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Vass_Bass
Hi~

General
Add epilepsy warning

Easy
01:06:849 (1,2) - may be you will remove (2) and add returning on the slider?
01:50:134 (3) - i understand that there's music, SB and etc. but there's confusing moment for a new players, replace on a circle
02:01:705 (1,2) - same at 01:06:849 (1,2)
02:42:848 (1,2) - ^
02:53:133 - not good to use 0.5 speed in easy, don't sure, but i think you must do 1.0 speed there

Normal
HP, OD, AR -1
not normal..it's more Normal +/ Hard
03:12:848 (5) - this sliders and 03:39:420 (5,6,7) - this moments do normal like hard

Hard
AR -1
00:09:849 - add circle
00:11:563 - ^
00:11:777 (1) - move on 00:11:992 -
00:18:420 - add note
00:18:634 (7) - remove it
00:21:849 - add note
(suggestions, map will be better play)
01:07:277 (3) - remove?
02:15:420 (1) - spacing, really
03:26:991 - add note
03:33:848 - ^

Very nice map, starr~
Nixnez
说真的,你的图都挺不错的。。XD

[General]
- (Very minor issue) Resnap all notes后系统要求重save。
- mp3 bitrate又超标啦 >_<
- 不是很熟Miku的歌曲,但搜了下发现符合的歌名是另一个(↑Game of Life↓)。考虑下把歌名改成Game of Life吧?
- 02:39:420到02:51:420 - 一些牛逼SB建议,每四拍在某处冒出个烛火,到了02:51:420后逐渐消失,02:53:123鬼火冒出~

[Easy + Normal]
- 感觉 ok。虽说0.5x感觉很拥挤就是了。

[Hard]
- 00:21:849 - 其他的停顿都可理解,但这里就少了一拍。(其他相似区都是放个两拍slider)
- 02:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - 跟02:08:777 (1,2,3,4) 的方向相反,感觉同方向较好吧?

诡异的Miku,诡异的SB,诡异的slider!送个诡异的星星~
loveFantasy
as your per request

[General]
  1. Title應為Jinsei Game(拼音)或者Game of Life(英文歌名)
  2. Source: Vocaloid, Tags: yuzuhiko (有些mapper習慣是反過來)
  3. 三個diff紅線配置不同, 就我所知用紅線調整SV是unrankable


[Easy]
  1. good


[Normal]
  1. 01:44:563 (1,2) - 改用下圖配置? 縮spacing的3/4拍Normal玩家大都讀不出來然後用OD4混300過去..
  2. 01:47:992 (1,2) - 同上


[Hard]
  1. 00:14:991 (1) - move new combo to (2)
  2. 00:31:277 (4,5) - why?


star
-kevincela-
Ok,here's my mod :D

[Easy]

  1. 01:50:134 (3) - Sorry,but using timing points to change the slider's is TOTALLY UNRANKABLE (yes,unfotunately it's unrankable),so you have to change this


[Normal]

  1. 00:35:777 - Add a note here?
  2. 01:50:134 (5) - Yes,same thing as easy about the unrankable timing point
  3. 02:04:920 - Add a note?


[Hard]<

  1. 00:18:634 (7) - New combo?
  2. 00:19:277 (1) - Remove new combo if you added a new note on the note 00:18:634 (7)
  3. 01:50:134 (3) - Yes,same thing at the other diffs
  4. 02:15:420 (1) - Ugh,i really don't like the placement of this note,maybe fix the spacing?


Well,that's all.
Really nice beatmap,even if it's a bit strange and it has a few unrankable things.
My rating: 9/10
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
Fixed :
Timing Sections
Title
etc.

Added :
Source

Thanks you all
Leorda
I wonder what size does Miku's Mansion are?

General

* Your MP3 Bit rate is 320kbps. You need to re-encode to 128kbps ~ 192kbps

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Storyboard
* SB\BGAll - Make this picture is disappear at 02:38:992 to prevent SB Load to 5x
* If you pause at 03:06:206, 03:06:420, 03:06:527 , 03:06:634 and 03:06:742. You will see that Light Hole.png is not appear in Storyboard

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Easy
* Using a slow Slider velocity multiplier (e.g. 0,75x and 0,50x) is confusing for novice, please change it. Otherwise, novice is getting confusing for the slider speed

00:13:277 (x) - Add note to make a good flow?
01:06:849 (1,2) - Remove the circle and add 1 repeating slider for the slider. This will help for noobs because it will be beginner-friendly
01:23:991 (1) - This slider has an odd shape slider (Nazi)
01:24:849 (2) - ^
01:47:991 (1) - ^
01:50:134 (3) - The slider is too short, because the sliderbody is hidden for easy diff

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Normal
* I am not sure if using a slow Slider velocity multiplier (e.g. 0,75x and 0,50x) is confusing for average player too. I think you should ask some questions for MAT right now.....

00:11:134 (5) - Add 1 repeating slider?
00:24:849 (5) - Odd looking slider shapes (Nazi)
00:56:134 (5) - Pretty not sure if this object put under slider is confusing for average player.....
01:50:134 (5) - Sliderbody is hidden, so average player can go confusing. Please change the slider instead
02:18:420 (6) - Same issue as 00:56:134 (5)
03:13:277 (6) - ^
03:23:992 (1) - Odd looking slider shapes (Nazi)

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Hard
00:06:420 (3) - If some player click the startpoint, some player can't choose which way to go. Left side or right side? Which is unrankable slider.
01:29:241 (1) - Add finish?
02:18:420 (7) - Odd looking slider shapes (Nazi)
02:39:849 (2) - ^
03:07:277 (2) - ^
03:30:420 (1) - Same issue as 00:06:420 (3)

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I think you must sleep in graveyard and meet zombies
YaMaO04
:)
Faust
Little IRC suggestion to increase AR on Normal by 1 tick.

No need for kudosu.

Good luck.
LesTrucsRoses
00:07:706 (2) - Make the 2nd part of this slider have a clap hitosund.
00:07:706 (2) - Make the 3rd part of this slider have a finish hitsound.

00:08:349 - Normal hitsounds at 80 - 100% volume.
00:49:599 - Volume up to 100%.

01:44:456 - Muting normal-hitnormal2.wav like this is unrankable. You can make it the same as normal-hitnormal.wav, just softer, however.
00:06:420 (3) - Maybe unrankable.
15:31 <LesTrucsRose> : rankable? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/98129
15:32 <Xgor> : Bit questionable
15:32 <Xgor> : Not too sure myself :|
15:32 <NotShinta> : I'd say no to be safe
00:18:420 (x) - Add a beat here.
00:20:134 (x) - Add a beat here. Clap hitsound.
00:21:849 (x) - Add a beat here. Clap hitsound.
02:07:063 (x) - Add a beat here.
02:07:491 (3) - Repeat this slider once more.

02:17:134 (1,2) - Don't overlay like this. I can't tell to go downwards or upwards first.
TheVileOne
Easy

00:32:992 (1,2) - How about making 1 the note and 2 the slider. It looks weird where it currently is. Make it look better?

01:56:563 (3,4) - I don't like this gap. Maybe add a note in between and then change the direction of the repeater so it fits.

02:06:849 (3,1,2) - Something about these repeaters don't look right. Could you check to see if they are proportional ?

02:44:134 (3,4) - This transition. Eh it doesn't sound right. I think a note should go in the middle. Eh ... test it first. Unsure if it 100% works.

02:53:134 (1) - I think this sounds better if you ended it here 02:53:992 - After resizing you should add a note where it ended.
02:54:849 (3) - End it here 02:55:706 - (Leave the gap it makes and respace the notes.)
02:58:277 (3) - End it here 02:59:134 -

02:59:992 (1) - I guess this one could stay the same size. Or it could work reduced like the other sliders. It might work with or without a note filling its end.

03:03:420 (1) - Do the same and add a note where it ended? I think it compliments the flow of the map.

Normal

Eh first look at the map and ssome beats are placed incorrectly. I really hope the whole song doesn't follow suit.

00:09:634 (3) - This should repeat here 00:09:849 - It sounds a lot better when it does.
00:10:492 - Add a note here afterwards.
00:11:563 - A note needs to go here to fix the beat.

00:11:777 (1) - I don't even think this is part of the beat. It should be deleted.

00:55:706 (4) - I feel the vocal before this is interfering. Maybe you should remove the repeat and start it on the previous blue tick. Here: (00:55:599 -) Or another thing you could do is remove the repeat and delete the next note and make the slider 1/1 like the other sliders.

01:02:991 (6,1,2,3,4) - I don't like how abstract this is.

01:38:563 (3) - Add a repeat. I think the half note transition flows well.

01:41:992 (2,3) - Maybe this will play better as just a repeat slider instead of a stack.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/98447

02:01:277 (6) - Maybe make part of the next combo. What do you think?

02:17:991 (5,6) - I think this is better as a solid 1/1 slider.
03:12:849 (5,6) - ^

03:25:277 - This should be part of the beat.
03:26:992 - ^ (This is awkward without something here)
03:34:063 (1,2) - I don't like this stack. How about getting rid of the stack and moving the slider half beat back. Then adding a slider or something here 03:34:706 -

Hard

00:04:063 (5,6) - Eh I have issues with this going left to right. Maybe it would play better if it was setup to go right to left. IDK

00:09:420 (3,4) - This stack is weird. It's a bit unintuitive. Maybe space out.

00:11:563 - Don't skip beats like this!!! Make it work with a beat included here.

00:21:634 (8,1) - Completely awkward stack. A note needs to go here 00:21:849 -

00:22:063 (1) - Same empty note from Normal. Delete it.

00:50:134 (4,5) - doesn't sound like a jump to me. Especially when there is barely any hitsounds at all to determine the beat.

00:55:813 (5) - I don't hear anything here. Delete and respace???

00:59:027 (4,5,1) - A stack into a huge jump. :/ This is very awkward and unintuitive.

01:05:134 (1,2) - Please don't stack.

01:09:849 (5,6) - Definitely doesn't sound like a jump and is unintuitive to the beat.

01:43:813 (6) - Please delete....

01:44:349 (8) - This should be part of the next combo. Maybe adjust the inherited to match??

02:17:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this entrire combo. Feels too fast and doesn't have many beats behind it. Highly suggest just remapping this. Oh and the jumps don't work at all.

03:12:313 (3) - Maybe delete and then space the gap to 1.6

03:13:170 (6) - Empty note? Delete?

03:25:277 - Add note?

03:33:849 - Add note please. Place it in the square.

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/98469




Here's your star.
hez
MOE MOE 王长喜 - -
winber1
I like having the same slider tick rate for all diffs, so maybe you could increase the tick rate on Hard and Norma? (cuz i know you need the tick rate on Easy) :3

Hard

01:07:706 (x) - add note. flows a lot better...
01:20:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i don't like straight lines a lot lol. maybe you could make them zig zaggy?:
01:29:241 (1) - add finish
03:11:134 (5) - *nazi* move this like 2 grids over. The star shape is weird the way it is now D:

Normal

--a little hard for a normal. I also wouldn't use so many SV and spacing changes in a Normal.

01:29:134 (1) - add finish
01:44:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing is a little small and could confuse beginners.
02:53:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ehh.. so many squiggly crumpled slider things in a Normal diff.. hmm..

No real problems, just a little hard and stuff.

Easy

--I'm honestly against the spacing and SV change in this diff and the crumpled sliders

01:29:134 (1) - add finish
01:50:134 (3) - you shouldn't have something like this in Easy.
02:53:134 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - yeah.. those crumpled sliders.. you probably know by now.
03:33:420 (3) - add clap to the end of slider.

Nothing really huge to say. Beat placement is fine, and I rarely care about slider shapes and overlaps (unless it has to do with symmetry issues), but interesting shapes :3

anyways..

nice map! :3

Star~~
Jenny
Easy and Normal look okay to me, but i'm not that good at modding low-difficulty-beatmaps, so that's up to other people i guess.

Hard:

00:30:849 (1,2,3) - Maybe stack these a little more, looks to streched
00:35:349 (4,5,6) - ^
00:59:777 (1,2,3) - ^
01:15:634 - maybe add something like that:
01:20:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Maybe re-order them, just a line is kinda boring... plus the space is someway... wide; maybe reduce the jumpyness and order them in another way.
01:39:634 (2,3,4) - Again little streched, stack it little more.
01:42:206 (4,5,6) - ^
01:43:706 (5,6,7) - ^
02:05:134 - doesn't look that good to me, maybe change it to something like this
02:10:492 - maybe add something like that:
02:51:634 - maybe add something like this:
03:23:563 - this could be an alternative end of the map aswell, but that's your turn to choose; it's also okay to leave it as it is
Sekai
[Easy]
nothing its seems fine to me

[Normal]
00:34:277 (3) - new combo
01:02:134 (4) - ^
01:07:920 (3) - ^
01:25:706 (3) - ^
01:39:420 (4) - ^
01:42:849 (4) - ^
01:50:134 (5) - ^
01:56:563 (4) - ^
01:58:277 (1) - remove the new combo
01:58:706 (2) - new combo
02:01:277 (5) - ^
02:01:706 (1) - remove the new combo
02:02:563 (4) - new combo
02:13:706 (3) - ^
02:17:563 (4) - ^
03:11:992 (4) - ^
03:32:777 (5) - ^
03:35:777 (4) - ^
03:40:277 (7) - ^

[Hard]
00:07:491 (4) - new combo
00:14:134 (6) - ^
00:21:634 (8) - ^
00:22:063 (1) - remove the new combo
01:07:920 (4) - new combo
01:08:349 (1) - remove the new combo
01:26:563 (5) - new combo
01:43:706 (5) - ^
01:57:420 (5) - ^
01:58:277 (1) - remove the new combo
01:58:706 (2) - new combo
02:41:134 (1) - remove the new combo
02:41:563 (2) - new combo
02:59:992 (1) - remove the new combo
03:00:849 (8) - new combo
03:17:134 (1) - remove the new combo
03:17:563 (2) - new combo
03:18:849 (1) - remove the new combo
03:19:706 (4) - new combo
03:19:706 (8) - ^
03:20:563 (1) - ^

done nice map >w< miku star
wmfchris
[The SB]
- There's much blank in the fire pictures, maybe you can cut them up to save spaces if you have time.
- 00:42:849 - this is the only vibration during the breaks, and it feels lonely orz try to add a few more vibration during the break?
- Two .osb exist in the file. Delete one and full upload.
- I wonder the why the ghost fire go like that-> in random or what? would it be better if it shows the sequence of position of circles (then you'll have to make route of SB for each diff)?
-03:06:206 - At this instant we can see the whole BG so cover that to make it unique plz

[Hard]
00:07:920 (5) - clap here, finish at ending?
00:35:027 (3,6) - maybe whistle works?
01:11:349 (4) - right 2 lv4 grid
Not sure about that, but some normal-whistle can be put in the diff like 01:18:206 (5,7,3)
01:23:777 (x) - add a note?
01:30:849 (s) - finish?
01:50:124 (3) - starting from here the regular claps disappaers @_@ (till 01:57)
01:57:420 (5,7) - clap at beginning?
01:58:492 - [suggestion] we can put them like that due to the finishes?

0:08 ~ 0:28 is really creepy lol

[Normal]
00:07:920 (2) - clap here, finish at ending?
00:56:563 (1,2) - stack their ending
01:26:992 (1,2) - ^
01:30:849 (s) - finish?

[Easy] seems fine.

it would be better for me if the claps are really placed throughout the diff .w.
anyway the SB and song is really nice, star~
peachiwitch
Wah, I was planning to map this song.
>3<

Looks like you beat me to it.
:3

Anyway, star for you.
<3
RhaiizoN
8-)
Kiiwa
Hi~

Hard
HD-1?
Spacing gets pretty large during kiai o.o

00:18:849 (7) - New combo
00:19:277 (1) - Remove new combo
00:21:849 - Add note
00:29:884 - Worry about this spacing...
00:33:313 - ^
01:07:920 (4) - New combo
01:08:349 (1) - Remove new combo
01:14:991 (2,3,4) - CTRL+R
01:18:849 - Jump fits music?
01:30:849 - Change to N?
01:50:134 (3) - End at red tick and add note? Maybe not
01:50:777 (4) - Delete slider and add double on 01:50:884 (4,5) - ;D
02:22:063 - Bad place
02:50:992 (2,3,4) - CTRL+R?
02:59:992 (1) - End at 03:00:420 - and add note at red tick...
03:20:563 - Change to S and end kiai here...

Normal
It wouldn't be bad to do the same thing that you did with spinners on hard... (starting on blue tick right after note)
It's quite a lot easier than Hard o.o

00:07:706 (2) - No hit-finish? Is this on purpose?
01:00:634 (2) - Start this 1/4 later but end at the same place

Easy
01:06:849 (1) - Dont like this. Maybe change to return? Or just extend is better lol

StoryBoard
You have a long moment of black space... 02:39:420 - till next kiai, its a long time.

Well done, it was very fun to play~
I like the sliders on hard alot as well.
Star and good luck!
Tenshi-nyan
Hey.

Promise me that you won't send me to hell?

General
02:53:027 - I think it'd be better if you used soft hitsounds here instead of normal. You could add some whitsles, too.
03:20:563 - ^

Hard
01:29:241 (1) - add finish
01:50:134 (3) - lol'd here.
02:17:134 (1,2) - it's kinda hard to tell which slider goes first... replace the firstr slider with 2 circles?

Normal
00:56:134 (5) - unstack the note, might be too hard to read for a normal
01:29:134 (1) - add finish
01:38:563 (3) - move the repeat arrow to another direction, is kinda confusing this way.
01:44:456 - I don't think using 0.50x BPM in this diff with an already low slider velocity is a very good idea. The spacing can get confusing sometimes.
02:18:420 (6) - unstack the note
02:53:027 - 0.50x spacing boo boo, it's especially bad with the cramped sliders.
03:06:420 (6) - add finish to end
03:09:420 (5) - ^
03:18:849 (4) - move the repeat arrow to another direction, is kinda confusing this way.

Easy
03:23:992 (1) - too early after spinner ( how often did I say that in my last mods? :> )
eldnl
Not mod this because the song is too long. Don't post again please.

Anyway the map is fine. Star :)
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