I meant to mod this.
[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60%
00:28:273 (14,15,16) - Not really fitting, and an ugly badly playing pattern. If you want it, use k k d.
00:33:046 (32) - Remove this.
Oh God, the amount of kdd and kdk is disgusting, I wouldn't recommend using those patterns since they play badly and look horrible.
Actually a lot of this diff looks and plays bad. You have those random 1/8 patterns all over the place here.
00:34:333 (2,3,4) - kkd
00:36:152 (9,10,11) - ddd
00:36:758 (12,13) - d k
00:37:364 (14,15,16) - dkd
00:37:970 (17,18,19) - kkd
More-so like that. And keep a structure, please, at the moment, a majority of the diff looks very random. Rather than changing the pattern you use every stanza, make a pattern, use it for one phrase, make a slight variation of it the second phrase, then use another pattern. Just make sure that the patterns you repeat are good. Something very simple that fits the beat of this song.
But in your case, simply don't base your map on the vocals. Especially not on this song. This makes it in total contrast to the beat being made in the song, which is confusing and plays bad.
tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.
And do your best to not overmap this. 1/8 isn't too called for, but it's fine.
Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. Either way, good luck.
[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60%
00:28:273 (14,15,16) - Not really fitting, and an ugly badly playing pattern. If you want it, use k k d.
00:33:046 (32) - Remove this.
Oh God, the amount of kdd and kdk is disgusting, I wouldn't recommend using those patterns since they play badly and look horrible.
Actually a lot of this diff looks and plays bad. You have those random 1/8 patterns all over the place here.
00:34:333 (2,3,4) - kkd
00:36:152 (9,10,11) - ddd
00:36:758 (12,13) - d k
00:37:364 (14,15,16) - dkd
00:37:970 (17,18,19) - kkd
More-so like that. And keep a structure, please, at the moment, a majority of the diff looks very random. Rather than changing the pattern you use every stanza, make a pattern, use it for one phrase, make a slight variation of it the second phrase, then use another pattern. Just make sure that the patterns you repeat are good. Something very simple that fits the beat of this song.
But in your case, simply don't base your map on the vocals. Especially not on this song. This makes it in total contrast to the beat being made in the song, which is confusing and plays bad.
tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.
And do your best to not overmap this. 1/8 isn't too called for, but it's fine.
Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. Either way, good luck.