Hey, heres my mod from m4m :3
Nice map already, so gl with it :3
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General
At the beginning, the "slow part" i dont think the timing is correct, but im not sure myself either so you might want to ask someone whos better at timing
arknes_33's Easy
00:08:687 (1) - I think this slider should be faster for sure. The music here gets a bit louder
already and if this slider is just as slow as the sliders before you dont expect the next slider to be about
twice as fast, which shouldnt really be like that in an easy. You should make this slider a bit faster :p
00:16:540 (1,2) - These have really weird shapes that kinda look bad :/ i think if you make the 1
more round and make the repeat point stack under the end of 00:14:573 (5) - its better
Like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940786
00:45:721 (1,2) - These looks kinda weird. it may be because you tried to make both look good in a blanket to 00:45:065 (3) -
But you made the 2 just too far away from 3 so it kinda looks off. i think you should change the second slider
to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940815 and then adjust the coming sliders
00:48:016 (1,2,3) - I really think these overlaps look bad, and not sure if its a good idea to use overlaps in easy..
Also i dont understand the spacing changes here o.o i think you should keep it 0,9 because 00:49:327 (3,4) - this doesnt look good at all and theres no playchange anyways
01:02:114 (2) - This spacing seems a bit off again, go to x:432 y:216
01:03:426 (2) - Weird spacing too. x:120 y:216 would be better imo.
01:07:360 (2) - Here too. just make it a bit better spacing again
Like i dont get it... then you used 1,0 spacing and then 01:12:934 (3) - is 0,9 again? pls change it to consistent spacing for easy. if you want to make the
chorus 1,0 spacing then thats fine but dont make a mix of 1,0 and 0,9.
01:17:852 (2) - And here you got 1,1 "jump" ^^
About hitsounding:
00:19:163 (1,2) - At such parts i kinda think the hitsounding is a bit boring since you literally cant hear the "finishes" used.
I really recommend using claps also at such parts, and the following parts where you also only used "finishes", or you can
also use some whistles there, they would actually sound really good in such part imo.
Mir's Normal
00:06:063 (1) - x:256 y:48 , so its in the middle :3
00:13:590 (4,1) - This should be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940960 for better flow
00:18:672 (4,1) - This is really weird. why do you make the first slider go up and then start down again? This makes bad flow and looks bad.
So i would do 00:19:163 (1,2) - like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940973
00:24:409 (1) - This spinner id rather end it at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound (youll keep the break so i pref this) or make it longer for 4 white ticks
until 00:28:344 - .. but right now it kinda ends randomly
00:33:426 (3,4,5,6) - These could be made much better, right now the "circle" looks kinda bad but if you do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6941058
It looks so much more smooth like that.
01:11:458 (6) - maybe x:344 y:80, looks better imo
01:13:425 (5) - This also looks kinda off, make the 4 a bit more down and then this one too so it get "round" from 4 to 6.
About the hitsounds: just look at the easy, its the same here.
Hard
00:11:143 - Add note here maybe and just stack it under the 2?
00:15:065 (4,2) - Why no stacking?
00:17:852 (1) - This a bit more up right so it doesnt overlap
00:21:786 (1) - This should maybe be round and the round part facing down for better flow and looks better
00:24:409 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound, because right now it ends kinda random
00:44:573 (6) - Could do better blanket here
00:47:032 (5) - Blanket again
00:57:360 (5,1) - Why isnt that stacked?
looks bad like this, either make spacing a bit higher so its like half covered or just stack it.
01:02:278 (4) - Stack that correctly
01:23:261 (4) - I think its better flow if you make the 4 down instead of left
you could add some hitsounds on this section 00:29:655 -
since the "clap" used here is barely hearable and yea.. feels kinda empty hitsounding wise. But other than that this diff is good.
Shira's Light Insane
00:23:754 (3) - Would do this more right and down for better flow, you stacked it before but id just ignore that for the flow.
00:32:278 (1) - This i would ctrl+j and get it back to where it was, probably even rotate it a bit more down so it gets better flow
00:37:360 (1) - This kinda seems like an unnecessary NC, you probably did that for better readability but i would just remove it :/
00:19:163 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here you did NC every second object and
01:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is literally the same music and you didnt do that, id do it consistent and change one of these 2 sections.
Reason for Life
00:18:999 (8) - I would do this one about x:340 y.328, looks much better and better flow
00:24:081 (4,1) - Make these not touch
00:34:081 (3) - Why this weird spacing change in this section? Would recommend doing it 1,5 like the other sliders.
00:37:442 (5) - Also here xD idk this looks just weird imo
00:39:655 (4) - Make better blanket here with 00:39:163 (2) - and anyways this should be a bit farer away from 00:38:835 (1) -
00:39:983 (1) - And i think you should do this a bit different, like this would be better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6942313 , otherwise it will be a bad flow
or just put it more to the left, that would work too
00:49:327 (5) - NC? and instead remove this one 00:50:311 (1) - just like: 00:54:573 (1,2,3) -
00:51:294 (3) - Blanket could be better
00:56:213 (2) - Make it not touch with the next slider
01:08:016 (3) - Stack that correctly
01:08:835 (8) - ^
Hitsounding seems good for the last 2 diffs
At the beginning, the "slow part" i dont think the timing is correct, but im not sure myself either so you might want to ask someone whos better at timing
arknes_33's Easy
00:08:687 (1) - I think this slider should be faster for sure. The music here gets a bit louder
already and if this slider is just as slow as the sliders before you dont expect the next slider to be about
twice as fast, which shouldnt really be like that in an easy. You should make this slider a bit faster :p
00:16:540 (1,2) - These have really weird shapes that kinda look bad :/ i think if you make the 1
more round and make the repeat point stack under the end of 00:14:573 (5) - its better
Like this for example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940786
00:45:721 (1,2) - These looks kinda weird. it may be because you tried to make both look good in a blanket to 00:45:065 (3) -
But you made the 2 just too far away from 3 so it kinda looks off. i think you should change the second slider
to something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940815 and then adjust the coming sliders
00:48:016 (1,2,3) - I really think these overlaps look bad, and not sure if its a good idea to use overlaps in easy..
Also i dont understand the spacing changes here o.o i think you should keep it 0,9 because 00:49:327 (3,4) - this doesnt look good at all and theres no playchange anyways
01:02:114 (2) - This spacing seems a bit off again, go to x:432 y:216
01:03:426 (2) - Weird spacing too. x:120 y:216 would be better imo.
01:07:360 (2) - Here too. just make it a bit better spacing again
Like i dont get it... then you used 1,0 spacing and then 01:12:934 (3) - is 0,9 again? pls change it to consistent spacing for easy. if you want to make the
chorus 1,0 spacing then thats fine but dont make a mix of 1,0 and 0,9.
01:17:852 (2) - And here you got 1,1 "jump" ^^
About hitsounding:
00:19:163 (1,2) - At such parts i kinda think the hitsounding is a bit boring since you literally cant hear the "finishes" used.
I really recommend using claps also at such parts, and the following parts where you also only used "finishes", or you can
also use some whistles there, they would actually sound really good in such part imo.
Mir's Normal
00:06:063 (1) - x:256 y:48 , so its in the middle :3
00:13:590 (4,1) - This should be like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940960 for better flow
00:18:672 (4,1) - This is really weird. why do you make the first slider go up and then start down again? This makes bad flow and looks bad.
So i would do 00:19:163 (1,2) - like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6940973
00:24:409 (1) - This spinner id rather end it at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound (youll keep the break so i pref this) or make it longer for 4 white ticks
until 00:28:344 - .. but right now it kinda ends randomly
00:33:426 (3,4,5,6) - These could be made much better, right now the "circle" looks kinda bad but if you do it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6941058
It looks so much more smooth like that.
01:11:458 (6) - maybe x:344 y:80, looks better imo
01:13:425 (5) - This also looks kinda off, make the 4 a bit more down and then this one too so it get "round" from 4 to 6.
About the hitsounds: just look at the easy, its the same here.
Hard
00:11:143 - Add note here maybe and just stack it under the 2?
00:15:065 (4,2) - Why no stacking?
00:17:852 (1) - This a bit more up right so it doesnt overlap
00:21:786 (1) - This should maybe be round and the round part facing down for better flow and looks better
00:24:409 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 00:26:704 - with the piano sound, because right now it ends kinda random
00:44:573 (6) - Could do better blanket here
00:47:032 (5) - Blanket again
00:57:360 (5,1) - Why isnt that stacked?
looks bad like this, either make spacing a bit higher so its like half covered or just stack it.01:02:278 (4) - Stack that correctly
01:23:261 (4) - I think its better flow if you make the 4 down instead of left
you could add some hitsounds on this section 00:29:655 -
since the "clap" used here is barely hearable and yea.. feels kinda empty hitsounding wise. But other than that this diff is good.
Shira's Light Insane
00:23:754 (3) - Would do this more right and down for better flow, you stacked it before but id just ignore that for the flow.
00:32:278 (1) - This i would ctrl+j and get it back to where it was, probably even rotate it a bit more down so it gets better flow
00:37:360 (1) - This kinda seems like an unnecessary NC, you probably did that for better readability but i would just remove it :/
00:19:163 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Here you did NC every second object and
01:08:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is literally the same music and you didnt do that, id do it consistent and change one of these 2 sections.
Reason for Life
00:18:999 (8) - I would do this one about x:340 y.328, looks much better and better flow
00:24:081 (4,1) - Make these not touch
00:34:081 (3) - Why this weird spacing change in this section? Would recommend doing it 1,5 like the other sliders.
00:37:442 (5) - Also here xD idk this looks just weird imo
00:39:655 (4) - Make better blanket here with 00:39:163 (2) - and anyways this should be a bit farer away from 00:38:835 (1) -
00:39:983 (1) - And i think you should do this a bit different, like this would be better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6942313 , otherwise it will be a bad flow
or just put it more to the left, that would work too
00:49:327 (5) - NC? and instead remove this one 00:50:311 (1) - just like: 00:54:573 (1,2,3) -
00:51:294 (3) - Blanket could be better
00:56:213 (2) - Make it not touch with the next slider
01:08:016 (3) - Stack that correctly
01:08:835 (8) - ^
Hitsounding seems good for the last 2 diffs
Nice map already, so gl with it :3
