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TAKU1175 ft. Yoshiko - Itsuka no Yume, Matane no Yakusoku.

posted 2016-11-29T09:35:28+00:00

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emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 2017-01-05T02:06:54+00:00

ok lego

this song is super cute btw

[til next time]

00:28:704 (1,2,3) - couldnt really read this well on testplay, suggest you make them stack like the other 1/4s: 00:29:704 (5,1) - , or at least place them closer to each other
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - would suggest you make this part more intense as the guitar's much more intense here compared to before, though you dont really have to
01:20:371 (5,1) - would prefer if these 2 notes had similar jump emphasis as 01:19:038 (4,1) - , i quite liked the latter idea of the jump, but it just felt weird that the next part that was similar wasnt a jump

yea uh i can't mod this much at all this diff is basically rank quality already. my main suggestion would be for you to increase the SR since its an extra and that you can basically afford to, though as of now it already plays very comfortably. good job on this

[kujinn]

00:19:038 (4,1,2) - distance here is a little huge for 1/4, i dont think you've done this anywhere else in your map?
00:47:371 (1,2,3) - any reason why this section wasnt mapped as triplets/bursts?
01:07:371 (1,2) - i'm pretty sure these notes lie on 1/4 instead of 1/3
01:25:538 (8,9,10,1) - suggest you space 1 further from 10 to match the kick pattern with 8-9-10

i can't really point out much because the style is really subpar for me. the distances at places dont quite match the intensity: 00:54:371 (2,3) - compared to 00:54:871 (4,5) - , 01:29:038 (2,3) - compared to 01:29:371 (3,4) - , 00:11:038 (3,1) - compared to 00:10:038 (1,2) - , and certain flows were slightly awkward to play and look at in general. but its rankable, not many issues

[left]

00:13:204 (2,3) - i kinda misread this distance, because the notes were stacked i just assumed it was a 1/2 difference instead. would suggest you space them out or make slider 2 a reverse
01:31:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - kinda misread this as well, where i was made to think that 4-5 stack was a burst hence i played 6-1 as a burst as well. maybe its just me being bad xd
01:50:538 (3) - NC?

clean hard, just some stacks that i couldnt really read well. it feels like priming a player for patterns is very important for a hard because its meant to be simpler and more obvious when it comes to rhythmic choices, would suggest you take that into consideration

too lazy to mod the easier diffs, gl

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2017-01-05T14:28:32+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Hi !

ExKyu's
01:25:871 (3,4) - Masalah spacing

01:08:704 - Dua timing point bertumpuk

01:31:204 (6,1) - Swap NC
00:47:204 (6,1) - ^

Good luck !

Fixed all,thanks for the mod!

Left wrote:
looking for Hard GD? I can map in 30 minutes from 44sec part
from queue

[ExKyu]
- 01:08:704 (1) - doubletimingpoint fixed

I think this map needs rework, I can give some points
- 00:05:038 (3,4,5) - in Easy and Normal, distance should be same at least in each snaps(1/1, 1/2). normally people use same DS all over the map, but there's some cases that uses different DS between 1/2 snap and 1/1 snap. ( Example from Sonnyc in 2016 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008596&m=0 ) i didn't quite understand here...
- actually it's about my opinion, slider velocity gap is too big beween E and N. I think 1.1 or 1.2 is moderate.
- 00:31:371 (4) - SV change isn't recommended is Normal, but your slider shape is cool here fixed
- AR, OD is too high. maybe each one 4, 4 or similar one is better. fixed

but I really liked your long sliders!
i can give you feedback through pm or ingame if you want

Good luck with this mapset! I love this song xD

Thank you for the mod!

Naxess wrote:
Found this in a queue

[-Kyu's Normal]
00:02:704 (4,5) - These feel very off-beat, there's nothing in the music suggesting them either from what I can hear. I'd have simply removed them. 00:02:538 - Is a bit stronger, so some circle could be placed here instead, for example.
00:04:204 (2) - I feel like these sounds can be emphasized a bit more by having a circle on 00:04:204 - and then letting 00:04:538 - be a slider to reflect the longer sound. I'd suggest you end the slider on 00:05:038 - as well, to bridge the polarity from red ticks to white again.
00:13:538 - Perhaps some circle could be placed here instead of repeating the slider, since 00:13:704 - doesn't have an impact like this one does.
00:16:704 - I'd say this sound is stronger than 00:16:371 - . It's also a downbeat, so try making it clickable for the sake of accenting this.
00:17:204 - I realize you're trying to mix up the rhythm a bit here, but honestly 00:17:371 - isn't as strong as the red ticks surrounding it, so having it clickable wouldn't really reflect the song too well. Try varying the rhythm while still following the song. Either of these would work, for example. Same applies to 00:18:704 - 00:20:038 - 00:21:204 - etc.
00:27:704 - Similarly to the above suggestion, neither of the sounds that 00:27:704 (2) - is landing on are of any significant strength. Again, there are plenty of patterns that would work for this. This applies to future cases as well; try making sure all your notes land on audible impacts.
00:31:371 - SV changes like this may be unexpected at this difficulty level. Generally you'd want to keep within a, at most, 0.2 SV range in Normal difficulties. It's something to keep in mind for future maps at least.
00:39:038 - Speaking of SV changes, you've got some unnecessary timing sections which you could clean up. Refer to 00:03:204 - 00:05:871 - 00:08:704 - 00:26:038 - 00:39:038 - 01:08:704 - 01:23:204 - 01:33:204 - 01:40:538 - .
There's this one point that you should specifically tend to, 01:08:704 - , as there are two identical timing sections at the same point in time. This often causes problems in the beatmap, and is as such unrankable.
Ranking Criteria - Timing wrote:
No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point.
[list]

Good luck!

i did some this and that but all of them are applied,thank you so much for the mod!

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Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-01-05T18:21:39+00:00

Olegase wrote:
[Kujinn's Insane]
00:01:204 (2) - Do more DS. For a comfortable game. https://puu.sh/t62q4.png
00:07:704 (1) - Ctrl+g. For a better flow.
00:46:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I want a pattern style 00:45:038 (2,3,4,5,6). I dunno what you're trying to say, what's wrong with what I have here?
01:35:871 (4,5,6,7,8) - Too unexpected turn. To alter to easier to read. Or can make NC 01:35:871. imo Stacks are good indicators of change in direction.

[ Emillia ] wrote:
[kujinn]
00:19:038 (4,1,2) - distance here is a little huge for 1/4, i dont think you've done this anywhere else in your map? Moved 4 up slightly, if any more mods have a problem with this I'll just remove 00:19:288 (1) -
00:47:371 (1,2,3) - any reason why this section wasnt mapped as triplets/bursts? I left it for this section 01:31:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - where music is more intense
01:07:371 (1,2) - i'm pretty sure these notes lie on 1/4 instead of 1/3 I slowed the music down to check, 01:07:371 (1) - lies on 1/3 while 01:07:704 (2) - doesn't
01:25:538 (8,9,10,1) - suggest you space 1 further from 10 to match the kick pattern with 8-9-10

i can't really point out much because the style is really subpar for me. the distances at places dont quite match the intensity: 00:54:371 (2,3) - compared to 00:54:871 (4,5) - , 01:29:038 (2,3) - compared to 01:29:371 (3,4) - , 00:11:038 (3,1) - compared to 00:10:038 (1,2) - , and certain flows were slightly awkward to play and look at in general. but its rankable, not many issues

Thanks for the mods, I'm considering doing some remapping some sections.

pandas

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domSaur

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Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-01-05T23:23:06+00:00

[ Emillia ] wrote:
[til next time]
00:28:704 (1,2,3) - couldnt really read this well on testplay, suggest you make them stack like the other 1/4s: 00:29:704 (5,1) - , or at least place them closer to each other sure
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - would suggest you make this part more intense as the guitar's much more intense here compared to before, though you dont really have to not rn but yea i'll think of smth
01:20:371 (5,1) - would prefer if these 2 notes had similar jump emphasis as 01:19:038 (4,1) - , i quite liked the latter idea of the jump, but it just felt weird that the next part that was similar wasnt a jump not sure if i did it correct but also applied.

thanks

Left

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Left 2017-01-06T12:41:00+00:00

Olegase wrote:
Hello! This random mod. (PS: All screenshots, this is just my view and it may not coincide with the concept of the author, and used to show my improvements of the maps.)
[Left's Hard]
00:16:538 (3) - The chance slider break 100%. (I really could not pass this place) ;w;
Interesting mapping! Good luck!

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Left]
00:09:704 (3,1) - 오버랩 뭔가 안어울리는것 같아요. 다른 패턴들에서는 다 오버랩 안쓰고 띄우셨으면서 음 킵
00:23:204 - 여긴 음 어디감요 넣는게 좋을듯
00:53:871 (1) - 여기도 오버랩 피하는게 개인적으로는 더 좋다 생각됩니당. 이건 좀 저도 애매하긴 한데 고치는 방법 생각나면 고칠게용
00:56:538 (2,5) - 블랭킷리얼
01:47:371 - 여기에 뭐 아무거나 하나 추가해주시고 01:47:454 - 스피너는 개인적으로 여기부터...타난이도도 공백감을 줄라해서 일단 킵할게요
갓매퍼+귀찮음=볼거없음 이거 개못찍은거같은데 갓매퍼드립나오니 뻘쭘하자나..

GL

[ Emillia ] wrote:
ok lego
[left]
00:13:204 (2,3) - i kinda misread this distance, because the notes were stacked i just assumed it was a 1/2 difference instead. would suggest you space them out or make slider 2 a reverse NC change instead
01:31:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - kinda misread this as well, where i was made to think that 4-5 stack was a burst hence i played 6-1 as a burst as well. maybe its just me being bad xd well I'll consider it
01:50:538 (3) - NC? it becomes messy..

clean hard, just some stacks that i couldnt really read well. it feels like priming a player for patterns is very important for a hard because its meant to be simpler and more obvious when it comes to rhythmic choices, would suggest you take that into consideration
too lazy to mod the easier diffs, gl

thx for mod to all~

Hard

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Halfslashed

Global Moderator

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Halfslashed 2017-01-09T16:49:29+00:00

NM from Queue (Sorry I took so long)

[General]
How about ending the first kiai on 00:49:204, since that's where the vocals drop in pitch?

Till Next Time

00:00:705 (1,2) - Visuals are kinda bad here, because the the curveo n that slider is so slight, that the slider appears almost straight, so it's hard to imagine the circular movement from 1 to 2, and looks more like messy linear movement from 1 to 2.
00:01:871 (1,2,3) - 3 could blanket 1 better, blanket with 2 and 3 is not obvious due to the slight curve.
00:03:371 (3) - This bezier point does nothing (at least when i checked it). Going to stop mentioning these because you may/may not know that these trigger me.
00:09:204 (2) - Missing your slight curve here.
00:47:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - Alright, so in reality i'm talking about most of the streams here rather than just this one, but the curvature of the stream has different impacts on how they play. A straight stream is easier to hit than a really curved one, like this one linked, and it makes sense to use similar curves for similar sounds. The first 3 of these bursts all have similar sounds that they're mapping, so a similar shape should be followed. These shapes should also fit your slider aesthetic, in which the super curved bursts are a bit too sharp of a curve.
00:49:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream has a different sound, either use different spacing or a different curvature here to reflect the sounds better.
00:55:371 (1,2) - This is an awkward stream start. From active/passive rhythm it makes sense, but you should be aware that normally streams in this fashion are started with the slider ending on the white tick. Essentially, establishing that you were planning on making a stream like this earlier in the map would be necessary, since players won't expect this type of stream.
00:59:538 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Really prominent sounds, why doesn't the spacing reflect that?
01:00:704 (1,2) - It makes more sense to map the synth or whatever that sound is here, rather than drums, since those are still quite powerful. Switching to following drums at 01:01:204 (1,2) is a better idea.
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Plays awkwardly, since you have curved motion for each set of 3 1/4 sliders, then you have a wide angle to seperate the sets for a sharp sound. Something like https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/N6gilGvr might fix the flow you have but not the spacing you want.
01:08:038 (1,2,3,1) - Might want to make the spacing more obvious that this is 1/3, since there is no prior 1/3 here. Though, I don't think you should change to a repeat either. Personally I would use this rhythm, but it's not what you want: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/W5WRrzFi
01:14:038 (1,2,3) - 2 things: Ambiguous spacing between 1/1 and 1/2, and also really high spacing for such a calm section for the 1/2.
01:22:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice star pattern bro?

Just nitpicking, not bad diff.

Kujinn's Insane

00:06:704 (1) - Why NC?
00:16:704 (3,6) - Stack
00:30:538 (3,4) - A bigger jump would be nice for that strong drum hit.
00:56:538 (1,3) - Visual distance is too tight here, these objects are practically overlapping.
00:59:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same spacing as the stream in the kiai, it would make sense for this to be smaller.
01:01:204 (2,4,5,8) - Overlap, blanket, visual spacing.
01:23:204 (1) - NC not really necessary. Yeah, it's a slower slider, but it makes this section a bit NC spammy and it's readable without the NC.
01:28:538 (1) - A 1/1 slider kills the feeling here. This would need to be decently fast if you want to emphasize this, since having a longer slider feels slower by default.
01:47:371 (1) - Given that spinners are so passive on their starts, I don't really think that starting your spinner here does the sound justice. I recommend making the start of this clickable and either replacing the spinner with a slow slider, or just starting the spinner a tick later and ending the previous stream with a circle.
01:50:538 (1,1) - I don't think the effect of this transition is strong enough, maybe move these closer together?

Fix your blankets, fix your tight visual distances, fix your overlaps, fix your stacks, and fix your NCing. You generally want 1 NC per 4 white ticks, lowering that to 1 per 8 ticks for slow sections and increasing that to 1 per 2 white ticks for intense sections (Basically try to keep combos of length 5-10).
If you can clean this diff up, that'll be good. No real rhythm suggestions or flow suggestions since this diff is good to go in that regard.

Left's Hard

00:11:871 (2) - Sound doesn't feel particularly special, but this slider isn't exactly generic. Consider using a slider like 00:19:871 (3) or 00:29:204 (3).
00:13:204 (2) - Feels weird to have such a strong beat on the slider tail. I don't really have any real solutions for this other than an extended slider, but maybe you can do something here.
01:03:371 (1) - Feels like NC spam past this point, with everything being paired together. At least NC once per two pairs, please.
01:31:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - Well, I was going to ignore this in earlier instances but this does seem questionable, can players at this level read the differences between the two stacks of the same snapping at this level? Personally i'm not sure, so you might want to get more opinions on this, since at least to me it seems weird, especially in the same combo.
01:42:371 (2,3,4,5,1) - I ask again, can players at this level read this?

Good diff, but you may want to get more opinions on the things I mentioned, since they look questionable, at least to me.

Good luck!

chainpullz

2,334 posts

Joined June 2013

chainpullz 2017-01-12T04:57:08+00:00

From my queue:

*** Things I like
*** Random Thought
*** Things I dislike
*** Questionable
*** Unrankable

General

*** AIMod says tags are inconsistent (I might have just needed to redl)

Kujinn's insane
Testplays:
https://puu.sh/tlGWc/9e93d12e3d.osr
https://puu.sh/tlGWI/05d004f808.osr

00:14:371 (2) - *** Would look a bit cleaner if equidistant from 1 and 3 to create symmetry
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035024)

00:18:038 (1,2) - *** The distance on this feels weird to me because 1 is a slow slider which indicates tension (which sort of matches the music) but the tension in the music isn't released until the vocal on 3. I don't think you can capture this effect without having clickables on the vocals from 3 until the NC so I wouldn't suggest any change. Just thought I'd point it out.

00:29:704 (4,5,6,7) - *** The transion into 1 looks a bit off with a linear stream into the curved slider.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035243 I would add a slight curve to the stream so it comes into 1 from more of a downard angle. Note that you already had to dip your cursor coming from 3 so there isn't much of a change in how this plays)

00:46:871 (6,7,8) - *** This feels weird because the strong beat (white tick) is 7 but the big jump is onto 8.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035304 This was the best thing I could come up with that would fix this. 7 is blanketed and there is some symmetry to keep things structured)

00:49:038 (5,6) - *** I think the repeat slider works well for 5 but the bass isn't playing 1/4 snaps on 6 and the vocal on the red tick is a bit stronger here as well. Thus I think it is a bit weird to use a 2nd repeat slider.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035335 I would just split 5 into two kick sliders and use a stacked kick slider pattern here. It's almost structurally identical to what you have but better emphasizes the music by way of clickables imo)

00:57:204 (3) - *** Looks a bit sloppy with how it barely touches the previous slider. I would move it slightly so they aren't touching any more.

01:01:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - *** The way that 5 touches 2 looks a bit messy imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035349 you can make 1,3,5 all colinear while maintaining the blankets and without moving the sliders. Just looks nicer overall imo)

01:02:538 (7) - *** I'd personally go for some added symmetry by making this equidistant from the tail of 6 and the head of 8. Just a slight aesthetic addition.

01:07:371 (1) - *** The guitar is 4x 1/4 here and I assume that's what this is mapped to. Probox did this same mistake with the intro on ninelle and I objected to it then too. Just because it can be mistaken for 1/3 and sounds kind of cool doesn't mean you should undermap it as such. domSaur had it right in his diff with the 1/4 kick sliders.

01:08:038 (3,4,5,6,7) - *** Similarly, this is overmapped here. The drums are only 1/3, not 1/4.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035420 If you want to map the 1/3 here I would probably do something like this. The new combo'ing plus the small spaced triangular pattern gives the player a headsup that this is 1/3 here)

01:22:538 (3,4) - *** Make this symmetric about the end of 1 by lowering 4?
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035437)

01:29:871 (6) - *** The fact that this is so close to 3 kind of triggers me tbh. I would place this equidistant to 3 and 4 for aesthetic appeal.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035430)

01:35:038 (6) - *** The slight overlap with 3 is a bit messy. While it would no longer be equidistant from the tails of 5 and 1 it's still close enough to look better overall if you place this equidistant from 2 and 3 imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035443)

01:35:704 (3,8) - *** These overlap enough that it actually looks fine/good.

01:42:871 (5) - *** Not a big deal but would look slightly better if 4 & 5 were symmetric about 1.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035462)

'Til next time
Testplays:
https://puu.sh/tlGXf/788bc20590.osr
https://puu.sh/tlGXJ/9d181d8bc2.osr

00:16:038 (1,2,3,1) - *** Would look better if spacing from 1-2 was identical to spacing from 3-1 imo
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034839)

00:25:204 (2,3,4,1) - *** It's not really clear what you are following here (which is problematic given the extra spacing emphasis). The end of 2 is a strong vocal note so by not having a clickable here or on the red tick after 1 it suggests you aren't following vocals. There is a 1/6 part in the flute between 2 and 3 that isn't mapped which indicates you probably aren't mapping the flute. There is no drum beat on 4 which indicates you aren't mapping the drums either.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034893 get rid of 4 and move 3 to where 4 was to follow the drums. I think out of the three main things going on in the music I think following the drums requires the least change.)

00:37:372 (3) - *** Seems to be mapped to a cymbal. Have you considered using hitsounds to highlight some of the cymbals? Might be a nice touch but might also be too much. Just something to consider toying around with.

01:03:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - *** The second two triangles here seem very similar whereas the first first has a sharp angle. Have you considered relating the triangles in some way (seems like they were mostly placed for flow) such as the first being sharp angled, the second being medium angled, then the 3rd being wider yet?

01:32:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - *** The way this is angled doesn't quite flow from the previous part of the stream. It being nearly vertical isn't really an issue. Slanting it leftward instead of rightward would flow a bit better.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034962)

01:39:371 (1,2) - *** Starting a stream on a blue tick is usually a bad practice if you can avoid it. In this case you can do so pretty easily by extending the slider onto the blue tick. Streams usually start and end on red/white ticks and this is what players are used to so it's best to stick with this convention if the song allows it.
01:40:204 (9,10,11,12) - *** If you are going to switch to a stack you should do it on 9 not 10 as 9 is where the vocal starts.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034988 If you want to keep everything else more or less the same you probably need to rotate 12 slightly when you shift the stack over)

01:45:038 (2,3) - *** Same comment about starting stream on blue tick

Edit: Added Testplays

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-01-14T06:01:32+00:00

Halfslashed wrote:
Till Next Time
00:00:705 (1,2) - Visuals are kinda bad here, because the the curveo n that slider is so slight, that the slider appears almost straight, so it's hard to imagine the circular movement from 1 to 2, and looks more like messy linear movement from 1 to 2. imo it's not rly a prob(or i don't think it is) but i bent a weeny bit
00:01:871 (1,2,3) - 3 could blanket 1 better, blanket with 2 and 3 is not obvious due to the slight curve. i don't think it's a huge prob and it's not meant to blanket in the first place.
00:03:371 (3) - This bezier point does nothing (at least when i checked it). Going to stop mentioning these because you may/may not know that these trigger me. curved them a bit more. hopefully they don't trigger you now uwu
00:09:204 (2) - Missing your slight curve here. how did it even disappear in the first place
00:47:538 (2,3,4,5,6) - Alright, so in reality i'm talking about most of the streams here rather than just this one, but the curvature of the stream has different impacts on how they play. A straight stream is easier to hit than a really curved one, like this one linked, and it makes sense to use similar curves for similar sounds. The first 3 of these bursts all have similar sounds that they're mapping, so a similar shape should be followed. These shapes should also fit your slider aesthetic, in which the super curved bursts are a bit too sharp of a curve. i will keep this in mind. this kinda needs more thinking (goddamnit when i finally thought i won't have to touch these streams again
00:49:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream has a different sound, either use different spacing or a different curvature here to reflect the sounds better.
00:55:371 (1,2) - This is an awkward stream start. From active/passive rhythm it makes sense, but you should be aware that normally streams in this fashion are started with the slider ending on the white tick. Essentially, establishing that you were planning on making a stream like this earlier in the map would be necessary, since players won't expect this type of stream. uhh and yea. this one as well
00:59:538 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Really prominent sounds, why doesn't the spacing reflect that? ds now at 1.0
01:00:704 (1,2) - It makes more sense to map the synth or whatever that sound is here, rather than drums, since those are still quite powerful. Switching to following drums at 01:01:204 (1,2) is a better idea. i was trying a couple of things out but nope. actually the 1/4 sliders gives emphasis to the kicks.. going back to the synths is kinda underwhelming. and i also can't think of a nice rhythm transition to 01:01:204 (1,2)
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Plays awkwardly, since you have curved motion for each set of 3 1/4 sliders, then you have a wide angle to seperate the sets for a sharp sound. Something like https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/N6gilGvr might fix the flow you have but not the spacing you want. [color=#FFF0000]that one looks pretty harsh.. i'll prolly redo this entire section when i can think of a better one.[/color]
01:08:038 (1,2,3,1) - Might want to make the spacing more obvious that this is 1/3, since there is no prior 1/3 here. Though, I don't think you should change to a repeat either. Personally I would use this rhythm, but it's not what you want: https://halfslashed.s-ul.eu/W5WRrzFi went for two 1/3 repeats instead
01:14:038 (1,2,3) - 2 things: Ambiguous spacing between 1/1 and 1/2, and also really high spacing for such a calm section for the 1/2. 1 is now at the tail of (3) and (2) is in its head
01:22:204 (1,2,3,4,5) - Nice star pattern bro? was never meant to be a perfect one but ok fixed

chainpullz wrote:
'Til next time

00:16:038 (1,2,3,1) - *** Would look better if spacing from 1-2 was identical to spacing from 3-1 imo
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034839) did smth similar

00:25:204 (2,3,4,1) - *** It's not really clear what you are following here (which is problematic given the extra spacing emphasis). The end of 2 is a strong vocal note so by not having a clickable here or on the red tick after 1 it suggests you aren't following vocals. There is a 1/6 part in the flute between 2 and 3 that isn't mapped which indicates you probably aren't mapping the flute. There is no drum beat on 4 which indicates you aren't mapping the drums either.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034893 get rid of 4 and move 3 to where 4 was to follow the drums. I think out of the three main things going on in the music I think following the drums requires the least change.) o wow this one makes more sense. fixed.

00:37:372 (3) - *** Seems to be mapped to a cymbal. Have you considered using hitsounds to highlight some of the cymbals? Might be a nice touch but might also be too much. Just something to consider toying around with. im terribad with hitsound but lemme see

01:03:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - *** The second two triangles here seem very similar whereas the first first has a sharp angle. Have you considered relating the triangles in some way (seems like they were mostly placed for flow) such as the first being sharp angled, the second being medium angled, then the 3rd being wider yet? tried to make them have the same angle. tried.

01:32:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - *** The way this is angled doesn't quite flow from the previous part of the stream. It being nearly vertical isn't really an issue. Slanting it leftward instead of rightward would flow a bit better.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034962) did

01:39:371 (1,2) - *** Starting a stream on a blue tick is usually a bad practice if you can avoid it. In this case you can do so pretty easily by extending the slider onto the blue tick. Streams usually start and end on red/white ticks and this is what players are used to so it's best to stick with this convention if the song allows it. made the 1/2 slider 1/4 instead so the stream can start at 01:39:538

01:40:204 (9,10,11,12) - *** If you are going to switch to a stack you should do it on 9 not 10 as 9 is where the vocal starts.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7034988 If you want to keep everything else more or less the same you probably need to rotate 12 slightly when you shift the stack over) the vocal actually starts at 10]

01:45:038 (2,3) - *** Same comment about starting stream on blue tick same

added the missing "。" in normal and also did stuff on the kiai

thanks for the mod and also sry if the reply took so long orz

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-01-18T13:52:16+00:00

where is everyone else orz

Reillia

1,162 posts

Joined August 2014

Reillia 2017-01-18T18:58:15+00:00

[ez]
plz unity nc period

00:14:038 (1) - touching hp bar. plz move down
00:29:371 (2,2) - avoid overlap is pretty nice
00:30:038 (1,4) - stack this?
01:17:371 (1,2) - these sliders are not same.
01:20:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - i recommend remap this part. cuz there are some gap with background music
01:46:538 (4,1) - ds?

[normal]
Don't use SV change in normal diff

00:26:038 (4,5,6) - i think this is not good idea. 3notes 1/2 stack is confuse to new players. how about fix 1/2 silder?
00:47:204 (5) - nc?
01:21:871 (1,1) - spinner and slider term is too short. i recommend remove spinner and place some notes.
01:36:038 (1,3) - swap nc

[hard]
00:34:038 (1,2) - 모양을 일직선으로 맞춰주는게 좋을거 같아욥..넵.. Nazi...
00:59:538 - 힛사 ㅇㄷ??
01:37:871 (4) - 뉴콤
01:43:871 - 피니시 추가

[insane]
00:26:038 (7,1) - stack miss
00:29:788 - here is no 1/4 rhythm remove note plz
00:50:871 (6,2) - stack miss
00:52:704 - finish sound is exist. i recommend don't skip this rhythm.
00:56:538 (1,3) - too close. how about increase ds?
01:00:704 (6) - i recommend change to 1/4 stream cuz that background sound is stronger than 01:00:371 (5) - this
01:01:204 (2,5) - avoid overlap?
01:02:038 (5) - nc?
01:06:371 (2,1) - stack miss
01:21:204 - add finish
01:28:704 - same as 00:52:704 -
01:36:704 - ^
01:43:704 (2,4) - stack miss?

lazy ww GL!

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-01-19T12:22:00+00:00

I'm really late sorry :/

['Til next time]
cool flow!

00:16:704 - missing finish ?
00:40:538 (9,1) - it's maybe just me, but I feel like the flow would feel better if 00:40:704 (1) - is a lil higher.
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you're following the guitare, it's clearly 1/3. But if you're following the drum, the flow+spacing doesn't feel like it's mapped on the drum.

[Kujinn's Insane]

00:29:704 (4,5,6,7,1) - I can't really see why you used a 5 notes stream here. Even if you're following the strong piano note here 00:29:704 (4) - ; it's only a strong single piano note. The piano note might be long ; if you want to follow it, it'd be better to change it as the Extra diff (3/4 slider instead of 5 stream note)
00:34:538 (3,4) - I don't really mind about blanket, but pretty sure many people will complain about it.
00:49:038 (5,6,7,1) - I kinda feel strange to move my cursor to hit 00:49:038 (5,6,7) - faster than this one 00:49:871 (1) - . According to the fact this one 00:49:871 (1) - is a stronger note than the other, I think it'd be better to have those sliders 00:49:038 (5,6,7) - less spacing to increase the spacing for this one 00:49:871 (1) - .
00:56:204 (8,9,10,11) - pretty sure it should be whistle instead of clap.
01:07:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can't really see why you used 1/4 this way. It doesn't really follow the guitare or the drum. (guitare is clearly 1/3 or 1/6, while the drum isn't a stream)

[Left's Hard]

00:52:538 (5,1) - I'd rather have a mouvement instead of a stack when 00:52:704 (1) - is a strong note with cymbal. Even right after this pattern, you stacked the note and then, mouvement for the strong cymbal note : 00:53:538 (2,3,1) - .
01:36:538 (5,1) - exactly the same case as this one ^
01:50:538 (3) - missing NC

[-Kyu's Normal]
I thought the SV was too high for the normal, and when I've checked Normal + Hard, the SV are exactly the same.
I feel like the placement with the SV is 80%~90% of the SR while the timeline is only 10~20% of the SR. I think there's really a huge difficulty gap between Normal & Hard in the timeline, but the difficulty gap in object placement is more or less close with the current SV.

00:22:038 (1,2,3) - I can't really see why you abused 3/1 slider like this. There's nothing on the song which is like this.

[Shogun's Easy]

00:16:704 (3) - I would NC this one, since the song "restart" with the drum. btw, missing finish.
00:26:371 - 00:27:371 - 00:47:371 (1) - 00:48:871 - 00:49:871 - 00:52:704 - 00:55:371 - 00:56:538 - 01:28:704 - 01:33:871 - 01:36:704 - 01:39:371 - 01:40:538 - missing finish
00:31:371 (2,4,1) - swap NC ? The intense 1/2 cymbal spam finish here 00:32:704 (4) - so
00:41:038 - 00:43:704 - 00:49:538 - 01:35:038 - missing clap
01:02:038 (1) - try to make a perfect S ?
01:26:038 (3) - NC, since the kiai start here.
01:33:871 (3) - ^

I think that's all from me D:
good luck!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-19T18:15:03+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[ez]
plz unity nc period

00:14:038 (1) - touching hp bar. plz move down Fixed
00:29:371 (2,2) - avoid overlap is pretty nice Fixed
00:30:038 (1,4) - stack this? Fixed
01:17:371 (1,2) - these sliders are not same. Fixed
01:20:704 (1,2,3,4,1) - i recommend remap this part. cuz there are some gap with background music I think it's fine like this
01:46:538 (4,1) - ds? Fixed
lazy ww GL!

Kin wrote:
I'm really late sorry :/

[Shogun's Easy]

00:16:704 (3) - I would NC this one, since the song "restart" with the drum. btw, missing finish. Fixed
00:26:371 - 00:27:371 - 00:47:371 (1) - 00:48:871 - 00:49:871 - 00:52:704 - 00:55:371 - 00:56:538 - 01:28:704 - 01:33:871 - 01:36:704 - 01:39:371 - 01:40:538 - missing finish Fixed
00:31:371 (2,4,1) - swap NC ? The intense 1/2 cymbal spam finish here 00:32:704 (4) - so Fixed
00:41:038 - 00:43:704 - 00:49:538 - 01:35:038 - missing clap I don't want to put to much clap.
01:02:038 (1) - try to make a perfect S ? Nooo
01:26:038 (3) - NC, since the kiai start here. Fixed
01:33:871 (3) - ^ ^
I think that's all from me D:
good luck!

Thanks for modding everyone!~

I'm here

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Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-01-19T21:04:45+00:00

Kin wrote:
I'm really late sorry :/

[Shogun's Easy]

00:41:038 - 00:43:704 - 00:49:538 - 01:35:038 - missing clap I don't want too put to much clap.

Then, I don't really get the point when you want to use clap for every snare, but skip a lot of snare

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-19T21:12:41+00:00

Kin wrote:
Kin wrote:
I'm really late sorry :/

[Shogun's Easy]

00:41:038 - 00:43:704 - 00:49:538 - 01:35:038 - missing clap I don't want too put to much clap.
Then, I don't really get the point when you want to use clap for every snare, but skip a lot of snare

For a Easy diff, for me I prefer skip 1 tick white because there isn't a lot of notes on easy difficulty so I don't want put so much hitsounds, I make like this

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-01-20T00:01:38+00:00

Oui alors bon,
Je veux bien comprendre que veuille skip des beats/notes, pour que la diff soit une Easy. Mais quand toi-même tu map sur une timeline, il n'y a absolument RIEN de mal à l'hitsound. Et je veux dire, j'ai en AUCUN cas dis que tu devais add des notes, mais que des hitsounds étaient manquant sur des circles/sliders. Skip des beats/notes pour en faire une Easy est tout à fait normal, mais skip des hitsounds que tu as toi-même mappé, c'est juste de l'inconsistance. Et c'est pas comme si tu avais skip tout les snares de la musique, puisque tu as bel et bien clap, une grande partie des snares de la musique étant mappé.

F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-01-20T01:43:17+00:00

Hi, late short mod

[General]

Fine

[Shogun's Easy]

00:03:371 (1) - Why not use some finish hitsound on such slider heads to emphasize the snare/drum? It seems that your diff is a bit lack of hitsounds Apply this to the whole difficulty
00:04:204 (2) - slidertail finish? ^
00:16:704 (3) - I'm not sure your way of NC. 00:08:704 (1,2,3,4) - Such way of setting a combo for 4 sections (1 section=4 x 1/1 beat) is fine, even tho I think the music here in a combo is too long. 00:14:038 (1,2,3,4) - But here, a combo for 3 sections breaks the music badly because this is not that kind of music. 00:16:704 - Music here obviously flows into a new part, which probably need a NC. I would rather suggest you swap NC on 00:16:704 (3,1) - , even tho in this way is not the problem actually solved. In my opinion, your whole difficulty need a reorganization on NC to set a combo for every 2 sections. Apply this to the whole difficulty
00:26:038 (2) - you may split it into 2 circles? I think the sound on slidertail is really heavy.
00:31:371 (2) - also finish could be added on the sliderhead.
00:48:871 (2) - Ahhh. The track you are following here is kinda distracting and hard to catch ;w;. You should at least add hitfinish on sliderhead to make this slider sound more clear and obvious.

[-Kyu's Normal]

01:21:871 (1,1) - I don't think a space of 1.5 beat is enough for new players to react. 01:47:371 (1,1) - One beat is even more tough. You should make a shorter spinner or change the spinner into circles/sliders.
00:03:371 (1,3) - Same suggestion on hitsound as Easy. This difficulty seems a bit lack of finish hitsound. The two sliders I quote could all have hitfinish on sliderhead while there are not, which makes this part feel unfinished in hitsound. Apply this to the whole difficulty.
01:32:204 (2,3,4) - The drum in music here is really tense. So I strongly suggest you add more hitsounds on this part. In my opinion, you may add claps on each sliderreverse.
01:44:704 (2) - clap on slider tail
01:51:538 (7) - ^
Hmm, probably more work on hitsound? And I'm not quite sure about your rhythm arrangement in this difficulty because I feel that you often switch the track you follow, which is kinda unexpected in Normal.

[Left's Hard]

00:49:871 (1) - The slider touches the accuracy bar at the bottom of screen. You may remake the slider shape to avoid that.
01:50:538 (3) - NC for SV change.
Nice Hard, regardless of a bit overall high difficulty in rhythm.

[Kujinn's Insane]

00:55:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'm not a fan of changing flow in a stream in Insane difficulty. Imo it is hard to control your anchor in such pattern. I suggest you make the flow like this
00:56:538 (1,3) - A bit too close? I would like to move 00:57:204 (3) - a bit downward to avoid overlap.
01:00:704 (6,1) - swap NC

['Til next time]

01:30:704 (4,5,6,7) - I'm not sure about pattern here. 01:31:038 (6) - is closer to the next stream 01:31:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . However this is not the actual order of note. This may lead to a misread regardless of how high the AR is. So I suggest you move 01:30:871 (5,6) - rightward and move 01:31:204 (7) - a bit leftward. I don't care about the flow here because 01:31:204 (7,1,2,3) - this flow is not easy to play anyway lol.
01:37:371 (4) - direction of this slider is opposite to the flow. You probably need to make it turn left instead of turning right.
01:42:538 (1,2) - This distance is easy to be misregarded as 1/2 jump. I suggest you move it more leftward.

That's my opinions from the first sight. You probably need to work a bit more on hitsounds (and maybe on rhythm simplification) in Easy and Normal. Good luck!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-20T14:52:45+00:00

Kin wrote:
Oui alors bon,
Je veux bien comprendre que veuille skip des beats/notes, pour que la diff soit une Easy. Mais quand toi-même tu map sur une timeline, il n'y a absolument RIEN de mal à l'hitsound. Et je veux dire, j'ai en AUCUN cas dis que tu devais add des notes, mais que des hitsounds étaient manquant sur des circles/sliders. Skip des beats/notes pour en faire une Easy est tout à fait normal, mais skip des hitsounds que tu as toi-même mappé, c'est juste de l'inconsistance. Et c'est pas comme si tu avais skip tout les snares de la musique, puisque tu as bel et bien clap, une grande partie des snares de la musique étant mappé.

Okay j'ai compris, j'ai fixée tout les claps, merci!~

F D Flourite wrote:
Hi, late short mod

[Shogun's Easy]
00:03:371 (1) - Why not use some finish hitsound on such slider heads to emphasize the snare/drum? It seems that your diff is a bit lack of hitsounds Apply this to the whole difficulty
00:04:204 (2) - slidertail finish? ^
00:16:704 (3) - I'm not sure your way of NC. 00:08:704 (1,2,3,4) - Such way of setting a combo for 4 sections (1 section=4 x 1/1 beat) is fine, even tho I think the music here in a combo is too long. 00:14:038 (1,2,3,4) - But here, a combo for 3 sections breaks the music badly because this is not that kind of music. 00:16:704 - Music here obviously flows into a new part, which probably need a NC. I would rather suggest you swap NC on 00:16:704 (3,1) - , even tho in this way is not the problem actually solved. In my opinion, your whole difficulty need a reorganization on NC to set a combo for every 2 sections. Apply this to the whole difficulty
00:26:038 (2) - you may split it into 2 circles? I think the sound on slidertail is really heavy.
00:31:371 (2) - also finish could be added on the sliderhead.
00:48:871 (2) - Ahhh. The track you are following here is kinda distracting and hard to catch ;w;. You should at least add hitfinish on sliderhead to make this slider sound more clear and obvious.
That's my opinions from the first sight. You probably need to work a bit more on hitsounds (and maybe on rhythm simplification) in Easy and Normal. Good luck!

All fixed!~
Thanks for modding!~

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domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-01-20T15:30:26+00:00

Kin wrote:
['Til next time]
01:07:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you're following the guitare, it's clearly 1/3. But if you're following the drum, the flow+spacing doesn't feel like it's mapped on the drum. boi i rly need to redo this section sadasdasda

everything else from kin and flourite's mod is applied
thank you for the mod.

seriously where are the rest of the guests ;w;

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-20T15:58:24+00:00

domSaur wrote:
seriously where are the rest of the guests ;w;

:w:

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-01-21T12:22:22+00:00

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256,192,111954,12,0,116038,0:0:0:0:

fixed all~~ thx for mod and sorry for being late ;w;

-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2017-01-21T15:00:08+00:00

Applied all the mods mentioned,and will do a remap of the diff because it seems 1.4 is too high

Thank you all for the mods!

Kin

2,618 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-01-22T00:29:02+00:00

-Kyu wrote:
Applied all the mods mentioned,and will do a remap of the diff because it seems 1.4 is too high

Thank you all for the mods!

call me back when it's done, I don't mind modding it again

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-01-24T14:44:42+00:00

Sorry I'm late,

No reply means applied

Halfslashed wrote:
[General]
How about ending the first kiai on 00:49:204, since that's where the vocals drop in pitch?

Kujinn's Insane
00:06:704 (1) - Why NC? large spacing between both combos, better indicated with nc.
00:16:704 (3,6) - Stack they are stacked ._ .
00:30:538 (3,4) - A bigger jump would be nice for that strong drum hit. stacked on 00:32:038 (3) -
00:56:538 (1,3) - Visual distance is too tight here, these objects are practically overlapping.
00:59:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same spacing as the stream in the kiai, it would make sense for this to be smaller. remapped
01:01:204 (2,4,5,8) - Overlap, blanket, visual spacing.
01:23:204 (1) - NC not really necessary. Yeah, it's a slower slider, but it makes this section a bit NC spammy and it's readable without the NC.
01:28:538 (1) - A 1/1 slider kills the feeling here. This would need to be decently fast if you want to emphasize this, since having a longer slider feels slower by default.
01:47:371 (1) - Given that spinners are so passive on their starts, I don't really think that starting your spinner here does the sound justice. I recommend making the start of this clickable and either replacing the spinner with a slow slider, or just starting the spinner a tick later and ending the previous stream with a circle.
01:50:538 (1,1) - I don't think the effect of this transition is strong enough, maybe move these closer together?

Fix your blankets, fix your tight visual distances, fix your overlaps, fix your stacks, and fix your NCing. You generally want 1 NC per 4 white ticks, lowering that to 1 per 8 ticks for slow sections and increasing that to 1 per 2 white ticks for intense sections (Basically try to keep combos of length 5-10).
If you can clean this diff up, that'll be good. No real rhythm suggestions or flow suggestions since this diff is good to go in that regard.

Good luck!

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*** AIMod says tags are inconsistent (I might have just needed to redl)
Kujinn's insane
Testplays:
https://puu.sh/tlGWc/9e93d12e3d.osr
https://puu.sh/tlGWI/05d004f808.osr

00:14:371 (2) - *** Would look a bit cleaner if equidistant from 1 and 3 to create symmetry
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035024)

00:18:038 (1,2) - *** The distance on this feels weird to me because 1 is a slow slider which indicates tension (which sort of matches the music) but the tension in the music isn't released until the vocal on 3. I don't think you can capture this effect without having clickables on the vocals from 3 until the NC so I wouldn't suggest any change. Just thought I'd point it out.

00:29:704 (4,5,6,7) - *** The transion into 1 looks a bit off with a linear stream into the curved slider.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035243 I would add a slight curve to the stream so it comes into 1 from more of a downard angle. Note that you already had to dip your cursor coming from 3 so there isn't much of a change in how this plays)

00:46:871 (6,7,8) - *** This feels weird because the strong beat (white tick) is 7 but the big jump is onto 8.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035304 This was the best thing I could come up with that would fix this. 7 is blanketed and there is some symmetry to keep things structured) didn't use this way exactly but it works.

00:49:038 (5,6) - *** I think the repeat slider works well for 5 but the bass isn't playing 1/4 snaps on 6 and the vocal on the red tick is a bit stronger here as well. Thus I think it is a bit weird to use a 2nd repeat slider.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035335 I would just split 5 into two kick sliders and use a stacked kick slider pattern here. It's almost structurally identical to what you have but better emphasizes the music by way of clickables imo)

00:57:204 (3) - *** Looks a bit sloppy with how it barely touches the previous slider. I would move it slightly so they aren't touching any more. applied from previous mod

01:01:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - *** The way that 5 touches 2 looks a bit messy imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035349 you can make 1,3,5 all colinear while maintaining the blankets and without moving the sliders. Just looks nicer overall imo) applied from previous mod

01:02:538 (7) - *** I'd personally go for some added symmetry by making this equidistant from the tail of 6 and the head of 8. Just a slight aesthetic addition.

01:07:371 (1) - *** The guitar is 4x 1/4 here and I assume that's what this is mapped to. Probox did this same mistake with the intro on ninelle and I objected to it then too. Just because it can be mistaken for 1/3 and sounds kind of cool doesn't mean you should undermap it as such. domSaur had it right in his diff with the 1/4 kick sliders.

01:08:038 (3,4,5,6,7) - *** Similarly, this is overmapped here. The drums are only 1/3, not 1/4.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035420 If you want to map the 1/3 here I would probably do something like this. The new combo'ing plus the small spaced triangular pattern gives the player a headsup that this is 1/3 here)

01:22:538 (3,4) - *** Make this symmetric about the end of 1 by lowering 4?
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035437)

01:29:871 (6) - *** The fact that this is so close to 3 kind of triggers me tbh. I would place this equidistant to 3 and 4 for aesthetic appeal.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035430)

01:35:038 (6) - *** The slight overlap with 3 is a bit messy. While it would no longer be equidistant from the tails of 5 and 1 it's still close enough to look better overall if you place this equidistant from 2 and 3 imo.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035443)

01:35:704 (3,8) - *** These overlap enough that it actually looks fine/good.

01:42:871 (5) - *** Not a big deal but would look slightly better if 4 & 5 were symmetric about 1.
(Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7035462)

Kin wrote:
[Kujinn's Insane]

00:29:704 (4,5,6,7,1) - I can't really see why you used a 5 notes stream here. Even if you're following the strong piano note here 00:29:704 (4) - ; it's only a strong single piano note. The piano note might be long ; if you want to follow it, it'd be better to change it as the Extra diff (3/4 slider instead of 5 stream note) from what I can hear, a 5 note stream can be used here, both works imo, but I prefer the way I have it.
00:34:538 (3,4) - I don't really mind about blanket, but pretty sure many people will complain about it.
00:49:038 (5,6,7,1) - I kinda feel strange to move my cursor to hit 00:49:038 (5,6,7) - faster than this one 00:49:871 (1) - . According to the fact this one 00:49:871 (1) - is a stronger note than the other, I think it'd be better to have those sliders 00:49:038 (5,6,7) - less spacing to increase the spacing for this one 00:49:871 (1) - . |Applied better solution from previous mod.
00:56:204 (8,9,10,11) - pretty sure it should be whistle instead of clap.
01:07:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I can't really see why you used 1/4 this way. It doesn't really follow the guitare or the drum. (guitare is clearly 1/3 or 1/6, while the drum isn't a stream) There seems to be a lot of debate about whether the guitar is 1/3 or 1/4. Previous mods suggested 1/4 while I thought 1/3. I've made it 1/4 since majority of modders suggested so.

F D Flourite wrote:
[Kujinn's Insane]
00:55:704 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'm not a fan of changing flow in a stream in Insane difficulty. Imo it is hard to control your anchor in such pattern. I suggest you make the flow like this lol, this is exactly what I did before hand.
00:56:538 (1,3) - A bit too close? I would like to move 00:57:204 (3) - a bit downward to avoid overlap.same ^
01:00:704 (6,1) - swap NC

Thanks for mods! That was tiring ~

panda

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-Kyu

487 posts

Joined October 2015

-Kyu 2017-01-27T05:13:29+00:00

Here's the remap

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2017-02-02T10:41:55+00:00

hi

extra

00:28:704 (1,2,3) - seems a bit hard to read, try to make 00:29:038 - clickable
00:19:038 (3,4,1) - i wondered why the spacing between (3) and (4,1) is bigger than 00:32:371 (4,1,2) - while it should be the countrary
00:39:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't look good as much to me, try to improve it D:

insane

00:06:704 (1) - NC is not necessary
00:07:704 (1) - same as above
00:39:704 (2) - clap is missing
00:50:871 (6,2) - perfect stack would be better
01:08:260 (3,1) - it's better to ctrl+g those to fit with the "whistle rhythm" behind
01:22:704 (4,5,6) - loud clap is skipped here, try to add some hitsounds
01:32:538 (10) - NC should be here according to your NC patternn (01:28:538 (1,2,3) -)

hard

01:22:704 (3,4) - loud clap is skipped here, try to add clap hitsound
01:38:704 (3) - mmh what about stopping this at 01:38:954 - ?
01:51:621 - I think it's better to not skip that sound imo

[]
that's all for me gl!

Shurelia

Global Moderator

2,771 posts

Joined December 2013

Shurelia 2017-02-03T13:21:19+00:00

domSaur's prize : p/5793182

[GeneraL]

fix -Kyu's diff metadata, it's scrambled atm
I don't think a slider-slide's sound would be fit in this kind of song. Should just be removed.

[Easy]

00:00:705 - can you adjust the volume a much lower around here? probably until 00:03:371 - . The HS kinda too dominating at here, Probably around 35~40.
00:14:038 (1) - hit the timeline too much and probably hit the health bar too which mean it's an unrankable thing. Must move this lower.
00:36:704 (1,2,1) - probably you can make these look prettier (it's possible to make a nice triangle at here). Placing 00:36:704 (1) - on 744|64 would do this
01:22:038 (3) - posibbly this hit the health bar. Should be moved a bit lower

[Normal]

No, actually you're not really allowed to do SV changes in normal diff since it'll confuse the players. Especially something like this 01:45:871 (4,5) - . It's still acceptable to do small SV changed but something big like this? I don't think so.
00:00:705 - same volume suggestion like easy.
00:08:704 (1) - place it around 156|96 so it'll make a nice pattern with the 2 previous objects.
00:14:038 (1,2) - blanket
00:23:038 (2) - missing clap
00:24:371 (4) - missing clap
00:25:704 (6) - missing
00:26:038 (7) - clap
00:02:538 (4) - Distance inconsitency
00:27:704 (2) - clap
00:29:038 (4) - is
00:30:371 (2) - missing (aight I assume this diff aren't even finished yet)
00:39:371 (1) - finish hmmm should I mention all the missing HS ? I think not.
00:43:371 (1,2,3) - this kind of distance are quite too big a normal diff since this song have 180 bpm means it's a middle-high tier bpm. You should make something "A bit harder than easy" not "something a bit easier than hard" means this diff should looks like an Easy diff while the current one still looks like a hyper diff. Yes, I think this diff going to be hard to go for ranked.

[Hard]

00:16:038 (1) - you give this one some emphasize while you didn't give one on 00:15:371 (1) - even though it needs some of it? yeah, give blue 1 more distance
00:28:704 (1) - naah should just go normal 1/1 instead forcing it a blue tick sound at here. It plays better imo
00:34:038 (1) - same thing ^
00:37:204 (2,3) - yep
there are some of your rhythm pick that using blue lines slider that's not something I prefer but yeah.
01:47:371 (1,1) - yep dangerous recovery time means it's unrankable atm: At least it should contain 1 beat for Hard diff . Refer to : t/517731

[Insane]

00:00:705 (1) - should have around 35~40% volume instead to make things better
00:49:371 (6,7) - idk but this kinda uuh awkawrd to be played. Probably should move 6 elsewhere?

[Time]

00:03:538 (1,2,3,4) - I actually don't know about the use of sudden huge jump at here, I suggest to nerf this. quite a lot
not gonna comment about random kick sliders but uuh.. fine , I guess

nice tsubaki

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-03T17:26:09+00:00

Shurelia wrote:
domSaur's prize : p/5793182

[Easy]
00:00:705 - can you adjust the volume a much lower around here? probably until 00:03:371 - . The HS kinda too dominating at here, Probably around 35~40.
00:14:038 (1) - hit the timeline too much and probably hit the health bar too which mean it's an unrankable thing. Must move this lower.
00:36:704 (1,2,1) - probably you can make these look prettier (it's possible to make a nice triangle at here). Placing 00:36:704 (1) - on 744|64 would do this Fixed differently
01:22:038 (3) - posibbly this hit the health bar. Should be moved a bit lower
nice tsubaki

No reply= Fixed~

Thanks for modding!

Hoy o/

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domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-02-04T05:43:45+00:00

Irohas wrote:
extra
00:28:704 (1,2,3) - seems a bit hard to read, try to make 00:29:038 - clickable this part is p much mapped to only the kicks.. making the vocals clickable might only make it more confusing... i i've just made the heads all stack with each other to lessen the confusion i think
00:19:038 (3,4,1) - i wondered why the spacing between (3) and (4,1) is bigger than 00:32:371 (4,1,2) - while it should be the countrary fixed
00:39:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't look good as much to me, try to improve it D: me either. mixed it up a little bit hopefully it looks less shit now.

Shurelia wrote:
domSaur's prize : p/5793182

[GeneraL]
[Time]
00:03:538 (1,2,3,4) - I actually don't know about the use of sudden huge jump at here, I suggest to nerf this. quite a lot
not gonna comment about random kick sliders but uuh.. fine , I guess turned the kickslider into 2 circles instead since as i think about it, it's not mapped to strong sound like 00:03:371 (3) -

nice tsubaki i still haven't got her fml

thanks for the mod

Left

2,156 posts

Joined October 2014

Left 2017-02-04T08:14:01+00:00

Irohas wrote:
hi

hard
01:22:704 (3,4) - loud clap is skipped here, try to add clap hitsound yeah
01:38:704 (3) - mmh what about stopping this at 01:38:954 - ? too hard..
01:51:621 - I think it's better to not skip that sound imo wanna emphasize next triplet melody
[]
that's all for me gl!

thx for mod!

Shurelia wrote:
domSaur's prize : p/5793182

[Hard]
00:16:038 (1) - you give this one some emphasize while you didn't give one on 00:15:371 (1) - even though it needs some of it? yeah, give blue 1 more distance I interpreted this as rhythm repeats, but DS is higher as sound became bigger.
00:28:704 (1) - naah should just go normal 1/1 instead forcing it a blue tick sound at here. It plays better imo I'll consider it, sound was too strong
00:34:038 (1) - same thing ^
00:37:204 (2,3) - yep
there are some of your rhythm pick that using blue lines slider that's not something I prefer but yeah.
01:47:371 (1,1) - yep dangerous recovery time means it's unrankable atm: At least it should contain 1 beat for Hard diff . Refer to : t/517731 rip I'll fix

nice tsubaki

thx for mod~~

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Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-02-05T11:50:48+00:00

i like this song

['til next time]
00:10:038 (1,2,3) - idk but ze spacing seems a bit to high for this calm part
00:28:954 (2) - id rather change this to http://puu.sh/tP2cm/b140d42270.jpg so it follows vocals better while still following ze instrument
01:12:246 - is this break outro thing intentional? imo starting on 01:12:704 - would make more sense than that 1/8 tick
01:23:038 (6) - try x212 y153? loks beter ithink
01:34:704 (4,1) - nazi aesthetic thing but try to stack tail maybe
01:40:203 (10,11,12,13) - u could remove claps from these note cuz spacing is decreased but the hitsound volume has the same strength curently

[shoguns ez]
00:12:704 (4) - imo the piano sound is lot stronger and should be taken priority on http://puu.sh/tP2DW/712d3d8982.jpg
00:22:038 (1,2) - change to 3/2 reverse pls better with vocals
00:47:371 (1,2) - nazi blanket d
00:49:871 (3) - nc emphasize start of kiai
00:51:038 (1) - remove nc if u did the suggestion above
00:54:038 (5) - add nc if u did the suggestion above
00:58:038 - make this clickable and move spinner 1/2 beat after pls
01:37:871 - this tick is way stronger than 01:38:038 - , and should be mapped
01:47:371 (1) - 1 note combo like this is kinda useless in ez diffs lol so un nc it probably

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-02-07T15:01:32+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
i like this song

['til next time]
00:10:038 (1,2,3) - idk but ze spacing seems a bit to high for this calm part they now all connect to each other
00:28:954 (2) - id rather change this to http://puu.sh/tP2cm/b140d42270.jpg so it follows vocals better while still following ze instrument yeha
01:12:246 - is this break outro thing intentional? imo starting on 01:12:704 - would make more sense than that 1/8 tick what ;w;
01:23:038 (6) - try x212 y153? loks beter ithink
01:34:704 (4,1) - nazi aesthetic thing but try to stack tail maybe
01:40:203 (10,11,12,13) - u could remove claps from these note cuz spacing is decreased but the hitsound volume has the same strength curently lowered the volume of that part instead..

where is everyone agen
tha

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-02-08T16:09:07+00:00

from queue :3

General.

I think you can make kiais consisent across diffs (look for normal)

Shogun's Easy.

Flow 00:26:371 (3,4) - here is a bit harsh, because 00:26:704 (4) - this slider doesn't continue flow maked by previous circles. I think you can flip 00:26:704 (4) - this note in vertical line, it will works better.
I think you can remake 01:02:038 (1) - this shape more symmetrical.

-Kyu's Normal.

You can make perfect symmetry between 00:29:038 (4,1,2) - these circles, because now 00:30:371 (2) - this slider is a bit too high to make symmetrical composition
I think you should use another type of shape 00:51:204 (3) - here, because rythm here is not very similar with 00:49:871 (1) - this rythm and it plays weird, 00:49:871 (1) - this slider follow strong vocal line, straight shape fit here very well, but 00:51:204 (3) - here you've end of vocal and downbeat, I prefer use here slider like this, it should works better.
I prefer remake 00:56:538 (1) - this long slider to 2/1 slider + 1/2 circle, because this slider doesn't fit vocal well as should. 00:57:204 - here and 00:57:371 - here you've strong and important vocals.
01:36:704 (1) - You should move this slider a bit do down, because it overlaps with HP drain bar on 4:3 reslutions.
01:41:704 (1) - This new combo is quite unreasonable for me, because it doen't keep consistancy maked by 01:39:371 (1,2,1,1) - these objects.
01:47:371 (5) - This SV dropdown can be very hard for peaople, who play normal diffs. If you need SV change here you should use ~0,8, not 0,5, because it's too big difference and it's uncomfortable to play.

Left's Hard.

00:31:371 (6,1,2,3) - Here you should use higher spacing, because you've here strong clap spam and with standard spacing it looks too muffed.
Cool diff!

Kujinn's Insane.

00:02:538 (6,1) - This is slightly overspaced, yes 00:03:204 (1,2,3) - here you've stronger rythm, but not that strong to use 4,26DS. I prefer nerf it to 2,5DS. The same 00:08:038 (2,1) - here.
01:07:038 - You should place finish here to continue consistancy maked by previous notes.
01:43:704 (2,4) - I think you shouid stack it, because aesthetics are wrong here.

'Til next time

You should increase spacing 00:01:038 (2,3) - here to keep good consistancy with next compositions. Also you should decrease it 00:00:705 (1,2) - here, because it brokes consistancy, try ctrl+g.
00:03:454 - This clap sounds overmapped, because no clap here. Also 00:03:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - here claps are too loud, I prefer decrease volume to fix this issue.
00:16:204 - Missing clap here, and missing whistle 00:16:371 (3) - here.
00:49:538 - Misssing clap.

Last edited by Venix 2017-02-09T17:16:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-08T17:40:44+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
i like this song

[shoguns ez]
00:12:704 (4) - imo the piano sound is lot stronger and should be taken priority on http://puu.sh/tP2DW/712d3d8982.jpg yep, fixed
00:22:038 (1,2) - change to 3/2 reverse pls better with vocals Here I want to map on the strong sound, so I can't
00:47:371 (1,2) - nazi blanket d d
00:49:871 (3) - nc emphasize start of kiai Fixed
00:51:038 (1) - remove nc if u did the suggestion above Fixed
00:54:038 (5) - add nc if u did the suggestion above No here
00:58:038 - make this clickable and move spinner 1/2 beat after pls It's good like this, I keep this
01:37:871 - this tick is way stronger than 01:38:038 - , and should be mapped Fixed
01:47:371 (1) - 1 note combo like this is kinda useless in ez diffs lol so un nc it probably Fixed

Thanks for modding!~

Venix wrote:
from queue :3

Shogun's Easy.
Flow 00:26:371 (3,4) - here is a bit harsh, because 00:26:704 (4) - this slider doesn't continue flow maked by previous circles. I think you can flip 00:26:704 (4) - this note in vertical line, it will works better. Fixed
I think you can remake 01:02:038 (1) - this shape more symmetrical. Fixed
Will continue this mod tomorrow, if I forget feel free to poke me ;p

Thanks for modding!~

I'm back

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Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2017-02-11T18:45:27+00:00

Irohas wrote:
hi

insane
00:06:704 (1) - NC is not necessary
00:07:704 (1) - same as above
00:39:704 (2) - clap is missing
00:50:871 (6,2) - perfect stack would be better
01:08:260 (3,1) - it's better to ctrl+g those to fit with the "whistle rhythm" behind I think its fine the way it is
01:22:704 (4,5,6) - loud clap is skipped here, try to add some hitsounds
01:32:538 (10) - NC should be here according to your NC patternn (01:28:538 (1,2,3) -)

Shurelia wrote:
domSaur's prize : p/5793182

[Insane]
00:00:705 (1) - should have around 35~40% volume instead to make things better
00:49:371 (6,7) - idk but this kinda uuh awkawrd to be played. Probably should move 6 elsewhere? changed back to 2 repeat sliders

Thanks!

*^%$£

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domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

Topic Starter

domSaur 2017-02-12T18:24:43+00:00

Venix wrote:
General.
I think you can make kiais consisent across diffs (look for normal) dunno where is normal guy uwu
'Til next time
You should increase spacing 00:01:038 (2,3) - here to keep good consistancy with next compositions. Also you should decrease it 00:00:705 (1,2) - here, because it brokes consistancy, try ctrl+g.
00:03:454 - This clap sounds overmapped, because no clap here. Also 00:03:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - here claps are too loud, I prefer decrease volume to fix this issue. removed and stream volume is now 50
00:16:204 - Missing clap here, and missing whistle 00:16:371 (3) - here. now there is.
00:49:538 - Misssing clap. and this

thanks for the mod.

TequilaWolf

279 posts

Joined November 2013

TequilaWolf 2017-02-20T10:35:20+00:00

mod

'Til next time-

I had to play with -5ms to get a nice hit error

00:03:204 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - wow that's sudden, maybe consider http://puu.sh/ubsKL/cfebf13a1d.jpg
00:12:704 (1) - consider changing to circle+1/2 slider
00:22:038 (1,2,3) - maybe change these to https://puu.sh/ubt2N/32a4b51cc1.jpg, also can be applied later
00:25:704 (3,1) - maybe https://puu.sh/ubt9r/d3d0cb418e.jpg I feel like sounds are missing that should be mapped
01:19:204 (1) - maybe slider instead?
01:21:788 (3) - consider removing
01:23:704 (1,1) - awkward gap in between, consider changing first one to some kind of slider
01:42:871 (2) - would move this even further left for emphasis
01:45:038 (2) - closer to the stream maybe http://puu.sh/ubtGi/390fb1ade0.jpg

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-22T11:23:05+00:00

hey

shogun
00:20:704 (3) - move a bit up for make the flow between (2,3,1) goes well
00:36:704 (1) - del nc for consistency
00:40:704 (2) - 266,153 for better blanket
00:46:038 (5,1) - swap nc
00:49:871 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesnt fit with the music imo (especially for object (2,3) ) try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/eaknes
01:08:704 - circle here cause it looks odd if you leave it blank imo
00:57:038 (3) - move this slider to 00:57:204 - for emphatize the finish and the vocal more
01:08:038 (3) - reverse this slider,for emphatize the drum at 01:08:538 -
01:20:538 - 01:21:204 - considering to map this cause the cymbal looks strong than the drum and piano sound
01:35:204 - ^
01:41:204 - ^
01:51:371 - maybe 1/1 slider here for emphatize the drum and piano sound?

ok gl

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-23T17:12:15+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hey

shogun
00:20:704 (3) - move a bit up for make the flow between (2,3,1) goes well
00:36:704 (1) - del nc for consistency
00:40:704 (2) - 266,153 for better blanket
00:46:038 (5,1) - swap nc
00:49:871 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesnt fit with the music imo (especially for object (2,3) ) try this rhythm http://prnt.sc/eaknes
01:08:704 - circle here cause it looks odd if you leave it blank imo what? i don't understand because there is nothing ^^'
00:57:038 (3) - move this slider to 00:57:204 - for emphatize the finish and the vocal more
01:08:038 (3) - reverse this slider,for emphatize the drum at 01:08:538 -
01:20:538 - 01:21:204 - considering to map this cause the cymbal looks strong than the drum and piano sound
01:35:204 - ^
01:41:204 - ^
01:51:371 - maybe 1/1 slider here for emphatize the drum and piano sound?

ok gl

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TitleUnicode:いつかの夢、またねの約束。
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ArtistUnicode:TAKU1175 ft. 駄々子
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