Hitsounds
- 00:04:355 - Soft whistles on these whistle-y things would be cute.
Light Insane
- 01:20:253 - Unsnapped slider end.
- 00:00:766 (1,3) - How about doing this for 00:01:791 (4,6) - as well as 00:05:894 (4,6) - since they're also repetitions of the previous phrase?
- 00:28:971 (4,5,1) - 1 doesn't get that much emphasis. I think spacing it more would be nice. At least 2.2x from the previous object.
- 00:52:048 (1,2,3) - These downbeat triples seem really off, since the song isn't emphasizing the red tick at all here. The downbeat is getting the emphasis and the vocal comes in on the offbeat. If anything a triple on 00:51:919 - would work better. Apply for all if you agree.
- 01:09:996 (6,7,1) - Intensity is increasing so it'd make sense for 1 to have more spacing. Right now it has the same spacing as 6>7.
- 01:17:689 (5,6) - Honestly a reverse slider might work better than having the finish on a sliderend. 01:18:201 - Doesn't have a finish either so it checks out. You could even do this instead https://i.imgur.com/INckFMH.png but up to you.
You said you wanted to avoid the kiai feeling the same as the rest of the song? It does still feel the same. Mainly due to the same type of patterning used and generally equal spacing to parts before. You could alleviate this by reducing spacing of all the pre-kiai parts like 00:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:06:919 (1,2,3,4) - 00:08:971 (1,2,3,4) - etc and maybe using angled/straight sliders for the kiai instead of the same types of curves. If you wanted a bigger change, up the SV to 1.3 or something so there's even more noticeable intensity increase.
Hard
- 00:49:483 (1) - Could be a stream, it's low bpm and the topdiff uses a lot more 1/4 so introducing more in the Hard would be appropriate. Stack the stream if you want as well.
- 01:05:381 (1,2) - One of these could be a stream as well.
Other diffs are fine.
Work on the topdiff, make the kiai more distinct. Then you can possibly call me back.
- 00:04:355 - Soft whistles on these whistle-y things would be cute.
Light Insane
- 01:20:253 - Unsnapped slider end.
- 00:00:766 (1,3) - How about doing this for 00:01:791 (4,6) - as well as 00:05:894 (4,6) - since they're also repetitions of the previous phrase?
- 00:28:971 (4,5,1) - 1 doesn't get that much emphasis. I think spacing it more would be nice. At least 2.2x from the previous object.
- 00:52:048 (1,2,3) - These downbeat triples seem really off, since the song isn't emphasizing the red tick at all here. The downbeat is getting the emphasis and the vocal comes in on the offbeat. If anything a triple on 00:51:919 - would work better. Apply for all if you agree.
- 01:09:996 (6,7,1) - Intensity is increasing so it'd make sense for 1 to have more spacing. Right now it has the same spacing as 6>7.
- 01:17:689 (5,6) - Honestly a reverse slider might work better than having the finish on a sliderend. 01:18:201 - Doesn't have a finish either so it checks out. You could even do this instead https://i.imgur.com/INckFMH.png but up to you.
You said you wanted to avoid the kiai feeling the same as the rest of the song? It does still feel the same. Mainly due to the same type of patterning used and generally equal spacing to parts before. You could alleviate this by reducing spacing of all the pre-kiai parts like 00:04:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:06:919 (1,2,3,4) - 00:08:971 (1,2,3,4) - etc and maybe using angled/straight sliders for the kiai instead of the same types of curves. If you wanted a bigger change, up the SV to 1.3 or something so there's even more noticeable intensity increase.
Hard
- 00:49:483 (1) - Could be a stream, it's low bpm and the topdiff uses a lot more 1/4 so introducing more in the Hard would be appropriate. Stack the stream if you want as well.
- 01:05:381 (1,2) - One of these could be a stream as well.
Other diffs are fine.
Work on the topdiff, make the kiai more distinct. Then you can possibly call me back.