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wmfchris
taiko mod as requested

D: kpy is a bit faster than me ;_;

- No unrankable problem

00:28:272 - kkd
00:44:939 - d
00:47:969 - (1/2) d k d d k, stopping at red tick would be odd for me.
00:53:424 - k dkd
01:10:394 - d
01:11:606 - K
01:46:151 - d
02:29:787 - k kkd
03:03:727 - d
03:25:848 - Remove finish as they seems to have no meaning. maybe adding a spinner between two combos may work.

- Most 2.0x section seems smooth.
- Consider
01:42:212 - kdd
01:43:424 - kdd / ddd
and similar vocal/arrangment, that reminds me the I-IV chord as incomplete finishing just like ending a phrase with a 1/4 ddk, that sounds "that haven't end" and so odd.
- Overall nice for me.

7/10
-kevincela-
Ok,so by request I'm modding too the combos of the collab.

00:32:212 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:818 (2) - Add new combo
00:38:273 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:182 (3) - Add new combo
00:39:788 (1) - Remove new combo
00:48:879 (4) - Add new combo
00:52:818 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:121 (2) - Add new combo
01:01:606 (1) - Remove new combo
01:01:909 (2) - Add new combo
01:36:758 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:061 (2) - Add new combo
01:46:152 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:758 (3) - Add new combo
01:47:667 (1) - Remove new combo
01:47:970 (2) - Add new combo
02:01:303 (3) - ^
02:49:030 (1) - Remove new combo
02:49:485 (2) - Add new combo
03:40:394 (1) - Remove new combo
03:40:697 (2) - Add new combo
04:00:849 (1) - Remove new combo

And,that's it.
spboxer3
[Easy]
00:29:182 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
00:55:849 (1,2,1) - ^
02:32:819 (4,5,1) - ^
02:55:849 (2) - down 1 grid (size2)[IMO]
03:50:394 (2,3,1) - uneven spacing
04:02:515 (1,2) - not good in easy

[Normal]
00:24:940 (2) - right 1 grid(size2)?
01:05:546 (1,2,3,4) - Let is more like square?
01:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:30:697 (2,4) - not pretty really :(

[Hard]
00:57:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - Let is more like square?
01:32:212 (1,2) - not pretty...

[Collab]
01:01:606 (4) - NC ?
01:01:909 (1) - Remove NC ?

[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]
01:03:121 - X1.75 is more better??
01:25:545 - add 1 note?
02:21:000 - X1.75 is more better??
02:29:484 - X2.0 like 01:11:909 -
02:43:121 - add 1 note?
03:09:030 - finish kiai time in here and start X1.5 in this way. Not in 03:07:969 -
03:38:272 - why X2.0 in this time?
04:26:455 (119,120,121,122) - what this... you can play it some time... I think it's not good Idea
Topic Starter
HellDawn

spboxer3 wrote:

[Normal]
00:24:940 (2) - right 1 grid(size2)? Fix'd
01:05:546 (1,2,3,4) - Let is more like square? Nah!
01:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Nah!
02:30:697 (2,4) - not pretty really :( Fix'd

[Hard]
00:57:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - Let is more like square? Nah!
01:32:212 (1,2) - not pretty... No its good <3

[Collab]
01:01:606 (4) - NC ? Nah!
01:01:909 (1) - Remove NC ? Fix'd
Thanx
DarkDunskin
Sorry for long delay :/
I finally managed to resnapp all notes.
I hope you don't mind.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Lizzehb
Nice skin and SB. <3

[CDFA's Easy]

00:39:485 (1) - Spinner y u so random?
00:47:364 (3) - If you do things like this you should continue it through the map. :3
00:53:424 (3) - Eh? what's with this slider? Make the bump larger or get rid of it, it bothers me.
00:58:273 (1) - Slider sounds strange here.
01:01:909 (3) - Do that repeating slider thingy here too.
03:35:849 (3) - This slider sounds strange too, where it repeats I mean.
03:38:273 (1) - ^
03:57:667 (1) - ^

[Normal]

-The reason why I'm telling you to space out these notes blow is because the rest of your map is so nicely spaced, it would be awesome if that continued through the map. Take is as a suggestion if you want.
-Also, when I say that I dislike this slider shape I mean it's not appealing to the eye.

00:51:000 (3) - Space this out a little more so it's not touching the (2).
01:15:243 (6) - Dislike this slider shape.
01:24:333 (5) - Space this note more so it's not touching the (6).
01:38:879 (4,5) - Space these out so they are not touching the (6)
01:39:485 (6) - If you arch this slider a LITTLE more it should look better.
01:40:697 (7) - ^
02:50:697 (2) - Space this out a little more so it doesn't overlap the (1).
03:04:333 (1,2,3) - Space these like one grid more so they don't touch so much.
03:29:485 (4) - Strange slider shape.
03:52:818 (1,2,3) - Space these out a little more.
04:07:364 (1,2,3,4) - ^
04:09:788 (7) - Dislike this slider shape.
04:11:303 (1) - Space this note away from the slider.
04:18:273 (6,7) - Space these out like 2 grids to the right.
04:19:182 (8) - Space it out.
04:19:485 (9) - Move this to the right a little.
04:21:000 (1,2,3) - See how these notes aren't touching the slider? That's the spacing I'd like to se continued!

[Hard]

-Ahh the spacing is so nice here.

01:00:394 (2) - Move this so it's not touching the (1).
01:32:212 (1,2) - Nice sliders, overlap is actually nice here.
01:44:333 (3) - Move a little bit to the left.
02:29:788 (1) - Ooo I like this slider.
02:38:273 (7) - Don't really like this one though.
04:16:758 (1) - Move this away from (5).

I don't play insanes or taiko so I don't mod them.

Don't mind me being a nazi I don't normally mod this extensively, I really like this song that's why. :3
Good luck on ranking. <3
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Lizzehb wrote:

Nice skin and SB. <3

[Normal]

-The reason why I'm telling you to space out these notes blow is because the rest of your map is so nicely spaced, it would be awesome if that continued through the map. Take is as a suggestion if you want.
-Also, when I say that I dislike this slider shape I mean it's not appealing to the eye.

00:51:000 (3) - Space this out a little more so it's not touching the (2).
01:15:243 (6) - Dislike this slider shape.
01:24:333 (5) - Space this note more so it's not touching the (6).
01:38:879 (4,5) - Space these out so they are not touching the (6)
01:39:485 (6) - If you arch this slider a LITTLE more it should look better.
01:40:697 (7) - ^
02:50:697 (2) - Space this out a little more so it doesn't overlap the (1).
03:04:333 (1,2,3) - Space these like one grid more so they don't touch so much.
03:29:485 (4) - Strange slider shape.
03:52:818 (1,2,3) - Space these out a little more.
04:07:364 (1,2,3,4) - ^
04:09:788 (7) - Dislike this slider shape.
04:11:303 (1) - Space this note away from the slider.
04:18:273 (6,7) - Space these out like 2 grids to the right.
04:19:182 (8) - Space it out.
04:19:485 (9) - Move this to the right a little.
04:21:000 (1,2,3) - See how these notes aren't touching the slider? That's the spacing I'd like to se continued!

I fixed some suggestion

[Hard]

-Ahh the spacing is so nice here. <3

01:00:394 (2) - Move this so it's not touching the (1).
01:32:212 (1,2) - Nice sliders, overlap is actually nice here.
01:44:333 (3) - Move a little bit to the left.
02:29:788 (1) - Ooo I like this slider.
02:38:273 (7) - Don't really like this one though.
04:16:758 (1) - Move this away from (5).

All fixed

I don't play insanes or taiko so I don't mod them.

Don't mind me being a nazi I don't normally mod this extensively, I really like this song that's why. :3
Good luck on ranking. <3
Thanx a lot but u missed star :P
Lizzehb
B-But it cost KD to star now. GD just as I start modding again everything changes ahhhh.
NotShinta
General:
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at.
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)
01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap.

Collab:
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn)
02:34:333 (1,2,3,4) - I think I may have pointed this out before, but this spacing increase is far too much compared to the previous combo. Plus, this spacing decrease at 02:39:182 (1,2) equally unexpected. Of course, you could either remap the offending parts or make it more natural by working the rest of the map towards it. (Debbiee)
02:42:515 (4,5,6) - You might want to move this whole thing down a few grids for spacing consistency. Yeah, starting to get nitpicky. (Debbiee)

Hard:
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks.
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there.
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond.
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally.

Normal:
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties.
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty.
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here.
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice.
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle?
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3))

CDFAlejandro, as he would like it
- Such short repeat sliders may be difficult to read for an Easy difficulty. Most of the time there is enough "recovery time" though, but they could be done better, still.
01:17:667 (1) - Consider adding a finish on the start of this. I expected one. Likewise with 01:37:061 (1), and other similar chorus moments.
02:43:121 (2) - Maybe move a grid left for symmetry. As much as you can get with your silly grids.
- ٩(̾●̮̮̃̾•̃̾)۶

Cool work.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at. Fix'd
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)
01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.ok
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap. Fix'd
Collab:
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn) Fix'd

Hard:
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks. no
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there. no
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond. Fix'd
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally. Fix'd

Normal:
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties. Fix'd
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.Fix'd
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty. no
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_ no
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here. Fix'd
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice. Fix'd
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle? no
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3)) Fix'd

Cool work.
Thank you
abalee
[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?

Easy:
need renapped.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?
All fixed
Breeze
well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white

Download: sliderb.7z
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Breeze wrote:

well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white
Thanx a lot
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~~

CDFA's Easy
looks fine~

Normal
  1. Circle Size +1?
00:39:182 (2) - overlap at 00:38:879 (1) - ?
01:06:152 (2) - down 2 grid?
other looks fine~

Hard
00:59:182 (2,3) - down 1 grid?
01:17:970 (5) - add a New Combo?
01:24:030 (5) - ^
01:44:333 (3) - this slider looks very strange = =

Collab
looks Good!

---
Good Luck~ ;)
abalee
/me facepain.

unsnapped notes in collab and CDFA's easy.
Shohei Ohtani
Protip: You don't need me to re-snap the notes in my diff for you o-o. You can just just pres the "resnap" button and snap that ish.
Shohei Ohtani
In other news.

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240,192,218273,6,0,B|192:224|144:144|80:176,2,159,4|0|8
256,272,220697,2,0,B|256:384,2,106,0|8|0
256,144,222515,1,8
256,192,223121,12,8,226758
128,64,227970,6,0,B|144:112|256:141|256:141|368:112|400:64,1,318,4|8
480,64,230394,2,0,B|480:192,2,106,0|8|0
352,96,232212,1,8
288,160,232818,6,0,B|288:192|272:224|240:240|224:240,1,106,0|8
159,191,234030,2,0,B|177:80,1,106,0|8
256,96,235243,1,0
256,176,235849,1,8
256,256,236455,2,0,B|256:288,4,26.5,2|0|8|0|8
192,192,237667,6,0,B|208:160|256:144|256:144|304:160|320:192,2,159,4|0|8
256,256,240091,2,0,B|256:368,1,106,0|8
336,352,241303,2,8,B|368:368|389:352|389:352,2,53,0|8|8
256,320,242515,6,0,B|256:192,2,106,0|8|0
203,253,244333,2,0,B|315:253,1,106,8|0
400,240,245546,1,8
432,160,246152,2,0,B|432:128,4,26.5,2|0|8|0|8
352,192,247364,6,0,B|320:224|256:176|256:176|192:224|160:192,1,212,4|0
80,160,249182,1,8
32,224,249788,2,0,B|32:256|48:288|112:304,1,106,0|8
176,288,251000,2,0,B|208:304|208:336,2,53,0|8|8
256,256,252212,6,0,B|256:368,1,106,0|8
330,321,253424,2,0,B|330:209,2,106,0|8|0
412,341,255243,2,0,B|448:288,1,53,8|0
441,212,256152,2,0,B|394:172,1,53,0|8
320,160,257061,6,0,B|288:144|257:193|257:193|224:144|192:160,2,159,4|0|8
400,192,259485,2,0,B|432:176|464:208|464:224|441:250,1,106,0|8
352,272,260697,2,0,B|288:304,2,53,0|8|8
411,212,261909,6,0,B|411:164|363:164|363:164|315:164|315:100,2,159,4|0|8
351,271,264333,2,0,B|255:319,1,106,0|8
196,258,265546,2,0,B|148:258,4,26.5,0|0|8|0|8
256,192,266758,1,4
Topic Starter
HellDawn
Done!

SPOILER
You cannot make another post so soon after your last.
abalee
that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [CDFA's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats
OMG thanks abalee -.-
CDFA's sliders were really good :p
abalee
Finally.
bubbled.
i think it really need tp remove the limit for bats
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

Finally.
bubbled.
Thanx Abalee <3
[Au]-[Revoir]
8-)
I know that we are young.
And I know you may love me.
But I just can't be with you like this anymore.
Alejandro.
8-)
narakucrimson
Hi HellDawn!

I didn't do a full mod because I have to go now, but I will when I get back home. I probably won't have much to say anyway.

For instance, you should force a custom sliderborder.

It looks way better. Seriously.

I suggest using either this:
SliderBorder : 60,60,60


or this:
SliderBorder : 210,210,210


Any of those looks better than the default one.
Remember to add the code under [Colours] on each .osu file!

Oh, and something I saw in the Collab:
  1. 02:32:817 (1) - Place the end of that slider in a way that it isn't overlapping the slider track. Not only does that look bad, but it's also a point in the upcoming new rules that states that you can't do that. For real.
Well, good luck and sorry if you have to pop for this!
narakucrimson
I checked everything else and it all seems fine to me. I just think you should fix what I mentioned in my previous post. Bye!
Sakura
I was going to mod this, and i see you kudosu'd narakucrimson's post so if you make any changes, you could ask abalee to rebubble it and then i can mod it.
DarkDunskin
Just fixed the Timing things arien666 mentioned ingame.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Huskatron
I came from DarkDunskin :D



First go, too! ^_^
abalee
Gratz that narakucrimson became a MAT that I could get rid of this recheck thing blablabla
rebubbled.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Sakura Hana wrote:

I was going to mod this, and i see you kudosu'd narakucrimson's post so if you make any changes, you could ask abalee to rebubble it and then i can mod it.
Im waiting <3
RandomJibberish
General
Errors in the lyrics SB:
"Nothing to Loose" should be "Nothing to Lose"
Read this and embed it firmly into your mind to avoid potential future embarrassment
"a halo 'around her finger" should be "a halo 'round her finger" or "a halo around her finger"
"He's gotta firefight, Got-cool the bad", as well as being an atrocious lyric, should be "He's gonna' firefight, Gonna' cool the bad"

Also arguably every Gotta and Gonna should have an apostrophe after it

The SB gets significantly less cool in the last chorus - no moving around and way less Alejandros all over the place. Make it more like the previous choruses.

The spinner is in a completely different visual style to the rest of the map, as are the collab names.

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing
02:47:363 (1) - The redpoint corner shouldn't touch the rest of the slider - it could be hard to gauge the direction of the slider without snaking sliders enabled. I suggest something like this
03:41:908 (1,2,3,4) - Well these jumps are completely out of nowhere
03:52:666 (1,2,3) - ^
03:59:939 (6) - Well this 1/8 is completely out of nowhere
04:00:393 (1,1,1) - This rhythm is kind of random. Also the comboing is weird

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<
The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation
03:09:181 - End the kiai here.

Normal
The low spacing compared to slider speed making everything overlap everywhere is annoying but whatever
Niva

RandomJibberish wrote:

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing To HellDawn : I already fixed this part
03:41:908 (1,2,3,4) - Well these jumps are completely out of nowhere I suppose it's readable enough with the new combo? :3
03:52:666 (1,2,3) - ^ Same as above
03:59:939 (6) - Well this 1/8 is completely out of nowhere Changed into two notes
04:00:393 (1,1,1) - This rhythm is kind of random. Also the comboing is weird Removed all the NC. The weird rhythm seems to come from the clap I overuse (I removed the clap from the second slider anyway, sounds better)
Thanks for mod ~

EDIT : HellDawn asked me to fix the R slider also, so here's your fix ~

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Collab].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn

RandomJibberish wrote:

General
Errors in the lyrics SB:
"Nothing to Loose" should be "Nothing to Lose"
Read this and embed it firmly into your mind to avoid potential future embarrassment
"a halo 'around her finger" should be "a halo 'round her finger" or "a halo around her finger"
"He's gotta firefight, Got-cool the bad", as well as being an atrocious lyric, should be "He's gonna' firefight, Gonna' cool the bad"

Also arguably every Gotta and Gonna should have an apostrophe after it

The SB gets significantly less cool in the last chorus - no moving around and way less Alejandros all over the place. Make it more like the previous choruses.

The spinner is in a completely different visual style to the rest of the map, as are the collab names.

Collab
00:32:817 (1,1) - Sort out this accidental new combo thing
02:47:363 (1) - The redpoint corner shouldn't touch the rest of the slider - it could be hard to gauge the direction of the slider without snaking sliders enabled. I suggest something like this


Normal
The low spacing compared to slider speed making everything overlap everywhere is annoying but whatever

All fixed !
OnosakiHito

RandomJibberish wrote:

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<
The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation
Might help if I say that I feel okay with this patterns. Also the velocity is fine for me since they are not messi.
Let's see what DarkDunskin will say.

OzzyOzrock
I meant to mod this.

[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60%

00:28:273 (14,15,16) - Not really fitting, and an ugly badly playing pattern. If you want it, use k k d.
00:33:046 (32) - Remove this.

Oh God, the amount of kdd and kdk is disgusting, I wouldn't recommend using those patterns since they play badly and look horrible.
Actually a lot of this diff looks and plays bad. You have those random 1/8 patterns all over the place here.

00:34:333 (2,3,4) - kkd
00:36:152 (9,10,11) - ddd
00:36:758 (12,13) - d k
00:37:364 (14,15,16) - dkd
00:37:970 (17,18,19) - kkd

More-so like that. And keep a structure, please, at the moment, a majority of the diff looks very random. Rather than changing the pattern you use every stanza, make a pattern, use it for one phrase, make a slight variation of it the second phrase, then use another pattern. Just make sure that the patterns you repeat are good. Something very simple that fits the beat of this song.

But in your case, simply don't base your map on the vocals. Especially not on this song. This makes it in total contrast to the beat being made in the song, which is confusing and plays bad.

tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.
And do your best to not overmap this. 1/8 isn't too called for, but it's fine.

Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. Either way, good luck.
DarkDunskin

RandomJibberish wrote:

Taiko
the 1/8 is all over the place and doesn't match the intensity of the song in the slightest :<

- Well while mapping I noticed that a taiko difficulty without these 1/8 would be plain boring to play, because the main Background Rythm is very simple. I would have had to map d k d k d k most of the time, so I tried to place 1/8 along the Lyrics to make it more interesting.
And for what I believe, it turned out very well. The patterns combine the fast movements of the Lyrics along with that simple and slow beat in the Background.


The velocity is also extremely high but I would assume it's a fixing the above issue with another issue situation

- You're right with that. To make these 1/8-patterns readable I had to increase the Slider Velocity very much. This may not be the usuall Taiko mapping stile, but it gave me the chance to add extra slowdowns and speed ups that would not have been readable with a "normal" SV
in a 99 BPM map.


03:09:181 - End the kiai here. - fixed
03:47:969 - kiai time fix here

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu

EDIT: Actually didnt see your Post Ozzy, I may take a look at your mod tomowrrow, since I dont have much time today -.-
DarkDunskin

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko]
- Keep the volume consistent at 60% . - done

tl;dr destroy kdd and kdk, map with more structure.

- Actually, you're the first one to say that o.0 Most Players were fine with it till now. Asked NeoRainier and OnoHito about it again, both reassured me that its anjoyable and ok the way it is :/

Or you could ignore this and make the world cry. - You tell me <.<
- Changed a few things Neo mentioned though.
- Changed settings too.

Thanks for modding, I like feedback.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
mancuso_JM_
Alejandro in Graveyard :( . You have to revive this please
mancuso_JM_
YAY Revived :D
Time to mod your map ;)

General:
The name of artist is Lady GaGa, you have to change that and make full submit

CDFA's Easy:
00:32:817 (4): I don't know if sliders like this play good in Easy. I think that cause confusion in New players. You have another sliders like this but I have to mention only this
03:42:211 (2,3): Spacing too far
03:51:908 (2,3): ^. After that don't forget to move the next notes to don't have spacing problem again

Normal:
00:24:636 (1,2): Spacing
02:07:060 (1,2): ^
01:51:302 (T): Maybe this kiai have to ends here for consistency
02:34:939 (x): Add a Note

Hard:
01:36:151 (x): Add a Note
01:50:943 (T): Unsnapped kiai. And I also think that this kiai have to ends in 01:51:302
02:22:211 (x): Add a Note
03:08:575 (T): Unsnapped kiai. And also think that this kiai have to ends in 03:09:181
03:32:514 (x): Add a Note
04:26:757 (1): Remove New Combo

Dunskin's Taiko Oni:
Maybe OD +1
Looks good :)

Collab:
00:44:939 (x): Add a Note
01:14:332 (x): ^
01:19:181 (x): ^
02:30:393 (5): New Combo for consistency with 1st part
02:31:908 (x): Add a Note
02:32:211 (1): Remove New Combo
03:39:484 (4): I think that this note don't follow nothing. Please, remove it

Please rank this map.
Star and Good Luck with rank ;)
(oops.. Sorry for double post)
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