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1. 00:00:799 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe put Clap in this 4 notes?
2. 00:16:812 (5) - Maybe move this note (5) to x248 y200 & (1) sliderhead to x160 y264 to make a perfect line (4,5,1)
3. 00:18:284 (1,2) - This note have too much spacing, make it more tiny for consistency
4. 00:21:781 (2,3) - Fix the blanket
5. 00:23:438 (2,3) - Fix the path to (3), its not perfect right line
6. 00:24:358 (1,2,3,4) - In this notes, is better use a clap, with sampleset drum than a normal whistle
7. 00:28:407 (8,9) - Ctrl+G for a triangle pattern!
8. 00:30:431 (4) - I prefer a triangle sliderform here, I think it looks better and nicer! https://puu.sh/sISO4/6f7822bb59.png
9. 00:33:376 (1) - ^
10. 00:30:984 (6) - Clap here for consistency
11. 00:38:714 (3) - Must have more spacing, because its more separate in the timeline; or make the spacing more tiny in the 1/2 jump (1,2)
12. 00:41:658 (1) - ^
13. 02:01:168 (3) - ^
14. 00:48:192 (5) - This note dont have a sound, is overmapped~ I suggest remove, and make the other 2 notes a 1/2 jump?
15. 00:48:928 (5) - ^
16. 02:06:597 (3) - ^
17. 02:11:382 (5) - ^
18. 02:31:076 (2) - ^
19. 02:34:941 (2) - ^
20. 03:42:671 (7) - ^
21. 04:02:916 (7) - ^
22. 04:09:174 (8) - ^
23. 00:52:149 (7) - Ctrl+G for more flow
24. 04:17:548 (1) - ^
25. 00:55:094 (10) - Move this note to x86 y224 to make emphasis in the jump to (1), because it's deserve more spacing
26. 00:57:303 (4) - For a better look, you can make a blanket whit the slider (3) here! https://puu.sh/sITC4/09f5ec1c8b.png
27. 00:59:879 (2,3,4) - You can move this objects to make a triangle jump pattern, in the actual places, it looks very messy
28. 01:00:799 (7,1) - why antijump here? It's better to make a hight ds between this objects for the emphasis of the strong sound
29. 01:02:640 (1) - End this slider in the white tick, is more strong the sound in the white than the red, I know you're following vocals here, but you can't just ignore the strong beat, so you can make the slider more longer, or put a note in the white tick
30. 02:25:094 (1) - ^
31. 01:15:155 (3) - Ctrl+G maybe? it make a better flow to the next notes
32. 01:15:892 (1) - You can make a nice overlap here, put the slidertail of (1) in the slider tail of (3)! and fix the next pattern, I suggest to take care of the spacing of between notes in (1,2,3,4) because is not the same, it gonna make the map more clean
33. 03:06:321 (3,4,5,6) - Like I said before, you can fix the spacing, because is not the same in all the notes here
34. 03:12:211 (3,4,5,6) - ^
35. 01:22:517 (3,4) - The spacing is not the same with the same rhythm notes (1,2) & fix the blanket in (1,2)
36. 01:25:830 (4) - This slider is too far comparing (1,2)
37. 02:48:284 (4) - ^
38. 01:28:407 (3) - ^ fix the ds
39. 02:50:861 (3) - ^
40. 02:44:971 (3,4) - ^
41. 01:56:014 (8,9) - Fix the blanket~
42. 01:56:198 (9,11) - Avoid to overlap this two
43. 01:53:438 (6,7) - This two are too close comparing the spacing you used before
44. 01:57:671 (2,4) - Move these, to make the spacing between them and (1,3) are the same (in other words, put the circles in the same distance [in the centre] of the sliders)
45. 01:59:695 (6) - Too close, make the ds bigger
46. 02:02:272 (6,1) - If you want this notes stay close, you can make a nice blanket, like this!
47. 02:14:603 (7) - Move the slidertail to the left, to make it looks nicer
48. 02:17:732 (1,2,3) - Fix the blanket of (1,2) with (3)
49. 02:36:873 (1) - Make the curse more soft, it looks a little weird
50. 02:41:290 (1,2,3,4) - OOH I LIKE IT
51. 02:43:499 (3,1) - Fix blanket
52. 03:09:082 (2,3) - ^ can be better
53. 04:27:855 (2,3) - ^
54. 03:41:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest to make a star pattern here! will be great! and it will fix the inequality of the spacing
55. 03:49:757 (3) - The slider reverse must be in the red tick, the blue don't have enough sound here, and add a note in the white tick
56. 03:50:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - woah, such a nice overmapped stream xD there is no sounds for make such a longer slider, I suggest replace it with 1/2 sliders , same with the next notes (reverses) only make a 1/2 slider pattern and It will be okay, simple, to represent the simple sound here >.<
57. 04:01:904 (1) - The slider with reverse don't follow in a better way the sound here, because it no have sound in the blue tick, I recommend replace it with 2 1/4 sliders
58. 04:20:309 (4,5,6) - Make the ds the same
59. 04:23:806 (5,6,7) - Suggest: https://puu.sh/sIYvN/8774c74c1a.png
60. 04:32:640 (1) - Overlap the slider tail with the slidertail of the next slider (1)
61. 05:00:063 (1,2) - Blanket fix~
62. 05:04:112 (1) - Flip vertical, it makes a mirror pattern, and it looks better (aaand the path to the next note is more soft, including a better flow)
63. 05:05:585 (1) - Delete the 4 point in the sliderform, the curve looks awful and weird, and this make the form more similar to previous sliders
64. 05:14:603 - Only for the spinner, I hear it too loud, I suggest down the volume to 20-25%
65. 05:34:640 - ^ the same but more, like 10-5%

Cosmolade wrote:

hey! M4M
I like the song yush~ the bg is awesome o:
And in overall, the diff is really well mapped, only a few things for fix >.<)/
I suggest check AiMod, it says 2 objects aren't snapped!

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1. 00:00:799 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe put Clap in this 4 notes? Done
2. 00:16:812 (5) - Maybe move this note (5) to x248 y200 & (1) sliderhead to x160 y264 to make a perfect line (4,5,1) Done, looks and plays well thanks
3. 00:18:284 (1,2) - This note have too much spacing, make it more tiny for consistency Done
4. 00:21:781 (2,3) - Fix the blanket Done
5. 00:23:438 (2,3) - Fix the path to (3), its not perfect right line Done
6. 00:24:358 (1,2,3,4) - In this notes, is better use a clap, with sampleset drum than a normal whistle Done
7. 00:28:407 (8,9) - Ctrl+G for a triangle pattern! Done
8. 00:30:431 (4) - I prefer a triangle sliderform here, I think it looks better and nicer! https://puu.sh/sISO4/6f7822bb59.png Changed
9. 00:33:376 (1) - ^ Changed
10. 00:30:984 (6) - Clap here for consistency Done
11. 00:38:714 (3) - Must have more spacing, because its more separate in the timeline; or make the spacing more tiny in the 1/2 jump (1,2) Moved the 1 to farther away
12. 00:41:658 (1) - ^
13. 02:01:168 (3) - ^
14. 00:48:192 (5) - This note dont have a sound, is overmapped~ I suggest remove, and make the other 2 notes a 1/2 jump?
15. 00:48:928 (5) - ^
16. 02:06:597 (3) - ^
17. 02:11:382 (5) - ^
18. 02:31:076 (2) - ^
19. 02:34:941 (2) - ^
20. 03:42:671 (7) - ^
21. 04:02:916 (7) - ^
22. 04:09:174 (8) - ^ I hear drums in all these parts... if this is raised as an issue again I'll consider changing
23. 00:52:149 (7) - Ctrl+G for more flow Done
24. 04:17:548 (1) - ^ Done
25. 00:55:094 (10) - Move this note to x86 y224 to make emphasis in the jump to (1), because it's deserve more spacing Done
26. 00:57:303 (4) - For a better look, you can make a blanket whit the slider (3) here! https://puu.sh/sITC4/09f5ec1c8b.png Done
27. 00:59:879 (2,3,4) - You can move this objects to make a triangle jump pattern, in the actual places, it looks very messy Done
28. 01:00:799 (7,1) - why antijump here? It's better to make a hight ds between this objects for the emphasis of the strong sound Yeah fixed this part to tie in changing the previous jumps to triangles above
29. 01:02:640 (1) - End this slider in the white tick, is more strong the sound in the white than the red, I know you're following vocals here, but you can't just ignore the strong beat, so you can make the slider more longer, or put a note in the white tick Done
30. 02:25:094 (1) - ^ Done
31. 01:15:155 (3) - Ctrl+G maybe? it make a better flow to the next notes Done
32. 01:15:892 (1) - You can make a nice overlap here, put the slidertail of (1) in the slider tail of (3)! and fix the next pattern, I suggest to take care of the spacing of between notes in (1,2,3,4) because is not the same, it gonna make the map more clean Overlap looks really nice, thanks. Changed the pattern a bit due to moving it to start on the overlap.
33. 03:06:321 (3,4,5,6) - Like I said before, you can fix the spacing, because is not the same in all the notes here
34. 03:12:211 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Not sure what you mean with these, they're spaced evenly to go with the vocals
35. 01:22:517 (3,4) - The spacing is not the same with the same rhythm notes (1,2) & fix the blanket in (1,2)
36. 01:25:830 (4) - This slider is too far comparing (1,2) But they're the exact same ds apart???
37. 02:48:284 (4) - ^
38. 01:28:407 (3) - ^ fix the ds
39. 02:50:861 (3) - ^
40. 02:44:971 (3,4) - ^ This whole section that you've mentioned spacing in confuses me - all the sliders are distance snapped to be the same distance apart from each other... are you saying they should be more differently spaced?
41. 01:56:014 (8,9) - Fix the blanket~ Fixed
42. 01:56:198 (9,11) - Avoid to overlap this two Changed pattern
43. 01:53:438 (6,7) - This two are too close comparing the spacing you used before Not sure why slider 7 was there, moved it now
44. 01:57:671 (2,4) - Move these, to makeDone the spacing between them and (1,3) are the same (in other words, put the circles in the same distance [in the centre] of the sliders)
45. 01:59:695 (6) - Too close, make the ds bigger Done
46. 02:02:272 (6,1) - If you want this notes stay close, you can make a nice blanket, like this! Cool, looks nice
47. 02:14:603 (7) - Move the slidertail to the left, to make it looks nicer Done
48. 02:17:732 (1,2,3) - Fix the blanket of (1,2) with (3) Done
49. 02:36:873 (1) - Make the curse more soft, it looks a little weird Keeping this as it is - this is the only slider in the map like this for a reason, the way she sings the note here sounds unlike anything else in the song to me so i wanted to make this slider stand out
50. 02:41:290 (1,2,3,4) - OOH I LIKE IT Thanks <3
51. 02:43:499 (3,1) - Fix blanket Done
52. 03:09:082 (2,3) - ^ can be better Made sliders look nicer
53. 04:27:855 (2,3) - ^ This pattern looks nice to me, if it's mentioned again I will change
54. 03:41:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest to make a star pattern here! will be great! and it will fix the inequality of the spacing Done, looks and plays nicely
55. 03:49:757 (3) - The slider reverse must be in the red tick, the blue don't have enough sound here, and add a note in the white tick Hitting the blue tick to go with the guitar
56. 03:50:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - woah, such a nice overmapped stream xD there is no sounds for make such a longer slider, I suggest replace it with 1/2 sliders , same with the next notes (reverses) only make a 1/2 slider pattern and It will be okay, simple, to represent the simple sound here >.< ahhh that stream was so nice looking lol, but i agree now listening to the music there shouldn't be a stream here,,, replaced with a simpler rhythm
57. 04:01:904 (1) - The slider with reverse don't follow in a better way the sound here, because it no have sound in the blue tick, I recommend replace it with 2 1/4 sliders Sound of a drum in the blue tick - keeping this as it is
58. 04:20:309 (4,5,6) - Make the ds the same Changed pattern to something nicer
59. 04:23:806 (5,6,7) - Suggest: https://puu.sh/sIYvN/8774c74c1a.png Cool, looks great thanks
60. 04:32:640 (1) - Overlap the slider tail with the slidertail of the next slider (1) Done
61. 05:00:063 (1,2) - Blanket fix~ Fixed
62. 05:04:112 (1) - Flip vertical, it makes a mirror pattern, and it looks better (aaand the path to the next note is more soft, including a better flow) Looks great!
63. 05:05:585 (1) - Delete the 4 point in the sliderform, the curve looks awful and weird, and this make the form more similar to previous sliders Changed this slider to look nicer
64. 05:14:603 - Only for the spinner, I hear it too loud, I suggest down the volume to 20-25% Done
65. 05:34:640 - ^ the same but more, like 10-5%

That's all
uf, such a long mod lol
I hope I have been helpful
GL!

ikorza wrote:

Meramipop <3 <3

this map is quite nice actually gw. Thank

00:45:523 (3) - sudden volume change in the vocals would be better represented with more spacing. 00:44:971 (1,3) - also these look a bit too close which would be noticable in gameplay but you can fix that when you move it over anyway. Changed the first vocal part to a reverse slider and made the more emphasized vocals a bigger jump. Good suggestion, flows more nicely with the song.
00:47:548 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rhythm suggestion http://puu.sh/sRxt2/4ccfbf340a.jpg 1 in the picture is at 00:47:916 - this rhythm suits better imo because it keeps following the vocals which are still prominent while following the other sounds/increasing the density of the rhythm when the song supports it. Changed this part, not to your suggested rhythm but to a different one
00:55:830 (2) - looks especially bad Changed
01:09:285 (3) - unsnapped Fixed
01:16:628 (5,6,7,8,9) - doesnt seem like youve used slider convert here or any other technique. the stream looks off to me. Wah? It's the 01:16:996 (9) - slider reversed and converted to a stream > >
01:18:836 - kiai should start here instead. You're right, fixed this and made it a new combo.
01:39:818 (2,3,4,5,6) - not only is this boring 01:39:818 (2) - is getting treated the same in the map when there is no vocal on it. Changed pattern entirely
02:34:941 (2) - i think this should be deleted Moved note before, and removed this to make a shorter stream
05:14:603 - two timing points here Fixed

sorry for the quick mod just doing this before i sleep lol hope it helps. No prob! It was helpful

Reazen wrote:

M4M

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1. 03:47:548 (1) - you can do it better, something like https://gyazo.com/2fcc46a381b521750ea9ae7ae48645b8 it's hard to explain xD I see what you mean - changed the curves to match the beat of the song
2. 03:57:855 (1) - ^ Keeping this slider shape
3. 04:34:665 (1) - ^ etc. you know what i mean xD Keeping this slider shape
4. 00:47:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make 00:49:204 (7) - more in the middle of this pattern and blanket 00:48:468 (1,2,3,1) - Changed pattern
5. 00:53:438 (1,3) - and 00:53:622 (2,4) - the same spacing please Why??? Keeping these - the flow and emphasis feels fine
6. 03:33:928 (5,6,7,8,3) - I don't like this overlap somhow it's weird for me ;/ maybe stack with 03:34:204 (8) - or 03:34:112 (7) -
7. 04:09:266 (9,1) - better blanket please Fixed
8. 04:22:517 (6,2) - yea i don't like overlaps like this, maybe stack on slider end? Removed overlap
9. 04:23:622 (4) - ^ same stack
10. 04:44:603 (2,1) - this overlap is ugly ;P Looks nice to me, also a nice break from the intense part of the song to slow down right before the chorus by having an overlap that's easy to hit here
11. 04:50:125 (1,2) - maybe something like this? https://gyazo.com/dd48520155fa65218ab08a640411dfb0 That looks nice and all but it's a different rhythm and doesn't suit the style of the rest of the map
12. 05:00:064 (2,3) - better blanket Looks spot on to me
13. 05:32:497 (1) - idk this is somehow weird, it sounds like this slider should end in 1/3 snap divisor https://gyazo.com/30215a449d729a76523a1c9169b16c07 Does sound nice like that - changed
14. 05:34:774 - spinner starts here Changed
15. 04:56:106 - missed sound Much nicer to have a single note for the vocal though
16. 04:58:683 (3) - overmapped, there is no sound to cover this note
17. 00:43:223 (4) - ^
18. 00:30:155 (2) - ^ There are drums on ALL of these...
19. 00:33:100 - ^ I see you want this to be like a pattern :/ idk i don't like doing something like this tbh.
20. 03:44:603 - I am not sure but i think nc here should be ok, and increase spacing between 03:44:235 (2) - Done both
21. 03:44:603 (1) - finish
22. 03:46:076 (1) - ^
23. actually I think almost every new combo should have finish in kiai wat
    yea i am tired so i think that's it ;d

Ask me in game if you don't understand something ;p

YukiZura- wrote:

from #modreq
firstly im not that good with english lol

01:03:376 - i feel like this supposed to have a note .. but if you put a note it feels off .. try delete this 01:03:560 - and put slider here 01:03:376 - to 01:03:560 -

Put it like this so it has a good flow

Done but like this http://puu.sh/sXMp2/9670fa6f3c.jpg so the spacing remains consistent for the slow part

02:16:628 (3,4,5) - better this way

Done

03:10:186 (3,4) - wanna try putting reverse slider here? i think it is much better ^^

Done, feels nice

03:18:100 (4,5) - blanket can be better ..

like this

i move this slider 03:18:100 - a bit to the right cuz i can see the blanket more clearly.. that is why the slider in the pic like that ..after the blanket seems perfect i put the slider back where it belongs ^^

Improved blanket

05:11:474 - flow can be better

like this intead

Improved

05:32:497 (1) - what happend here? lol look at the slider end

It's timed in 1/3

btw nice map ^^ Thanks! :-)
hope some of this may help you and GL

Wuab wrote:

The mod that could have been better
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General
you could start to add combo colours to complement the background.
Maybe disable countdown, idk i don't like them in my maps and this map has a calm opening with little movement, no need to warn the player about that I guess the first 4 notes are unnecessary yeah, removed em

Timing
01:18:836 (1) - increase volume to match with the kiai? the only addition to this kiai is the trumpets in the background (also this is the chorus) so the increased volume would help make the kiai more noticeable as the vocals don't.
02:41:290 (1) - same here^
04:50:861 (1) - ^
03:34:296 (1) - this is a guitar solo but i would still increase volume
03:46:076 (1) - possibly increase further as the guitar is more intense Raised volume on all

Placements

03:51:965 (1) - could make that flow to 2 better Done
04:55:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - could move stream up to improve spacing with the new combo ,may need to curve the stream to keep good flow This is fine how it is
04:59:511 (3,4,1) - you can make this overlap better with this 04:58:959 (6) - Done
05:02:640 (1) - could remake this so the tail flows into 2, this area is calm, following guitar so its not a major issue
05:05:585 (1) - same thing^ could try to blanket to 3 These were done this way intentionally - this guitar isn't calm it's the most intense guitar of the whole map > > Leaving this as it is.

Nice map!