Hello :v
Hard
id recomend you to decrase sliders curve, because sliders like these are looking bad 00:07:439 (2) -
Good luck!
Hard
- 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - spacing is a bit diferent https://puu.sh/thUYn/66b6b459b7.png
- 00:08:978 (1,2,3) - End of slider+circles - diferent spacing
- 00:08:978 (1,4) - imo this overlap is bad
- I think this stream 00:10:516 (1,2,3,4) - should be placed on the right from slider 00:10:003 (4) - to keep anti-clockwise movement.
- 00:10:003 (4,1) - overlap, the same as above
- 00:11:285 -shorten this slider and put reverse here (imo its better)
- 00:11:029 (1,2) - blanket
- 00:13:593 (2,3) - I dont 'feel' this part. Try this https://puu.sh/thVWm/23d9107815.png
- 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - 00:25:388 (1,2,3) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - this angle is too big. Make it more straight :v Fix spacing too
- 00:19:234 (1,2,3) - this is the same as above, but spacing is bigger, it should be same as 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -
- 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - overlap
- 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -^ on sliders
- 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - overlap
- 00:28:465 (5,6,7) - this spcacing is shorter than the rest (00:30:003 (3,4,5) - )
- 00:37:952 (1,1,1,1) - this is baaaad :v Dont start sliders on blue ticks! :v https://puu.sh/thWrO/1c37a16c7f.png thy this
- 00:40:003 (1,1,1,1) - ^
- i dont like it 00:52:055 (1) - try this https://puu.sh/thWCc/6665ed226f.png or this https://puu.sh/thWCW/a45fda2007.png
- 00:54:106 (1,2) - put slider there instead of circles to match this "flap" as you did here 00:50:003 (1,2,3,4) -
- 01:16:157 (5,3) - blanket
- 01:20:516 (1,1) - put triple as you did there 01:19:490 (1,2,3) -
id recomend you to decrase sliders curve, because sliders like these are looking bad 00:07:439 (2) -
Good luck!