1. Easy (1.33 stars, 65 notes)
2. Shift (3.59 stars, 164 notes)
3. titan's Hard (2.75 stars, 145 notes)
4. titan's Normal (1.93 stars, 93 notes)

Gokateigo wrote:

wow first, from my q (I suck at low SR but meh)

mod

1. slider tick raate = 4 wtf pls no, that's bad
2. 00:15:829 (11,1) - wide angles are bad but it's a nicee way to emphasise something, do a sharp anglee+large spacing or keep this
3. 00:18:429 (9) - nc
4. 00:20:829 (6,7,8) - rotation changed here, avoid to make this
5. 00:22:429 (1) - overlap with 10
6. 00:23:229 (3,4,5) - same thing about rotation
7. 00:27:629 (7,8,9) - looks weird
8. 00:31:629 (10) - ctrl+g
9. 00:36:029 (3,4) - ^+ put the slider somewhere else
10. 00:40:829 (8,9,10) - wide angle

If it's really your first map it's prtty nice, you use some basic but good patterns and you know most of the basic, great job
gl

- raspy wrote:

Where's Cataclysm difficulty?

1. Overall
   
   And put the name of the GD in the tags!!
   
   Shift
2. Maybe change this type of slider you use ( https://puu.sh/wXbfv/30613ba950.png ) in this map and dont copy paste them create other slider for Variation Hope its the right word for it im not the best in english

noz1995 wrote:

[*]75 bpm, really? As I am hearing, this should be 150. And my music analyzer software says the same.
No, 75 should work fine because that allows the snare to be on beats 2 and 4. Electronic music such as this is often mapped at "half" bpm anyway.

1. 00:49:229 (1) - I wouldn't put a spinner here because it doesn't allow much time for the player to get their cursor to stop spinning and start playing again.
   
   good job on this one.
   As noz1995 pointed out, you do need a normal for this mapset to fit the spread.

1. 00:22:429 (1,2,3) - https://puu.sh/wXJ6g/cc7873d718.jpg I'd do this instead. The slider tail overlap is far too much for a Hard diff. 00:43:629 (8,9) - Overlaps like these are fine because it overlaps the slider tail only a little bit but overlaps the body mostly.
2. 00:38:229 - I would map this bass drum hit. As in the intro, you mapped mostly to the hi-hat and (synth sound whatever the fuck its called, I don't know electronic music)
3. I told raspy that I really hate this, but throughout the entire map, your 1/4 spaced stuff have the hit circles overlapped. https://puu.sh/wXJd3/255c458b61.png As you can see, after the circles have been clicked, they're really tightly spaced. I would spaced these even more so its looks similar to this: https://puu.sh/wXJe1/767c0b43b6.png It just looks and plays a lot better. I promise you.
4. 01:02:029 (2) - This is way too tightly curved. Very hard to see where the slider body goes https://puu.sh/wXJmu/c6b2129f91.png something like this, maybe?
   
   The map's design is pretty cool, looks like how I would map something, but the consistent overlaps just don't look good. Maybe I'm just biased.
   In addition, you could do AR7 and a larger CS.
   

1. 00:12:029 (8,9) - https://puu.sh/wXJDP/fa9efca106.png You should use this rhythm. In the hardest difficulty, you should map as much as you can. And yes, that repeat slider is mapped in 1/12. That would be called a 32nd note triplet. This is not overmap because you can hear the change in pitch over each note.
2. 00:24:029 (1) - I wouldn't put a spinner here, there's a lot of notes you could map here, especially 00:25:229 - and 00:25:429 - .
3. 00:25:629 (1) - 00:28:829 (1) - 00:32:029 (1) - Sliders like these shouldn't be curved so much. You don't need to curve a slider that much to give the effect of a ~wub~
   A slider like https://puu.sh/wXLqO/dc081cd830.png still has the same effect and also looks better.
4. 00:53:829 - I would map this bass drum hit, consistently throughout the section
   
   I'm really not a fan of the default hitsounds. In addition, you used the drum sampleset for the kiai and stuff, I really wouldn't use that because the clap is a high-mid tom and not a snare. You should use a snare-sounding hitsound for such.

noz1995 wrote:

Hello, my mod from your "optional" m4m queue )

Testplay, all of them are first try

1. 75 bpm, really? As I am hearing, this should be 150. And my music analyzer software says the same. As Sharkie said, this is fine.
2. AR and OD spread is not good. Lower Hard please. I'll pay more attention to this
3. Combo colors are too similar, need to change. I'll pay more attention to this
4. Tag confict. And don't add "red shift" or anything listed in song name, artists, source into tags. Fixed
5. Uncheck "Enable countdown" and "Widescreen support" in every difficulties.

Fixed

1. BG? Fixed
2. Look like everything is just flow around and around map center, and reverse with reversing sliders. This is way too boring, you need to be more creative. If you can't tell, I'm not very good with Easy difficulties. This will be getting a remap.
3. 00:49:229 (1) - Both spinner time and spinner recovery time are too short and unrankable in Easy difficulties. Check this and ask someone more experienced. Easy is getting a remap.
4. 01:04:029 (1) - This sound better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8725111.

Easy is getting a remap.

1. BG? Fixed
2. Why do you keep DS mostly all the diff? This is 2017, not 2010. This map recieved a remap which I have not seen yet.
3. 00:35:229 (1,2) - Suddenly DS decreasing is a kind of annoying trap. Avoid them. This map recieved a remap which I have not seen yet.
4. Why do you turn the Hard diff to Easy (not even Normal!!!!) when the music is still evenful? I can't understand what this means.
5. 01:04:029 (1) - this is better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8725136.

Fixed

1. 00:20:429 (5,6,7,8,9) - This look like a huge jumps in compare to the preview section with the same music. Neft them please. Emphasis on the higher notes, but will take this into closer consideration.
2. 00:24:029 (1) - this sounds better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8725179. Fixed
3. 00:37:629 (6,7,8,9) - The music is quiet, don't use advanced pattern. Fixed
4. 00:53:829 - Strong sound, don't skip. Fixed
5. 00:54:229 - ^ Fixed
6. 01:00:229 - ^ Fixed
7. 01:00:629 - ^ Fixed

Sharkie wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:49:229 (1) - I wouldn't put a spinner here because it doesn't allow much time for the player to get their cursor to stop spinning and start playing again. Easy is getting a remap.
   
   good job on this one.
   As noz1995 pointed out, you do need a normal for this mapset to fit the spread. Suppose I'll let Titan do that one, he seems eager.

[titan's hard]

1. 00:22:429 (1,2,3) - https://puu.sh/wXJ6g/cc7873d718.jpg I'd do this instead. The slider tail overlap is far too much for a Hard diff. 00:43:629 (8,9) - Overlaps like these are fine because it overlaps the slider tail only a little bit but overlaps the body mostly. Fixed
2. 00:38:229 - I would map this bass drum hit. As in the intro, you mapped mostly to the hi-hat and (synth sound whatever the fuck its called, I don't know electronic music) Fixed
3. I told raspy that I really hate this, but throughout the entire map, your 1/4 spaced stuff have the hit circles overlapped. https://puu.sh/wXJd3/255c458b61.png As you can see, after the circles have been clicked, they're really tightly spaced. I would spaced these even more so its looks similar to this: https://puu.sh/wXJe1/767c0b43b6.png It just looks and plays a lot better. I promise you. I'll find a fix for it.
4. 01:02:029 (2) - This is way too tightly curved. Very hard to see where the slider body goes https://puu.sh/wXJmu/c6b2129f91.png something like this, maybe? Fixed
   
   The map's design is pretty cool, looks like how I would map something, but the consistent overlaps just don't look good. Maybe I'm just biased.
   In addition, you could do AR7 and a larger CS. Will do.
   

[Shift]

1. 00:12:029 (8,9) - https://puu.sh/wXJDP/fa9efca106.png You should use this rhythm. In the hardest difficulty, you should map as much as you can. And yes, that repeat slider is mapped in 1/12. That would be called a 32nd note triplet. This is not overmap because you can hear the change in pitch over each note. This seems perfectly fine to me and fits in with the triangle made by the sliders, plus it's difficult to see the pattern with just this.
2. 00:24:029 (1) - I wouldn't put a spinner here, there's a lot of notes you could map here, especially 00:25:229 - and 00:25:429 - . Fixed
3. 00:25:629 (1) - 00:28:829 (1) - 00:32:029 (1) - Sliders like these shouldn't be curved so much. You don't need to curve a slider that much to give the effect of a ~wub~
   A slider like https://puu.sh/wXLqO/dc081cd830.png still has the same effect and also looks better. Fixed
4. 00:53:829 - I would map this bass drum hit, consistently throughout the section Fixed
   
   I'm really not a fan of the default hitsounds. In addition, you used the drum sampleset for the kiai and stuff, I really wouldn't use that because the clap is a high-mid tom and not a snare. You should use a snare-sounding hitsound for such.

Will fix.

- raspy wrote:

I can't understand what this means.

noz1995 wrote:

Oops, sorry, I mean 00:51:229 -

Sharkie wrote:

As noz1995 pointed out, you do need a normal for this mapset to fit the spread.[/list]

[titan's hard]

In addition, you could do AR7 and a larger CS.

nYnxoxo wrote:

titan's Hard

00:20:829 (4,5,6,7,8) - Only really diagonal going "stream" does not look good visually imo. Fixed! Thank you!
00:49:029 (4,5,6) - Rythm sounds wrong here, alternative > https://imgur.com/xvizrHP Used the alternative! Thank you!
01:04:029 (1) - I'd either place 3 notes here, or put a reverse slider since a single note after a rather large gap on a blue tick feels weird. > https://imgur.com/a/Bz2An Used the notes, good call!

Freyja Wion wrote:

Shift

1. 00:03:229 (1) - it confuses me, but if you do ctrl+G it makes it more comfortable, ends just right for 00:04:029 (2) - and is natural because it would go to the same direction as 00:01:429 (4) - (suggestion) Suggestion taken, we'll see what the BNs think.
2. 00:24:829 (2) - a bit to the left Unsure what to take from this.
3. 00:38:429 (1) - maybe, a bit up, just to have a bigger error range for the player because of the stream before it (suggestion) Moved the stream a bit, but I don't think it fixed it. Good call though.
4. 00:52:429 (1,2) - their union bothers me, polish it Fixed!