This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quarta-feira, 28 de junho de 2017 at 20:24:36

Artist: Amanda Lee Feat. Dima
Title: Your Lie In April
Source: Amanda Lee Feat. Dima
BPM: 160
Filesize: 11165kb
Play Time: 05:59
Difficulties Available:

1. April (5,03 stars, 1006 notes)

Download: Amanda Lee Feat. Dima - Your Lie In April
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Help me?


April - <Done>
Hitsongs - ??

Reemapping?

Oi, tudo bem?
Eu dei uma olhadinha no seu mapa, e ele ta muito bem feito, é bem divertido de se jogar, sem falar que a música que você escolheu é muito legal.Entretanto, eu encontrei algumas partes do mapa que poderiam ser mudadas, que ao meu ver,melhorariam o desempenho dele.
Então, vamos lá :

Background

April

00:03:602 (2,3,4,5,6) - Eu tenho um map em andamento que ele é puro breakcore, aprendi a prestar mais atenção nos sons que passam despercebidos da gente durante uma música, nessa parte, se você prestar atenção, o triplet continua ate aqui 00:03:977 (5) - , que então não seria mais um triplet, e sim uma mini stream. Esses detalhes fazem toda a diferença na hora de jogar.
00:13:165 (11,1) - Triplet
00:34:352 (10) - Esse slider ficou meio esquisito, o vocal começa no tick branco, não fez muito sentido nessa parte
00:40:165 (8,1) - Triplet
00:52:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eu não acho que essa parte deveria ser seguida pelo vocal, se você prestar atenção, 00:52:165 (10,1,2) - ,00:52:915 - , 00:53:477 - deveriam ter triplets aí
00:54:790 (4,5) - Triplet
00:57:602 (2,3) - Em algumas partes do mapa, o slider que começa no tick vermelho, acaba não combinando com a batida da musica, nesse caso que eu citei, creio que você quis seguir a guitarra, só que se você perceber, ela só começa no tick branco 00:57:790 - , a mesma coisa com o outro slider
01:00:602 (2,3) - Aqui também, na minha opnião eu acho que poderiam ter notas, desse jeito que fiz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6944091
03:58:915 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Tá faltando nota aqui, você não acha?
04:38:477 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Gostei
05:30:415 (9,10) - Triplet
05:32:852 (5) - Outro slider meio sem sentido, acho que ficaria melhor assim: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6944136
05:43:540 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Gostei, na verdade eu coloria notas ao invés de sliders, mas assim também ficou legal
05:48:948 - nesse slider, eu colocaria notas assim: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6944300
05:51:214 (1,2,3) - eu tiraria essas notas, e só deixaria a ultima antes do spin

Bem, vou terminar por aqui, depois eu volto com mais algumas sugestões, tá bom?
Boa sorte!

vc pediu pelo forum então ta então

o mod n acaba ai n, so que tem tanta coisa pra arrumar que meu deu até tristeza, me chama denovo daqui a um tempo ou pede pra outra pessoas moddar
falando em jogar o mapa n ta ruim n, mas em termos de rankear acho que nunca :s
use esse mapa mais como aprendizado msm

Hello, this will be my first mod
The biggest tip i can give is that try to map every hearable sound and avoid placing objects when you can not hear a beat :p

1. 00:00:602 (3) - In my opinion this slider is bad. 00:00:790 - There, in the middle of slider you can hear strong hitsound. I sugest you to try something like that http://puu.sh/t8UaA/296abda4a0.jpg with a strong hitsounds on circles.
2. 00:02:946 (2) - You shall place here circle, because you can hear a guitar here.
3. 00:04:071 (11) - Remove it. There is no sound.
4. 00:04:915 (2) - This is bad. There is sound in the middle of the slider. Id shorten it to 00:05:102 - and put circle 00:05:290 -
5. 00:05:665 (4) - Turn it to circles, it fits better imo.
6. 00:06:040 (5) - This slider is bad too . Just the same tip as above. 00:09:040 (5) - Sliders like this are okay because these dont skip any beats. I hope i explained wel.l sorry for my english btw xdd.
7. 00:09:790 (7) - just as above, shorten it and add circle :v
8. 00:10:540 (1,2,3) - Create a slider here 00:10:727 (2) - there is no beat
9. 00:13:258 (2) - there is no beat
10. 00:13:446 - there is, and you skipped it
11. 00:18:415 (7) - shorten it and add circle
12. 00:19:540 (1) - ^
13. 00:22:540 (1) - ^
14. 00:24:040 (5) - ^
15. 00:25:540 (1) - ^
16. 00:27:977 (6) - instead of slider, put circle here and put 1/2 slider here 00:28:165 -
17. 00:31:540 (1) - place circles in spite of slider
18. 00:32:665 (13) - ^
19. 00:34:352 (10) - dont start slider there. put a circle and then slider from 00:34:352 (10) -
20. 00:35:665 (14) - You know what :p
21. 00:37:540 (1,2) - put circles here
22. 00:37:915 (2) - shorten and put circle
23. 00:40:258 (8) - delete,there is no beat
24. 00:40:446 - you skipped beat here
25. 00:45:040 (1) - this is bad.
26. 00:45:790 (3) - i get an idea of this slider extension, but that not fit.
27. 00:49:165 (5) - bad. its better to do that there http://puu.sh/t8W2Y/e26a5988d3.jpg
28. 00:49:165 (5) - missed beat. fix it
29. 00:53:383 - remove
30. 00:53:571 - missed beat
31. 00:55:821 - ^
32. 01:00:040 (1) - beat in the middle of the slider
33. 01:01:071 - missed beat
34. 01:01:821 - ^
35. 01:03:790 (3) - beat in the middle of the slider
36. 01:03:790 (3) - ^
37. 01:05:196 - ^
38. 01:07:540 (1) - bad slider. missed two beats in the middle
39. 01:08:571 - delete
40. 01:09:790 (10) - You know what :p
41. 01:10:446 - missed beat
42. 01:12:040 (1) - beat in the middle of slider
43. 01:13:258 - skipped beat
44. 01:13:540 (1) - bad slider. missed two beats in the middle
45. 01:14:852 (4) - delete this circle, 01:14:102 (2,3) - move it 2 ticks to right and put circle here 01:14:102 -
46. 01:14:758 - 01:14:946 - beats
47. 01:15:977 (2,3) - i dont like this sliders.
48. 01:16:165 - 01:16:258 - 01:16:352 - beats

That would be enough. Rest of the song is similar so if you follow the tips so you can make objects fit well to the song.
But thats not all. You have to make this map well edited to rank it. Try to avoid diferent spacing like that http://puu.sh/t8WPd/c81b8f46d4.jpg unless its necessary, for example - jumps.
Oh, and grab some links that may be usefull:

1. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Mapping_Techniques
2. https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat

Good luck!

00:03:321 (1) -
New Combo

00:03:696 (1) -
New Combo

00:12:040 (1) -
New Combo

00:15:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
It looks really overmapped and uncomfortable, try something like -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967173 or maybe -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967214

00:18:415 (1) -
New combo

00:20:102 (2,3,4,5,6) -
It really look "forced", try do something like -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967290

00:21:040 (7) -
New combo n' a small curve could be nice -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967294

00:21:415 (2) -
Try move it to around of x : 383 y : 160

00:21:977 (3,4,5) -
You could move these notes to be like it -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967317
Is fun and still hard

00:29:290 (1,2,3) -
It really looks uncomfortable, but idk no one thing what you can put instead of it ;-;


00:27:040 (1) -
Try move it to around of x : 345 y : 275

00:33:415 (7) -
Try move it to around of x : 134 y : 321 / New Combo



00:34:165 (10) -
You could move these note to x : 192 y : 144

00:35:290 (4) -
New Combo

00:36:415 (5) -
It's really distant from the next note, try move it to x : 421 y : 312 and give a small curve, to look like -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967821

00:36:790 (6) -
A small curve could be nice =3

00:37:165 (7) -
A big curve like -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967828

00:41:102 (1) -
New combo(aesthetic)

00:41:477 (1) -
New combo(aesthetic)

00:44:477 (5) -
New combo

00:45:602 (5) -
New combo


(Me dei conta que o cara era BR)

00:54:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Cara, eu sei que é o kiai, mas isso esta realmente overmapeado, patterns extremamente "forçados" e não naturais, eu não vou te dizer "faça isso", vou deixar para ti pensar, após ter visto todo o mapa, vejo que tu tem potencial. Vai nessa!! =)

01:21:977 (10) -
New combo

01:20:852 (1) -
New combo, vai ficar um detalhe bacana

01:21:977 (6) -
New combo

01:29:102 (2,3) -
Dê uma leve curvada nesses 2 sliders, para que pareçam como -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6967891

01:32:290 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Isso realmente esta desconfortável.



Beeeem... vou acabando por aqui, tu tem potencial cara, só precisa parar de overmapear as paradas e tentar focar mais na 'naturalidade', talvez com um pouco mais de prática tudo se encaixe ^^

Gl o/

April
00:36:790 - move New Combo from 00:37:540 (1) to 00:36:790 (9)
00:40:352 - there should be triple
00:53:477 - triple
01:13:540 (7) - New Combo
01:14:665 (11) - IMO you should add small stream instead of this slider
01:19:915 (2,3,4,5) - hard to read try stacking 4 and 5. Ex. - https://puu.sh/tdbx7/b171c74ce7.png
01:22:165 - triple
02:08:852 (4,5) - decrease spacing
02:13:165 (8) - stream and NC
02:38:665 (5) - stream
02:39:040 (1,2,3) - increase spacing or stack these notes
02:48:040 (7) - Ctrl+J
02:48:040 (7,8) - Increase spacing or stack and NC at 8
02:50:852 - add note here
03:26:946 (9,1) - decrease spacing
04:25:540 (1,2) - increase spacing or stack
05:38:477 - move NC from 05:39:040 (1) to 05:38:477 (9)

You missed a lot of triples but I included only most important(in my mind) becouse map is 4.93*

Wow! Didn't think anyone would be creating a cover with both openings together! //so beautiful ;m;
Good luck ranking it! Loving it so far!

Have a star

There are some triples missing such as 00:40:446 and 00:53:571 and 02:38:946 etc

Also there's a drum kick at 02:36:977 so add circle here
02:40:165 (2) - Turning this into a 1/1 slider would flow better rhythmically
02:39:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You've dedicated yourself to follow the whole piano here but you missed out a note at 02:39:227 and 02:45:977

00:34:540 - Start the slider here not on the off beat. (i don't really understand why you made it like this)
01:48:040 - ^
00:53:571 - why don't you map this? 00:53:008 (3) - this is mapped
01:22:258 - ^
01:58:258 - ^
02:04:165 (9,10) - ^
01:19:915 (2,3,4,5) - that's not really readable
01:45:790 - ? slider should start here 01:45:602 -
01:51:790 - no sound here
01:36:790 (5,6,7) - slider should start on a white tick
01:30:040 - make this clickable


Ok i don't really understand the rhythm placement here. Most of the time sliders should start on a white tick. There are exceptions of course but you also missed them. (01:45:602 (9) - 01:51:602 - etc...)
Also, listen carefully to the song while mapping and pay attention to where the strong notes should be. I suggest you to listen to some parts at 25% speed.

Hello there!
This is my first mod ever, so it probably won't be anything special.


~ April ~
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00:09:040 (5,6,7) - Try to aim the end of slider 5 toward note 6 for a more comfortable jump, and blanket note 6 with slider 7. https://puu.sh/tFQpC/15e41e50e0.png

00:12:790 (8,9) - Consider flipping these two sliders like this: https://puu.sh/tFPMe/98db496517.png
I believe it would flow better.

00:25:540 (1) - Even this slider out a bit more.

00:48:040 (1,2) - Revise this blanket to make it look pretty

00:59:477 (6,1) - ^ Same change ^

01:06:227 (3) - I think this might look good as a new combo.

01:09:790 (10) - Fix the curved part of this slider.

01:20:665 (4,5) - This jump could be very confusing to a player based on the previous jump, 01:19:915 (2,3).
I recommend something like this: https://puu.sh/tFRpM/ecfeb025b1.png
I have a feeling that it will confuse the player less, might be wrong though.

01:36:227 (4) - Try to make the slider more evened out: https://puu.sh/tFRK3/c4a2674bb1.png
It harmonizes more with the vocals.

01:37:540 (8,9) - I like the idea of a blanket here, but try to fix the slider and make a clean blanket.
Sorry for being nitpicky. :X

01:57:602 (2) - I recommend putting the circle here: https://puu.sh/tFS3s/981700bd75.png
I'm almost positive that it will be more comfortable for the player.

02:23:852 (6,7) - Sync these 2 slider more to make them pretty~ https://puu.sh/tFSuN/2b08db8823.png

02:36:040 (1) - 02:38:852 (7) - I just wanted to say that these jumps were nicely done!

03:24:602 (1,2) - Take the slider and circle before this, invert them, and place them like this: https://puu.sh/tFTFN/d1e892dcab.png
If you want to get it mostly spot-on, select the copy-and-pasted circle and slider, and try to align the slider head with the previous slider and circle, like so: https://puu.sh/tFTwb/5865a62fa1.png
Use the connecting lines for an accuracy reference.

03:47:102 (2,3) - Nudge these 2 a little bit to the left so they fit in the blanket nicely.

03:51:040 (7,8,9) - Try to keep equal distance between these objects for smooth gameplay. Something like this: https://puu.sh/tFU5e/3595d501e0.png

04:55:915 (2,3) - Needs a bit of an adjustment to fit right in the center of the slider.

05:13:540 (1) - Try to make a semi-blanket for 05:14:477 (2) out of this slider. It looks pretty as a blanket! https://puu.sh/tFUrD/fa0beb1e7a.png

05:19:540 (1,2) - This slider could also make a nice semi-blanket for the circle.

05:22:540 (9) - Even this out a bit.


*I do not know if "semi-blanket" is the proper term for what I was addressing. I just figured that it was a term that would at least get the point across. :X

*I apologize if I overloaded you with pictures! I wanted to make sure that I got my point across, as well as giving examples along the way.



The song choice is beautiful, as well as the background. I love the idea of a map for this!
I hope my mod has helped in one way or another!
~ Good luck ~

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