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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 3 de janeiro de 2018 at 13:33:12

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: LOVE no Shirushi
Tags: サイレントサイレン yoshida sumire umemura hinako yamauchi aina kurosaka yukako loveshiru
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3126kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2,29 stars, 292 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,53 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3 stars, 389 notes)
  4. Oni (3,48 stars, 579 notes)


Download: Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi
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before spam lopkyy... thanks surono, gabe, [R], Igor Sprite, lopkyy, Fantazy, JarvisGaming, Poii, Ataraxia, Mir, Axer, Ulqui, Kbludoh, Karee Pan, sing216, Idealism, Tyistiana, davidminh0111 >.>, this guy, Nardo-something, naotoshi, net0 and kisses, kisses and net0, irreversible, taikocracy, okoratu, sinnoh you no `-´, -Sh1n1-, Kurai, Lanturn. everyone here made this possible, thanks again. bye o/
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posted
yo

[General]
- 01:15:424 - slider should end at 01:16:608 -

[Kantan]
00:02:003 - | 00:03:582 - | 00:05:161 - maybe delete this note, to make different at 00:07:529 - (as the melody feels more intense here)
00:07:135 - add note, to give 1/1 pattern
00:40:095 - move 00:40:292 - to follow the vocal, like 00:41:871 -

[Futsuu]
00:01:608 - | 00:03:187 - | 00:04:766 - can delete, same reason with kantan
00:06:937 - | 00:07:332 - delete, to keep sphread between kantan
00:50:556 - change don, to emphasize 00:50:950 -
01:26:082 - add note, to fill the vocal sound
01:27:069 - maybe move 01:27:463 -
01:39:306 - move 01:39:898 - the 3/4 break feels sudden

[Muzukashii]
00:12:266 - delete, sound stops here
00:32:398 - change kat
01:18:582 - delete, its too long as muzukashii
01:21:740 - ^

that's all from me
good luck
posted

[R] wrote:

yo

[General]
- 01:15:424 - slider should end at 01:16:608 - ok

[Kantan]
00:02:003 - | 00:03:582 - | 00:05:161 - maybe delete this note, to make different at 00:07:529 - (as the melody feels more intense here) ok
00:07:135 - add note, to give 1/1 pattern nice
00:40:095 - move 00:40:292 - to follow the vocal, like 00:41:871 - ok

[Futsuu]
00:01:608 - | 00:03:187 - | 00:04:766 - can delete, same reason with kantan ok
00:06:937 - | 00:07:332 - delete, to keep sphread between kantan ok
00:50:556 - change don, to emphasize 00:50:950 - ok
01:26:082 - add note, to fill the vocal sound no, i'm giving emphasis to 01:26:279 (28,29) -
01:27:069 - maybe move 01:27:463 - no
01:39:306 - move 01:39:898 - the 3/4 break feels sudden ok

[Muzukashii]
00:12:266 - delete, sound stops here ok
00:32:398 - change kat no
01:18:582 - delete, its too long as muzukashii ok
01:21:740 - ^ ^

that's all from me
good luck thanks :)
posted
From queue
3 Hard diffs is unrankable(I think), pls nerf futsuu
[Kantan]
00:32:398 (39) - k to make it consistent
00:57:266 (71) - d because no pitch change or any distinct sounds
01:18:582 (3) - k because this note is higher than before (so you should probably do dkd)
[Futsuu]
At the beginning, why are you starting of so strong? You should slowly increase the difficulty as the music gets more intense. It makes the next part easier than the calm part.
00:34:371 (77) - k because higher pitch
00:59:832 (144) - k because higher vocal pitch
01:09:306 (172,173) - place a note before this, there are clearly sounds
01:18:187 (5,6,7,8) - should be dk kd to fit the vocals better
01:21:740 (17) - k, same pitch as first note(of this triple)
01:31:213 (42) - k to fit vocal
01:33:977 (51) - why the sudden gap after this? there are vocals
[Muzu]
00:32:398 (134) - k to fit the music
00:42:661 (172,173) - you're doing the breaks wrong:
01:28:450 (59) - add a d after this
01:34:963 - same, i recommend this:
01:52:727 (164,165) - doesn't fit the music, suggest to add a k behing all of these, but if you wanna keep it, move it 1/4 of a beat forward to make it sound better
[Oni]
00:07:529 (23) - Somehow this part is even more intense than the next part?
00:58:450 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - i think this would sound better if its kdkddkdkdkddkkk
01:30:819 (442,443) - dk because pitch

Gl :3
posted
General
for metadata
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122444

turn off your countdown at muzu
Oni
00:26:279 (135,136,137) - why not kkd ? i hear snare at 00:26:279 - also is it oky if you have finisher at 1/4 ?

01:15:424 - wat ? i just hear snare sound, why you use dkdkdkdkdk :3 how about dddkkkkkk ?
Muzu
00:14:832 - why not d ? it have differ pitch :3 , apply in reapeated part

00:41:871 - snare :3
00:46:608 - same ^ also its fit with vocal
00:48:977 - ^
:3 i dunno why you use d for snare sound, but in beginning part, you use k

the combination both drum and vocal seem not good enough for me :3 also, why you have 2 kai ? thelast part is same like in beginning
Futsuu
:3 maybe SV change in futsuu lil bit too hard, it confusing some new player, and its cause miss or even fail becareful with that

better than muzu, you have consistency here, and variety, cool
posted

JarvisGaming YT wrote:

From queue
3 Hard diffs is unrankable(I think), pls nerf futsuu i will
[Kantan]
00:32:398 (39) - k to make it consistente i'm following the pattern kd d dd d kd
00:57:266 (71) - d because no pitch change or any distinct sounds ok
01:18:582 (3) - k because this note is higher than before (so you should probably do dkd) ok
[Futsuu]
At the beginning, why are you starting of so strong? You should slowly increase the difficulty as the music gets more intense. It makes the next part easier than the calm part. fixed
00:34:371 (77) - k because higher pitch no
00:59:832 (144) - k because higher vocal pitch ok
01:09:306 (172,173) - place a note before this, there are clearly sounds used
01:18:187 (5,6,7,8) - should be dk kd to fit the vocals better ok
01:21:740 (17) - k, same pitch as first note(of this triple) ok
01:31:213 (42) - k to fit vocal no
01:33:977 (51) - why the sudden gap after this? there are vocals fixed
[Muzu]
00:32:398 (134) - k to fit the music ok
00:42:661 (172,173) - you're doing the breaks wrong:
01:28:450 (59) - add a d after this ok
01:34:963 - same, i recommend this:
01:52:727 (164,165) - doesn't fit the music, suggest to add a k behing all of these, but if you wanna keep it, move it 1/4 of a beat forward to make it sound better ok, i used the 1/4
[Oni]
00:07:529 (23) - Somehow this part is even more intense than the next part? ?
00:58:450 (270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - i think this would sound better if its kdkddkdkdkddkkk ok
01:30:819 (442,443) - dk because pitch no

Gl :3 thx
posted

Poii wrote:

General
for metadata ok
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/122444

turn off your countdown at muzu ok
Oni
00:26:279 (135,136,137) - why not kkd ? i hear snare at 00:26:279 - also is it oky if you have finisher at 1/4 ? yeah, kkd

01:15:424 - wat ? i just hear snare sound, why you use dkdkdkdkdk :3 how about dddkkkkkk ? i like the kdkdkdkdkd
Muzu
00:14:832 - why not d ? it have differ pitch :3 , apply in reapeated part yes

00:41:871 - snare :3 ok
00:46:608 - same ^ also its fit with vocal ^
00:48:977 - ^ ^
:3 i dunno why you use d for snare sound, but in beginning part, you use k

the combination both drum and vocal seem not good enough for me :3 also, why you have 2 kai ? thelast part is same like in beginning because this is the end(?)
Futsuu
:3 maybe SV change in futsuu lil bit too hard, it confusing some new player, and its cause miss or even fail becareful with that

better than muzu, you have consistency here, and variety, cool
posted
the greatest mod in discord with some people because i made in a public chat and i don't care

Mod
[11:54] Ataraxia: Easy
[11:54] Ataraxia: 00:32:398 (39) - Deixa whistle
[11:54] Ataraxia: igual voce fez aqui 00:35:556 (42,43) -
[11:56] Ataraxia: @Igor Sprite
[11:56] Igor Sprite: to aqui
[11:56] Igor Sprite: to ligando o pc
[11:58] Ataraxia: NORMAL: 01:21:345 (15,16,17) - Delete o (17) , ai o (15) tu deixa como normal e o (16) como whistle(editado)
[11:58] Ataraxia: o vocal so da 2 batida ai
[11:59] Igor Sprite: nn fala whistle, fala k
[11:59] Igor Sprite: e normal fala d
[12:00] TheGame9583: o que é whistle e silent siren?
[12:00] Igor Sprite: silent siren é o nome da banda do meu mapa
[12:01] Igor Sprite: e whistle é a nota azul no taiko
[12:01] TheGame9583: hmm
[12:01] Ataraxia: beleza
[12:01] Ataraxia: K e D
[12:01] Ataraxia: K e azul
[12:01] Ataraxia: e o D é vermelho né
[12:01] Ataraxia: pelamor Taiko é mta putaria OSADFJOISAOJIFDASJOIDF
[12:01] Igor Sprite: ss
[12:02] Ataraxia: okay then
[12:02] -Miyashiro-: sei nada de taiko
[12:02] Igor Sprite: mas k e K são coisas diferentes
[12:02] Ataraxia: Puta que o pariu explica pra min
[12:02] Ataraxia: ah pera
[12:02] Ataraxia: k é vermelho fraco
[12:02] Ataraxia: e K
[12:02] Ataraxia: com finish ne
[12:02] Igor Sprite: nn k é azul pequeno e K o grande
[12:03] Ataraxia: ah sim
[12:03] Ataraxia: beleza
[12:03] Ataraxia: continuano
[12:03] Igor Sprite: vai falando ai
[12:03] Ataraxia: HARD: nada pra fala
[12:04] Igor Sprite: o futsuu nn precisa moddat
[12:04] Igor Sprite: pq eu vou nerfar ele ainda
[12:05] Ataraxia: nem o Insane
[12:05] Ataraxia: vou postar la no forum
posted
Hello, from my queue!

Oni
  1. 00:07:036 (20) - Recommend to move this to 00:06:937 - because there's no note where it is and the note on 00:06:937 - is usually mapped out.
  2. 00:08:516 (29,39) - I think changing notes like this to k would fit how you've been following the melody so far.
  3. 00:53:911 (249,250) - I think you could swap this to better follow where the vocal is emphasized. // 00:55:885 (258,259) - same for 00:56:477 -
  4. 01:05:161 (301,302,303,304) - Not a fan of how this ignores the emphasis on 01:05:556 - . You have two options that I can see. Change 01:05:358 (302) - to k or delete it entirely. This actually happens in quite a few places like 01:08:911 (319,320,321,322) - etc.
  5. 01:06:542 (308,309,310) - Really feel kdk would fit much better pitch wise here.


Muzu
  1. 01:09:503 (289) - Would move to 01:09:108 - instead since there's nothing on where you put it but it seems like you want a break somewhere. Would be most appropriate to plop a break where there is no sound.
  2. 01:15:424 (1) - Hmm why not slider? Like 00:50:950 (213) - ?
  3. 01:35:556 - Would put a note here and delete 01:36:148 (94) - instead for a break moment?


I think the lower diffs look mostly fine. A bit busy so I'll skip those. Good luck!
posted

Mir wrote:

Hello, from my queue!

Oni
  1. 00:07:036 (20) - Recommend to move this to 00:06:937 - because there's no note where it is and the note on 00:06:937 - is usually mapped out. i like how the session starts with this dk and probably no one who play the map will be affected in gameplay because of that. maybe i change in future
  2. 00:08:516 (29,39) - I think changing notes like this to k would fit how you've been following the melody so far. i'm following the drums here
  3. 00:53:911 (249,250) - I think you could swap this to better follow where the vocal is emphasized. // 00:55:885 (258,259) - same for 00:56:477 - ok
  4. 01:05:161 (301,302,303,304) - Not a fan of how this ignores the emphasis on 01:05:556 - . You have two options that I can see. Change 01:05:358 (302) - to k or delete it entirely. This actually happens in quite a few places like 01:08:911 (319,320,321,322) - etc. very useful, thanks :D
  5. 01:06:542 (308,309,310) - Really feel kdk would fit much better pitch wise here. ok


Muzu
  1. 01:09:503 (289) - Would move to 01:09:108 - instead since there's nothing on where you put it but it seems like you want a break somewhere. Would be most appropriate to plop a break where there is no sound. yes it does, but i liked how fit with others parts like 01:11:082 (296,297,298,299,300,301) -
  2. 01:15:424 (1) - Hmm why not slider? Like 00:50:950 (213) - ? wtf this spinner xD
  3. 01:35:556 - Would put a note here and delete 01:36:148 (94) - instead for a break moment? no, sounds bad


I think the lower diffs look mostly fine. A bit busy so I'll skip those. Good luck! thanks ><
posted
irc
21:50 Igor Sprite: axer
22:00 Axer: yes?
22:01 Axer: how can I help you
22:04 Axer: hellos (?
22:07 Axer: ;;
22:08 Igor Sprite: sorry ;-;
22:09 Axer: u want to snipe me in trickl4sh owo?
22:09 Igor Sprite: can you mod my map?
22:09 Axer: ooooooooooooooooooooOO
22:09 Axer: what map
22:09 *Igor Sprite is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi]
22:10 Axer: I'll do it uwu
22:10 Igor Sprite: thanks *-*
22:11 Axer: in post or here
22:11 Igor Sprite: here
22:11 Axer: alright, gimme a min
22:12 Igor Sprite: okay :3
22:17 Axer: aight
22:17 *Axer is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi [Oni]]
22:18 Igor Sprite: love no shirushi
22:20 Igor Sprite: pu pupu purupu pupu pu
22:20 *Axer is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1148886 Silent Siren - LOVE no Shirushi [Oni]]
22:20 Axer: asdasdas
22:20 Axer: 00:07:529 (23) - make this finisher
22:22 Igor Sprite: okay
22:23 Axer: It's p decent
22:23 Axer: 01:57:266 (596,597) - make this kdk uwu
22:25 Axer: and that's about it for the oni
22:26 Igor Sprite: no D:
22:26 Axer: o
22:27 Axer: 00:12:069 (50) - this finisher
22:27 Axer: 00:39:108 (153) - finisher
22:28 Igor Sprite: ok
22:30 Axer: 01:57:661 (188,189) - there are no noises here.
22:31 Axer: or are just too low to pick up
22:31 Axer: not worth mapping those
22:31 Igor Sprite: yeah
22:31 Igor Sprite: i deleted
22:32 Axer: usually futsuu and kantan are the ones that need least mods
22:32 Axer: you can make a 4* inner oni with this song too
22:33 Igor Sprite: no, i hate inner oni `-´
22:33 Axer: ooo :<
22:33 Axer: why
22:33 Axer: 01:28:845 (34) - this is snapped incorrectly
22:34 Axer: 01:29:635 - it should end here
22:34 Igor Sprite: ok
22:35 Axer: now kantan
22:35 Axer: 00:12:463 (13) - this is not snapped correctly
22:37 Igor Sprite: wtf these sliders
22:37 Axer: 01:43:845 (42) - not snapped correctly
22:38 Axer: and that's about it
22:38 Igor Sprite: thanks <3


very smol and cute song >< good luck with rank
posted
hi, from queue

[General]

Slider Velocity should be 1.40 on all diffs :thinking:
^fix sv


[Oni]

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - I think those notes sound potentially like k
00:07:036 - move to 00:06:937 - -----> cuz 00:07:036 - here is no sound :thinking:
00:09:306 (34,35,36) - change to dkd, for a more varied pattern
00:12:266 - delete cuz i hear no sound, also the sv change is better understood
00:14:536 - 00:17:694 - change those to d, it will be less repetitive (dk dk dk dk dk dk dk dk----> dd dk dk dk dd dk dk dk)
00:19:569 - i hear no sound here, i'll suggest move that note to 00:19:273 - and change to d. There's no sound too but it seems good imo.
00:20:852 - 00:24:010 - change to d same reason that i mentioned (variation)
00:25:983 - delete cuz no particular sound...
00:25:292 - k 00:25:490 - d cuz synth sounds like that...
00:26:378 - delete cuz kkD is pretty weird ;-; OR 00:26:477 - remove finisher, so it'll be kkd
00:51:641 - delete, then 00:51:740 - D
01:14:240 - 01:15:029 - 01:15:227 - delete so you can make emphasis on 01:14:635 - this sound, sv and stream will be better understood
01:15:424 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - kdddkdddkddk?
01:17:003 - D?
Hmmm...
01:17:200 -
01:20:358 -
01:23:615 -
01:29:832 -
^ patterns would look better if you remove those
01:20:950 - d? consistence with 01:17:792 -
01:21:740 - ^
01:22:529 - i hear k sound like 01:22:727 -
01:25:984 - delete? so i can prepare for 01:26:280 (407,408,409) - that kdK DDDx
01:29:536 - delete to avoid dkkdkkddK? --> dkkdkkd K 8)
01:31:213 - no sound owo, delete (unless you're following hihat) but map flows well without that note...
01:36:246 - delete? cuz relax after kdK ;-;
01:23:121 (383,384,385) - this is kkd but 01:35:753 (455,456,457) - this is kdK, for consistence, both should be the same pattern...
01:38:713 (474,475) - ctrl+g on those, like 01:26:082 (403,404) - THIS
01:42:167 - delete cuz no sound
01:44:635 (503,504,505,506,507) - i think ddddk is better, to emphatize 01:45:029 - this
01:47:595 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528) - try with another pattern, for variation... like ddkdkdk or whatever
01:49:174 (533,534,535,536,537,538,539) - ^
01:51:246 - delete, reason mentioned...
01:52:431 - d, for variation(?

[Muzukashii]

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - change to k, mentioned in oni diff
00:06:740 - delete? to make it easier than oni
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened with the finishers on that part? if you want to make better spread, make shorter patterns like cutting 00:52:727 - this and 00:54:503 - this
01:15:424 - end slider 01:16:510 - here

i recommend you to nerf this diff a little, it's pretty hard compared to futsuu
^try to make shorter patterns and delete unnecesary 1/4 triplets.

[Futsuu]

00:13:056 - end slider 00:13:450 - here
01:23:319 - why not K?
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened to finishers?

pretty cool diff

[Kantan]

00:13:845 - finisher, loud sound
00:20:161 - ^ (but this isn't necessary at all)
00:26:477 - finisher.
00:32:792 - i think finisher is not necessary here
00:35:950 - ^
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - finishers?
01:17:003 - finisher
01:29:635 - ^
01:26:279 - move 01:26:477 - here, so baby players will not get confused @-@ (also finisher if you want)
01:35:950 - K, for consistence with 01:23:319 -
01:39:108 - finisher?????
01:42:266 - finisher sound


GL
posted

Ulqui wrote:

hi, from queue

[General]

Slider Velocity should be 1.40 on all diffs :thinking: nice bug
^fix sv


[Oni]

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - I think those notes sound potentially like k no
00:07:036 - move to 00:06:937 - -----> cuz 00:07:036 - here is no sound :thinking: ok
00:09:306 (34,35,36) - change to dkd, for a more varied pattern no, i like the ddd
00:12:266 - delete cuz i hear no sound, also the sv change is better understood but has a sound
00:14:536 - 00:17:694 - change those to d, it will be less repetitive (dk dk dk dk dk dk dk dk----> dd dk dk dk dd dk dk dk) used
00:19:569 - i hear no sound here, i'll suggest move that note to 00:19:273 - and change to d. There's no sound too but it seems good imo. i prefer with k and this note does not affect the gameplay
00:20:852 - 00:24:010 - change to d same reason that i mentioned (variation) ?
00:25:983 - delete cuz no particular sound... ok
00:25:292 - k 00:25:490 - d cuz synth sounds like that... no
00:26:378 - delete cuz kkD is pretty weird ;-; OR 00:26:477 - remove finisher, so it'll be kkd does not have any note after the kkD, you can do it, just try xd
00:51:641 - delete, then 00:51:740 - D ok
01:14:240 - 01:15:029 - 01:15:227 - delete so you can make emphasis on 01:14:635 - this sound, sv and stream will be better understood no
01:15:424 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351) - kdddkdddkddk? no
01:17:003 - D? no
Hmmm...
01:17:200 - ok
01:20:358 - ok
01:23:615 - no
01:29:832 - ok
^ patterns would look better if you remove those
01:20:950 - d? consistence with 01:17:792 - ok
01:21:740 - ^ no
01:22:529 - i hear k sound like 01:22:727 - ok
01:25:984 - delete? so i can prepare for 01:26:280 (407,408,409) - that kdK DDDx no
01:29:536 - delete to avoid dkkdkkddK? --> dkkdkkd K 8) why? D:
01:31:213 - no sound owo, delete (unless you're following hihat) but map flows well without that note... no
01:36:246 - delete? cuz relax after kdK ;-; die no :/
01:23:121 (383,384,385) - this is kkd but 01:35:753 (455,456,457) - this is kdK, for consistence, both should be the same pattern... ok
01:38:713 (474,475) - ctrl+g on those, like 01:26:082 (403,404) - THIS OK
01:42:167 - delete cuz no sound delete cuz i hate ddK no xd
01:44:635 (503,504,505,506,507) - i think ddddk is better, to emphatize 01:45:029 - this ok
01:47:595 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528) - try with another pattern, for variation... like ddkdkdk or whatever no
01:49:174 (533,534,535,536,537,538,539) - ^ ^
01:51:246 - delete, reason mentioned... ok
01:52:431 - d, for variation(? no

[Muzukashii]

00:02:200 - 00:03:779 - 00:05:358 - change to k, mentioned in oni diff no
00:06:740 - delete? to make it easier than oni ok
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened with the finishers on that part? if you want to make better spread, make shorter patterns like cutting 00:52:727 - this and 00:54:503 - this ok
01:15:424 - end slider 01:16:510 - here ok

i recommend you to nerf this diff a little, it's pretty hard compared to futsuu
^try to make shorter patterns and delete unnecesary 1/4 triplets.

[Futsuu]

00:13:056 - end slider 00:13:450 - here ok
01:23:319 - why not K? ok
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - what happened to finishers? ok

pretty cool diff >///<

[Kantan]

00:13:845 - finisher, loud sound ok
00:20:161 - ^ (but this isn't necessary at all) ^
00:26:477 - finisher. ok
00:32:792 - i think finisher is not necessary here
00:35:950 - ^
00:54:898 - 00:58:056 - 01:01:213 - 01:04:371 - 01:07:529 - 01:10:687 - 01:12:069 - 01:13:845 - finishers? yes
01:17:003 - finisher ok
01:29:635 - ^ ^
01:26:279 - move 01:26:477 - here, so baby players will not get confused @-@ (also finisher if you want) "baby players" :3
01:35:950 - K, for consistence with 01:23:319 - ok
01:39:108 - finisher????? ok
01:42:266 - finisher sound ok


GL thanks c:
posted
Hello! Modding the Oni difficulty, since I'm not very familiar with the lower difficulties.

00:15:424 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - Some slight variance is recommended here. Nothing drastic, but just to keep your player engaged a little more. Doing the variation only in the 3rd does not take away the feeling of repetition the map gives. This applies to most places where you copy/pasted stuff.

01:15:424 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - I think changing the pattern here would sound a bit better. KKKKDDDDKKKK perhaps?

01:28:845 (422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.)

01:41:477 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.)

01:46:016 (517,518,519,520,521,522,523) - Too long and hand swaps. Not fit for Oni.

01:47:595 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - ^

01:49:174 (539,540,541,542,543,544,545) - ^

Those are the most glaring things I've found.
posted

Kbludoh wrote:

Hello! Modding the Oni difficulty, since I'm not very familiar with the lower difficulties.

00:15:424 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80) - Some slight variance is recommended here. Nothing drastic, but just to keep your player engaged a little more. Doing the variation only in the 3rd does not take away the feeling of repetition the map gives. This applies to most places where you copy/pasted stuff. ja tentei de todas as maneiras e desmaneiras que tem de nn deixar repetitivo, então sei la oq fazer ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

01:15:424 (343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354) - I think changing the pattern here would sound a bit better. KKKKDDDDKKKK perhaps? nn, que coisa absurda

01:28:845 (422,423,424,425,426,427,428,429) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.) arrumei, agora eu consigo fazer FC xd

01:41:477 (493,494,495,496,497,498,499,500,501) - This is mostly something you'd find in an Inner Oni, not in Oni. Change to something simpler. No hand swaps on Oni. (Except on patterns such as KDDKD and DKKDK.) ^

01:46:016 (517,518,519,520,521,522,523) - Too long and hand swaps. Not fit for Oni. ss

01:47:595 (528,529,530,531,532,533,534) - ^ ^

01:49:174 (539,540,541,542,543,544,545) - ^ ^

Those are the most glaring things I've found. vlw ai c:
posted
Hey there :) From my queue.
You have a pretty unique style of mapping i tried to keep my mod clean enough to not nerf the structure too much.

[Kantan]
00:41:279 (49) - These single upbeat notes seem very sudden and tough for Kantan, You could consider deleting (49) and moving 00:42:858 (52) - to 00:43:450
00:50:161 (61) - And i would just repeat ^ here (00:49:371 - could still be a note though)
01:13:056 (89) - We could delete this and switch 01:13:845 (91) - to D to map the big cymbals instead.
01:51:148 (54) - Again a bit sudden, maybe just move to 01:51:345


[Futsuu]
00:16:608 (35,36,37,38) - Would just go with the same kdkd instead this switch might be confusing in Futsuu

This was a fun diff.

[Muzukashii]
00:37:135 (138) - Seems unnecessary
00:52:727 (205,219) - Since we follow the vocal so strong we could just delete these
01:31:213 (352) - I liked how you let the longer vocal notes ride with a break after them and would continue it here by Moving this to 01:31:213 (352)
01:32:595 - Could add note here then too


[Oni]
00:06:740 (19) - You could consider deleting this, Feels the piano sound is kinda irrelevant compared to keeping following the intro melody.
00:14:240 (64,73,82) - would just make these k's as well like in the next set.
00:36:345 (152,154) - These are too much to my ear
00:39:306 (162,163) - (163) Is the only snare here not mapped with a k, so i would just Crtl-g these.


Some extra stuff for your consideration
Sorry for these bigger suggestions, just something to take into consideration :)
Please note that this being a fairly low BPM 3.6* Oni, some of the patterns are making big difficulty spikes in it. To me these feel a bit out of place with the rest of the song. (These patterns are fine as they are but they are just tough)
01:15:424 - A 12 note kdkdkdkdkdkd is hard, you could go soemthing like d_kdk_kdkdkd for example.
01:28:845 - dkkdkkddk also rough for this. At least (429) should be deleted cause of the Finisher coming up.
01:41:477 - Here as well, very tough pattern. (500) at least before the Finisher should go. Both of these 9s could also be done as simple as xxxxx_x_X
01:46:213 (514,525,536) - These also questionable to me difficulty wise.



Good song, nice mapset! Good luck!
posted

Karee Pan wrote:

Hey there :) From my queue.
You have a pretty unique style of mapping i tried to keep my mod clean enough to not nerf the structure too much. i will cry ;-;

[Kantan]
00:41:279 (49) - These single upbeat notes seem very sudden and tough for Kantan, You could consider deleting (49) and moving 00:42:858 (52) - to 00:43:450 ok
00:50:161 (61) - And i would just repeat ^ here (00:49:371 - could still be a note though) ^
01:13:056 (89) - We could delete this and switch 01:13:845 (91) - to D to map the big cymbals instead. ok
01:51:148 (54) - Again a bit sudden, maybe just move to 01:51:345 ok


[Futsuu]
00:16:608 (35,36,37,38) - Would just go with the same kdkd instead this switch might be confusing in Futsuu fixed

This was a fun diff. >///<

[Muzukashii]
00:37:135 (138) - Seems unnecessary i prefer keep
00:52:727 (205,219) - Since we follow the vocal so strong we could just delete these ok
01:31:213 (352) - I liked how you let the longer vocal notes ride with a break after them and would continue it here by Moving this to 01:31:213 (352) ok
01:32:595 - Could add note here then too ok


[Oni]
00:06:740 (19) - You could consider deleting this, Feels the piano sound is kinda irrelevant compared to keeping following the intro melody. good :o
00:14:240 (64,73,82) - would just make these k's as well like in the next set. used
00:36:345 (152,154) - These are too much to my ear yeah xD
00:39:306 (162,163) - (163) Is the only snare here not mapped with a k, so i would just Crtl-g these. ok


Some extra stuff for your consideration
Sorry for these bigger suggestions, just something to take into consideration :)
Please note that this being a fairly low BPM 3.6* Oni, some of the patterns are making big difficulty spikes in it. To me these feel a bit out of place with the rest of the song. (These patterns are fine as they are but they are just tough)
01:15:424 - A 12 note kdkdkdkdkdkd is hard, you could go soemthing like d_kdk_kdkdkd for example.
01:28:845 - dkkdkkddk also rough for this. At least (429) should be deleted cause of the Finisher coming up.
01:41:477 - Here as well, very tough pattern. (500) at least before the Finisher should go. Both of these 9s could also be done as simple as xxxxx_x_X
01:46:213 (514,525,536) - These also questionable to me difficulty wise.
fixed all



Good song, nice mapset! Good luck! thanks c:
posted
Late for mod, i feel lazy. (:3 _)=

Muzukashii
I think this mod is subjective, it depends on you.

  1. 00:10:983 (30) - delete
    This note sounds should not be put here
  2. 00:12:266 (36) - delete and 00:13:056 - add (d / 1/4 dd) here
    no note sounds strange here, also take a break after the big note better.
  3. 00:13:845 - ~ 00:18:187 -
    Should be able to make more changes because muzukashii, e.g change like this? :
  4. 00:44:635 (139) - change to d and 00:44:832 (140) - move to 00:44:733 -
    More similar to Oni, and continues to follow the drum's voice
  5. 00:47:398 (150) - change to k
  6. 00:56:279 - add k?
  7. 01:06:148 - ^
  8. 01:26:279 - add d
  9. 01:27:858 - add d and 01:27:266 (284,291) - delete
    It sounds more like this better
  10. 01:44:635 - add d
  11. 01:45:819 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345) -
    These pattern looks good, but actually here you can follow the music more clearly,
    e.g 01:46:213 (342) - move to 01:46:312 - and
    01:46:510 (343) - move to 01:46:411 (343) -
    (I think this mod is subjective, it depends on you.)
  12. ^if you take my advice, 01:47:398 (347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - here you should make the same change
Oni
  1. 00:07:529 - ~ 00:12:463 -
    i think here the note is suddenly too much, because it is in start part and not kiai. 00:07:825 (24,34,44) - My advice is delete these notes, or you decide to delete feeling better for you.
  2. 00:12:266 (49) - delete?
  3. 00:19:371 (88) - delete and 00:19:470 (89) - change to d ,add a small break
  4. 01:17:891 - add d and 01:19:470 - add k
    Kiai many 1/2 note but it will feel unnatural
  5. ^You can choose to delete 01:20:062 (367) - this note if you take my advice
  6. 01:23:516 (384,392) - delete and 01:26:280 (401) - change to d
    The difficulty increases suddenly here, because continuous big note or 1/4
  7. 01:28:056 (412) - delete
  8. 01:28:845 (417,418,419,420,421,422,423) - change to dkkkdkd?
    Everyone's feeling is different, so this just what you think
  9. 01:30:523 - and 01:32:299 - add d
    Will be almost the same change with the beginning kiai
  10. 01:33:681 - add d and 01:34:865 - add k
  11. 01:36:148 (456,460,464,468) - delete and 01:38:812 - add d
  12. 01:44:635 (498,499) - change to k sound better?


Song is so cute and has a charming melody.
Good luck!! :):):)
posted

sing216 wrote:

Late for mod, i feel lazy. (:3 _)=

Muzukashii
I think this mod is subjective, it depends on you.

  1. 00:10:983 (30) - delete
    This note sounds should not be put here ok
  2. 00:12:266 (36) - delete and 00:13:056 - add (d / 1/4 dd) here
    no note sounds strange here, also take a break after the big note better. used
  3. 00:13:845 - ~ 00:18:187 - ok
    Should be able to make more changes because muzukashii, e.g change like this? :
  4. 00:44:635 (139) - change to d and 00:44:832 (140) - move to 00:44:733 -
    More similar to Oni, and continues to follow the drum's voice hmm...
  5. 00:47:398 (150) - change to k ok
  6. 00:56:279 - add k? ok
  7. 01:06:148 - ^ ^
  8. 01:26:279 - add d ok
  9. 01:27:858 - add d and 01:27:266 (284,291) - delete
    It sounds more like this better good
  10. 01:44:635 - add d ok
  11. 01:45:819 (339,340,341,342,343,344,345) -
    These pattern looks good, but actually here you can follow the music more clearly,
    e.g 01:46:213 (342) - move to 01:46:312 - and
    01:46:510 (343) - move to 01:46:411 (343) - :o
    (I think this mod is subjective, it depends on you.)
  12. ^if you take my advice, 01:47:398 (347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - here you should make the same change
Oni
  1. 00:07:529 - ~ 00:12:463 -
    i think here the note is suddenly too much, because it is in start part and not kiai. 00:07:825 (24,34,44) - My advice is delete these notes, or you decide to delete feeling better for you. :o
  2. 00:12:266 (49) - delete? ok
  3. 00:19:371 (88) - delete and 00:19:470 (89) - change to d ,add a small break yes
  4. 01:17:891 - add d and 01:19:470 - add k
    Kiai many 1/2 note but it will feel unnatural sounds bad and i like these 1/2 notes, but i will try put 1/4 too
  5. ^You can choose to delete 01:20:062 (367) - this note if you take my advice
  6. 01:23:516 (384,392) - delete and 01:26:280 (401) - change to d
    The difficulty increases suddenly here, because continuous big note or 1/4 it's to be sudden and hard
  7. 01:28:056 (412) - delete ok
  8. 01:28:845 (417,418,419,420,421,422,423) - change to dkkkdkd?
    Everyone's feeling is different, so this just what you think i think dkkkdkd it's a bit hard
  9. 01:30:523 - and 01:32:299 - add d
    Will be almost the same change with the beginning kiai used
  10. 01:33:681 - add d and 01:34:865 - add k used
  11. 01:36:148 (456,460,464,468) - delete and 01:38:812 - add d no
  12. 01:44:635 (498,499) - change to k sound better? okay... >.>


Song is so cute and has a charming melody. you are cute and have a charming melody >///<
Good luck!! :):):)
posted
poi
2017-12-01 12:29 Idealism: .
2017-12-01 12:30 Idealism: dx eu perguntar umas coisas
2017-12-01 12:30 Idealism: 00:01:214 (1,2,3) - pq escolheu usar ds aqui? considerando que o som nessa batida é bem alto
2017-12-01 12:31 Idealism: se decidir mudar isso, dá ctrl+g aq 00:07:135 (5,6) -
2017-12-01 12:32 Idealism: (kantan btw)
2017-12-01 12:33 Igor Sprite: tava olhando o oni
2017-12-01 12:33 Igor Sprite: deu até bug mental
2017-12-01 12:34 Idealism: ASOKPDRHSADUFGSAD
2017-12-01 12:35 Idealism: 00:49:766 (61) - sugiro botar esse k aqui: 00:49:963 -
2017-12-01 12:35 Igor Sprite: qq é ds
2017-12-01 12:35 Igor Sprite: distance snap
2017-12-01 12:35 Idealism: d
2017-12-01 12:35 Idealism: ué
2017-12-01 12:35 Idealism: don
2017-12-01 12:35 Idealism: dslkfbnsdi
2017-12-01 12:39 Idealism: 01:41:871 (39,40) - k k? acompanha melhor a vocal
2017-12-01 12:41 Idealism: 01:51:345 (54,55) - ctrl+g, aqui fica melhor d k
2017-12-01 12:41 Idealism: 01:52:924 (56,57,58,59) - tbm pra esses 4
2017-12-01 12:41 Igor Sprite: eu escolhi usar d no começo da musica pra dar a impressão que o som ta aumentando até pq aqui 00:07:529 (6,8,10) - é d
2017-12-01 12:43 Idealism: seguindo o piano?
2017-12-01 12:44 Igor Sprite: ss
2017-12-01 12:44 Igor Sprite: ss
2017-12-01 12:45 Idealism: então vc poderia mudar só esse 00:04:371 (3) - pra k pq aqui o piano fica mais agudo
2017-12-01 12:45 Idealism: e 00:05:950 - aqui já abaixa de novo
2017-12-01 12:46 Igor Sprite: eu levei DC
2017-12-01 12:46 Igor Sprite: manda print do que vc falou
2017-12-01 12:46 Idealism: osu.ppy.sh/ss/9663899
2017-12-01 12:46 Idealism: ..
2017-12-01 12:46 Idealism: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9663899
2017-12-01 12:46 Idealism: porra de firefox
2017-12-01 12:46 Idealism: n bota o https:// na frente
2017-12-01 12:48 Idealism: 00:49:766 (61) - vc bem q poderia botar essa nota pra cá 00:49:963 -, segue a voz da garota + o piano, e o som de tambor ali é complicado de ouvir por conta da baixa intensidade dele
2017-12-01 12:50 Igor Sprite: mas ele ja ta ai
2017-12-01 12:50 Igor Sprite: nn pera vc ja falou isso
2017-12-01 12:50 Igor Sprite: :thonking:
2017-12-01 12:51 Idealism: i
2017-12-01 12:51 Idealism: nem vi
2017-12-01 12:51 Idealism: SDLKPFGHUDFYFGHDSYUFIGJDSFZP[KGHJRDESIOYUGBDFR
2017-12-01 12:51 Igor Sprite: kkkk
2017-12-01 12:51 Idealism: 01:26:082 - bota um k aqui pra manter a consistência com 01:38:319 -
2017-12-01 12:52 Igor Sprite: são dois momentos diferentes
2017-12-01 12:52 Igor Sprite: se tu olhar as outras diffs todas tão com o final diferente
2017-12-01 12:53 Idealism: presta atenção na vocal que vc tá seguindo, as duas notas caem no "te", a diferença é que no primeiro momento ela segue com "te to" e no segundo ela corta no "te"
2017-12-01 12:56 Idealism: .
2017-12-01 12:56 Idealism: levou dc de novo?
2017-12-01 12:56 Igor Sprite: net ta loka
2017-12-01 12:56 Idealism: vis
2017-12-01 12:56 Idealism: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9663940
2017-12-01 12:58 Igor Sprite: tirei a nota do 2 e botei la no 1
2017-12-01 12:59 Igor Sprite: ah deixa pra la, dps eu arruma sa porar
2017-12-01 12:59 Idealism: auehauehae
2017-12-01 13:16 Idealism: blz moozoo
2017-12-01 13:17 Idealism: 00:32:792 (103) - muda pra k, tem o mesmo som daqui00:32:398 (101) -
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: q
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: nn vou mudar essas notas
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: vão ser sempre D
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: nn vou mudar essas notas
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: nn vou mudar essas notas
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: vão ser sempre D
2017-12-01 13:18 Idealism: i
2017-12-01 13:18 Idealism: deu spam aq
2017-12-01 13:18 Idealism: deu pra vc tbm?
2017-12-01 13:18 Idealism: 00:44:832 - n vejo pq n fazer um ddd aq (e com ctz n vai ser um 21)
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: quando a mensagem duplica nn mostra pra pessoa
2017-12-01 13:18 Igor Sprite: só pra quem recebeu
2017-12-01 13:18 Idealism: ah
2017-12-01 13:19 Idealism: é um muzu, então ali n tem problema fazer triple de mono
2017-12-01 13:19 Idealism: 00:57:463 (185,186) - ctrl+g
2017-12-01 13:20 Igor Sprite: blz
2017-12-01 13:20 Idealism: e o bpm é baixo tbm
2017-12-01 13:20 Idealism: aí n fica mto difícil
2017-12-01 13:20 Igor Sprite: ja entendi kkk
2017-12-01 13:21 Igor Sprite: oka
2017-12-01 13:22 Idealism: 01:45:029 (342) - d
2017-12-01 13:22 Igor Sprite: q
2017-12-01 13:22 Igor Sprite: mas tem só de k
2017-12-01 13:22 Igor Sprite: e é o mesmo daqui 00:13:450 (39) -
2017-12-01 13:22 Idealism: a diferença sendo que ali tem um somzinho alto
2017-12-01 13:22 Idealism: e onde eu linkei n tem
2017-12-01 13:23 Idealism: em fato, o som para ali
2017-12-01 13:25 Igor Sprite: e o oni?
2017-12-01 13:25 Idealism: vou tentar moddar
2017-12-01 13:26 Idealism: vou até tentar dar uma jogada antes
2017-12-01 13:27 Idealism: n jogo taiko faz um tempo
2017-12-01 13:29 Idealism: jk acc
2017-12-01 13:30 Igor Sprite: melhor que a minha
2017-12-01 13:30 Igor Sprite: eu nn dou nem FC
2017-12-01 13:30 Idealism: uaheuaheuahe
2017-12-01 13:32 Idealism: sem maiores problemas imo
2017-12-01 13:33 Idealism: só um pouco repetitivo mais pro final mas tá d boa
2017-12-01 13:34 Igor Sprite: vlw ai
2017-12-01 13:34 Idealism: vou postar lá na thrad
2017-12-01 13:34 Idealism: thread
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