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Neptunus

NoHItter wrote:

Rebubbled
THANKS! :)
Topic Starter
Neptunus

NoHItter wrote:

Rebubbled
I popped myself since I think my work was not very satisfying, but also thank for your bubble~
Natteke
Gogogo Alace
NOT IN USE_old
BUBBLED 2IC :?
Haneii
Yay full version \o/

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02:57:447 (1) – New combo (or else spinner won’t give hp boost at the end).


Good luck ^_^
Don't kudosu


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Topic Starter
Neptunus

Haneii wrote:

Yay full version \o/

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02:57:447 (1) – New combo (or else spinner won’t give hp boost at the end).


Good luck ^_^
Don't kudosu


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
:roll: thank you but.......... ah.......it was a new combo, or am I wrongly understand your meaning?? :3
Haneii
Umm...I do have the latest version...I think :S, well it does say "latest version but not approved"

checked it again it still isn't a new combo

Topic Starter
Neptunus

Haneii wrote:

Umm...I do have the latest version...I think :S, well it does say "latest version but not approved"

checked it again it still isn't a new combo

FIXED NOW~ 8-)
spboxer3
[Normal]
AR試試看3吧
00:27:961 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的spcing
00:40:304 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:419 (3) -右,上一格 grid(size 3)?
00:52:819 (1,2,1,2) - 成一直線如何?
01:10:476 - break time在這裡不適合?[IMO]
01:18:019 (1) - 結尾的地方擺在01:20:419 - 如何?
01:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - 不均勻的spcing
01:39:104 (1) - 貌似是在01:39:961 - 結束的(?)
02:31:390 (2,3) - spacing
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

[胖胖](slap)QAQ
挑點nazi... 01:16:990 (6,7,8) - 結尾的位置間距排成一樣的會比較好看
01:40:304 (2,5,6) - ^
01:44:247 (5,6) - 後面好像也是複製的...也是一樣...

第一次mod 老師的diff呢~水準太高...很難mod阿lol

[Insane]
01:13:733 (3) - 歪了?
01:22:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是歪了...
02:43:219 (4,5,6) - 容易讓人混淆的間距...
02:58:133 (1,2) - 堆疊起來
03:03:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 恩...覺得間距部份沒有處裡的很好
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

其實我覺得你的音效做的也不錯阿!!
star!!
((看到好像rebubble很多次了...我汗
Topic Starter
Neptunus

spboxer3 wrote:

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AR試試看3吧
00:27:961 (3,4,5) - 不均勻的spcing
00:40:304 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:419 (3) -右,上一格 grid(size 3)?
00:52:819 (1,2,1,2) - 成一直線如何?
01:10:476 - break time在這裡不適合?[IMO]
01:18:019 (1) - 結尾的地方擺在01:20:419 - 如何?
01:31:733 (1,2,3,4) - 不均勻的spcing
01:39:104 (1) - 貌似是在01:39:961 - 結束的(?)
02:31:390 (2,3) - spacing
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

[胖胖](slap)QAQ
挑點nazi... 01:16:990 (6,7,8) - 結尾的位置間距排成一樣的會比較好看
01:40:304 (2,5,6) - ^
01:44:247 (5,6) - 後面好像也是複製的...也是一樣...

第一次mod 老師的diff呢~水準太高...很難mod阿lol

[Insane]
01:13:733 (3) - 歪了?
01:22:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也是歪了...
02:43:219 (4,5,6) - 容易讓人混淆的間距...
02:58:133 (1,2) - 堆疊起來
03:03:619 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 恩...覺得間距部份沒有處裡的很好
03:10:647 - 多餘了?

其實我覺得你的音效做的也不錯阿!!
star!!
((看到好像rebubble很多次了...我汗

thanks
Alace
Topic Starter
Neptunus

Alace wrote:

yareyare

ADDED 8-)
kurohana
[Normal]
nothing to say ^^

[Alazy]
00:49:904 (5) stack it correctly under 4
01:22:819 (5) stack it correctly under 4
01:38:933 (8) stack correctly under 7

[Insane]
nothing to say ^^

nice song^^ star :D
Alace
I don`t know how those 0.01 happened XD
thanks for checking this kind of tiny stuffs

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu
Topic Starter
Neptunus

Alace wrote:

I don`t know how those 0.01 happened XD
thanks for checking this kind of tiny stuffs

ADDED!
Lissette
Insane
00:47:847 - useless timing section
00:13:390 - move this inherited timing section, half not later, so the spinner bonus don't suddenly mute at this point in gameplay, or silence slider bonus (same to the others like this)
01:10:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this combo like this http://puu.sh/3uB5 see where is 3 and 4 ? the spacing will be consistent and the pattern will be the same too ^^
01:13:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?
02:32:933 (1) - this big jump feels odd while playing it, maybe you could 02:32:933 (1,2,1,2) - flip horizontally?
02:43:733 (6) - wrong spacing
02:26:590 (1) - same as 01:30:361 (1)
02:45:790 (1) - same

Normal
same as insane about spinner bonus

Star~
Topic Starter
Neptunus

Lissette wrote:

Insane
00:47:847 - useless timing section
00:13:390 - move this inherited timing section, half not later, so the spinner bonus don't suddenly mute at this point in gameplay, or silence slider bonus (same to the others like this)
01:10:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this combo like this http://puu.sh/3uB5 see where is 3 and 4 ? the spacing will be consistent and the pattern will be the same too ^^
01:13:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same
01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?
02:32:933 (1) - this big jump feels odd while playing it, maybe you could 02:32:933 (1,2,1,2) - flip horizontally?
02:43:733 (6) - wrong spacing
02:26:590 (1) - same as 01:30:361 (1)
02:45:790 (1) - same

Normal
same as insane about spinner bonus

Star~

All fixed!
The only pattern that I would like to remain unchanged would be "01:30:361 (1) - sounds good if you move half beat earlier, then remove 01:30:704 (3) ?" well ah....this could be better for advanced players because keep up with rhythm would be more dynamic and excite than keep up with vocal, because the vocal sudden slow down there could cause combo break supposing that the player would be too focus on rhythm for the whole pattern of the map was that~ :3
By the way , I really like your Avatar, really~
Lissette
little irc mod and....

Bubble~
DeathxShinigami
Too busy being alive!
Topic Starter
Neptunus

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Too busy being alive!
yeah....much more busier than I thought it would be when I was a child
James2250
-It shouldn't need (Full Ver.) on the thread title or the title in-game. Every song is assumed to be the full version unless stated otherwise

Normal:
-This is pushing it to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset and isn't too beginner friendly (especially looking at the other 2 difficulties). I suggest you try and lower the SV slightly more and simplify a few of the harder patterns that are around.
00:06:704 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these in case beginners miss the repeat that is hidden for some of the time
00:34:133 (1) - end this at 00:36:019 or 00:36:361
01:18:019 (1) - end on red tick before or after as it fits more

Alazy:
01:10:476 (1,2) - the repeat is almost hidden so I would try moving this around slightly more

Insane:
01:09:790 (6,1) - try and space these out more
01:29:676 (2,1) - ^
02:11:162 (3,1) - ^ (you could rearrange the star)

A few too many anti jumps on Insane for my liking but a good mapset overall
Alace
Fix a bit, it may look better now
BTW lower the SV in a finished map is not wise, sliders will be broken XD, you need to remake all of them

Download: Becca - I'm Alive! (Full Ver.) (Neptunus) [Alazy].osu
Topic Starter
Neptunus

James2250 wrote:

-It shouldn't need (Full Ver.) on the thread title or the title in-game. Every song is assumed to be the full version unless stated otherwise

Normal:
-This is pushing it to be the easiest difficulty in the mapset and isn't too beginner friendly (especially looking at the other 2 difficulties). I suggest you try and lower the SV slightly more and simplify a few of the harder patterns that are around.
00:06:704 (2,3) - I wouldn't stack these in case beginners miss the repeat that is hidden for some of the time
00:34:133 (1) - end this at 00:36:019 or 00:36:361
01:18:019 (1) - end on red tick before or after as it fits more

Alazy:
01:10:476 (1,2) - the repeat is almost hidden so I would try moving this around slightly more

Insane:
01:09:790 (6,1) - try and space these out more
01:29:676 (2,1) - ^
02:11:162 (3,1) - ^ (you could rearrange the star)

A few too many anti jumps on Insane for my liking but a good mapset overall
fixed thanks~
James2250
Looks like all of the main things have been fixed and normal was made slightly easier. Went through and fixed some of the more confusing anti jumps on Insane, the rest of them can stay for the sake of the patterns.

All checks out
Ranked~

Congrats on 1st ranked map :D
Topic Starter
Neptunus

James2250 wrote:

Looks like all of the main things have been fixed and normal was made slightly easier. Went through and fixed some of the more confusing anti jumps on Insane, the rest of them can stay for the sake of the patterns.

All checks out
Ranked~

Congrats on 1st ranked map :D

Thanks for the mod!
Thanks for ranking! :)
Topic Starter
Neptunus
8-)
Sleep Powder
/fangasm

/faints
Waryas
Good mapset overall, congratulation on ranking!
SapphireGhost
I believe this map could use -10 offset, though that could probably be fine tuned.
PsychoSkill
congratulation :D
[NakagawaKanon]
Insane 더 잘 할 수 있었다
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