[CS' Another]thank you fontes
00:32:417 - i think its ok to add a note at col 6 here. added at 5
00:35:139 (35139|1,35187|0) - idk what this note expresses. i told this to kawawa either, i think its better to delete. is 1/8 drum here i think because i didn't layer full 1/8 here and that is why it looks odd. fixed this part
00:36:429 - 00:37:194 - should not you put a note here? same as here 00:35:665 (35665|5) - but if u were expressing staccato, it might be all right. added
00:40:187 (40187|1,40315|1,40569|1,40697|1,40824|1) - its too heavy at leftt hand with this jacks. 00:40:697 (40697|1,40824|1) - especially here.
perhaps u cant avold this 3jack structure, but how about move 00:40:824 (40824|1) - this to col 6 for ballance? rearranged here, it should be good now
00:41:588 - 00:44:213 - this pattern is beatiful :'3 :3 thanks
00:51:315 (51315|6,51315|0) - 00:52:042 (52042|5,52042|1) - maybe my skill is bad :d but feel its difficult little bit, how about move this notes 1,7->3,5 and 2,4 -> 1,7 each? here should be alright to play for me, rearranged a bit here
00:55:982 (55982|4,55982|6) - how about move this to 1,3col? feel more natural pitch personaly. yep, i rearranged this part
01:15:277 - 01:16:754 - no matter which pattern is placed, this sounds i think its most natural to tie these 3 sounds together.
like boom boom boom / boom boom boom / ~~~ xD
so 01:15:277 (75277|0,75394|0,75512|0,75629|0) - 01:15:629 (75629|6,75750|6,75871|6,75992|6) - this 4 jacks is weird to me for flow, whatever hard pattern. you can just move 01:15:629 (75629|0,75992|6) - this notes to make 3 jacks, but for a neat arrangement, it wil be better to make other shape of this.
ok i make it easier here
01:33:577 (93577|5,93577|1) - how about move this to 3,5 col? 01:31:460 (91460|5,91460|4,91460|2,91460|1) - cuz this shape of LN and single notes is already stick together, so for making different. (reverse shape of 01:31:283 (91283|4,91283|0,91283|2,91283|6,91460|4,91460|1,91460|5,91460|2) - this?)
01:39:577 (99577|2,99636|3,99695|4) - i feel 1/4 snap drum sounds more clear. how about like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10867123
and feel hard this 01:39:401 (99401|0,99577|0,99754|0) - place little bit, so if u accept this, try move 01:39:577 (99577|0) - this to 6 col. its just suggestion.
i am quite sure that is 1/6 drum snap so i will keep this for now
01:48:041 - 01:48:546 - add LN? 01:48:715 (108715|5,108715|4) - for this same sound. yes that is true however it was intention here to leave a break for normal note flow, i only catch those timing like 01:47:364 (107364|1,107364|2,108715|4,108715|5) -
01:54:672 (114672|2,114672|0) - 01:55:958 (115958|4,115958|6) - same as above i said about 3 jack flow. it wil be better to move just one step like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10867174 if u accept this, please 01:54:833 (114833|1) - move this to col 1. rearranged based on your advice