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Moonlit Bliss wrote:

From discord o/

[Failure]

GENERAL THOUGHTS

First of all the slider velocity seems too slow. I would increase it by over 50%, but stopping at 1.4/1.5x probably works better.
You also mapped sone pretty tough streams which leaves the rest of the map feel underwhelming because it is for the most part quite slow and undermapped (painfully so in my opinion).

OD9.4 is very tough especially with these streams. Perhaps consider going down to 9? This map isnt that
insane :p Toned down to 9.2 :p Don't want it too easy

Consider tick rate 2. There is often a constant 1/2 kick. I experimented with this before and didnt like it

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00:12:117 (9,1) - for these parts, with nothing musically happening between the streams a very small distance gap would be more fitting. Maybe even stacked. flipped and moved closer

00:27:545 (1,2,3,4) - No need to NC spam. also you didnt NC spam 00:36:688 (1,2,3,4) - Was experimenting at the time, forgot to revert, fixed

00:25:403 (1,2,3) - Jumps should be bigger (around 5x spacing) Done

00:31:117 (2,3) - This jump is too big. I would reduce to around 2.5x. This is because it is the first jump of the first jump section coming after a very long stream. Players will get the idea; a smaller jump isnt going to make them combo break every time but shows them a new section has arrived. Done
00:31:403 (4,5) - could be a triple here. It seems like you avoided using streams in the string part, which makes sense, but it could be mapped and it would make these sections less boring 1/2 spam. I really wanted to map the orchestra after the heavy guitar part to give a bit of variety and used small spacing to keep the 1/2 beat when there was nothing

00:32:117 (1,2,3) - For this beat the strings halt and the kick comes back in at 1/4 beat speeds. Relating to my earlier comment, a bit of rhythmic diversity in here would go a long way and the song certainly supports it. A 5 note stream rather than just 1/2 will make this better I think. 00:33:831 (5,6) - Same idea here, and im sure you can find the other parts where this happens. I wanted it to be purely orchestral mapping here since the previous part was heavy guitar focused and focuses more on jumps than streams and stacks, thank you for the suggestion, I might experiment a little later but for now im leaving it as it is
Otherwise your jumps are methodically placed to fit the song. Good job. thanks!

00:34:974 (5) - Anti climactic especially after you just used 1/2 for such a long time. The end of a sequence should be impactful so it makes more sense to use circles instead of a slider that ends on the beat. fixed

00:40:260 (2,3) - If you want this part to be this spacing, then you should scale all the spacing in this section ( 00:40:688 (5,6,7) - this is very sluggish for example) to enhance the jumps without making it an awkard change between large jumps and 1x spacing.

00:43:938 (2,3,4) - Considering the OD you picked, i would REALLY reconsider this. A kick slider on the 1/8 will be boring but it wont frustrate players for no reason like 1/8 snapped circles will. It was meant to be 1/3, not sure what happened to the snapping on it

00:46:117 (1) - I would remove the reverse and replace with a 1/2 slider. I prefer the 1/1 repeat as it is the calm before the storm

00:46:974 (1,2,3,4,5) - See this is the kind of spacing I expected this map to keep going but it is few and far between. It is succeeded by this: 00:48:117 (1,2,3,4) - which is really boring. You do this several times in the map; any other pattern of similar spacing the first bit will be nice. I like the slow sliders personally, it's just my thing to have slower than the norm sliders tho i do like your opinion on the boring 1,2,3,4 so i increased the sv to 1.3 and made them zigzag

00:50:403 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion these sliders shouldn't be this slow (I think they should be faster than the norm even). By using sliders you are already slowing the pace of the map down. The song isn't really slowing down much so neither should this. Made them 1.0x
00:53:545 (4) - Triple into this and 00:53:831 (1) -

Kiai and flow

This flow reminds me of Fort mapping. This is not a good thing. Im going to triage it but if you are happy with it I dont mind if you ignore this section in the end I don't even know how Fort's flow works, but thanks for comparing me to him?

01:06:974 (3,4,1) - This is somewhat jarring because it ends up being more of a linear pattern than a curved or angular one. You could ease this a little by rotating clockwise 01:07:545 (1) - so it curves up. My alternative would be to instead rotate the first slider 90 degrees or so clockwise. Ehh, i like

01:08:403 (4) - Probably needs rotating 45 clockwise. Or really to anything other than what it is at. Again it is suffering from that linearity that makes it awkward. Look at the line of clickable parts in 01:08:117 (3,4,1) - Fixed, i see what you mean

01:11:403 (2,3,4,5,6) - Jumps are too acute. Again the sliders end up being too linear when coming out of the jumps. Retaining the jump pattern I moved the long slider to x=504 y=173 and rotated 60 clockwise ( 01:12:117 (6) - ). Fixed but in a different way

01:15:545 (1,2,3) - here and 01:16:403 (4,1) - here. The linear flow through sliders is weakening the flow. If you are always moving in a straight line from slider to slider you end up being forced to not follow the sliderbody if you dont want to get uncomfortable. Try to make the sliderbody a part of the flow. My general rule is to make the first half of a slider indicate the direction of flow while allowing the last half to be a bit more flexible.
01:15:545 (1,2,3,4,1) - In this case for example i used a pattern like this:fixed

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http://puu.sh/sCyOt/8b0222bf8b.jpg

Was a great change, thanks

01:16:688 (1,3) - almost overlapping.
01:17:545 (4) - would be better flipped vertically

01:19:260 (2,3,4,1) -

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http://puu.sh/sCyZK/18a3f24be7.jpg

I remade this because as it was the 1/2 slider is kind of backwards with how it flows from the last circle into the next slider. This forces the player to stop moving and just hold the sliderhead to optimise play. Less satisfying imo.
Oh and move the circle afterwards (01:20:545 (2) - ) to the right of the new slider position if you make this change.

01:22:403 (1) - Remap to a rhythm like maybe:

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/sCzf5/a0d08abf08.jpg

Everything after this time is stuff I have already covered above. Go through and check the second half applying the same ideas.

1. What's with the tick rate 2? I don't feel like it does anything
   
   
2. 00:16:626 (1,1) - Line up the end of the slider with the stream better, it looks wonky and unpolished as is
   
   
3. 00:21:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'll just mention it on one stream but I don't think having the one note sticking out look svery nice, it's kinda like how small nubs on sliders are really ugly
   
   
4. 00:27:483 (1,2,3,4) - This map is almost 7*, you can space the buzzsliders more, plus it gives them the emphasis they lack since they are a one time clickable object (basically what I mean is since the sliders aren't as strong as streams, space them more to give them more emphasis, because right now that part feels weak comapred to the rest of the streams)
   
   
5. 00:29:126 (8,1) - Here the direction change is made on the 8 but the strong sound is made on the 1. The change in direction should be reflected by being on a strong beat. Just like what you did here 00:29:698 (8,1) -
   
   
6. 00:33:769 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This whole part here is all over the place . 00:34:055 (6,7,1,2) - This part plays terribly, 00:34:341 (1,2,3,4) - this part looks bad
   
   
7. 00:36:626 (1,2,3,4) - Once again these could be spaced more to have a better effet, because as is you don't really feel the hit of the drums
   
   
8. 00:42:912 (5) - Unsnapped slider yum yum
   
   
9. 00:44:055 (4,1) - no
   
   
10. 00:43:876 (2,3,4) - Also what's up with this
    
    
11. 00:48:055 (1,2,3,4) - Make these symmetrical, they are close enough to being symmetrical that you should make them so, but also off enough that you notice it a lot when playing. I call this the FoxyPuzzle Zone in reference to how it took me 4 mods to get Foxy to do symmetry correctly
    
12. 00:50:341 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd make the 3 notes on these spaced more, and also make them not as cluttered, like the three notes are too close
    
    
13. 00:53:483 (2,3,4,1) - Move away the lone circle there, the overlap really doesn't work
    
    
14. 00:54:912 (1,2,3,4) - When making patterns with symmetry, use symmetrical sliders
    
    
15. 00:57:198 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Nothing to say here, I like this part except maybe have 00:58:912 (1) - be a mirror of 00:58:341 (1) -
    
    
16. 01:04:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is the most intense part of the stream, reflect that by having a higher distance snap
    
    
17. 01:06:912 (3,4) - Symmetrical patterns, symmetrical sliders pls it hurts to see
    
    
18. 01:09:698 (8,1) - This looks pretty bad. Maybe rotate this 01:09:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - counter-clock wise so you're not stuck in the bottom and the same applies to here 01:18:841 (8,1) -
    
19. 01:14:269 (4,1) - Here it's stuck again, but also I think it'd be best if it went to the left after the stream, for aesthetic and flow
    
    
20. 01:20:626 (3,4) - Symmetrical patterns, _____________ (At this point I think you can fill the blank)
    
    
21. 01:21:769 (3,4) - ^
    
    
22. 01:24:626 - The sound here should be a clickable object and not a spinner head
    
    
23. Why is the emphasis on this 01:26:483 (4) - note bigger then here 01:26:912 (1) -
    
    
24. 01:38:483 (3,3,4) - The crossing here could be cleaner
    
    
25. 01:42:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Once again most intense part, should have higher DS
    
    
26. 01:49:198 (3,4) - _________ patterns, __________ sliders (I WONDER WHAT WORD GOES IN THERE' JEEZ I DON'T KNOW)
    
    
27. 01:52:055 (1) - Not a huge fan of this slider shape
    
    
28. 01:52:912 (5,1) - Here I'd take the 5 slider pointing at the other one over them overlapping (or maybe you can make the two happen at the same time)
    
    
29. 02:05:126 (8,1) - Not really sure why there's a cutoff here as this part sounds the same all the way
    
    
30. 02:05:769 - Also here clickable object, not a slider head and also 02:05:769 (1) - end the spinner at the same place you ended last time for consistency
    
    
31. 02:16:055 (1,4) - symmetrical ________. symmetrical ________wait nvM yOU GOT IT THIS TIME HOLY SHIT HE DID IT BOYZ
    
    
32. 02:22:483 (1,2) - WILL HE GET IT AGAIN, NOOOOOOOO!!!
    02:25:198 (1,2) -
    02:29:769 (1,2) -
    02:31:483 (1,2) -
    02:46:341 (3,4) -
    02:47:483 (3,4) -
    and another one before I go 02:55:483 (3,4) -
    
33. Not sure that the breaks here 02:33:983 - and here 02:38:341 - are really needed as they are really short
    
    
34. 02:42:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream here looks wonky as hell
    
    
35. 02:52:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Shape of the stream here is pretty wonky too, I'd have this 02:53:483 (1,2,3,4) - look like this but cleaner
    
    This is all I have the time for, sorry if I was a bit mean, you were warned
    But hopefully this mod helps you
    
    

• Opening spinner maybe? Would be quite appropriate

1. 00:10:483 (3,4,5) - The spacing around the 4 is odd because none of them have identical spacing. 00:10:626 (4,8) - is slightly farther than 00:10:483 (3,4) - too.
   
   
2. 00:11:769 (5) - Make this two straight lines, since 5 is currently not in line with the second stream, yet 00:15:198 (5) - is.
   
   
3. 00:14:483 (9,10,11) - This might be too close because the jump of 00:14:055 (5,6) - is initially flow jump, but the streams are counter flow. These combined needs a fast mouse movement. But 00:14:340 (8,9) - is with counter flow jump, and with flow stream, those combined need less movement. So move that triple just a bit further, or 00:14:198 (6,7,8) - down.
   
   
4. 00:16:626 (1) - 00:23:483 (1) - Mute slider end
   
   
5. 00:33:198 (1) - This isn't part of the triangle/hexagon pattern, move it slightly closer
   
   
6. 00:33:769 (5) - If you move the slider head further you get a triangle + fix blanket
   
   
7. 00:42:341 (1) - Does this spacing work?
   
   
8. 00:53:483 (2,3) - I know this spacing is too close though
   
   
9. 00:54:055 (2,3,4) - Slider end is not spaced evenly between the circles, ctrl-g it and use ar to fix.
   
   
10. 01:04:055 (1) - Use higher distance here, try something like this
    
    image

    
11. 01:06:341 (1,4) - blanket isn't perfect
    
    
12. 01:09:769 (1) - I think it would have better circular flow with something like this, but it's obviously difficult to make it look aesthetically correct
    
    image

    
13. 01:11:769 (5) - Fix blanket, head too close
    
    
14. 01:14:626 (2) - Just move the slider point at y82 to y72, gives a better circle shape to the slider
    
    
15. 01:16:055 (3) - Copy paste the slider from 01:15:198 (4) - . They have the same flow + currently the "blanket isn't right because the tail is closer to (4)'s head.
    
    
16. 01:18:841 (8,1) - Same pattern as before but this slider is farther away
    
    
17. 01:20:626 (3,4) - Would look better if copy pasted
    
    
18. 01:23:483 (1) - Seems a bit close for a 1/1 gap
    
    
19. 01:28:055 (1) - Move first red slider point over so that both horizontal parts are same distance
    
    
20. 01:32:483 (6,1) - That's a big ass 1/4 jump, at the very minimum move it down so the slider blankets 01:32:198 (3) -
    
    
21. 01:36:912 (2,1) - Stack distance is too far
    
    
22. 01:45:769 (5) - For these patterns, I don't think the direction change shouldn't happen until 1 circle later for both. See my rain diff streams to see what I mean. The cursor is change direction before the violin changes.
    
    
23. 01:53:198 (1) - Change this to reverse slider or add another circle 1/2 after. Should do reverse since that's what you do normally.
    
    
24. 01:55:483 (1) - Slider isn't perfectly aligned with stream
    
    
25. 01:57:769 (1) - Imperfect blanket, tail too far
    
    
26. 02:18:198 (4,2) - Fix stack distances
    
    
27. 02:26:055 (1,2,3,4) - Current positions imply they're all 1/2 jumps, angle more so it's clear they're 1/1 gaps. Others are fine because pattern is now established
    
    
28. 02:37:769 (2) - why is it here, could stack
    silly answer that I would do would be to stack to slider head, and put 02:40:055 (1) - on the tail. (btw i've ranked nothing so take with grain of salt)
    
    
29. 02:44:626 (1) - Move right to fix circle flow
    
    
30. 02:49:198 (1) - Curve slider so that it can still be in correct position for stream end and inside the circle. But this creates flow issue xP
    
    
31. 02:50:055 (4) - Fix blanket, tail too close
    
    
32. 03:11:769 (1) - Keep the spacing equal to the last stream, doesn't feel right to go this low
    
    
33. 03:16:341 (5) - Move this down, final stream doesn't curve right
    
    
34. 03:18:912 (1) - Jump flow should put it around x145 y 220,
    
    
35. 03:26:626 (3) - Circular would be better on the right side

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celerih wrote:

[Mortality]

is the name because this map kills my hope in you making something good? (just kidding babe luv u)

1. What's with the tick rate 2? I don't feel like it does anything Because on some of the extended sliders which are mapped to vocals, it goes over a beat, can change
   
   
2. 00:16:626 (1,1) - Line up the end of the slider with the stream better, it looks wonky and unpolished as is Fixed
   
   
3. 00:21:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'll just mention it on one stream but I don't think having the one note sticking out look svery nice, it's kinda like how small nubs on sliders are really ugly Fixed
   
   
4. 00:27:483 (1,2,3,4) - This map is almost 7*, you can space the buzzsliders more, plus it gives them the emphasis they lack since they are a one time clickable object (basically what I mean is since the sliders aren't as strong as streams, space them more to give them more emphasis, because right now that part feels weak comapred to the rest of the streams) Fixed
   
   
5. 00:29:126 (8,1) - Here the direction change is made on the 8 but the strong sound is made on the 1. The change in direction should be reflected by being on a strong beat. Just like what you did here 00:29:698 (8,1) -
   
   
6. 00:33:769 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This whole part here is all over the place . 00:34:055 (6,7,1,2) - This part plays terribly, 00:34:341 (1,2,3,4) - this part looks bad Think i fixed
   
   
7. 00:36:626 (1,2,3,4) - Once again these could be spaced more to have a better effet, because as is you don't really feel the hit of the drums k
   
   
8. 00:42:912 (5) - Unsnapped slider yum yum Fuck AI mod for not picking this up
   
   
9. 00:44:055 (4,1) - no yes
   
   
10. 00:43:876 (2,3,4) - Also what's up with this There is a 1/3 drum/guitar thingy sound, For some reason the editor likes to resnap this to weird shit
    
    
11. 00:48:055 (1,2,3,4) - Make these symmetrical, they are close enough to being symmetrical that you should make them so, but also off enough that you notice it a lot when playing. I call this the FoxyPuzzle Zone in reference to how it took me 4 mods to get Foxy to do symmetry correctly They all on a 10 or 20 degree angle difference
    
12. 00:50:341 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd make the 3 notes on these spaced more, and also make them not as cluttered, like the three notes are too close
    
    
13. 00:53:483 (2,3,4,1) - Move away the lone circle there, the overlap really doesn't work done
    
    
14. 00:54:912 (1,2,3,4) - When making patterns with symmetry, use symmetrical slidersas i said before
    
    
15. 00:57:198 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Nothing to say here, I like this part except maybe have 00:58:912 (1) - be a mirror of 00:58:341 (1) - done
    
    
16. 01:04:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is the most intense part of the stream, reflect that by having a higher distance snap k fam
    
    
17. 01:06:912 (3,4) - Symmetrical patterns, symmetrical sliders pls it hurts to see I think its fine :/
    
    
18. 01:09:698 (8,1) - This looks pretty bad. Maybe rotate this 01:09:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - counter-clock wise so you're not stuck in the bottom and the same applies to here 01:18:841 (8,1) - K done
    
19. 01:14:269 (4,1) - Here it's stuck again, but also I think it'd be best if it went to the left after the stream, for aesthetic and flow k
    
    
20. 01:20:626 (3,4) - Symmetrical patterns, _____________ (At this point I think you can fill the blank) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    
    
    
21. 01:21:769 (3,4) - ^ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    
    
    
22. 01:24:626 - The sound here should be a clickable object and not a spinner head k
    
    
23. Why is the emphasis on this 01:26:483 (4) - note bigger then here 01:26:912 (1) - ???, Think i fixed anyway but stll
    
    
24. 01:38:483 (3,3,4) - The crossing here could be cleaner I barely notice it and It took me like 30 minutes to try and find something that looks semi decent
    
    
25. 01:42:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Once again most intense part, should have higher DS
    
    
26. 01:49:198 (3,4) - _________ patterns, __________ sliders (I WONDER WHAT WORD GOES IN THERE' JEEZ I DON'T KNOW) MAYBE SYMMETRICAL BUT I COULD BE AUTISTIC, IDK, I THINK ITS FINE
    
    
27. 01:52:055 (1) - Not a huge fan of this slider shape K ill just copy the other one from the other kiai
    
    
28. 01:52:912 (5,1) - Here I'd take the 5 slider pointing at the other one over them overlapping (or maybe you can make the two happen at the same time)
    
    
29. 02:05:126 (8,1) - Not really sure why there's a cutoff here as this part sounds the same all the way Variation coz 1 straight stream that is dense would be reallllllly boring, even tho the sound itself is REALLLLLY BORRING
    
    
30. 02:05:769 - Also here clickable object, not a slider head and also 02:05:769 (1) - end the spinner at the same place you ended last time for consistency k
    
    
31. 02:16:055 (1,4) - symmetrical ________. symmetrical ________wait nvM yOU GOT IT THIS TIME HOLY SHIT HE DID IT BOYZ
    
    
32. 02:22:483 (1,2) - WILL HE GET IT AGAIN, NOOOOOOOO!!!
    02:25:198 (1,2) -
    02:29:769 (1,2) -
    02:31:483 (1,2) -
    02:46:341 (3,4) -
    02:47:483 (3,4) -
    and another one before I go 02:55:483 (3,4) - YOU ARE TELLING ME TO FIX BUT YOU ARE NOT TELLING ME HOW!!!!!!!!
    
33. Not sure that the breaks here 02:33:983 - and here 02:38:341 - are really needed as they are really short removed
    
    
34. 02:42:341 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream here looks wonky as hell It looks worse if i use a lower ds or even change the angle etc...
    
    
35. 02:52:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Shape of the stream here is pretty wonky too, I'd have this 02:53:483 (1,2,3,4) - look like this but cleaner k
    
    This is all I have the time for, sorry if I was a bit mean, you were warned Don't worry I know, I responded as such
    But hopefully this mod helps you

Sinnoh wrote:

more discord. Please doubt the things I say about flow because I'm not high rank, but I'm usually right with things about aesthetics. I'll have to mention the annoying blankets because someone else will if I do

Mortality

• Opening spinner maybe? Would be quite appropriate Sure

1. 00:10:483 (3,4,5) - The spacing around the 4 is odd because none of them have identical spacing. 00:10:626 (4,8) - is slightly farther than 00:10:483 (3,4) - too. It fits in the middle of a triangle made by 00:10:483 (3,4,5,8) -
   
   
2. 00:11:769 (5) - Make this two straight lines, since 5 is currently not in line with the second stream, yet 00:15:198 (5) - is. changed
   
   
3. 00:14:483 (9,10,11) - This might be too close because the jump of 00:14:055 (5,6) - is initially flow jump, but the streams are counter flow. These combined needs a fast mouse movement. But 00:14:340 (8,9) - is with counter flow jump, and with flow stream, those combined need less movement. So move that triple just a bit further, or 00:14:198 (6,7,8) - down. Moved down
   
   
4. 00:16:626 (1) - 00:23:483 (1) - Mute slider end They were muted but the editor fucked up and sent them back to 60%, they were muted in previous versions :/
   
   
5. 00:33:198 (1) - This isn't part of the triangle/hexagon pattern, move it slightly closer Fixed i think
   
   
6. 00:33:769 (5) - If you move the slider head further you get a triangle + fix blanket Fixed
   
   
7. 00:42:341 (1) - Does this spacing work? Fixed
   
   
8. 00:53:483 (2,3) - I know this spacing is too close though Fixed in the previous mod, havent updated
   
   
9. 00:54:055 (2,3,4) - Slider end is not spaced evenly between the circles, ctrl-g it and use ar to fix.
   
   
10. 01:04:055 (1) - Use higher distance here, try something like this Fixed in previous mod, havent updated
    
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11. 01:06:341 (1,4) - blanket isn't perfect Done
    
    
12. 01:09:769 (1) - I think it would have better circular flow with something like this, but it's obviously difficult to make it look aesthetically correct
    
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    Fixed on the previous mod, seems to be better
    
13. 01:11:769 (5) - Fix blanket, head too close Done
    
    
14. 01:14:626 (2) - Just move the slider point at y82 to y72, gives a better circle shape to the slider Fixed in a different way i think
    
    
15. 01:16:055 (3) - Copy paste the slider from 01:15:198 (4) - . They have the same flow + currently the "blanket isn't right because the tail is closer to (4)'s head. didnt copy the slider but did fix i think
    
    
16. 01:18:841 (8,1) - Same pattern as before but this slider is farther away Fixed in previous mod
    
    
17. 01:20:626 (3,4) - Would look better if copy pasted They are copy pasted, they have been control j and h'd
    
    
18. 01:23:483 (1) - Seems a bit close for a 1/1 gap The momentum slows down for this part so its fine i think
    
    
19. 01:28:055 (1) - Move first red slider point over so that both horizontal parts are same distance done
    
    
20. 01:32:483 (6,1) - That's a big ass 1/4 jump, at the very minimum move it down so the slider blankets 01:32:198 (3) - A thing called slider leniency should make it fine tho
    
    
21. 01:36:912 (2,1) - Stack distance is too far
    
    
22. 01:45:769 (5) - For these patterns, I don't think the direction change shouldn't happen until 1 circle later for both. See my rain diff streams to see what I mean. The cursor is change direction before the violin changes.
    
    
23. 01:53:198 (1) - Change this to reverse slider or add another circle 1/2 after. Should do reverse since that's what you do normally. added the extra note
    
    
24. 01:55:483 (1) - Slider isn't perfectly aligned with stream done
    
    
25. 01:57:769 (1) - Imperfect blanket, tail too far done
    
    
26. 02:18:198 (4,2) - Fix stack distances I don't want perfect stacks as i want them to be readable, they are fine the way they are
    
    
27. 02:26:055 (1,2,3,4) - Current positions imply they're all 1/2 jumps, angle more so it's clear they're 1/1 gaps. Others are fine because pattern is now established Since this map is 6.77 stars, if they cant tell there is a 1/1 gap there by listening to the music then they don't deserve to his the notes
    
    
28. 02:37:769 (2) - why is it here, could stack Was meant to be stacked
    silly answer that I would do would be to stack to slider head, and put 02:40:055 (1) - on the tail. (btw i've ranked nothing so take with grain of salt) Believe i did something similar if not the same as what you said
    
    
29. 02:44:626 (1) - Move right to fix circle flow Done
    
    
30. 02:49:198 (1) - Curve slider so that it can still be in correct position for stream end and inside the circle. But this creates flow issue xP Think i fixed
    
    
31. 02:50:055 (4) - Fix blanket, tail too close
    
    
32. 03:11:769 (1) - Keep the spacing equal to the last stream, doesn't feel right to go this low Fixed in previous mod
    
    
33. 03:16:341 (5) - Move this down, final stream doesn't curve right decided to make it all a consistent space
    
    
34. 03:18:912 (1) - Jump flow should put it around x145 y 220, yeah
    
    
35. 03:26:626 (3) - Circular would be better on the right side Fixed

Here's the rest of my rain because I mentioned it in the mod.

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Wow bbcode is cool and dumb

Luna Flina wrote:

Normal

01:09:769 (1) - there's no need for this note for a normal diff
01:18:912 (2) - ^
02:00:055 (2) - ^
02:49:198 (1) - ^
02:58:341 (1) - ^ They might not be needed but to me it feels empty without it

01:22:341 (1) - I think you can turn this to a 1-4-7 reverse slider Done

01:42:912 (4) - change the slider direction closer to the 1 Done

01:08:626 (1) - don't new combo this slider
01:17:769 (1) - ^
01:58:912 (1) - ^
02:01:198 (1) - ^
02:57:198 (1) - ^

01:10:055 (2) - instead, new combo this
02:00:341 (3) - ^
02:58:626 (2) - ^While i didn't use all of your suggestions for new combos, it made me go over them and made some changes

I just want to check this. I should leave the harder ones to others cause i don't want to screw them up >_>

Living Flower wrote:

okay, it's my first modding try, pls don't be that harsh with me >.<

Fizz's Hard

At first, I want to know, why you choosed Digits for your difficulty Settings like "CS:3.6", or "4.8"? What was the Intention behind it? just for the difficulty spread; the insane is CS 3.8 and HP 5, so I made them a little lower to fit. However I don't think going all the way down to HP 4 or 4.5 would be appropriate.
I also recommend to use the following Settings for this Hard:
CS:5
AR:7
OD:7
HP:6

I'll assume you mean CS 4 here- Again the CS choice is in interest of keeping the difficulties in ascending order. AR 8 is very common for hards and, in my opinion, is even a little too slow for this song but I've decided to keep it at 8.OD 6 is the common OD for hards, OD 7 is very rare and would be overly difficult for a 210 BPM song.HP was explained above (and this one matters the least really, HP does not affect gameplay in a direct sense)

It makes the map a bit more challenging and would fit perfectly a Hard (on my opinion)
I would also recommend to take a look back to the breaks, since some of them Looks a bit weird spaced like this one:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7256880 This is intentional, it's a bit nicer to have the break fully start at the big white tick.

Another Thing: Since there is a Holding time (I don't know how to call it right) between 02:33:197 (1,2) - and 02:37:769 (1,1) - I recommand to put some breaks there, too. It would Hype in my opinion the momentum there very high and there are actually no reason to me to let the HP bar drain (but maybe you've got some, if so, I would be interested to hear them. It shouldn't Sound like I want to offending you, I want just to understand >.< ) I like this suggestion, however the gap between 02:35:197 (2) - and 02:36:626 (1) - is too small to have a break there. This would make it inconsistent and odd in my opinion. If the situation was different I probably would have accepted this suggestion, though

Besides all this, the diff Looks very good mapped. Well done! Thank you!

Moonlit wrote:

who is idke

fieryrage wrote:

artist is titled Epica not EPICA; title is Victims of Contingency as per iTunes official metadata https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/the-q ... d853300223
(should probably add "the" in tags, as well) From what ive been told, itunes isnt always a reliable source for metadata since their official website (http://www.epica.nl/) has EPICA in capitals, i think it may be interchangeable since it does not seem to be consistent at all. Also on nearly all of Nuclear Blast Records music videos on youtube (which is their label owner/manager thing) has EPICA capitalized, ill have to consult someone.

idke asked for playtest, solid but pointed out two things mainly related to the slow section starting 02:16:054 (1) - here and how it's comparatively pretty undermapped considering the entire map (also fixed overlap 02:16:626 (2,1) - here); also told to increase ar to 9.5 to fit spread done

insane at od 7.3 but ar 9.2 thinking emoji dropped to 9 and increased od