[happy and moe]
You may want to check out AiMod first and fix all these first
Also why no kiai time at all in this map?
00:23:815 (1,2) - there is no 1/3 beat here, remove, put a circle on 00:23:874 instead since there is a beat but it is currently not mapped
00:24:978 (2,3) - ^
01:01:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make these 1/2 sliders intead cuz of the 1/2 beat in the drums following each of them
01:11:141 (1) - I would recommend curving the slider downwards more so it forms a smoother shape with the stream prior to the slider. Also make sure the sliderend blankets with the stream
01:15:850 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this not straight, if the intention was not to make it straight then don't make it half straight half crooked, please fix your bisexual slider
01:43:234 (1) - that red slidertick is awfully close to the white slidertick, consider moving it futher away so it doesn't look too crammed like before?
01:44:455 (4,1) - increase spacing
01:50:385 (2,3,4) - the sliders currently look as if they are leading the cursor into random places, try something similar to this maybe
01:51:257 (1,2,3,4,1) - the big jump from 4 to 1 makes sense but it's kind of hitler atm
01:53:001 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - move upwards so it doesn't cram with the previous set of jumps
01:54:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
02:33:467 (1) - looks like the spaghetti i had yestarday yum yum
03:13:234 (3,4,5) - this jump is actually huge, nerf it a bit
03:39:658 there is a beat here, missing a circle rn
03:45:676 (1) - I really think these would look much better if the turns at the red sliderticks were 90 degrees, or if at least two of the segments were parallel to each other.
03:48:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no (well at least make them close enough so that you can place your cursor in the middle. The music isn't intense enough to warrant these kinds of spacing)
03:52:653 (1,1) - remove nc
04:05:385 (2,1) - blanket nazi
04:32:769 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
04:23:356 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - flows better if you swap them around like so imo
04:25:792 (1) - this long slider kind of looks meh for the sharp intense music it is representing
05:14:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - either move 8 to form a straight line with the rest of the stream or move 4,5,6,7 to form a curved stream. There is no reason for it 8 to be inconsistent with the rest of the stream if there isn't a strong beat or anything similar in the music
06:06:954 - 06:29:280 the hitsounds sounds like a robotic puppy borking throughout
06:18:728 (3,1) - blanket