davidminh0111 wrote:

Hola, from my queue: "hola" '^'
A bit late sorry:

[Kantan]

1. 00:20:161 and 00:13:845 - A bit weird about the pattern. In 00:20:161 you started the strong melody with 3 notes consecutive. But in 00:13:845 You started with only 1 note. I think they should be identical because they have the same melody. Consider a remap here. yeah
2. 00:46:016 - Move this note to 00:46:213 because it would make players confusing and it doesn't stick to the melody either. Do it occasionally but not too much. used
3. 00:49:963: Move to 00:50:161 - Like I was mentioned above ^
4. 00:51:740 to 01:02:792 - As you can see, you have made this part is boring, you have used too much 2/1 spaces, make some variations, you didn't make variations at the right point. ok
5. 01:04:371: Same as above ^
   
   [Futsuu]
   
   1. 00:26:477: You could increase the density more here. It's just a bit different. but the density here is different in all diffs
   [Muzukashii]
   
   [Oni]
   

Mod later soon because fuk my battery it's okay xd. thanks for mod :3

davidminh0111 wrote:

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:43:845 - I think this is a remapped pattern, followed by the RC, it should not be longer than 5 notes when you are using 1/4 space in Muzukashii,
   You could remove these notes (e.g - 00:44:437 and 00:45:227 used
2. 00:49:569 - Move this note to 00:50:161 and then remove this 00:50:358 I think it's better imo because the currently pattern isn't follow the vocal. no, if i change here i will need to change here 01:02:398 (193,194,195,196,197) - too
3. 01:02:990 - Same as 00:43:845 ?

[Oni]

1. 00:39:010 - Imo you should add this note here because I heard the drum sound. It's still rankable when you but a 1/4 note next to the Finish notes. meh, sounds weird
2. 01:15:917 - Same as above i don't want long 1/4 streams

(´・ω・｀) (´・ω・｀)

[R] wrote:

gratz

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello Igor, I have some concerns about the tags in the metadata.

davidminh0111 wrote:

>Metadata is from alacat but since alacat's map tag have iyasine but your map has iyasine either. Iyasine is the GD name of someone else.

davidminh0111 wrote:

> I don't know that Lopkyy Produções created this music but it seems that I can't find it. But in my opinion, this song's genre is J-Pop and I don't think that company is Japanese.

davidminh0111 wrote:

Conclusion: Imo I don't know if this one needs for disqualification but it seems like the metadata is wrong.

maybe , in my view is all okay now, but feel free to try dq my map

Igor Sprite wrote:

mappers put some "random" things in tags like rsi in this map, but yeah it's related indirectly, some players have rsi playing this map and if don't the metadata is wrong(?). iyasine helped alacat to rank your mapset and now is helping me indirectly since i got bpm, offset, bg, audio, artist and title why not all the tags?

Igor Sprite wrote:

oh, here is lopkyy and he helps me a lot. it's only lopkyy produções as your request >///<

Wafu wrote:

I think this needs to be disqualified for putting irrelevant people into metadata (and it seems like without consent).

"irrelevant people" uh, you really don't choose your words right?. fixed artist and bye iyasine. i will keep the lopkyy , he is relevant to me and my mapset

Kisses wrote:

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Igor Sprite wrote:

iyasine helped alacat to rank your mapset and now is helping me indirectly since i got bpm, offset, bg, audio, artist and title why not all the tags?

Kisses wrote:

but a way to help search for mappers that were involved in said mapsets (at least I'm 98% sure lol)

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Disqualified so you can remove any irrelevant tags. Wafu also pointed out issues regarding general metadata so you need to address them as well.

Igor Sprite wrote:

Wafu wrote:

I think this needs to be disqualified for putting irrelevant people into metadata (and it seems like without consent).

"irrelevant people" uh, you really don't choose your words right?. fixed artist and bye iyasine. i will keep the lopkyy , he is relevant to me and my mapset

Igor Sprite wrote:

Kisses wrote:

but a way to help search for mappers that were involved in said mapsets (at least I'm 98% sure lol)

this solve the problem with lopkyy in tags

davidminh0111 wrote:

See? >√<.
1st time disqualifing a map

Igor Sprite wrote:

davidminh0111 wrote:

See? >√<.
1st time disqualifing a map

D:

i will not remove lopkyy from tags. that is all

Kisses wrote:

well you won't be able to get it re-qualified then I'm afraid

Igor Sprite wrote:

Kisses wrote:

but a way to help search for mappers that were involved in said mapsets (at least I'm 98% sure lol)

this solve the problem with lopkyy in tags

Wafu wrote:

What problem does it solve? Giving you a general advice (essentially a mod) doesn't mean what Kisses said.

Igor Sprite wrote:

as kisses said tags is for help search and if you write lopkyy, you will find 5 maps that lopkyy helped me and writing igor sprite you will find many others without lopkyy in tags

Kisses wrote:

3) were part of a collab

Igor Sprite wrote:

i don't know if is required put collab when a mapper that helped you making a diff does not want
if yes, please show me and i will remove lopkyy from tags

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.

Wafu wrote:

Igor Sprite wrote:

i don't know if is required put collab when a mapper that helped you making a diff does not want
if yes, please show me and i will remove lopkyy from tags

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The information of multiple mapset contributors must be provided in the mapset, if there is any guest mapper. This might be in the creator's words, via a storyboard or via naming the guest difficulties appropriately. You only need to provide information of guest mapper and corresponding guest part. Guest mappers must be added to the tags of a mapset. This helps others to know if the map uploader is the main contributor of the mapset and who else contributed to the given mapset.

i will give his correct credit just wait
Also, gave the map a quick glance. Looks relatively okay, could use some improvement, but the only thing I really want to mention is 01:35:950 (308) - in Muzukashii not having a finish here. It's inconsistent with the exact same part, and with other difficulties. fixed

Additionally, the background image doesn't seem related to the song or band in any way. The standards are changing, you can't just copy everything from the older map and hope it's correct. It would be nice if you would find some Silent Siren related image instead. The mp3 could be better too, I don't understand why to go for the lowest quality allowed (if you want help with that without having to change the offset, PM me on forums let's map a eletronic song, ANIME GIRL.jpg. see this map she ins't waking up D: .oh another "nonsense" BG

Wafu wrote:

Additionally, the background image doesn't seem related to the song or band in any way. The standards are changing, you can't just copy everything from the older map and hope it's correct. It would be nice if you would find some Silent Siren related image instead. The mp3 could be better too, I don't understand why to go for the lowest quality allowed (if you want help with that without having to change the offset, PM me on forums)

Igor Sprite wrote:

let's map a eletronic song, ANIME GIRL.jpg. see this map she ins't waking up D: .oh another "nonsense" BG

Surono wrote:

wow its time to stop put memes in the serious thing such ranking map, its for offical content for this game right ? lol

1 thing for oni, 01:42:661 - change this sv to 0.90x to avoid 01:42:266 - this note 01:42:661 - blocked in the right screen, yeah just to make it neat the slowdown of sv alteration. yeah just minor

I dont find something wrong with BG, it fits well with the atmosphere of the song and yeah the song just tell about love and https://puu.sh/yO8Bz/409b90208a.png from the mapper told me, well

Sinnoh wrote:

bg is fine, tags are not

Sinnoh wrote:

bg is fine, tags are not