Don't fart around. It is stated that IRC/IM mods should be outlined with a summary or log. People being given kudosu without any obvious reason only ends up looking like the mapper is sucking up to people. That just looks silly.
00:24:940 (2) - right 1 grid(size2)? Fix'd
01:05:546 (1,2,3,4) - Let is more like square? Nah!
01:41:909 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Nah!
02:30:697 (2,4) - not pretty really Fix'd
00:57:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - Let is more like square? Nah!
01:32:212 (1,2) - not pretty... No its good <3
01:01:606 (4) - NC ? Nah!
01:01:909 (1) - Remove NC ? Fix'd
Thanx a lot but u missed star
Lizzehb wrote:Nice skin and SB. <3
-The reason why I'm telling you to space out these notes blow is because the rest of your map is so nicely spaced, it would be awesome if that continued through the map. Take is as a suggestion if you want.
-Also, when I say that I dislike this slider shape I mean it's not appealing to the eye.
00:51:000 (3) - Space this out a little more so it's not touching the (2).
01:15:243 (6) - Dislike this slider shape.
01:24:333 (5) - Space this note more so it's not touching the (6).
01:38:879 (4,5) - Space these out so they are not touching the (6)
01:39:485 (6) - If you arch this slider a LITTLE more it should look better.
01:40:697 (7) - ^
02:50:697 (2) - Space this out a little more so it doesn't overlap the (1).
03:04:333 (1,2,3) - Space these like one grid more so they don't touch so much.
03:29:485 (4) - Strange slider shape.
03:52:818 (1,2,3) - Space these out a little more.
04:07:364 (1,2,3,4) - ^
04:09:788 (7) - Dislike this slider shape.
04:11:303 (1) - Space this note away from the slider.
04:18:273 (6,7) - Space these out like 2 grids to the right.
04:19:182 (8) - Space it out.
04:19:485 (9) - Move this to the right a little.
04:21:000 (1,2,3) - See how these notes aren't touching the slider? That's the spacing I'd like to se continued!
I fixed some suggestion
-Ahh the spacing is so nice here. <3
01:00:394 (2) - Move this so it's not touching the (1).
01:32:212 (1,2) - Nice sliders, overlap is actually nice here.
01:44:333 (3) - Move a little bit to the left.
02:29:788 (1) - Ooo I like this slider.
02:38:273 (7) - Don't really like this one though.
04:16:758 (1) - Move this away from (5).
I don't play insanes or taiko so I don't mod them.
Don't mind me being a nazi I don't normally mod this extensively, I really like this song that's why. :3
Good luck on ranking. <3
- In the intro, the metronome doesn't seem to actually fit the spoken word/instrumental thing. Therefore, it could be argued that 24333 is a better offset to start at. Fix'd
01:11:000 - Nice typo. (Loose/lose, SB)01:52:212 - Perhaps drag 'break' to here, instead.ok
- Might as well edit the capitalisation of the topic title to match the beatmap. Fix'd
- It's recommended to have at least one spinner to prevent ties in scores.
02:16:152 (2,3,4) - Personally, I'd make this either consistently a little stream or consistently a stack, rather than alternating like you do here. It's slightly less awkward that way. (HellDawn) Fix'd
00:24:333 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest, I think these would look much better if the redpoints were at the same place as the ticks. no
00:32:212 (1) - This spacing is inconsistent compared to the previous combo; you could start by making each slider more 'level' (i.e. aligned start and end) and fix spacing from there. no
00:57:364 (2) - Move this a couple of grids right and up, so that it looks more like a perfect diamond. Fix'd
01:00:394 (2) - This big jump could easily be read as 1/1 from the previous slider, and there is nothing else like it in the rest of the difficulty. I'd suggest spacing this normally. Fix'd
- Please set tick rate 2 for consistency with the other difficulties. Fix'd
- Many of your overlaps could be avoided by moving objects by a simple grid, occasionally breaking spacing, yet readably.
00:53:424 (3) - This spacing/anti-jump is very strange. Please space this normally within the context of the map.Fix'd
01:25:242 - It feels strange to suddenly miss out on mapping to vocals when that's what you've done for the previous combo. One would expect a hitcircle here, despite difficulty. no
01:51:606 (3) - Add a whistle, or even a finish, to end this section nicely? (Likewise with 03:09:182 (4)_ no
02:11:000 (2) - I think a finish works well here. Fix'd
02:37:667 (3) - Once again, a finish would be nice. Fix'd
02:43:727 (6) - Whistle? no
02:51:000 (3) - Finish? (Actually, same for the start of 02:54:637 (1) and 02:55:849 (3)) Fix'd
still haver unsnapped notes.
01:46:758 (1,2) - spacing?
02:30:697 (2) - ,02:31:909 (4) - are they missed claps?
Thanx a lot
well, this time it's pink and yellow
This time it's pink and white