some stuffs
00:13:521 (1) - instead of tilting the slider, why don't just create a fake stack?
00:13:693 (2) - no whistle as no violin, use drum whistle if u wanna follow the roll
00:34:435 (1) - if the reason you did 1/8 here is because the wub then don't because then you need to follow it to 00:34:778 - which at that time you're following violin
00:36:835 (3) - ctrl+g would give a better impression of looping movement as that's what you did at 00:37:350 (2,3) - , there's no point to make it different movement
01:06:664 (1) - Following the previous pattern 01:05:978 (1,2,1,2) - , this should have ctrl+g
01:02:893 (1,2) - following the fm, it should start at 01:02:807 instead. Also, I thought you said symmetry and stuff so 2 is better at
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10184955 (if you persist on keeping it at least blanket 01:02:550 (1) - 's head properly
00:41:293 (1,2) - you don't use 1/8 hold nor 1/4 spam?
01:51:235 (1,2) - funny how you feel concerned about the kick here when you don't during the rest of this part, resulting this two sliders the only different thing among 01:48:493 (1) - 01:49:864 (1) - 01:52:607 (1) - 01:53:978 (1) -
01:57:064 (1) - optional but since you did kiai burst here and there, giving one here won't hurt.
please don't bash me I have 26 children
add: 00:30:493 (2) - fix stack w