General:
You need a custom sliderball, because you have a sliderfollowcircle. Please either use the one from the templateskin, or create a new one yourself!
Collab:
- The New combos in HellDawn's, Pereira006's and Nivalis' parts are pretty inconsistent, which is easily noticable. Please go through your part once again and look at each new combo and if it makes sense with the way you placed the other new combos!
00:43:424 (3) - The repeat is covered by a previous hitburst. It's readable, because the hitbursts you used were kind of transparent, but for people who delete custom skins, it'd be nice if you just made the repeat more visible.
00:50:697 (2) - ^
00:52:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm you mapped to in this section is quite different from the rest of your part. I don't know, you can keep it like this, but I'd prefer it if you mapped to a similar rhythm as in the other places!
01:12:818 (1) - That sudden spacing increase starting here is a little surprising. Maybe make it a bit less extreme, at least at the start of the section, so the player can prepare!
01:20:091 (1) - And starting from here the spacing is very low again. That's very strange :/
01:32:212 (3) - Maybe make this a tilde, like 01:33:424 (4) - ? I mean, if you already used a tilde for the very same word in the lyrics...
01:39:182 (1) - Personally, I don't find this spinner very fitting, and it's also very short. I think you should make it a slider, that'd be more appropriate, since spinners are usually for longer, and for more "epic "sections.
02:32:818 (1) - Nice Same for the other two sliders
02:49:030 (1) - Move it a bit farther away from the previous slider, please!
03:03:272 (1) - I find those sliderwhistles sound strange...
Taiko:
I'm.. uhm..
not very good at taiko modding, sir.
Hard:
The New combos are again a bit inconsistent. Try to quickly go through your map maybe and recheck your combos!
00:56:455 (2) - Too close to the previous note!
00:59:788 (1,2) - Jump is a bit surprising. I wouldn't use it, personally.
03:45:546 (5) - Why is this slider so wiggly? :O That's not really necessary...
04:16:758 (1) - That's a bit close to the previous note. Move it away? Or even better, place a note on 04:16:454 - !
04:26:757 - Put a note here?
Normal:
02:34:030 (1) - A bit close to the previous note, don't you think? =P
CDFA likes men:
Circle Size +1? Actually your general difficulty settings are just a bit high for Easy. Dunno.
00:39:485 (1) - Spinner feels kind of unfitting, please consider mapping that section with more than a spinner!
General mapping style comments:
HellDawn: What's most important for you is probably that you should try to use prettier sliders You mostly use linear ones, which are kind of boring, and when you DO use curved bezier sliders, they aren't really aesthetic. What a pretty slider is, for that you mostly need to rely on your own sense of aesthetics. If you're still not sure what is pretty and what isn't, maybe you should just make the sliders symmetric! ;P
CDFA: That Easy of yours isn't really exciting or pretty. You could have made some pretty patterns with long sliders. I think using bigger circles would have helped that greatly! The screen will look a bit less empty!
Generally a neat map with a good enough difficulty spread. Some sliders look iffy and some rhythms were slightly odd, but it's very well playable and I can see that you put effort into it. Keep it up!
You need a custom sliderball, because you have a sliderfollowcircle. Please either use the one from the templateskin, or create a new one yourself!
Collab:
- The New combos in HellDawn's, Pereira006's and Nivalis' parts are pretty inconsistent, which is easily noticable. Please go through your part once again and look at each new combo and if it makes sense with the way you placed the other new combos!
00:43:424 (3) - The repeat is covered by a previous hitburst. It's readable, because the hitbursts you used were kind of transparent, but for people who delete custom skins, it'd be nice if you just made the repeat more visible.
00:50:697 (2) - ^
00:52:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm you mapped to in this section is quite different from the rest of your part. I don't know, you can keep it like this, but I'd prefer it if you mapped to a similar rhythm as in the other places!
01:12:818 (1) - That sudden spacing increase starting here is a little surprising. Maybe make it a bit less extreme, at least at the start of the section, so the player can prepare!
01:20:091 (1) - And starting from here the spacing is very low again. That's very strange :/
01:32:212 (3) - Maybe make this a tilde, like 01:33:424 (4) - ? I mean, if you already used a tilde for the very same word in the lyrics...
01:39:182 (1) - Personally, I don't find this spinner very fitting, and it's also very short. I think you should make it a slider, that'd be more appropriate, since spinners are usually for longer, and for more "epic "sections.
02:32:818 (1) - Nice Same for the other two sliders
02:49:030 (1) - Move it a bit farther away from the previous slider, please!
03:03:272 (1) - I find those sliderwhistles sound strange...
Taiko:
I'm.. uhm..
not very good at taiko modding, sir.
Hard:
The New combos are again a bit inconsistent. Try to quickly go through your map maybe and recheck your combos!
00:56:455 (2) - Too close to the previous note!
00:59:788 (1,2) - Jump is a bit surprising. I wouldn't use it, personally.
03:45:546 (5) - Why is this slider so wiggly? :O That's not really necessary...
04:16:758 (1) - That's a bit close to the previous note. Move it away? Or even better, place a note on 04:16:454 - !
04:26:757 - Put a note here?
Normal:
02:34:030 (1) - A bit close to the previous note, don't you think? =P
CDFA likes men:
Circle Size +1? Actually your general difficulty settings are just a bit high for Easy. Dunno.
00:39:485 (1) - Spinner feels kind of unfitting, please consider mapping that section with more than a spinner!
General mapping style comments:
HellDawn: What's most important for you is probably that you should try to use prettier sliders You mostly use linear ones, which are kind of boring, and when you DO use curved bezier sliders, they aren't really aesthetic. What a pretty slider is, for that you mostly need to rely on your own sense of aesthetics. If you're still not sure what is pretty and what isn't, maybe you should just make the sliders symmetric! ;P
CDFA: That Easy of yours isn't really exciting or pretty. You could have made some pretty patterns with long sliders. I think using bigger circles would have helped that greatly! The screen will look a bit less empty!
Generally a neat map with a good enough difficulty spread. Some sliders look iffy and some rhythms were slightly odd, but it's very well playable and I can see that you put effort into it. Keep it up!