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IControl wrote:

Hi iControl's m4m

Futsuu
01:03:533 - add slider or spinner till here 01:04:522 - matches the fast drum pattern here i want to break
01:11:443 (92,93) - these two could be removed I think this pattern is a little long for futsuu and it will make 01:12:102 (94) - have more impact 01:11:443 - removed
01:40:782 (53) - why not end the slider 1/2 a beat earlier (01:41:771 - ) and add a note at 01:41:936 - fit to drum
Muzukashii
00:15:731 - add a note here to match previous pattern 00:13:423 (37,38) - i want to little break
00:48:203 (36) - remove this note to match this pattern 00:46:225 (26,27,28) - i think that it need change to arrangement pattern
00:58:423 (80) - change to k 00:58:917 (83) - k the kats are following the piano now drum forrow
01:19:765 - you could add a d here ok
01:41:936 - move slider over and add note here (same suggestion as futsuu) same
01:49:848 - I know it's a long shot but add a 1/3 ddddd stream from 01:49:848 - to here 01:51:826 - I don't think its too hard to play for muzu level players and it really fits the song i think it is so hard for muzu player
01:56:441 (28,29,30,31) - I don't really like these. I think it would sound better with 1/1 pattern. If agree remove 01:56:551 (29,30) - 02:10:947 (39,40,41,42) - pattern
01:58:667 - add d here 01:58:749 (37,38) - swap these I think this is a good place for a triple pattern drum forrow
02:08:309 (27) - Finisher strong symbol crashing sound here The beginning of the pattern finish
02:09:216 - same suggestion as 01:58:667 - 02:09:628 (33) - remove this also 01:58:584 - pattern
02:14:573 (56,57,58,59) - ^ Also I think 1 triple pattern is enough here Directed to become gradually harder
Inner Oni
01:35:013 (87) - this could be removed I think just follow the strings here sounds better and gives it more impact drum forrow
01:36:908 - add d here to follow this pattern 01:38:227 (100) - also add note here 01:37:155 - 01:37:156 - added
01:39:546 - could add a note here to be consistent there is no sound
01:41:276 (7,8,9,10) - change to dddd? sounds lower sounds is rising
02:12:059 (90) - I think this should be moved to here 02:12:101 - It don’t match the sound
02:12:925 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - I think this should be 1/3 stream 02:13:254 (100,101,102) - drum 1/4
02:16:304 (135) - you could remove this note to let 02:16:221 (134) - have more impact i want to don't cut stream for excitement
02:16:991 (143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151) - I think this should all be 1/4 stream It don’t match the sound
02:25:617 (220,221) - remove these two 02:25:782 (222) - add finisher to have more impact 02:23:309 (200,201,202) - pattern
thank you for modding!!!
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こんにちは~ 遅くなりました

mod
[Timing]
  1. 赤線生成時のバグにより赤線のズレが生じています。修正してください。(ズレ自体は赤線1本のみのdiffを別途作って見比べると判ります)
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    158643,329.67032967033,3,1,0,85,1,0
  2. 上記を適用後、全てのノーツをリスナップしてください。


[tasuke's Kantan]
  1. 00:19:686 (14,15,16,17) - この4音が似たような雰囲気の音をしているため、finisher無しで揃えても良いように感じます。00:21:500 (18) - の音程差も考慮して。
  2. 01:03:862 (39) - delete? breakを確保することで場面の切り替わりを表現できるように思います。01:01:884 (36,37,38) - とは異質な音をしているため。


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:14:742 (29) - move to 00:14:907 - ? メロディのリズムは00:11:610 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - と似ているため、同じようなリズムでまとめても良いと思います。
  2. 00:15:731 - add d? 上記同様
  3. 01:00:565 (66) - move to 01:00:730 - ? ドラムを重視する流れをしているように感じるため、この部分もドラムに合わせて良いように感じます。
  4. 01:23:557 (12) - Futsuuプレイヤーにとってはsliderの始点が分かりづらく、入力しにくいように思います。spinnerに置き換え?


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:259 - add k? ドラムを優先する流れでここまで来ているため、ハイハットを拾う方が自然なように感じます。
  2. 00:17:874 - ^
  3. 00:20:346 - add d? この部分だけ音を捨てている点に違和感を覚えます。リズムが平坦に感じるならば、メリハリを付けるために消すノートは00:21:335 (66) - が適しているように思います。(00:21:500 (67) - の音程の上がりを意識して)
  4. 01:23:557 (174) - Futsuu同様spinnerに置き換え?
  5. 02:17:540 (73,74,75,76,77) - ピアノの音に3/4が合っていないように聞こえます。
    1. 02:17:787 (74) - move to 02:17:870 - ?
    2. 02:18:200 - 02:18:364 - add k?
  6. 02:39:628 - 02:40:122 - 02:40:617 - add d? 00:20:346 - と同様に音取りの規則性が汲み取れませんでした。


[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:15:731 (67,68) - ctrl+g? ハイハット、メロディの音程差から見てこちらの方が自然なように感じます。
  2. 00:21:829 (97,98,99) - delete? 長めの休符を設けることで、音圧の急激な低下・場面の変化を表現できるように思います。
  3. 00:46:390 - add k? 管楽器が加わるのに合わせ、今までとは少し違う小節の始まり方をさせることで、譜面をより多様性に富んだものにできると思います。
  4. 00:54:302 - add k? 上記同様に多様性を重視して。
  5. 01:13:256 (5,1) - ctrl+g? 重い音にdを合わせる方が個人的に自然に感じます。


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:829 (123,124,125,126) - delete? 長めの休符を設けることで、音圧の急激な低下・場面の変化を表現できるように思います。
  2. 00:33:697 (170) - change to k? 00:33:038 (166,169,173) - これらをより強調できると思います。
  3. 00:36:500 (185,186) - change to kk? 上記同様
  4. 01:04:604 - add k? ドラムが鳴っており、音を捨てる必要性はあまり感じられなかったため提案します。
  5. 01:13:338 - ^
  6. 01:13:008 (444) - delete? 1/2を直後に空けることで01:12:926 (443) - を強調できると思います。
  7. 01:23:969 (6,7,8) - ctrl+g? メロディと同時にドラムの音も意識しやすくなり、かつ複合を叩きやすくできると思います。


good luck~
posted
Applied some great ideas. Thanks for all mods!


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posted
"_yu68"
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:15:731 (67,68) - ctrl+g? ハイハット、メロディの音程差から見てこちらの方が自然なように感じます。
    :arrow:意図的に00:06:500 (17,18) - との方の一貫性とって ここ周辺の配色の単調感の緩和の方に焦点当ててます
  2. 00:21:829 (97,98,99) - delete? 長めの休符を設けることで、音圧の急激な低下・場面の変化を表現できるように思います。
    :arrow:applied
  3. 00:46:390 - add k? 管楽器が加わるのに合わせ、今までとは少し違う小節の始まり方をさせることで、譜面をより多様性に富んだものにできると思います。 :arrow:適度に入れてた休符削ると安定感落ちそうで非常に迷ったけど  ものは試しにとりあえずadd 後でまた消すかもしれないが...
  4. 00:54:302 - add k? 上記同様に多様性を重視して。
    :arrow:same
  5. 01:13:256 (5,1) - ctrl+g? 重い音にdを合わせる方が個人的に自然に感じます。
    :arrow:一貫性 on 01:05:511 (5,1) -

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160,128,127485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,127568,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,127650,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,127815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,127980,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,128062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,128145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,128309,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,128,128639,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,96,128804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,128886,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,96,128969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,129134,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,129298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,129463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,129793,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,129958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,130123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,130205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,130287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,130452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,130535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,130617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,130782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,130947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,131276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,96,131441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,131606,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,131689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,131771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,131936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,132101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,132430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,132595,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,132760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,132842,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,132925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133337,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133584,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,128,133914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,134079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,134161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,134243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,134408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,134573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,134738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,134820,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,134903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,135068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,135232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,135397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,135480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,135562,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,135727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,135892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,136002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,136112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,136221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,136551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,136716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,136881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,137046,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,137128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,137210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,96,137375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,137705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,137870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138200,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138282,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138694,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,138859,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,64,139189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,139353,1,6,0:0:0:0:
160,64,139683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,139848,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,64,140178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,140342,1,6,0:0:0:0:
160,64,140672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,64,140754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,140837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,141002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,128,141167,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,64,141496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,141661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,141743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,141826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,141991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,142156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,142320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,142650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,142815,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,142980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,143062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,143145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,143309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,143474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,64,143804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,143969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,144134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,144298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,144463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,144628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,144958,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,145123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,145287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,145370,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,145452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,145617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,145782,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146112,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146276,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,146936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,147265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,147430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,147595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,147677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,147760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,147925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,148090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,148419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,148584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,148749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,148914,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,149243,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,149326,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,149573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,149985,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,150068,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,150232,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,150397,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,32,150727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,150892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,150974,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,151057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,151221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,151386,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,32,151551,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,151881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,152046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,152210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,152293,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,152375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,152540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,152705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,153035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,153199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,153364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,153529,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,153694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,153859,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,154188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,154353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,154518,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,154683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,0,154765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,154848,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,155013,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,155342,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,155507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,155590,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,155672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,155837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,156002,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,156167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,156496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,156661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,156826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,156908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,156991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,32,157156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,0,157320,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,157650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,157815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,157980,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,158145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,158227,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,158309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,158392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,158474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,158639,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,158803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,159133,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,159298,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,159628,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,159792,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,160122,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,160287,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,160452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,160617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,160781,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,161111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,161276,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,161441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,0,161606,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,161770,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,64,161935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,0,162100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,32,162265,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,0,162595,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,32,162759,1,4,0:0:0:0:


@yassu 赤線に関しては特に弄ってないです
posted
M4M
Inner Oni
00:34:027 (172,173) - d->k , k->d
00:35:428 (180) - +k
00:36:500 (186) - d->k
00:44:000 (227,228) - d->k , k->d
00:53:065 (302) - +d
00:53:642 (305) - k->d
00:53:972 (306) - d->k
00:54:302 (309) - d->k

00:59:989 (356) - remove
01:00:648 (362,363) - remove
01:01:472 (371) - remove
00:59:576 - 01:01:884 fix the d and k if you removed the notes

01:54:298 (33) - +d
01:54:381 (33) - remove
01:54:463 (34) - d->k

02:30:892 (266) - +d
02:35:507 (297) - +d
:)
posted

_yu68 wrote:

こんにちは~ 遅くなりました

mod
[Timing]
  1. 赤線生成時のバグにより赤線のズレが生じています。修正してください。(ズレ自体は赤線1本のみのdiffを別途作って見比べると判ります)
    2380,329.67032967033,7,1,0,75,1,0
    18533,329.67032967033,4,1,0,85,1,0
    65676,329.67032967033,4,1,0,70,1,0
    66171,329.67032967033,4,1,0,70,1,0
    66500,329.67032967033,3,1,0,70,1,0
    68478,329.67032967033,6,1,0,40,1,0
    72434,329.67032967033,3,1,0,70,1,0
    73918,329.67032967033,3,1,0,70,1,0
    74248,329.67032967033,3,1,0,70,1,0
    78204,329.67032967033,4,1,0,78,1,0
    141171,329.67032967033,7,1,0,80,1,0
    158643,329.67032967033,3,1,0,85,1,0
  2. 上記を適用後、全てのノーツをリスナップしてください。ok


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:14:742 (29) - move to 00:14:907 - ? メロディのリズムは00:11:610 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - と似ているため、同じようなリズムでまとめても良いと思います。drumを取っています
  2. 00:15:731 - add d? 上記同様 ^
  3. 01:00:565 (66) - move to 01:00:730 - ? ドラムを重視する流れをしているように感じるため、この部分もドラムに合わせて良いように感じます。ok
  4. 01:23:557 (12) - Futsuuプレイヤーにとってはsliderの始点が分かりづらく、入力しにくいように思います。spinnerに置き換え?ちょっと前にspinnerがあるので、音取りの関係上


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:259 - add k? ドラムを優先する流れでここまで来ているため、ハイハットを拾う方が自然なように感じます。ok
  2. 00:17:874 - ^ ^
  3. 00:20:346 - add d? この部分だけ音を捨てている点に違和感を覚えます。リズムが平坦に感じるならば、メリハリを付けるために消すノートは00:21:335 (66) - が適しているように思います。(00:21:500 (67) - の音程の上がりを意識して) ^
  4. 01:23:557 (174) - Futsuu同様spinnerに置き換え? 同様に
  5. 02:17:540 (73,74,75,76,77) - ピアノの音に3/4が合っていないように聞こえます。
    1. 02:17:787 (74) - move to 02:17:870 - ?
    2. 02:18:200 - 02:18:364 - add k? patternの都合上1/4は無しにした
  6. 02:39:628 - 02:40:122 - 02:40:617 - add d? 00:20:346 - と同様に音取りの規則性が汲み取れませんでした。buildupのため


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:21:829 (123,124,125,126) - delete? 長めの休符を設けることで、音圧の急激な低下・場面の変化を表現できるように思います。ok
  2. 00:33:697 (170) - change to k? 00:33:038 (166,169,173) - これらをより強調できると思います。^
  3. 00:36:500 (185,186) - change to kk? 上記同様 00:36:664 - はdにした
  4. 01:04:604 - add k? ドラムが鳴っており、音を捨てる必要性はあまり感じられなかったため提案します。つなげると01:04:686 - の強調が弱くなってしまうので
  5. 01:13:338 - ^ ^
  6. 01:13:008 (444) - delete? 1/2を直後に空けることで01:12:926 (443) - を強調できると思います。ちょっと違和感があった
  7. 01:23:969 (6,7,8) - ctrl+g? メロディと同時にドラムの音も意識しやすくなり、かつ複合を叩きやすくできると思います。01:23:808 - drum followのため、kにした


good luck~
modありです :)
posted

DukeDukeDura wrote:

M4M
Inner Oni
00:34:027 (172,173) - d->k , k->d cymbal→D
00:35:428 (180) - +k nice!!!
00:36:500 (186) - d->k ok
00:44:000 (227,228) - d->k , k->d sounds is up↑
00:53:065 (302) - +d 00:46:390 (241,242,243) - pattern change
00:53:642 (305) - k->d cymbal→D
00:53:972 (306) - d->k drum follow
00:54:302 (309) - d->k ^

00:59:989 (356) - remove 01:00:071 - too conspicuous
01:00:648 (362,363) - remove drum is too conspicuous
01:01:472 (371) - remove drum follow
00:59:576 - 01:01:884 fix the d and k if you removed the notes

01:54:298 (33) - +d 01:55:704 (43,44) - 01:58:341 (63,64) - 01:59:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 02:01:802 (21,1) - pattern
01:54:381 (33) - remove ^
01:54:463 (34) - d->k ^

02:30:892 (266) - +d drum follow
02:35:507 (297) - +d ^
:)
thanks :):):):):):):):):):):):)
posted

[General]


Place the offset further back at 00:00:072 - ?
00:01:967 - Place a drum roll from here to 00:02:380 - ? Another way to make scores differ from each other is nice, and it fits well here.
I think the BPM from 00:22:489 - to 00:33:038 - should be 91. All sounds happen every 1/2 beat and there is a noticeable change in tempo.
01:41:940 - There isn't a new BPM section here, but you may still want to use SVs to reflect the different mood.

[Kantan]
I couldn't much, but I can suggest is maybe replacing the notes at 02:38:807 - through 02:42:763 - with a spinner.
00:19:686 (14,15,16,17,18) - These should be dons? They're a lower pitch than the sounds usually half a beat before them, and they're a lower pitch than the sound at 00:16:226 - which is a don.
Seems good! C:

[Futsuu]
00:19:686 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think these should all be dons, for the same reason as in the Kantan
02:39:137 - Why is there is a spinner here but not in the Kantan?

[Muzukashii]
00:19:686 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - I think all the dons should be changed to kats here, and all the kats changed to dons. 00:20:346 (63,65,67) - are definitely higher pitched than 00:19:686 (61,62,64,66,68) - Same with the other difficulties
02:02:709 - place a kat 1/4th triplet from here to 02:02:874 - ?
Overall I couldn't find very much wrong. Good luck! C:
posted
こんにちは

Mod
[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:00:648 (359) - Delete or Move to 01:00:318 ここには音符は置かないほうがいかなと思います。
  2. 01:01:225 - ~ 01:01:884 - こんな感じの配置はいかがでしょうか。
  3. 01:59:165 (1) and 01:59:330 (3) - Delete? 少しオーバーマッピングな気がします。
  4. 02:42:434 (348,349,350) - Change to dKK(1/2)? ここ一帯のBigがすべてKなので、ここもKにしたほうが統一感が出ていいのではないでしょうか。


[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:15:401 から 00:16:061 - Change to k_dkk(1/2)? ドラム音が無視されているのが少し気になりました。


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:731 - Add d? 微妙に間が空いていて違和感を感じました。
  2. 02:34:357 - Add k? 理由は^と同じです。
  3. 02:42:599 (95,96) - Change to K? Inner Oniと同じで、前にある大音符の色と合わせてしまおうという提案。


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:226 (33) - Add finisher? Muzukashii以上ではここがBigだったので。
  2. 02:30:401 (37) - 強めのシンバル音が鳴っているのでBigでもいいと思います。


[tasuke's Kantan]
  1. 00:11:610 (1) - シンバル音が鳴っているのでここはBigでもいいのではないでしょうか。


指摘箇所が少なめになってしまい申し訳ありません。ランクド頑張ってください。
posted

tatatat wrote:

[General]


Place the offset further back at 00:00:072 - ? That's not necessary
00:01:967 - Place a drum roll from here to 00:02:380 - ? Another way to make scores differ from each other is nice, and it fits well here.
I think the BPM from 00:22:489 - to 00:33:038 - should be 91. All sounds happen every 1/2 beat and there is a noticeable change in tempo.
01:41:940 - There isn't a new BPM section here, but you may still want to use SVs to reflect the different mood.BPM needs to be unified.

[Futsuu]
00:19:686 (43,44,45,46,47) - I think these should all be dons, for the same reason as in the Kantan 00:19:686 (43,44,45,46) - change d
02:39:137 - Why is there is a spinner here but not in the Kantan? kantan is GD. There is no need to adjust accordingly

[Muzukashii]
00:19:686 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - I think all the dons should be changed to kats here, and all the kats changed to dons. 00:20:346 (63,65,67) - are definitely higher pitched than 00:19:686 (61,62,64,66,68) - Same with the other difficulties cymbal -> I will unify it to K
02:02:709 - place a kat 1/4th triplet from here to 02:02:874 - ? Because the pattern collapses
Overall I couldn't find very much wrong. Good luck! C:
thanks!! :):):):):)
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_Rise wrote:

こんにちは

[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:00:648 (359) - Delete or Move to 01:00:318 ここには音符は置かないほうがいかなと思います。drum follow
  2. 01:01:225 - ~ 01:01:884 - こんな感じの配置はいかがでしょうか。01:01:637 - ここを空けないとdrumをfollow出来ないため
  3. 01:59:165 (1) and 01:59:330 (3) - Delete? 少しオーバーマッピングな気がします。ここだけ赤線からはいるのも統一感が崩れそう
  4. 02:42:434 (348,349,350) - Change to dKK(1/2)? ここ一帯のBigがすべてKなので、ここもKにしたほうが統一感が出ていいのではないでしょうか。統一感よりもここで変化を加えた方が最後を強調出来るので。


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:731 - Add d? 微妙に間が空いていて違和感を感じました。無限に指摘されるので折れた、、、
  2. 02:34:357 - Add k? 理由は^と同じです。
  3. 02:42:599 (95,96) - Change to K? Inner Oniと同じで、前にある大音符の色と合わせてしまおうという提案。おなじ理由で


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:226 (33) - Add finisher? Muzukashii以上ではここがBigだったので。ok
  2. 02:30:401 (37) - 強めのシンバル音が鳴っているのでBigでもいいと思います。^


指摘箇所が少なめになってしまい申し訳ありません。ランクド頑張ってください。
modありです!
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_Rise wrote:

こんにちは
[JuDa's Oni]
  1. 00:15:401 から 00:16:061 - Change to k_dkk(1/2)? ドラム音が無視されているのが少し気になりました。

    JUDYDANNY wrote:

    :arrow:意図的に00:06:500 (17,18) - との方の一貫性とって ここ周辺の配色の単調感の緩和の方に焦点当ててます
    まぁ何よりdkkがくどい..
Thanks for mod(¦3[___]
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Mod request ///

[Muzukashii ]

  • 02:02:709 add kkk

    これだけかなXD


[JuDa's Oni ]

  • Innerと同じ effectの音ははっきりだけど、最初と似てるような感じでいいと思います
    00:07:160 del
    00:08:314 move to 00:08:478 and change to k
    00:08:643 del
    00:10:127 add a k


    01:00:565 d?

    nice kiai >w<bbbb


[Inner Oni ]

  • 00:08:808 effectの音ははっきりだけど、最初と似てるような感じでいいと思います
    00:07:160 del
    00:08:149 d , 00:08:314 del , 00:08:808 k

    01:33:863 ~ 01:36:500 ここは01:28:588 ~ 01:30:566と同じなのにノーツが少なすぎると思う :o

    01:54:302 add d , 01:54:385 and 01:54:467 change (ddkkd)
    01:59:165 del
    元の配置はちょっと曲と合わせない感じがしますが。。 個人的にはこう作る
    複合のとこDTで楽しい :)


がんばれー :):):)
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stu00608 wrote:

Mod request ///

[Muzukashii ]

  • 02:02:709 add kkk 2/1休憩を入れたいので

    これだけかなXD


[Inner Oni ]

  • 00:08:808 effectの音ははっきりだけど、最初と似てるような感じでいいと思います 音をはっきりさせたいので
    00:07:160 del
    00:08:149 d , 00:08:314 del , 00:08:808 k

    01:33:863 ~ 01:36:500 ここは01:28:588 ~ 01:30:566と同じなのにノーツが少なすぎると思う :odrum follow

    01:54:302 add d , 01:54:385 and 01:54:467 change (ddkkd) ちょっと自分で変えてみた
    01:59:165 del 1/2から始まるpatternは統一感に欠けます
    元の配置はちょっと曲と合わせない感じがしますが。。 個人的にはこう作る
    複合のとこDTで楽しい :)


がんばれー :):):)
modありがとう!!!
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as promised.

[tasuke's Kantan]
  1. 02:19:357 - , 02:19:852 - remove? it seems lacking of break here until the end.


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:039 - , 00:05:347 - maybe remove to make better build-up for the intro, since it is very calm?
  2. 00:53:313 - consider to remove to make some break, rhythm is a bit complex and too continuous for newer player.
  3. 01:00:730 - move to 01:00:565 - to follow the melody in more accurately?
  4. 01:31:720 - , 01:36:995 - , i think removing these notes would give more emphasis to previous kD and give a fair break length.
  5. 02:28:588 (30,31,32,33,34) - maybe change to kdk-d-d in contrast with 02:23:973 (15,16,17,18,19) - ? you may also remove 02:29:907 - for consistency


[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:939 - add d for the drum?
  2. 01:35:017 - move to 01:34:687 - , and add d at 01:35:182 - , for consistency with 01:29:412 (187,188,189,190) -
  3. 01:50:017 - consider to create 1/4 ddd here for better spread with Oni.
    01:51:006 - same as ^
  4. 02:29:412 - remove for melody emphasis and consistency


[JuDa's Oni]
  1. remove bookmarks
  2. 00:13:753 - , 00:18:369 - maybe remove to have more focus on the melody?


[Inner Oni]
  1. 02:04:110 - maybe change to k? i think it's more interesting to combine with next kddkddk
  2. 02:29:577 - consider to change to d so it's consistent with 02:24:962 -


you may call me back after +12 SP~
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Volta wrote:

[JuDa's Oni]
  1. remove bookmarks
    :arrow:I'm very sad... fixed.
  2. 00:13:753 - , 00:18:369 - maybe remove to have more focus on the melody?
    :arrow:hmm..... keep for bass drums.
Thanks volta~ (¦3[___]

@yassu- : 青線ぜんぶけしちゃってください
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Volta wrote:

as promised.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:03:039 - , 00:05:347 - maybe remove to make better build-up for the intro, since it is very calm?
  2. 00:53:313 - consider to remove to make some break, rhythm is a bit complex and too continuous for newer player.
  3. 01:00:730 - move to 01:00:565 - to follow the melody in more accurately?
  4. 01:31:720 - , 01:36:995 - , i think removing these notes would give more emphasis to previous kD and give a fair break length.
  5. 02:28:588 (30,31,32,33,34) - maybe change to kdk-d-d in contrast with 02:23:973 (15,16,17,18,19) - ? you may also remove 02:29:907 - for consistencyall fixed


[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:939 - add d for the drum? fixed
  2. 01:35:017 - move to 01:34:687 - , and add d at 01:35:182 - , for consistency with 01:29:412 (187,188,189,190) - i want to drum follow
  3. 01:50:017 - consider to create 1/4 ddd here for better spread with Oni. fixed
    01:51:006 - same as ^ ^
  4. 02:29:412 - remove for melody emphasis and consistency ^


[Inner Oni]
  1. 02:04:110 - maybe change to k? i think it's more interesting to combine with next kddkddk 02:04:028 (7) - avoid the same color to emphasize the drum
  2. 02:29:577 - consider to change to d so it's consistent with 02:24:962 - make the piano a little conscious


you may call me back after +12 SP~
thank you for modding!!!! :):):):):)
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irc log
11:01 Charlotte: こんにちは、lorikeet irc出来ますが今時間ありますか?
11:01 yassu-: おkです
11:02 Charlotte: re-dlします
11:02 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1144904 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet]
11:04 Charlotte: MuzuのSRが3超えててOD4はさすがに弱いので4.5 もしくは5。Muzuが5ならOniは5.5でも可
11:07 yassu-: 了解です
11:08 yassu-: 4.5に変更
11:10 Charlotte: 01:23:478 - sliderここから始めませんか? 1/4の頭抜きになってるので叩き損じが出るよりか1/1の目盛りに合わせたほうが良いと思いました
11:12 yassu-: 01:24:467 - ここからでもokですか?drumに合わせる感じで
11:13 Charlotte: あぁ すいません Futsuu見てます
11:14 Charlotte: okです。その場合スライダー前にnotes入れたほうが良いです
11:15 Charlotte: 00:49:357 - ここ削除かなぁ。1/2の偶数、奇数が連発して出てくるポイントなので問題なければ1/1 break入れてもいい気がしました
11:18 yassu-: そこは少し統一感が崩れそうなのでkeepで
11:18 Charlotte: 01:49:852 - notes or slider
11:19 Charlotte: ずんずんfinishが鳴り、いろんな音が鳴ってるここはspinnerよりsliderが良いかと。notesでmo
11:19 Charlotte: ok
11:21 yassu-: fixed
11:22 Charlotte: 02:39:302 - 同様に^?
11:24 yassu-: fixed
11:24 *Charlotte is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145336 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet [Muzukashii]]
11:26 Charlotte: 00:40:950 - 01:03:203 - この間どこかで1/1 break作りませんか?
11:28 Charlotte: 20秒程度なんでまぁ大丈夫だと思いますが、入れれそうならぐらいで大丈夫です。崩れたり、あまり良い配置が置けなさそうならkeepでもokです
11:29 yassu-: 2/1?
11:30 Charlotte: 1/1だと思います
11:31 Charlotte: 01:19:852 - 削除して易化させてもいいかも
11:31 yassu-: 00:56:280 - ここ消しました
11:32 Charlotte: VERY GOOD!
11:33 Charlotte: 01:23:561 - Muzuなんでこのままでも良いですがやっぱり長い+頭が抜けてるスライダーは抜けやすいのでFutsuu同様にnotes + sliderお勧めしたいです
11:34 yassu-: 01:19:852 - タイムスタンプ上にnotesがないのですが。。
11:34 Charlotte: 01:19:769 - ここでした
11:35 yassu-: fixed
11:36 yassu-: sliderもfixed
11:39 Charlotte: 02:18:368 (77,78) - 削除...?
11:39 Charlotte: kiaiも適度に1/1break 挟んでたんでここも休憩で良いかなぁと思いました
11:41 Charlotte: 02:18:863 - 02:19:357 - どちらも単音なので、keepでも全然いいです
11:42 yassu-: うーん、ちょっと考えます
11:42 *Charlotte is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1144904 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet [Inner Oni]]
11:50 Charlotte: うーん、全く見つけられないです=w=...
11:50 Charlotte: 01:40:209 - add d?
11:52 yassu-: そこはちょっと加えにくいですね、、、
11:52 Charlotte: ok
11:54 Charlotte: 01:40:951 - 個人的にもっとdon要素欲しいです...1/6 kkkkkkdがあるので 1/4にdつけたい
11:57 yassu-: このくらいの単色連打があったほうがむしろバランス的に良くなるのでは?
11:59 Charlotte: 1/4だけなら良いかなと思うんですけど同色kkkkkkkkk (1/6kkkkkkd)がどうかなと思っただけです
12:00 Charlotte: keepでもいいですよ
12:00 yassu-: 01:40:951 - ここからdrum的にkの方が良いとおもいますし
12:00 yassu-: keepで
12:01 Charlotte: 02:29:247 - kdd or k-d (02:29:330 - 削除)
12:01 Charlotte: 以上です
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Charlotte wrote:

irc log
11:01 Charlotte: こんにちは、lorikeet irc出来ますが今時間ありますか?
11:01 yassu-: おkです
11:02 Charlotte: re-dlします
11:02 *yassu- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1144904 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet]
11:04 Charlotte: MuzuのSRが3超えててOD4はさすがに弱いので4.5 もしくは5。Muzuが5ならOniは5.5でも可
11:07 yassu-: 了解です
11:08 yassu-: 4.5に変更
11:10 Charlotte: 01:23:478 - sliderここから始めませんか? 1/4の頭抜きになってるので叩き損じが出るよりか1/1の目盛りに合わせたほうが良いと思いました
11:12 yassu-: 01:24:467 - ここからでもokですか?drumに合わせる感じで
11:13 Charlotte: あぁ すいません Futsuu見てます
11:14 Charlotte: okです。その場合スライダー前にnotes入れたほうが良いです
11:15 Charlotte: 00:49:357 - ここ削除かなぁ。1/2の偶数、奇数が連発して出てくるポイントなので問題なければ1/1 break入れてもいい気がしました
11:18 yassu-: そこは少し統一感が崩れそうなのでkeepで
11:18 Charlotte: 01:49:852 - notes or slider
11:19 Charlotte: ずんずんfinishが鳴り、いろんな音が鳴ってるここはspinnerよりsliderが良いかと。notesでmo
11:19 Charlotte: ok
11:21 yassu-: fixed
11:22 Charlotte: 02:39:302 - 同様に^?
11:24 yassu-: fixed
11:24 *Charlotte is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1145336 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet [Muzukashii]]
11:26 Charlotte: 00:40:950 - 01:03:203 - この間どこかで1/1 break作りませんか?
11:28 Charlotte: 20秒程度なんでまぁ大丈夫だと思いますが、入れれそうならぐらいで大丈夫です。崩れたり、あまり良い配置が置けなさそうならkeepでもokです
11:29 yassu-: 2/1?
11:30 Charlotte: 1/1だと思います
11:31 Charlotte: 01:19:852 - 削除して易化させてもいいかも
11:31 yassu-: 00:56:280 - ここ消しました
11:32 Charlotte: VERY GOOD!
11:33 Charlotte: 01:23:561 - Muzuなんでこのままでも良いですがやっぱり長い+頭が抜けてるスライダーは抜けやすいのでFutsuu同様にnotes + sliderお勧めしたいです
11:34 yassu-: 01:19:852 - タイムスタンプ上にnotesがないのですが。。
11:34 Charlotte: 01:19:769 - ここでした
11:35 yassu-: fixed
11:36 yassu-: sliderもfixed
11:39 Charlotte: 02:18:368 (77,78) - 削除...?
11:39 Charlotte: kiaiも適度に1/1break 挟んでたんでここも休憩で良いかなぁと思いました
11:41 Charlotte: 02:18:863 - 02:19:357 - どちらも単音なので、keepでも全然いいです
11:42 yassu-: うーん、ちょっと考えます
11:42 *Charlotte is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1144904 Tedjimo Yomigy - Lorikeet [Inner Oni]]
11:50 Charlotte: うーん、全く見つけられないです=w=...
11:50 Charlotte: 01:40:209 - add d?
11:52 yassu-: そこはちょっと加えにくいですね、、、
11:52 Charlotte: ok
11:54 Charlotte: 01:40:951 - 個人的にもっとdon要素欲しいです...1/6 kkkkkkdがあるので 1/4にdつけたい
11:57 yassu-: このくらいの単色連打があったほうがむしろバランス的に良くなるのでは?
11:59 Charlotte: 1/4だけなら良いかなと思うんですけど同色kkkkkkkkk (1/6kkkkkkd)がどうかなと思っただけです
12:00 Charlotte: keepでもいいですよ
12:00 yassu-: 01:40:951 - ここからdrum的にkの方が良いとおもいますし
12:00 yassu-: keepで
12:01 Charlotte: 02:29:247 - kdd or k-d (02:29:330 - 削除)
12:01 Charlotte: 以上です
mod急かしてしまったようで申し訳ない :?:?:?
アリです!
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