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[General]
First timing point should be 00:00:737 - and 3/4 and can also have a lower volume (50%)
03:44:736 - Add another timing point here to resnap first beat.
Other parts could have increased volume, tried in kiai and it sounded a little bit too quiet. 75-80% should be enough.
03:00:348 - This one should have same volume as intro and maybe the ones before this too.
Edit the .osu so SV is 1.4
[Kantan]
OD4, HP7 (long song).
00:03:913 (4,5,6) - 00:12:384 (14,15,16) - don't have consistent rhythm.
00:17:435 (21) - Unsnapped.
00:19:588 - Would rather have a don here instead of 00:23:501 (29) - to allow bigger breaks, the Kantan is very continuous atm.
00:27:414 (35) - Maybe move this to 00:26:545 - and change it to don to stay consistent with ^
00:32:197 (43) - 00:35:675 (47) - 00:39:154 (51) - 00:44:371 (57,58,59) - are all good notes to remove to have a few breaks in Kantan. The part is also calmer, so making a difference is always nice.
> 01:33:067 (126) - 01:36:545 (130) - 01:40:024 (135) - 01:45:241 (142,143,144) - ^
00:56:980 - Missing a don.
> 01:50:893 - 01:57:849 - ^
> 02:25:675 - ^ kat
01:01:980 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - Would change this whole thing to kk d dd k to reflect pitch better.
01:05:458 (86,87,88) - Consider dd k for this too, to make this friendlier for Kantan. 1/2 is rare!
01:17:414 (104) - Delete, break before kiai!
01:20:458 - Add a don, move 01:21:328 (109) - to 01:22:197 - and change to kat. If the previous version of this was applied, of course!
02:02:632 (164) - Similar to the other calmer part, but I would suggest moving this to 02:04:806 - here instead so it's a little bit more dense. Need to make a few differences to follow the song!
> 02:06:110 (168) - 02:13:067 (177) - ^ but since there's a note already, probably just delete this.
> 02:09:588 (173) - ^ (move)
02:20:893 (188) - Kat to stay consistent? Or make 02:21:762 (189) - kat for ~variation~
02:24:371 (193,194) - First kat, 2nd don. To stay consistent.
02:28:719 (198,199) - This is another good spot for break.
02:30:675 (201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209) - Same as before.
02:52:197 (231) - Unsnapped.
02:52:197 (231,232,233,234,235) - Would also change all of these to big kats cause more interesting.
03:00:324 (2) - Unsnapped too.
03:03:524 (5,6) - Inconsistent with intro.
03:19:084 - Final kiai, allows an extra don here. (Actually it's in the other kiai too C: )
03:26:040 - ^
03:33:866 - Nice spot for a don too
03:45:605 (60,61) - Because it was so intense until now: Players deserve a break. Generally adapt this to similar parts, maybe make it slightly more dense.
03:58:649 - From here: Make it less dense! (aka like other parts)
04:11:040 (1) - Could go 1/1 longer to the end of sound (04:19:953 - )
[Futsuu]
OD4.5, HP6
00:03:560 (4,5,6,7) - 00:12:031 (19,20,21,22) - Same as Kantan.
00:22:197 - Consider adding a don to make 3/2 less awkward to hit
00:31:762 (64,67) - Same as Kantan: Good spots to remove notes to make this part less dense. All of these are, in my opinion, very good spots to let players recover. 64 removal is also based on 00:35:893 -
> 00:35:241 (73) - ^
> 01:32:197 - Same as above, same as Kantan.
00:39:371 (83) - Remove as well for similar reasons.
00:41:110 (83) - Move to 00:41:545 - .
00:46:545 (93,94) - Change to kat to make the big don easier to play?
00:50:675 (102) - Intentional inconsistency?
01:01:328 (124,125,126,127) - 01:03:284 (129,130,131,132) - 01:05:023 (134,135,136,137) - Stick to one rhythm please? In the next part, too.
01:17:197 (158,159) - Break before kiai : D
01:22:414 (170) - Rhythm is hard to catch and doesn't make that much sense, it works 01:22:197 - here too (as kat) and flows more naturally.
01:23:284 (172,173) - Without more notes, the first one feels out of place and the 2nd note literally follows nothing (at least that's how I feel), so maybe try to move 01:23:936 (173) - to 01:23:719 - here.
01:24:588 (175) - Doesn't follow anything, would rather remove.
01:26:545 (179) - Move to 01:25:675 - and change 01:26:110 (178) - to don to stay consistent with beginning of kiai.
01:56:762 (251) - Inconsistent with previous version of this part intentional?
Okay sorry, I'm exhausted already and I actually need to prepare at least a little bit for upcoming exam. So just general things: Improve consistency in everything after this part, fix issues I mentioned already that repeat, don't make the Futsuu easier - spread is actually fine. Things that are similar in fixing between Kantan and Futsuu, can be applied in Futsuu (02:52:197 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - for example. ALSO UNSNAP)
[Muzukashii]
More to come.
00:31:328 - Again, could be used a little bit better for resting. Actually fine right now, what's very disturbing are 00:37:197 (108,109,110) - all of these triplets, which don't seem to fit into the song.