Lolinator2000 wrote:

Normal

00:00:840 move to x:96 y:80
00:01:889 move to x:204 y:192
00:12:135 slider is almost off-screen move it to x:300 y:56
00:18:485 move to x:160 y:200
00:19:194 circle is almost off-screen move it to x:100 y:48
00:20:602 move to x:272 y:220
00:34:367 circle is almost off-screen move it to x:208 y:64

this is from your mod queue
i cal only do normal ):

Bubblun wrote:

From the Black Vultures Modding Queue

Extra
00:04:192 (3) - I suggest ctrl+g on this slider so it's consistent with parts like 00:02:781 (2,3,4) - and 00:05:604 (3,4,5) -
00:08:428 (2) - I don't think this is very strong compared to, lets say 00:09:310 (1,2,3) - I suggest ctrl+g on 00:08:428 (2) -
00:15:487 (2) - I don't see any reason for the variation here, so I suggest a 1/2 slider. You already have the variation 00:20:604 (1,2) - here, so the first note mentioned should be a slider.
00:26:604 (2,3,4) - I don't think this note needs so much exaggeration with the triple, a simple 1/2 slider should be fine. The over map pattern doesn't even make much sense till 00:29:428 (2) - anyway, so I don't think it's needed.
01:00:134 (1,2,3) - While this is a strong beat, it's not very strong compared to beats like 00:58:722 (1) - I suggest making the first pattern go clockwise instead of counter.

Insane
00:41:781 (1,2,3) - I suggest flipping and re-arranging this pattern so it's clockwise. The strength of this note allows you to flip the directions, and compliment the song better. I changed the pattern
01:04:898 (2,3) - Delete 2 and copy flip 3 for symmetry? Copied

Hard
For how powerful the song is, the snaking movement doesn't really fit. I think it's a mistake because you didn't do this kinda in the Insane. 00:26:781 (5) - Notes like this could be brought up to create a sharper movement. I think this smooth flow is okay in hard difficulties
Overall, I think sharper patterns compliment the song better on this diff.^

Normal
00:21:134 (5) - I think this would look better as a straight slider, or as a slider curved the opposite of 2 to reflect it. 180° rotated from the 2 slider

Couldn't find anything for Easy. It looked a bit messy in my opinion, but that might just be me. Yea that might be true. The easy diff doesnt many breaks.

Good luck on the set. Thanks

• [Easy]

1. In general for the Easy diff the overlaps like this 00:25:545 (2,3) - 00:28:369 (6,7) - 00:31:192 (2,3) - 00:34:722 (7,1) - 00:50:957 (6,7) - 00:55:898 (3,4) - 01:03:663 (8,1) - are not a good idea...
2. Open AiMod
3. 00:00:840 (1) - This slider should be like this or like this for a better flow
4. 00:10:016 (3,4) - Bad flow, try to put the slider 4, like this
5. 00:17:781 (4) - It's not very similar as 00:14:957 (2,3) -.
6. 00:16:369 (3,1) - Bad overlap on the renverse.
7. 00:22:016 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket
8. 00:25:545 (2) - I suggest to make this slider straight (this is just my opinion because I think it's better)
9. 00:27:663 (5,6) - Can you aligned them properly, you can aligned the head of the slider 00:28:369 (6) - with this note 00:27:310 (4) -.
10. 00:31:192 (2) - I suggest to try this , if you want to follow the vocals
11. 00:38:957 (5) - This slider looks bad :/ you can try to make something like this
12. 00:40:369 (7) - Straight?
13. 00:46:016 (7) - I suggest to delete this note and put a slider until 00:47:075 - because you can't put a spinner and this is a strong and long vocal.
14. 00:48:839 (3,4,5) - Can you try to make this ? (The long slider is 3)
15. 00:50:251 (5,6) - I suggest to make them straight, for change a little (more fun)
16. 00:52:722 (8,2) - This overlap is weird :/
17. 00:57:839 (6) - NC?
18. 00:58:722 (1) - Remove NC?
19. 01:02:604 (6,7) - Can you aligned them like this ?

• [Sharkie's Extra]

1. 00:09:839 (3) - Can you make this slider straight for be consistent with 00:09:310 (1) - ?
2. 00:19:722 (2) - This is just my opinion but I suggest to put this slider like this for a better flow
3. 01:06:839 (6,7,8,9,1) - Can you make a better stream?

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi!
NM from my Queue ~ ( つ･`д･´)っ

• [Easy]

1. In general for the Easy diff the overlaps like this 00:25:545 (2,3) - 00:28:369 (6,7) - 00:31:192 (2,3) - 00:34:722 (7,1) - 00:50:957 (6,7) - 00:55:898 (3,4) - 01:03:663 (8,1) - are not a good idea... They are readable
2. Open AiMod
3. 00:00:840 (1) - This slider should be like this or like this for a better flow the flow is anti clockwise so no
4. 00:10:016 (3,4) - Bad flow, try to put the slider 4, like this changed
5. 00:17:781 (4) - It's not very similar as 00:14:957 (2,3) -. That not a problem
6. 00:16:369 (3,1) - Bad overlap on the renverse. changed fixed
7. 00:22:016 (3,4) - Imperfect blanket fixed
8. 00:25:545 (2) - I suggest to make this slider straight (this is just my opinion because I think it's better) nope
9. 00:27:663 (5,6) - Can you aligned them properly, you can aligned the head of the slider 00:28:369 (6) - with this note 00:27:310 (4) -. thats not a problem
10. 00:31:192 (2) - I suggest to try this , if you want to follow the vocals I didnt want to map to the vocals
11. 00:38:957 (5) - This slider looks bad :/ you can try to make something like this Changed slider
12. 00:40:369 (7) - Straight? Changed
13. 00:46:016 (7) - I suggest to delete this note and put a slider until 00:47:075 - because you can't put a spinner and this is a strong and long vocal. Nope
14. 00:48:839 (3,4,5) - Can you try to make this ? (The long slider is 3) It would destroy everything in the kiai so no
15. 00:50:251 (5,6) - I suggest to make them straight, for change a little (more fun)What do you mean more fun??
16. 00:52:722 (8,2) - This overlap is weird :/ Its not an overlap since you dont see them both on the same time
17. 00:57:839 (6) - NC? added
18. 00:58:722 (1) - Remove NC? nope
19. 01:02:604 (6,7) - Can you aligned them like this ?

changed for better flow

• [Sharkie's Extra]

1. 00:09:839 (3) - Can you make this slider straight for be consistent with 00:09:310 (1) - ?
2. 00:19:722 (2) - This is just my opinion but I suggest to put this slider like this for a better flow
3. 01:06:839 (6,7,8,9,1) - Can you make a better stream?

I mod more on the Easy because this is the first time I mod a Extra diff so don't be rude please...
That's all for me, good mapping!

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

1. https://puu.sh/tk7tz/87d8539da5.png
   "오프닝" means Opening.
   "작사" means Lyrics.
   "작곡" means Compose.
   "편곡" means Arrange and "노래" means singer.

Artist: 정현모
Romanised: Jeong Hyeonmo
Title(romanised): Runner's High
Source: 엘소드:엘의 여인
Recommanded Tags: 은토, 김달우, 별들의 전쟁, Nexon, Elsword, ASTERIA

beomsaN wrote:

woah, elsword! :D
ofc you didn't ask anything to me but metameta here.
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quote it when you need.

https://youtu.be/VGD_VKikfE4 op video

1. https://puu.sh/tk7tz/87d8539da5.png
   "오프닝" means Opening.
   "작사" means Lyrics.
   "작곡" means Compose.
   "편곡" means Arrange and "노래" means singer.

작사: 은토
작곡: 김달우
편곡: 별들의 전쟁
노래: 정현모

https://youtu.be/6dJ6-VSltvE official youtube for source

Artist: 정현모
Romanised: Jeong Hyeonmo
Title(romanised): Runner's High
Source: 엘소드:엘의 여인
Recommanded Tags: 은토, 김달우, 별들의 전쟁, Nexon, Elsword, ASTERIA 

I added the tags
ok good luck

Thank you very much for checking

nyu - wrote:

i see add i star.

better put him in the bg. :^)

-Unlimit- wrote:

mod :3

Sharkie's Extra

00:01:634 (1) - useless NC. i think NC on 00:01:545 (4) - is better

00:10:722 (1,2) - It's ok, but i think https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7241087 this is better because of the slider

00:48:487 (5,6,1) - distance isn't equal!

00:57:310 (1,2,3) - distance is too far! i think such large jump isn't needed.

00:59:957 (6) - location is weird

01:04:722 (2,3) - ,01:05:251 (5,6) - distance is too far!!

nice map! :O
sorry for short modding, but it hasn't so many problems in my opinion

in addition, the lyrics used as sb is wrong.
there is missing part in every lyrics
and there is a typo in the last lyric.
'내' means 'my', and '네' means 'your'.
'네' is correct!

i will post here the correct lyrics, i hope you fix it!

lyrics

벅찬 호흡과 힘에 겨운 하루하루가 오히려 날 살아있다 말하고 있어
그렇게 다 포기하라 다그쳤지만 내겐 아직 꿈이 있어
조금더 높이 날아오른다
한번더 간절한 바람으로
숨차게 달린다 걸음걸음마다 내일의 꿈을 꾼다
네 손을 잡는다 운명에 맞설 그날 처음처럼 이곳에서 나를 지켜봐줘

if you have a problem with the arranging lyrics, PM me in-game anytime or just send me a PM :3
i think there is still need fix with arranging the lyrics

I will change the SB things after you explain to me exactly. but thanks anyways

TwillghtSparkle wrote:

Hello , NM from my queue
Those are just opinions , feel free to deny anything

Based on testplays
Sharkie : 00:01:722 (3) - i would stack with 00:02:251 (1) -
00:04:722 (5) - weird placement , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7260382
00:09:310 (1) - same like this

Hard : 00:00:840 (1) - a little bit adjust blanket ok
00:02:251 (1) - ^ ok
00:54:487 (5) - this slider have strong beat on slider end , also vocal is starting there , so place 1/2 slider then circle not true. the slider end has a clap sound and a vocal at the end nothing more
00:55:016 (6,7) - i will ctrl +g them , because the slider will follow that ''MU'' vocal and circle the ''KO'' done
01:05:781 (1) - Nc , since sv is changeddone
01:09:839 (8,1) - put those in middle not needed

Insane :
00:03:487 (1) - remove nc nope. this is made the over the whole first KiAi time so I wont change
00:32:428 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7260614 maybew nah its good already
00:37:016 (3) - when i played felt very strange , since is a strong beat on slider end , 2 circles instead here the vocals are in the foreground and thats why I placed 2 sliders
00:39:839 (3) - same same
01:09:839 (4,1) - in the middle not needed

thanks for your mod

Agatsu wrote:

hi from (´・◡・｀)™

• [Insane]

1. 00:37:545 (1) - ctrl + h, it flows better and fits in Since its the beginning of a new section, I made the flow go different.
2. 00:46:898 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think a stream with six notes might be too hard for insane. why not put a 1/4 slider on 00:47:251 (7,8) - Its not too hard at all
3. 00:47:428 (1,2,3) - something like this looks better Changed a little bit
4. 01:09:839 (4,1) - separate these to emphasize to finish on (1) Changed

[list:1337][Hard]

1. 00:09:134 (5,6,7) - slider heads look messy. separate them? they aren't overlapping so its fine
2. 00:48:663 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
3. 00:51:487 (4,5,6) - ^ ^

nice map gl thanks

SLM wrote:

Tags 넥슨은토 -> 넥슨 은토
seperate them please Seperated

DilPil111 wrote:

NM from my queue (p/5803850#p5803850)

Easy

00:26:251 (3) - Don't make this slider overlapThis overlap repeats itself so its ok http://puu.sh/tYkz2/14706ed0dd.jpg http://puu.sh/tYkzW/212918d51b.jpg
00:31:898 (3) - ^

Normal

Rankable!

Hard

00:56:428 (2) - No overlap, it don't fit changed

Insane

00:31:545 (3,4,5,6,1) - This stream into the slider feels dodgy, make the slider follow the stream direction
http://puu.sh/tYkHn/55b3f9539d.jpgThe sliderwhistle changes the background sound so changing clockwise is good here

Search Party

Rankable!

MrMenda wrote:

Menda here from the OSU WOT modding queue.

Hard

-00:02:781 (2,3) - Curve them to the other side so it flows better
-00:12:134 (5,6) - Could use 5 as a blanket for 6
-00:13:545 (1) - 1/1 slider here
-00:14:957 (5) - ^
-00:16:369 (1) - ^
-00:19:192 (1) - ^
-00:20:604 (5) - ^
-00:22:016 (1) - ^
-00:50:251 (1) - use it as a blanket and curve it to the other side
-00:56:428 (2) - Curve it
-01:01:545 (1) - Use it as a blanket

In this difficulty I can’t find many mistakes, only thing is that you undermapped a section, but the rest is good

Insane

00:10:192 (4,5,6,7,8) - Map those as a triangle and not straight
Same problem with undermapping in this difficulty. If you want to keep its difficulty use faster sliders so you don't “gift” the jump that comes after it
-00:14:957 (1) - 1/1 slider
-00:16:369 (1) - ^
-00:18:663 (4) - Curve this one a bit more
-00:19:192 (1) - 1/1 slider
-00:20:604 (1) - ^
-00:22:016 (1) - ^
-00:39:487 (2,3) - Curve them to the other side
-00:52:722 (4,5,6) - I would move 6 down and to the right to avoid straight lines.
-01:00:310 (2) - Curve it to the other side
-01:05:781 (1) - Not bad, but to the other side might fit better
-01:08:075 (3,4,5) - Delete 4,5 and change 3 to a 1/2 back and forth slider.

Sharkie’s EL Search Party

-00:00:840 (1) - Curve it
-00:06:487 (1) - The curve to the other side
-00:14:075 (2) - Curve it
-00:23:957 (3) - This one would fit better curving it to the other side
-00:26:604 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Instead of using Triple-Tap-Tap-Triple-Tap, invert the order. Starting with the singletap and changing the triple tap so it starts in the red tick feels closer to the music. 2 as a single, 3,4,5 as a triple, 6 as a single, 7,8,9 as a single and 1 alone.
-00:34:192 (6) - move it further to the left.
-00:45:134 (3,4,5) - Curve 3 and 5
-00:47:428 (1) - curve it to the other side
-00:47:957 (3) - I’d make a curve downwards.
-00:49:369 (4) - ^
-00:49:898 (6,1) - Blanket
-01:03:487 (4) - Consider curving it.

Really good difficulty in terms of flow and good overall

Hope I helped! Good luck, I’d like to see this ranked!!

Abe Nana wrote:

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue M4M

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

unused file : sb\Thumbs.db this file doesnt even exist

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unused sb file : Jeong Hyun-mo - Runner's High (Azulae).osb Yea true changed!

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00:02:251 - ~ 00:13:545 - I don't think this song need kiai here. Everyone has different preferences

[Easy]

00:30:487 (1) - it is not good overlap seem to easy players. it is not so? its ok

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00:37:545 (3,4) - give me a little more space for this. they are too attached make a bad shape. This is kind of true but not fully. the flow is okay but the shape of second slider not. So I decided not to change this00:47:428 (1) - little spacing error lol 1.01 space isnt that different from 1.0000:57:839 (1) - i don't think this NC is necessary. true but another modder said I need to add because the distance is suddenly 6/8. Anyways I changed it

[Normal]

00:02:781 (2,3,4) - 00:03:663 - 00:04:192 - there's a stronger tempo here and it's hard to ignore. how about doing this? I used different sounds from background so the rhythm isnt the same as the other diffs and I did ignore the stronger notes thats true. maybe this needs a rework I dont know

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00:06:310 (4,5,6,7) - here too.

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00:10:192 (4) - I think you should pay more attention to the tempo here 00:10:369 - Yes true changed00:45:310 (3,4) - follow the vocal. this is better I didnt change to vocal. I changed the distance snap because it was wrong lol

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[Hard]

very very nice diff. you have great skill to make a hard difficult Thanks a lot

[Insane]

00:32:428 (2) - make more blanket or not and move to inward the slider's end Blanket was fine already

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00:42:310 (2) - it's a move too high. is not unrankable. is not playable thats true I changed it01:04:369 (1) - out of playground yea true but its not unrankable and unplayable!

[Sharkie's EL Search Party]

what does EL Search Party mean? You may need to prepare an explanation :3 El search party... This song is from an anime and there is a gang trying to defeat the evil. These people who fight against evilness have a 'party' called 'El Search Party'00:48:663 (6,1,2,3) - It's not important, but you need to think about balance.

this is playable. nice work

GL :3 Thanks a lot!