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  1. You make a lot pattern changes when mapping the same sounds, I think it upsets the flow of the song
  2. I'm being very pedantic sometimes but it's needed for consistency, sorry if it seems harsh
Mountain of Faith
  1. 00:50:585 - You map to the kicks but miss a beat
  2. 00:52:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't agree with mapping the triples to the guzheng suddenly
  3. 01:09:871 (1,2) - Sliders here seem like a poor choice since it ends on a significant beat
  4. 01:16:104 (1,2) - Same here
  5. 01:17:663 (1,2,3) - Change it to what you did before here 01:11:429 (1,2,3)
  6. 01:48:344 - You mapped to triple kicks before but not here
  7. 01:48:734 - Here too, then make so the slider is last beat
  8. 01:46:104 - Missed beat, or if you map to kicks instead change so matches 01:47:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) (missed triples)
  9. 01:52:922 (3,4,5) - Not a triple here, or do same as above
  10. 01:48:832 (1,2) - Make a kickslider instead then another repeat slider like 01:49:319 (3) so it matches 01:49:611 (4)
  11. 01:52:338 - Again
  12. 02:13:377 (3) - Make so the kicks are mapped like at 02:07:143 (3,4,5)
  13. 03:14:546 (1,2) - Ends on significant beat again, if you made changes at 01:09:871 (1,2) just copy paste here
  14. 03:22:337 (1,2,3) - But keep this how it is, seems fitting
  15. 03:50:781 - Missed beat again since you map to guzheng
  16. 03:57:013 - Here too
  17. 03:59:741 (1) - Kickslider instead (see before)
  18. 04:00:033 (2) - Then make this like 04:00:228 (3)
  19. 04:38:507 (8) - I think this note should be deleted for the effect you go for next
  20. 04:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should be spaced more to highlight pitch changes and not just solid beats
  21. 04:41:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, like you did here 04:43:377 (2,3,4,5,6) but not that spaced
  22. 04:59:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think this should be remapped, you ignore the symbols and just mix it in with the rest of the notes and it doesn't seem like a logical flow
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Toehoe wrote:

General
  1. You make a lot pattern changes when mapping the same sounds, I think it upsets the flow of the song if i map same things here and there it wouldn't be that fun
  2. I'm being very pedantic sometimes but it's needed for consistency, sorry if it seems harsh
Mountain of Faith
  1. 00:50:585 - You map to the kicks but miss a beat intentionally
  2. 00:52:143 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't agree with mapping the triples to the guzheng suddenly i like it and it is kinda buildup for next section
  3. 01:09:871 (1,2) - Sliders here seem like a poor choice since it ends on a significant beat i map piano here and see no trouble if it ends on a strong beat
  4. 01:16:104 (1,2) - Same here
  5. 01:17:663 (1,2,3) - Change it to what you did before here 01:11:429 (1,2,3) lol no listen carefully to piano. it ends on first and continuous on second case you mention
  6. 01:48:344 - You mapped to triple kicks before but not here again i do piano here
  7. 01:48:734 - Here too, then make so the slider is last beat
  8. 01:46:104 - Missed beat, or if you map to kicks instead change so matches 01:47:468 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) (missed triples) just because there is a sound that does not mean that that sound has to be mapped. i like how it is now
  9. 01:52:922 (3,4,5) - Not a triple here, or do same as above nah this section plays and looks and represents music fine for me
  10. 01:48:832 (1,2) - Make a kickslider instead then another repeat slider like 01:49:319 (3) so it matches 01:49:611 (4) mm no
  11. 01:52:338 - Again
  12. 02:13:377 (3) - Make so the kicks are mapped like at 02:07:143 (3,4,5) i did same thing through that kind of sections 04:11:819 (3,4,5) - 05:07:728 (2,3,4) - and think it matches song if i skip that beats on where you mentioned
  13. 03:14:546 (1,2) - Ends on significant beat again, if you made changes at 01:09:871 (1,2) just copy paste here
  14. 03:22:337 (1,2,3) - But keep this how it is, seems fitting
  15. 03:50:781 - Missed beat again since you map to guzheng
  16. 03:57:013 - Here too
  17. 03:59:741 (1) - Kickslider instead (see before)
  18. 04:00:033 (2) - Then make this like 04:00:228 (3)
  19. 04:38:507 (8) - I think this note should be deleted for the effect you go for next no i want to keep this
  20. 04:40:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these should be spaced more to highlight pitch changes and not just solid beats maybe, but i think its fine how it is, i like it
  21. 04:41:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here too, like you did here 04:43:377 (2,3,4,5,6) but not that spaced
  22. 04:59:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - I think this should be remapped, you ignore the symbols and just mix it in with the rest of the notes and it doesn't seem like a logical flow i think i hit sounded it well and it plays naturally

thank you for suggestions but i think my way of placement is better
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when it came to 1/4 sliders having weird flow was mostly fine, but when it comes to 1/2 and above stuff like 02:56:039 (2,3,4) - doesn't really play well so would be good to change the flow so that transition into and out of slider would be better. 02:56:234 (4) - ctrl j and bringing it back up would be enough, but you might want to adjust 02:56:624 (5) - afterwards to look a bit better

03:52:143 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could rearange object placement here a bit so it wouldn't looks so messy by avoiding unncessary overlaps

04:25:065 (3,4,1,2) - I guess something similar as the first point but this is even harder cuz you have linear movement until a harsh flow break at 04:25:552 (2) -

04:39:091 (2,1) - this empty space is kinda awkward, you can avoid it by placing sliders on 04:38:507 (8) - 04:41:819 (5) - and 04:39:091 (2) - it would still follow the piano and passively follow the drums

04:57:598 (2,1) - can avoid irregular rhythm by making 04:57:598 (2) - a slider that ends on 04:57:793 - to be more intuitive to play

04:58:962 (7,1) - can avoid this 3/2 again for same reason if you start the slider at 04:58:962 (7) - and add a reverse

05:12:890 (7) - 05:14:448 (7) - overmapping both notes like this doesn't work that well imo, it doesn't look that well either, could just stack 05:12:793 (6,1) - or smth else if you wish

05:48:442 (4,1) - well I get that you want emphasis but this seems too harsh, it's almost a guaranteed 100 from the slider there

not really sure what the quality issues were before but I'm assuming it had something to do with object placement/aesthetics cuz there's a lot of messy stuff, but the map seems to execute another idea which makes up for it and I like it, feel free to call me back
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Strategas wrote:

when it came to 1/4 sliders having weird flow was mostly fine, but when it comes to 1/2 and above stuff like 02:56:039 (2,3,4) - doesn't really play well so would be good to change the flow so that transition into and out of slider would be better. 02:56:234 (4) - ctrl j and bringing it back up would be enough, but you might want to adjust 02:56:624 (5) - afterwards to look a bit better

03:52:143 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - could rearange object placement here a bit so it wouldn't looks so messy by avoiding unncessary overlaps

04:25:065 (3,4,1,2) - I guess something similar as the first point but this is even harder cuz you have linear movement until a harsh flow break at 04:25:552 (2) -

04:39:091 (2,1) - this empty space is kinda awkward, you can avoid it by placing sliders on 04:38:507 (8) - 04:41:819 (5) - and 04:39:091 (2) - it would still follow the piano and passively follow the drums

04:57:598 (2,1) - can avoid irregular rhythm by making 04:57:598 (2) - a slider that ends on 04:57:793 - to be more intuitive to play

04:58:962 (7,1) - can avoid this 3/2 again for same reason if you start the slider at 04:58:962 (7) - and add a reverse

05:12:890 (7) - 05:14:448 (7) - overmapping both notes like this doesn't work that well imo, it doesn't look that well either, could just stack 05:12:793 (6,1) - or smth else if you wish

05:48:442 (4,1) - well I get that you want emphasis but this seems too harsh, it's almost a guaranteed 100 from the slider there

not really sure what the quality issues were before but I'm assuming it had something to do with object placement/aesthetics cuz there's a lot of messy stuff, but the map seems to execute another idea which makes up for it and I like it, feel free to call me back

applied all!
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как же это долго
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I wasn't sure about the title romanization, and asked Delis for help, he told me that first two kanji should be romanized as Matsufu instead of Matsu fu, but he wasn't sure, therefore I asked Mirash to ask someone reliable for romanization confirmation. If the romanization is corrent, I will push it to qualified.

22:12 Kyubey: я извиняюсь за то, что нихера не делал всё это время, у меня с мотивацией какая-то совсем задница
22:12 Kyubey: тебе всё ещё надо помоддить карту?
22:12 Kyubey: а то у меня появилось настроение моддить сейчас
22:13 Mirash: да!
22:13 Kyubey: ну тогда сейчас и займусь
22:13 Kyubey: протестировать правда надо сначала
22:13 Mirash: я правда еще одного бна нашел, но он тянет резину
22:13 Kyubey: хм
22:13 Kyubey: ну тогда сам думай как лучше
22:14 Mirash: думаю лучше, если ты помодишь
22:14 Kyubey: окей
22:14 Kyubey: ты ещё будешь онлайн?
22:14 Kyubey: а то я ирк могу сделать
22:15 Mirash: да
22:20 Mirash: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7634955 у некоторых почти выходит
22:20 Mirash: кстати, тот бн плейсхолдер поставил, это не помешает?
22:20 Kyubey: я и играть разучился
22:21 Kyubey: ну раз он держит этот плейсхолдер уже неделю, то смысл его ставить
22:21 Kyubey: бесполезно
22:21 Mirash: мне кажется он забыл, с тех пор уже две страницы постов написал
22:21 Mirash: да
22:21 Kyubey: могу удалить его В)
22:21 Kyubey: хотя не буду
22:21 Mirash: ха-ха
22:22 Kyubey: мету тебе чекали?
22:22 Mirash: джонатан и лассе
22:22 Kyubey: ссылки есть на посты?
22:22 Mirash: на 2 странице
22:22 Kyubey: отличн
22:22 Kyubey: а то самому лень искать
22:22 Mirash: p/5679591
22:23 Kyubey: а романизацию кто делал?
22:24 Mirash: хм, я вроде с ютьюба скопировал
22:24 Mirash: никто не комплейнил на этот счет
22:24 Kyubey: меня скобочки в оригинал мете смущают
22:26 Kyubey: и первая кандзя должна быть не Matsu а Matsuri, судя по всему
22:27 Kyubey: попробую у японца спросить
22:27 *Mirash is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/978236 Meramipop - Matsu fu Kami Asobi no Uta]
22:27 Mirash: не знаю можно ли доверять китайцу
22:27 Kyubey: ты там теги видел
22:27 Mirash: но у него так же
22:27 Kyubey: лол
22:27 Mirash: хд
22:30 Mirash: http://www.rd-sounds.com/reitai13.html
22:30 Mirash: шестой
22:30 Mirash: думаю скобочки стоит оставить
22:30 Kyubey: да я больше про то как оно романизируется
22:31 Mirash: ну, все же
22:31 Kyubey: думаю и так сойдёт
22:38 Kyubey: в общем, делис считает, что романизация должна быть не Matsu fu а Matsufu
22:38 Kyubey: но он и сам не уверен
22:38 Kyubey: поэтому я в треде упомяну то что есть сомнения
22:39 Kyubey: и надо будет подождать пока кто-нибудь, кому можно доверять, проверит это
22:39 Mirash: ага, мне искать кого-то?
22:39 Kyubey: можешь попробовать алакат написать
22:39 Kyubey: или кван
22:42 Kyubey: а я в треде напишу что так и так, есть сомнения
22:42 Kyubey: а пока моддить начну
22:42 Mirash: окей, отправлю кван пм
22:45 Kyubey: эх, аккуратности бы карте
22:45 Kyubey: а то столько оверлапов некрасивых
22:45 Mirash: ну, при игре не особо заметно
22:45 Kyubey: для первого раза прокатит, но потом старайся меньше оверлапать без причины
22:45 Kyubey: ну при игре оно иногда путает тоже
22:45 Mirash: я уже понял это, да
22:46 Mirash: я и в ней старался, иногда не выходило
22:47 Kyubey: 01:48:832 (1,2,3) - спейсинг между ними рандомный, это выглядит некрасиво
22:47 Kyubey: сделай ровнее
22:47 Mirash: да
22:51 Kyubey: 02:47:078 (1,2) - нк по вокалу не на двойке разве должно быть?
22:51 Kyubey: или у тебя тут свой нк паттерн?
22:52 Mirash: верно
22:52 Mirash: поправил
22:52 Kyubey: хотя тут во всей части непонятный нк паттерн
22:52 Kyubey: поэтому я хз даже
22:52 Kyubey: 02:54:481 (2,3) - троечка плохо читается тут под двоечкой, выдвинуть луччше
22:52 Mirash: я уберу ее вообще
22:54 Mirash: подвинул
22:56 Kyubey: 04:08:507 (2,1) - вот этот оверлап вообще глаза режет
22:58 Mirash: подвигал
22:59 Kyubey: 05:27:013 (1,1,1,1) - ну в другую сторону ты их хотя бы убери, а то выглядит как прямой копипаст с 02:24:676 (1,1,1,1) -
23:00 Kyubey: и на этом всё
23:00 Mirash: хм
23:01 Mirash: тяжело их в другую сторону убрать
23:01 Kyubey: весь кусок отрази по горизонтали например
23:01 Mirash: в смысле, налево? или ctr h?
23:01 Kyubey: налево, да
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qualify hype?
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I actually told qubee that it might be Saifu and I'll immediately join qat if I was right. soonTM jk srsly
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do we start from #1 again? I thought we can qualify directly if only a title change is needed... or is that not a thing anymore?
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Yea you need to redo this 1 2 3 thing, wrong metas unrankable
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