poots
poots_mcgoots wrote:
Greetings from my modding queue!
Kantan:If I came off as rude or mean, I'm sorry I'm not trying to!! youre not. youre being really nice
- 00:11:325 (13) – This should be a Don, to match with 00:10:266 (12) – and 00:01:796 (2,3) –
00:27:849 (35) – I think this should be a Kat, because it’s of higher pitch than the other Kats before it. not changing because i want a variation here. k k k would be boring :3
01:01:980 (80,81) – I thought Kantans weren’t allowed to use 1/2 ? I could be wrong… Regardless, this should be KD because they’re higher pitch than 01:00:893 (79) –, and is similar to 01:08:936 (92,93) - they are allowed, as long as there are plenty breaks after and / or before the patterns
01:02:632 (82) – This should be a Don, because it’s a lower pitch.
01:03:719 (83) - ^^
01:06:110 (88) – I think this would sound better as a Kat.
01:13:936 (100,101) – I think these should be switched. not changing because the notes after take the impact. if its changed then the whole part has to be changed and the emphasizing is gone
01:18:284 (105) – I think this should be a Kat, because it’s of similar pitch to the other Kats before it. not changing because emphasizing the first kiai, D > K for me lols
01:28:719 (120,121) - ^^ same tbh i just want to follow the vocal change
02:04:806 – There should be a Don here, to match up with 02:07:849 (170,171,172) – added k instead
02:09:588 (173,174) – I think this would sound better if they were switched. no?
02:11:328 (175,177) – These should be Kats to match up with previous. need variations w
02:11:762 - ^^
02:17:414 (184) – This should be Don, to match up with 02:20:893 (189) – variation + vocal
02:25:241 (195,196) – DKD, just like before. ^
02:29:588 – to 02:52:215 - This section should match up with 01:00:893 – to 01:16:545 –
02:56:128 (236,1) – The spinner should start at the Kat. no theres still cymbal there qwq
03:31:692 (41) – Don? why?
03:35:170 (45) – Don? vocal?
03:36:910 (48,50) – Dons? vocal sounds cheerful
03:39:518 (51) – Kat? low pitch
04:10:823 (90,1) - The spinner should start at the Kat. no why
Futsuu:
There's a lot of streams (probably not the correct term) in 1/2 that go over the limit of 3. I'm pretty sure that the BPM allows them (and you're going to tell me that repeatedly), but I pointed them out anyways because I'm not sure whether I'm correct in the fact that they're wrong, or I'm just being picky. Sorry in advance! thats ok! we're learning here so no need for apologize!
[list:1337]01:03:284 (134,135,136,137) – I’m pretty sure that in Futsuu, rhythms like this aren’t allowed? Again, I could be wrong, but I suggest sticking with the “3 only” rule. Maybe delete 01:03:284 (134) -?
01:10:458 (152,153,154,155,156) – Again, I’m pretty sure this isn’t allowed. I suggest deleting 01:11:110 (155) –
01:13:936 (158,159) – Switch? nope for flow
01:20:893 (169,170,171,172,173) – You know what I’m gonna say. I suggest deleting 01:21:545 (172) – this pattern is easy to play and the bpm isnt that high like you said so..
01:25:241 (181) – I think this would sound better as a Don.
01:31:328 (195,196,197,198,199) – You know. Delete 01:31:545 (196) –
01:41:762 (222,223,224,225,226) - ^^
01:43:501 (227,228) – These should be switched the match the pitches.
02:07:849 (14,15,16,17) - … 02:08:067 (15) – delete.
02:18:936 (46) – Delete. this is fine bcs enough breaks
02:19:154 (46) – Kat?
02:21:762 (52,53,54,55,56) – Sorry if pointing this out is annoying, especially if I end up being wrong. Delete 02:21:980 (53) – thats alrite! but im not changing either
02:25:241 (62,63,64,65,66) - ^^ ^
02:28:936 (72) – Delete. ^
02:29:154 (72) – Don? no for flow
02:29:588 – to 02:52:215 - This section should match up with 01:00:893 – to 01:16:545 –
03:16:910 – If any changes were made, apply here also.
03:34:083 (9) – Delete. qwq
03:36:257 (14) - ^^
03:39:301 (22) - ^^ QWQ
04:10:823 (81,1) – The spinner should start at the Kat. no changing
Finally, a Christmas song I like Good luck with ranking!
tiger
Ntiger wrote:
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[General]
First timing point should be 00:00:737 - and 3/4 and can also have a lower volume (50%)
03:44:736 - Add another timing point here to resnap first beat. i dont know if this is really necessary or no o_o
Other parts could have increased volume, tried in kiai and it sounded a little bit too quiet. 75-80% should be enough.
03:00:348 - This one should have same volume as intro and maybe the ones before this too. yay the timing broke
Edit the .osu so SV is 1.4
[Kantan]
OD4, HP7 (long song). kk im bad at these
00:03:913 (4,5,6) - 00:12:384 (14,15,16) - don't have consistent rhythm.
00:17:435 (21) - Unsnapped. probs bcs you changed the timing
00:19:588 - Would rather have a don here instead of 00:23:501 (29) - to allow bigger breaks, the Kantan is very continuous atm.
00:27:414 (35) - Maybe move this to 00:26:545 - and change it to don to stay consistent with ^
00:32:197 (43) - 00:35:675 (47) - 00:39:154 (51) - 00:44:371 (57,58,59) - are all good notes to remove to have a few breaks in Kantan. The part is also calmer, so making a difference is always nice. only deleted 00:44:371 (54,56) -
> 01:33:067 (126) - 01:36:545 (130) - 01:40:024 (135) - 01:45:241 (142,143,144) - ^
00:56:980 - Missing a don.
> 01:50:893 - 01:57:849 - ^
> 02:25:675 - ^ kat
01:01:980 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - Would change this whole thing to kk d dd k to reflect pitch better.
01:05:458 (86,87,88) - Consider dd k for this too, to make this friendlier for Kantan. 1/2 is rare!
01:17:414 (104) - Delete, break before kiai!
01:20:458 - Add a don, move 01:21:328 (109) - to 01:22:197 - and change to kat. If the previous version of this was applied, of course! not changing to kat but moved
02:02:632 (164) - Similar to the other calmer part, but I would suggest moving this to 02:04:806 - here instead so it's a little bit more dense. Need to make a few differences to follow the song!
> 02:06:110 (168) - 02:13:067 (177) - ^ but since there's a note already, probably just delete this.
> 02:09:588 (173) - ^ (move)
02:20:893 (188) - Kat to stay consistent? Or make 02:21:762 (189) - kat for ~variation~ applied the second one
02:24:371 (193,194) - First kat, 2nd don. To stay consistent.
02:28:719 (198,199) - This is another good spot for break.
02:30:675 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - Same as before.
02:52:197 (231) - Unsnapped.
02:52:197 (231,232,233,234,235) - Would also change all of these to big kats cause more interesting.
03:00:324 (2) - Unsnapped too.
03:03:524 (5,6) - Inconsistent with intro.
03:19:084 - Final kiai, allows an extra don here. (Actually it's in the other kiai too C: )
03:26:040 - ^
03:33:866 - Nice spot for a don too
03:45:605 (60,61) - Because it was so intense until now: Players deserve a break. Generally adapt this to similar parts, maybe make it slightly more dense.
03:58:649 - From here: Make it less dense! (aka like other parts) imo current one is already denser than the prev parts, so im keeping it for now. the next part will be denser again because the music keep disappearing
04:11:040 (1) - Could go 1/1 longer to the end of sound (04:19:953 - )
[Futsuu]
OD4.5, HP6 really bad at these things
00:03:560 (4,5,6,7) - 00:12:031 (19,20,21,22) - Same as Kantan.
00:22:197 - Consider adding a don to make 3/2 less awkward to hit
00:31:762 (64,67) - Same as Kantan: Good spots to remove notes to make this part less dense. All of these are, in my opinion, very good spots to let players recover. 64 removal is also based on 00:35:893 -
> 00:35:241 (73) - ^
> 01:32:197 - Same as above, same as Kantan.
00:39:371 (83) - Remove as well for similar reasons.
00:41:110 (83) - Move to 00:41:545 - .
00:46:545 (93,94) - Change to kat to make the big don easier to play?
00:50:675 (102) - Intentional inconsistency?
01:01:328 (124,125,126,127) - 01:03:284 (129,130,131,132) - 01:05:023 (134,135,136,137) - Stick to one rhythm please? In the next part, too.
01:17:197 (158,159) - Break before kiai : D removed the first one
01:22:414 (170) - Rhythm is hard to catch and doesn't make that much sense, it works 01:22:197 - here too (as kat) and flows more naturally.
01:23:284 (172,173) - Without more notes, the first one feels out of place and the 2nd note literally follows nothing (at least that's how I feel), so maybe try to move 01:23:936 (173) - to 01:23:719 - here.
01:24:588 (175) - Doesn't follow anything, would rather remove.
01:26:545 (179) - Move to 01:25:675 - and change 01:26:110 (178) - to don to stay consistent with beginning of kiai.
01:56:762 (251) - Inconsistent with previous version of this part intentional?
Okay sorry, I'm exhausted already and I actually need to prepare at least a little bit for upcoming exam. So just general things: Improve consistency in everything after this part, fix issues I mentioned already that repeat, don't make the Futsuu easier - spread is actually fine. Things that are similar in fixing between Kantan and Futsuu, can be applied in Futsuu (02:52:197 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - for example. ALSO UNSNAP)
[Muzukashii]
More to come.
00:31:328 - Again, could be used a little bit better for resting. Actually fine right now, what's very disturbing are 00:37:197 (108,109,110) - all of these triplets, which don't seem to fit into the song.
thank you very much both of you, especially Ntiger!
no reply means applied! ;v;