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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年12月31日 at 15:29:22

Artist: Suzuyu
Title: Euphorium
Source: White Eternity of AstralAir Finale -Shiroki Hoshi no Yume-
Tags: opening astral air no Shiroki Towa アストラエアの白き永遠 Finale -白き星の夢- short ver galgame Neoskylove toybot Kencho
BPM: 186
Filesize: 21172kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 122 notes)
  2. Extra (5.84 stars, 564 notes)
  3. Insane (4.51 stars, 448 notes)
  4. Kencho's Extra (5.25 stars, 496 notes)
  5. NeoSL's Hard (3.58 stars, 354 notes)
  6. Normal (2.17 stars, 218 notes)
  7. toybot's Insane (4.89 stars, 500 notes)


Download: Suzuyu - Euphorium
Download: Suzuyu - Euphorium (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy: 100%
Normal: 100%
NeoSL's Hard: made by Neoskylove
Insane: 100%
toybot's Insane: made by toybot
Kencho's Extra: made by Kencho
Extra: 100%
Source name reference (?): http://puu.sh/sSjPr/aa581ed08e.jpg
Part of skin comes from Shinkuu, Nymph, LKs and Kencho. Thank you!
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12-30
Fixed more mods
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12-28
Fixed a few more mods
Thanks to all!
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12-25
Merry Christmas! Fixed a few mods
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12-23
Completed all my diffs
Kencho added a diff
Ready to be modded
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12-20
Start making Easy diff
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12-17
Add Normal diff
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12-13
Neoskylove added a diff
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12-11
toybot added a diff
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12-10
Fixed Lan wings's mod
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12-3
Insane complete
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12-2
大佬们帮忙看看我这个Insane难度spread行不行啊
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11-29
音效下完了,我自己都觉得,不好听,还有那坨垃圾钢琴,要是能找麻花下就好了,他对下音效可在行了
结果之前还把视频比例弄错了,重搞了一遍,不过应该也没人看
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11-28
基本决定了要哪套音效,果然还是只能用原来那套了。是不是编曲是同一个人啊
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11-27
怎么办已经不想再下音效了,干脆还是用本篇OP里用的那套吧
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11-26
最近真是越来越不想做低难度,要不是因为是F社的曲子估计根本就不做了
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11-25
从原视频上扒了mp3,视频直接剪了一下然后压缩成854x480,没转码,预览了一下效果不错,然后放到osu里又变成那种AV质量,看来720p迫在眉睫
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[General]
hitnormal差评 毫无打击感 音效看来下的十分划水
两个难度之间差距的确有点大Insane难度需要加强
白色跟BG的衣服跟头发等颜色都差不多有些地方会比较难分辨(你没给我video 不知道开着video会是什么情况)
Source我记得可以直接用日语的啊? 为什么不直接用アストラエアの白き永遠 Finale -白き星の夢-

[Extra]
00:01:731 (4) - 类似这种不来个A7的音效么
00:15:440 (2,3) - 改成两个slider感觉会更好00:18:505 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这里
00:26:892 (1,2) - 这里的中间的停顿可能会容易误读成这样00:25:602 (1,2) -
00:43:827 (2,1) - 1 2 试试这两节奏? 个人推荐后者减速slider
00:45:118 - 我很在意中间这个节奏
00:45:763 - 00:46:408 - 00:48:505 - 00:48:989 - 00:49:473 - 类似这几段我听到了很爽的连打;w;
01:17:215 (1) - 音量不够大 50还行 但是除了这个之外其他都没音效听着太坑爹了
01:43:827 (5,6,7) - 歪了
01:45:440 (2,3) - 十分怪异 不打算改slider?
02:03:021 (9,10,11,12) - 改成两slider感觉会更好
02:03:827 (3) - 这一段类似上面的感觉 前面连打其实已经够了 不打算来点短slider jump么?

[Insane]
00:01:731 (4) - 同Extra(凑字数)
01:17:215 (2) - 同Extra(凑字数)
01:33:182 (7) - https://puu.sh/sDWeG/546605aede.png 这样的节奏好多了



麻麻我码不下去惹
posted
Placeholder mod

[Insane]
00:13:263 (4) - looks wrong rhythm?
00:34:634 (1) - music is still quiet, but SV became too fast.
00:42:053 - add a beat
00:44:311 (1) - delete NC
00:49:795 (5,1) - avild stack since you avoded stacking 1/4 rhythm like 00:53:666 (5,1) - 00:54:956 (6,7,1) -
01:10:763 (12) - NC?
01:16:892 (1,2) - 1/1 01:17:215 (2,3,4) - 3/2 looks difficult rhythm pattern to read.

[EX]
00:06:892 (3) - how about change into stream?
00:11:085 (7,1) - stack
01:25:924 (4,4) - looks bad overlap, could you avoid it?

I'll make GD asap
posted

Lan wings wrote:

[General]
hitnormal差评 毫无打击感 音效看来下的十分划水
两个难度之间差距的确有点大Insane难度需要加强
白色跟BG的衣服跟头发等颜色都差不多有些地方会比较难分辨(你没给我video 不知道开着video会是什么情况)
Source我记得可以直接用日语的啊? 为什么不直接用アストラエアの白き永遠 Finale -白き星の夢-
这个irc基本和你说过了就不讲了。source我觉得就英文吧,等source unicode出来再考虑

[Extra]
00:01:731 (4) - 类似这种不来个A7的音效么 哥啊你还是打死我吧
00:15:440 (2,3) - 改成两个slider感觉会更好00:18:505 (1,2,3,4) - 类似这里 还是你比较鬼畜
00:26:892 (1,2) - 这里的中间的停顿可能会容易误读成这样00:25:602 (1,2) - 加大了间距,我还能怎样我也很绝望呀.jpg
00:43:827 (2,1) - 1 2 试试这两节奏? 个人推荐后者减速slider ok
00:45:118 - 我很在意中间这个节奏 这里还有下一个都是我认为可以略过的节奏,这样给玩家一个渐进的密集
00:45:763 - 00:46:408 - 00:48:505 - 00:48:989 - 00:49:473 - 类似这几段我听到了很爽的连打;w;
01:17:215 (1) - 音量不够大 50还行 但是除了这个之外其他都没音效听着太坑爹了 我怎么感觉这个音量够了,是不是我这个小音箱低音酷炫
01:43:827 (5,6,7) - 歪了 我觉得歪着好看嘛……
01:45:440 (2,3) - 十分怪异 不打算改slider? 有道理,但我还没想好怎么改,暂时放着
02:03:021 (9,10,11,12) - 改成两slider感觉会更好 我觉得现在更舒服,后面同
02:03:827 (3) - 这一段类似上面的感觉 前面连打其实已经够了 不打算来点短slider jump么?

[Insane]
00:01:731 (4) - 同Extra(凑字数)
01:17:215 (2) - 同Extra(凑字数)
01:33:182 (7) - https://puu.sh/sDWeG/546605aede.png 这样的节奏好多了 怪怪的,干脆直接改成1/2滑条

麻麻我码不下去惹

Neoskylove wrote:

Placeholder mod

[Insane]
00:13:263 (4) - looks wrong rhythm? I try to use a different pattern comparing with EX. I follow hithat-snare here instead of snare-tom in EX
00:34:634 (1) - music is still quiet, but SV became too fast. imo the introduction of drums is a good reason to accelerate
00:42:053 - add a beat should be fine now
00:44:311 (1) - delete NC don't think so..
00:49:795 (5,1) - avild stack since you avoded stacking 1/4 rhythm like 00:53:666 (5,1) - 00:54:956 (6,7,1) - ok fixed
01:10:763 (12) - NC? don't think so
01:16:892 (1,2) - 1/1 01:17:215 (2,3,4) - 3/2 looks difficult rhythm pattern to read. added NC on 2. its readable because 3/2 does not stack

[EX]
00:06:892 (3) - how about change into stream? I don't use soft hit whistle so following the "lower part" piano here is kind of strange. In addition I prefer to just follow drum here.
00:11:085 (7,1) - stack That was done deliberately. I use default stack leniency so 1/1 will have an auto stack. This breaks patterns like streams.
01:25:924 (4,4) - looks bad overlap, could you avoid it? fixed

I'll make GD asap

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

既然是问spread,那我就摸一下spread吧

[Insane]
00:01:086 (1,2) - 00:03:666 (1,2) - 注意到extra开始已经用跳了,insane再只用1/1滑条带过去就不太合适了。用1/2滑条之类的会比较好 我还是觉得现在比较好

什么,Hard这不是还没做完嘛...不过可能insane的 - 01:38:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这些长串还是稍微简化一下好,不然hard不太好做
(好像又没问题,hard可以用3个1/4折返,normal用一个3/4折返)这个我试过了,没问题,比kiai大多数地方都简单。现在的人动不动手速250,这个根本没问题

以上是鸡蛋里挑骨头的结果,整体来说这I到ex的spread当然没问题
thank you!非常感谢!
posted
as request

既然是问spread,那我就摸一下spread吧

[Insane]
00:01:086 (1,2) - 00:03:666 (1,2) - 注意到extra开始已经用跳了,insane再只用1/1滑条带过去就不太合适了。用1/2滑条之类的会比较好

什么,Hard这不是还没做完嘛...不过可能insane的 - 01:38:102 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这些长串还是稍微简化一下好,不然hard不太好做
(好像又没问题,hard可以用3个1/4折返,normal用一个3/4折返)

以上是鸡蛋里挑骨头的结果,整体来说这I到ex的spread当然没问题
posted
osu file format v14

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Title:Euphorium
TitleUnicode:ユーフォリアム
Artist:Suzuyu
ArtistUnicode:鈴湯
Creator:Flower
Version:NeoSL's Hard
Source:AstralAir no Shiroki Towa Finale -Shiroki Hoshi no Yume-
Tags:opening astral air アストラエアの白き永遠 Finale -白き星の夢- short ver galgame
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posted
[Kencho]
02:00:763 (7) - change clap sampleset to normal
[Hard]
01:23:989 (2) - remove sliderwhistle
00:53:668 (3) - unsnapped?
[Insane]
01:06:569 (1,2) - change the position to NC

nazi here
posted

sammy711 wrote:

[Kencho]
02:00:763 (7) - change clap sampleset to normal 都没用到normal,保持一致不改
[Insane]
01:06:569 (1,2) - change the position to NC fixed

nazi here
ty~
posted
[General]
  1. 音量太小.高难度因为是赛爆还好,低难度本来就undermap,然后很多你没放东西的地方比音效还要响,打起来就很蛋疼.低难度建议调大音量并且确保大部分滑条头和note都加了音效 我发现刚才我摸图的时候音量调得不对,这条可能说的不对就不管了


[Easy]
  1. 为什么都黏在一起啊感觉好难看,建议用1.2ds(或者改sv)re一遍.
  2. 00:04:956 (3) - 加次折返
  3. 01:08:182 - 01:09:150 - 这里如果是个滑条效果会更好,比较简单的改法是01:06:247 (1) - 加一次折返,这样尾巴在01:07:537 - ,然后01:08:182 - 开始用3拍滑条就好了
  4. 01:12:053 (2) - 加次折返
  5. 01:26:247 (1) - 这个滑条结束在01:27:053 - 会比较好
  6. 嘛个人不太喜欢这么空的easy,节奏比较像是老图那种.不过这个就不说了……


[Normal]
  1. 00:07:053 - 00:08:021 - 这俩地方鼓点,钢琴塞得比较满我觉得你跟鼓点找节奏会比较好.00:06:892 - 和00:08:182 - 都不用跟
  2. 00:16:569 (1,2,3) - 这里相反,鼓点是满的,跟着乐器找节奏会比较好.不过这里keep也行,毕竟无脑1/1很好打
  3. 00:41:085 (3,4,5) - 把人声开头放在clickable并且把人声声音用滑条盖着会比较好,推荐的节奏:http://b1.loli.io/images/lLng.jpg
  4. 00:44:150 - 这里可以加个note
  5. 00:53:989 (3,4) - 现在很不推荐低难度里使用多次折返.用两组1/1滑条+note带过去就可
    02:03:666 (1,2) -
  6. 00:55:924 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这堆1/2看看能不能简化一下
  7. 01:04:150 (3) - 删
  8. 01:10:118 (3,4) - 换成一个1/1折返滑条会比较表现人声
  9. 01:32:537 - 这里鼓点人声都有,感觉比你前面很多放了note的地方还要重要啊,最好跟一下
  10. 01:32:698 (3) - 这后面空过去的?你前面类似的地方好像不是这么处理的
  11. 01:36:569 (1) - 换成一个1/1滑条吧,感觉后面空1.5拍这种不太舒服,而且白线有很清楚的人声
  12. 01:44:311 - 这里clickable?
  13. 01:54:634 (1,2,3) - 鼓和旋律都没跟全啊……感觉不舒服


[Hard]
  1. you jump at 00:07:215 (3,1) - but use normal ds at 00:08:827 (1) - and 00:09:956 (1) - , make them consistent
  2. 00:21:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can use lower sv here. 00:23:344 (4,5) - bad overlap
  3. 00:31:247 (4) - add reverse to follow vocal "ku"
  4. 02:03:666 - I know you followed the piano but this sound is really loud


就到这儿吧,高难度估计问题不大,而且肯定摸的人多

GL~
posted

Pata-Mon wrote:

[General]
  1. 音量太小.高难度因为是赛爆还好,低难度本来就undermap,然后很多你没放东西的地方比音效还要响,打起来就很蛋疼.低难度建议调大音量并且确保大部分滑条头和note都加了音效 我发现刚才我摸图的时候音量调得不对,这条可能说的不对就不管了


[Easy]
  1. 为什么都黏在一起啊感觉好难看,建议用1.2ds(或者改sv)re一遍. 按照我依稀的记忆,在我还是萌新的时候,粘在一起的比分开的好打很多,因为分开的可能不小心就够不到或者够过了,尤其是没关精准
  2. 00:04:956 (3) - 加次折返 感觉没必要,而且这样的话就又要remap了
  3. 01:08:182 - 01:09:150 - 这里如果是个滑条效果会更好,比较简单的改法是01:06:247 (1) - 加一次折返,这样尾巴在01:07:537 - ,然后01:08:182 - 开始用3拍滑条就好了 然而这里我跟的是歌词,点点点
  4. 01:12:053 (2) - 加次折返 感觉没必要,折返尾什么都没盖到
  5. 01:26:247 (1) - 这个滑条结束在01:27:053 - 会比较好
  6. 嘛个人不太喜欢这么空的easy,节奏比较像是老图那种.不过这个就不说了……


[Normal]
  1. 00:07:053 - 00:08:021 - 这俩地方鼓点,钢琴塞得比较满我觉得你跟鼓点找节奏会比较好.00:06:892 - 和00:08:182 - 都不用跟 有一定道理,我做了点自作主张的改变
  2. 00:16:569 (1,2,3) - 这里相反,鼓点是满的,跟着乐器找节奏会比较好.不过这里keep也行,毕竟无脑1/1很好打
  3. 00:41:085 (3,4,5) - 把人声开头放在clickable并且把人声声音用滑条盖着会比较好,推荐的节奏:http://b1.loli.io/images/lLng.jpg 你这什么奇怪的站国内都用不了……改了
  4. 00:44:150 - 这里可以加个note 休息一下呗
  5. 00:53:989 (3,4) - 现在很不推荐低难度里使用多次折返.用两组1/1滑条+note带过去就可 保留意见,因为千本樱的normal的滑条实在让我印象深刻。等bn来看意见
    02:03:666 (1,2) -
  6. 00:55:924 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这堆1/2看看能不能简化一下 ok,下面相关1/2也基本优化了下
  7. 01:04:150 (3) - 删
  8. 01:10:118 (3,4) - 换成一个1/1折返滑条会比较表现人声 我感觉这里跟鼓比较好
  9. 01:32:537 - 这里鼓点人声都有,感觉比你前面很多放了note的地方还要重要啊,最好跟一下
  10. 01:32:698 (3) - 这后面空过去的?你前面类似的地方好像不是这么处理的 前面没有类似的地方啊,这里是个连打,低难度自然用滑条滚过去咯
  11. 01:36:569 (1) - 换成一个1/1滑条吧,感觉后面空1.5拍这种不太舒服,而且白线有很清楚的人声
  12. 01:44:311 - 这里clickable? 听你的
  13. 01:54:634 (1,2,3) - 鼓和旋律都没跟全啊……感觉不舒服 感觉现在这样就好




就到这儿吧,高难度估计问题不大,而且肯定摸的人多

GL~
thank you~
posted

General

  1. tag加上Kencho

Extra


  • 不考虑文艺一点的diff名吗?
  1. 00:01:086到00:06:247可以搞音量渐强
  2. 00:16:408 (1) - finish去掉吧
  3. 00:16:569 (2) - 拉对称一些
  4. 00:18:182 (1,2,1) - flow太直,可以把00:18:505 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j一下来摆
  5. 00:42:698 (2) - 稍稍下移一点会更顺手
  6. 01:03:021 (1,2) - 包好
  7. 01:31:408 (9) - 加个finish强调一下
  8. 01:33:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 标准样式pp跳(滑稽.jpg
  9. 01:49:795 (3,4) - 包好
  10. 01:50:602 (7) - 这里没鼓点,要不6,7改成滑条,要不7离6近点
  11. 02:06:166 (1) - finish去掉吧

Kencho's Extra


  • 玛雅真整齐,这种图摸不出什么呀
  1. 00:15:763 (4) - 改成单点好些,滑条尾没音,也更好打
  2. 01:35:440 (2,7) - 移下去些
  3. 01:53:344 (1,2,3,4) - 音乐较高,可以拉开一点做个旋转的flow,现在太收紧了

toybot's Insane


  • Really nice!nothing to mod :)

Insane


  • 好Insane(点头
  1. 00:14:473 (4,5) - 包好(强迫症伤不起
  2. 00:22:053 (2) - 拉平点好看
  3. 01:20:118 (3,4) - 建议把3拉长到3/4,然后4移到1:20:440 - 压vocal
  4. 01:26:569 (3,7,8) - 音效3,7clap,8finish比较好
  5. 01:37:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 4.5星放这么长连打是不是不太好?
  6. 1:38:666 - 到1:39:150 - 下1/2吧
  7. 01:42:698 (3) - 有点丑,再拉下?
  8. 01:52:860 (5) - 叠在01:53:344 (1) - 头上怎么样?
  9. 02:04:473 (5,6,7) - 往右一点好看

NeoSL's Hard

  1. 00:53:668 (3) - object isn't snapped
  2. 01:20:440 (3) - a clap is missing

就这么多
古德拉克~
以前,当我还没当麻婆的时候,玩到了一张calamity fortune,当场就觉得wocao,一个lunatic一个ex都好好玩,做这张图的人好厉害(那时还不知道Lunatic是gd
一看mapper:Flower,名字也好听,然后就开始崇拜,点了add friend,玩了ta其它的图,这也是我开始作图的部分原因
直到最近,随便翻了翻friendlist,突然发现变mu了,顿时相当开心
所以在这里,我要大声喊一句:
Flower我偶像!!!
完毕.
posted
天呐
认真要摸?直接飞吧
posted
hi, m4m
just few suggestions because it's already 2good4me

general
  1. don't forget to add kencho in tags


insane
  1. 00:14:795 (5) - clap on its tail and its head is needed imo
  2. 00:15:602 (2) - same as above ^
  3. 00:22:053 (2,3) - what about decreasing a bit the spacing ? it seems too rough for a calm part
  4. 01:07:215 (2,3) - spacing seems a bit off, try to have nearly same spacing as 01:06:892 (1,2) -, it'll be surely more readable imo
  5. 01:17:215 (1) - clap doesn't really fit at all, it's far too much heavy D:
  6. 01:53:666 (2,3) - they're too close imo, a bigger spacing would be better imo


kencho
  1. 00:15:763 (4) - it feels a bit out of place imo, cause there is no sound at 00:15:844 (4) -
  2. 01:03:989 (4,2,3,4) - what about avoiding this overlap ? it doesn't look good as much
  3. 01:40:279 (7,1) - I think they should not be as spaced as that, cause there is no really sound to have such a huge spacing imo
  4. really cool


normal
  1. 00:16:085 (2,3) - mmh what about replacing those by a 1/1 slider ? cause here the song kinda increase gradually and I think the shape of the slider would emphasize that better (hope you understand)
  2. 01:23:182 (3) - same as above ^
  3. 01:30:118 - I think it's better to make this clickable
  4. 02:03:666 (1,2) - I think it's better to skip these whistle sound cause you didn't map them at 02:02:376 (1,2) -


easy
  1. fine

[]
that's all for me, good luck!
posted
@pata-mon 00:31:247 (4) - add reverse to follow vocal "ku" :arrow: looks Not good for me, I think/.
osu file format v14

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239,276,92215,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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posted

LunaSaika wrote:

General

  1. tag加上Kencho

Extra


  • 不考虑文艺一点的diff名吗?
  1. 00:01:086到00:06:247可以搞音量渐强 感觉没必要
  2. 00:16:408 (1) - finish去掉吧 这里有个crash,不应去掉
  3. 00:16:569 (2) - 拉对称一些 改了
  4. 00:18:182 (1,2,1) - flow太直,可以把00:18:505 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+j一下来摆 我觉得新combo=无视flow,这里如果ctrl j的话下一个combo的1的低音就没有感觉了
  5. 00:42:698 (2) - 稍稍下移一点会更顺手 具体移到多少?没有什么概念,觉得还是现在比较好
  6. 01:03:021 (1,2) - 包好 尽量修复了
  7. 01:31:408 (9) - 加个finish强调一下 不好
  8. 01:33:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 标准样式pp跳(滑稽.jpg
  9. 01:49:795 (3,4) - 包好
  10. 01:50:602 (7) - 这里没鼓点,要不6,7改成滑条,要不7离6近点 仔细听的话还是有的
  11. 02:06:166 (1) - finish去掉吧 不好

Kencho's Extra


  • 玛雅真整齐,这种图摸不出什么呀
  1. 00:15:763 (4) - 改成单点好些,滑条尾没音,也更好打 好的
  2. 01:35:440 (2,7) - 移下去些 之前就注意到这里,是为了对称,所以不应变动
  3. 01:53:344 (1,2,3,4) - 音乐较高,可以拉开一点做个旋转的flow,现在太收紧了 这样目视更整齐

toybot's Insane


  • Really nice!nothing to mod :)

Insane


  • 好Insane(点头
  1. 00:14:473 (4,5) - 包好(强迫症伤不起 这里不是包的
  2. 00:22:053 (2) - 拉平点好看 objection!
  3. 01:20:118 (3,4) - 建议把3拉长到3/4,然后4移到1:20:440 - 压vocal 这里前几个摸也说过了,不过我坚持这里跟鼓
  4. 01:26:569 (3,7,8) - 音效3,7clap,8finish比较好 原曲如此
  5. 01:37:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 4.5星放这么长连打是不是不太好? 虽然我觉得没必要,不过改掉了
  6. 1:38:666 - 到1:39:150 - 下1/2吧
  7. 01:42:698 (3) - 有点丑,再拉下? 个人觉得没问题
  8. 01:52:860 (5) - 叠在01:53:344 (1) - 头上怎么样? 是这样的,好
  9. 02:04:473 (5,6,7) - 往右一点好看 ok

就这么多
古德拉克~

Irohas wrote:

hi, m4m
just few suggestions because it's already 2good4me

general
  1. don't forget to add kencho in tags


insane
  1. 00:14:795 (5) - clap on its tail and its head is needed imo considered about this b4, not to fit to music imo. same to below
  2. 00:15:602 (2) - same as above ^
  3. 00:22:053 (2,3) - what about decreasing a bit the spacing ? it seems too rough for a calm part moved close a little
  4. 01:07:215 (2,3) - spacing seems a bit off, try to have nearly same spacing as 01:06:892 (1,2) -, it'll be surely more readable imo objection, it's a notice to the next jump
  5. 01:17:215 (1) - clap doesn't really fit at all, it's far too much heavy D: one other guy said this is too dim and i'm confused now D:
  6. 01:53:666 (2,3) - they're too close imo, a bigger spacing would be better imo this traditional pattern is readable and enjoyable imo. this can be seen in a lot of best maps


kencho
  1. 00:15:763 (4) - it feels a bit out of place imo, cause there is no sound at 00:15:844 (4) - ok
  2. 01:03:989 (4,2,3,4) - what about avoiding this overlap ? it doesn't look good as much fixed
  3. 01:40:279 (7,1) - I think they should not be as spaced as that, cause there is no really sound to have such a huge spacing imo will ask the mapper
  4. really cool


normal
  1. 00:16:085 (2,3) - mmh what about replacing those by a 1/1 slider ? cause here the song kinda increase gradually and I think the shape of the slider would emphasize that better (hope you understand) not really getting that, but should be better now
  2. 01:23:182 (3) - same as above ^ not the same situation imo
  3. 01:30:118 - I think it's better to make this clickable as a end of a word in vocal i think end of slider works better
  4. 02:03:666 (1,2) - I think it's better to skip these whistle sound cause you didn't map them at 02:02:376 (1,2) - should be fine imo


easy
  1. fine

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that's all for me, good luck!


Thank you!
posted


General

  1. source不用假名吗?把罗马拼音搞到tag里。好像现在更流行这么做。

Insane

  1. 00:21:892 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 现在节奏的2,3两根滑条中间,打起来感觉明显漏了什么东西,有点奇怪。我推了重新摆了个节奏,试试这个?
  2. 00:46:247 (1,2) - 可以稍微拉远,让视觉上的间距前后统一些。
  3. 02:03:666 (1,2) - 建议合并成一个单独的折返。作为LI难度的图感觉这样的折返+圈偏难了。

Kencho's Extra

  1. 00:43:344 (5) - 00:58:827 (5) - 像这类型的梗用的挺多的。不妨把这两个ctrl+g?这样给读图的冲击大一点,比较好玩。(可能会略微违背你一条蓝线一个方向的套路)
  2. 02:02:860 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉这一串跳别全都加whistle,听起来巨响无比。我个人建议银色的combo给578上whistle,黄色的给3567或者467上whistle感觉比较好。
  3. 01:33:021 (3,4) - (针对强迫症)我拉长了3检查了下,发现现在的34根本就不是直的嘛= =

Extra

  1. 01:28:827 (8) - 把这个圈改成减速的3/4滑条你觉得怎么样?滑条头就在现在位置不动那种。
  2. 01:31:731 (1) - 掰弯怎么样?开口向下的。
  3. 01:45:602 (3) - 可以试试向右把3拉远,大约到1.8*-2.0*这样。打起来爽。
  4. 01:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 看起来挺像雨伞的。试试把白色234向上修修,把勾向左调到最后一个跟前面的滑条尾半叠起来这样,搞得更像雨伞?(如果不是雨伞的话,感觉这个勾不太中看)

toybot's Insane

  1. 00:05:602 (1,2) - i personally feel these two circles are not needed. Since they don't follow anything but just enlarge the density, which causes weird feeling to me.

ENH让我懒掉吧,祝好运。
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Adol Christin wrote:



toybot's Insane

  1. 00:05:602 (1,2) - i personally feel these two circles are not needed. Since they don't follow anything but just enlarge the density, which causes weird feeling to me. // they follow the piano in the background, its faint but it's there

ENH让我懒掉吧,祝好运。
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Irohas wrote:

kencho
  1. 01:40:279 (7,1) - I think they should not be as spaced as that, cause there is no really sound to have such a huge spacing imo I think 01:40:118 (6) - stay strong because of vocals, but anyway 3.0x spacing maybe too huge, so I decrease to 2.86x.
  2. really cool

Adol Christin wrote:

Kencho's Extra

  1. 00:43:344 (5) - 00:58:827 (5) - 像这类型的梗用的挺多的。不妨把这两个ctrl+g?这样给读图的冲击大一点,比较好玩。(可能会略微违背你一条蓝线一个方向的套路)不太好
  2. 02:02:860 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉这一串跳别全都加whistle,听起来巨响无比。我个人建议银色的combo给578上whistle,黄色的给3567或者467上whistle感觉比较好。沒有全加whistle啊,24白線我加的clap
  3. 01:33:021 (3,4) - (针对强迫症)我拉长了3检查了下,发现现在的34根本就不是直的嘛= = 牛逼,我也沒發現,fixed
Thanks for mod
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172,160,118827,2,0,L|140:183,3,40,8|0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,121,119150,6,0,L|275:160,3,40,2|0|0|0,3:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,40,119473,2,0,L|186:79,3,40,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,160,119795,5,2,3:2:0:0:
285,17,119956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,187,120118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,121,120279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,147,120440,1,2,3:2:0:0:
337,291,120602,1,0,3:0:0:0:
369,83,120763,2,0,P|397:55|435:44,1,80,8|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,223,121085,6,0,P|216:212|188:185,1,80,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,17,121408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,187,121569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
353,187,121650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,187,121731,2,0,L|359:266,1,80,2|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,103,122053,2,0,L|255:222,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,225,122376,6,0,L|135:231,1,80,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,267,122698,1,8,0:0:0:0:
245,103,122860,1,2,3:2:0:0:
245,103,122940,1,8,3:2:0:0:
245,103,123021,1,2,3:2:0:0:
234,326,123182,1,2,3:2:0:0:
353,187,123344,1,8,3:2:0:0:
134,231,123505,1,2,3:2:0:0:
342,359,123666,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123827,1,2,3:2:0:0:
234,326,123989,1,8,3:2:0:0:
352,95,124150,1,2,3:2:0:0:
121,213,124311,1,2,3:2:0:0:
377,253,124473,1,2,3:2:0:0:
194,70,124634,1,8,3:2:0:0:
234,326,124795,1,2,3:2:0:0:
352,95,124956,6,0,P|355:55|339:19,1,80,6|0,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,253,125440,1,6,3:2:0:0:
377,253,125521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
377,253,125602,2,0,P|392:216|389:177,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
342,359,126085,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126166,12,4,132698,3:0:0:0:

@Flower 另外幫你弄了個高清BG,改成了16:9,用waifu2x放大的,可以更新一下

http://puu.sh/t4qiY/cde0d5557b.jpg
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General

  1. source不用假名吗?把罗马拼音搞到tag里。好像现在更流行这么做。 仍然等bn来决定。我认为英文的没有问题

Insane

  1. 00:21:892 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 现在节奏的2,3两根滑条中间,打起来感觉明显漏了什么东西,有点奇怪。我推了重新摆了个节奏,试试这个? 我认为这样就是有感觉
  2. 00:46:247 (1,2) - 可以稍微拉远,让视觉上的间距前后统一些。 nice catch
  3. 02:03:666 (1,2) - 建议合并成一个单独的折返。作为LI难度的图感觉这样的折返+圈偏难了。反对,因为合并的话必然会导致玩家第一次玩的时候极易漏掉1~2combo,这样和原本的目的背道而驰

Extra

  1. 01:28:827 (8) - 把这个圈改成减速的3/4滑条你觉得怎么样?滑条头就在现在位置不动那种。反对,这样太短了,反而打起来不舒服
  2. 01:31:731 (1) - 掰弯怎么样?开口向下的。我觉得风格不太搭,还是算了
  3. 01:45:602 (3) - 可以试试向右把3拉远,大约到1.8*-2.0*这样。打起来爽。 我想试验一下这样的效果,因为最近摆sv的insane以上越来越少了
  4. 01:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 看起来挺像雨伞的。试试把白色234向上修修,把勾向左调到最后一个跟前面的滑条尾半叠起来这样,搞得更像雨伞?(如果不是雨伞的话,感觉这个勾不太中看)觉得没有现在好看

ENH让我懒掉吧,祝好运。


谢谢mod!
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咕 4 咕

General
  1. soft-hitclap-bak.wav是啥
  2. soft-hitfinish10 soft-hitfinish3 soft-hitwhistle10 delay了不少,稍微cut下


Extra
  1. 请你在开头这段加一些whistle什么的,而且唯独00:02:376 - 这里没有key音
  2. 00:14:473 (1,2,3,4) - 这里感觉并没有很好地体现音乐,00:14:795 (3,4,1) - 这里应该是大跳,00:14:634 (2) - 这个note非常次要甚至可以delete,强行双三角并不妥当
  3. 00:18:182 (1,2,1) - 这个应该是很别手的,不过改起来似乎很麻烦
  4. 00:21:731 - 这个note很多余,转盘完全可以延长到这里
  5. 01:16:892 (1,1,2,3) - 像是为了坑人而坑人,没什么玩梗的必要,01:16:892 (1,1) - 这两个分开比较好
  6. 01:23:505 (1,1) - 前面还是1/1,后面就突然大间距1/4,很突兀
  7. 01:31:247 (8) - 这note好像也没什么意义
  8. 熟悉的折返pp跳


Kencho's Extra
  1. 00:15:763 (4) - 可以nc下
  2. 01:10:763 (1) - finish la
  3. 最后应该连打塞爆


Insane
  1. 00:01:086 - 红绿线音量要统一
  2. 00:02:376 (2) - ctrlg有对称的感觉
  3. 01:16:892 (1,1,2,3) - 同extra
  4. 01:45:118 (3,4) - 跟01:39:956 (4,1) - 一样错开一点?


Normal
  1. 02:03:666 (1,2) - 挺危险的 唔


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