Lady Gaga - Alejandro

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Huskatron
I came from DarkDunskin :D



First go, too! ^_^
abalee
Gratz that narakucrimson became a MAT that I could get rid of this recheck thing blablabla
rebubbled.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Sakura Hana wrote:

I was going to mod this, and i see you kudosu'd narakucrimson's post so if you make any changes, you could ask abalee to rebubble it and then i can mod it.
Im waiting <3
RandomJibberish
General
Errors in the lyrics SB:
"Nothing to Loose" should be "Nothing to Lose"
Read this and embed it firmly into your mind to avoid potential future embarrassment
"a halo 'around her finger" should be "a halo 'round her finger" or "a halo around her finger"
"He's gotta firefight, Got-cool the bad", as well as being an atrocious lyric, should be "He's gonna' firefight, Gonna' cool the bad"

Also arguably every Gotta and Gonna should have an apostrophe after it

The SB gets significantly less cool in the last chorus - no moving around and way less Alejandros all over the place. Make it more like the previous choruses.

The spinner is in a completely different visual style to the rest of the map, as are the collab names.

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing
02:47:363 (1) - The redpoint corner shouldn't touch the rest of the slider - it could be hard to gauge the direction of the slider without snaking sliders enabled. I suggest something like this
03:41:908 (1,2,3,4) - Well these jumps are completely out of nowhere
03:52:666 (1,2,3) - ^
03:59:939 (6) - Well this 1/8 is completely out of nowhere
04:00:393 (1,1,1) - This rhythm is kind of random. Also the comboing is weird

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<
The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation
03:09:181 - End the kiai here.

Normal
The low spacing compared to slider speed making everything overlap everywhere is annoying but whatever
Niva

RandomJibberish wrote:

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing To HellDawn : I already fixed this part
03:41:908 (1,2,3,4) - Well these jumps are completely out of nowhere I suppose it's readable enough with the new combo? :3
03:52:666 (1,2,3) - ^ Same as above
03:59:939 (6) - Well this 1/8 is completely out of nowhere Changed into two notes
04:00:393 (1,1,1) - This rhythm is kind of random. Also the comboing is weird Removed all the NC. The weird rhythm seems to come from the clap I overuse (I removed the clap from the second slider anyway, sounds better)
Thanks for mod ~

EDIT : HellDawn asked me to fix the R slider also, so here's your fix ~

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Errors in the lyrics SB:
"Nothing to Loose" should be "Nothing to Lose"
Read this and embed it firmly into your mind to avoid potential future embarrassment
"a halo 'around her finger" should be "a halo 'round her finger" or "a halo around her finger"
"He's gotta firefight, Got-cool the bad", as well as being an atrocious lyric, should be "He's gonna' firefight, Gonna' cool the bad"

Also arguably every Gotta and Gonna should have an apostrophe after it

The SB gets significantly less cool in the last chorus - no moving around and way less Alejandros all over the place. Make it more like the previous choruses.

The spinner is in a completely different visual style to the rest of the map, as are the collab names.

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing
02:47:363 (1) - The redpoint corner shouldn't touch the rest of the slider - it could be hard to gauge the direction of the slider without snaking sliders enabled. I suggest something like this


Normal
The low spacing compared to slider speed making everything overlap everywhere is annoying but whatever
All fixed !
OnosakiHito

RandomJibberish wrote:

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<
The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation
Might help if I say that I feel okay with this patterns. Also the velocity is fine for me since they are not messi.
Let's see what DarkDunskin will say.

OzzyOzrock
I meant to mod this.

[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60%

00:28:273 (14,15,16) - Not really fitting, and an ugly badly playing pattern. If you want it, use k k d.
00:33:046 (32) - Remove this.

Oh God, the amount of kdd and kdk is disgusting, I wouldn't recommend using those patterns since they play badly and look horrible.
Actually a lot of this diff looks and plays bad. You have those random 1/8 patterns all over the place here.

00:34:333 (2,3,4) - kkd
00:36:152 (9,10,11) - ddd
00:36:758 (12,13) - d k
00:37:364 (14,15,16) - dkd
00:37:970 (17,18,19) - kkd

More-so like that. And keep a structure, please, at the moment, a majority of the diff looks very random. Rather than changing the pattern you use every stanza, make a pattern, use it for one phrase, make a slight variation of it the second phrase, then use another pattern. Just make sure that the patterns you repeat are good. Something very simple that fits the beat of this song.

But in your case, simply don't base your map on the vocals. Especially not on this song. This makes it in total contrast to the beat being made in the song, which is confusing and plays bad.

tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.
And do your best to not overmap this. 1/8 isn't too called for, but it's fine.

Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. Either way, good luck.
DarkDunskin

RandomJibberish wrote:

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<

- Well while mapping I noticed that a taiko difficulty without these 1/8 would be plain boring to play, because the main Background Rythm is very simple. I would have had to map d k d k d k most of the time, so I tried to place 1/8 along the Lyrics to make it more interesting.
And for what I believe, it turned out very well. The patterns combine the fast movements of the Lyrics along with that simple and slow beat in the Background.


The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation

- You're right with that. To make these 1/8-patterns readable I had to increase the Slider Velocity very much. This may not be the usuall Taiko mapping stile, but it gave me the chance to add extra slowdowns and speed ups that would not have been readable with a "normal" SV
in a 99 BPM map.


03:09:181 - End the kiai here. - fixed
03:47:969 - kiai time fix here

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu

EDIT: Actually didnt see your Post Ozzy, I may take a look at your mod tomowrrow, since I dont have much time today -.-
DarkDunskin

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60% . - done

tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.

- Actually, you're the first one to say that o.0 Most Players were fine with it till now. Asked NeoRainier and OnoHito about it again, both reassured me that its anjoyable and ok the way it is :/

Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. - You tell me <.<
- Changed a few things Neo mentioned though.
- Changed settings too.

Thanks for modding, I like feedback.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
mancuso_JM_
Alejandro in Graveyard :( . You have to revive this please
mancuso_JM_
YAY Revived :D
Time to mod your map ;)

General:
The name of artist is Lady GaGa, you have to change that and make full submit

CDFA's Easy:
00:32:817 (4): I don't know if sliders like this play good in Easy. I think that cause confusion in New players. You have another sliders like this but I have to mention only this
03:42:211 (2,3): Spacing too far
03:51:908 (2,3): ^. After that don't forget to move the next notes to don't have spacing problem again

Normal:
00:24:636 (1,2): Spacing
02:07:060 (1,2): ^
01:51:302 (T): Maybe this kiai have to ends here for consistency
02:34:939 (x): Add a Note

Hard:
01:36:151 (x): Add a Note
01:50:943 (T): Unsnapped kiai. And I also think that this kiai have to ends in 01:51:302
02:22:211 (x): Add a Note
03:08:575 (T): Unsnapped kiai. And also think that this kiai have to ends in 03:09:181
03:32:514 (x): Add a Note
04:26:757 (1): Remove New Combo

Dunskin's Taiko Oni:
Maybe OD +1
Looks good :)

Collab:
00:44:939 (x): Add a Note
01:14:332 (x): ^
01:19:181 (x): ^
02:30:393 (5): New Combo for consistency with 1st part
02:31:908 (x): Add a Note
02:32:211 (1): Remove New Combo
03:39:484 (4): I think that this note don't follow nothing. Please, remove it

Please rank this map.
Star and Good Luck with rank ;)
(oops.. Sorry for double post)
abalee
collab:
01:04:636 (2,3,4,5) - guess they should move a bit down to horizon with 01:03:120 (1) - ...

hard:
00:30:091 (2,2,2) - try the placing in osu file
03:45:545 (1) - a bit worry about this slider, it's self-cover. also i grid down... >_>
well it's hard to say what I think, so that's the osu file.
Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Hard_M].osu
DNR
Re-modding my diff:
02:06:151 (1) - Remove claps~
02:09:181 (2) - Add clap
03:47:969 (1) - Slider should look more like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/270147
abalee
Hi
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Thanks again abalee :3
narakucrimson
Sorry but I gotta pop this. I will recheck this since the map has been around for really long, but it's gotta be popped for now:

[General]

  • Folder:
  1. You are missing the reverse arrow. Note that it's needed to complete the circle set.
  2. Your file exceeds the limit of 10 MB without a video. There are some repeated files (well, not exactly repeated but they are pretty similar), for which you could be using one of the images, resized, and delete the similar one. This way, you can reduce the filesize.
    Metadata:
  3. I believe that activating the Letterbox During Breaks option creates a very nice effect combined with the storyboard. You should consider doing this in all difficulties (except for the taiko).
    Kiais:
  4. Some kiais are unsnapped:
    1. 01:12:817 - In all difficulties, incuding taiko.
    2. 01:51:302 - In [CDFA's Easy] and [Normal] (it isn't unsnapped in [Normal], but I recomend ending it there for consistency).
    3. 02:30:393 - In all standard difficulties.
    4. 03:09:181 - It's different in every difficulty, maybe you should normalize this AND resnap it everywhere.
    5. 03:47:969 - In all standard difficulties.
    6. 04:26:757 - In [CDFA's Easy] and [Collab].

    Breaks:
  5. 03:09:181 - This break should start here, and it doesn't in [Normal] and [Collab]. Drag it back to this point so you get some more consistency.


I didn't check the mapping for now, I guess I'd do that when I recheck the map.

Also, please don't ask me for the recheck, I'll do it by myself whenever I'm available. Thanks for your comprehension.
HeatKai
here

no kd.



Topic Starter
HellDawn

narakucrimson wrote:

Sorry but I gotta pop this. I will recheck this since the map has been around for really long, but it's gotta be popped for now: :?

[General]

  • Folder:
  1. You are missing the reverse arrow. Note that it's needed to complete the circle set. Allright
  2. Your file exceeds the limit of 10 MB without a video. There are some repeated files (well, not exactly repeated but they are pretty similar), for which you could be using one of the images, resized, and delete the similar one. This way, you can reduce the filesize. I deleted some lyric
    Metadata:
  3. I believe that activating the Letterbox During Breaks option creates a very nice effect combined with the storyboard. You should consider doing this in all difficulties (except for the taiko). Allright
    Kiais:
  4. Some kiais are unsnapped:
    1. 01:12:817 - In all difficulties, incuding taiko.
    2. 01:51:302 - In [CDFA's Easy] and [Normal] (it isn't unsnapped in [Normal], but I recomend ending it there for consistency).
    3. 02:30:393 - In all standard difficulties.
    4. 03:09:181 - It's different in every difficulty, maybe you should normalize this AND resnap it everywhere.
    5. 03:47:969 - In all standard difficulties.
    6. 04:26:757 - In [CDFA's Easy] and [Collab].

    Breaks:
  5. 03:09:181 - This break should start here, and it doesn't in [Normal] and [Collab]. Drag it back to this point so you get some more consistency.


I didn't check the mapping for now, I guess I'd do that when I recheck the map.

Also, please don't ask me for the recheck, I'll do it by myself whenever I'm available. Thanks for your comprehension.
All fixed
Niva
Here you go, fix for SB names (as requested)~

EDIT : Also fixed some new combo placements in my parts~

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
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