oui!
first, the mod below are just suggestion, some wording are to emphasize whether the suggestion is highly recommended, so i apologize if its somehow harsh, but again you can give me some reasonable reply to keep them
1/2/3/4
[General]
you can render the .png background to .jpg to reduce the filesize
where's the hitsound? you should hitsound the map
[Easy]
00:22:540 (22540|2) - stop at 00:23:185 -
00:23:347 (23347|0) - 00:23:830 (23830|2) - change to note, they would layer the drum, then
00:23:669 - & 00:23:992 - add note here
00:27:056 (27056|2) - move to 2, to make similar anchor like 00:25:766 (25766|2,26089|2) -
00:38:508 (38508|2) - change to note, to make it more easier to play
00:43:642 (43642|3) - resnap to 00:43:669 -, don't forget to check some unsnape in the other diff
00:57:056 (57056|1) - remove, some sudden double there
00:57:379 (57379|2,57701|1,57863|0) - move to 234, then 00:58:185 (58185|1,58347|2,58508|3,58669|0) - ctrl + H this, better PR
[Normal]
00:01:895 (1895|2,2701|0,3508|0,4476|2,5282|2) - i don't see why you use double here, the single note is enough o3o
00:05:605 (5605|3,5685|2,5766|0,5847|1,5927|3,6008|2,6089|0,6169|1,6250|3,6330|2) - 00:13:589 (13589|1) - 1/4 are way too 'Hard' than what i usually see in normal, its too Hard for Normal
00:22:540 (22540|3,22621|2,22701|1,22782|0,22863|1,22943|2,23024|3) - wao stair
00:13:589 (13589|1) - same ^ , i suggest to keep use 1/2 LN or other easier pattern
00:14:153 (14153|1) - 00:16:734 (16734|3) - 00:19:314 (19314|2) - 00:20:605 (20605|2) - 00:21:895 (21895|2) - add
00:20:282 (20282|0) - 00:21:572 (21572|3) - remove
the double doesn't layer any stronger sound, while some single note could have some more
00:24:153 (24153|0,24476|3) - ctrl + H, follow the raise-up pitch, left to right
00:28:024 (28024|1) - might too early for triple and LN here, remove
00:43:642 (43642|3,43642|0) - unsnap, resnap to 00:43:669 -
00:46:572 (46572|0,46841|1,47083|1,47298|3,47486|1,47486|0) - resnap to 1/12 00:46:626 - 00:46:841 - 00:47:083 - 00:47:298 - 00:47:513 - , use 1/12
00:48:347 (48347|3) - try this :
https://puu.sh/ukd0P/a3c960a1b3.png00:56:089 (56089|3) - move to 00:55:927 -
00:59:637 (59637|0) - 01:10:927 (70927|0) - remove , better not to use double between these 1/4
01:11:895 (71895|3) - move to 1, then 01:12:056 - add at 4
01:18:669 (78669|3) - nerf this and use simpler pattern, or try this :
https://puu.sh/ukdaS/c0e5ed96b9.png this should be easier to play
[Hard]
00:05:712 (5712|0,5820|2,5873|3) - remove , then add at 00:05:766 - & 00:05:847 - , i think its too early to map the fast piano in HD
00:23:266 (23266|0) - remove, it has no sound
00:32:379 - add, missed the kick sound
00:43:642 (43642|0,43642|3,43642|2) - resnap like normal & easy do
00:43:830 (43830|2,43830|0) - remove, the sound is too faint for double
00:46:572 (46572|1,46814|2,47083|1,47325|1,47486|2) - resnap to 1/12 00:46:626 - 00:46:841 - 00:47:083 - 00:47:298 - 00:47:513 - , use 1/12
00:58:750 (58750|2,58911|0,59072|2,59234|0) - remove, there's no sound, what are you mapping here?
00:58:992 (58992|1) - add 1 more note to emphasize the downbeat
01:08:105 (68105|2) - remove
01:08:911 (68911|2,69072|0) - remove
01:08:992 (68992|1) - add 1 more note
01:14:556 (74556|0,74556|1) - remove
nice HD diff, a little more clean up and it would be more better
[Maximum]
00:43:642 (43642|1,43642|3,43642|0) - resnap to 00:43:669 -
00:46:572 (46572|3,46841|3,47083|3,47298|3,47701|3) - resnap to 1/12 00:46:626 - 00:46:841 - 00:47:083 - 00:47:298 - 00:47:513 - , use 1/12
oh actually, this diff has quiet... uhhhhhhhhhhhh overnote everywhere
you don't map every beat with 3 & 4 notes stimultanously, every sound has its limit to map.
i highly suggest to take a look at other tv size ranked maps, they are seldomly uses triplets in every part, you did a great job mapping HD btw
sorry i'll skip this diff
btw, hope it helps, don't forget your M4M, good luck! nice set