M4M deal made in #modreqs :3
[Aoi's Gate]
Try not to have more than 1/1 without any hit objects, breaks the flow.
I mean gaps like these http://puu.sh/nHw8
00:10:936 (1,4) - Make these sliders curve into the hitcircles.
00:16:526 (1,2,3,4) - The trajectories of these sliders just look ugly, try making them all straight.
00:22:862 - Add a note :O
00:36:464 (7) - NC
00:36:651 (1) - Delete NC
00:40:750 (2,3) - Seeing these are spaced so close together, just make them straight.
00:46:713 (2,3) - ^
00:48:203 (1,2,3) - T is for triangle :3
00:49:880 - Add a note.
01:05:346 - ^
01:20:719 - ^
01:25:284 (7,8) - Stack on (9)
This diff is meh, trying working on the flow.
[Taiko]
I was going to say rename to "lepidon! - Taiko Oni" because that's what Lepi names all his diffs but you've got it written on the taiko bg so why put the effort into changing it? D:
[Hard]
00:13:731 (4,5,6) - Use a repeat slider.
00:39:446 (4,5) - Symmetry with the y axis please.
00:59:942 (5) - Move back 2 ticks.
01:04:601 (8) - Delete.
01:05:346 (1) - This doesnt seem to fit .-.
01:07:769 (6) - ^
01:15:036 - Add a note?
01:22:303 (8) - Back 2 ticks.
[Normal]
Same flow issues as the other two diffs.
Hm, you're on the right track but I think this mapset could still use a bit of work.
Good luck :3
[Aoi's Gate]
Try not to have more than 1/1 without any hit objects, breaks the flow.
I mean gaps like these http://puu.sh/nHw8
00:10:936 (1,4) - Make these sliders curve into the hitcircles.
00:16:526 (1,2,3,4) - The trajectories of these sliders just look ugly, try making them all straight.
00:22:862 - Add a note :O
00:36:464 (7) - NC
00:36:651 (1) - Delete NC
00:40:750 (2,3) - Seeing these are spaced so close together, just make them straight.
00:46:713 (2,3) - ^
00:48:203 (1,2,3) - T is for triangle :3
00:49:880 - Add a note.
01:05:346 - ^
01:20:719 - ^
01:25:284 (7,8) - Stack on (9)
This diff is meh, trying working on the flow.
[Taiko]
I was going to say rename to "lepidon! - Taiko Oni" because that's what Lepi names all his diffs but you've got it written on the taiko bg so why put the effort into changing it? D:
[Hard]
00:13:731 (4,5,6) - Use a repeat slider.
00:39:446 (4,5) - Symmetry with the y axis please.
00:59:942 (5) - Move back 2 ticks.
01:04:601 (8) - Delete.
01:05:346 (1) - This doesnt seem to fit .-.
01:07:769 (6) - ^
01:15:036 - Add a note?
01:22:303 (8) - Back 2 ticks.
[Normal]
Same flow issues as the other two diffs.
Hm, you're on the right track but I think this mapset could still use a bit of work.
Good luck :3