genkicho wrote:

NM Req

Widescreen support matiin aja, soalnya gapake SB

Columns |1|2|3|4|

Hard

Add double note nya harus konsisten, terus note nya kurang banyak buat Hard
00:16:872 - 00::20:986 add single note tiap garis merah
00:32:215 (32215|1,32300|3,32300|2,32386|1,32472|0,32557|3,32643|1,32643|2) - waw ini apa tiba2 1/4
00:38:986 missing note
00:40:700 missing note
00:42:929 (42929|0,43272|0,43615|0,43957|0,44300|0) - jangan di |1| smua
00:51:843 (51843|2,51843|1,52015|2,52015|1) - rearrange?
00:51:843 (51843|2,52015|2,52186|2,52357|2) - ..
00:52:529 (52529|0) - double
01:00:929 missing note
01:02:643 missing note
01:04:872 (64872|2,65215|2,65557|2,65900|2,66243|2) - ..
01:11:900 missing note
01:13:615^
01:16:872 (76872|3,76872|1,76872|0) - tadi kan double..
01:16:186 (76186|1,76529|1,76872|1,77215|1) - ..
01:22:186 (82186|0) - delete aja biar enak mencetnya, terus 01:22:015 (82015|3) - jadi double
01:28:529 (88529|2,88615|1,88700|3,88786|0,88872|1,88957|2,89043|0,89129|1,89215|3) - ...
01:30:157 (90157|3) -
01:30:586 (90586|2,90672|3,90757|1,90843|3,90929|2) -
01:31:529 (91529|2) -
01:32:643 (92643|1,92729|3,92815|2,92900|0,92986|3) -
01:34:186 (94186|1,94272|2,94357|3) -
01:34:700 (94700|2,94786|0,94872|3,94957|1,95043|2,95043|0) -
^jangan dipaksain 1/4.. mending buat triple / double
01:17:386 (77386|3,77557|1,77729|2,77900|0,78072|3,78243|2,78415|0,78586|1,78757|2,78929|3,79100|1,79272|0,79443|3,79615|2,79786|1,79957|3,80129|2,80300|1,80472|0,80643|2,80815|1,80986|0,81157|1,81329|2,81500|3,81672|1,81843|0,82015|3,82186|0,82357|2,82357|1,82700|0,82700|3,82872|1,83043|2,83215|3,83386|0,83557|1,83729|2,83900|3,84072|1,84243|2,84415|3,84586|1,84757|0,84929|3,85100|2,85272|0) - kurang variatif (?)
00:52:529 suggest -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545175

GL

[B A D] wrote:

Hi, I'm from the noobest modding q ever
Let's start
0|1|2|3

HARD

00:21:929 - Don't know if this is your intention or not but I'd recommend a note here because your note are all main sound note (sry if my English is bad)
00:23:300 - ^
00:26:043 - ^
00:28:786 - ^
00:30:157 - ^
00:32:215 (32215|1,32386|1,32472|0,32557|3) - Remove these notes because again, you are focusing on main sound
00:34:272 (34272|3) - Add a note here
00:36:586 (36586|2) - Miss a note here
00:40:529 (40529|0) - Remove this note because again, you are focusing on main sound
01:28:615 (88615|1,88786|0,88957|2) - ^
01:28:615 (88615|1,88786|0,88957|2) - Remove these notes
01:32:729 (92729|3,92900|0) - ^
01:33:843 (93843|0) - Miss a note here
01:34:272 (94272|2,94786|0,94957|1) - Remove these
01:35:643 (95643|2) - ^
01:36:157 (96157|1,96329|3) - ^
01:36:843 (96843|0,97015|1) - ^
01:37:872 (97872|0,98043|3) - ^
tbh, a lot of these notes when i put my playback rate down to 25%, I still can't even hear it --> There're a lot of ghost notes in your beatmap

Nice map and GL for ranking

LordTimeWaste wrote:

From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

HARD

00:04:529 - Add a note here for consistancy sure
00:10:700 - Add a note here too ^
00:19:615 - Add a note here for the finish sound ^
00:20:300 - ^^ ^
00:20:643 - ^^ ^
00:20:986 - I think one note here should be enough uhm i prefer 2 D:
00:38:815 - A tripple here is not fitting since the sound is so soft okay
00:59:386 - Double here ^
01:10:357 - ^^ ^

Hope i could help a little bit

Alsty- wrote:

hai , NM , Fast check

1|2|3|4

[Hard]

1. 00:01:357 (1357|2,1443|3) - ctrl+J , pitch
2. 00:02:472 (2472|2) - move 4 , kosong banget di col 4
3. 00:10:700 (10700|3) - LNnya berenti disini , bisa di tambahin 2 notes / 1 notes buat present cymbalnya
4. 00:11:386 - saran LNnya di kasih 1 notes di sampingnya, suara nya ckp kuat , lagian ini diff hard rada rasa kek normal
5. 00:16:872 - ^
6. 00:19:615 - 00:20:300 - 00:20:643 - add notes , suaranya sama persis kek 00:16:872 -
7. 00:22:700 (22700|3,23215|2) - ctrl+J , pitch
8. 00:31:615 - double ini
9. 00:31:957 - single
10. 01:30:843 (90843|3,90929|0) - ctrl+J
11. 01:32:643 (92643|1,92729|0,92815|2,92900|1,92986|3) - benerin ini , dump notes
    beneran ini diff hard bisa sampe *3 kalo bener" merhatiin konsistensinya

[Medium]

1. 00:04:872 (4872|1,5215|1) - pindah ke col 1 , col 1 kosong banget
2. 00:07:272 - col 1 kosong lg
3. 00:10:015 - double
4. 01:01:443 (61443|3) - move ke 1 , kosong
5. 01:32:300 (92300|3) - move ke 1 , 01:32:643 (92643|2,92986|2) - move ke 4 , lebih bnyk space
6. 01:37:443 (97443|2) - move 2 , kebnykn notes di 3

[Basic]

1. dr 00:27:843 - sampe 00:36:072 - jarang banget notes di col1
2. 00:42:929 (42929|3,43272|3,43615|3) - repattern pls
3. 00:58:015 (58015|1) - ke 1
4. 01:16:872 (76872|0,76872|1) - pindah ke tengah jadi 01:17:215 (77215|2) - bisa ke 1
5. 01:24:757 (84757|1) - ke 4

dahh , good luck

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~Rizevim
1|2|3|4|

Easy

00:05:557 (5557|2) - 00:38:472 (38472|2) - 00:49:443 (49443|3) - 01:00:415 (60415|1) - 01:11:386 (71386|2) - 01:33:329 (93329|2) - delete,because ithink this sound "HEY~~~" are very soft
00:15:843 (15843|0,16529|2) - 00:21:329 (21329|1,22015|2) - delete make it better
00:32:300 (32300|2,32300|1) - move to (1,2)
00:32:643 (32643|1,32643|2) - move to (3,4)
00:32:986 (32986|3) - delete,soft
00:33:329 (33329|2) - 00:43:957 (43957|1) - 00:54:929 (54929|2) - delete
01:39:157 (99157|2,99157|1) - strange

Good luck!

[Harlequin] wrote:

just chit chat here

16.14 [Harlequin]: gan nerima req NM mod ?
16.19 Rizevim: ya
16.19 [Harlequin]: bisa owo
16.20 Rizevim: ._.
16.21 [Harlequin]: kalo boleh ini map nya
16.21 *[Harlequin] is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1296229 marina - Towa yori Towa ni]
16.22 Rizevim: bentar ya XD
16.23 [Harlequin]: okiiii
16.28 Rizevim: wah 5menit lebih XD
16.29 [Harlequin]: iya marathon :"
16.29 [Harlequin]: mod seadanya pun gpp kok ;w;
16.31 Rizevim: wkwkwk
16.33 [Harlequin]: pada ga mau mod wkwwk
16.35 Rizevim: 2hard4me XD
16.35 Rizevim: baru main setengah lagu dah pegel XD
16.36 [Harlequin]: mapnya jelek :^)
16.37 [Harlequin]: belajar sekilas dari kaka tentang nge map jadi maish bingung :'
16.38 Rizevim: XD
16.38 Rizevim: aku jg masih newbie dalam mapping kok
16.38 [Harlequin]: kaka ku aja ngajarinnya cuma dikit =w=
16.38 [Harlequin]: disuruh belajar sendiri =w=
16.40 Rizevim: pattern nya XD
16.40 [Harlequin]: patternya jelek yak :d ?
16.41 Rizevim: kurang enak menurut ku XD
16.42 [Harlequin]: mod dong wkkwkw xD
16.42 Rizevim: 01:06:508 (66508|3,66508|1,66658|0,66658|2,66808|3,66808|1,66958|0,66958|2,67108|3,67108|1,67258|2,67258|0,67408|1,67408|3,67558|2,67558|0,67708|1,67708|3,67858|2,67858|0,68008|1,68008|3) - re arrange(?)
16.42 [Harlequin]: oh itu aku keep aja ikutin pitch buat gitar owo
16.42 [Harlequin]: konsistensi dengan ini 01:08:758 (68758|1,68758|2,68908|0,68908|3) - 
16.43 Rizevim: 01:08:758 (68758|2,68758|1,68908|0,68908|3,69058|1,69058|2,69208|0,69208|3,69358|1,69358|2,69508|3,69508|0,69658|1,69658|2,69808|0,69808|3,69958|1,69958|2,70108|0,70108|3,70258|1,70258|2,70408|0,70408|3) - same as above
16.43 Rizevim: hmm
16.46 Rizevim: 02:15:640 - add note here?
16.47 [Harlequin]: itu suar kick jadi aku pasang 2 note untuk setiap kick drum owo
16.51 Rizevim: 04:19:990 (259990|0,259990|3,260065|2,260140|1,260140|0,260215|3,260290|0,260290|1,260365|2,260440|1,260515|3,260590|1,260590|0,260665|2,260740|0,260740|3,260815|1,260890|3,260890|0,260965|2,261040|0,261040|3,261115|1,261190|3,261265|2,261340|1,261340|3,261415|0,261490|3,261490|2,261565|1,261640|2,261640|3,261715|0,261790|3,261790|1,261865|2,261940|3,261940|0,262015|1,262090|2,262090|3,262165|0,262240|1,262240|2,262315|3) - re arrange(?)
16.51 [Harlequin]: woah iya itu masih bingung juga :d
16.51 [Harlequin]: punya suggesti pattern kah>
16.53 [Harlequin]: kalo punya map yg di mod bilang aja kita m4m deh xD
16.53 Rizevim: hmm
16.53 Rizevim: aku jarang nge mod&map 4* sih XD
16.53 Rizevim: ya
16.54 Rizevim: maybe jacks?
16.55 Rizevim: 04:31:990 - add note
16.55 Rizevim: 04:32:440 - same as above
16.55 Rizevim: 04:32:890 - same as above
17.00 [Harlequin]: sure owo
17.02 Rizevim: 01:41:140 (101140|0,101140|2,101290|2,101290|3) - ctrl+j(?)
17.03 [Harlequin]: boleh boleh owo
17.04 Rizevim: 01:52:465 (112465|2,112540|0) - same as above
17.04 Rizevim: entah kenapa kayanya map kamu berat sebelah XD
17.04 [Harlequin]: re-arrange it instead owo
17.10 Rizevim: 03:25:860 (205860|1) - ubah sampe 03:26:011  aja
17.11 Rizevim: 03:26:011 - add notes sampe
17.11 Rizevim: 03:26:163 -
17.11 Rizevim: doh ke enter
17.13 Rizevim: 04:09:800 (249800|3,249800|2,249950|0,249950|1,250400|2,250400|3) - ctrl+h?
17.15 [Harlequin]: re-arrange pwp
17.19 Rizevim: widescreen support matiin sj
17.20 [Harlequin]: oh iya lupa ._.
17.20 Rizevim: wkwkwk
17.21 Rizevim: udah segini aja , aku gakuat mod 4* XD
17.24 [Harlequin]: post please xD
17.25 Rizevim: okay XD
17.26 Rizevim: oh ya
17.26 Rizevim: 少女神域∽少女天獄 オリジナルサウンドトラック | キミ∽ツナグ
17.26 Rizevim: albumnya
17.27 [Harlequin]: post sekalian yak :v
17.28 Rizevim: wah udah banyak ni map ternyata di ranked XD
17.28 Rizevim: baru nyadar aku XD
17.28 [Harlequin]: haha iya map lama tapi mania nya belum ada jadi aku map =w=b
17.29 Rizevim: XD
17.29 Rizevim: aku paling payah kalo nge map lagu kyk gini XD
17.29 [Harlequin]: ada map mu yg mau di mod kah?
17.29 Rizevim: bingung nempatin nya , suka salah XD
17.30 Rizevim: hm boleh kalo kosong :V
17.30 [Harlequin]: ayuk dah lagi gak ada kerjaan wkkw
17.30 *Rizevim is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145416 Ryu* - KOROBUSHKA (Ryu*Remix)]
17.30 [Harlequin]: irc aja sekalian www
17.30 [Harlequin]: aku pengen nge rank map kaya kaka ku =w=
17.30 Rizevim: kaka mu siapa?XD
17.31 [Harlequin]: dia udah pensi wkwkw
17.31 Rizevim: oh wkwkwk
17.31 [Harlequin]: Ibrahim wkwkw
17.31 *[Harlequin] is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145415 Ryu* - KOROBUSHKA (Ryu*Remix) [HARD]]
17.31 [Harlequin]: owo
17.32 Rizevim: hooo
17.33 [Harlequin]: 00:02:129 (2129|1,2300|0) -  ctrl + J buat layering biar seimbang ga berat di kanan
17.33 [Harlequin]: kiri maksudnya ._.
17.33 Rizevim: okay
17.34 [Harlequin]: 00:01:100 - ga di add note aka kah soalnya setiap suara Synth nya nyatu sama kick drum owo ?
17.35 [Harlequin]: oh nvm baru tau ga jadi itu wkkw
17.35 [Harlequin]: 00:05:900 -  add for finish
17.36 [Harlequin]: 00:05:557 -  same 
17.37 [Harlequin]: 00:05:900 -  same tambah HS buat F juga 
17.37 Rizevim: okay
17.37 [Harlequin]: 00:07:272 -  add juga buat finish
17.38 [Harlequin]: 00:08:643 -  00:09:329 -  00:10:015 -   00:10:357 -  00:10:700 -  sama add juga buat finish supaya konsisten buat sebelumnya
17.38 [Harlequin]: 00:16:872 (16872|1) -  delete aja cukup tiga buat finish
17.39 [Harlequin]: 00:16:186 -  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141948 suggest pattern for more balanced
17.40 Rizevim: okayy
17.40 [Harlequin]: 00:23:215 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141953 make it like this
17.41 [Harlequin]: 00:27:843 -  suara finish yg lainnya jangan lupa di kasih 3 note yak
17.41 [Harlequin]: supaya konsisten
17.41 [Harlequin]: 00:36:586 -  add for emphasize this 00:36:757 (36757|0) - 
17.42 Rizevim: okayy
17.42 [Harlequin]: 00:41:900 -  https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141969 buat PR owo
17.43 Rizevim: ok ><
17.44 [Harlequin]: 01:30:672 (90672|3,90843|0) -  delete aja :d, suara clapnya cuma disini 01:30:586 (90586|2) - 
17.44 [Harlequin]: 01:31:529 (91529|2) -  sama owo
17.44 [Harlequin]: 01:32:729 (92729|0,92900|1) -  owo
17.44 [Harlequin]: 01:32:729 (92729|0,92900|1) -  add for consistency owo
17.45 [Harlequin]: oke sisanya udah bagus owo

Good luck! xD

Unpredictable wrote:

ayyy from my modding queue,

Let's get started!

1|2|3|4

BASIC

Looks good!
Only problem I have with is the hitsounding. The symbol clashing is bit too loud. I can't really help you with that exactly because I'm not experience with hitsounding, but I'm sure if you're trying to go for rank on this, BNs will probably help you with it.

MEDIUM

00:20:643 (20643|0) - move to column 2? don't agree with the placement of it as of right now because of 00:20:300 (20300|0) -
01:31:272 (91272|0) - shouldn't this be 01:31:443 here?
other than that, looks fine. but yeah pls fix hitsound

HARD

00:04:529 (4529|2,4529|1,4872|2,5215|2) - This is the same sound. why is one doubled instead of the other two? make the singles doubles as they are the same sound. If not, make them all singles.
00:33:843 - 00:36:757 for this section, why the random notes on the red lines? it's pretty much random to the player when playing and it doesn't make too much sense at all. I suggest removing them.
00:53:300 (53300|1) - move this to column 1
00:53:386 (53386|0) - move this to column 2
01:10:357 (70357|1,70357|2) - same problem as before, singles or just doubles. I don't see the real impact of the double. so maybe just change it to singles tbh
01:20:815 (80815|1) - move this to column 4. imo it makes it a lot more cleaner.
01:32:643 (92643|1,92729|0,92815|2,92900|1) - err what? im not what it's exactly following at all. how about using something like 01:10:357 (70357|2,70700|2,71043|2) - ?
01:37:100 (97100|3) - move this to column 2 because it stops the player to on column 4 four times when it is not needed.

just a thought on the kiai time

00:55:272 - to 01:05:557 - make a kiai time here. it's literally the same as your kiai time placed.
01:06:243 - to 01:16:529 make another kiai time here because of same rhythm.
01:38:472 end your kiai time here for the kiai you have placed
if any of these changes you like or agree with, make sure you apply them to all diffs.

This is all I could find. This definitely has potential for being ranked and get it fixed up and you should be fine.

Hope this helps and if you plan to make more maps in the future, I gotchu

Ilham wrote:

from my queue
mod in indon aja ya
|1|2|3|4|
**note that I mod on 0% HS volume

EASY

1. 00:22:357 (22357|3) - di tiap simbal diatasnya double ini single sendiri, add note
2. 01:04:872 (64872|3,65215|0,65557|0) - di 3 note yang nyampur simbal sebelumnya lo kasih di kolom yang sama 00:42:929 (42929|3,43272|3,43615|3) - mungkin bisa disamain, di kolom yang sama di kolom 4
3. 01:11:729 (71729|1) - dari part ini kan ada vocalnya tuh, nah agak aneh kalo cuma ngelayer kicknya, disini ada drop bass 01:12:415 (72415|0) - mending dibikin LN panjangnya 1 beat aja, ini juga 01:13:100 (73100|2) - 01:13:786 (73786|1) - 01:14:472 (74472|2) - 01:15:157 (75157|0) - , tujuan utama nya biar makin variatif patternnya
4. 01:24:757 (84757|3,85786|3) - shield macem gini kurang balance buat newbie kalo kata gw, saran ini 01:25:443 (85443|2,85786|3,86129|1) - dipindah ke kolom 2 - 3 - 4

MEDIUM

1. 00:00:757 (757|3,1100|1,1443|2,1786|0) - ini kok cuma follow kick sedangkan disini ngambil synth 00:02:300 (2300|1,2986|1,3672|0) - sengaja? kalo engga follow semua synth nya biar konsisten, nah disini synh awalnya diambil 00:55:786 (55786|2) -
2. 00:15:843 (15843|3,16186|1,16529|2) - biar ngga sama snappingnya ama easy, mending ikutin drop nya macem ini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8346378 , lakukan juga snapping itu disini 00:21:329 (21329|2,21672|0,22015|3) -
3. 01:13:443 (73443|1) - move ke col 1 buat ngehindari anchor di col 2 dan 3 01:11:386 (71386|1,71729|2,72072|1,72415|2,72757|1,73100|2,73443|1) -
4. 01:16:015 (76015|2,76357|3) - ini follow apa? di hard ga dilayer?
5. 01:31:443 - note for synth, sama ini 01:35:557 -

tbh masih undermapped ini diff

HARD

1. 00:02:643 (2643|0) - coba denger hati2 pake 50%, disini ada synth, banyak juga yang diskip synthnya padahal udah ngabaiin banyak hihat di tiap red tick, saran aja kalo emang ngikutin synth bisa dilayer semua synthnya disini dan 00:07:786 - 00:46:529 - 00:57:500 - aaandd many more,,, please cross check it again, volume HS dikecilin dulu biar lebih jelas, sama pake 75% biar lebih jelas lagi xD
2. 00:10:700 (10700|3) - sebenernya ini LN bisa dibuat shield macem gini sih https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8346351 tapi dilihat dari patternnya yang simple mungkin agak mencolok tapi seenggaknya kasih note disini 00:11:043 -

untuk diff ini dari segi playability udah bagus, tapi mungkin masih butuh selfmod dengan ((HSnya dikecilin dulu)) soalnya masih banyak suara yang kelewat ((mungkin ketutupan suara HS pas lo mappingnya))

oke, good luck ya!

1. .

1. 00:30:243 (30243|1) - move column 0?
2. 00:42:243 (42243|1) - same for sound similar like 00:38:815 (38815|0,39157|2,39500|0) -
3. 01:04:872 (64872|3) - move column 2? no sound similar as next note
4. 01:19:957 - to 01:22:700 - imo is better also LN as break is better for this diff
5. 01:26:129 - change LN for the sound 2/1?

1. 00:08:986 (8986|0,9157|2,9329|0,9329|1,9672|2,10015|2,10015|1) - idk feel this structure not look good for that column 00:09:157 (9157|2,9672|2,10015|2) - try to find for another column the sound varies
2. 00:16:357 - add note in column 3?
3. 00:21:843 - ^
4. 00:30:929 (30929|0,30929|1,31615|2,31615|3) - i think is better single note for sound 1/2.. with double is kinda hard for this diff imo
5. 00:35:729 (35729|1,35900|2,36072|3) - make control + g sound different and move note 00:36:415 (36415|1) - in column 0?
6. 01:07:100 - missing note? consistency like 00:55:786 -

1. 00:04:529 (4529|1) - move column 0? for balance
2. 00:11:729 - i suggest you put a note in each LN for beat of the tone is better for this diff
3. 00:17:215 - ^
4. 00:19:957 - ^
5. 00:24:757 (24757|0,24929|1,25100|2) - control + g? is better for that sound
6. 00:49:957 - to 00:52:529 - i think you should separate some notes instead of doing them all together since is strange imo

Etsu wrote:

hi, mod there

[General]
Columns: 0|1|2|3

1. .

[BASIC]

1. 00:30:243 (30243|1) - move column 0?
2. 00:42:243 (42243|1) - same for sound similar like 00:38:815 (38815|0,39157|2,39500|0) -
3. 01:04:872 (64872|3) - move column 2? no sound similar as next note
4. 01:19:957 - to 01:22:700 - imo is better also LN as break is better for this diff
5. 01:26:129 - change LN for the sound 2/1?

[MEDIUM]

1. 00:08:986 (8986|0,9157|2,9329|0,9329|1,9672|2,10015|2,10015|1) - idk feel this structure not look good for that column 00:09:157 (9157|2,9672|2,10015|2) - try to find for another column the sound varies
2. 00:16:357 - add note in column 3?
3. 00:21:843 - ^
4. 00:30:929 (30929|0,30929|1,31615|2,31615|3) - i think is better single note for sound 1/2.. with double is kinda hard for this diff imo
5. 00:35:729 (35729|1,35900|2,36072|3) - make control + g sound different and move note 00:36:415 (36415|1) - in column 0?
6. 01:07:100 - missing note? consistency like 00:55:786 -

[Hard]

1. 00:04:529 (4529|1) - move column 0? for balance
2. 00:11:729 - i suggest you put a note in each LN for beat of the tone is better for this diff
3. 00:17:215 - ^
4. 00:19:957 - ^
5. 00:24:757 (24757|0,24929|1,25100|2) - control + g? is better for that sound
6. 00:49:957 - to 00:52:529 - i think you should separate some notes instead of doing them all together since is strange imo

imtdb1 wrote:

☆=(ゝω･)/ take my star

KcHecKa wrote:

Hard:

00:03:843 (3843|1) - this line should be 2 notes
00:07:957 (7957|2) - this line should be 2 notes too,.,.? (to me this sound is noticably more than others?)
00:11:386 (11386|0,11729|1,12072|3,12415|0,12757|1,13100|2,13443|3,13786|1,14129|2,14472|1,14815|0,15157|1) - now why in the hell would you choose to map like this, omgfgfmkcbml , section couldve made for some excellent stream patterns
miss opportunity imo

00:46:529 (46529|0) - ghost note. w
00:51:157 (51157|0,51157|1) - should be three note?

01:17:215 (77215|1,77215|2,77215|0) - here is where i wouldve start incorporating LNs
01:27:843 (87843|2,87843|1) - shouldve been 3 notes
01:30:157 (90157|3) - ghost note (THERE IS NO SOUND HERE BOI )

01:30:672 (90672|3,90843|0) - also ghost note, please delete me
01:31:529 (91529|2) - ghost note.
01:32:729 (92729|0,92815|2,92900|1) - ghost note -.-

a lot of stuff i skipped over, but yeah you should take another look at this difficulty and fix a lot of the stuff.

atian540 wrote:

NM req from Illusionary Border Queue

this grave ? pls ressurect it
free to reject

1|2|3|4

BASIC

1. 00:11:386 - maybe you can try this 00:11:386 -
2. 00:27:843 - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9012474
3. 00:32:300 (32300|0,32300|1,32643|2,32643|3) - 1 note

MEDIUM

1. 00:06:415 - add note
2. 00:08:300 (8300|3) - col 1 karna dari 00:07:272 ke 00:08:643 - gada di col 1 imo
3. 00:24:415 (24415|2) - col 4 atau ke yg lain soalnya pitchnya udah beda
4. 00:27:157 (27157|3) - same
5. 00:49:957 (49957|0,50129|1,50300|3,50472|2,50643|1,50815|0,50986|2,51157|3,51329|0,51500|1,51672|3,51843|2,52015|1,52186|0,52357|2,52529|3) - patternya sama,mungkin dibikin variasi ?

HARD

1. 00:17:043 - add note biar ga monoton,juga biar greget
2. 00:17:386 - 00:17:729 - 00:18:072 - 00:18:415 - 00:18:757 - 00:19:100 - 00:19:443 - 00:19:786 - 00:20:129 - 00:20:472 - 00:20:815 - ^
3. 00:30:415 (30415|0,30757|0,31100|0,31443|0) - anchor,mungkin bisa kaya gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9012505
4. 00:39:500 (39500|1,40186|2,40872|0,41557|3,42243|2) - mungkin dijadiin LN
5. 01:17:900 - 01:18:586 - 01:19:272 - 01:19:957 - 01:20:643 - 01:21:329 - 01:22:015 - 01:23:386 - 01:24:072 - 01:24:757 - add note buat suara yg keras apalah itu =w=

udah bagus mapnya, cuma divariasi aja dikit
Good Luck

Izect Ztenz wrote:

M4M

dah lama gk ngemod....apapun yng terjadi, harap maklum bro dah setahun gk ngemod sante pak bos :V
|1|2|3|4|

General

• Basic lw OD 7. . . . cek CTRL + Shift + A 6 bosq :3

Timing

• 01:28:186 - kiai di ending? bunyi 00:00:415 - 00:55:272 - 01:06:255 - kiai 1 aje :V
  Sedikit "bumbu" SV di diff HARD ok kayaknya tydac bisa sv sia :'V

①

[BASIC]00:08:643 (8643|3,8986|1,9329|2,9672|0,10015|1) - kyknya ngulang pattern ini deh 00:03:157 -
00:42:929 (42929|3,43272|3,43615|3) - sugoii~, gk bisa dipidahin satu note di sebelah nya
00:46:700 - butuh variasi , |4| |3| - |1| |2| pattern dah nyebar di diff ini
00:49:100 (49100|1) - kyknya jek
00:54:929 - gk bisa lw ganti ini jdi LN? Drum/Snare/Kick macam apa yng ada disini.....cuma suara "wao~"
01:00:415 - ^ tpi cari cara lain utk ubah jdi note/hapus, soalnya hitsoundnya....saa~ gk bisa diganti jdi soft
01:02:472 - pengulangan pattern di 00:56:986 - variasikan nanodesu
01:05:900 - same cases 00:54:929 - che
01:07:615 - lw ganti jdi |4|-|3|-|2|-|1|
01:38:129 (98129|3,98472|3) - jek lgi

②

[MEDIUM]00:20:986 (20986|3) - nani kore? bisa lw pindah?
00:33:843 - bisa lw tambah 1 note
00:34:186 - ^
00:34:529 - ^
00:42:929 (42929|3,43272|3,43615|3) - di BASIC ada, disini ada juga.....nani kore? lw pindahin satu bisa?
00:51:329 (51329|0,51500|1,51672|3,51843|2,52015|1,52186|0,52357|2,52529|3) - lw pindahin ato cerminkan pattern ini dgn cara 00:51:329 (51329|3,51500|2) - ini lw pindahkan ke |3| |2|
01:38:472 - saran gw: kasi LN

③

[HARD]anjer serem 1/4 kaget w
00:20:986 (20986|1) - klo bisa pindah ke |4|
00:41:900 (41900|0,42072|1,42243|2) - CTRL + G kyknya enak tuh
00:42:929 - buset dah. . . . .gk bisa dipindah?
dari 00:49:786 - sampai 00:52:529 - kok gw merinding ya agak gimana y rada rada deket ke expert ini
01:27:157 (87157|2) - pindah ke |2|
01:27:500 (87500|1) - pindah ke |3|
01:37:957 (97957|2) - saran: hapus.....gk ada suara perasaan gw selan suara "ssshhh~"
01:38:815 (98815|2) - ini klo nggak low-hat....gw suruh apus

overall, sedikit divariasikan patternnya terutama chorus/irama yng sama dgn kiai

- SEKIAN -