rockstarrzz wrote:

Hi, from modreqs

Normal

00:22:055 (3,4) - make same shape
00:33:593 (1,3) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:54:106 (1,2) - awk flow
01:16:670 (1,2) - ^
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc
There's not too many specific problems with this map, I just feel some of the note placement and flow looks a bit un-neat and overall it seems a bit too dense rhythm wise, but SR is kept low due to big cs and low spacing.

Advanced

AR8 OD6 is far too high for a 2*, AR6 max for an advanced and probably OD5 would work well
00:05:901 (3,4) - parallel flow?
00:11:798 (2,3,4) - distance snap
00:30:260 (2,3,4) - i'd avoid stacking these, make it obvious how many notes there are as you're also stacking 1/2 notes and this could be confusing to a new player
00:33:593 (1,3) - make same shape
00:37:696 (1,2,3) - distance snap
00:39:747 (1,2,3) - copy and paste from previous
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:47:952 (1,1,1) - equilateral triangle - use create polygon circle tool
00:56:157 (1) - make this curve more gentle then blanket with 00:57:439 (2)
00:57:696 (3,1) - make parallel
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:08:465 (1) - curve more gentle, blanket with 2
01:12:567 (1) - make symmetrical
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map

Hard

Consider AR7, OD6 for this low SR
00:04:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - move a bit closer to previous (3)
00:07:439 (2,3) - same shape
00:07:952 (3) - make sure doesn't go outside play area
00:08:465 (4,5,1) - https://i.gyazo.com/2faef611c1560906840 ... 46296e.png
00:09:490 (2) - Spacing a little bit high?
00:10:003 (4,1) - make sure 4 flows into 1
00:10:516 (1) - could remove NC, not sure
00:18:978 (6) - stack perfectly on 4
00:20:773 (6,7,8,9,1) - curve a bit neater
00:24:875 (4,1) - make flow - you have to remember that streaming isn't common at this star difficulty so try and make it as simple as possible
00:27:183 (7,1) - ^
00:29:490 (1) - lower the height a bit, looks a bit crap atm https://i.gyazo.com/35645e6c72c1691eb2c ... 26ae56.png
00:30:260 (2,3) - don't stack, be consistent and use the same spacing as before
00:32:055 (1,1) - remove nc
00:35:131 (1,1) - that's a bit mean
00:36:157 (3,4,5) - space out a little
00:37:952 (1) - remove nc
00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:40:003 (1) - ^
00:41:285 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1) - ^
00:49:490 (1,2,3,4) - keep same spacing as before
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:04:362 (1,1) - could increase SV on these 2, if you do keep NC on 01:04:875 (1)
01:15:644 (1) - stack on 3 and remove nc
01:19:490 (1,2) - don't stack I am not changing it because it look weird and awkward it isn't
01:20:516 (1) - remove nc
01:24:106 (4,5,6) - don't stack nope - the reason is because I don't normal have these circle unstack unless it was along side a slider and it will look off putting to suddenly do this at the end of the map
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map, has potential, just fix some inconsistency issues and calm it on the NCs lol

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EDIT - RIP I accidently cut off my damn reply to this mod so basically...


I agree to all Normal - I will happily nerf/change it if it deem to hard for the lowest difficulty and it make it easier

Hard I change majority and Same for Advanced

the only thing I didn't agree was some of the NCs but I got rid of the ones that was useless and had no reason to actually be there

replied to some things I didn't change with reasoning

thanks for the mod

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EggsGone wrote:

• NM request
  
  [Normal]

1. 01:22:824 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent distance.
2. 00:00:773 (1,3) - Just make them similar. Just ctrl+c ; ctrl+v; ctrl+<(2x) and ctrl+g and you done.
3. 00:02:824 (1,2,3,4) - You can try here a peel motion placement http://i.imgur.com/tKnUeBG.png http://i.imgur.com/GsWv4jr.png Just check this guide if you wanna know more about them.
4. 00:05:901 (3,4) - D I S T A N C E pls.
5. 00:07:952 (3,4) - could blanket this.
6. 00:08:978 (1,2) - ^ you can improve this too.
7. 00:11:029 (1) - a neat sliderwave should look like this http://i.imgur.com/GSCbYOs.png
8. 00:12:311 (4,1) - Blanket.
9. 00:19:234 (1,2) - check the distance again.
10. 00:40:773 (3,4) - ^
11. 00:41:798 (1,2) - ^
12. 00:52:824 (2,3) - ^
13. 01:04:362 (1,2) - ^
14. 00:33:593 (1) - Make it neat.
15. 00:34:619 (1) - ^
16. 00:58:208 (1) - ^
17. 00:56:157 (1) - You could make this symmetrical.
18. 01:02:311 (1) - ^
19. 00:37:696 (1,2,3) - 00:39:747 (1,2,3) - If it's hard to make this pattern more organised, you can try peel motion placement again.
20. 00:47:952 (1,2) - This pattern doesn't look symmetrical. To make this just copy paste first slider into second and flip it in horizontally axis and ctrl+g don't forget.
21. 01:19:747 (1) - Slider is overlaping himself.
22. 01:25:901 (3) - Place it on x:293 Y:373 to make more perfect triangle pattern. ^^
    
    Nothing I disagree
    
    [Advanced]
23. 00:09:747 (2,3,4) - I think you can make jumps smaller.
24. 00:12:055 (3,4) - Just keep spacing same as these 00:11:798 (2,3) - because music is similar here 00:09:747 (2,3,4,5) - but doesn't have huge jump at the third note.
25. 00:17:183 (1,2) - Just make a 1/1 slider to follow pitch sound.rather have it like it is
26. 00:34:362 (2,3) - Stack it properly. Move slider on X:50 Y:177there isn't nothing wrong here
27. 00:38:721 (3,1) - I don't think it's good idea to make a 1/4 jump.my bad here - didn't realize it was like that so change
28. 00:40:772 (3,1) - ^ this is even bigger. same
29. 00:54:106 (1) - Improve sliderwave. change
30. 01:10:516 (1) - ^ change
31. 00:56:157 (1,2) - You can improve a blanket a bit.
32. 01:12:567 (1) - You can make this symmetrical.
33. 01:19:490 (1,2) - Looks like you never did 1/4 thing with circles before, how about to switch into slider.
34. 01:24:875 (1,1,1) - combo inconsistensy with normal difficulty. Normal diff is like that so it be easier to read - this is like this to be prepare for hard difficulty
    
    [Hard]
35. 00:10:516 (5,6,7,8) - fourh doesn't look that smooth maybe try to convert it from slider with ctrl+shift+f
36. 00:21:798 (3,4,5) - How about to make more symmetrical design here?
37. 00:34:619 (3) - Sliderwave isn't ok. adjusted
38. 01:18:721 (1) - 01:19:747 (3) - 01:02:311 (1) - Slidertail is overlaped by sliderhead a bit. nothing wrong here - it suppose to look like that to since I thought it fit with the music
39. 00:46:414 (3,4,5) - 01:11:029 (2,3,4) - 01:17:696 (5,6,7) - 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - 00:30:516 (4,5,6) - DS Inconsistency. all changed
40. 00:56:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - Star pattern not even neat. Use ctrl+shift+d. change

thanks for the mod

any thing I didn't reply assume it is fix

hey~
From my modding queue!


[Normal]

Really good diff.

[Advanced]

This diff is decent.

[Hard]

Great difficulty.

Just a few tips.

00:46:670 (2,3) - Here are jumps, but 01:15:644 (4,5) are sliders. Just replace the sliders with similar jumps as the music is basically the same.

01:16:670 (1,2,3) - This "stream" seems forced. Delete 2 and you have a nice alternative.

All in all a very nice map.
Hope you can rank this!

mgmn wrote:

hey~
From my modding queue!

Some obvious things
I think you want to go for rank, so you still need an Easy difficulty.

[Normal]

Things that could be changed

The combo colour fit in with the background. if I remember correctly, they should build a contrast and not be the same.
Maybe use Black or Dark Blue.
Change all the colors to be darker - the colors was for a different background that was darker colors so it fitted at the time

01:04:362 (1,2) - I think the spacing could be closer together. change

Really good diff.

[Advanced]

Things that could be changed

00:04:362 (4) - Too many reverses may be confusing for people just starting out with the game.

00:17:183 (1) - I don't think the 1/4 thingy here is a good idea here. Maybe something like this?

00:19:234 (1,2) - Maybe try to find a way to go around those 1/4s. They are too fast for new players.

00:21:798 (2,3,4) - ^

00:30:260 (2,3) - ^

There are many more of those 1/4 things in the map, I don't list them all here. I would change them but it almost defeats the purpose of me making an advanced difficulty - Hard has 1/4 - Advanced has 1/4 but it isn't as hard - Normal uses just 1/2 - Also I have an Easy difficulty now that uses just 1/1 - If I get rid of the 1/4 , then Advanced would just be another normal - meaning I would have to make another difficulty so I hope you understand

This diff is decent.

[Hard]

Great difficulty.

Just a few tips.

00:46:670 (2,3) - Here are jumps, but 01:15:644 (4,5) are sliders. Just replace the sliders with similar jumps as the music is basically the same. did some rearrangements but not much I can do here I think but I might come up with something

01:16:670 (1,2,3) - This "stream" seems forced. Delete 2 and you have a nice alternative. Not really because there is a sound on the blue and - I might change it to be a bit softer

All in all a very nice map.
Hope you can rank this!

Thanks for the mod

Cant wait this in ranked section

salchow wrote:

Easy

00:14:619 (2) - better to use repeat slider instead change and change other section like this

(spacing on easy diff sould be the same distance! Its just example down there. Just like your normal diff )

00:03:849 (3) - Move this object x:240 y:288

00:18:208 (2) - Move this object x:224 y:296

00:22:311 (2) - Move this object x:128 y:98 adjusted the sliders here

Normal

Perfect

Advanced

00:03:849 (3) - move this slider to x:416 y:320 change

00:05:901 (3,4,5) - to big jumps reduce jump slightly

would peffer to move this slider 00:08:465 (4) at x:48 y:224 change a bit

00:35:644 (1,2,3,4) - can you make equal distance between the circles? no change for now because I will consider

Hard

meh to lazy

Cant wait this in ranked section

thanks for the mod and star!

smol mod lul

• Hard

1. 00:11:029 (1) - it looks kinda weird like the stream shape doesnt fit to well to the slider. if u copy the slider and continue the shape of the curve while u take the other slider as reference like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8950741 and then convert that longer slider as a stream and delete the unnecessary circles u get a perfect stream that fits to the curve of the slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8950760
2. 00:13:593 (2) - the rythmn of it feels kinda weird maybe change it to http://prntscr.com/gdogx4 that way it feels more fitting to the vocals
3. 00:38:465 (3) - why does the stream start on the red tick? theres no strong sound or anything u might want to make it start at a white tick ... and uh why is there a stream in the first place seems overmapped to me... or maybe i just dont hear what u are mapping to idk...
4. 01:20:516 (1,3) - uh unorganized overlap i guess u didnt planned to place them like that maybe put 01:21:542 (3) - between 01:20:516 (1,1) - these 2 objects

I dont really want to check the other diffs cuz i'm not used to low diffs xd

Well... That song and map is neat so good luck with your mapset! ; 3;

Moge-ko wrote:

smol mod lul

• Hard

1. 00:11:029 (1) - it looks kinda weird like the stream shape doesnt fit to well to the slider. if u copy the slider and continue the shape of the curve while u take the other slider as reference like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8950741 and then convert that longer slider as a stream and delete the unnecessary circles u get a perfect stream that fits to the curve of the slider like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8950760 adjusted it
2. 00:13:593 (2) - the rythmn of it feels kinda weird maybe change it to http://prntscr.com/gdogx4 that way it feels more fitting to the vocals
3. 00:38:465 (3) - why does the stream start on the red tick? theres no strong sound or anything u might want to make it start at a white tick ... and uh why is there a stream in the first place seems overmapped to me... or maybe i just dont hear what u are mapping to idk...tbh there isn't really no easy way to map this part tbh - I rather have the stream start there because adding another reverse slider would be harder and making the 1 I already got longer - would just be a bit annoying for an hard difficulty - It is not overmap here btw
4. 01:20:516 (1,3) - uh unorganized overlap i guess u didnt planned to place them like that maybe put 01:21:542 (3) - between 01:20:516 (1,1) - these 2 objects fixed

I dont really want to check the other diffs cuz i'm not used to low diffs xd


Well... That song and map is neat so good luck with your mapset! ; 3;

thanks for the mod

its cute

Hi from my mod queue o/

[Normal]
//Aprox PP gain SS = 12pp

00:21:029 (4,1,2) - This pattern doesn't fit You should do one circle then one slider like you always do for that sound

00:37:696 - Try something like that here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966630 and well on all the other same part as well if you like it , i mean it's purely subjective

[Hard]
//Aprox PP gain SS = 46pp

00:22:824 (6) - For the flow , i think this slider should be just a bit more at the bottom of the playfield to align with 00:22:311 (5) -

00:34:619 (3,1) - Time / distance isn't good plus with 00:35:644 (1) - stacked , this pattern is unreadable (well for the players this diff is aimed towards)

00:54:362 (2) - you should put this circle away and make a jump before the slider 00:54:619 (3) -

00:56:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - This patterns doesn't fits the song, it's a random pattern for the sake of it :/



[Overall]

You may want to re-ajust NC , since this : 00:47:952 (1,1,1) - isn't really justified

You should try to adjust Slider velocity on certain parts like chorus . you always use the same



Good luck with your map dude !

Ayato_k wrote:

Hi from my mod queue o/

[Normal]
//Aprox PP gain SS = 12pp

00:21:029 (4,1,2) - This pattern doesn't fit You should do one circle then one slider like you always do for that sound change because I haven't realize how different it was

00:37:696 - Try something like that here : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966630 and well on all the other same part as well if you like it , i mean it's purely subjective
keeping it like it is
[Hard]
//Aprox PP gain SS = 46pp

00:22:824 (6) - For the flow , i think this slider should be just a bit more at the bottom of the playfield to align with 00:22:311 (5) - change

00:34:619 (3,1) - Time / distance isn't good plus with 00:35:644 (1) - stacked , this pattern is unreadable (well for the players this diff is aimed towards)
I already said in the front page that this difficulty is really the insane diff - This diff may be low sr but it not made to be just a hard difficulty it just called that - the stack is perfectly fine like it is and I have an advanced difficulty so it wouldn't be an issue for new players to just play that before playing this
00:54:362 (2) - you should put this circle away and make a jump before the slider 00:54:619 (3) - might change but keeping it like it is

00:56:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - This patterns doesn't fits the song, it's a random pattern for the sake of it :/ disagree and agree - I disagree that the pattern doesn't fit and I didn't make it for the sake of it but I have to change it only cause it was hard to adjust every other pattern around it so just use sliders here until I figure it out or keep the same



[Overall]

You may want to re-ajust NC , since this : 00:47:952 (1,1,1) - isn't really justified How so? it literally a build up before the kiai as the distance is getting longer while the sound is getting louder -

You should try to adjust Slider velocity on certain parts like chorus . you always use the same I actually haven't realize this until now
- I will increase kiai velocity in hard difficulty to 1.1x - The slow part of the song to .8x and keep everything else the same)

- Not Increasing kiai on advanced - the he slow part will be decrease like how hard is but more slowly getting to the original speed (.8x then .9x then 1x) so it be easier for new players to adjusted - I may change my mind about not doing nothing to kiai

- Nothing for Easy and Normal because they the lowest difficulties

- The way I did this might need to be adjusted but i'll leave that for more mods



Good luck with your map dude !

thanks for the mod

edit: ugh I hate my grammar mistakes ;c

[General]
Add in source: フリップフラッパーズ

[Easy]
01:20:773 (1) - why nc? Imo it isn't needful

[Normal]
01:19:747 (1) - ^

[Advanced]
00:16:670 (1) - ^
00:17:952 (4, 6) - move these circles to x= 275 y= 80
00:19:875 (4) - move this cirlcle to x= 379 y= 136
00:33:080 (1) - why nc? Imo it isn't needful00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:41:285 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1) - ^
00:48:978 (1) - ^
00:49:490 (1) - ^
01:04:875 (1) - ^
01:05:388 (1) - ^
01:05:901 (1) - ^
01:19:490 (1) - ^
01:25:388 (1) - ^
01:25:901 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:16:670 (1) - ^
00:33:080 (1) - ^
00:35:131 (1) - ^
00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1) - ^
00:48:978 (1) - ^
00:49:490 (1) - ^
01:02:311 (1) - ^
01:04:875 (1) - ^
01:05:388 (1) - ^
01:19:490 (1) - ^
01:20:516 (1) - ^
01:25:388 (1) - ^
01:25:901 (1) - ^

except these I don't found anything demanding improvement.

I know my english isn't good

ChuuritsuTv wrote:

[General]
Add in source: フリップフラッパーズ k will do

[Easy]
01:20:773 (1) - why nc? Imo it isn't needful

[Normal]
01:19:747 (1) - ^

[Advanced]
00:16:670 (1) - ^
00:17:952 (4, 6) - move these circles to x= 275 y= 80 no point
00:19:875 (4) - move this cirlcle to x= 379 y= 136 same ^ - give a reason rather than telling me to just move
00:33:080 (1) - why nc? Imo it isn't needful00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:41:285 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1) - ^
00:48:978 (1) - ^
00:49:490 (1) - ^
01:04:875 (1) - ^
01:05:388 (1) - ^
01:05:901 (1) - ^
01:19:490 (1) - ^
01:25:388 (1) - ^
01:25:901 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:16:670 (1) - ^
00:33:080 (1) - ^
00:35:131 (1) - ^
00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1) - ^
00:48:978 (1) - ^
00:49:490 (1) - ^
01:02:311 (1) - ^
01:04:875 (1) - ^
01:05:388 (1) - ^
01:19:490 (1) - ^
01:20:516 (1) - ^
01:25:388 (1) - ^
01:25:901 (1) - ^

except these I don't found anything demanding improvement.

I know my english isn't good

I kept getting confused which nc I agree to got rid so...:

I got rid of the 1 in normal
- Kept the 1 an Easy because that where it should have an NC at
- Advanced got rid of some but majority stays
- Hard I got rid of maybe 1 or 2
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The reason being is that the NC is perfectly use without feeling overly done for example right here
00:33:080 (1,2,3,4) - you told me to get rid of a nc on hard but here is the thing

these 00:31:542 (1,2,3) - these 3 circle match the same sound and they don't need a NC each but the 1 above don't match the same sound - it's a different sound and not just a plain circle note -

The NC is used because they work well with the song - not for the sake of having them which is why I am not getting rid of them
(Now the minor NC I might get rid of it continues to be bring up but that bout it)

Thanks for the mod

DJ Lucky wrote:

ChuuritsuTv wrote:

00:17:952 (4, 6) - move these circles to x= 275 y= 80 no point
00:19:875 (4) - move this cirlcle to x= 379 y= 136 same ^ - give a reason rather than telling me to just move

Oh sorry, it's for hard, not advanced. Reason is spacing between slider behind and after this circle

cute song

ChuuritsuTv wrote:

Oh sorry, it's for hard, not advanced. Reason is spacing between slider behind and after this circle

screenshots

ok then I changed the first 1 but kept the 2nd one because jump. Thanks again

--

Thanks for the Star S o a p <3

Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ

Close Widescreen Support?

[Easy]
00:14:619 (2,3) - blanket?
00:19:234 (3,4) - move left litter bit, is already out of the screen
00:31:029 (2,3,4) - Check the spacing between these elements
00:32:567 (4) - move right litter bit, is already out of the screen
00:49:490 (4) - out of the screen and already touch HP bar...
00:50:003 (1) - finish
00:54:106 (1) - finish
01:02:311 (1) - ...out of the screen
01:06:414 (1) - finish
01:10:516 (1) - ^
01:14:619 (1) - ^
01:20:773 (1) - I suggest delete NC here and add NC on 01:22:824 (3) -

Just make sure, if you choose to fix the hitsound part, do it for all diff <3

[Normal]
00:10:260 (4,1) - blanket plz~
00:26:157 (2,3) - already out of the screen and touch the HP bar, so try to move it down litter bit
00:33:593 (1) - ^
00:36:670 (3,4,5,1) - space doesn't look same...
00:43:849 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:670 (2,3,4) - ^
01:17:952 (4) - already out of the screen and touch the HP bar, so try to move it down litter bit

[Advanced]
00:04:362 (4) - I think the rhythm should be
https://puu.sh/xnD9m/99fed5efef.jpg
00:05:901 (3,4,5) - I think jump should put between 00:06:670 (5,1) - , no here
00:20:773 (5) - same with 00:04:362 (4) -
00:17:183 (1,2) - 00:19:234 (1,2) - hmmm....feeling werid for me...I suggest just use 1/2 will be enough for this part
00:33:080 (1) - tooooo much finish
00:37:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tooooooo much whistle, and even is really simple for me, I still no agree put it in Advanced diff...
00:52:055 (1,2,3) - unite distance
00:54:875 (2) - hmmmmmm...still, I think 1/2 is enough to shown this part of rhythm
01:16:157 (5) - move to x128 y304 will looks better I think
01:18:721 (1) - lonely NC ;-;

[Hard]
00:04:747 (7) - delete, same like what I said on Advanced diff
00:10:901 (8) - ^
00:12:952 (8) - ^
00:21:157 (9) - ^
00:36:285 (4) - ^(If you are following with vocal)
00:39:106 (6) - delete and then add note on 00:39:490 (x) - will feel better for rhythm I think
00:41:157 (6) - delete
00:52:183 (2) - delete if you are following with vocal
01:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...I suggest delete all clap on here, clap is tooooo strong and noise..
01:14:619 (1) - finish
01:20:773 (1) - delete nc

That's all for me, GL ლ(′◉❥◉｀ლ)！

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~ o(*￣▽￣*)ブ

Close Widescreen Support? they wasn't enabled on all difficulties... fixed

[Easy]
00:14:619 (2,3) - blanket?
00:19:234 (3,4) - move left litter bit, is already out of the screen
00:31:029 (2,3,4) - Check the spacing between these elements
00:32:567 (4) - move right litter bit, is already out of the screen
00:49:490 (4) - out of the screen and already touch HP bar...
00:50:003 (1) - finish
00:54:106 (1) - finish
01:02:311 (1) - ...out of the screen
01:06:414 (1) - finish
01:10:516 (1) - ^
01:14:619 (1) - ^
01:20:773 (1) - I suggest delete NC here and add NC on 01:22:824 (3) -rather not because this part is strong and I thought to break away from the consistentsy I had wouldn't hurt even for this difficulties

Just make sure, if you choose to fix the hitsound part, do it for all diff <3

[Normal]
00:10:260 (4,1) - blanket plz~
00:26:157 (2,3) - already out of the screen and touch the HP bar, so try to move it down litter bit
00:33:593 (1) - ^
00:36:670 (3,4,5,1) - space doesn't look same...
00:43:849 (1,2,3) - ^
00:46:670 (2,3,4) - ^
01:17:952 (4) - already out of the screen and touch the HP bar, so try to move it down litter bit

[Advanced]
00:04:362 (4) - I think the rhythm should be
https://puu.sh/xnD9m/99fed5efef.jpg
00:05:901 (3,4,5) - I think jump should put between 00:06:670 (5,1) - , no here
00:20:773 (5) - same with 00:04:362 (4) -
00:17:183 (1,2) - 00:19:234 (1,2) - hmmm....feeling werid for me...I suggest just use 1/2 will be enough for this part
00:33:080 (1) - tooooo much finish
00:37:696 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - tooooooo much whistle, and even is really simple for me, I still no agree put it in Advanced diff... this is the hard difficulty and not really just an advanced - Ya know what it time to change the names - I made sure this part isn't too hard
00:52:055 (1,2,3) - unite distance
00:54:875 (2) - hmmmmmm...still, I think 1/2 is enough to shown this part of rhythm
01:16:157 (5) - move to x128 y304 will looks better I think adjusted
01:18:721 (1) - lonely NC ;-; got rid of the nc after this so it won't be lonely anymore

[Hard]
00:04:747 (7) - delete, same like what I said on Advanced diff
00:10:901 (8) - ^ got rid of this 1 because there really wasn't nothing here... shame ;c
00:12:952 (8) - ^
00:21:157 (9) - ^
00:36:285 (4) - ^(If you are following with vocal)
00:39:106 (6) - delete and then add note on 00:39:490 (x) - will feel better for rhythm I think
00:41:157 (6) - delete
00:52:183 (2) - delete if you are following with vocal
01:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ...I suggest delete all clap on here, clap is tooooo strong and noise.. delete all but 1
01:14:619 (1) - finish add
01:20:773 (1) - delete nc fine..

That's all for me, GL ლ(′◉❥◉｀ლ)！

Thanks for the mod

Easy - All that hasn't been replied just means fixed

Normal - ^

Advanced - ^

Hard - The streams on hard has a sound on the blue tick except the 1 I agree with - I had to turn my volume up just to make sure my mind wasn't play tricks..
Other than that - No reply = Fixed

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The hitsound is not at all consistent because each difficulty I reapplied them manually by habit and just didn't copy the hitsounds on hard to all difficulties just yet in case I miss an hitsound so I will be changing it just not yet
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thanks for the mod

From modreqs

Easy

00:08:978 (1,2) - Could be nice to have the 1 flow to the 2 so the pattern would only involve around this back and forth swinging movement you have represented with 00:10:516 (2,3,4) -

00:16:157 (3,4) - Spacing should be reduced to 1.0x

00:23:337 (3,4,1) - It would be much better for the map's aesthetics if you'd consider the structure a bit and not leave this kind of visible overlaps

00:29:490 (5) - NC for the consistent 2/1 NCing?

00:39:747 (1,3) - 00:43:849 (1,3) - Swap the NCs on these two occasion for the consistency again

01:09:490 - Shouldn't this be a whistle and this 01:10:003 - be a clap?


Normal

00:01:798 (1) - Remove NC

00:09:747 (2,3,4,1) - Idk do you have the hit animations on or something but this looks, structure wise, quite messy

00:21:798 (2,3,4,1) - Movement wise this pattern feels kinda weird. None of the sliders really form any kind of flow with the other sliders which creates this snappy kind of movement for the sliders... which is quite uncomfortable. Something like this https://puu.sh/xojj4/e99803fead.png (sorry if the pic is unclear) would be a ton better imo

00:35:131 - Clap would be a lot better than a finish

00:52:824 (2,3,4,1) - I would really consider the structure :s (or atleast having hit animations off and mapping so it does not look totally messy)

01:05:901 - The sound on this white tick is really, really strong. Strong enough you deem it clickable in the easy difficulty, so imo it's weird that it is under a slider's reverse point. I would recommend this https://puu.sh/xojvQ/0ea17e48ac.png kind of rhythm, the 1/1 slider is there to show the difference in the intensity since the part where i put the 1/2 sliders is a lot more intense than the two beats before it. Also the 1/1 slider would cover the hold sound better

01:09:490 (3) - Why is the clap on the head? It'd be much better on the tailpoint

01:16:670 - Finish?


Hard

HP 5.5 or 5? 6 is quite a lot (and same as the insane atm). You might want to turn down the drain on normal aswell a bit if you change it for hard to create a linear "spread" in the drain aswell

00:17:183 (1,2) - I don't know about this kind of patterns really. They are actually really hard for anyone who is starting with this level of difficulty

00:35:131 - Clap instead of finish?

00:37:952 (2,3,4) - I'd recommend to make the movement intuitive so the sliders lead to each other ( https://puu.sh/xolvx/c5f976ac6b.png ), which would make it easier for newer players

00:49:490 (1) - The finish on the second reverse point sounds bit too much for what the song has to offer since there isn't really anything too specific on the red tick that would deserve

01:04:875 (1) - I feel like this is somewhat unnecessary

01:09:490 (3) - The clap does not fit here, place it here 01:10:003 - instead


Insane

00:01:285 (2,3,5) - Poor structure

00:33:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - Imo it would look nicer if the 4|1 would have the similar spacing as the other objects have

00:35:131 (1) - Remove NC, clap instead of finish

00:36:670 (6,7) - This looks extremely odd as a pattern since it doesn't really have any structure and the movement is not really supported through the mapping choice

00:37:696 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This does not need this many NCs

00:49:747 (3) - Same as hard

00:54:619 (2,3,4) - Aesthetically it would look better if the 2 would be precisely connected to the curve formed by 3 and 4 instead of this extremely loose kind of style or have the slidertail2|3|sliderhead4 in a straight line like here 01:11:029 (2,3,4) -

01:04:875 (1) - Unnecessary NC


Good luck~

DTM9 Nowa wrote:

From modreqs

Easy

00:08:978 (1,2) - Could be nice to have the 1 flow to the 2 so the pattern would only involve around this back and forth swinging movement you have represented with 00:10:516 (2,3,4) -

00:16:157 (3,4) - Spacing should be reduced to 1.0x

00:23:337 (3,4,1) - It would be much better for the map's aesthetics if you'd consider the structure a bit and not leave this kind of visible overlaps

00:29:490 (5) - NC for the consistent 2/1 NCing?

00:39:747 (1,3) - 00:43:849 (1,3) - Swap the NCs on these two occasion for the consistency again change them - Might got slightly confused so I will look back to this

01:09:490 - Shouldn't this be a whistle and this 01:10:003 - be a clap?


Normal

00:01:798 (1) - Remove NC

00:09:747 (2,3,4,1) - Idk do you have the hit animations on or something but this looks, structure wise, quite messy I do have hit animation and know but couldn't figure a way to make it less messy - I clean up a bit with less overlaps than it did before

00:21:798 (2,3,4,1) - Movement wise this pattern feels kinda weird. None of the sliders really form any kind of flow with the other sliders which creates this snappy kind of movement for the sliders... which is quite uncomfortable. Something like this https://puu.sh/xojj4/e99803fead.png (sorry if the pic is unclear) would be a ton better imo Change this

00:35:131 - Clap would be a lot better than a finish

00:52:824 (2,3,4,1) - I would really consider the structure :s (or atleast having hit animations off and mapping so it does not look totally messy)

01:05:901 - The sound on this white tick is really, really strong. Strong enough you deem it clickable in the easy difficulty, so imo it's weird that it is under a slider's reverse point. I would recommend this https://puu.sh/xojvQ/0ea17e48ac.png kind of rhythm, the 1/1 slider is there to show the difference in the intensity since the part where i put the 1/2 sliders is a lot more intense than the two beats before it. Also the 1/1 slider would cover the hold sound better
I ain't doing nothing to this yet - the only reason why Easy is like it is because I wanted to keep it simple for easy since I only used white 1/1 beat on that diff - I will change just not yet
01:09:490 (3) - Why is the clap on the head? It'd be much better on the tailpoint

01:16:670 - Finish?


Hard

HP 5.5 or 5? 6 is quite a lot (and same as the insane atm). You might want to turn down the drain on normal aswell a bit if you change it for hard to create a linear "spread" in the drain aswell
Huh? I'm sorry but the HP is 5 already and it always was 5 so not quite sure what you mean unless you looking at Insane since that is 6
00:17:183 (1,2) - I don't know about this kind of patterns really. They are actually really hard for anyone who is starting with this level of difficulty

00:35:131 - Clap instead of finish?

00:37:952 (2,3,4) - I'd recommend to make the movement intuitive so the sliders lead to each other ( https://puu.sh/xolvx/c5f976ac6b.png ), which would make it easier for newer players It actually was suppose to be like that in the get go... my bad and fix it lol

00:49:490 (1) - The finish on the second reverse point sounds bit too much for what the song has to offer since there isn't really anything too specific on the red tick that would deserve change

01:04:875 (1) - I feel like this is somewhat unnecessary I was going to say something but then I realize that their isn't much difference between the spacing compare to the way I did it for Insane so changed

01:09:490 (3) - The clap does not fit here, place it here 01:10:003 - instead


Insane

00:01:285 (2,3,5) - Poor structureHmm what so poor bout this? anyway I did adjusted so maybe it better

00:33:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - Imo it would look nicer if the 4|1 would have the similar spacing as the other objects have fixed

00:35:131 (1) - Remove NC, clap instead of finish people get confused because the previous slider is on a blue tick following the vocals and it people would think this is just a normal slider rather than a jump so I am keeping the NC - the kept clap but add a finish

00:36:670 (6,7) - This looks extremely odd as a pattern since it doesn't really have any structure and the movement is not really supported through the mapping choice eh ur right

00:37:696 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This does not need this many NCs Removed 2 - kept the others

00:49:747 (3) - Same as hard

00:54:619 (2,3,4) - Aesthetically it would look better if the 2 would be precisely connected to the curve formed by 3 and 4 instead of this extremely loose kind of style or have the slidertail2|3|sliderhead4 in a straight line like here 01:11:029 (2,3,4) - change it to be like the other 1

01:04:875 (1) - Unnecessary NC it isn't here because vocals is getting stronger while the beat is too hence the need for a NC as I change the distance compare to usually for the upcoming stream


Good luck~

I didn't reply too much on hitsounds because I didn't realize how many mistake I did with them which I will change soon in the next update
Everything else that hasn't been replied mean changed

Thanks for the mod

EDIT: Oh damn it another mod that quick

Ima check urs out Jennglebells in a sec and edit this post again since there is no point in doing it twice lmao

EDIT2:

Jennglebells wrote:

• 
  as requested from my queue
  
  [Insane]

1. 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4) - cluster, its bad for visual effect, my suggestion for this is to unstack 1 and 4, as it looks messy as well. 00:01:285 (3,5,6) - the spacing for these 3 should be adjusted even to make it prettier as well change everything here so it don't look as cluster (I thought it look fine tbh but I have a feeling it be bad to keep it like it is)
2. 00:11:798 (3,4) - to me this stack is unnecessary: so far the movement of the map has been back and forth motion, this stack interrupts the flowing motion
   I had a feeling I was have to change it I did
3. 00:24:875 (4) - could you copy 3 and use it for this instead? No Because the last 1 has a stronger vocal and I didn't want the slider to look like the previous 1
4. 00:31:542 (1,2,3) - make them even distanced change
5. 00:40:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - use the slider to stream tool to actually make this circular change
6. 00:57:952 (4) - could you stack this? if you think its going to runin the pattern afterward simply just move them by a little, should fit in rather not tbh - Might change it around to look better in general
7. 01:00:773 (2,3,4) - could you do something about the visual distance between 2 and 4? it really bothers me to see them so close like this (extra note, i think the map would look so much more organized if visually things are the same distance apart for each section, one of these places is the one i pointed out; 01:16:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is another )
   I am a bit confused what you just said but I did adjusted above
8. 01:07:952 (4) - and 01:09:234 (4,5) - , please do something about this; it looks super messy with this overlap, i think it was intentional (increasing the spacing between 4 and 4-5 so its not stacked etc) but this could have been done better changed it
   
   i looked through the easy diff as well, mostly i think you should use the same slider shape more instead of changing it every slider or so, additionally some sliders look too curvy imo. good luck

Gonna go ahead and do something to easy but with all these changes I did - I am going to update now then do easy later

Thanks for the mod

EDIT3: Check easy out and well I don't see much of a problem with the use of different slider (I mainly used the Curve slider and S-Shape 1 anyways) - It an easy difficulty so the least I can do is add a bit more interested to it like that since there isn't much I can to without effecting difficulty which this is no way or shape of form is doing

But I did made all curve slider less curvy except for the very last one

Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:19:234 (3) - This slidershape is hardly rankable on easy

[Normal]
00:54:875 (2) - Instead of this make it a circle + slider, it will better represent vocals
01:03:080 (2,3) - Better should be circle on 01:03:080 - and 01:04:106 - and slider from 01:03:337 - to 01:03:849 -
01:11:285 (2) - ^^

[Hard]
00:24:875 (4,5,1) - If you stack 3 objects here player may think it's a stream, so it can be problematic
00:39:490 - Fill

Hope it will be helpful

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:19:234 (3) - This slidershape is hardly rankable on easy change into a simple slider shape just in case

[Normal]
00:54:875 (2) - Instead of this make it a circle + slider, it will better represent vocals
01:03:080 (2,3) - Better should be circle on 01:03:080 - and 01:04:106 - and slider from 01:03:337 - to 01:03:849 -
01:11:285 (2) - ^^
No change here - the reason why it is what it is because 00:55:003 - right here is a sound on the blue tick - it a bubble sound (I don't what to call it) but it is a normal so I can't map it - so instead of mapping it - I turn the slider in a reverse slider so it may not exactly mapped to that bubble part - but I just wanted to make it feel that way - I hope what just said made sense...
[Hard]
00:24:875 (4,5,1) - If you stack 3 objects here player may think it's a stream, so it can be problematic I didn't get what you mean until I realize I made all the other ones like this into triple stacks - Fix it
00:39:490 - Fill the sound ain't even that noticeable for me to ruin the pattern with 1 more circle

Hope it will be helpful

thanks for the mod

From M4M:

josh1024 wrote:

From M4M:

To Save Space

Easy

1. 00:13:080 (1,2,3,4) I prefer this rhythm (cursor on 00:14:619) bcuz of vocal on 00:15:131 kept the same for now - may or may not change it later
2. 00:31:542 ^ maybe not a slider end here.
3. 01:08:465 (3,4) might be a good place for a blanket. adjusted but remember this is an easy so can't have exactly a blanket

Normal

1. 00:15:131 (1,1,1) isn't the most comfortable. maybe do zigzag rather than a wide angle. adjusted
2. 00:54:875 (2) imo 00:50:773 (2,3) is better cuz you can still click on 00:51:029 but there's no action on 00:55:131
3. 01:11:285 (2) ^ I would emphasize the "flip flap" I mean it is the title. No change but might change since had a few had bring this up
4. 01:24:875 (1,2,3) maybe have them like this? right now they seem a bit crammed.

change
Hard

1. 00:05:901 (3,4,5) feels unnecessarily far apart. this part has pretty much the same intensity as 00:01:798 (3,4)
2. 00:09:747 (2,3,4) dunno why circle 4 gets a larger gap than 2 3. because after that note is a jump and I still wanted four to be on top of it so I had to represent it like that - I will change maybe
3. 00:47:311 add note here? Not really following vocals so no change
4. 00:56:157 (1,2,3) blanket? change

Insane

1. 00:35:131 (1) doesn't seem like a note which deserves a hitsound, large spacing, nc and overlap at the same time. maybe change this. no change - if I didn't do it like this the whole finish and all will lose the emphasis that it originally had
2. 00:47:311 same as in Hard add a note cuz there's vocal here. no change - same reason before
3. 00:59:234 (3,5) consider not overlapping these? rather have it like it is

thanks for the mod

Q

[Insane]
00:00:773 (1,4) - try to avoid this linear overlap.
00:26:926 (6,7,1) - weird flow.
00:28:978 (6,7,1) - ^
00:30:388 (3) - delete this beat.
01:04:875 (1,1) - Unnecessary NC here.
01:11:414 (3) - why you added a beat here? this part doesn't have any beat.
01:20:516 (1,2,3) - stack.

GL

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[Insane]
00:00:773 (1,4) - try to avoid this linear overlap. fix
00:26:926 (6,7,1) - weird flow.
00:28:978 (6,7,1) - ^ adjusted both but nothing more
00:30:388 (3) - delete this beat. there is a sound here (bubble type one)
01:04:875 (1,1) - Unnecessary NC here. I already explain this before so no
01:11:414 (3) - why you added a beat here? this part doesn't have any beat. same reason as the first 1 u told to delete
01:20:516 (1,2,3) - stack. fix

GL

thanks for mod

hoi. Sry for the late m4m.

Some things first. I think your spread is not balanced enough between Hard and Normal, they almost share the same Object number.
The Normal has a too dense rhythm density from what I can see. Im not good in low diffs so I wont mod them.

[Insane]

Stuff like 00:10:516 (5,6,7) - 00:12:567 (5,6,7) - 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - 00:19:234 (1,2,3) - 00:25:388 (1,2,3) - and so on flow kind akward. It would give more emphasize if you would stack them because it forces a stop motion which creates contrast to the rest movement since its also not the thing you mainly follow in the rhythm too. That also makes it more comfortable to play especially on this slow tempo.

00:04:362 (4,5,6,7) - same for stuff like there. But there I would suggest just to lower the spacing, that spacing is rly awkward at this speed.

Generally your maps seems to focus on 90° angel sliders. Its not well executed tho if that's the case. On problem would be some sliders like 00:01:798 (4) - do not look perfectly vertical while this one 00:00:773 (1) - perfectly horizontal is. 00:19:490 (3,5) - Like those two seem to be horizontal flipped, well made. Also this 00:21:798 (3,5) - and this 00:42:824 (1,1) - yeah I hope you get what I mean. You could solve that problem by copy and rotate sliders by 90.

second problem would be that you don't seem to use sliders forms consistently. 00:00:773 (1,4,1,3) - those are all the same shape while you change it there 00:04:875 (1) - . Also I don't quite get why this on 00:06:926 (1) - suddenly changes in form. It looks inconsistent. That angle 00:08:978 (1) - also pops out of nowhere and looks out of place. Try to copy and rotate you sliders more and get a logic behind changing sliders form so that it looks cleaner and more structured.

Im not quite sure if you create your streams 00:20:773 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:33:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:38:465 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:40:516 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 01:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with the slider to stream tool. They look not clean to me sometimes.

00:29:490 (1) - That slider is kinda out of place since you never use that concept in that map.

00:41:798 (1,1) - That overlap looks kinda disturbing, also you never use this kind of pattern in the map. Something like this already would look more consistent imo http://puu.sh/xrtHE/7887ce1a6f.jpg

00:43:849 (1,2,3,4) - That pattern looks a bit random because you overlap those 00:44:362 (2,4) - but not those 00:43:849 (1,3) - . Something like this http://puu.sh/xrtNp/b99eed1ad8.jpg would already look more like a actual pattern dont you agree ? because it uses symmetry

01:03:849 (4,1,1) - Pattern looks not well executed because there 01:03:849 (4,1) - you change angle but there 01:04:362 (1,1) - not.

01:12:567 (1) - That slider is weird because you never use this shape also are you skipping the vocal on the red tick which you always emphasize usually.

Its kinda sad that you the kiai doesn't rly distinguish from the rest of the map besides using more spacing. Rhythm density looks quite similar. I mean it works but yeah kinda weak. I'd suggest to use a bit more 1/2 circles in the kiai like replacing 00:53:593 (6) - with two circles would solve the problem and also give more emphasize on the next downbeat because circle to slider has more contrast. Some examples: 00:55:644 (5) - reverse and 3 circles from there 00:56:414 - there 00:58:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you did well actually. 01:09:490 (5,6) - replacing with circles good idea imo and so on.

01:08:465 (1,2,3) - There kinda isn't a triple actually, just a weird bubble noise which you dont notice anyway. Wouldn't map it tbh.

01:16:670 (1,2,3) - I think this is not so good because triples emphasize on the last note and you have a strong vocal on the downbeat. Also yeah there isn't rly a triple from what I can hear.

Well yeah. Cute map. I like your use of wide angles. Makes the map more interesting to play but the map can Improve in structure and variation.

Good luck ~

Suissie wrote:

hoi. Sry for the late m4m.

Some things first. I think your spread is not balanced enough between Hard and Normal, they almost share the same Object number.
The Normal has a too dense rhythm density from what I can see. Im not good in low diffs so I wont mod them. I have too many mixed feeling for Normal to change it - Hard is more jumpy and has 1/4 in it while Normal used consistently low DS - Even though the object number is similar - Normal is still much easier to play than Hard

[Insane]

Stuff like 00:10:516 (5,6,7) - 00:12:567 (5,6,7) - 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - 00:19:234 (1,2,3) - 00:25:388 (1,2,3) - and so on flow kind akward. It would give more emphasize if you would stack them because it forces a stop motion which creates contrast to the rest movement since its also not the thing you mainly follow in the rhythm too. That also makes it more comfortable to play especially on this slow tempo. I did stack the first 2 but the others one wells the bubble sound (you 1 you basically hear in majority) is not getting the emphasis if it stacked tbh - I know it is strange but I rather change the rhythm

00:04:362 (4,5,6,7) - same for stuff like there. But there I would suggest just to lower the spacing, that spacing is rly awkward at this speed.
that because I change some stuff here... This will be fixed
Generally your maps seems to focus on 90° angel sliders. Its not well executed tho if that's the case. On problem would be some sliders like 00:01:798 (4) - do not look perfectly vertical while this one 00:00:773 (1) - perfectly horizontal is. 00:19:490 (3,5) - Like those two seem to be horizontal flipped, well made. Also this 00:21:798 (3,5) - and this 00:42:824 (1,1) - yeah I hope you get what I mean. You could solve that problem by copy and rotate sliders by 90.
been going back in forth working on this map so yea everything isn't completely polish like it was before
second problem would be that you don't seem to use sliders forms consistently. 00:00:773 (1,4,1,3) - those are all the same shape while you change it there 00:04:875 (1) - . Also I don't quite get why this on 00:06:926 (1) - suddenly changes in form. It looks inconsistent. That angle 00:08:978 (1) - also pops out of nowhere and looks out of place. Try to copy and rotate you sliders more and get a logic behind changing sliders form so that it looks cleaner and more structured. same as above - they was copy&paste (at least majority) but I had to rearrange patterns so yea...

Im not quite sure if you create your streams 00:20:773 (6,7,8,9,1) - 00:33:080 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:38:465 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:40:516 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 01:05:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with the slider to stream tool. They look not clean to me sometimes. clean them up

00:29:490 (1) - That slider is kinda out of place since you never use that concept in that map. change it to a curve slider since your right

00:41:798 (1,1) - That overlap looks kinda disturbing, also you never use this kind of pattern in the map. Something like this already would look more consistent imo http://puu.sh/xrtHE/7887ce1a6f.jpg I have use that pattern in the begining but I had to change it up because gave good points about it - the reason why I did here and kept it because I thought it was more fitting and actually works - I did however adjusted the overlap and may change it later

00:43:849 (1,2,3,4) - That pattern looks a bit random because you overlap those 00:44:362 (2,4) - but not those 00:43:849 (1,3) - . Something like this http://puu.sh/xrtNp/b99eed1ad8.jpg would already look more like a actual pattern dont you agree ? because it uses symmetry
I i'm not to found of this pattern

01:03:849 (4,1,1) - Pattern looks not well executed because there 01:03:849 (4,1) - you change angle but there 01:04:362 (1,1) - not.
adjusted
01:12:567 (1) - That slider is weird because you never use this shape also are you skipping the vocal on the red tick which you always emphasize usually.
Will likely change

Its kinda sad that you the kiai doesn't rly distinguish from the rest of the map besides using more spacing. Rhythm density looks quite similar. I mean it works but yeah kinda weak. I'd suggest to use a bit more 1/2 circles in the kiai like replacing 00:53:593 (6) - with two circles would solve the problem and also give more emphasize on the next downbeat because circle to slider has more contrast. Some examples: 00:55:644 (5) - reverse and 3 circles from there 00:56:414 - there 00:58:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you did well actually. 01:09:490 (5,6) - replacing with circles good idea imo and so on. I do know the Kiai can be harder but since I didn't map it like that in the get go - I don't want to force change anything for the sake of making it harder - I am most likely ain't going to change this

01:08:465 (1,2,3) - There kinda isn't a triple actually, just a weird bubble noise which you dont notice anyway. Wouldn't map it tbh.
but I been mapping the bubble noise for almost all the triples in the map so I don't see how this is any different
01:16:670 (1,2,3) - I think this is not so good because triples emphasize on the last note and you have a strong vocal on the downbeat. Also yeah there isn't rly a triple from what I can hear. it is and I had change this because of someone telling their was (and me confirming it) so it either staying or going but for it is what it is

Well yeah. Cute map. I like your use of wide angles. Makes the map more interesting to play but the map can Improve in structure and variation.

Good luck ~

Thank you for the mod

EDIT: Wow I haven't realize how many typos I did until now

henlo
#dedreeqs

[General]

Hard and Insane AR+1 because those current ones are too slow imo and easy ar -1 since ar4 don't make sense

[Easy]

1. okay tbh the current rhythm is a mess as example this 00:02:311 (2) - ignores the rhythm the music provides here skipping the big white tick is not good would make it like this: Circle , Slider , Circle and so on not always circle , slider , circle but I hope you get it what I mean
2. actual map
3. the sv you use here is 1.20 im okay with that since low bpm but on the other side is 1.00ds with this sv way too huge spaced with this ds ds'ing all objects with 0.80ds would be easier for new players
4. 00:23:337 (3,1) - overlap
5. 00:26:414 (2,4) - don't do sliders like these they might be hard to follow
6. 00:34:619 (2) - ^
7. 00:32:055 (3,4,5) - a reverse 1/1 would fit more imo since this is like one of the calmest parts in the map and emphasing that with 3 circles is way too dense
8. 00:58:208 (1,3) - make this one 01:00:260 (3) - consistent with this one 00:58:208 (1) -
9. 01:24:362 (4,1,2,3) - would make this a square instead

you really need more mods on this diff it's pretty bad at it's current state

[Insane]

1. 00:04:747 (7) - here isn't any sound
2. 00:08:849 (5) - ^
3. 00:21:157 (9) - ^ pls look at them yourself don't wanna point any overmapped point out
4. 00:24:362 (3) - just copy this one it ill look aestheticely better
5. 01:03:337 (3) - make this consistent with 01:02:311 (1) -

gonna end here even the mod is short but take a look at all of your diffs and look at things like I pointed out
Gl with the Map

My Angel Kanan wrote:

henlo
#dedreeqs

[General]

Hard and Insane AR+1 because those current ones are too slow imo and easy ar -1 since ar4 don't make sense eh I change this because the ar was said to be high... - I don't see what is wrong with ar 4 since I have seen easy with similar bpm with this

[Easy]

1. okay tbh the current rhythm is a mess as example this 00:02:311 (2) - ignores the rhythm the music provides here skipping the big white tick is not good would make it like this: Circle , Slider , Circle and so on not always circle , slider , circle but I hope you get it what I mean reworking it -might not be how you said though
2. actual map
3. the sv you use here is 1.20 im okay with that since low bpm but on the other side is 1.00ds with this sv way too huge spaced with this ds ds'ing all objects with 0.80ds would be easier for new players eh I am on a disagreement - as u said that this is low bpm and I think that .8x is too low even for this difficulty - What will do to balance things out is to lower the sv to 1.10 and keep the same ds
4. 00:23:337 (3,1) - overlap map getting rework
5. 00:26:414 (2,4) - don't do sliders like these they might be hard to follow
6. 00:34:619 (2) - ^
7. 00:32:055 (3,4,5) - a reverse 1/1 would fit more imo since this is like one of the calmest parts in the map and emphasing that with 3 circles is way too dense eh I am a bit on a disagree but I might consider
8. 00:58:208 (1,3) - make this one 01:00:260 (3) - consistent with this one 00:58:208 (1) -
9. 01:24:362 (4,1,2,3) - would make this a square instead

you really need more mods on this diff it's pretty bad at it's current state ya know I actually forgot that I was gonna change this difficulty... I already know that I undermap it too much - I can easily fix this without the need of mods (except for minor issues) as I already know the problems at hand

[Insane]

1. 00:04:747 (7) - here isn't any sound
2. 00:08:849 (5) - ^ There actually is 1 so I didn't got rid of
3. 00:21:157 (9) - ^ pls look at them yourself don't wanna point any overmapped point out Eh I already went through this and as much as I like to keep them - I will change them because it most likely me that is hearing things - I will change all that really need to be
4. 00:24:362 (3) - just copy this one it ill look aestheticely better sure
5. 01:03:337 (3) - make this consistent with 01:02:311 (1) - No because there is additional sounds right there which is why they are different

gonna end here even the mod is short but take a look at all of your diffs and look at things like I pointed out
Gl with the Map

thanks for the mod

EDIT: Easy has been rework (even the SR went lower) and pretty much the problems it had is mostly gone and just need to be a bit polish up and a few touchups

I haven't done nothing to Insane just yet but will in a sec

EDIT2: Remove all overmap streams and made triple stack (I didn't see a problem with everything else since most was map to the bubble and other sound on blue tick)
should be good now

nm
im not good at english sorry xd

Easy
looks fine

Normal
01:11:285 (2) - 00:54:875 (2) - super questionable rhythm.
Clickable objects (sliderheads, circles) give a lot more feedback as they require player to press a button, whereas spinners and slidertails (as well as reverse-arrows) give less feedback as they require a lot less accuacy and action.

Hard
HP is too high. 5 better.
00:37:183 (4) - hm Why is this a right curve? lol https://i.gyazo.com/487478d68ece7722264 ... 272180.png
01:11:285 (2,3,4) - stackmiss
01:18:208 (5,4) - ugly overlap. pls stack them

Insane
00:34:619 (3,1) - players may confuse 1/2 gap. maybe https://i.gyazo.com/71e732e2949b02ac77b ... 36860c.png
01:04:362 (1,1) - vs 01:03:849 (4) - not same pattern. pls change placement of them. maybe　https://i.gyazo.com/046f4c1691e2af095f84fe7c1e20764b.png
01:14:747 (2) - remove better. jump match music here imo.

ok insane need 2~3 mod i think. good luck.

Asuka_- wrote:

nm
im not good at english sorry xd

Easy
looks fine

Normal
01:11:285 (2) - 00:54:875 (2) - super questionable rhythm.
Clickable objects (sliderheads, circles) give a lot more feedback as they require player to press a button, whereas spinners and slidertails (as well as reverse-arrows) give less feedback as they require a lot less accuacy and action. I was doing the reverse to represent the bubble sound but at the same time I figure that I might as well change since it really isn't a problem

Hard
HP is too high. 5 better. ugh then I gotta change Normal too D: - Done
00:37:183 (4) - hm Why is this a right curve? lol https://i.gyazo.com/487478d68ece7722264 ... 272180.png
01:11:285 (2,3,4) - stackmiss
01:18:208 (5,4) - ugly overlap. pls stack them fix all above

Insane
00:34:619 (3,1) - players may confuse 1/2 gap. maybe https://i.gyazo.com/71e732e2949b02ac77b ... 36860c.png I believe that ur right and it better to change before I have to force change if a BN ever look at it - did something similar to the picture
01:04:362 (1,1) - vs 01:03:849 (4) - not same pattern. pls change placement of them. maybe　https://i.gyazo.com/046f4c1691e2af095f84fe7c1e20764b.png
Yea I didn't even thought about it when I mapped it but I change the 4 into a Curve and change the direction so it won't be confuse as the same pattern since (4) is mapped to the instrumental
01:14:747 (2) - remove better. jump match music here imo. eh I rather not

ok insane need 2~3 mod i think. good luck.

Thanks for the mod

Hello, from my queue.
General
Hard
Insane

That's all, good luck with it.

KanpanRin wrote:

Hello, from my queue.
General

Inconsistency in combo colours: [Easy]

Fixed
Hard

SPOILER

00:03:849 (3,4) - imo,
00:08:978 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can make it more smoother, like it. change it up but not like how u did it
00:11:029 (1) - I think following the vocals would be better.
00:17:183 (1,2,3) - maybe uses the 1/1 slider at here?
00:19:234 (1,2,3) -
00:27:439 (1) - maybe following the vocals? Much rather keep my map like it is so no change with none of above
00:33:080 (1) - I think here should uses the 1/2 slider. Nah this is the hard and much have it like that than to simplify it like I did on Normal
00:34:619 (3) - remove the "finish".
00:49:490 (1) - remove the "finish", (just my view, you can still keep it.) keeping both

Insane

SPOILER

00:01:798 (1) - ctrl + j no change
00:24:362 (3,4,1) - the flow looks not so good, make it more smoother. change the direction
00:37:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - hmm...... I think here is no need to using the stream.
00:40:003 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - ^ same. tbh due to how the song is - I don't see there isn't a need for 1

That's all, good luck with it.

thanks for the mod

Hello From my queue

Hello! From #modreqs

[General]
[Easy]

Sorry for that short mod, but I don't really like the song, but I wanted to help you to push this map forward, cause this map have potential I've looked at all diffs.

PeterEU wrote:

Hello From my queue

Easy

00:30:516 (2) - looks off to previous slider it the same slider and isn't off when I look at it
00:34:619 (2) - too sharp
01:05:901 (4) - al little little bit off to previous
01:14:106 (4) - off make more visible blanket also you can make 01:12:567 (3) less sharper
01:18:208 (4) - little bit off

Normal

00:00:773 (1,3) - too sharp for beginning for normal diff might be not okMade less curvy
00:20:260 (3) - pls change curve maybe to something like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9087518
00:45:644 (4) - little bit too off

Hard

00:24:875 (4) - change position to : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9087547 for better flow
00:42:824 (3) - make this less sharp or closer to next circle because that fits more to insane diff change because I didn't like how it look tbh

Insane

00:18:208 (5) - how about flipping this one vertically rather have it like it is
00:20:003 (4,5) - looks weird adjusted

No reply = Fixed/Change

Thanks for mod

EDIT: Oh dangit - I'll edit this post to reply to you Chalwa - Didn't see ya mod until now lol

EDIT2:

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! From #modreqs

[General]

1. Disable "Widescreen Support" since you haven't used a storyboard in your map. oooh - disable now

[Easy]

1. 00:05:901 (2) - Please make Ctrl + H and stack it with 00:04:875 (1) and look they aren't the same. For better look and aesthetics I think you should just copy 00:04:875 (1) slider, do the Ctrl + H and it will be nicer i think. change
2. 00:29:490 (1,2) - I know this one can be kinda nazi point, but yea. Why this sliders have that big curve, when pattern beafore and on 00:31:542 (3) slider you've made it less? I think it's unreasonable to make that big curve here, so I prefer you to make it a bit smaller. made it less curvy
3. 00:39:747 (3,4) - This two aren't good aesthetics to be honest. Let's make this the with the same shape maybe? It will looks great I think. made the same shape
4. 01:25:901 (5) - New Combo, cause really loud sound and you've used all hitsounds here. No problem with me so change

Sorry for that short mod, but I don't really like the song, but I wanted to help you to push this map forward, cause this map have potential I've looked at all diffs.

Thank you for the mod