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Renge Miyauchi, Hotaru Ichijou, Natsumi Koshigaya, Komari Ko

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aotti
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aotti
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, March 09, 2017 at 5:05:58 AM

Artist: Renge Miyauchi, Hotaru Ichijou, Natsumi Koshigaya, Komari Koshigaya
Title: Non Non Biyori
Source: のんのんびより
Tags: non non biyori ending コマたん萌えです
BPM: 147
Filesize: 7504kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Non~ (3.39 stars, 480 notes)
Download: Renge Miyauchi, Hotaru Ichijou, Natsumi Koshigaya, Komari Koshigaya - Non Non Biyori
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Ready for mods :o. (fml, i think this is first full ver.)
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Progress~ #12 Updated =.=''
Dont Really Like Mapping but..., Nub Here~ ¯\_( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)_/¯
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Monogon
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Joined September 2015
Monogon
nice job~
Weber
1,254 posts
Joined May 2015
Weber
I would probably look into getting some help with finding the correct bpm/offset as I think it's a little off right now.

Not gonna be a huge mod but i'll just point out some things since the offset/rhythm might change.

Non~

00:07:252 (1) - Spinner should start on the white tick (00:07:252 -) (be sure to adjust the end of the spinner accordingly)
00:21:402 (1) - Move this slider back to the 2nd 1/3 tick: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956692
00:24:939 (6) - Remove this note
00:30:109 (4) - Sliders don't really need to be this complex and have that many points in it, makes it look too complex, try to simplify it (I would also try to apply this logic to alot of the other sliders in this map that have more than 3 anchor points)
00:32:082 (4) - Remove, song doesn't actually have a triplet here (also applies to a lot of later triplets too)
01:19:769 (2,3) - Change this to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956722 for better rhythm
02:09:157 (1,1,1) - Lots of NC like these aren't really necessary.

Sure, there's a lot I can say about the lack of map structure and lack of flow regarding spacing and sliders and all of that mumbo jumbo but I think i'll omit that for later until you get some more experience with placing rhythm.

Good luck!
aotti
51 posts
Joined April 2016
Topic Starter
aotti

Weber wrote:

I would probably look into getting some help with finding the correct bpm/offset as I think it's a little off right now.

Not gonna be a huge mod but i'll just point out some things since the offset/rhythm might change.

Non~

00:07:252 (1) - Spinner should start on the white tick (00:07:252 -) (be sure to adjust the end of the spinner accordingly)
00:21:402 (1) - Move this slider back to the 2nd 1/3 tick: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956692
00:24:939 (6) - Remove this note
00:30:109 (4) - Sliders don't really need to be this complex and have that many points in it, makes it look too complex, try to simplify it (I would also try to apply this logic to alot of the other sliders in this map that have more than 3 anchor points)
00:32:082 (4) - Remove, song doesn't actually have a triplet here (also applies to a lot of later triplets too)
01:19:769 (2,3) - Change this to: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6956722 for better rhythm
02:09:157 (1,1,1) - Lots of NC like these aren't really necessary.

Sure, there's a lot I can say about the lack of map structure and lack of flow regarding spacing and sliders and all of that mumbo jumbo but I think i'll omit that for later until you get some more experience with placing rhythm.

Good luck!
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A s h e m u
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Joined February 2013
A s h e m u
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