Donuts Quintet - Platinum Jet [OsuMania|Osu]

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Akunosu

BevzProDota wrote:

Hard
00:01:619 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/NsATmGc.jpg Corrected
00:09:405 (1,2) - make as stack It feel better just like this now
00:16:733 (1,2) - same same
00:23:145 (2), 00:26:809 (2), 00:30:474 (2) - make to white tick it's feel better, corrected
00:54:634 (5,6) - fix fixed
02:45:588 (2) - looks strange I still can not find a good pattern here
03:40:321 (5) - break after note ok
03:49:023 (4,1,2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/gJB5DPd.jpg I like, corrected it
03:57:954 (1) - fix (make more pretty) I still can not think of anything

Nee Luna Luna Nee Luna Luuuuunaaaaaaa~
thanks for mod, and the help with the image miniature of beatmap :D
Lama Poluna

Hello, from metadata help queue.

Artist: どーなつ◎くいんてっと
Romanised Artist: DONUT QUINTET
Title: プラチナジェット
Romanised Title: PLATINUM JET
Source: SHIROBAKO
Tags: Juri Kimura 木村珠莉 Haruka Yoshimura 佳村はるか Haruka Chisuga 千菅春香 Asami Takano 髙野麻美 Hitomi Ohwada 大和田仁美 Halko Momoi 桃井はるこ Takeshi Watanabe 渡辺剛 シロバコ White Box Ending ED
Source 1
Source 2
Source 3
Umo-
NM req from Umo-'s modding queue
00:02:535 (2535|2,2535|0) - those two notes would feel better as a one note chord
00:04:596 (4596|1,5054|1,5512|1) - spread those a bit more
00:09:405 - meybe add a LN here and extend it to 00:09:863 -
00:13:527 - add a note
00:13:985 - ^
00:15:130 (15130|1,15359|1) - since this is a jackhammer why not make this too? It would fit well 00:15:588 (15588|2,15817|3) -
00:16:962 - add double
00:18:794 - double
00:48:336 (48336|2,48336|3,48565|1,48565|2,48794|1,48794|0) - this is too hard for Normal, make a normal stair pattern going from 4 to 1
00:49:367 - missing note
00:49:710 - add a note / crash sound
00:52:229 (52229|2,52687|2,53145|2,53603|2) - avoid this, too repetitive hand movement
00:54:061 - make one of those notes a LN and extend it to 00:54:290 -
00:59:099 - add double because there is a finish hitsound
01:01:962 (61962|1) - extend to 01:02:306 -
01:06:886 (66886|1,67344|1,67802|1,68260|1) - avoid
01:08:718 (68718|2) - make this a LN and extend to the next LN
01:24:748 - add double
01:39:405 (99405|0) - move to 4 so that its not in the same column as the previous note
02:05:283 (125283|1,125283|0,125512|2,125512|1,125741|2,125741|3) - same as before, too hard for NM, make stair pattern from 1 to 4
02:07:802 (127802|1,127802|0,128031|2,128031|3,128260|1,128260|0) - would work better as single note chords
02:09:176 (129176|1,129634|1,130092|1,130550|1) - avoid
02:18:909 (138909|2) - extend to 02:19:252 -
02:23:832 (143832|2,144290|2,144748|2,145206|2) - avoid
02:34:367 - add a note for crash sound
02:38:489 (158489|0,158489|1) - move to 4, its a diffrend sound from 02:38:031 -
02:40:092 (160092|2,160321|0) - remove those notes, you cant really hear them at 100% speed so they are not necessary
02:49:023 - add double or single note
02:54:519 (174519|1) - move to 4, it feels better while playing plus it avoids the jackhammer
02:56:351 - add double or single note
03:00:015 (180015|1) - move to 1
03:20:168 (200168|1) - end at 03:21:084 - and add a new LN there
03:28:870 (208870|3,209099|3,209328|3) - move some notes to 1 since its empty
03:31:161 - add double because crash sound
Don't have time to mod the HD difficulty so poke me in game or something if you want me to mod it
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Lama Poluna wrote:


Hello, from metadata help queue.

Artist: どーなつ◎くいんてっと
Romanised Artist: DONUT QUINTET
Title: プラチナジェット
Romanised Title: PLATINUM JET
Source: SHIROBAKO
Tags: Juri Kimura 木村珠莉 Haruka Yoshimura 佳村はるか Haruka Chisuga 千菅春香 Asami Takano 髙野麻美 Hitomi Ohwada 大和田仁美 Halko Momoi 桃井はるこ Takeshi Watanabe 渡辺剛 シロバコ White Box Ending ED
Source 1
Source 2
Source 3
ok, thank you :D

Edit:
Sorry, I forgot don't give you kudosu :?
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Umo- wrote:

NM req from Umo-'s modding queue
00:02:535 (2535|2,2535|0) - those two notes would feel better as a one note chord you're right, fixed
00:04:596 (4596|1,5054|1,5512|1) - spread those a bit more fixed
00:09:405 - meybe add a LN here and extend it to 00:09:863 - Feel like this
00:13:527 - add a note ok
00:13:985 - ^ ^
00:15:130 (15130|1,15359|1) - since this is a jackhammer why not make this too? It would fit well 00:15:588 (15588|2,15817|3) - good idea, fixed
00:16:962 - add double it feels good, fixed
00:18:794 - double ^, fixed
00:48:336 (48336|2,48336|3,48565|1,48565|2,48794|1,48794|0) - this is too hard for Normal, make a normal stair pattern going from 4 to 1 I didn't know that, thanks and fixed
00:49:367 - missing note here I don't hear a sound
00:49:710 - add a note / crash sound ready
00:52:229 (52229|2,52687|2,53145|2,53603|2) - avoid this, too repetitive hand movement ok, fixed
00:54:061 - make one of those notes a LN and extend it to 00:54:290 - if i added a LN, i was only follow the vocals
00:59:099 - add double because there is a finish hitsound added
01:01:962 (61962|1) - extend to 01:02:306 - fixed
01:06:886 (66886|1,67344|1,67802|1,68260|1) - avoid avoided
01:08:718 (68718|2) - make this a LN and extend to the next LN if added... (same with the previous)
01:24:748 - add double ready
01:39:405 (99405|0) - move to 4 so that its not in the same column as the previous note ready
02:05:283 (125283|1,125283|0,125512|2,125512|1,125741|2,125741|3) - same as before, too hard for NM, make stair pattern from 1 to 4 Ok :3
02:07:802 (127802|1,127802|0,128031|2,128031|3,128260|1,128260|0) - would work better as single note chords I don't understand
02:09:176 (129176|1,129634|1,130092|1,130550|1) - avoid *
02:18:909 (138909|2) - extend to 02:19:252 - ready
02:23:832 (143832|2,144290|2,144748|2,145206|2) - avoid *
02:34:367 - add a note for crash sound OK
02:38:489 (158489|0,158489|1) - move to 4, its a diffrend sound from 02:38:031 - ready
02:40:092 (160092|2,160321|0) - remove those notes, you cant really hear them at 100% speed so they are not necessary You're right, I'll take it as a advice, fixed
02:49:023 - add double or single note ok
02:54:519 (174519|1) - move to 4, it feels better while playing plus it avoids the jackhammer that looks better
02:56:351 - add double or single note ^
03:00:015 (180015|1) - move to 1 ^
03:20:168 (200168|1) - end at 03:21:084 - and add a new LN there ok
03:28:870 (208870|3,209099|3,209328|3) - move some notes to 1 since its empty ok
03:31:161 - add double because crash sound ok

Don't have time to mod the HD difficulty so poke me in game or something if you want me to mod it
Good Luck!
Sorry for answer you late;
thanks for mod :D
jyu
do you know how much i sweated and prayed the star rating won't exceed 2.0 bcs


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Topic Starter
Akunosu
:D

jyu wrote:

do you know how much i sweated and prayed the star rating won't exceed 2.0 bcs


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I didn't know it...
I'm going to upload the GD, thanks :3
FadillSan
NM req from my queue~

Free reject~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

00:00:474 (474|1) - move to 4
00:00:703 - add note at 2
00:01:619 (1619|2) - move to 2
00:04:138 (4138|1) - remove this, and..
00:03:680 (3680|1) - this LN is end at 00:04:138 -
00:36:657 (36657|1) - move to 1
01:03:451 (63451|1) - move to 1
01:05:970 (65970|1) - move to 1
01:18:336 (78336|2) - move to 4
02:42:382 (162382|2) - this LN end at 02:42:840 -
02:44:214 (164214|2) - and this, end at 02:44:672 -
03:13:756 (193756|0) - end at 03:14:214 -
03:43:527 (223527|2,223527|1) - remove, and..
03:42:611 (222611|2,222611|1) - this two end at 03:43:527
Nice pattern, but you must beware for the placement note :3
Good Luck~
Maxylan
Normal Difficulty's mod

TL:DR It's simplistic, just like it should be on a normal map! And somehow it manages to not be very repetetive! It could just be that I'm new to modding but these highlights where the only thing I found wierd.

00:09:176 (4,5,6) - You're missing a sound on the red tick right before this slider. I know this slider isn't supposed to represent that sound and instead, it's put on another instrument. But it's confusing because it's such a dominating sound. And everything up until this 00:08:718 (3) - note followed that sound.
00:16:504 (4,5,6) - Same as above.
02:48:565 (4,5,6,7) - Same as above.
02:55:893 (4,5,6,7) - Same as above.
03:44:901 (4,1,2) - Now THIS is what i meant! (If it wasn't already painfully obvious)

Hard Difficulty's mod

TL:DR Overall it's a very well put together map, but it's overly simplistic which is fine for a normal map. But on a hard difficulty, it feels very, repetetive, because it's almost as if every single object is distance snapped and you shouldn't be too scared to experiment with placing cirkles and slider velocities to emphasise sounds on a hard map.

00:31:619 (1,2,3,4) - These could follow flow a little better.
02:23:832 (2,3) - Same as above.
02:51:313 (2,3) - Same as above.
03:38:947 (2,3,4) - Sameas above.

02:46:390 (4,5) - These break my combo every playthrough I did. It isn't obvious that the second one repeats 2 times when the first one only repeats once if they're the same length and next to each other.

Overall a great difficulty if you follow what I wrote above, couldn't find much to hate about it and that's a rare quality when modding haha!

Thanks for applying for my queue! Very catchy song, could be the next HIME if reddit get's wind of this...
Topic Starter
Akunosu

FadillSan wrote:

NM req from my queue~

Free reject~
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

00:00:474 (474|1) - move to 4 ok
00:00:703 - add note at 2 ok x2
00:01:619 (1619|2) - move to 2 ok x3, ^ That makes it feel better to the to play
00:04:138 (4138|1) - remove this, and.. removed and..
00:03:680 (3680|1) - this LN is end at 00:04:138 - extended LN
00:36:657 (36657|1) - move to 1 ok, you give me a idea, I will change this pattern
01:03:451 (63451|1) - move to 1 moved
01:05:970 (65970|1) - move to 1 moved, bcs is a jack very complicated u.u
01:18:336 (78336|2) - move to 4 ^
02:42:382 (162382|2) - this LN end at 02:42:840 - fixed, I did not realize
02:44:214 (164214|2) - and this, end at 02:44:672 - ^
03:13:756 (193756|0) - end at 03:14:214 - ^
03:43:527 (223527|2,223527|1) - remove, and.. removed and..
03:42:611 (222611|2,222611|1) - this two end at 03:43:527 extended LN

Nice pattern, but you must beware for the placement note :3 I wanted add jack shorts...,I'll keep it in mind that information

Good Luck~
Thanks for mod!
jyu

Maxylan wrote:

Normal Difficulty's mod

TL:DR It's simplistic, just like it should be on a normal map! And somehow it manages to not be very repetetive! It could just be that I'm new to modding but these highlights where the only thing I found wierd.

00:09:176 (4,5,6) - You're missing a sound on the red tick right before this slider. I know this slider isn't supposed to represent that sound and instead, it's put on another instrument. But it's confusing because it's such a dominating sound. And everything up until this 00:08:718 (3) - note followed that sound. umm intentional, bcs thats the rhythm pattern i intended to be. if i keep following the main melody, beginners will have troubles following all those clickings, so yeah. also im not a fan of repetitive rhythm, but you can see that i made some consistencies in rhythm like 00:07:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 00:15:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - anyway will fix this if more people points this out
00:16:504 (4,5,6) - Same as above. ^
02:48:565 (4,5,6,7) - Same as above. ^
02:55:893 (4,5,6,7) - Same as above. ^
03:44:901 (4,1,2) - Now THIS is what i meant! (If it wasn't already painfully obvious) this one is also intentional because its almost the end of the song and i wanted to emphasize that so yeah, hence the different and a bit more complicated rhythm. its still similiar with the base rhythm i used in the beginning but i made it consistent like 03:43:985 (1,2,3,4,1) - and 03:47:649 (1,2,3,4,1) -
Thanks for mod!! :)

btw i fixed some unsnapped sliders
osu file format v14

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Title:Platinum Jet
TitleUnicode:プラチナジェット
Artist:Donuts Quintet
ArtistUnicode:どーなつ◎くいんてっと
Creator:Acnos
Version:Normal
Source:SHIROBAKO
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216,176,109481,2,0,L|216:232,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,120,110168,6,0,B|124:96|60:152|60:152|124:204|84:248,1,250,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,300,111542,2,0,L|56:368,1,50
120,356,112000,2,0,P|184:328|372:352,1,250,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,116,114061,6,0,P|248:108|184:124,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,216,114977,2,0,P|116:260|84:308,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,115893,2,0,P|244:336|308:352,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,116809,2,0,P|440:260|436:204,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,118183,5,8,0:0:0:0:
204,204,118641,2,0,P|148:188|96:192,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,100,119557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,56,120015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,56,120474,2,0,L|316:56,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,121390,6,0,L|448:292,2,100,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,122764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,236,123222,2,0,L|176:348,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,124367,2,0,L|128:124,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,124825,6,0,P|192:40|216:40,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,48,125512,2,0,L|316:80,1,50
360,116,125970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,156,126199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,126657,2,0,B|276:200|276:200|212:296|108:264,1,250,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,88,128718,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,52,129176,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,84,129634,2,0,P|376:100|428:88,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,212,130550,2,0,P|385:255|376:312,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,340,131466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,356,131924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,260,132382,6,0,L|48:152,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,112,133298,2,0,L|240:40,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,134214,2,0,P|424:84|496:64,1,150
464,240,135588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,316,136046,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,304,136504,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,260,136962,2,0,P|104:236|76:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,68,137878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,32,138336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,28,138794,2,0,P|384:32|424:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,176,139710,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,308,140626,2,0,L|156:280,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,212,141542,2,0,P|49:150|64:64,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,300,143374,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,256,143832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,276,144290,2,0,P|412:252|424:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,145206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,32,145664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,132,146122,2,0,P|156:143|100:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,244,147038,6,0,L|88:360,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,348,147954,2,0,P|247:336|304:344,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,276,148870,2,0,P|436:240|460:144,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,264,150703,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,176,151161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,80,151619,2,0,P|176:60|244:68,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,60,152535,2,0,P|396:58|448:80,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,172,153451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,260,153909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,260,154367,5,4,0:0:0:0:
76,40,155283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,40,156199,2,0,P|360:46|408:76,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,192,157115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,264,157573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,304,158031,6,0,P|88:281|68:176,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,159405,1,4,0:0:0:0:
260,60,159863,1,4,0:0:0:0:
324,56,167191,6,0,L|344:104,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,160,167649,2,0,L|352:216,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,264,168107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,168565,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,284,169023,2,0,P|100:224|92:176,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,169939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,170397,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,60,170855,6,0,L|428:88,1,50
452,136,171313,2,0,L|468:188,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,171771,2,0,P|424:260|352:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,172458,2,0,P|264:216|196:232,1,100
160,244,173145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,220,173374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,104,173832,2,0,L|24:116,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,92,174519,6,0,P|172:88|200:96,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,104,174977,2,0,P|296:108|312:104,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,96,175435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,200,175893,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,268,176351,2,0,P|272:268|224:236,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,132,177267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,44,177725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,44,178183,6,0,L|364:104,1,50
396,144,178641,2,0,L|396:204,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,248,179099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,316,179557,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,264,180015,6,0,B|131:208|131:168|131:168|151:120|191:88,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,181390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,181848,2,0,P|472:160|492:284,1,200
400,348,183222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,324,183680,6,0,P|268:272|276:216,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,184596,2,0,P|162:126|116:107,1,100
256,192,185512,12,4,189176,0:0:0:0:
160,96,196504,6,0,P|136:116|116:188,2,100,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,197878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,96,198336,2,0,P|404:116|424:188,2,100,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,199710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,244,200168,6,0,P|200:296|324:224,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,136,202000,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,36,202458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,36,202916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,136,203374,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,232,203832,6,0,P|124:260|172:252,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,200,204748,2,0,P|308:188|364:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,272,205664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,156,206122,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,52,206580,2,0,P|360:60|320:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,40,207496,6,0,B|164:44|164:44|112:76,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,208870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,188,209328,2,0,L|496:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,300,210244,2,0,L|312:280,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,316,211161,6,0,P|152:340|92:336,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,220,212077,2,0,P|176:196|236:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,172,212993,2,0,P|360:128|360:68,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,44,213909,2,0,P|200:52|132:32,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,214825,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,228,215283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,308,215741,2,0,P|220:316|280:304,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,236,216657,2,0,B|420:240|420:240|472:280,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,218031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,80,218489,6,0,P|227:64|296:64,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,120,219405,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,228,219863,1,4,0:0:0:0:
348,292,220321,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,223527,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,92,223985,6,0,L|272:76,1,50
216,64,224443,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,68,224672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,84,224901,2,0,P|84:132|88:188,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,236,225588,6,0,P|160:224|216:240,1,100
264,260,226275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,260,226504,2,0,L|364:208,1,50
380,168,226962,2,0,P|384:120|380:108,2,50
320,172,227649,6,0,L|256:148,1,50
216,136,228107,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,120,228336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,104,228565,2,0,P|76:128|56:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,240,229252,6,0,L|160:228,1,50
196,252,229710,2,0,P|220:256|256:248,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,232,230168,2,0,L|349:240,1,50
408,240,230626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,184,230855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,231084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,88,231313,6,0,L|300:80,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,80,231771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,84,232000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,88,232229,2,0,P|124:128|132:192,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,232916,6,0,L|276:232,1,100
324,208,233603,2,0,L|328:144,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,268,234290,2,0,L|316:332,2,50,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,240,234977,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,196,235206,2,0,L|424:136,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,92,235664,2,0,L|368:40,1,50
312,52,236122,2,0,P|280:64|256:60,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,64,236580,5,4,0:0:0:0:
92,104,237038,1,4,0:0:0:0:
132,216,237496,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,176,237954,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,238641,12,2,245741,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Akunosu

Maxylan wrote:

Hard Difficulty's mod

TL:DR Overall it's a very well put together map, but it's overly simplistic which is fine for a normal map. But on a hard difficulty, it feels very, repetetive, because it's almost as if every single object is distance snapped and you shouldn't be too scared to experiment with placing cirkles and slider velocities to emphasise sounds on a hard map.

00:31:619 (1,2,3,4) - These could follow flow a little better. fixed
02:23:832 (2,3) - Same as above. Jonawaga : fixed
02:51:313 (2,3) - Same as above. *
03:38:947 (2,3,4) - Sameas above. fixed

02:46:390 (4,5) - These break my combo every playthrough I did. It isn't obvious that the second one repeats 2 times when the first one only repeats once if they're the same length and next to each other. fixed, this part I couldn't find a well pattern, now I think it's already made

Overall a great difficulty if you follow what I wrote above, couldn't find much to hate about it and that's a rare quality when modding haha!

Thanks for applying for my queue! Very catchy song, could be the next HIME if reddit get's wind of this... yeah, is very catchy e.e
it's done, thanks for mod! :D
Zylin
Hi Acnos~

NM Req from Chochoa's Queue

Feel Free to Reject My Mods
1|2|3|4


NM

00:04:138 (4138|0) - change to normal note
00:23:603 (23603|2,23603|3,23832|1) - swap, cuz this 00:23:832 (23832|1) - louder than this 00:23:603 (23603|3,23603|2) -
00:24:290 (24290|1,24519|0) - delete just kick sound
00:24:748 (24748|3) - move to col 1
00:27:267 (27267|1,27267|0) - make it single
00:27:496 - should be double
00:27:954 (27954|2,28183|3) - same as previous mod
00:29:557 (29557|2) - it's okay to let it empty
00:29:328 - double
00:30:932 (30932|1,30932|2,31161|3) - swap
00:31:619 (31619|2,31848|3) - delete
00:32:764 (32764|2) - move to col 2
00:32:993 - make it double
this 00:36:199 - has a same sound like 00:36:428 (36428|1,36657|3,36657|1,36886|3) - so make it single
01:30:244 (90244|1,90703|2) - delete , just follow piano here 01:30:474 - & 01:30:932 - (add normal note)
01:37:344 (97344|2,97802|1,98260|0) - ctrl+g
01:40:550 (100550|0,100550|1,100779|2) - swap , and other part like that
02:07:802 (127802|0,127802|1,128031|2,128031|3,128260|1,128260|0) - i think single note would be better
02:14:214 (134214|0,134214|1,134557|2,134557|1,134901|2,134901|3) - make it single , has a low pitch
03:10:092 (190092|1,191008|3) - ghost note, delete
03:24:748 (204748|3,204748|1) - single
03:29:672 (209672|2,209672|3,210015|0,210015|1) - ^
03:34:138 (214138|1,214367|0,214596|1) - delete low pitch just tom sound
03:34:138 (214138|2) - move to col 4
03:34:367 (214367|1) - move to col 3
03:34:596 (214596|2) - move to col 2
03:37:115 (217115|2,217115|3) - ctrl+h
03:37:344 (217344|1) - move to col 4?
03:38:031 (218031|2) - move to col 1
you can delete this 03:39:405 (219405|1,219405|0,219863|2,219863|3) - with make ln from 03:39:405 - to 03:40:321 - to cover that sound

HD

00:13:527 (13527|2,13756|2,13985|2,14214|2,14443|2) - avoid this anchor , try another pattern
01:17:878 (77878|3,78107|3,78336|3,78565|3,78794|3) - ^ same as above, you can delete this 01:18:336 (78336|1) - to make new pattern
if you accept mod above^ you must delete this tho 01:20:168 (80168|1) -
01:50:855 (110855|1,110970|0,111084|1,111199|2) - you can delete that , and make ln (on col 4) from 01:50:855 - to 01:51:313 -
01:51:313 (111313|3,111390|2,111466|1,111542|0) - ctrl+h
01:51:619 (111619|1,111695|2,111771|3) - maybe delete , since it's fine if empty
02:07:802 (127802|2,127802|3,128031|0,128031|1) - make it single
02:08:260 (128260|2) - delete , single ln is enough
02:43:527 (163527|3,163527|1,163756|1,163985|0,164214|2,164672|3) - ctrl+h
02:44:901 (164901|1) - move to col 4
02:46:390 (166390|0,166504|2,166619|0,166733|2,166848|3,166962|1,167077|0) - idk , but i think would be better if you delete ln
02:49:939 (169939|1,170168|2) - ctrl+h
02:50:855 (170855|0) - move to col 4
02:51:313 (171313|3) - move to col 1
02:51:542 (171542|0) - move to col 4
03:09:634 (189634|0,190092|3,190550|1,191008|2) - ghost note , delete it
03:16:962 - make it double, snare sound
03:17:878 - ^
03:18:794 - ^
03:23:145 (203145|2,203374|1,203489|3) - delete ln , more comfortable to play without ln
03:34:596 (214596|2,214825|2,215054|2,215283|2) - avoid this on hard diff
03:47:649 (227649|0) - delete , cuz has a same sound like 03:47:420 (227420|2) -
03:48:107 - double here


GL with your maps~
nice songs <3

sorry modding it offline so idk if something is update~ :o
Topic Starter
Akunosu
;)

ChochoaLatte- wrote:

Hi Acnos~

NM Req from Chochoa's Queue

Feel Free to Reject My Mods
1|2|3|4


NM

00:04:138 (4138|0) - change to normal note fixed, looks better, why did i put a LN? o.o
00:23:603 (23603|2,23603|3,23832|1) - swap, cuz this 00:23:832 (23832|1) - louder than this 00:23:603 (23603|3,23603|2) - you're right
00:24:290 (24290|1,24519|0) - delete just kick sound ok
00:24:748 (24748|3) - move to col 1 ^
00:27:267 (27267|1,27267|0) - make it single Fixed
00:27:496 - should be double ^
00:27:954 (27954|2,28183|3) - same as previous mod ^
00:29:557 (29557|2) - it's okay to let it empty ^
00:29:328 - double ^
00:30:932 (30932|1,30932|2,31161|3) - swap ^
00:31:619 (31619|2,31848|3) - delete ^
00:32:764 (32764|2) - move to col 2 ^
00:32:993 - make it double ^
this 00:36:199 - has a same sound like 00:36:428 (36428|1,36657|3,36657|1,36886|3) - so make it single ^
01:30:244 (90244|1,90703|2) - delete , just follow piano here 01:30:474 - & 01:30:932 - (add normal note) ok, this part 00:13:527 (13527|3,13985|1) - as well
01:37:344 (97344|2,97802|1,98260|0) - ctrl+g fixed
01:40:550 (100550|0,100550|1,100779|2) - swap , and other part like that ok, i will fix the others
02:07:802 (127802|0,127802|1,128031|2,128031|3,128260|1,128260|0) - i think single note would be better ok
02:14:214 (134214|0,134214|1,134557|2,134557|1,134901|2,134901|3) - make it single , has a low pitch fixed, the notes was very loud e.e
03:10:092 (190092|1,191008|3) - ghost note, delete fixed
03:24:748 (204748|3,204748|1) - single ok
03:29:672 (209672|2,209672|3,210015|0,210015|1) - ^ ^
03:34:138 (214138|1,214367|0,214596|1) - delete low pitch just tom sound ok
03:34:138 (214138|2) - move to col 4 *
03:34:367 (214367|1) - move to col 3 *
03:34:596 (214596|2) - move to col 2 fixed, Good idea
03:37:115 (217115|2,217115|3) - ctrl+h jack complicated fixed
03:37:344 (217344|1) - move to col 4? i think this jack easy is fine
03:38:031 (218031|2) - move to col 1 ok, So that it is not similar to the previous
you can delete this 03:39:405 (219405|1,219405|0,219863|2,219863|3) - with make ln from 03:39:405 - to 03:40:321 - to cover that sound ok, It looks fun :3

HD

00:13:527 (13527|2,13756|2,13985|2,14214|2,14443|2) - avoid this anchor , try another pattern ok
01:17:878 (77878|3,78107|3,78336|3,78565|3,78794|3) - ^ same as above, you can delete this 01:18:336 (78336|1) - to make new pattern
if you accept mod above^ you must delete this tho 01:20:168 (80168|1) - changed pattern
01:50:855 (110855|1,110970|0,111084|1,111199|2) - you can delete that , and make ln (on col 4) from 01:50:855 - to 01:51:313 - I think this stair is fine, else, you didn't tell me the cuz
01:51:313 (111313|3,111390|2,111466|1,111542|0) - ctrl+h ^
01:51:619 (111619|1,111695|2,111771|3) - maybe delete , since it's fine if empty i don't like this silence of notes
02:07:802 (127802|2,127802|3,128031|0,128031|1) - make it single If another modder tell me the same, it will change :3
02:08:260 (128260|2) - delete , single ln is enough ^
02:43:527 (163527|3,163527|1,163756|1,163985|0,164214|2,164672|3) - ctrl+h ok
02:44:901 (164901|1) - move to col 4 moved
02:46:390 (166390|0,166504|2,166619|0,166733|2,166848|3,166962|1,167077|0) - idk , but i think would be better if you delete ln this pattern i like T_T, I will change if another modder tell me
02:49:939 (169939|1,170168|2) - ctrl+h ok
02:50:855 (170855|0) - move to col 4 *
02:51:313 (171313|3) - move to col 1 *
02:51:542 (171542|0) - move to col 4 moved
03:09:634 (189634|0,190092|3,190550|1,191008|2) - ghost note , delete it deleted
03:16:962 - make it double, snare sound done
03:17:878 - ^ ^
03:18:794 - ^ ^
03:23:145 (203145|2,203374|1,203489|3) - delete ln , more comfortable to play without ln yeah, but these Lns sounds better, with sounds of this part of the song
03:34:596 (214596|2,214825|2,215054|2,215283|2) - avoid this on hard diff ok, i will remember it
03:47:649 (227649|0) - delete , cuz has a same sound like 03:47:420 (227420|2) - deleted
03:48:107 - double here ok


GL with your maps~ :)
nice songs <3 thanks <3

sorry modding it offline so idk if something is update~ :o
I want to give you 2 kudosus, but I can't >:( , Thanks for modding! :D
Asherz007
When life gives you lemons, don't panic like I do.

Mania NM request! :)

[General]
Check AIMod. A few errors across all diffs.

Difficulty names: If the diffs aren't yours (i.e. made by someone else), make that clear by having X's Normal (for example) as the difficulty name. Also, add their names to the tags.

Not too much of a complaint, but the hitsound importing is pretty meh and implies a hitsound copier was used. Be aware that the copier also copies sounds to the storyboard (accessed in mania by pressing tab), which can be disorientating in the lower diffs when you hear a hitsound where there's no note.

A few timing points that don't really appear to do anything.

Make sure misc. toggles are consistent across all diffs. Since there's going to be a storyboard, ensure that widescreen support is enabled and decide whether you need to display an epilepsy warning.

  1. Check AIMod. The number of times I come in and there are still problems here is crazy. It's often just simple checks like unsnapped notes and kiai toggles that are overlooked.
  2. The maximum bitrate for audio files is 192kbps, minimum 128kbps. Check this by looking at the properties of the audio file in the song folder. AIMod will also try to pick up this problem.
  3. Custom hitsounds must have a maximum delay of 5ms. Preferably, they should have no delay at all.
  4. Background need to optimally be 1920*1080 (as these are the maximum rankable dimensions.)
  5. Don't leave unused files in folders, as they take up unwanted space since the maximum permissible folder size is 30MB.
  6. OD and HP: Generally speaking, between 6 and 9 for both is fine, but don't do something silly like odhp 9 for an Easy or odhp6 for an Extra. Usually having these values up to 1.0 apart is normal, as long as the idea of progression is still present within the map.


Slider Velocity (SV) Changes
There is both a Standard Guide and Simplified Guide available for use.

The two key things are:
  1. Make sure they're averaged so the overall section is still sightreadable (best way of doing this is maintaining the 1x average mentioned in the guides)
  2. Use them appropriately. There shouldn't be any random SVs in the map.


Charting
First thing's first. I'm going to say mapping notes to vocals or to more or less any form of lead for an extended period of time is strongly discouraged and should be avoided. There's nothing technically wrong with it, but with following sounds for mania (what you should be doing, might I add), it can get a little cluttered, particularly for 4K and following vocals is the first thing to be dropped.

Going off of that, unlike standard, there are no filler notes in mania. That means that, if there aren't any sounds about, there shouldn't be anything there. Vocals aren't really considered as sounds for this as they're not as clear-cut as something like percussion. If there are notes where there aren't sounds, then those are ghost notes.

Avoid "anti-ghosting" as well, which is not mapping something that should be. For example, something like a snare sound shouldn't be missed. It's more often than not a problem for easier difficulties, as you can't really map many things that appear on 1/4s at high BPMs. The easy solution is to "cover the sound" with a long note (LN). A good place where people use this is in drum fills.

The thing to come after this is consistency, which is essentially mapping the same sound with exactly the same number of notes, well, consistently. A common thing would be to map bass kicks for the harder difficulties as doubles, and this would be the same throughout the rest of the map. Occasionally this can be broken, but there needs to be a very good reason as to why.

"Variety is the spice of life", as they say. Remains true for this too, you know. It's not wrong to be repetitive, but being varied (while being consistent) can make a map interesting.

Another important factor is playability. Essentially, it's trying to ensure that the patterns you map are somewhat comfortable. Of course, you can go against this, but you're going to need a reason to the tons of modders who will point it out. It's important to playtest your map often and think about the players it will be aimed for. (The most common way most people do this is through spreading the notes out across all of the columns evenly.)

Lastly, progression. Easier difficulties should essentially be a more basic version of harder difficulties, rather than a different entity altogether. Simply, there shouldn't be anything in an Easy or Normal that would be absent in a Hard or an Insane, for example. The other thing is, there can't really be too much of a difference between difficulties, as the jump would be unreasonable to players trying to progress onto the harder difficulties.

If anything, practice will improve your mapping skills, as it does anyone. But knowing about these will certainly help, as it has for me. :)

Of course, if there's anything here that you don't understand, feel free to PM me somewhere.

0|1|2|3 (I'll have a look at the HD diff for this)

(Side note: change NM to od7 hp7, because at the moment it's far too high)

OD:7.5 HP:7.5
I feel like there are too many LNs here. Might just be me, I don't know.

  1. 00:00:474 - I'm not particularly sure why NM appears to be denser than HD here. Perhaps it would be better to think about making the layering a little more consistent between these difficulties.
  2. 00:00:474 (474|3,474|0,474|2) - Probably want to remove one of the notes here since having 3 looks a little odd intensity-wise.
  3. 00:04:825 (4825|0,5283|3) - Not sure what these LNs are following.
  4. 00:07:115 (7115|2,7191|1,7267|2,7344|3,7573|2,7649|1,7725|2,7802|1,7802|3) - This pattern feels like it's a little bit too much for cols 1 and 2. Maybe a little too much strain on the left hand as well, since there's also the LN to think about. Actually, after looking a little closer, 00:07:573 (7573|2,7649|1) - these are ghosts because the final burst is 1/4 from 00:07:687.
  5. 00:10:550 (10550|3) - What's this LN mapped to?
  6. 00:14:099 - Note? It's part of the 1/4 burst.
  7. 00:15:130 - Double/Triple (whichever you intend on using) for crash
  8. 00:17:878 (17878|2) - What's the LN for?
  9. 00:18:565 - There's a 1/6 drum burst here if you wanted to.
  10. 00:18:794 (18794|3) - I'd suggest removing this LN since it cramps up the playfield a little too much.
  11. 00:19:939 (19939|1,20054|1) - There's not really any musical reason to me to have the two notes in the same column.
  12. 00:20:397 (20397|0,20397|1,20855|2,20855|1,21313|3,21313|2) - I reckon it would be better to have each of these being 1/2 beat in length. Try it out.
  13. 00:26:122 (26122|3) - Consistency-wise, I think you're better removing this since the current pattern is singles for kicks (like 00:23:374 and 00:24:290)
  14. 00:27:725 (27725|2) - Move into col 3 to prevent stack?
  15. 00:27:954 (27954|0) - Remove for consistency?
  16. 00:30:817 (30817|3) - I'd remove this as well. (Firstly, it's on just the vocals, but more importantly, it's inconsistent with earlier.)
  17. 00:31:504 (31504|1) - ^
  18. 00:33:222 - You'll want another note here.
  19. 00:34:596 (34596|2,34672|1,34748|0,34825|1,34901|2,34977|1) - What are you mapping here? The 1/4s are still going yet this is 1/6?
  20. 00:35:054 (35054|2) - I'd stop this a beat earlier and make 00:35:741 (35741|1) a double.
  21. 00:36:313 - note?
  22. 00:37:115 (37115|0,38031|3) - I don't know what either of these two LNs are for.
  23. 00:39:405 (39405|3) - The sound this is mapped to is actually quite short imo, so perhaps just a normal note here.
  24. 00:43:069 (43069|2) - Make this 1/2 beat to make the following burst a little more comfortable.
  25. 00:43:374 (43374|1,43451|0,43527|1) - This is a 1/8 burst, not 1/6. Also, could this not be all in the same hand? It causes a little bit too much strain as it is.
  26. 00:45:244 - note?
  27. 00:49:710 (49710|0) - double for crash and to cap the burst?
  28. 01:01:390 (61390|2,61390|3,61390|1) - Having a triple here and only here feels a little odd to me, so consider reducing it to a double.
  29. 01:03:909 (63909|2,64138|2,64367|2,64596|2,64825|2,65054|2,65283|2,65512|2) - This is one long anchor...
  30. 01:11:924 (71924|3,72382|3) - A shield like this feels a little unfair for this difficulty, so I'd suggest moving the normal note to another column. (Moreso since there's another LN to think about in this hand)
  31. 01:22:000 - There's a 1/4 fill here that goes unmapped.
  32. 01:22:916 (82916|3,82916|2,82916|1) - Not really sure why these LNs finish at different times.
  33. 01:24:061 (84061|2,84061|0,84138|3,84138|1,84214|2,84214|0) - Make these all singles. Having a split jumptrill like this is a sudden and uncomfortable difficulty spike that I think is unnecessary.
  34. 01:24:290 (84290|3,84290|1) - Have these as 1/1 in length instead of 3/4.
  35. 01:35:168 (95168|1) - ghost


Since this is an anime thing, I'm likely going to be repeating myself over the 2nd verse and kiai, so I'll jump a bit towards the end.

  1. 02:46:275 - You're definitely going to need a note here to cap the LN, particularly considering what's next.
  2. 02:46:390 (166390|3,166390|0,166504|2,166504|1,166619|3,166619|0,166733|2,166733|1,166848|0,166848|3,166962|1,166962|2,167077|3,167077|0,167191|2,167191|1) - There's some unnecessary doubles and LNs in here. Try something like this instead.
  3. 03:01:161 (181161|1,181390|0,181390|3) - Might be a little awkward for players to time this correctly.
  4. 03:22:229 (202229|2,202344|2,202573|0,202687|0,202802|3,202916|3) - The layering is fine, but I think adding minijacks in as well might be a little too much.
  5. 03:23:718 (203718|2) - Patterning-wise, this should probably be an LN as well.
  6. 03:47:191 (227191|1) - move to col 0 (you don't use this for a little bit so you should probably put something there)
  7. 03:54:405 (234405|1) - What's this note mapped to?
  8. 03:55:550 (235550|1) - This note feels like it's more on the 1/3 than 1/4.

Hope this helps and best of luck! :)
Milar001
Hi, from my queue

[General]
Image dimentions can't be bigger than 1366x768
Unused hitsounds



[Normal]
Most important comment is to not start sliders on red ticks
00:19:939 (4) - The beggining point isa not so important to start a slider there, rather you should put a circle on 00:20:168 -
00:20:397 - Put here a green line with increased vol.
00:24:061 - There's strong sound you omit
00:27:725 - ^
00:36:199 (4) - Nc
02:14:214 (3) - End on 02:15:130 -
02:21:542 (3) - End on 02:22:000 - and add a circle on 02:22:916 -
02:28:870 (3) - ^
03:43:985 (1) - From here it's too much objects without any break, too hard for normal

Hope it can be helpful, gl with mapset :)
jyu

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[General]
Image dimentions can't be bigger than 1366x768
Unused hitsounds



[Normal]
Most important comment is to not start sliders on red ticks
00:19:939 (4) - The beggining point isa not so important to start a slider there, rather you should put a circle on 00:20:168 - keep, fits the melody well
00:20:397 - Put here a green line with increased vol. alright why not, fix
00:24:061 - There's strong sound you omit i'm following the trumpet accompanying music, kinda
00:27:725 - ^ ^
00:36:199 (4) - Nc fix
02:14:214 (3) - End on 02:15:130 - following the vocal
02:21:542 (3) - End on 02:22:000 - and add a circle on 02:22:916 - also still following the vocal and changing this one will require me to redo all the patterns afterwards, will still reconsider tho
02:28:870 (3) - ^ ^
03:43:985 (1) - From here it's too much objects without any break, too hard for normal will fix this asap

Hope it can be helpful, gl with mapset :)
thank you for mods! :)
@Acnos is it ok to lower the star rating below 1.9
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 128718
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Platinum Jet
TitleUnicode:プラチナジェット
Artist:Donuts Quintet
ArtistUnicode:どーなつ◎くいんてっと
Creator:Acnos
Version:Normal
Source:SHIROBAKO
Tags:Juri Kimura 木村珠莉 Haruka Yoshimura 佳村はるか Haruka Chisuga 千菅春香 Asami Takano 髙野麻美 Hitomi Ohwada 大和田仁美 Halko Momoi 桃井はるこ Takeshi Watanabe 渡辺剛 シロバコ White Box Ending ED Anime Ne Lunar jyu AlpacaCokelat
BeatmapID:1150270
BeatmapSetID:542662

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2.5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG-Misa.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,84748,90637
2,160063,165751
2,189376,195064
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Topic Starter
Akunosu

Asherz007 wrote:

When life gives you lemons, don't panic like I do.

Mania NM request! :)

[General]
Check AIMod. A few errors across all diffs. I will check it

Difficulty names: If the diffs aren't yours (i.e. made by someone else), make that clear by having X's Normal (for example) as the difficulty name. Also, add their names to the tags. understood

Not too much of a complaint, but the hitsound importing is pretty meh and implies a hitsound copier was used. Be aware that the copier also copies sounds to the storyboard (accessed in mania by pressing tab), which can be disorientating in the lower diffs when you hear a hitsound where there's no note. good point, I'm going to correct it

A few timing points that don't really appear to do anything. I'm going to correct it too

Make sure misc. toggles are consistent across all diffs. Since there's going to be a storyboard, ensure that widescreen support is enabled and decide whether you need to display an epilepsy warning. I will make it, when I finished my SB :3

0|1|2|3 (I'll have a look at the HD diff for this)

(Side note: change NM to od7 hp7, because at the moment it's far too high)

OD:7.5 HP:7.5
I feel like there are too many LNs here. Might just be me, I don't know.

  1. 00:00:474 - I'm not particularly sure why NM appears to be denser than HD here. Perhaps it would be better to think about making the layering a little more consistent between these difficulties. I didn't realize that, and you're right NM is as dense as than HD, i'm going to change this part
  2. 00:00:474 (474|3,474|0,474|2) - Probably want to remove one of the notes here since having 3 looks a little odd intensity-wise. done
  3. 00:04:825 (4825|0,5283|3) - Not sure what these LNs are following. fixed, ehm... It does not follow to nothing D:, i didn't know
  4. 00:07:115 (7115|2,7191|1,7267|2,7344|3,7573|2,7649|1,7725|2,7802|1,7802|3) - This pattern feels like it's a little bit too much for cols 1 and 2. Maybe a little too much strain on the left hand as well, since there's also the LN to think about. Actually, after looking a little closer, 00:07:573 (7573|2,7649|1) - these are ghosts because the final burst is 1/4 from 00:07:687. fixed, I was realizing of what this part is very strain to left hand and I corrected it, like you said, and deleted the ghost notes
  5. 00:10:550 (10550|3) - What's this LN mapped to? for that synchronize with this sliders 00:08:718 (8718|3,12382|0) -
  6. 00:14:099 - Note? It's part of the 1/4 burst. right!, added and changed this pattern
  7. 00:15:130 - Double/Triple (whichever you intend on using) for crash done
  8. 00:17:878 (17878|2) - What's the LN for? same the other
  9. 00:18:565 - There's a 1/6 drum burst here if you wanted to. I don't hear a sound
  10. 00:18:794 (18794|3) - I'd suggest removing this LN since it cramps up the playfield a little too much. ok, it feels better now :3
  11. 00:19:939 (19939|1,20054|1) - There's not really any musical reason to me to have the two notes in the same column. right!, fixed
  12. 00:20:397 (20397|0,20397|1,20855|2,20855|1,21313|3,21313|2) - I reckon it would be better to have each of these being 1/2 beat in length. Try it out. you are right, fixed
  13. 00:26:122 (26122|3) - Consistency-wise, I think you're better removing this since the current pattern is singles for kicks (like 00:23:374 and 00:24:290) fixed
  14. 00:27:725 (27725|2) - Move into col 3 to prevent stack? moved
  15. 00:27:954 (27954|0) - Remove for consistency? removed
  16. 00:30:817 (30817|3) - I'd remove this as well. (Firstly, it's on just the vocals, but more importantly, it's inconsistent with earlier.) It is true, fixed
  17. 00:31:504 (31504|1) - ^ ^
  18. 00:33:222 - You'll want another note here. ok
  19. 00:34:596 (34596|2,34672|1,34748|0,34825|1,34901|2,34977|1) - What are you mapping here? The 1/4s are still going yet this is 1/6? this part is very difficulty, instead I put Lns shorts :3
  20. 00:35:054 (35054|2) - I'd stop this a beat earlier and make 00:35:741 (35741|1) a double. ok
  21. 00:36:313 - note? i don't hear a sound, besides i think it is very confuse
  22. 00:37:115 (37115|0,38031|3) - I don't know what either of these two LNs are for. fixed
  23. 00:39:405 (39405|3) - The sound this is mapped to is actually quite short imo, so perhaps just a normal note here. ok
  24. 00:43:069 (43069|2) - Make this 1/2 beat to make the following burst a little more comfortable. ok
  25. 00:43:374 (43374|1,43451|0,43527|1) - This is a 1/8 burst, not 1/6. Also, could this not be all in the same hand? It causes a little bit too much strain as it is. fixed, I changed a 3 notes 1/8 and it feels awesome :3
  26. 00:45:244 - note? i don't hear a sound, besides i think it is very confuse
  27. 00:49:710 (49710|0) - double for crash and to cap the burst? ok
  28. 01:01:390 (61390|2,61390|3,61390|1) - Having a triple here and only here feels a little odd to me, so consider reducing it to a double. fixed
  29. 01:03:909 (63909|2,64138|2,64367|2,64596|2,64825|2,65054|2,65283|2,65512|2) - This is one long anchor... fixed
  30. 01:11:924 (71924|3,72382|3) - A shield like this feels a little unfair for this difficulty, so I'd suggest moving the normal note to another column. (Moreso since there's another LN to think about in this hand) ok, i will remember this information :3
  31. 01:22:000 - There's a 1/4 fill here that goes unmapped. 1/4? I don't understand
  32. 01:22:916 (82916|3,82916|2,82916|1) - Not really sure why these LNs finish at different times. fixed
  33. 01:24:061 (84061|2,84061|0,84138|3,84138|1,84214|2,84214|0) - Make these all singles. Having a split jumptrill like this is a sudden and uncomfortable difficulty spike that I think is unnecessary. ok
  34. 01:24:290 (84290|3,84290|1) - Have these as 1/1 in length instead of 3/4. fixed
  35. 01:35:168 (95168|1) - ghost removed


Since this is an anime thing, I'm likely going to be repeating myself over the 2nd verse and kiai, so I'll jump a bit towards the end.

  1. 02:46:275 - You're definitely going to need a note here to cap the LN, particularly considering what's next. ok
  2. 02:46:390 (166390|3,166390|0,166504|2,166504|1,166619|3,166619|0,166733|2,166733|1,166848|0,166848|3,166962|1,166962|2,167077|3,167077|0,167191|2,167191|1) - There's some unnecessary doubles and LNs in here. Try something like this instead. excelente, changed pattern
  3. 03:01:161 (181161|1,181390|0,181390|3) - Might be a little awkward for players to time this correctly. fixed
  4. 03:22:229 (202229|2,202344|2,202573|0,202687|0,202802|3,202916|3) - The layering is fine, but I think adding minijacks in as well might be a little too much. good idea, fixed
  5. 03:23:718 (203718|2) - Patterning-wise, this should probably be an LN as well. done
  6. 03:47:191 (227191|1) - move to col 0 (you don't use this for a little bit so you should probably put something there) fixed
  7. 03:54:405 (234405|1) - What's this note mapped to? here didn't have sound u.u, fixed
  8. 03:55:550 (235550|1) - This note feels like it's more on the 1/3 than 1/4.

Hope this helps and best of luck! :)
Wow man, your mod has too helped me, thank you very much! :)
igorsprite
this song aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. kudosu ;)
Zxozmo
From my modding queue~

Ok so . . .

General

When i tried to test play it before i modded it (and even while i was modding it) there was a story board which is a black screen, that's it
I tried redownloading it but same thing happens, maybe problem on my side, if so ignore this

Normal

Usually im bad at modding lower diffs, so ill try my hand at it

00:10:550 (6) - move this to the red tick before it, or better yet 00:07:802 (1,2,3) - copy paste this part
00:14:672 (7,8,1,2) - two reverse sliders would do the job here, and can lower the diff
00:16:962 (5,6) - replace it with 00:07:802 (1,2,3) -?
01:22:916 (1) - try to lengthen this or replace with a slider, can give 2000 bonus if at 300+ rpm, but not all new players can do that
01:50:168 (1) - try to make this curve a little bit better?
02:01:390 (1,3) - try to curve this so that it'll look aesthetically pleasing?
02:48:565 (4) - no sound here?
02:47:191 (1,2,3) - copy this onto 02:49:023 (5,6,7) - ?
03:44:443 (2,3) - 03:46:275 (2,3) - etc... : turn them into sliders or repeating sliders to make them easier?

Also is that a girl? or a dude? im genuinely confused

Hard

00:21:313 (1,1) - put a spinner between them, the sound seems to fit it anyways
01:38:260 (3,1) - ^
01:41:008 (5) - make this the NC instead of 01:41:237 (1) - ?
01:41:008 (5,1) - also make this into a triple tap instead
01:49:252 (3) - turn thins into a slider so it fills the rhythm gap
03:16:504 (1,1,1,1,1) - try spreading them out a bit more rather that placing them on the same spots
03:19:023 (2) - turn into a slider
03:27:038 (6,7,1) - place 7 closer to make a triange (suggestion)
03:54:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make an interesting pattern rather than a complete curve (suggestion)
03:57:954 (1) - make this curvier

Im rather bad with mania so this is all i can do for now~
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