Hello,
just a quick mod for your Hard difficulty
Ask me if something is unclear
Good luck with your map.
just a quick mod for your Hard difficulty
- 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't really like how this feels. 00:01:285 (2,4,2) - All these sliderends feel like they should be clicked because the vocals have new syllables or words or whatever. https://puu.sh/xj1mF/c81445b748.png this could be fitting. Same goes for the slider after that part.
- 00:08:978 (1,2,3,4) - 00:13:593 (2,3) - 00:17:439 (3,4,5) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - You should really take care about your aesthetics more. There are bad blankets 00:08:978 (1,3) - , distances to other objects are not perfect 00:10:003 (4) - ,seemingly same objects but they look slightly different 00:13:593 (2,3) - (use copy paste), Symmetries not done well 00:17:439 (3,4,5) -
All these little mistakes keep summing up to one big one and thats not really good. - 00:33:080 (1) - even tho you emphasized this sound through spaceing i don't think just a circle is fitting here. try to put a reverse 1/4 slider there so you get the sound mapped that follows. You can maybe even put a stream here but leaving it blank is not really good.
- 00:37:696 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i actually have no clue at all what you are doing here. 00:37:952 (1) - what is this mapped to? it starts like without any reason and ends where something should have started. All these reverse slider should have to start on the white ticks. Next thing about this is, the reverse slider feel unfitting. They are always the same basically but you can clearly hear the singer going higher from 00:37:696 (1) - to 00:38:721 (1) - and then again from 00:39:747 (1) - to 00:40:773 (1) - You should the increased density in the song reflect with your map but putting the same thing here 00:37:952 (1) - and 00:40:773 (1) - is not good at all.
- 00:52:055 (1) - why don't you map the white tick? its kiai you want to have this the climax of your map. Putting a long slider there really takes a lot of density of your map and slows it down. Overall your kiai feels much easier then the middle part of your map.
- 01:21:029 (2,3) - make sure you do not do this both these slider have their strongest sound not clicked. They are either in the middle or at the end.
- 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1) - generally this last part is kinda weird. You switched back and forth between mapping to lyrics and drums. 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1) - these are lyrics 01:20:773 (1,2,3,4) - drums 01:22:824 (1) - lyrics 01:23:593 (2) - drums 01:24:875 (1,1,1) - drums and lyrics (this is good actually). But don't change that often in such a short time to what you are mapping to. pick one thing you want to make stand out. this is how i would have done it maybe my cursor in the picture is at 01:22:311 (7) - . You can come up with something different tho.
Ask me if something is unclear
Good luck with your map.