Lady Gaga - Alejandro

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HellDawn

NotShinta wrote:

General:
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at. Fix'd
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)
01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.ok
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap. Fix'd
Collab:
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn) Fix'd

Hard:
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks. no
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there. no
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond. Fix'd
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally. Fix'd

Normal:
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties. Fix'd
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.Fix'd
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty. no
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_ no
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here. Fix'd
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice. Fix'd
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle? no
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3)) Fix'd

Cool work.
Thank you
abalee
[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?

Easy:
need renapped.
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

[collab]
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?

normal:
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?
All fixed
Breeze
well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white

Download: sliderb.7z
Topic Starter
HellDawn

Breeze wrote:

well, this time it's pink and yellow

This time it's pink and white
Thanx a lot
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~~

CDFA's Easy
looks fine~

Normal
  1. Circle Size +1?

00:39:182 (2) - overlap at 00:38:879 (1) - ?
01:06:152 (2) - down 2 grid?
other looks fine~

Hard
00:59:182 (2,3) - down 1 grid?
01:17:970 (5) - add a New Combo?
01:24:030 (5) - ^
01:44:333 (3) - this slider looks very strange = =

Collab
looks Good!

---
Good Luck~ ;)
abalee
/me facepain.

unsnapped notes in collab and CDFA's easy.
DNR
Protip: You don't need me to re-snap the notes in my diff for you o-o. You can just just pres the "resnap" button and snap that ish.
DNR
In other news.

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Topic Starter
HellDawn
Done!

You cannot make another post so soon after your last.
abalee
that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [CDFA's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

that's the real snapped diff.
i start to think that ask ppy to remove the limint for bats
OMG thanks abalee -.-
CDFA's sliders were really good :p
abalee
Finally.
bubbled.
i think it really need tp remove the limit for bats
Topic Starter
HellDawn

abalee wrote:

Finally.
bubbled.
Thanx Abalee <3
[Au]-[Revoir]
8-)
I know that we are young.
And I know you may love me.
But I just can't be with you like this anymore.
Alejandro.
8-)
narakucrimson
Hi HellDawn!

I didn't do a full mod because I have to go now, but I will when I get back home. I probably won't have much to say anyway.

For instance, you should force a custom sliderborder.

It looks way better. Seriously.

I suggest using either this:
SliderBorder : 60,60,60


or this:
SliderBorder : 210,210,210


Any of those looks better than the default one.
Remember to add the code under [Colours] on each .osu file!

Oh, and something I saw in the Collab:
  1. 02:32:817 (1) - Place the end of that slider in a way that it isn't overlapping the slider track. Not only does that look bad, but it's also a point in the upcoming new rules that states that you can't do that. For real.


Well, good luck and sorry if you have to pop for this!
narakucrimson
I checked everything else and it all seems fine to me. I just think you should fix what I mentioned in my previous post. Bye!
Sakura
I was going to mod this, and i see you kudosu'd narakucrimson's post so if you make any changes, you could ask abalee to rebubble it and then i can mod it.
DarkDunskin
Just fixed the Timing things arien666 mentioned ingame.

Download: Lady Gaga - Alejandro (HellDawn) [Dunskin's Taiko Oni].osu
Huskatron
I came from DarkDunskin :D



First go, too! ^_^
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