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den0saur
Don't forget to fix the tag lol
lcfc
now that's a quality BG
Girl
i am here for the two kudosus
dunno who mapped what so i'll just direct it all to arusamour
[happy and moe]
You may want to check out AiMod first and fix all these first
Also why no kiai time at all in this map?
00:23:815 (1,2) - there is no 1/3 beat here, remove, put a circle on 00:23:874 instead since there is a beat but it is currently not mapped
00:24:978 (2,3) - ^

01:01:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make these 1/2 sliders intead cuz of the 1/2 beat in the drums following each of them
01:11:141 (1) - I would recommend curving the slider downwards more so it forms a smoother shape with the stream prior to the slider. Also make sure the sliderend blankets with the stream
01:15:850 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this not straight, if the intention was not to make it straight then don't make it half straight half crooked, please fix your bisexual slider
01:43:234 (1) - that red slidertick is awfully close to the white slidertick, consider moving it futher away so it doesn't look too crammed like before?
01:44:455 (4,1) - increase spacing
01:50:385 (2,3,4) - the sliders currently look as if they are leading the cursor into random places, try something similar to this maybe
01:51:257 (1,2,3,4,1) - the big jump from 4 to 1 makes sense but it's kind of hitler atm
01:53:001 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - move upwards so it doesn't cram with the previous set of jumps
01:54:397 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
02:33:467 (1) - looks like the spaghetti i had yestarday yum yum
03:13:234 (3,4,5) - this jump is actually huge, nerf it a bit
03:39:658 there is a beat here, missing a circle rn
03:45:676 (1) - I really think these would look much better if the turns at the red sliderticks were 90 degrees, or if at least two of the segments were parallel to each other.
03:48:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - no (well at least make them close enough so that you can place your cursor in the middle. The music isn't intense enough to warrant these kinds of spacing)
03:52:653 (1,1) - remove nc
04:05:385 (2,1) - blanket nazi
04:32:769 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
04:23:356 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - flows better if you swap them around like so imo
04:25:792 (1) - this long slider kind of looks meh for the sharp intense music it is representing
05:14:455 (4,5,6,7,8) - either move 8 to form a straight line with the rest of the stream or move 4,5,6,7 to form a curved stream. There is no reason for it 8 to be inconsistent with the rest of the stream if there isn't a strong beat or anything similar in the music
06:06:954 - 06:29:280 the hitsounds sounds like a robotic puppy borking throughout :o
06:18:728 (3,1) - blanket
VINXIS
05:59:455 (3) - offscreen
Topic Starter
Arusamour

VINXIS wrote:

05:59:455 (3) - offscreen
best kds i ever gave
Girl

VINXIS wrote:

05:59:455 (3) - offscreen
Bonzi

Arusamour wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

05:59:455 (3) - offscreen
best kds i ever gave
nO THERES STILL A MARGIN OF ONE PIXEL SOMEONE PLEASE DENY THAT KUDOSU RIGHT NOW

PSSSH NOTHIN PERSONNEL KID
Topic Starter
Arusamour


Arusamour wrote:

VINXIS wrote:

05:59:455 (3) - offscreen
best kds i ever gave
he played me, definitely the worst kds i ever gave
_Meep_
is it me or the beatmap creator only did one part ._. no hitsounding nothing
Izzywing
Ongaku you did a fantastic job with the hitsounding. Props!


to Irre, 03:48:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could you nerf this? This is actually kinda ridiculous lol, could you make it so the player can place their cursor in the middle instead of having to actually move for each note?
- Frontier -
best anime bg ever :D
Spaghetti
sick bg
sahuang
Would be a good idea to include the collab parts in description or sb
Sick BG..

[ADRENALINE]
  1. 00:19:513 (1) - should be 1/4
  2. 00:20:036 (1,2,3) - spacing is very weird.00:19:862 (2,1,2) - look like 1/2 tbh
  3. 00:21:606 (4) - this is 1/4 as well if you listen carefully.
  4. 00:23:815 (1,2) - it'd be better if you only map 00:23:874 - imo cuz the music is vague and the only noticeable beat i can hear is 1/2
  5. 00:52:217 (4) - 00:53:961 (6,9) - etc the 1/4s should not be emphasised as triples here cuz music is kind of consistent and the beats are not really that noticeable.
    I would recommend you use simple sliders or 1/2 circles here.
  6. 01:13:932 - etc there are many downbeats on long white ticks that you mapped as slider tails.try to make them clickable
  7. 01:17:769 (7,8) - why 1/8 reverse sliders here, doesn't really make sense
  8. 01:14:978 (7,8,9,10) - 01:15:850 (3,4,5,6,7) - etc. a lot of these are overmapped. The music does not support streams like these at all.
  9. 01:24:397 (4,5,1) - rhythm choice is very bad. Basically you ignored all downbeats 01:24:571 - 01:25:094 - and mapped other sounds.
    01:12:536 - 01:34:862 - this part needs some reworking. Rhythm choices are pretty bad imo.
  10. 01:40:094 (1,2,3,4,1) - pattern is confusing cuz 01:40:356 (4,1) - the 1/4 spacing is unreasonable
  11. 01:51:257 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as above
    01:34:862 - to 01:51:606 - , same as previous section i think it also needs some reworking. Basically the music in two parts are very similar but mapping style is significantly different.
  12. 03:48:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - wtf this is almost unplayable
  13. 03:52:828 (1) - why nc

Overall, from 02:02:769 - till the end it's really well mapped, 00:50:211 - 01:51:606 - please consider remap cuz they dont really fit the music.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Arusamour

My Angel Azusa wrote:

03:48:118 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - wtf this is almost unplayable

IORREAVERISSBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sammish
🐸☕️

gl rank soon(tm)
Izzywing
rank when
Topic Starter
Arusamour
SOTRYBOARDWHEN_?

Storyboarder
STORYBOARD NOW THAT GIRL RELEASED ME FROM BEING A HOSTAGE
Girl

Storyboarder wrote:

STORYBOARD NOW THAT GIRL RELEASED ME FROM BEING A HOSTAGE
sb
Ongaku
@arusamour

poke me to do final check on hitsounds just in case anything is missing when you guys are ready to rank
Topic Starter
Arusamour
And we back😂

-jordan-
why did you down grade the background wtf
Topic Starter
Arusamour
lol its my opnion bro
Kujinn

Arusamour wrote:

lol its my opnion bro
Topic Starter
Arusamour
actually im thinking of just killing it.
den0saur
pls no
pies
Nice beatmap. Have a star.

Ending
06:27:885 (1,1) - Feels like the ending is a bit underrated. Did you try to change this spinner for short 1/6 1/4 and 1/3 sliders? (or to make spinner longer and delete last circle, so player can have enough time to cool down)
Hikaru Rose
Fetish said not to fucking kill it !!!!!!

:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
Ongaku
ded
xLolicore-
deded
Kaifin
please leave me out of whatever this is, wasnt this like 2 years ago i dont even remember mapping for your collab :?
Ascendance
ctb
WalterToro
Please put the focus on the map and avoid any unnecessary conversations/comments here.
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