconsider this section keeping every bass kick sound (like 00:49:295 (49295|6,49494|6) - and 00:50:090 - ) at 7th column. I see that you alternate 7 and 1, but frankly it just might not work here.
00:50:785 - Add note? I ignore all 1/4 hithat in dense place in this pattern
00:54:461 - and 00:55:057 - Same. just empty for cymbal and instrument before. instead of using LN. I use empty
00:56:050 - Same. same
00:58:831 (58831|3) - Why not keep following bass here? You could use LN till 00:59:229 - , then till 00:59:427 - , then 00:59:626 - and 00:59:825 - change pattern
And why not follow 1/8 stream 00:59:229 - 00:59:328 - ? Don't ignore it in your highest diff. change pattern
00:59:626 - Sounds here are too unstable for simple double stream, you should check each like. I see something like this: https://puu.sh/vdyzH/f7e0807f78.png (i mentioned those 1/2 LNs, just ignore them if you didn't accept). Also, i recommend you to keep following hihat (like 01:00:818 - ) further. It's highest diff, so you don't need to avoid several simple LNs + note patterns.
change better pattern
01:23:864 (83864|1,83964|4) - and then 01:24:162 (84162|1,84262|2) - ctrl+j for some consistency. Just try and look.
01:34:593 (94593|5,94792|1) - Maybe ctrl+j, now it's a bit awkward for right hand. If accept, you can move following notes like this: https://puu.sh/vdzcC/74c76ff1fa.png I have tested it and my pattern is more comfortable to hit, maybe there are more balance
01:35:785 - I just remind that you can follow hihat here. thanks, I ignore that in this pattern
01:42:341 - Follow the bell. This section is too empty. I ignored that because player might not here the bell
01:42:143 - And the hat too. same
01:46:215 (106215|2,106414|2,106613|3) - Frankly, i can't hear any stream there. there are electric sound, as loud as drum
01:52:275 (112275|3,112672|5) - Same as before, why 2 LNs? same for balance
01:54:858 (114858|2,115057|2,115255|2) - Whew, that's uncomfortable and unreasonable here. 01:55:057 (115057|2,115156|1) - move to 2-4, for example. I change a better pattern, thanks notice me this
01:56:845 (116845|3,116845|0,116845|2,116845|5,117043|6,117043|4,117043|3,117043|1) - and 01:57:441 (117441|3,117441|1,117441|5,117441|2,117639|4,117639|6,117639|3,117639|2,117639|0) - Same sounds, but reversed. Why not do the same with chords?
02:04:394 - 1/4 stream. Use sounds like that, they give song some variety and they surely would give it your map as well.
02:10:752 (130752|5,130851|4) - 1/8 stream.
02:11:249 - Consider the beat. I'd add note here and 1/4 further and leave only one on blue lines.
02:12:341 - Hat.
02:38:368 - Disbalance. Try this: https://puu.sh/vdALY/2564239193.png
02:45:917 - Same as before.
02:57:441 - You could follow the bell (and you should if you want to keep those LNs for bell in the end of section). It will hurt those piano when players playing
03:05:785 - Start 1/4 LN stream here. totally different sound
03:15:023 (195023|4) - Why?
03:18:898 (198898|5,198997|4,199096|3) - Merge them, there's one sound. And delete 03:18:898 (198898|0) - opps I miss that sound, and add 1 LN, but there are still 3 LN, we hear the sound in different ways
03:32:408 - Yay, ctrl+c ctrl+v pattern again. C'mon, give it some variety if you are going for rank.

Common things:
1. You ignore many hat sounds. I pointed out some of them, but there's still much to do about that problem. You've made it on purpose probably, but i really miss those notes while playing. In highest diff player expect to see all consistent and clear instrument tracks followed if possible. if I add then, the pattern will become mess. So totally I always ignore them in every maps, I'm different with those BMS style mapper
2. Too inconsistent streams. Try to keep certain pattern at least for 1/1 length. umm... you're right
3. I noticed ctrl+c ctrl+v patterns while playing, and not once. This is a bad sign. Use completely the same pattern only when any change makes it worse. I'll check it soon

Sorry, it's becoming too much for one mod. I think, you could apply some advices from Lv.32 to Lv.25 as well. Also, you can ask me for re-check after several mods, then Lv.25 and Lv.11 would have higher priority for me.

I love this map, waiting to see it ranked
Good luck!

SDVX KevinKun wrote:

Hy , thank you for mod my map -> Ayaka Ohashi - Wagamama MIRROR HEART

If you cant accept this mod, its okay. take it easy

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lv.25

00:26:646 (26646|6,26745|5,26845|4,26944|3,27043|2,27143|1) - this pattern, that piano sound is rising. i guess you should mirror it like this


00:29:427 (29427|6,29626|5,29825|4,30023|3,30222|2,30818|6,31017|5,31215|4,31414|3,31613|2,31811|1) - same like before, use left-to-right pattern. like this


00:32:209 (32209|6,32408|5,32606|4,32805|3,33004|2,33202|1,33401|0,33798|6,33997|5,34196|4,34394|3,34593|2,34792|1,34990|0) - same, use left-to-right pattern for rising tone

01:31:017 (91017|0,91116|1,91215|2,91315|3,91414|1,91513|2,91613|3,91712|5,91811|4,91911|3,92010|6,92110|5,92209|4,92308|3) - use left-to-right pattern. like this

just keep it now, i'll change it if I have idea
02:27:043 - at this part, its more hype if you add more short-long note. XD (just pass it if you wont) I can't heard any sound can make LN pattern

03:15:719 (195719|0,195818|1,195917|2,196017|3,196116|4,196116|1,196215|2,196315|3,196414|4,196513|5,196513|2,196613|3,196712|4,196811|5,196911|6,196911|4,197010|3,197110|2,197209|1,197308|0,197308|5,197408|4,197507|3,197606|2,197706|5,197706|1,197805|4,197904|3,198004|2,198103|1,198103|4,198202|3,198302|2,198401|1,198500|4,198500|0,198600|3,198699|2,198798|1,198898|0,198898|5,198997|4,199096|3) -
aw, i think its overmapping, especially 03:16:811 (196811|5,196911|4,196911|6,198004|2,198103|1,198103|4,198202|3) - , use short note. but if you wont.
fix this.
remove 03:18:898 (198898|5,198997|4,199096|3) - and make note 03:19:196 (199196|2) - longer
this is Lv.25, it's easy for those player in this level, and I have ignored lots of sound here. Not overmap

03:27:441 (207441|2,207441|0,207441|3,207441|6) - , change chord, because there was a different chord at this song

lv. 32

00:02:010 (2010|4,2209|2,2408|0,2606|5,2904|2,3202|1,3401|4,3699|2,3997|5) - 2 notes is better, same with 00:05:288 (5288|1,5586|4,5785|2,6083|5,6381|3,6580|5,6977|2) - , and 00:08:368 (8368|6,8566|2,8765|4,8964|1,9262|2,9560|5,9560|3) -
keep one notes here because two is too heavy, the sound is light
00:29:427 (29427|6,29626|5,29825|4,30023|3,30222|2) - rising note, use left-to-right, same with 00:30:818 (30818|6,31017|5,31215|4,31414|3,31613|2,31811|1) -, 00:32:209 (32209|6,32408|5,32606|4,32805|3,33004|2,33202|1,33401|0,33798|6,33997|5,34196|4,34394|3,34593|2,34792|1,34990|0) - too


00:48:500 (48500|5,48500|4,48500|1,48500|0) - use different position, different chord

01:57:639 (117639|2,117639|0,117639|3,117639|6,117639|4) - use long note, guitar sound I use empty for guitar here



02:54:461 (174461|4,174659|4,174858|4,175454|2,175851|1,176249|0) - 2 notes better, like this

light sound for one
03:16:911 (196911|6) -, 03:18:103 (198103|4) - remove, reject

same prob with l;v25, 03:18:898 (198898|5,198997|4,199096|3) - , delete it and make this note 03:19:196 (199196|2) - longer.
change pattern
03:25:255 (205255|3,205255|6,205255|5,205255|1,205255|0,206050|6,206050|5,206050|3,206050|1,206050|0,206845|5,206845|6,206845|0,206845|3,206845|1,207143|5,207143|6,207143|3,207143|0,207143|1,207441|1,207441|0,207441|3,207441|6,207441|5) - different chord, try to change the chord pattern/ but for this 03:26:845 (206845|6,206845|3,206845|1,206845|0,206845|5,207143|5,207143|1,207143|3,207143|6,207143|0) - is okay if you make same chord pattern
same chord here is better here

Thank you GL for your map, i like it

Ill take my leave now

Kivicat wrote:

Hi! From cute queue :з
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Mage's Lv. 19

Привет, Маге >Маге *triggered*
00:01:414 (1414|4) - Понимаю, что это ГД, но все же лучше не выделяться из всего мапсета хотя бы в начале и в конце. И если уж так хочется, то хотя бы сделай его с 00:01:017 - Ну не, я думаю тут лучше выделить войс, да и не важно что в остальных дифах, прихоть ГДшера :^)
00:05:388 - 00:06:182 - Куда уже делись ноты? В первом такте были.
00:10:057 - Пропустил ноту пианино.
00:14:427 - Здесь нота тоже хорошо слышна, лучше начни стрим раньше, а то можно запутаться.
00:15:321 (15321|4,15917|6) - Давайте поможем Магу найти среднюю колонку *мунфейс*. В принципе можешь оставить, но смотрится стремно и баланса нет. Все равно заставят поменять. 00:15:818 (15818|1,16017|0) - можешь еще тут ctrl+j и 00:16:315 (16315|1,16712|2) - вправо на 1. Вроде даже прилично получилось.
00:16:911 - Вот тут я бы для пианино добавил по ноте. Как-то так: https://puu.sh/vdDId/368473c3fb.png. Да, если хочешь, чтобы тебя все ненавидели - прими мод от Киви.
00:21:878 - Впрочем, ты и так знаешь, как сделать, чтобы тебя все ненавидели, лол.
00:22:474 (22474|5) - 1, баланс.
00:23:864 (23864|1,23964|2,24063|3) - ctrl+j, не удобно же.
00:47:507 - Тут дальше продолжается стрим, его все еще слышно, поэтому ЛН смотрится как-то уж очень одиноко. Могу предложить такой вариант: https://puu.sh/vdElV/8b555cc10e.png
01:11:348 (71348|2) - Подвинь лучше в среднюю. И играть удобнее будет, и выделишь ударный заодно.
01:12:043 (72043|5) - А тут вот эту лучше подвинуть в середину.
01:20:090 (80090|4,80884|2) - Тоже в середину. Мне кажется, ты избегаешь средней колонки.
01:23:070 (83070|3,83268|2) - А тут наоборот, 2 ноты подряд в 4 колонке. Не удобно. Двигай выделенные в 3-1.
01:52:871 (112871|1,112970|2,113070|3) - Вправо на 1, удобнее будет.
02:00:123 - А тут почему не поставил? 02:01:712 (121712|1) - Здесь почти то же самое. Звук немного другой, но ритм в целом такой же, лучше его не ломать.
02:01:712 (121712|1) - Кстати, ее лучше подвинуть в 3. Вообще, при низкой плотности нот старайся не ставить такие двойки в соседние колонки (если только рядом нет таких же двоек, тогда можно сделать паттерн). Это не очень удобно играть и смотрится стремно. Все, дальше про них не говорю.
02:06:480 - Тоже пропустил.
02:12:043 - ^ еще и бас кик, ну вообще
02:12:143 (132143|1) - Не уверен, что там что-то есть. Войс есть
02:12:341 - Может, замапаешь эти звуки? А то как-то пусто смотрится, как будто недомапано.
02:27:639 (147639|6,147838|4) - А сделай-ка их тоже ЛНами. Только не бей Можешь их подвинуть в 6-4, а ноту из 4 в 5.
02:34:593 (154593|3,154692|2) - Уже было, сейм шит.
02:36:282 (156282|5,156381|2,156580|6) - 7-1-4 не хочешь попробовать? Или 7-3-4.
02:48:997 (168997|0,168997|3,168997|1) - Тут явно дабл на пианино, добавь пару нот на 1/4 выше.
02:53:070 (173070|6,173268|5) - Можешь добавить еще 1/4 и даже 1/8 ЛН, смотреться будет красиво и под трек вполне подходит. Не знаю, что по поводу 1/8 скажут номинаторы, по крайней мере 1/4 должны разрешить. Не совсем понял где и как ставить эти 1/4 ЛНы
02:58:235 (178235|3,179229|4) - На их месте 1/2 ЛН не хочешь поставить? Нет
02:59:427 (179427|5) - Этот надо продлить до следующего. Нет звуков, которые бы его заглушили и превратили в гхост, нет сложного ЛН-паттерна, так что прерывать раньше нельзя.
03:00:421 (180421|5) - Сделай ты 1/6 стрим, вполне нормально для твоей сложности. Уж точно лучше, чем ЛН.
03:00:818 - 03:01:017 - 03:01:215 - 03:02:209 - Добавь 3 ЛНа под бас. Нет
03:02:805 (182805|4) - Тоже можно добавить 1/4 и 1/8, только начать с 1 или 2 колонки и двигаться вверх, 03:03:004 (183004|2) - подвинуть в конец стрима.
03:03:401 - Отсюда и до 03:04:394 - Все ЛНы под бас 1/2. Нет
03:12:739 (192739|0,192838|1,192937|2) - 1/6
03:14:328 (194328|5,194427|4,194527|3) - ^
03:15:619 (195619|2,195719|4) - Можно сделать мини-стрим 1/8. Думаю, нет
Имей совесть, разнообразь как-нибудь 1/4 стрим дальше. Тем более в конце мотив меняется.
03:20:487 (200487|6) - Тоже добавь что-нибудь для перехода. Либо просто 1/2 ЛН, если раньше не менял, либо весь набор.
03:27:937 (207937|0,208136|1,208335|2) - Я из них слышу только второй, и то еле-еле. Предполагаю, что они там все же есть, но если и так, то это гхосты. Не стоит их мапать, наверно.
03:30:421 - Потерял.
03:34:196 (214196|6,214394|4,214593|6) - Даже если это не под вокал, то ассоциировать все равно будут с ним, поэтому лучше сделать 7-6-5. Потом, там нарастающий перевернутый звук тарелки, предлагаю сделать ЛН-паттерн. Типа такого: https://puu.sh/vdI0u/5446fb70e3.png. Сделал так, но немного упростил
03:43:136 - Может, добавишь? Или можно подвинуть одну ноту снизу сюда, чтобы не ломать паттерн и не увеличивать плотность.
03:46:116 (226116|1) - Кажется, в 3 колонке ей будет уютнее.
03:48:699 (228699|4,228898|6) - 1-3 и 03:48:699 (228699|2) - 5, для баланса. Думаю мой вариант все же лучше
03:59:626 (239626|2,239825|0) - 1-7. Этот паттерн тут плохо чувствуется. К тому же он очень не удобен, когда не сбалансирован.
04:09:162 (249162|0,249361|1) - Повтор 1-2 выглядит не очень удобно. Попробуй 3-1 и ноты в 6-4-2.

SDVX KevinKun wrote:

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Mage's lv 19

00:42:739 - add 1 note

01:01:017 (61017|0,61017|2,61017|6) - i think, make this note with LN. like this

same with 01:02:010 (62010|1,62010|3,62010|5) - , 01:04:196 (64196|6,64196|4,64196|2) - ,

01:04:792 (64792|2,64792|4,64792|6) - make this note with LN, like this


01:15:520 (75520|3,75719|1,75917|4,76116|2,76315|5) - no instrument sound, i guess to remove it. but if you wont delete it, add some "soft" hitsound Ok, i will make it later when Aika add hitsounds w

03:42:143 (222143|1,222143|0,222341|5,222341|4,222540|1,222540|2) - this is piano sound, at reff, you using 3 note, i guess you add 1 more note per line Don't really understand you here

Lenfried- wrote:

holy crap long version

lv 32

00:01:812 (1812|1) - chord feels natural if this note is in 1 sure

00:04:196 - for the sake of balance and actually making more sense with the vocals, if that's what youre trying to do with the chords,
00:04:792 (4792|2,4792|4,4792|3) - move as [567]
00:04:990 (4990|6) - move to 2 sure

00:05:288 (5288|1,5785|2) - 3 and 1 respectively if ^ is applied sure
00:06:977 (6977|2) - should be a double because 00:07:772 (7772|4,7772|5) - is a double and covers the same sounds. Add 1 or make the chord a [12] sure
00:08:103 - there's actually a weak drum here at 1/6 snap. If you do decide to add that. Add the note at 6 and this chord 00:08:169 (8169|2,8169|1,8169|4,8169|3) - becomes [2467] sure
Otherwise, for balance, make the chord [3457] and 00:08:368 (8368|6) - move this to 6 sure
00:09:560 (9560|3,9560|5,9759|2,9759|1,9759|4) - inconsistency! This needs to be a triple-quad as pulled off in your previous chord usage
00:20:189 (20189|1) - ghost note, doesnt follow the piano sure
00:20:288 - you forgot to add a note here
00:26:348 (26348|1,26348|2) - not strong enough to be a double
00:30:818 (30818|0) - ghost note
00:40:553 (40553|1,40653|2,40752|4,40752|6) - i believe the motion here should go to the left instead to the right
00:48:898 - can be a double
00:49:891 (49891|2,50487|5) - ^
00:50:288 (50288|2) - ^
follow the example i gave on what can be doubles, there's quite a lot of them

00:59:229 (59229|2) - delete + 00:59:179 (59179|3,59229|4,59278|5,59328|6) - shift to the left once
01:00:321 - missed a note here. Could be doubles actually
01:00:619 - add 3
01:01:017 - could be a larger chord
01:03:699 (63699|2,63798|5) - move to 7 and 3
01:08:964 - could be a double

ok um, there are a couple of things i want to quickly address because there's quite a lot to fix in this diff:
1. Stronger sounds = can use larger chords
2. Consider note usage consistency, take a look at the map for some sections or sounds that are the same but have different chord sizes
3. Try skimming through the map in editor at 50 or 75% speed, this will help in finding notes that are either missed or ghosted
4. Judging by your top rank, if you havent please do testplay your map to find out some patterns that aren't very nice to play, take 01:40:057 - as an example
5. With 01:40:057 - as an example, do watch out for overexpressed sections, these are unrankable because they do not necessarily follow any apparent sound in the map.

Best of luck

Couil wrote:

sup, m4m from my q

Sorry for the late mod, been kinda busy/unmotivated : )

Lv.11

First of all, i think the cut off for a Easy diff is 1.5* but i guess it won't be a problem if you get an OK from a BN.

00:10:156 - Missed note? Sounds like a piano here.
00:14:725 (14725|1,15123|4,15520|2,15917|6,16315|1) - Think these would be better if they were placed on the loud "bass" sound like you did with these 00:16:712 (16712|3,16911|6,17110|0,17308|5) since it's a lower diff.
00:16:712 (16712|3) - This feels out of place as well, not following the same sound as the ones after it, would suggest removing this or add another LN here 00:16:513
00:20:686 (20686|4,20686|2) - Think this would work better as a single.
00:28:633 - Mb add LNs for the guitar here, since you want to have a break here for some reason.
00:44:924 - Missed note.
01:08:566 - Why is this a double? Didn't use doubles for the previous one.
01:49:692 (109692|2,109692|4) - Single?
02:02:408 (122408|6,122408|2) - Is this really supposed to be a double? Sounds less intense imo.
02:04:792 (124792|6,124792|2) - ^
02:07:176 (127176|6,127176|2) - ^
02:08:566 - Double for piano?
02:51:480 (171480|3,171480|5) - Why is this a double?
02:59:825 (179825|2) - Think this should be in the same pos as 02:59:626 (179626|1) to emphasis pitch more.
03:09:361 (189361|2,189361|0,189361|5) - Why is this a triple? The others are doubles.
03:16:513 - Double.
03:17:308 - ^
03:18:500 - ^
03:51:480 - Double?
04:03:997 (243997|3,244394|3,244792|3) - Maybe place some of the singles somewhere else than on the middle note?
04:09:162 (249162|2,249361|5,249560|1) - Think this shouldn't be a trill to emphasize 04:09:759 (249759|4,249957|1,250156|5,250355|2) mb make it a roll or remove 04:09:361 (249361|5) ?
04:10:951 (250951|3,250951|1) - Why is this a double?
04:15:719 (255719|2) - Why is this note here? Looks like you copied it from before, might be wrong though.

Nice map, like this song tbh. GL ranking it!