=ㅅ=)v 고마웡Reba wrote:
올ㅋ 기대함
21:26 Garalulu: 갓씨상
21:26 Garalulu: 맵탯해주오
21:26 Kim_GodSSI: 예아
21:26 *Garalulu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145470 Miki Sayaka vs. Miki Sayaka (fw. Miki Sayaka) - squartatrice]
21:27 Garalulu: ^-'b
21:27 Kim_GodSSI: 지금 첫판이니
21:27 Kim_GodSSI: 이해점
21:27 Garalulu: 예
21:29 Kim_GodSSI: 롱놋의 상태가
21:29 Kim_GodSSI: 완전 따로 노는것 같음
21:29 Garalulu: ㅇㅅㅇ
21:29 Garalulu: 저걸 어케 배치해야할지
21:29 Kim_GodSSI: 노래랑 매치가 안되오
21:29 Garalulu: 고민중이오
21:29 Garalulu: 숏롱놋이
21:29 Kim_GodSSI: 롱놋을 좀 늘리셩
21:29 Garalulu: 소리 하나 있고
21:30 Garalulu: 조금 긴 롱놋이
21:30 Garalulu: 뒤 멜로디
21:30 Kim_GodSSI: 너무 매치가 안됨..
21:30 Garalulu: 단놋은 드럼
21:30 Garalulu: 흠
21:30 Kim_GodSSI: 그리고
21:30 Kim_GodSSI: 00:44:552 (44552|3) -
21:30 Kim_GodSSI: 이런거 지우셔유
21:30 Kim_GodSSI: 저건 좀 아님
21:31 Kim_GodSSI: 00:52:385 -
21:31 Garalulu: 얍
21:31 Kim_GodSSI: 여리 롱놋도
21:31 Kim_GodSSI: 여기
21:31 Garalulu: 그럼 저기 롱놋은
21:31 Garalulu: 1/4로 줄엿소
21:32 Kim_GodSSI: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6987932
21:32 Kim_GodSSI: 이렇게유 ?
21:32 Garalulu: 얍얍
21:32 Kim_GodSSI: ㅇㅋㅇㅋ
21:32 Garalulu: 후반 키아이가 좀
21:32 Kim_GodSSI: 그리고 다시 말 하지만
21:32 Garalulu: 롱놋을 이용해서
21:32 Kim_GodSSI: 01:21:717 -
21:32 Garalulu: 찍고싶은데
21:33 Kim_GodSSI: 여기 롱놋 오바유
21:33 Garalulu: ;ㅅ;
21:33 Kim_GodSSI: 그냥 단놋으로 하던가
21:33 Kim_GodSSI: 롱놋으로 하던가 하시오
21:33 Kim_GodSSI: 멜로디도 하나밖에 없는데
21:33 Garalulu: 그렇게 어나더에서 표현해서
21:33 Kim_GodSSI: 아니면 배치를 바꾸시오
21:34 Garalulu: 멜로디랑 긁는 소리
21:34 Garalulu: 2개
21:34 Kim_GodSSI: 예시 하나 보여드림
21:35 Kim_GodSSI: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6987952
21:35 Kim_GodSSI: 차라리 이게 훨신 편함
21:36 Garalulu: 좋아 보이네여
21:36 Garalulu: 근데
21:36 Garalulu: 01:22:384 -
21:36 Garalulu: 여기 노트가 없어져버리우
21:36 Garalulu: 떼는걸로 표현하는건가
21:36 Kim_GodSSI: 그
21:36 Kim_GodSSI: 그 뒷편은
21:36 Kim_GodSSI: 피아노 소리에 맞춰서
21:36 Kim_GodSSI: 단놋 하나씩 추가
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: 드럼소리 없으니까
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: 굳이 추가 할 의미는 없어보여서
21:37 Garalulu: 굳굳
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: 아
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6987970
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: 여기까지
21:37 Kim_GodSSI: 저기 뒷편도 소리 있어요
21:38 Kim_GodSSI: 01:22:966 -
21:38 Kim_GodSSI: 여기 단놋 하나는
21:38 Kim_GodSSI: 알아서 판단 하시고
21:38 Kim_GodSSI: 됫졍 ?
21:38 Kim_GodSSI: 뒤에 롱놋은 알아서 삶아먹든 볶아먹든 하세유
21:39 Garalulu: ㅇㅋㄷㅋ
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: 저건 제대로 정리 되야 모딩이 됨
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: 쓰레드 올려드릴까요
21:39 Garalulu: 저걸 어케 정리하지..
21:39 Garalulu: 옙옙
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: 넹
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: 그냥 테스트였는데
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: 모딩이 되뿌렸네
21:39 Kim_GodSSI: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:39 Garalulu: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
21:39 Garalulu: 근데 뒤 롱놋 자체가 고스트 노트는 아니라 흐음
2017-01-06 20:36 Garalulu: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145470 Miki Sayaka vs. Miki Sayaka (fw. Miki Sayaka) - squartatrice]
2017-01-06 20:36 Interlude-: 6성
2017-01-06 20:36 Interlude-: 실화냐
2017-01-06 20:36 Garalulu: 'ㅅ'
2017-01-06 20:42 Garalulu: 예.
2017-01-06 20:42 Interlude-: 00:42:053 - 여기부터
2017-01-06 20:42 Interlude-: 굳이 4개씩 안줘도 될거같은데
2017-01-06 20:42 Interlude-: 하나씩 줄이는건 어떻소
2017-01-06 20:43 Interlude-: 00:42:386 - 남긴다면 여길 남기는게
2017-01-06 20:43 Garalulu: 드럼에 노트 2개
2017-01-06 20:44 Interlude-: 잠만
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: 멜로디 2개 있어서
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: 각각 준듯
2017-01-06 20:44 Interlude-: 야설좀 쓰고
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: 아 멜로디 2개가 아니라
2017-01-06 20:44 Interlude-: 온다
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: 뒤에 약간 뭐랄까
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: 위웅위웅 휘몰아치는 소리에 하나 멜로디에 하나
2017-01-06 20:44 Garalulu: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 왔다
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 그렇군
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 00:46:135 (46135|3) -
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 이거 고스트같은데
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 멜로디라면
2017-01-06 20:45 Interlude-: 멜로디는 1/6 따라가는거같아오
2017-01-06 20:45 Garalulu: 이 멜로디가
2017-01-06 20:46 Garalulu: 딱 그 타이밍에 뽝 나오는게 아니라
2017-01-06 20:46 Garalulu: 아코디언같이 부는 느낌이라
2017-01-06 20:46 Garalulu: 살짝 느리게 나오는필
2017-01-06 20:46 Interlude-: 음 근데
2017-01-06 20:46 Interlude-: 1/6이 맞다 멜로디는
2017-01-06 20:46 Interlude-: 00:48:302 - 여기랑 같은 논리다
2017-01-06 20:47 Garalulu: 00:46:052 - 00:46:385 - 여기까지
2017-01-06 20:47 Garalulu: 1/6이라면
2017-01-06 20:47 Garalulu: 소리가 4개여야하는데
2017-01-06 20:47 Garalulu: 5개라 애매해서
2017-01-06 20:47 Interlude-: 00:55:052 (55052|2) - 왜 요거만 튀어나와
2017-01-06 20:47 Interlude-: 00:55:552 - 추가할거면 여기도
2017-01-06 20:47 Garalulu: ㅇㅋ
2017-01-06 20:48 Interlude-: 00:57:718 -
2017-01-06 20:48 Interlude-: 여기 중간중간에
2017-01-06 20:48 Interlude-: 비어있는거
2017-01-06 20:48 Interlude-: 넣어도 괜찮을거같은데
2017-01-06 20:48 Interlude-: 그리구
2017-01-06 20:48 Garalulu: 00:57:802 -
2017-01-06 20:48 Garalulu: 이런곳?
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 00:57:718 - 00:58:052 - 00:58:385 -
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 요 세군데만 노트가 많아야 할거같오
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 크래시가 포함되어있으니
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 나머진 하나씩 줄이는거도 나쁘지 않을거같다
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 00:57:802 - 00:57:968 - 00:58:302 - 00:58:468 -
2017-01-06 20:49 Interlude-: 요 네군데는 확실히 소리 있더
2017-01-06 20:50 Garalulu: 요기 파트는 어나더와 마찬가지로
2017-01-06 20:50 Garalulu: 쾅쾅이를 강조하고 싶었기 때문에
2017-01-06 20:50 Garalulu: 안넣었소
2017-01-06 20:50 Interlude-: 알겟다
2017-01-06 20:50 Interlude-: 01:01:384 - 여기 계단식
2017-01-06 20:50 Interlude-: 멜로디 있는거요?
2017-01-06 20:50 Interlude-: 잘 안들리는데
2017-01-06 20:50 Interlude-: 피아노네
2017-01-06 20:51 Garalulu: 잘 들어보면
2017-01-06 20:51 Garalulu: 있소
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 쉬는구간 만들어도 될거같은뎀
2017-01-06 20:51 Garalulu: 이 음원파일이
2017-01-06 20:51 Garalulu: 소리가 좀 작은듯
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 메인만 따라가서
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 마이너한 피아노 따라가는것보단
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 쉬는구간겸으로 롱놋으로 채워넣어도 될거같다
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 01:12:051 -
2017-01-06 20:51 Interlude-: 그리고 본격적으로 분위기가 고조되는곳이 여기부터니
2017-01-06 20:52 Interlude-: 전에 좀 줄이는거도 나쁘지 않을거같다
2017-01-06 20:52 Garalulu: 고려해보겠소
2017-01-06 20:52 Interlude-: 알갯다
2017-01-06 20:52 Interlude-: 01:23:050 -
2017-01-06 20:52 Interlude-: 여기구간 전부 삭제 추천
2017-01-06 20:52 Interlude-: ㅣㅏ어;미낭러;ㅣㅏㄴ얼;ㅣㅁㄴ알;ㅓㅁㄴ이ㅏ럼니;ㅏㅇㄹ
2017-01-06 20:53 Garalulu: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
2017-01-06 20:53 Garalulu: 저거 롱놋 위치
2017-01-06 20:53 Garalulu: 맞추느라
2017-01-06 20:53 Garalulu: 2시간정도 쓴듯
2017-01-06 20:54 Interlude-: 01:23:383 (83383|0,83633|5,84383|5,84883|1,85716|1) -
2017-01-06 20:54 Interlude-: 이런거
2017-01-06 20:54 Interlude-: 조금 더 길어도 될거같은데
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 01:33:716 - 마무으리 노트 추가?
2017-01-06 20:55 Garalulu: 더 난잡해질거같아서 일단패스
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 그리 난잡하게 보이지도 않을거같은게 이미
2017-01-06 20:55 Garalulu: 노트 하나더?
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 옆에
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 베이스라인 롱놋이 같은 간격을 유지해줘서
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 일단 고구려 해보시오
2017-01-06 20:55 Interlude-: 음 변속이 없는게 좀 아쉽군
2017-01-06 20:56 Garalulu: 변속 넣을예정
2017-01-06 20:56 Garalulu: 다만들고
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 음
2017-01-06 20:57 Garalulu: 롱잡이 노래와 안 어울리오?
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 01:22:384 - 여기 스크래치
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 넣어도 될거같은데
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 롱잡?
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 솔직히
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 01:33:716 - 여기까지 하고
2017-01-06 20:57 Interlude-: 나머지 븜스해도 괜찮을거같긴 한데
2017-01-06 20:58 Interlude-: 난 일단 안읽히니 뭐라고 해줄수는 없을거같오
2017-01-06 20:58 Garalulu: 00:26:719 - 00:42:719 - 여기가 븜스파트
2017-01-06 20:58 Garalulu: 01:23:050 - 01:41:716 -
2017-01-06 20:58 Garalulu: 여기가 롱놋파트
2017-01-06 20:58 Interlude-: 텟플 부탁하고
2017-01-06 20:58 Interlude-: 물어봐야할듯
2017-01-06 20:58 Interlude-: 난 7키는 잘 모르니
2017-01-06 20:58 Garalulu: ㅇㅋㄷㅋ
2017-01-06 20:59 Garalulu: ;ㅅ;
2017-01-06 20:59 Interlude-: 배경 좋으다
2017-01-06 20:59 Garalulu: 히히
2017-01-06 20:59 Garalulu: 열심히 골랐지
2017-01-06 21:00 Interlude-: 포스팅 한다
2017-01-06 21:00 Interlude-: 근데 너무 날로먹는거같은데
2017-01-06 21:00 Interlude-: 미안하다
2017-01-06 21:00 Garalulu: 그러면
2017-01-06 21:00 Garalulu: 다른 난이도도 모딩하면되징
2017-01-06 21:00 Garalulu: ㅋ
2017-01-06 21:00 Interlude-: ㅋ
2017-01-06 21:00 Interlude-: 시로
2017-01-06 21:00 Garalulu: shirou
2017-01-06 21:01 Interlude-: 00:26:719 -
2017-01-06 21:01 Interlude-: 어나더랑
2017-01-06 21:01 Interlude-: 막난이랑
2017-01-06 21:01 Interlude-: 갭 여기 좀 심한거같다
2017-01-06 21:01 Interlude-: 너무 쉽다 솔직히
2017-01-06 21:01 Garalulu: 4.5성치고
2017-01-06 21:01 Garalulu: 어렵던뎅
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 음
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 그건 아니구
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 확실히 쉽다
2017-01-06 21:02 Garalulu: 내맵이라 슬럼프왔나
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 저기 막난처럼 초반 버스트를 노려보는거도
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 나쁘지 않을거같은데
2017-01-06 21:02 Interlude-: 00:27:053 - 여기에 3개주고
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 00:26:886 - 여기에 2개주는식으로만 해도
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 충분할거같다
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 너무 오르면
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 두개 다 2개로 해도
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 멜로디에만 3개씩 박는거도 좋을듯
2017-01-06 21:03 Garalulu: 2 111 2 구성이라 쉽나보군
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 그렇다
2017-01-06 21:03 Interlude-: 너무 쉽다
2017-01-06 21:04 Garalulu: 중간 난이도를 하나 더 만들긴 귀찮구
2017-01-06 21:04 Interlude-: 담난이도가 6성 넘어가니
2017-01-06 21:04 Interlude-: 4.8정도 노려도 좋을듯
col=1~7Garalulu wrote:
archer
map
mod
please
=D
hi
THX GRLLArcherLove wrote:
I'M THE VERY FIRST NON-KOREAN MOD HIcol=1~7Garalulu wrote:
archer
map
mod
please
=D
hi
beginner
00:03:053 (3053|4) - move to 3 for playability (?) jack in beginner not too good imo ;;
00:11:386 (11386|2) - move to 5?
00:14:719 (14719|1) - move to 6? okidoki
00:19:386 (19386|4) - move to 2? or 3?
00:22:719 (22719|5) - move to 7? rearranged
00:57:718 (57718|3,58052|3,58385|3) - ... change to 3-4-5? good
01:33:383 (93383|0) - move to 2? -> add 01:33:716 - at 6? oh thx
many 1/4 jack here.. I think not too good for beginner but it's up to you that's not too hard so okay
hyper
00:51:885 (51885|2,52052|1,52218|0) - ctrl+j? keep this owo
another
wow save layering bms good
SAYAKARCHER =DDDDD
NO PROB
GL GRLL
Thanks some fixed and bit changedArcherLove wrote:
I'M THE VERY FIRST NON-KOREAN MOD HIcol=1~7Garalulu wrote:
archer
map
mod
please
=D
hi
wonki normal
00:38:053 (38053|3,38386|4) - move to 5-7?
00:42:053 (42053|5,42219|3,42386|1,42553|3,42719|0,42719|5) - http://puu.sh/tsRnl/4479bbd7e4.jpg ?
01:18:384 (78384|1,78551|5,78717|3,78717|6) - http://puu.sh/tsRq0/93aaa3a62e.jpg ?
01:54:383 (114383|6,114549|6,114716|4,114883|4) - http://puu.sh/tsRse/772963247d.jpg ?
very nice layering
SAYAKARCHER =DDDDD
NO PROB
GL GRLL
PPAEAEAEAEG u shit :^D thx!!ArcherLove wrote:
ppaeaeaeaeg my star
thx for modding!!Adiopulse wrote:
Adiopulse's New Album Mod All Diffs (i think)Beginner-------------------------------------
00:06:719 you should have the ln with that low piano note like this one 00:08:719 (8719|2) I made ln to express 1/2 stream melody. tp1_26.wav is not expressed.
00:44:052 (44052|4) delete this and add a ln here 00:43:885 to big white line to emphasize the drums more. maybe try it in the sections after too already good for beginner now
Hyper-------------------------------------------
01:52:216 add notes for the drum here aswell fixed
Another---------------------------------------------
00:46:135 (46135|3) delete because you should just focus on the drums, that note is for the stings which are 1/3 at this part snapped anyway I can't be sure of this is 1/3 or whatever so keeped
00:52:385 ctrl+h the lns for pitch and redo the section, it will play alot better, if you do that just move this over 1 col left 00:54:385 (54385|1,54468|2,54552|3,54635|4) already good cuz of symmetry LN
Saya -----------------------------------------------
00:34:719 (34719|3) move to col 6 Why?
Thx for long-detail mod!!!! <3Cipse wrote:
RRM Modding Queue
One diff mod is OP
With any images, the suggestion is on the left and original is on the right
0 1 2 3 4 5 6
Beginner
Consistency
Group Changes
The LN usage between 00:07:053 - and 00:23:053 - is inconsistent. I can't tell why you've used them instead of SNs. The piano sounds the same. As an example, the piano between 00:16:719 - and 00:17:719 - sounds the same as the piano 00:17:719 - and 00:18:719 -, minus the pitch. The volume is pretty much the same and the piano plays on every 1/2 snap. The violins are also the same, they play every 1/1 snap and play the same pitch for each whole bar. It can't be mapping the heartbeats as well, since some LNs are mapped without them being present - such as 00:16:719 (16719|0) - and 00:08:719 (8719|2) -.
Remove all the LNs between the two time stamps and replace them with SNs
I used LN at 1/2 piano sound that is not repetitive pitch like this 00:06:886 . 00:16:719 this part is my mistake. removed 00:16:719 (16719|0) and move 00:16:719 (16719|4) to 1.
With the kicks, it seems like you're mapping doubles on the first beat of the bar and whenever they have 1/2, or shorter, snaps. Otherwise, you're using singles. There are a few places where you haven't added doubles for kicks with 1/2 snaps, so add them in;
I used double at starting point of measure only. To make 01:30:716 (90716|4) double is unnecessary. 01:27:716 - 01:28:383 is double for melody+drum emphasis. 01:50:216 (110216|5,110716|4) doesn't have short crash and are different structure with 01:47:049 - 01:48:049 etc.
There are places in this song where there are crashes. You've mapped some with doubles but you've left others as singles. Choose to map them all as singles or all as doubles. I'd prefer if you mapped them all as doubles, as it gives more variety to the difficulty.
These crashes are currently singles. There are a few places where I didn't want to add doubles, because there was another note in the 1/2 snap before it, like 01:51:883 (111883|5) - and 01:52:049 (112049|3) -00:41:386 (41386|3) -
01:20:384 (80384|2) -
01:20:717 (80717|4) -
01:21:051 (81051|2) -
01:31:883 (91883|1) -
01:33:716 (93716|4) -
01:41:383 (101383|1) - Fixed
01:42:216 (102216|6) -
01:42:549 (102549|4) -
01:42:883 (102883|2) -
01:43:383 (103383|5) -
01:43:716 (103716|3) -
01:44:049 (104049|1) -
01:46:383 (106383|4) -
01:46:716 (106716|2) -
01:49:049 (109049|0) -
01:49:383 (109383|2) -
It is important to control amount when putting note in mapping.
These crashes are already doubles;00:55:552 (55552|6,55552|0) -
01:11:384 (71384|1,71384|5) -
01:11:717 (71717|4,71717|2) -
01:18:051 (78051|0,78051|2) -
01:19:384 (79384|2,79384|4) -
01:32:716 (92716|0,92716|2) -
01:33:049 (93049|4,93049|6) -
01:33:383 (93383|2,93383|0) -
01:44:883 (104883|6,104883|0) -
01:45:383 (105383|6,105383|0) -
01:45:883 (105883|5,105883|2) -
01:47:549 (107549|3,107549|0) -
01:48:049 (108049|3,108049|0) -
01:48:549 (108549|5,108549|2) -
same reason with above
I think you should remap between 00:42:719 - and 00:50:718 -. I've made a separate difficulty which is just this section mapped in the way I'd want it to be, plus an extra bar before and after. The difficulty is called "Easy" and you can find it here: https://puu.sh/u3Eyi/8ffe957ab5.txt
The reasons for remapping this section are in the box below;Between 00:42:719 - and 00:50:718 - is confusing to play because you're leaving out a strong kick/violin sound each bar, like at 00:43:885 - and 00:45:885 -. You're also inconsistently mapping the ends of the bars. The ends of each bar all have kicks with are snapped at 1/2, or shorter, but in three out of four bars you've left out a note on the 1/1 snap, like at 00:44:385 -. If you're now adding doubles to crashes, this section needs doubles added to them as well - there are a lot of them here
From 00:50:718 - to 01:01:384 -, you only need to add doubles to the crashes, if you accepted the suggestion earlier. There are a few other bits but that will be covered later in the mod - I'll leave it until then
I only concentrated at melody process. and only double at starting point of measure. your suggestion is good but I keep this.
Single Changes
00:16:719 (16719|4,16719|0) - remove the double. The piano and violins aren't louder at this point and there isn't a heartbeat sound effect Fixed
00:24:719 (24719|6,24719|2) - same as above That LN can express background sound and 1/2 melody.
01:32:383 (92383|3) - add note here, for the kick. It's also the start of the bar so it feels weird to leave it out already double
01:55:049 (115049|0) - this could be a double, since it's the start of a new section and it has a crash-like sound Fixed
Patterning
Some of the patterns here will be based off the original Beginner difficulty. Because of that, portions of this section may become redundant
About pitch relevancy, I didn't want this too pitch-dependency. Only for finger balance.
Between 00:02:719 - and 00:10:386 -, I'm assuming you're following pitch relevancy
00:03:053 (3053|4,3386|4) - move these to {6} and 00:03:719 (3719|6) - to {4}, since 00:03:719 - has a lower pitch
00:04:053 (4053|4) - is not the same pitch as 00:03:386 -. Since it's also causing a large hand imbalance, move it to the left hand, preferably {2}. Then move 00:04:386 (4386|2) - to {0}, to keep the same shape plus pitch relevancy in relation to the above note. You don't want to move them to {3} and {2} respectively and have 00:04:719 (4719|5,5053|3) - on {1} and {0} because that will put too many notes in the left hand
Move 00:05:053 (5053|3) - to {1} and 00:05:386 (5386|1) - to {3}, to follow pitch relevancy. It doesn't ruin hand balance either. 00:05:719 (5719|3) - now goes to {4}. If you want a stair pattern, the note at 00:05:053 - can go to {2}. If you don't, 00:06:053 (6053|5) - can go to {6} if you want; column 5 was played earlier than 6, 00:04:719 (4719|5) - compared to 00:03:386 (3386|6) -
Move 00:08:719 (8719|2) - to {1}. It ruins the {6,4,2} pattern before but it means it doesn't stack with 00:07:719 (7719|2) - and it has the same pitch as 00:09:719 (9719|5) -, so it's nice for the same finger to play it, even if it is on different hands. You did the same for 00:06:719 (6719|2,7053|4,7719|2) -, where all the notes are the same pitch and are played with only the index fingers.
Move 00:10:386 (10386|3) - to {2} and 00:10:719 (10719|6) - to {1}. Pitch wise, it's nice because the notes are descending one column (if you ignore the spacebar), like the pitches. In terms of playability, the patterns are too right heavy, so you should move notes to the left hand anyway. If you have done this, 00:11:053 (11053|2,11386|2) - obviously should go in the RH now, preferably {6} since {4} and {5} were played more recently
00:12:053 (12053|4,12386|2,12719|5,13053|2,13386|4,13719|1,14053|4,14386|2,14719|5) - there doesn't seem to be a musical reason explaining why these notes are alternating between {1}, {2}, {4} and {5}. Include {0}, {3} and {6} if you're using random patterns, or follow pitch relevancy
Since 00:15:053 (15053|3) - has the same pitch as 00:14:719 (14719|5) -, it would be nice for it to be played by the same finger, explained before. Move to {1}. The next two notes are also in the RH, so you should put it in the LH anyway for hand balance
00:17:719 (17719|6,18053|4,18386|2,18719|0) - this pattern fits well because the notes are descending in pitch. However, 00:16:719 (16719|4,17719|6,18053|4) - is uncomfortable because you're having three notes in a row in the same hand, using only two columns and you're having an LN release in one hand whilst playing a SN in the same hand at the same time. You should therefore rearrange the notes in the previous bars. I'd move 00:15:719 (15719|6) - to {4} and 00:16:053 (16053|4) - to {6} to follow pitch relevancy. Also following pitch relevancy, 00:16:386 (16386|2) - can be moved to {3} and the LN at 00:16:719 - can be moved to {0}, to show the descending pitch. The SN at 00:16:719 - should be deleted now, as it was inconsistent. Now, 00:17:719 (17719|6) - and 00:18:719 (18719|0) - can be moved to {5} and {1} if you want. The new pattern still shows that the pitch is going down but has better column balance
00:19:053 (19053|4,19386|4) - can go to {6} if you accepted the above. Otherwise move it to {5}. Basically, means that you don't have random stacks on column {4}
Like with before, I don't see a reason why 00:20:053 (20053|2,20386|4,20719|1,21053|4,21386|2,21719|5,22053|2,22386|4,22719|1) - would alternate between {1}, {2}, {4} and {5}. Include the other columns and/or follow pitch relevancy
Move 00:19:719 (19719|6) - to the LH, since there was a jack with the two notes before. It makes it easier on the player and prevents the patterns from being too right heavy
00:24:053 (24053|2) - move to {6}. It will then make a {6,4,2} stair with 00:24:386 (24386|4,24719|2) -, follows pitch relevancy and is hand balanced. The SN at 00:24:719 - should also be deleted, which used to be in {6}
00:28:053 (28053|4,28386|4) - should not be a jack. Jacks should only be used to represent repeated sounds at the same pitch, which there isn't at these points. Otherwise, you create a needlessly uncomfortable pattern. If you're doing it because of the repeated kicks, remove it as well. The kicks are everywhere and only making them jacks at a few points is inconsistent. It does not apply to 00:27:053 (27053|2,27386|2) -, as the piano repeats the pitch
The same applies to the following;00:29:053 (29053|3,29386|3) -
00:31:053 (31053|2,31386|2) -
00:32:053 (32053|4,32386|4) -
00:33:053 (33053|3,33386|3) -
rearranged
00:35:053 (35053|2,35386|4) - could be a jack due to the piano repeating the pitch. If 00:27:053 (27053|2,27386|2) - is a jack, this should be as well, for consistency. The same applies if you remove the jack. I'd prefer if you kept the jack for pitch relevancy and because it is consistent with the pitch relevant jacks in the beginning of this difficulty
00:34:719 (34719|6,34719|0,35053|2,35386|4,35719|6,35719|1,36053|4,36386|2) - in my opinion, there is no reason for these bars to be almost identical mirrors of each other. I'm not going to repeat this point; they're easy to find if you want to remove them and if you don't I'm just wasting time
00:42:719 - to 01:01:384 - should be remapped, as I stated in the consistency section, so there isn't any point in me going over the patterns
01:04:051 (64051|0) - move to the RH. In terms of pitch relevancy, it should be in a higher column than 01:03:717 (63717|1) -. In terms of playability, I find that playing multiple notes in one hand uncomfortable, minus bursts, so it should be in the RH anyway. The same applies to 01:09:384 (69384|6) -, except move to the LH
Change 01:13:384 (73384|3,73717|1,74051|2,74384|0) - to {4,3,2,1}. It avoids having three notes in the LH in a row, or four if you are a left spacer, and therefore has better hand balance. It additionally follows pitch relevancy. If you did this, move 01:15:051 (75051|1) - to {0}, so that it doesn't create a jack with 01:14:384 (74384|1) -, and 01:15:717 (75717|5) - can optionally be moved to {6} for symmetry rearranged
01:15:384 (75384|3,75717|5,76051|3,76384|5,76717|6,77051|4) - this is very right heavy, even more so if the player is a right spacer. Change your pattern to the following;Reasoning01:17:384 (77384|0,78051|0) - remove this jack. There is no prominent repeated sound which means there is no reason to keep it It's too hard to call a jack.Even though 01:16:051 (76051|3) - is the same pitch as 01:15:384 (75384|3) -, I'd move it to {1} to accommodate for the following pattern
Moving 01:16:051 (76051|3,76384|5) - to {1,2} puts notes in the LH, for hand balance, and allows the next to notes to follow pitch relevancy by being in a higher column without being too heavy on one hand
Moving 01:16:717 (76717|6) - to {5} gives its pattern symmetry with the previous one
01:45:883 (105883|2,106716|2) - there isn't a reason for these to be in the same column, as the synth pitches are different. I'd move 01:45:883 (105883|2) - to {1} so that the chord at 01:45:883 - is played by the middle fingers of both hands
01:47:049 (107049|3,107549|3,108049|3) - move this into the RH. If the player is a left spacer, 01:46:716 (106716|2,107049|0,107049|3) - will be an uncomfortable pattern to play and the entire pattern is very left heavy rearranged
01:48:549 (108549|2,109383|2) - again, no reason for these to be in the same column, move one note out
01:52:883 (112883|3,112883|4,113383|6,113383|5) - is uncomfortable to play because it contains 01:52:883 (112883|4,113383|6,113383|5) -, meaning that the player has to let go of an LNs whilst playing two other LNs in the same hand. It is even more uncomfortable if the player is a right space, meaning they have to release two LNs instead. Change to the following;ReasoningThe notes at 01:52:383 -, 01:52:883 - and 01:53:383 - are rearranged in such a way that they are symmetrical. I think it's better than the original even though, to be completely honest, it's still quite ugly. If you want it to look better, change one LN from 01:52:883 - and 01:53:383 - into an SN. Make sure they're in different hands if you do it, to help with hand balance. The LN at 01:53:383 - should be in the opposite hand as 01:55:049 (115049|0) -, so if you haven't moved it, the second LN should be in the RH and the first in the LH. This is more comfortable than releasing a LN and playing a note in the same hand at the same time
01:52:049 (112049|2,112383|0,112383|3) - is uncomfortable but it is better than putting it in {2} or {4}, since {0+2,1} and {4+6,5} are more uncomfortable. Obviously, {1} or {5} would create jacks and be the most uncomfortable pattern
01:52:049 (112049|3) - got moved to {2} to allow the SN at 01:52:383 - to be in {3}
rearranged.
You don't seem to be mapping 01:55:049 - to the end with PR. Because of that, there is no reason to have stacks in any column. Spread the notes out between the columns. Examples in the box;01:55:049 (115049|0,116049|0) - and 01:55:383 (115383|6,116383|6) - are stacked even though they don't have the same pitches
01:58:049 (118049|0,119049|0,120383|0) - one of these notes should go into {1}, as it's empty and {0} is relatively full
02:00:716 (120716|6,121049|5,121383|4) - having three notes in one hand is bad for hand balance and is unjustified, considering that it isn't following pitch relevancy. Move one or two notes to the LH
02:01:716 (121716|2,122049|0,122383|1,122716|2,123049|3,123383|1) - is also left heavy, more so than the above pattern. This would be made worse if the player is a left spacer. Move two or three notes to the RH
02:05:383 (125383|2,125716|3,126383|2,126716|3) - should spread the notes out between the columns as the column imbalance is uncomfortable. Again, if the player is a left spacer, this pattern will also be left heavy
Thx for catching! yeap I copied hitsound from bms :3 Hsing each note manually xDajeemaniz wrote:
lulu op
impressive chart, i just going to mod the hitsound so hopefully it helps
[General]
i was shocked how perfect the hitsound are until i found (are they a direct copy from bms?) just be aware with the hitsound delay, you should recheck them
[sayakanother]
01:10:717 (70717|4,71384|0) - add bd_dr.wav
01:10:717 (70717|5,71384|1) - add cym_8ss.wav
01:31:049 (91049|4) - 01:32:716 (92716|3,93049|1) - add cym_8c.wav
01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|5,91716|1,91883|0) - 01:32:216 (92216|6,92383|0,92549|1) - add cym_16c2.wav
additionally you missed the claps every 1/1 in kiai, you could add it
that's all i could found, you can apply the hitsound to lower diffs using sayakanother as reference..
good luck :3/
Garalulu wrote:
Cipse wrote:
Beginner
Patterning
Some of the patterns here will be based off the original Beginner difficulty. Because of that, portions of this section may become redundant
About pitch relevancy, I didn't want this too pitch-dependency. Only for finger balance.
Between 00:02:719 - and 00:10:386 -, I'm assuming you're following pitch relevancy
00:03:053 (3053|4,3386|4) - move these to {6} and 00:03:719 (3719|6) - to {4}, since 00:03:719 - has a lower pitch
00:04:053 (4053|4) - is not the same pitch as 00:03:386 -. Since it's also causing a large hand imbalance, move it to the left hand, preferably {2}. Then move 00:04:386 (4386|2) - to {0}, to keep the same shape plus pitch relevancy in relation to the above note. You don't want to move them to {3} and {2} respectively and have 00:04:719 (4719|5,5053|3) - on {1} and {0} because that will put too many notes in the left hand
Move 00:05:053 (5053|3) - to {1} and 00:05:386 (5386|1) - to {3}, to follow pitch relevancy. It doesn't ruin hand balance either. 00:05:719 (5719|3) - now goes to {4}. If you want a stair pattern, the note at 00:05:053 - can go to {2}. If you don't, 00:06:053 (6053|5) - can go to {6} if you want; column 5 was played earlier than 6, 00:04:719 (4719|5) - compared to 00:03:386 (3386|6) -
Move 00:08:719 (8719|2) - to {1}. It ruins the {6,4,2} pattern before but it means it doesn't stack with 00:07:719 (7719|2) - and it has the same pitch as 00:09:719 (9719|5) -, so it's nice for the same finger to play it, even if it is on different hands. You did the same for 00:06:719 (6719|2,7053|4,7719|2) -, where all the notes are the same pitch and are played with only the index fingers.
Move 00:10:386 (10386|3) - to {2} and 00:10:719 (10719|6) - to {1}. Pitch wise, it's nice because the notes are descending one column (if you ignore the spacebar), like the pitches. In terms of playability, the patterns are too right heavy, so you should move notes to the left hand anyway. If you have done this, 00:11:053 (11053|2,11386|2) - obviously should go in the RH now, preferably {6} since {4} and {5} were played more recently
00:12:053 (12053|4,12386|2,12719|5,13053|2,13386|4,13719|1,14053|4,14386|2,14719|5) - there doesn't seem to be a musical reason explaining why these notes are alternating between {1}, {2}, {4} and {5}. Include {0}, {3} and {6} if you're using random patterns, or follow pitch relevancy
Since 00:15:053 (15053|3) - has the same pitch as 00:14:719 (14719|5) -, it would be nice for it to be played by the same finger, explained before. Move to {1}. The next two notes are also in the RH, so you should put it in the LH anyway for hand balance
00:17:719 (17719|6,18053|4,18386|2,18719|0) - this pattern fits well because the notes are descending in pitch. However, 00:16:719 (16719|4,17719|6,18053|4) - is uncomfortable because you're having three notes in a row in the same hand, using only two columns and you're having an LN release in one hand whilst playing a SN in the same hand at the same time. You should therefore rearrange the notes in the previous bars. I'd move 00:15:719 (15719|6) - to {4} and 00:16:053 (16053|4) - to {6} to follow pitch relevancy. Also following pitch relevancy, 00:16:386 (16386|2) - can be moved to {3} and the LN at 00:16:719 - can be moved to {0}, to show the descending pitch. The SN at 00:16:719 - should be deleted now, as it was inconsistent. Now, 00:17:719 (17719|6) - and 00:18:719 (18719|0) - can be moved to {5} and {1} if you want. The new pattern still shows that the pitch is going down but has better column balance
00:19:053 (19053|4,19386|4) - can go to {6} if you accepted the above. Otherwise move it to {5}. Basically, means that you don't have random stacks on column {4}
Like with before, I don't see a reason why 00:20:053 (20053|2,20386|4,20719|1,21053|4,21386|2,21719|5,22053|2,22386|4,22719|1) - would alternate between {1}, {2}, {4} and {5}. Include the other columns and/or follow pitch relevancy
Move 00:19:719 (19719|6) - to the LH, since there was a jack with the two notes before. It makes it easier on the player and prevents the patterns from being too right heavy
00:24:053 (24053|2) - move to {6}. It will then make a {6,4,2} stair with 00:24:386 (24386|4,24719|2) -, follows pitch relevancy and is hand balanced. The SN at 00:24:719 - should also be deleted, which used to be in {6}
still think about kiai part, maybe remap that owoajeemaniz wrote:
additionally,
01:01:384 (61384|4,61718|5,62051|6,62384|0,62717|0,63051|2,63384|1,63717|0,64051|0,64384|4,64717|2,65051|6,65384|2,65718|0,66051|6,66384|4) - you can copy these grc_**.wav to this part 01:12:051 - until 01:21:051 - , those piano feels empty in there
and 01:23:383 (83383|6,84050|0,84716|5,85383|0,86050|3,86716|6,87383|5,88050|3,88716|4,89383|2,90050|3,90716|4) - still not have C / clap on kiai..
01:31:383 (91383|6,91716|1,92049|5,92383|0) - lol i think you can use soft-hitclap in sample because the notes already full
/w/
>w<)bWonki wrote:
호이하퍼00:04:219 (4219|2) - 손꼬임 방지를 위해 2로 이동 피아노 치는 느낌을 표현했수다. 초반에 같은 col에 있는 노트들은 다 같은 음
00:05:553 (5553|2) - 5 이것두
00:11:219 (11219|3) - 7로 00:11:386 (11386|4,11553|3,11719|2) - 이부분을 좀더 편하게 치기위해 여기도 위와 같은 이유
00:12:719 (12719|1) - 1로 모양이 더이쁘당 Fixed
00:13:386 (13386|4,13553|2) - 우측으로 한칸씩이동 Fixed
00:20:969 - 음있음 일부러 하이퍼에는 안넣었우 1/1 한 스냅 속에서만 1/4를 표현하기위해
00:25:719 - 00:25:969 (25969|2,26053|1,26136|0,26219|6,26303|5,26386|4) - 이 모양이 이쁘고, 또 00:26:386 - 00:26:719 이 부분은 깔짝거리는 소리와 피아노의 왓다갓다 하는 음이 트릴이 어울릴 것 같아서 표현했수
00:31:886 - 이렇게 두 칸씩 띄어서 하는걸 희망함 한칸씩은 너무어렵 요건 생각해 보겠음
00:39:886 - 여기도 위와 마찬가지로 해줬으면 위와 같음어나00:11:886 (11886|3) - 2 넘치기업렵다 올라갔다 내려갔다 하는 음에 의해 필연적이고, 잘 들어보면 스페가 다 같은음
00:50:052 - 이게더 쉬울거같은디 어나더에서는 2개를 연타하는 느낌이고, 막난은 짤연 느낌이라 더 어려움
00:52:552 (52552|4) - 7로 옮겨서 그냥 67에 두는게 좋아보임 7에 4개 연속 나오는건 별로 맘에안들고, 00:52:385 (52385|5,52385|6,52552|4,52552|5,52718|3,52718|4,52718|6) - 이 구조에 만족하는중
01:20:051 - 좀더 깔금 Fixed
01:41:383 - 아무래도 4놋이 어울림 노트량 조정에 관해서 조금 생각해 보겠소
01:54:716 (114716|3,114799|4) - 이거 빡침 딱 조음 꺅막난00:28:886 - 갈금 패턴이 너무 단순해지는 느낌이라 일단 킵
00:29:386 - 패턴에 관해 좀더 생각해봐야겠우
01:12:134 - 01:12:801 - 이런곳들은 왜 1놋임 드럼의 칫칫 노트를 01:12:217 - 01:12:384 - 요런 위치만 넣음
01:51:883 (111883|6,111938|5) - 자리바꾸는게 좋을거같음 Rearranged
Thx for modding!!Etsu wrote:
Hello o/
Mania mod request from my queue (NM)
[General]Columns:
0|1|2|3|4|5|6[Another]
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[Hyper]
- 00:02:719 (2719|4) - move column 0? i like column 0|6 00:02:719 (2719|6,2719|0) - also you could add a note for triple the sound is strong similar like 00:10:719 - is better for this diff imo Add one note at 0
- 00:25:803 (25803|3) - move column 4 to stairs piano It's for pitch
- 00:10:719 (10719|4) - move column 5 Keep this
- 00:41:886 (41886|2) - move column 1? Fixed
- 01:00:884 - add note? like 01:00:551 - , 00:59:218 - and 1/1 you map 4 note for cymbal strong Keep this for note amount balance
- 01:01:218 - ^ same reason with above
- 01:01:384 - ^ same reason with above
- 01:49:549 - missing note? for this part 01:44:383 - 01:49:716 at another, I didn't put any notes for piano.
- 01:58:049 (118049|2) - move column 1 Fixed
- 02:01:716 - add note sound similar like 02:00:383 -It's not same.
- 02:03:049 - ^ since in diff hyper have 3 note but here no? Deleted one note at hyper
- 02:05:716 - ^ ?
- 00:18:053 (18053|2) - move column 1? Keep this
- 01:09:384 (69384|1) - maybe column 0 for variation Keep this
- 01:52:549 (112549|2) - move column 1 Keep this
- 02:02:049 (122049|6,122049|3,122049|2) - delete a note no strong piano also consider like diff another have 2 note? Fixed
thanks some are fixedEtsu wrote:
Hello o/
[Wonki's Normal]
- 00:03:053 - 00:08:719 - i would put note 1/1 for piano imo need map this section is better for this normal diff for the spread of the next diff is general sound considering like 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) -
- 00:25:053 (25053|1,25386|3) - control + g since is some repetitive like 00:34:386 (34386|0,34553|3,34719|6,35053|1,35386|3,35719|5) - and 00:37:386 (37386|0,37719|2,38053|3) -
- 00:48:718 (48718|6,48718|6) - delete a note is on top of another note (check aimod)
- 01:09:051 (69051|3) - column 2 and 01:09:384 (69384|1) - column 0?
- 01:22:050 - feel that missing note here
- 01:28:216 (88216|4) - i like column 2 as stairs combine better the piano
Thx for modding owoNiks wrote:
- halo Mod request
- Offset :: Perfect!
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[Beginer]- 00:52:718 (52718|1) - 1번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 몰려있네요 예
- 01:05:384 (65384|2) - 2번라인으로 이동 2번에 너무 없네요 예
- 01:48:549 (108549|5,108549|2) - 2번 및 5번으로 이동 (01:45:883 (105883|2,105883|5) - 같은곳에있으니 적합하지 않은 느낌이네요) 대칭 조아다
- 02:04:049 (124049|2,124383|1) - 6번 및 5번으로 이동 왼손에 너무 몰려있습니다 재배치했수다
[Hyper]- 00:20:969 - 의도적인 부분인가요? 예
- 00:41:053 - 노트 추가 (00:40:719 - ) 노트 밸런스를 위해 킵
- 00:41:219 - 이부분은 피아노 소리때문에 노트를 2개로둔건가요?
위에 적은것처럼 00:41:053 - 이부분에 노트를 추가하고 00:39:219 (39219|6) - 이부분처럼 한개로하는게 어떨까요 피아노 때문이 맞소. 이 패턴은 킵하겠소- 01:55:883 - 01:57:216 (117216|0,117383|0) - 요 패턴이 빠졌습니다 재배치 완료
[Another]- 00:41:219 - 노트 2개? 3개는 많다느껴집니다 예
- 01:34:549 (94549|3) - 5번라인으로 이동 예
- 02:03:049 (123049|3) - 이 히트사운드 맞는음 맞겠죠?
왠지 갑자기 툭튀는 기분이들어서.. 노래 자체가 그럽디다
[Sayakather]
00:18:719 (18719|5,19386|5) - 2번라인으로 이동
00:19:719 - 위에부분도그렇고 이부분도 그렇고 너무 6,7번에 몰려있어서 치는데 어색함이 많이 느껴졌습니다
1/1마다 12 67이 번갈아가면서 반복되는 구조로 매핑하였었습니다. 리어레인지
오랜만에 퀄리티 굉장한맵을 보고갑니당
Thx for mod :3Ereedon wrote:
Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao too fast lmao
[Beginner]
00:15:719 (15719|6,16053|4,16386|2,16719|0) - I'd change this part to more "pitch-following" part Rearranged
01:04:051 (64051|0) - Isn't that high pitch?
01:05:718 (65718|3,66051|5,66384|4) - move one column -->
from 01:06:717 - to 01:10:717 - <- this part needs to be fixed (pitch issue)
01:49:716 - to 01:52:383 - <--- PITCH
I don't want to map too pitch relevance, but just hand balance
01:56:383 - add note?
01:57:716 - ^
01:59:049 - ^
I wanna use single note only at this part
etc etc (to this moment: 02:07:049 - ) :o
not necessary changes (which means you can ignore this stuff over here):
00:07:386 - maybe add note to 7?
00:09:053 - add 4?
00:09:386 - add 5?
00:15:386 - add somewhere (try to hear the pitch)
00:17:053 - add note
00:17:386 - add note
00:23:386 - ^
I used LN for 1/2 main melody structure that sound isn't 00:23:886
Maybe add some long notes here? (just like you did here 00:50:052 (50052|3) - )
00:43:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:44:719 - (delete 00:44:052 (44052|4) - )
00:45:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:46:718 - ^ (delete notes between that time)
00:47:885 - (or 00:50:052 (50052|3) - ) to 00:48:718 - ^
already seems fine tho
SV SUGGESTION:
Maybe you should make little teleports here? between 01:41:716 - and 01:42:216 -
01:42:216 - and 01:42:549 -
01:42:549 - and 01:42:883 - etc.
to this moment 01:44:383 -
only for last diff
[Hyper]
00:34:719 (34719|0) - move to 3 (but you would have to change part after 00:34:886 - somehow just a little bit :p) looks fine to me, keep this
01:09:384 (69384|1) - move to 1 (lack of notes in first column) overall this section, first column already take adequate part
[Another]
00:52:552 (52552|4) - I would change this somehow ._. (Maybe try to move those short lns? for example pattern like this: 3256) hmm but seems fine to me and diff
I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap! =DD
thanksEreedon wrote:
Lazy Sloth Mod, lmao
[Wonki's Normal]
00:25:719 (25719|5) - Maybe you should make this long note longer? (from 00:25:719 - to 00:26:719 - , but in this way move 00:26:719 (26719|5) - this note somewhere else)
not necessary changes:
00:47:885 (47885|3,48052|4,48218|5) - move one column to the right
01:27:716 - I suggest this pattern
I really like this song. This map looks great, those hitsounds are marvelous. Good job, awesome beatmap!
Really Big Thanks Archer love you <3ArcherLove wrote:
okay I'm back and just pointing out something I[ve been feel weird lately when playing this beatmapbcz u no reply PM plz
sayakather
name diff is bms-ish while the map itself LN-ish <_< sayaka good girl
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00:04:553 (4553|2) - to 5 I want them to feel like playing a piano, when playing those notes
00:05:553 (5553|2) - to 5 ^
00:09:553 (9553|3) - to 5 ^
00:18:719 (18719|0) - to 3? Rearranged
00:26:053 (26053|6) - http://puu.sh/uvCu7/325401b32b.jpg change to LN, and not add note
00:35:136 (35136|1,35219|2,35219|5,35303|4) - the.. electro sound emphaszie? http://puu.sh/uvCyP/f81bf05984.jpg I don't want to put LN at this part
00:36:136 (36136|4,36219|1,36219|5,36303|2) - ^ http://puu.sh/uvCBl/b697b75edb.jpg ^
00:46:219 (46219|4,46219|2,46219|1,46302|5,46302|3,46302|0) - awkward imo, how about http://puu.sh/uvCMd/41e92b0d2c.jpg I think it's fine
00:50:052 (50052|0,50052|4,50052|3,50163|5,50163|4,50163|1,50274|5,50274|6,50274|2,50385|0,50385|3,50385|1,50496|1,50496|4,50496|2,50607|2,50607|3,50607|5) - this is seriously not hard, but I feel uncomfortable, I remember you say you want to keep jack, how about http://puu.sh/uvCXR/e9d9d8fe62.png (I feel a lot better when play) Awesome!
01:00:718 (60718|3,60718|4,60801|1,60801|2) - http://puu.sh/uvD7C/24078e64b7.png It's not bad to me
01:13:051 (73051|0,73134|1) - ctrl+j play better for me (for me) lmao but keep this
01:14:384 (74384|6,74467|5) - ^ ^
01:15:717 (75717|0,75801|1) - ^ ^
01:18:967 (78967|5,78967|3,79051|6,79051|4) - ^ ^
01:22:384 (82384|4,82550|4,82717|4) - hmm jack here is not really fun to play really .. how about http://puu.sh/uvDi6/5d5b8cbaaa.jpg don't you think it's flows better? you can also do this when doing that flow nicely with music http://puu.sh/uvDkp/5623dfa3fc.jpg Thx for suggestion! I take first one
01:25:966 (85966|0,86050|1) - ctrl+j? Keep this
01:30:883 (90883|5) - to 4? for visual Good!
01:31:383 (91383|0,91549|6) - you can make 1/8 or 1/4 LN here for cymbal finish emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDwt/adad0ebc21.png I don't want to put LN at this part
01:31:883 (91883|6,92216|0) - ^ ^
01:32:716 (92716|6,93049|6,93383|6,93716|6) - ^ ^
01:41:549 (101549|1) - to 4? Good!
you can make 01:52:383 (112383|0,112883|5) - a 1/2 but cut like this for melody long (the long synth) emphasize http://puu.sh/uvDLP/cdc2409655.jpg or the 2nd can be changed to 01:52:883 (112883|2) - instead Sorry but keep this
01:53:383 (113383|6) - ^ ^
01:58:883 (118883|2) - ctrl+h flow better Oki
02:01:216 (121216|4,121216|5,121383|5,121383|4) - different sound, how about http://puu.sh/uvDYy/61b3319cb4.png also the note before need 1 more note because the same sound with note after piano is different but I want to show organ piano-like sound
02:02:716 (122716|2) - to 2 Same reason with above
kkk no kudosu this is as thanks doing irc many times with me ;;
SV will effect to emphasize chart structure, it won't exaggerate it tho. I emphasize kick/crash structure more strong to use SV. It'll be problem if that has LN in SV part, it's clearly stream pattern. Players already recognize the pattern of chart before passing that SV section. It's different as each player's skill, what I said before (recognizing pattern and passing that), It's not any problem. As RC, Problem will be appeared that SV used at part where can't feel to add any SV. I don't have enough skill to pass this chart perfectly, I had many testers already so it'll be not problem by my opinion and their opinion.Maxus wrote:
Hello Garalulu! M4M
[SayaKather]
00:08:886 (8886|4,9053|2) - you should switch notes here, because the second note is higher PR compared to previous? Fixed
00:09:553 (9553|3) - in that case, also move this note to col 2 because of a lot lower pitch. Fixed
00:10:886 - why single note? it's not double piano sound
00:15:219 - 00:23:219 - 00:16:886 - 00:17:219 - I recommend you to make this triple note so that the chord pattern you try to make here can signify the piano sound better.. since from the way i see it is that it's 4 note 2 note pattern with lack of diversity for the moment. Fixed. make 3 3 pattern
For some of the mod above, you may apply on lower diff as well. applied
00:24:719 - well, i will suggest you try to use this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497908 , it signifies the pitch rising sound better here, and it gives symmetry and complement the pattern you make at 00:25:719 - , which gives double advantages. Fixed
00:26:386 (26386|4,26469|5,26553|3,26636|4) - this kind of sound can be made into jack to complement the same snare sound here.. i recommend move 00:26:386 (26386|4,26553|3) - to col 6 and col 5 here, it fit the sound better. or you can arrange to fit the jack there.. I don't want to put a jack at this part
00:32:886 - 00:33:219 - this triple is kinda questionable imo, there isn't any piano sound that you follow for 3 notes sound at 00:31:553 - 00:31:886 - ,etc .. makes the double? Thx for suggestion!
00:40:719 - should be 5 notes chord if following what you want at 00:41:053 - Oki
00:41:719 - the bracket stream seem focused on right hand which kinda unnecessary imo.. i think you can spread it a bit more to provide bracket balance https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7497976 Fixed
00:43:052 (43052|5,43052|4,43052|6,43052|2) - This chord should be Ctrl+H'ed mainly because it's lower pitch chord that should be accented with left hand chord, and it provide variation with 00:44:052 - too. Oki
01:06:217 (66217|1,66551|0,66717|1) - i believe you can make it more symmetrical by make it 1-2-1 , it will mirrored the pattern at 01:05:718 (65718|6,65884|6,66051|6) - Good
01:16:217 (76217|5,76217|1,76301|4,76301|2) - you miss out the potential sound that can be made jack. Rearranged
01:20:051 - i find the svs here kinda hard to manage since you make them in the middle of harsh and dense chord, probably you can nerfed the svs?
change SV 2.0 0.67 -> 1.8 0.73. I think player will not confuse with this sv because svs already appear with strong drum sound, so they can understand why svs are here, play well this part.
01:31:383 (91383|6,91549|6,91716|6,91883|6,92049|6,92216|6,92383|6) - please avoid the anchor.. move 01:31:716 (91716|6,92049|6) - to 6
01:41:383 - you can add another note for finish sound, i don't think it will be too hard when it's finish sound.. Added
[Another]
00:33:719 - I find the pattern to be not symmetrical enough, how about try this instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498275 Oki
00:54:385 - well this one has 2 note + 1 LN while the one at 00:52:385 - have 3 note + 1 ln, might wanna make them consistent. add one note
01:01:051 - i suggest to reduce the chord into double to differentiate with other finish sound. fixed
01:23:216 (83216|2,83300|0,83383|1) - not make this col 2,3,1? will be more symmetrical and easier to hit. nice point
01:32:049 - its worth to be added another note for piano i think.. I don't add that piano sound at this part
01:42:216 - i suggest differentiate the chord with 01:42:549 - 01:41:716 - because of different pitch. main piano is same pitch so keep this.
01:49:049 - 01:49:383 - 01:49:716 - felt underemphasized, you can probably add another note for each of the timeline here.. Fixed
[Hyper]
00:33:386 - Instead of making them the same as 00:31:886 - , how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7498323 ? give symmetry and other pattern too. rearranged
01:00:551 - shouldn't this be double to make it consistent like 01:00:884 - ? add note at 01:00:884 - 01:01:218 -
01:22:717 (82717|4,82800|3,82884|2,82967|1) - I prefer this to be trill to differentiate with stair sound from before, it won't be too hard either .. rearranged
01:31:716 - 01:32:049 - I sort of hope you make this into single instead to differentiate from strong sound like 01:32:216 - , kinda awkward they have same note chord.. it will be consistent with 00:26:386 - too.. Fixed
01:52:883 - Random double imo, not kick sound.. 01:52:549 with melody sound so it's double
Have no time to mod all for a while.. hope this will be suffice :3
This map is quite interesting for me, but I still have my doubt over the SV in hardest diff, which sometimes kinda over the top for me and kinda forced in the middle of dense pattern.. i will watch this one for a while, but if you can tone down the sv / show proof that the SVs are alright, then i can help you push this i think