SCREEN mode - Reason Living (TV Size) · forum

MisakiAN

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2016-11-27T14:26:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 14 September 2017 at 20:15:40

Artist: SCREEN mode
Title: Reason Living (TV Size)
Source: 文豪ストレイドッグス
Tags: Bungou Stray Dogs op Season 2 Yahuri Mir arknes_33 Shiratoi Hytex
BPM: 164
Filesize: 16635kb
Play Time: 00:24
Difficulties Available:

aaaaaaaaa (1,1 stars, 4 notes)
Hard (2,56 stars, 190 notes)
Hytex's Easy (1,69 stars, 117 notes)
I 2 (3,82 stars, 77 notes)
Insane (4,63 stars, 322 notes)
Mir's Normal (2,19 stars, 169 notes)
Shira's Light Insane (3,54 stars, 212 notes)
Yahuri's Existential Crisis (5,46 stars, 393 notes)

Download: SCREEN mode - Reason Living (TV Size)
Download: SCREEN mode - Reason Living (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hytex's Easy by Hytex

Mir's Normal Mir

Hard by MisakiAN

Shira's Light Insane by Shiratoi

Insane by MisakiAN

Yahuri's Existential Crisis by Yahuri

Last edited by MisakiAN 2017-09-14T13:16:21+00:00, edited 103 times in total.

newton-

670 posts

Joined February 2015

newton- 2016-11-28T12:33:36+00:00

hi, from modreqs

reason for life

2.30 sv seems a bit too high for a ~180 bpm song
00:08:687 (1,1) - this doesnt blanket perfectly
00:11:295 (1,3) - maybe blanket?
00:12:278 (5,3) - overlap looks ugly
00:14:245 (2,3,4,5) - maybe structure this set of jumps better, like this. same goes for the slider after them.
00:15:229 (1,2) - held sliders dont seem appropriate here, just replace them with regular 1/2 sliders
00:18:344 - should be clickable since theres a strong vocal on here, maybe a better rhythm choice for this would be something like this. visuals ofc are up to you
00:28:344 (2) - add nc here
00:35:065 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - give this stream more constant spacing, right now the first 5 notes have ds 1.0 and the rest have ds 0.5. it look nice as it is though so i guess you can keep it
00:36:048 (1,2,3) - larger spacing here
00:43:590 (4,5,6) - flow here doesnt really feel comfortable, maybe a better option would be this, with 00:44:409 (2) 's sliderend stacked on 00:43:754 (5)
00:45:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this star pattern neater. like make it an actual regular star.
01:01:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - right now this part is a bit confusing: since 01:01:786 (3) is covered by 01:01:131 (1), most people wont notice it and instead aim for 01:01:950 (4), causing them to misread the pattern entirely. (well, at least it was like this for me when i played through it.) a solution to this would be to ctrl+g 01:01:786 (3,4), then ctrl+g 01:02:114 (5), so that flow will still be comfortable. it ends up looking something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6678907
01:03:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - star pattern here with sliderend of 01:03:754 (1) and the rest, something like this but neater
01:14:245 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, make star neater

good luck!

Fragmented

424 posts

Joined May 2011

Fragmented 2016-11-28T14:00:04+00:00

hellu, im from my modding queue hehe

Mod

00:11:950 (2,3,4) - The circle number (3) is oddly put, considering move it away from slider (2) and close to circle (4). The spacing is off here
00:15:885 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stream just a bit to the right for better spacing like the slider before
00:16:540 (1,2,3,4) - Ooooh this overlapping with the slider (1) and the circles (3,4) does not look nice, consider changing that! (slider (2) is fine if you are wondering)
00:21:622 (7,1) - Move that slider close to the streams, spacing is the problem here again
00:28:344 (3,1,2,3,1) - Add a timing point here and change the volume to 50% to fit in with the feel of the music and end it at 00:29:655 (1)
00:30:639 (4,5,1) - This has a weird shape flow, change the placing/spacing of the circles
00:32:278 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing...
01:02:442 (1,2,3) - ^^^^
01:03:754 (1,2,3) - ^^^^
01:11:458 (7,1) - Move the slider closer to the streams, the spacing is too far
01:13:262 (3,4,5) - Spacings are weird here again

Your map is quite good and has good rhythm and beat to it, keep up the good work! XD

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2016-11-29T10:39:22+00:00

NewtonsCradle wrote:
hi, from modreqs
reason for life
2.30 sv seems a bit too high for a ~180 bpm song
00:08:687 (1,1) - this doesnt blanket perfectly FIx
00:11:295 (1,3) - maybe blanket? Blanked~
00:12:278 (5,3) - overlap looks ugly Change~
00:14:245 (2,3,4,5) - maybe structure this set of jumps better, like this. same goes for the slider after them. i think its a great idea i have a problem with pattern :v
00:15:229 (1,2) - held sliders dont seem appropriate here, just replace them with regular 1/2 sliders i think,i want to keep it like this
00:18:344 - should be clickable since theres a strong vocal on here, maybe a better rhythm choice for this would be something like this. visuals ofc are up to you
00:28:344 (2) - add nc here
00:35:065 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - give this stream more constant spacing, right now the first 5 notes have ds 1.0 and the rest have ds 0.5. it look nice as it is though so i guess you can keep it well i think,i dont want to change it
00:36:048 (1,2,3) - larger spacing here okay
00:43:590 (4,5,6) - flow here doesnt really feel comfortable, maybe a better option would be this, with 00:44:409 (2) 's sliderend stacked on 00:43:754 (5) change it,but i change the slider a bit
00:45:721 (2,3,4,5,6) - make this star pattern neater. like make it an actual regular star.OKAY
01:01:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - right now this part is a bit confusing: since 01:01:786 (3) is covered by 01:01:131 (1), most people wont notice it and instead aim for 01:01:950 (4), causing them to misread the pattern entirely. (well, at least it was like this for me when i played through it.) a solution to this would be to ctrl+g 01:01:786 (3,4), then ctrl+g 01:02:114 (5), so that flow will still be comfortable. it ends up looking something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6678907 i didnt notice that,well,it looks comfortable to play it,so i change it
01:03:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - star pattern here with sliderend of 01:03:754 (1) and the rest, something like this but neater i dont think,star pattern looks good in here,i think,i want to keep it like this
01:14:245 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^, make star neater OKAY
good luck!

THANKS FOR YOUR MOD

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2016-11-29T10:54:49+00:00

CharmCaster wrote:
hellu, im from my modding queue hehe

Mod
00:11:950 (2,3,4) - The circle number (3) is oddly put, considering move it away from slider (2) and close to circle (4). The spacing is off here i think,i would to stack it with slider (1)
00:15:885 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stream just a bit to the right for better spacing like the slider before FIXED
00:16:540 (1,2,3,4) - Ooooh this overlapping with the slider (1) and the circles (3,4) does not look nice, consider changing that! (slider (2) is fine if you are wondering) I think,i just move the note
00:21:622 (7,1) - Move that slider close to the streams, spacing is the problem here again i think,i want to keep it like this
00:28:344 (3,1,2,3,1) - Add a timing point here and change the volume to 50% to fit in with the feel of the music and end it at 00:29:655 (1) okay
00:30:639 (4,5,1) - This has a weird shape flow, change the placing/spacing of the circles Okay
00:32:278 (6,7,8) - Weird spacing... fixed
01:02:442 (1,2,3) - ^^^^ Fix a bit
01:03:754 (1,2,3) - ^^^^ Fix
01:11:458 (7,1) - Move the slider closer to the streams, the spacing is too far okay
01:13:262 (3,4,5) - Spacings are weird here again FIX~~

Your map is quite good and has good rhythm and beat to it, keep up the good work! XD

hehehe...Thanks For Your Mod!

campa97

52 posts

Joined November 2013

campa97 2016-12-12T09:29:55+00:00

M4M, from #modreqs

Sorry for my bad english!

Hard

SV 1.70 with 183 BPM? Mabye is too much for a 2.77 stars difficulty
00:17:852 (1,2) - Little overlap
00:32:114 (1) - You could put it under 00:31:786 (6,7) -
00:40:474 (2,3,4) - Not spaced propely like 00:39:983 (1,2) -
00:42:114 (6,7) - I think is not a good idea break flow stacking objects, you should to make a slider
00:52:114 (5,1) - Move slider from under, is so confusing
00:57:360 (5,1) - ^
00:59:819 (1,2) - Mabye you can map this too
01:01:130 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - So confusing for an hard map
01:19:491 (1,2,1,2) - You should to spacing more

In conclusion, your map isn't bad, but is so confusing for new player that will play your hard map. There are some misleading overlap like 00:11:950 (3,4) - this or 00:12:934 (2,3,4) - that for a new player is too much difficult and confiusing.
Also, you should to add custom hitsound
Good luck

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2016-12-13T13:00:42+00:00

campa97 wrote:
M4M, from #modreqs

Sorry for my bad english!

Hard
SV 1.70 with 183 BPM? Mabye is too much for a 2.77 stars difficulty i think,its fine with SV 1.70...
00:17:852 (1,2) - Little overlap okay
00:32:114 (1) - You could put it under 00:31:786 (6,7) - i think,it should be like this,it can make that easyer to read that part
00:40:474 (2,3,4) - Not spaced propely like 00:39:983 (1,2) - i think,just Ctrl+G it the repeat slider
00:42:114 (6,7) - I think is not a good idea break flow stacking objects, you should to make a slider okay
00:52:114 (5,1) - Move slider from under, is so confusing i guess,its fine like this
00:57:360 (5,1) - ^ same
00:59:819 (1,2) - Mabye you can map this too nah,its fine,the player can have recovery time
01:01:130 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - So confusing for an hard map i guess,remapping it its fine..
01:19:491 (1,2,1,2) - You should to spacing more okay

In conclusion, your map isn't bad, but is so confusing for new player that will play your hard map. There are some misleading overlap like 00:11:950 (3,4) - this or 00:12:934 (2,3,4) - that for a new player is too much difficult and confiusing.well,my map isnt for new player
Also, you should to add custom hitsound i already put it? XD
Good luck

thanks for your mod!

My Angel RangE

1,055 posts

Joined April 2015

My Angel RangE 2016-12-17T03:37:21+00:00

hi~
not well English language..

[Hard]

Storyboard not used turn off 'Widescreen support'!

Sometimes, 00:12:442 (4,1) - like different Ds. Was it intended?

01:08:179 (6) - Middle point offscreen
01:16:868 (1) - well.. over lap?

[Shira's Light Insane]

I look good.. pass

[Reason for Life]

Hard same, Slightly different Ds found.

00:05:325 (3) - Head and tail meet ,Sufficient space
00:20:803 (2) -tail point offscreen.
00:44:409 (2) - Stack
00:51:294 (3) - Basket
01:04:737 (6) - ^?

GL~

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2016-12-17T08:09:26+00:00

My Angel RangE wrote:
hi~
not well English language..

[Hard]

Storyboard not used turn off 'Widescreen support'! ops,i didnt notice this

Sometimes, 00:12:442 (4,1) - like different Ds. Was it intended? Fix DS

01:08:179 (6) - Middle point offscreen Fix
01:16:868 (1) - well.. over lap? i think,just make it like that

[Shira's Light Insane]

I look good.. pass

[Reason for Life]

Hard same, Slightly different Ds found.

00:05:325 (3) - Head and tail meet ,Sufficient space FIX~~
00:20:803 (2) -tail point offscreen. ops,Fix
00:44:409 (2) - Stack okay
00:51:294 (3) - Basket basket??
01:04:737 (6) - ^? Fix Blanked

GL~

Thanks for Your MOD

Stedoss

12 posts

Joined April 2016

Stedoss 2016-12-29T18:30:43+00:00

General:

Your video contains audio. Think about removing that to reduce the file size, this is part of the official raking criteria.

arknes_33's Easy:

SPOILER

00:11:295 (1) - Maybe the SV change is a little too much for new players? 0.5 to 1.0 might be a too much of a change.
00:13:262 (3,5) - This overlap feels strange to me. To new players, they may miss 00:14:245 (4) because of the way the two sliders are positioned.

Mir's Normal:

SPOILER

00:06:390 (1) - I think this spinner should be one bar less in length so it gives the player more time to react to the slider that comes after it.
00:19:163 (1,2) - I feel like something is missing in between these sliders. Both sliders are following the vocals, but there are still some vocals on the red and white tick.

Hard:

SPOILER

00:08:358 (2) - The spacing on this slider is the same as the previous sliders, such as 00:03:130 (1,1) however the timing is different (it's one bar instead of two bars). Try to change the spacing of this slider.
00:08:687 (1,1) - This is not enough recovery time from the spinner to the next object.
00:35:065 (2,3,4) - What are these sliders following in the song? I don't really think these fit here.
00:52:605 (1) - This slider is pretty difficult to read since it is the same distance as 00:51:130 (2,3) however it is a 1/1 instead of a 1/2.
00:57:851 (1) - ^
01:01:130 (1) - Try to move this slider away from the stack (01:00:638 (2,3,4)) to emphasize the change in the music, otherwise it doesn't feel as important.
01:22:933 (3) - I'm not too sure why there's a circle here, I can't here anything in the song at this time?

The other two difficulties seem pretty decent to me, nothing that really stud out.
Good luck with the map!

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-12-31T13:06:21+00:00

Stedoss wrote:
General:
Your video contains audio. Think about removing that to reduce the file size, this is part of the official raking criteria.
Mir's Normal:
00:06:390 (1) - I think this spinner should be one bar less in length so it gives the player more time to react to the slider that comes after it.
00:19:163 (1,2) - I feel like something is missing in between these sliders. Both sliders are following the vocals, but there are still some vocals on the red and white tick.

All applied, remapped some of that second point of yours, I feel it's more consistent with the ending that way. Thanks!

Parachute

317 posts

Joined October 2011

Parachute 2016-12-31T17:50:35+00:00

Hey, heres my mod from m4m :3

SPOILER

General
At the beginning, the "slow part" i dont think the timing is correct, but im not sure myself either so you might want to ask someone whos better at timing

arknes_33's Easy
00:08:687 (1) - I think this slider should be faster for sure. The music here gets a bit louder
already and if this slider is just as slow as the sliders before you dont expect the next slider to be about
twice as fast, which shouldnt really be like that in an easy. You should make this slider a bit faster :p
00:16:540 (1,2) - These have really weird shapes that kinda look bad :/ i think if you make the 1
more round and make the repeat point stack under the end of 00:14:573 (5) - its better
Like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940786
00:45:721 (1,2) - These looks kinda weird. it may be because you tried to make both look good in a blanket to 00:45:065 (3) -
But you made the 2 just too far away from 3 so it kinda looks off. i think you should change the second slider
to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940815 and then adjust the coming sliders
00:48:016 (1,2,3) - I really think these overlaps look bad, and not sure if its a good idea to use overlaps in easy..
Also i dont understand the spacing changes here o.o i think you should keep it 0,9 because 00:49:327 (3,4) - this doesnt look good at all and theres no playchange anyways
01:02:114 (2) - This spacing seems a bit off again, go to x:432 y:216
01:03:426 (2) - Weird spacing too. x:120 y:216 would be better imo.
01:07:360 (2) - Here too. just make it a bit better spacing again
Like i dont get it... then you used 1,0 spacing and then 01:12:934 (3) - is 0,9 again? pls change it to consistent spacing for easy. if you want to make the
chorus 1,0 spacing then thats fine but dont make a mix of 1,0 and 0,9.
01:17:852 (2) - And here you got 1,1 "jump" ^^

About hitsounding:
00:19:163 (1,2) - At such parts i kinda think the hitsounding is a bit boring since you literally cant hear the "finishes" used.
I really recommend using claps also at such parts, and the following parts where you also only used "finishes", or you can
also use some whistles there, they would actually sound really good in such part imo.

Mir's Normal
00:06:063 (1) - x:256 y:48 , so its in the middle :3
00:13:590 (4,1) - This should be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940960 for better flow
00:18:672 (4,1) - This is really weird. why do you make the first slider go up and then start down again? This makes bad flow and looks bad.
So i would do 00:19:163 (1,2) - like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940973
00:24:409 (1) - This spinner id rather end it at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound (youll keep the break so i pref this) or make it longer for 4 white ticks
until 00:28:344 - .. but right now it kinda ends randomly
00:33:426 (3,4,5,6) - These could be made much better, right now the "circle" looks kinda bad but if you do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6941058
It looks so much more smooth like that.
01:11:458 (6) - maybe x:344 y:80, looks better imo
01:13:425 (5) - This also looks kinda off, make the 4 a bit more down and then this one too so it get "round" from 4 to 6.

About the hitsounds: just look at the easy, its the same here.

Hard
00:11:143 - Add note here maybe and just stack it under the 2?
00:15:065 (4,2) - Why no stacking?
00:17:852 (1) - This a bit more up right so it doesnt overlap
00:21:786 (1) - This should maybe be round and the round part facing down for better flow and looks better
00:24:409 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound, because right now it ends kinda random

00:44:573 (6) - Could do better blanket here
00:47:032 (5) - Blanket again
00:57:360 (5,1) - Why isnt that stacked?

looks bad like this, either make spacing a bit higher so its like half covered or just stack it.
01:02:278 (4) - Stack that correctly
01:23:261 (4) - I think its better flow if you make the 4 down instead of left
you could add some hitsounds on this section 00:29:655 -
since the "clap" used here is barely hearable and yea.. feels kinda empty hitsounding wise. But other than that this diff is good.

Shira's Light Insane
00:23:754 (3) - Would do this more right and down for better flow, you stacked it before but id just ignore that for the flow.
00:32:278 (1) - This i would ctrl+j and get it back to where it was, probably even rotate it a bit more down so it gets better flow
00:37:360 (1) - This kinda seems like an unnecessary NC, you probably did that for better readability but i would just remove it :/
00:19:163 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here you did NC every second object and
01:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is literally the same music and you didnt do that, id do it consistent and change one of these 2 sections.

Reason for Life
00:18:999 (8) - I would do this one about x:340 y.328, looks much better and better flow
00:24:081 (4,1) - Make these not touch
00:34:081 (3) - Why this weird spacing change in this section? Would recommend doing it 1,5 like the other sliders.
00:37:442 (5) - Also here xD idk this looks just weird imo
00:39:655 (4) - Make better blanket here with 00:39:163 (2) - and anyways this should be a bit farer away from 00:38:835 (1) -
00:39:983 (1) - And i think you should do this a bit different, like this would be better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6942313 , otherwise it will be a bad flow
or just put it more to the left, that would work too
00:49:327 (5) - NC? and instead remove this one 00:50:311 (1) - just like: 00:54:573 (1,2,3) -
00:51:294 (3) - Blanket could be better
00:56:213 (2) - Make it not touch with the next slider
01:08:016 (3) - Stack that correctly
01:08:835 (8) - ^

Hitsounding seems good for the last 2 diffs

Nice map already, so gl with it :3

Mir

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2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2016-12-31T18:44:21+00:00

Parachute wrote:
Mir's Normal
00:06:063 (1) - x:256 y:48 , so its in the middle :3 - this doesn't matter
00:13:590 (4,1) - This should be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940960 for better flow - changed
00:18:672 (4,1) - This is really weird. why do you make the first slider go up and then start down again? This makes bad flow and looks bad.
So i would do 00:19:163 (1,2) - like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940973 - I don't really see how this is bad flow, it's supposed to be slightly uncomfortable because the sounds here are quite strong.
00:24:409 (1) - This spinner id rather end it at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound (youll keep the break so i pref this) or make it longer for 4 white ticks
until 00:28:344 - .. but right now it kinda ends randomly - my mistake lol
00:33:426 (3,4,5,6) - These could be made much better, right now the "circle" looks kinda bad but if you do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6941058
It looks so much more smooth like that. - "much better" but i moved it by 3 pixels
01:11:458 (6) - maybe x:344 y:80, looks better imo - yeah true
01:13:425 (5) - This also looks kinda off, make the 4 a bit more down and then this one too so it get "round" from 4 to 6. - changed

Also I didn't hitsound it.

Thanks for modding!

Update here.

Shira

1,094 posts

Joined January 2015

Shira 2017-01-01T00:25:09+00:00

Parachute wrote:
Hey, heres my mod from m4m :3

Shira's Light Insane
00:23:754 (3) - Would do this more right and down for better flow, you stacked it before but id just ignore that for the flow. nup would ruin the symmetry with 00:24:081 (4,1) -
00:32:278 (1) - This i would ctrl+j and get it back to where it was, probably even rotate it a bit more down so it gets better flow would break the flow even worse for the next section
00:37:360 (1) - This kinda seems like an unnecessary NC, you probably did that for better readability but i would just remove it :/ nah its for the downbeat
00:19:163 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here you did NC every second object and
01:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is literally the same music and you didnt do that, id do it consistent and change one of these 2 sections. ✓

Hitsounding seems good for the last 2 diffs [/spoilerbox]

Nice map already, so gl with it :3

thanks!

wa

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
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TitleUnicode:Reason Living
Artist:Screen Mode
ArtistUnicode:スクリーンモード
Creator:misakiakill
Version:Shira's Light Insane
Source:文豪ストレイドッグス
Tags:Bungou Stray Dogs op Season 2 Mir arknes_33 Shiratoi
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2017-01-01T13:35:15+00:00

Parachute wrote:
Hey, heres my mod from m4m :3
SPOILER
General
At the beginning, the "slow part" i dont think the timing is correct, but im not sure myself either so you might want to ask someone whos better at timing
i think,just better like this .-.

Hard
00:11:143 - Add note here maybe and just stack it under the 2? i think no
00:15:065 (4,2) - Why no stacking? i cant stack it .-. why????
00:17:852 (1) - This a bit more up right so it doesnt overlap okay
00:21:786 (1) - This should maybe be round and the round part facing down for better flow and looks better Fix
00:24:409 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound, because right now it ends kinda random okay .-.
00:44:573 (6) - Could do better blanket here Fix
00:47:032 (5) - Blanket again Fix
00:57:360 (5,1) - Why isnt that stacked? looks bad like this, either make spacing a bit higher so its like half covered or just stack it. i already move it and it even cant stack perfectly .-. help me
01:02:278 (4) - Stack that correctly Fix
01:23:261 (4) - I think its better flow if you make the 4 down instead of left Fix
you could add some hitsounds on this section 00:29:655 - i think,just put soft-hitwhistle
since the "clap" used here is barely hearable and yea.. feels kinda empty hitsounding wise. But other than that this diff is good.

Reason for Life
00:18:999 (8) - I would do this one about x:340 y.328, looks much better and better flow fix
00:24:081 (4,1) - Make these not touch Fixed
00:34:081 (3) - Why this weird spacing change in this section? Would recommend doing it 1,5 like the other sliders. ops,didnt notice this .-.
00:37:442 (5) - Also here xD idk this looks just weird imo .-. i think,move the next slider a bit far its perfect i think
00:39:655 (4) - Make better blanket here with 00:39:163 (2) - and anyways this should be a bit farer away from 00:38:835 (1) - okay
00:39:983 (1) - And i think you should do this a bit different, like this would be better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6942313 , otherwise it will be a bad flow
or just put it more to the left, that would work too okay,i put it more to the left
00:49:327 (5) - NC? and instead remove this one 00:50:311 (1) - just like: 00:54:573 (1,2,3) - .-. okay
00:51:294 (3) - Blanket could be better Fix
00:56:213 (2) - Make it not touch with the next slider Fix
01:08:016 (3) - Stack that correctly Fix
01:08:835 (8) - ^

Hitsounding seems good for the last 2 diffs

Nice map already, so gl with it :3

Thank you for modding

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2017-01-01T13:38:56+00:00

Stedoss wrote:
General:
Your video contains audio. Think about removing that to reduce the file size, this is part of the official raking criteria.
i think i wanna change the video,but i try to edit it

Hard:
SPOILER
00:08:358 (2) - The spacing on this slider is the same as the previous sliders, such as 00:03:130 (1,1) however the timing is different (it's one bar instead of two bars). Try to change the spacing of this slider. okay
00:08:687 (1,1) - This is not enough recovery time from the spinner to the next object. Fix
00:35:065 (2,3,4) - What are these sliders following in the song? I don't really think these fit here. it following the drums
00:52:605 (1) - This slider is pretty difficult to read since it is the same distance as 00:51:130 (2,3) however it is a 1/1 instead of a 1/2. i think,just make it like this because i try to following the rythym
00:57:851 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:130 (1) - Try to move this slider away from the stack (01:00:638 (2,3,4)) to emphasize the change in the music, otherwise it doesn't feel as important. Fix
01:22:933 (3) - I'm not too sure why there's a circle here, I can't here anything in the song at this time?Fix

The other two difficulties seem pretty decent to me, nothing that really stud out.
Good luck with the map!

Thank you for your mod,and sorry for late reply :">

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2017-01-02T12:46:42+00:00

smol mod cause its late

arknes_33's Easy

Inconsistent slider velocity is usually not a good idea for an Easy Difficulty, even with bpm changes, I would suggest changing the intro SV multipliers back to 1.0x and adjusting the map accordingly.
00:37:032 (2) - Should be a note to hit here as it's a fairly significant note in the song, would improve player feedback.
00:31:622 (1) - ^
00:37:032 (2) - ^
00:48:016 (1,2) - Weird overlaps, try adjusting (1) to blanket around (2) instead
00:45:721 (1) - Blanket

I actually really like the Kiai time map design, good stuff.

Hard

00:15:065 (4,2) - Stack dis

You'll probably have to make your custom difficulty a standard "Insane" difficulty title as it's no longer the hardest difficulty in the set.

Good luck!

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2017-01-03T12:33:08+00:00

Weber wrote:
smol mod cause its late

Hard

00:15:065 (4,2) - Stack dis okay

You'll probably have to make your custom difficulty a standard "Insane" difficulty title as it's no longer the hardest difficulty in the set.
i dont think i wanna keep the extra gd because it has many things to be fixed .-. but i gonna think that again

Good luck!

thanks~

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-05T05:51:21+00:00

wew

osu file format v14

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-06T22:19:04+00:00

Hi! I want to mod this map~

[General]

The name of this group should be "SCREEN mode" look here if you want to verify.
Why you have 2 videos on your beatmap file?

[arknes_33's Easy]

Please use Distance Snap, because the spacing of the diff are very inconsistent
00:00:204 (1,1) - Imperfect blanket, look here
00:04:594 (2) - Add whistle
00:06:063 - Here I suggest to put a spinner until 00:08:030 -.
00:14:573 (5,1) - Bad overlap
00:18:180 (2,2) - ^
00:21:786 (1,2) - Imperfect blanket, here
00:37:851 (1) - I suggest to put this slider straight for a better flow.
00:38:835 (2,3) - Can you aligned them?
00:40:147 (1,2) - In general for the Easy diff the overlaps are not a good idea...
00:43:425 (4) - This slider renverse is not a good idea because here there is no beat. So I suggest to remove this slider and put a slider 1/1 here 00:43:425 (4) - and an other one here 00:44:081 -.
00:45:065 (7,1,2) - This is not very beautiful tbh.. So I suggest to make something like this or like this
00:51:950 (2) - Make a slider straight?
00:53:262 (1,3) - Bad overlap
00:48:016 (1,2,3) - Make the same spacing because this is inconsistent
00:59:163 (2,1) - Don't stack them because it's very hard for beginners the stacks like this.
01:04:409 (2,4) - They contact, please move the note 2.
01:08:999 (1) - Please curve this slider a little more
01:14:245 (1,2,3) - Distance Snap
01:14:901 (2,4) - Contact, move the note 2, it's very weird like this.
01:15:557 (3) - Add whistle on the head of the slider to be consistent with 01:05:065 (3) -.

This diff has a good rythm be the BIG problem is the spacing and the placement of your notes (this kind of overmapping) please remap the diff with Distance Snap. For your placement of your notes, it's simple you need to choose a good spacing (Distance Snap) and you can make a simple and good difficulty. Good luck!

[Mir's Normal]

Open DS
00:21:131 (5,1) - They are not very symmetrical
00:23:098 (3,4) - This is just my opinion but I think it's better if you can blanket them because It looks like, like that there will be something just after (sliders or circles) but there is a spinner and after a small break, so for me it's a little weird.
00:50:638 - Rip strong sound..
00:53:261 (1,2) - Why the spacing change? This is inconsistent.
00:50:966 (2) - Rip strong sound..
01:01:786 (3,5) - Here I suggest to blanket but it's fine if you don't.
01:08:835 (6,1) - Stack them, I find it's looks good.
01:23:097 (3,4) - Stack them, because this is the last notes, it's should be better and more clean.

Nice diff, you just need to fix some spacing with DS. Good luck!

[Hard]

AR should be 8 and HP should be 5.
00:15:229 (1,1) - Very bad overlap..
00:23:098 (1,2,1,2) - I test the diff and there is a problem here, the spacing is too high (x2.34, x2.63 and x2.21) for Hard diff should be a difficult, this is not a Insane diff
00:34:737 (1) - I find this note is too close of this slider 00:34:081 (2) - so I suggest to use the DS and move this a little farther because disrupts it me, I believe that it is a jump lol

I like this diff, nice job!~

I don't mod the others diff because I can't.. but I still check and there are great diffs!
That's all for me~

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

MisakiAN

389 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

MisakiAN 2017-01-07T10:28:24+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi! I want to mod this map~

[General]
The name of this group should be "SCREEN mode" look here if you want to verify. okay
Why you have 2 videos on your beatmap file? ops i forgot to delete it

[Hard]
AR should be 8 and HP should be 5. Fix
00:15:229 (1,1) - Very bad overlap.. Fixed
00:23:098 (1,2,1,2) - I test the diff and there is a problem here, the spacing is too high (x2.34, x2.63 and x2.21) for Hard diff should be a difficult, this is not a Insane diff okay,i put the slider more closer
00:34:737 (1) - I find this note is too close of this slider 00:34:081 (2) - so I suggest to use the DS and move this a little farther because disrupts it me, I believe that it is a jump lol XD okay move the note

I like this diff, nice job!~

I don't mod the others diff because I can't.. but I still check and there are great diffs!
That's all for me~

GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR MAP!

Thanks you very much for your mod!

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-07T17:49:32+00:00

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hi! I want to mod this map~
[Mir's Normal]
Open DS
00:21:131 (5,1) - They are not very symmetrical - it's like a pixel off. fine, fixed
00:23:098 (3,4) - This is just my opinion but I think it's better if you can blanket them because It looks like, like that there will be something just after (sliders or circles) but there is a spinner and after a small break, so for me it's a little weird. - i don't want to blanket these
00:50:638 - Rip strong sound.. - giving vocals priority here and that would increase density so im skipping it
00:53:261 (1,2) - Why the spacing change? This is inconsistent. - fixed
00:50:966 (2) - Rip strong sound.. - same answer as above
01:01:786 (3,5) - Here I suggest to blanket but it's fine if you don't. - not gonna blanket them
01:08:835 (6,1) - Stack them, I find it's looks good. - this is fine, it's to make the ending slightly more difficult
01:23:097 (3,4) - Stack them, because this is the last notes, it's should be better and more clean. - same as above
Nice diff, you just need to fix some spacing with DS. Good luck![/list]

Thanks for modding!

Update here

Sanatra

5 posts

Joined July 2013

Sanatra 2017-01-08T10:04:57+00:00

Insane :

I think OD 8.5 is better for that diff
01:10:639 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like the pattern but i think the space between the slider and stream is too hard for that diff xD

Very nice diff tho

Yahuri's Insane :

00:23:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is too much unconfortable right there (short - long - short - long etc... distance)
01:08:015 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - In my opinion there is no stream to put in that moment. Weird rythm
try something like that http://puu.sh/tfd8F/e809782668.jpg

All other things are good for me. Nice diff btw

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-01-08T15:16:35+00:00

I'm sorry. I am late.

I'm not good at English I am using translation

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

[General]

Follow the instructions of AImod as much as possible
Please remove widescreen support other than Hard and Shira's Light Insane and Insane
I think there are several unnecessary Timing points
00:08:687 - 00:10:657 - 00:10:816 - 00:11:295 - 00:33:426 - 00:37:524 -
00: 11: 295 - The offset does not match the song.The timing is a little early.

[arknes_33's Easy]
Do you know Distance snap?
Let's take advantage of Distance snap as the distance is often different

00:00:204 (1,1) - I think I can blanket
00:01:667 - Add whistle
00:02:399 (1) - Remove NC
00:02:399 - Remove clap Add whistle
00:04:594 (2) - Add whistle
00:06:063 (1,1) - Let's make it simple because it is not like Easy
00:06:063 - add whistle
00:13:262 - remove clap
00:13:262 (3,1) - overlap
00:14:573 (5,1) - Stack miss
00:18:180 (2,2) - 00:15:885 (2,2) - 00:21:131 (3,2) - ^
00:15:229 (1) - Remove NC
00:20:803 - Add clap
00:29:655 (1,2,1) - Please think better.
00:34:737 (3,2) - overlap
00:37:032 (2) - I will put a circle here
00: 37: 524 - to start with
00:41:294 - Please pick up a strong sound
00:40:803 (2) - slider end is 00:41:294 -
00:43:917 - What kind of sound is being picked up by Reverse?
I will reverse it at 00: 44: 081 -
00:45:228 - Please pick up a strong sound
00:46:540 - ^
00:48:016 (1,2) - overlap
00:51:622 - remove finish
00:52:278 - add clap
00:52:606 (3) - add whistle
00:52:933 - add clap
00:53:262 (1,3) - overlap
00:55:885 (1,2,3) - same
00:58:507 - add whistle
01:02:442 (1) - remove NC
01:04:409 (2,4) - overlap
01:10:311 (2) - add clap
01:10:967 (3,4) - stack miss
01:11:622 (1,1) - ^
01:14:245 - Add finish
01:14:901 (2,4) - overlap
01:15:556 - Add finish
01:18:179 - ^
01:20:474 - Add clap
01:21:130 - 01:21:786 - ^
01:21:458 (3) - Add whistle
01:23:426 (1) - spinner start is 01:23:261 -
01:28:671 - remove finish

Please delete meaningless Inherited points.
00:11:376 - 00:16:622 - 00:21:868 - 00:24:409 - 00:24:491 -01:23:343 -
Please lower the volume as the hit sound is noisy
00:29:655 - 00:59:819 -

Easy only mod

Good luck!

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-09T02:48:45+00:00

Sanatra wrote:
Yahuri's Insane :

00:23:098 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is too much unconfortable right there (short - long - short - long etc... distance) i did the DS putting emphasis on claps, the flow is circular. this is actually quite comfortable for me.
01:08:015 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - In my opinion there is no stream to put in that moment. Weird rythm i hear a stream there. though now i noticed there isnt really anything here 01:08:916 (8) - so ill take that out.
try something like that http://puu.sh/tfd8F/e809782668.jpg

All other things are good for me. Nice diff btw

Thanks!

fixed a few NC errors and such as well

wew

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MisakiAN

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MisakiAN 2017-01-09T13:53:53+00:00

Sanatra wrote:
Insane :

I think OD 8.5 is better for that diff okay~
01:10:639 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like the pattern but i think the space between the slider and stream is too hard for that diff xD but i like spaced :'3....okay fix it

Very nice diff tho

Thanks!

MisakiAN

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MisakiAN 2017-01-09T14:07:11+00:00

Yasaija 714 wrote:
I'm sorry. I am late.

I'm not good at English I am using translation

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

[General]
Follow the instructions of AImod as much as possible I tried
Please remove widescreen support other than Hard and Shira's Light Insane and Insane Okay
I think there are several unnecessary Timing points
00:08:687 - 00:10:657 - 00:10:816 - 00:11:295 - 00:33:426 - 00:37:524 -
00: 11: 295 - The offset does not match the song.The timing is a little early.
okay,i think i wanna change this part 00: 11: 295 - .-. im so bad at timing

Good luck!

Thank you

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Osu Tatakae Ouendan 2017-02-06T12:58:47+00:00

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[arknes_33's Easy]
I think you should avoid using combos that are too short, considering the density. In particular:
00:02:399 (1) - remove NC so that the combo is too short. It should be fine to remove it
00:31:622 (1) - remove NC

Most of the rest seem fine, but if you find something you can improve, then you should try it. I believe due to some of the rhythm choices at the kiais, the NC'ing becomes a bit inconsistent, such as 00:13:262 (3,4,5,1,2) - and 01:03:754 (1,2,3) - not being similar NC's to each other.

00:48:016 (1,2,3) - you should map these sliders differently and avoid them having to overlap each other. Furthermore, the movement of 00:48:016 (1,2) - is not straightforward enough for an easy.

Gonna be a bit lenient on this diff since playwise most of it seems to check out

[Hard]
00:12:934 (2) - should probably space this out for consistency. There should be a way to adjust it so it's still at the right spacing with 00:13:262 (3) -
00:21:131 (1,2) - should probably move these farther away from 00:20:639 (2) - , as the sudden short spacing compared to the previous pattern's high spacing is rather awkward and makes it harder to distinguish that 00:21:131 (1) - is 1/1 away
00:22:442 (3) - you should space this away from 00:22:114 (2) -
00:22:934 (4) - stack on 00:22:114 (2) - ? or move it somewhere else as it looks rather cluttered being under 00:22:114 (2) - 's body
00:47:523 (6,7,8) - should probably space this away for consistency, reason being that the entire section here uses (generally) the same spacing all throughout, and this short spacing is the odd one out
00:48:015 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i like this pattern, but i prefer if you move it a bit lower, as its current location is pretty cluttered considering the previous objects 00:45:228 (1,2,3,4) - are in this general area as well
01:01:130 (1) - i prefer if this is farther away from 01:00:638 (2,3,4) - as its current location is just weird to me: In general I think that 1/1's like this should either be farther or stacked on the previous object.
01:03:097 (3) - you should move this lower so that the spacing difference between 01:03:097 (3,4) - and 01:02:769 (2,3) - is not so huge. I think consistency in spacing will help this look cleaner as well.
01:06:048 (4) - I prefer if this is put somewhere else and not under 01:05:064 (1) - 's body: It makes it look more cluttered, and 01:05:064 (1) - 's hitburst may block 01:06:048 (4) - from being seen. It depends on the skin, but I prefer taking the cautious side and presuming that the hitburst blocks the note.
01:10:966 (1) - spacing again similar to earlier.
01:16:212 (3,4,1) - these should really be moved farther away as it's getting really cluttered in this area

[Shira's Light Insane]
I believe most of the 1/4 sliders are spaced too far away, which translates to it being too difficult for a light insane. In particular:
00:16:213 (4) - too far from 00:16:540 (1) -
00:55:556 (4) - too far from 00:55:884 (1) -
00:58:179 (4) - too far from 00:58:507 (1) -
00:59:491 (4) - 00:59:819 (1) -
01:05:064 (1) - 01:05:392 (2) -
01:06:048 (4) - 01:06:376 (1) -
01:11:294 (4) - 01:11:622 (1) -
01:16:540 (4) - 01:16:868 (1) -
01:21:786 (6) - 01:22:114 (1) -

Other things
00:50:146 (4,5) - I believe this rhythm is too complex: there's little indication that they only have one reverse arrow instead of the usual 2 on the rest of the map. The other is that 00:50:392 (5) - is too far from 00:50:638 (1) -

Movement wise however everything checks out.

Hope this helps (/w\)

I was procrastinating on this mod by checking youtube, then I find this in recommendations LOL http://puu.sh/tQN7v/304e2d032a.jpg

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2017-02-06T13:20:27+00:00

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
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