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S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This [OsuMania]

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njoy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on keskiviikko 12. huhtikuuta 2017 at 17.10.07

Artist: S3RL feat. Tamika
Title: Nightcore This
Tags: techno electronic dance [shana lesus] ley-line aiku
BPM: 160
Filesize: 5867kb
Play Time: 03:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced - 4Key (2,67 stars, 1483 notes)
  2. aiku's Extra - 4Key (3,93 stars, 2142 notes)
  3. Another - 4Key (3,71 stars, 2238 notes)
  4. Beginner - 4Key (1,45 stars, 648 notes)
  5. Hyper - 4Key (3,29 stars, 1870 notes)
  6. Intermediate - 4Key (2,11 stars, 1029 notes)
  7. Shana's Hardcore - 4Key (4,29 stars, 2332 notes)
Download: S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm going for something you can just rave to while you play! Imo simple patterns with big chords and chunky LN's really work well with S3RL.


Massive thanks for [Shana Lesus] and ley-line aiku for Guest difficulties!


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Topic Starter
njoy
Apparently I accidentally pressed "Quote" instead of "Edit" ಠ_ಠ
- Ly0572 -
mark for m4m

note: idk whats with the name diffs, its already yours, i mean u dont have to put "odex's" in it coz u are the creator
keep it simple , remove your name
:)

here i go

|1|2|3|4|

beginner
00:07:956 - uhmm i think this is the part that is supposed to be doubles instead of 00:08:331 (8331|3,8331|1,9081|0,9081|1,9831|2,9831|1,10581|3,10581|1) - ~ so just drag these 00:08:331 (8331|3,9081|0,9831|2,10581|3,11331|0) - here 00:07:956 - --feel the difference :)

00:13:581 (13581|2,14331|1,15081|3,15831|1,16581|2,17331|0,18081|1,18456|3,19206|2,19956|3,20706|1,21456|2,22206|0) - how about change to short notes~ its not hard for beginners if u change it to 1/1 SN's

00:23:893 (23893|3,24268|2,24456|3,24737|3,25018|3) - i suggest to follow the normal 1/1 beat snap then u can add LN here 00:25:206 - ends here 00:25:581 -

00:35:331 (35331|1,35424|0,35612|1,35612|2) - like i said here 00:23:893 follow the 1/1 beat snap~ also add here 00:36:081 - u missed a note

suggestion here 00:36:456 -


00:48:081 - uhm why empty?

01:13:206 - missed a note

01:28:768 (88768|1,88862|2,89143|0,89518|2,89612|3,89893|2,90268|1,90362|2,90643|1,91018|2,91112|1,91393|3,91768|1,91862|0,92143|1,92518|0,92612|1,92893|0,93268|0,93362|1,93643|3,94018|1,94112|0,94393|3,94768|2,94862|1,95143|0,95518|1,95612|2,95893|0,96268|1,96362|2) - i dont think this is a good idea :( -- hmm maybe follow the 1/2 beat snap this time

01:40:768 (100768|3,100862|2,101143|1,101518|3,101612|2,101893|0,102268|2,102362|1,102643|0,103018|1,103112|0,103393|3,103768|1,103862|0,104143|3,104518|0,104612|1,104893|3,105268|3,105362|2,105643|3,106018|2,106112|3,106393|0,106768|1,106862|2,107143|1,107518|1,107612|2,107893|1,108268|1,108362|0,108643|3,108831|3,109018|3,109206|3,109393|3) - ^^^

01:54:737 - y start here? move them here 01:54:831 -

01:55:862 (115862|1,116237|2,116612|0,116987|1,117362|2,117737|3) - move to white lines~ dont follow the vocals

01:59:706 - empty again :(

02:13:206 (133206|3,133581|2) - u can delete them since its just for beginners so yea

02:13:956 (133956|3,134331|2,134706|3,135081|1,135456|3,135831|0,136206|3,136581|0,136956|2,137331|0,137706|1,138081|0,138456|3,138831|0,139206|2,139581|1,139956|3,140331|1,140706|2,141081|0,141456|2,141831|1,142206|0) - good job in this part

02:23:893 (143893|0,144268|1,144456|0,144737|0,145018|0) - same as
00:23:893 (23893|3,24268|2,24456|3,24737|3,25018|3) -

then move this 02:25:581 (145581|2) - here 02:25:206 -
02:25:581 - add note maybe to |1|
02:25:956 - ^ to |2|
02:26:331 (146331|3,147081|1,147831|2,148581|0,149331|2,150081|1,150831|3,151581|2,152331|3,153081|1) - change to SN :3
02:34:581 (154581|3) - change also to a SN

02:46:206 (166206|2,166956|2) -
hmmm bad idea imo~ try ending this ln 02:46:206 (166206|2) - here 02:46:956 - then move this 02:46:956 (166956|2) - to |1| or |4|

02:49:581 (169581|3,169956|2,170331|3,170706|2,171081|3,171456|2,171831|1,172206|2,172581|0,172956|2,173331|3,173706|2,174081|3,174456|1,174831|3,175206|0) - balance pls~ feels heavy on the right side

03:07:393 - add
03:07:956 - should be doubles?
03:08:706 - ^
03:09:456 - ^
03:10:206 - ^
03:10:956 - ^
03:11:706 - ^
03:12:456 - ^
03:13:581 (193581|3) - move this LN here 03:13:206 -

03:28:581 (208581|2) - move to |4|
--
pls delete Sv's on lower diffs

And will be back later~ :o


intermediate
00:01:581 - make this 3 notes
00:16:956 (16956|1) - move to |1| to avoid 00:17:331 (17331|1) -
00:19:581 - add to |1|
00:19:956 - add to |3|
00:25:956 (25956|1) - move to |1|
00:28:581 (28581|1) - move also to |1|
00:30:081 (30081|1,30081|2) - move to |1| and |4|
00:31:393 - missed a note
00:36:081 - cymbal?
00:47:331 - add
02:40:581 - add since u put not here too 02:43:581 (163581|3) -
03:00:268 - hmmm u didnt map it?
Hard
00:02:143 (2143|1) - move to |1|
then add note here 00:02:237 - since its hard u can map that part i guess
00:03:831 - add
00:05:237 - ^
00:06:831 - ^
00:08:237 - ^
00:10:393 - missed a note here
00:10:487 - here also
00:11:049 - add
00:11:237 - ^
00:11:612 - ^
00:11:799 - ^
00:11:893 - ^
00:11:987 - ^
00:21:831 (21831|3,22206|0,22581|1,22581|2) - maybe dont try to follow the vocals~ the next part was empty but it has sound to map :(
00:33:831 (33831|0,34206|3,34581|2,34581|1) - ^

HOLY COW ITS NOT YET FINISHED LOL XD

--alright thats all gl :)
Topic Starter
njoy

- Ly0572 - wrote:

here i go

|1|2|3|4|

beginner
00:07:956 - uhmm i think this is the part that is supposed to be doubles instead of 00:08:331 (8331|3,8331|1,9081|0,9081|1,9831|2,9831|1,10581|3,10581|1) - ~ so just drag these 00:08:331 (8331|3,9081|0,9831|2,10581|3,11331|0) - here 00:07:956 - --feel the difference :) Approved

00:13:581 (13581|2,14331|1,15081|3,15831|1,16581|2,17331|0,18081|1,18456|3,19206|2,19956|3,20706|1,21456|2,22206|0) - how about change to short notes~ its not hard for beginners if u change it to 1/1 SN's Declined, I dont want the whole thing to be SN

00:23:893 (23893|3,24268|2,24456|3,24737|3,25018|3) - i suggest to follow the normal 1/1 beat snap then u can add LN here 00:25:206 - ends here 00:25:581 - No on the beat snapping, yes on the LN

00:35:331 (35331|1,35424|0,35612|1,35612|2) - like i said here 00:23:893 follow the 1/1 beat snap~ also add here 00:36:081 - u missed a note
Fixed the snap part, the missing note is for emphasis on the vocals

suggestion here 00:36:456 - Declined, I want this to feel heavy but simple


00:48:081 - uhm why empty? Fixed

01:13:206 - missed a note Fixed

01:28:768 (88768|1,88862|2,89143|0,89518|2,89612|3,89893|2,90268|1,90362|2,90643|1,91018|2,91112|1,91393|3,91768|1,91862|0,92143|1,92518|0,92612|1,92893|0,93268|0,93362|1,93643|3,94018|1,94112|0,94393|3,94768|2,94862|1,95143|0,95518|1,95612|2,95893|0,96268|1,96362|2) - i dont think this is a good idea :( -- hmm maybe follow the 1/2 beat snap this time Declined, I feel like its easy enought to tell from the song to map accurately and it isn't too dense.

01:40:768 (100768|3,100862|2,101143|1,101518|3,101612|2,101893|0,102268|2,102362|1,102643|0,103018|1,103112|0,103393|3,103768|1,103862|0,104143|3,104518|0,104612|1,104893|3,105268|3,105362|2,105643|3,106018|2,106112|3,106393|0,106768|1,106862|2,107143|1,107518|1,107612|2,107893|1,108268|1,108362|0,108643|3,108831|3,109018|3,109206|3,109393|3) - ^^^ ^^^

01:54:737 - y start here? move them here 01:54:831 - Fixed

01:55:862 (115862|1,116237|2,116612|0,116987|1,117362|2,117737|3) - move to white lines~ dont follow the vocals Fixed, brainfart

01:59:706 - empty again :( Fixed

02:13:206 (133206|3,133581|2) - u can delete them since its just for beginners so yea Approved

02:13:956 (133956|3,134331|2,134706|3,135081|1,135456|3,135831|0,136206|3,136581|0,136956|2,137331|0,137706|1,138081|0,138456|3,138831|0,139206|2,139581|1,139956|3,140331|1,140706|2,141081|0,141456|2,141831|1,142206|0) - good job in this part

02:23:893 (143893|0,144268|1,144456|0,144737|0,145018|0) - same as
00:23:893 (23893|3,24268|2,24456|3,24737|3,25018|3) - Declined

then move this 02:25:581 (145581|2) - here 02:25:206 -
02:25:581 - add note maybe to |1|
02:25:956 - ^ to |2|
02:26:331 (146331|3,147081|1,147831|2,148581|0,149331|2,150081|1,150831|3,151581|2,152331|3,153081|1) - change to SN :3
02:34:581 (154581|3) - change also to a SN Approved, did my own version

02:46:206 (166206|2,166956|2) -
hmmm bad idea imo~ try ending this ln 02:46:206 (166206|2) - here 02:46:956 - then move this 02:46:956 (166956|2) - to |1| or |4| Fixed the LN

02:49:581 (169581|3,169956|2,170331|3,170706|2,171081|3,171456|2,171831|1,172206|2,172581|0,172956|2,173331|3,173706|2,174081|3,174456|1,174831|3,175206|0) - balance pls~ feels heavy on the right side Edited some, did want the anchor to be on the right though

03:07:393 - add
03:07:956 - should be doubles?
03:08:706 - ^
03:09:456 - ^
03:10:206 - ^
03:10:956 - ^
03:11:706 - ^
03:12:456 - ^
03:13:581 (193581|3) - move this LN here 03:13:206 -

03:28:581 (208581|2) - move to |4| Fixed all but 03:07:393
--
pls delete Sv's on lower diffs

And will be back later~
And this is why mods are cool. The diff names never even crossed my mind after I set them aside haha >.<

Thanks for the Mod, looking forward to seeing the rest of it.
Teriuchi
Intermediate ~1:30 the funny part I talked about.
Otherwise solid.
01:28:018 (88018|2,88112|1,88393|0,88768|1,88862|2,89143|0,89518|3,89612|1,89893|2,90268|1,90456|3,90549|0,91018|2,91112|1,91393|0,91768|1,91956|3,92143|0,92518|2,92612|1,92893|0,93268|0,93362|2,93643|1,94018|1,94112|3,94393|2,94768|1,94862|0,95143|0,95518|0,95612|1,95893|0,96268|3) -
Topic Starter
njoy

Aerath wrote:

Intermediate ~1:30 the funny part I talked about.
Otherwise solid.
01:28:018 (88018|2,88112|1,88393|0,88768|1,88862|2,89143|0,89518|3,89612|1,89893|2,90268|1,90456|3,90549|0,91018|2,91112|1,91393|0,91768|1,91956|3,92143|0,92518|2,92612|1,92893|0,93268|0,93362|2,93643|1,94018|1,94112|3,94393|2,94768|1,94862|0,95143|0,95518|0,95612|1,95893|0,96268|3) -
Took off some of the "fun" we talked about 8-) but I still feel its the most promenant sound so I'ma keep some. Thanks for the mod.





I realized later on that the "mod" my friend did was really not executed the way it is apparently suppose to since it was mostly just us talking on discord so I worked hard and tried to cover for it with stars. Beginner mistake from a beginner
Topic Starter
njoy

- Ly0572 - wrote:

intermediate
00:01:581 - make this 3 notes Yep
00:16:956 (16956|1) - move to |1| to avoid 00:17:331 (17331|1) - Yep
00:19:581 - add to |1| Yep
00:19:956 - add to |3| Yep
00:25:956 (25956|1) - move to |1| Yep
00:28:581 (28581|1) - move also to |1| Nope
00:30:081 (30081|1,30081|2) - move to |1| and |4| Nope
00:31:393 - missed a note Yep
00:36:081 - cymbal? Yep
00:47:331 - add Yep
02:40:581 - add since u put not here too 02:43:581 (163581|3) - Yep
03:00:268 - hmmm u didnt map it? Nope, its empty for the build up on the lower diffs


--alright thats all gl :)
Thanks a bunch for the mods! ;)
MrDorian
Will mod it soon
Deep Sea
I'll show you how
This is how to nightcore
Listen up
And I'll tell you all
Step 1: Take the pitch control
Push it up
And that's basically it


http://puu.sh/tpj3O/af795d04ec.rar
Topic Starter
njoy

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

I'll show you how
This is how to nightcore
Listen up
And I'll tell you all
Step 1: Take the pitch control
Push it up
And that's basically it


http://puu.sh/tpj3O/af795d04ec.rar
Thank you SO much for the GD! :oops:
And for the stars as well :idea:
MrDorian
OwO Time to mod! (from RRM queue)

shana's hardcore
00:03:737 (3737|0) - there should be double, u emphasized these
00:03:831 (3831|1) - no sound for double note (according to 00:06:831 (6831|0) - )
00:05:143 (5143|1) - missing note?
00:08:143 (8143|1) - missing note?
00:09:643 (9643|1) - delete this? you didn't emphasized these sounds with 2 notes
00:09:737 (9737|2) - missing note?
00:11:893 (11893|0) - delete it, no "ee" sound
00:19:393 (19393|1,19393|2,19393|3) - why three notes? same sound like 00:19:206 (19206|2,19206|3) - (look here 00:31:206 (31206|2,31206|3,31393|1,31393|3,31581|0,31581|3) - )
00:19:581 (19581|0,19581|1,19581|3) - and here ^
00:19:768 (19768|2) - perhaps add note here? clap sound
00:22:393 (22393|1,22487|3) - minijack these like you've done before?
00:24:924 (24924|2,25112|2) - delete these, ghosts
00:36:924 (36924|3) - pretty sure it's ghost
00:49:581 (49581|2,49581|3) - triple instead of double?
And about section which starts after thing I mentioned before. You shouldn't emphasize these sounds with 2 notes no real reason for this. Sounds aren't that strong.
01:13:581 (73581|3) - about part that starts after this - it has so many ghosts (01:14:049 (74049|0,74424|2,75174|1,75549|0,75924|2,76299|1) - for example). Please analyze it once again.
01:19:581 (79581|1,79581|0,79674|1,79674|0,79768|2,79768|3,79862|3,79862|2) - this plays dumb. Change it to normal 12 34 jumpstream and 01:20:331 (80331|1) - change here to 14 23 for instance and leave 01:21:081 (81081|1) - as it is
01:23:612 (83612|2,83706|0,83737|1,83768|3,83799|2,83831|0,83862|1,83893|3,83893|2,83987|0,84081|3,84081|2,84081|1) - ctrl+h this, uncomfortable to play
01:24:081 (84081|2,84081|3,84081|1) - too weak sound to make it 3 notes I think
01:24:268 (84268|0) - ghost?
01:25:956 (85956|2) - why no doubles? :C
01:48:831 (108831|3,108831|1,109018|0,109018|3,109206|3,109206|0,109393|0,109393|2) - these works as doubles, but 01:48:268 (108268|0,108268|2,108456|0,108456|3,108643|2,108643|3) - these don't I think
01:53:331 (113331|1) - make it shorter? like here 01:50:331 (110331|1) -
01:58:768 (118768|3) - this starts at white line above
01:59:706 (119706|0,120081|1) - why no doubles here
02:00:409 (120409|2,120690|1,120784|3) - ghosts, listen on 25%
I won't mod the rest of that part, because it repeats. Apply changes there too
02:25:018 (145018|3) - delete, no sound for 2 notes
02:31:206 (151206|1,151206|3,151393|2,151487|1,151581|3,151581|0) - check this once again
03:09:456 (189456|3) - missing note?
03:24:081 (204081|0,204081|2,204081|3) - make it 2 notes
03:35:143 (215143|1,215143|0,215237|3,215331|2,215518|3,215518|0,215612|1,215706|2,215893|3,215893|1,215987|0,216081|2,216268|0,216268|1,216362|3,216456|0) - did something go wrong? XD (i think that ctrl+j will work
03:36:690 (216690|2,216784|0) - ghosts
please check the consistency again, I could miss a lot of things
I want to mod rest of the diffs on irc, so will try to catch you this week

i've lost first irc ;w;
16:16 od3x: Yo
16:16 MrDorian: yo
16:16 od3x: you got time to look over "Insane" some more?
16:17 MrDorian: yup
16:17 od3x: sweet
16:17 MrDorian: lemme redl
16:18 *MrDorian is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1139405 S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This [Insane]]
16:19 MrDorian: 00:10:674 (10674|0,10768|1,10862|2,10956|0,11049|1,11143|2,11237|0,11331|1,11424|2,11518|0,11612|1) - you can spread it more
16:19 MrDorian: no reason to make it 123123123123123123312213123123123213
16:19 MrDorian: even if there's the sound
16:19 MrDorian: 00:12:081 (12081|1,12174|2,12268|3) - it's like this because of ln
16:19 od3x: mm
16:19 od3x: yeah
16:19 od3x: was matching them
16:19 od3x: but it is a bit dull
16:19 od3x: agreed
16:20 MrDorian: k
16:20 od3x: tuned
16:20 MrDorian: 00:10:956 (10956|0) - missing note for a clap?
16:20 od3x: yes, missed the sound
16:20 od3x: fixd
16:21 MrDorian: 00:13:956 (13956|3,14331|3) - maybe decrease amount of notes in these
16:21 MrDorian: and leave 00:14:706 (14706|3) - 3 notes here
16:22 od3x: mmm
16:22 od3x: i can see that
16:23 MrDorian: apply that 00:07:581 (7581|0,7581|2,7581|3,7768|1,7956|3,7956|0,7956|1,8143|2,8331|3,8331|2,8331|0) - here too in this part
16:23 MrDorian: same sounds
16:25 od3x: you mean make jumps?
16:25 MrDorian: yeah
16:26 MrDorian: just apply what I told about that part in this part
16:27 MrDorian: as I look at extra diff, it's same as insane
16:27 MrDorian: with bigger chords
16:28 od3x: Yeah, I dont think its worth going into
16:28 od3x: I wrote some stuff about it on the thread
16:28 od3x: Its basically the Another we started with
16:29 MrDorian: yeah
16:29 od3x: I just realized it wont work like that at this time
16:29 MrDorian: it would work
16:29 od3x: I saved it just incase I get inspiration to make it happen
16:29 MrDorian: hmm
16:30 MrDorian: i think you should stay with easy normal hard insane extra
16:31 MrDorian: but that's only my way of thinking
16:31 od3x: I do like to think so aswell
16:31 od3x: But I have to see what kind of feedback I get etc
16:31 MrDorian: yeah
16:31 od3x: I'll see about it later
16:31 od3x: But I did think it played well
16:31 od3x: ^^
16:32 od3x: ofc needs some more polish but playability was good last few saves
16:32 MrDorian: it doesn't play bad, it just need some consistency changes
16:32 od3x: ye
16:32 MrDorian: 00:04:393 (4393|3,4393|2,4487|3,4487|2,4581|1) - about consistency
16:32 MrDorian: make it 4 4 2
16:32 MrDorian: no need to make 2 notes
16:33 MrDorian: and it's insane diff
16:33 od3x: mmh
16:33 od3x: yeah
16:33 MrDorian: you used exact pattern in extra
16:33 od3x: Tuning down feels so weird
16:33 od3x: its the same map with very slight changes so far
16:34 od3x: so I get it :]
16:34 MrDorian: :3
16:34 MrDorian: 00:07:206 (7206|1,7206|3,7206|2,7393|0,7393|1,7393|2) - why this has more notes than extra
16:34 od3x: because it hasnt been tuned after xD
16:34 od3x: fixing that
16:35 MrDorian: 00:08:893 - missing note?
16:35 od3x: i dont think that has two sounds
16:35 od3x: it has a single note for me there
16:36 MrDorian: but there's note missing
16:36 MrDorian: insane diff
16:36 MrDorian: [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7148593 left side]
16:36 od3x: ahh fair enough
16:36 od3x: I've fixed it on my end already
16:37 od3x: its noted
16:37 MrDorian: ahh
16:37 MrDorian: 00:22:393 (22393|3,22487|2) - make this a minijack
16:37 MrDorian: 00:04:393 (4393|3,4487|3) - like here
16:37 MrDorian: 00:10:393 (10393|2,10487|1) - and here
16:38 od3x: doned
16:38 MrDorian: and look for other places with this sound
16:38 MrDorian: I'll stop mentioning them
16:39 MrDorian: 00:24:737 (24737|3,24737|2) - move it to white line above
16:39 od3x: thats funny
16:39 od3x: I swear I've fixed that part like 4 times today O.o
16:39 MrDorian: I feel you, I had problems like this too
16:41 MrDorian: 00:35:331 (35331|3,35331|0,35331|2,35331|1,35612|2,35612|1) - make them 1 ln instead of 2
16:41 MrDorian: 00:35:331 (35331|3,35331|0,35331|2,35331|1,35612|2,35612|1,36456|1,36737|3,37018|0) - same intesitivity
16:41 MrDorian: omg engrish hard
16:42 od3x: ^^
16:42 MrDorian: intensivity
16:42 od3x: intensity?
16:42 od3x: :p
16:42 MrDorian: wait a moment
16:42 MrDorian: okay i'm back
16:43 MrDorian: the voice has the same intesivity 00:35:331 (35331|3,35612|2) - here and 00:36:456 (36456|1,36737|3,37018|0) - here
16:43 MrDorian: so there's no reason to make one 2 lns and another 1 ln
16:44 od3x: that one was just for style points
16:44 od3x: removed the longest ln
16:45 MrDorian: could you send me screenshot of what you've done
16:46 MrDorian: 00:39:643 (39643|0) - move it somewhere else
16:46 od3x: which part
16:46 MrDorian: lns I mentioned
16:47 od3x: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7148666
16:47 od3x: they are kinda squished but
16:47 od3x: you can manage
16:48 MrDorian: okay
16:48 od3x: I took away the two SN before the 3 LN
16:48 od3x: felt random
16:48 MrDorian: k
16:48 MrDorian: delete 00:37:393 (37393|3) -
16:49 od3x: done
16:49 MrDorian: 00:37:393 (37393|3,49581|0,49581|2) - make one of them a normal note
16:50 od3x: pardon
16:50 od3x: I dont quite follow
16:51 od3x: nvm
16:51 od3x: got it
16:51 od3x: you meant the three LN
16:51 MrDorian: yea
16:51 od3x: I replaced the middle on
16:51 MrDorian: i could copy it bad
16:51 MrDorian: (or blame editor)
16:51 od3x: is cool
16:51 MrDorian: 00:58:768 (58768|1,58956|2) - why you mix vocal with background ;w;
16:51 *od3x blames editor
16:51 MrDorian: we were talking about it on monday
16:52 od3x: I TOOK THAT OFF
16:52 od3x: i swer officer
16:52 od3x: damn magic
16:52 MrDorian: osu editor best editor
16:52 MrDorian: 00:58:768 (58768|1,58956|2,74331|2,74471|3,75081|3,75362|3,75596|2) - and this why
16:53 od3x: not sure what you are linking
16:53 od3x: doesnt exist on my screen
16:54 od3x: the vocal LN's are gone there
16:54 MrDorian: wtf
16:54 od3x: lemme update
16:54 MrDorian: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7148716
16:54 od3x: maybe that helps
16:54 MrDorian: yea
16:54 od3x: oh
16:55 od3x: that screenshot is not from 00:59
16:55 od3x: lmao
16:55 od3x: updating anywa
16:55 MrDorian: k
16:55 MrDorian: they are still here lmao
16:55 od3x: yeah
16:55 od3x: because your link was nowhere near that
16:55 od3x: they are remnants from extra
16:56 MrDorian: ah
16:56 MrDorian: delete them
16:56 od3x: now gone
16:56 od3x: _b
16:56 MrDorian: and make them normal triples (1 2 34 for instance)
16:57 od3x: which oneeess? ;__;
16:57 MrDorian: agh sooryyy
16:57 od3x: ^^
16:57 MrDorian: instead of these lns
16:58 MrDorian: my bad
16:58 MrDorian: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7148743 change to these
16:58 od3x: Ahh
16:58 MrDorian: 01:14:331 (74331|2,74471|3) - and delete these
16:58 od3x: I gotcha
16:59 MrDorian: and just make it all triples
16:59 MrDorian: i dunno if it is triples or triplets
16:59 od3x: triplets if you mean bursts
16:59 MrDorian: okay
16:59 od3x: i would think triple = hand
16:59 MrDorian: ^ exactly
17:01 MrDorian: these had to be lns ;c
17:02 od3x: >,<
17:02 MrDorian: hori shiet
17:02 MrDorian: ;w;
17:02 od3x: well I reworked the whole part
17:02 MrDorian: why am I so stupid
17:02 od3x: wait
17:02 MrDorian: but nvm
17:02 od3x: wher are you now
17:03 MrDorian: 01:22:956 (82956|0,83002|1,83049|2,83096|3,83143|0,83190|1) - i'm here
17:03 od3x: im scared :<
17:03 od3x: alright
17:03 MrDorian: 01:22:956 (82956|0,83002|1,83049|2,83096|3,83143|0,83190|1) - these had to be lns ;ccc
17:03 od3x: they are
17:03 od3x: on Hard
17:03 od3x: lul
17:03 MrDorian: ah k
17:04 od3x: Imo they are just fine
17:04 od3x: I nerfed them to 1/8th anyway
17:04 MrDorian: 01:22:581 (82581|2) - change it to burst
17:04 MrDorian: 01:23:190 (83190|1,83377|2,83565|2,83940|1) - delete these
17:04 MrDorian: no sound
17:06 MrDorian: 01:37:956 (97956|0) - I think it will be better to give 2 notes on claps like here, not 01:38:331 (98331|1) - here
17:06 MrDorian: claps distinguish them
17:07 od3x: huh
17:07 od3x: I totally missed that one
17:07 MrDorian: (change in all these parts)
17:07 *MrDorian runs
17:07 MrDorian: have fun :^DDDDD
17:07 od3x: (v:
17:08 od3x: id rather have the jump on the bass thou
17:08 MrDorian: but with clap it's bass+clap
17:08 od3x: since the ticks with claps also have the high pitch sound
17:08 MrDorian: bass is alone
17:08 od3x: mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
17:08 od3x: true
17:09 od3x: allright
17:09 MrDorian: omg i have to go
17:09 od3x: ill accept that
17:09 od3x: >.<
17:10 od3x: No probs
17:10 MrDorian: i'm sorry, but I must go ;w;
17:10 od3x: also, I really hate breaking up the pattern established for that part
17:10 od3x: So I think im gonna stay my way
17:10 MrDorian: hmm okay
17:10 od3x: later dude
17:10 od3x: thanks even more
17:10 MrDorian: I think I'll just write post
17:11 MrDorian: with the rest
17:11 od3x: :PPPP
17:11 od3x: <3
17:11 od3x: lotsa love
17:11 MrDorian: bye o/
17:11 od3x: cya
Will mod rest someday

GL
Murumoo
halo :)

[My Opinion = Suggest]

[ 1 2 3 4]



Hard
00:36:643 (36643|1,36737|2,36831|1) - [move <]
01:11:518 (71518|0) - remove or add insane dif
03:05:049 - add 1 note
03:17:049 - ^
good this level

Insane
00:39:831 - add 1 note
00:40:206 - ^
01:04:487 (64487|1) - hmm.. move 1?
01:13:487 - see hard dif [use same LN]
01:33:456 - add 1 or 2 note
03:43:956 - check other diff
03:45:643 - ^
oh good level ^^

i love this song ^^ :) give you kudosu my friend
Topic Starter
njoy

Murumoo wrote:

halo :)

[My Opinion = Suggest]

[ 1 2 3 4]



Hard
00:36:643 (36643|1,36737|2,36831|1) - [move <]
01:11:518 (71518|0) - remove or add insane dif
03:05:049 - add 1 note
03:17:049 - ^
good this level

Insane
00:39:831 - add 1 note
00:40:206 - ^
01:04:487 (64487|1) - hmm.. move 1?
01:13:487 - see hard dif [use same LN]
01:33:456 - add 1 or 2 note
03:43:956 - check other diff
03:45:643 - ^
oh good level ^^

i love this song ^^ :) give you kudosu my friend
Applied everything above.
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
laughingcomet
Beginner
00:13:956 - i would put notes here because the end of a LN dosen't really count as a note. same for the rest of this section
00:19:206 - you could make a LN here to emphasize the fast beat
00:25:581 - ~ 00:33:831 - try to have a clear structure for the "jacks". my suggestion is either make it just a simple "jumpstream" or make the "jacks" every other white line because you have a "clap" there that you can emphasize so 00:26:706 - 00:28:206 - 00:29:706 - and so on
00:31:206 - you could make a LN here to emphasize the fast beat
00:35:331 (35331|0,35331|1,35612|2,35612|1,36456|2,36456|3) - i feel like these def does not deserve to be doubles. i would make them either singles or LN's
00:36:643 (36643|2,36643|1,37018|3,37018|0) - feels like this might be too much maybe a single LN instead of two?
00:39:456 - i'd put a note here
00:42:456 - ^
00:42:831 (42831|3,42831|2) - doesn't feel like a double. More of a single LN that you could either let it be like it is or cut it at 00:43:206 - so you have two of them because the pitch changes
00:43:581 - i'd say this deserves a SN(single note)
00:46:581 - ^
03:13:206 - ~ 03:22:956 -
Topic Starter
njoy

laughingcomet wrote:

Beginner
00:13:956 - i would put notes here because the end of a LN dosen't really count as a note. same for the rest of this section
00:19:206 - you could make a LN here to emphasize the fast beat
00:25:581 - ~ 00:33:831 - try to have a clear structure for the "jacks". my suggestion is either make it just a simple "jumpstream" or make the "jacks" every other white line because you have a "clap" there that you can emphasize so 00:26:706 - 00:28:206 - 00:29:706 - and so on
00:31:206 - you could make a LN here to emphasize the fast beat
00:35:331 (35331|0,35331|1,35612|2,35612|1,36456|2,36456|3) - i feel like these def does not deserve to be doubles. i would make them either singles or LN's
00:36:643 (36643|2,36643|1,37018|3,37018|0) - feels like this might be too much maybe a single LN instead of two?
00:39:456 - i'd put a note here
00:42:456 - ^
00:42:831 (42831|3,42831|2) - doesn't feel like a double. More of a single LN that you could either let it be like it is or cut it at 00:43:206 - so you have two of them because the pitch changes
00:43:581 - i'd say this deserves a SN(single note)
00:46:581 - ^
03:13:206 - ~ 03:22:956 -
Applied all but LN for pitch (00:42:831)
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
That was way more than I expected lower diffs to get attention. :oops:
Unpredictable
Sorry for the late mod!

From my mania modding queue,

Ok let's get started!

Background: the background dimensions need to be by 1366x768. This isn't a problem at all, but the bg is pretty spooky lol. How about https://puu.sh/tDsx3/2949be8f9f.jpg ? I just think for a song like this the bg is just not fitting. up to you though

Beginner
00:27:831 (27831|1) - move to column 3
00:48:081 (48081|0,48081|1) - maybe moving this to column 3 and 4?
01:09:456 (69456|3) - move to column 1
01:48:643 (108643|3,108831|3,109018|3,109206|3,109393|3) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7169542 ?
02:43:206 (163206|1) - move to column 1
not too many problems.

Intermediate
00:20:143 (20143|1,20143|0)
00:20:893 (20893|3,20893|0)
00:20:893 (20893|3,20893|0)
00:22:393 (22393|1,22393|3)
00:23:143 (23143|1,23143|2) - For all the above, what sound are they even making exactly? If anything, it should be one note not two.
00:19:581 (19581|0) - 00:19:956 (19956|2) These notes actually represents the drums being heard. no idea why stopped doing this but maybe you should add them 00:20:337 - 00:22:956
03:46:206 make a LN as far as to 03:46:768 and do this for the rest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7170141 I thinking this sounds way better than before

Sorry for the really short mod. I was originally going to mod the whole thing, but it is sorta tiring modding 7 diffs that are about 4 mins xD

If you want, msg me in game and put the irc from our chat.

Once I get the time, I'll probably mod the whole thing and edit this but yeah srry.

Besides that awesome map and song! Hoping for ranked! :)
Topic Starter
njoy

Unpredictable wrote:

Sorry for the late mod!

From my mania modding queue,

Ok let's get started!

Background: the background dimensions need to be by 1366x768. This isn't a problem at all, but the bg is pretty spooky lol. How about https://puu.sh/tDsx3/2949be8f9f.jpg ? I just think for a song like this the bg is just not fitting. up to you though

Beginner
00:27:831 (27831|1) - move to column 3
00:48:081 (48081|0,48081|1) - maybe moving this to column 3 and 4? Its the same sound so no
01:09:456 (69456|3) - move to column 1
01:48:643 (108643|3,108831|3,109018|3,109206|3,109393|3) - how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7169542 ? Changed it up a bit
02:43:206 (163206|1) - move to column 1
not too many problems.

Intermediate
00:20:143 (20143|1,20143|0)
00:20:893 (20893|3,20893|0)
00:20:893 (20893|3,20893|0)
00:22:393 (22393|1,22393|3)
00:23:143 (23143|1,23143|2) - For all the above, what sound are they even making exactly? If anything, it should be one note not two. I changed that part recently, you had latest version?
00:19:581 (19581|0) - 00:19:956 (19956|2) These notes actually represents the drums being heard. no idea why stopped doing this but maybe you should add them 00:20:337 - 00:22:956 ^^^^^^^^^^
03:46:206 make a LN as far as to 03:46:768 and do this for the rest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7170141 I thinking this sounds way better than before

Sorry for the really short mod. I was originally going to mod the whole thing, but it is sorta tiring modding 7 diffs that are about 4 mins xD

If you want, msg me in game and put the irc from our chat.

Once I get the time, I'll probably mod the whole thing and edit this but yeah srry.

Besides that awesome map and song! Hoping for ranked! :)
No worries, these things take time so I appreciate that I got some of yours. :oops:
If you enjoyed the song/mapping, please do come back. :D Always nice to get feedback.

Applied everything not marked.
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Sebbern
From my mod queue, as requested.

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Beginner
If you meant to map 00:35:331 (35331|0,35706|1) - to "welcome", then "come" starts on 00:35:612 - , not on 00:35:706 - . And it also ends on 00:35:893 -
Could be better to only use one LN, instead of 2. Since they both are pretty short if you adjust them.

These aren't really necessary, and will also make it more difficult for newer players. Also keep in mind that they are all the same in both pattern and melody:
Extend? 00:39:831 (39831|3) - until 00:40:487 - as "core" ends there, or 00:40:581 - like you do in the other various 00:43:581 - 01:55:581 - parts of the song. The last choice is also easier for the player, and is probably the better choice.
^? 00:51:831 (51831|2) - until 00:52:487 - or 00:52:581 -
^? 01:51:831 (111831|3) - until 01:52:487 - or 01:52:581 -
^? 02:03:831 (123831|1) - until 02:04:487 - or 02:04:581 -
^? 03:39:831 (219831|2,219831|0) - until 03:40:487 - or 03:40:581 -

Extend? 00:46:206 (46206|3) - until either 00:46:674 - as "me" ends there or 00:46:768 - if you want it to be easier for the player.

End 00:58:768 (58768|0) - on 00:59:518 - Like you have done at 03:46:768 (226768|3) - as the sound ends there.
^ 02:10:768 (130768|3) - on 02:11:518 -

More or less only suggestions, except for the last two.
Intermediate
Realized that I forgot to turn off hitsounds for this and advanced after I did the mod. So some of the suggestions might not make sense.

01:00:081 (60081|1,60456|2) - Is pretty weird, because "show" starts on 01:00:268 - , not on 01:00:456 - Not too sure what to do with it though, as nothing really plays better with your current pattern.

01:09:643 - shouldn't be empty. Maybe start these 01:09:831 (69831|3,69831|0) - LNs there?

Extend 02:50:706 (170706|2) - until 02:51:081 - as its the same sound as 02:49:581 (169581|0) -

Place a note 02:52:018 - col 1?
^ 02:52:393 - col 3 if ^ is applied?
^ 02:54:268 - col 2? If you place this note, maybe change 02:54:081 (174081|1) - to col 1?
^ 02:55:018 - col 4?
^ 02:55:393 - col 1 if ^ is applied?
^ 03:04:018 - col 1?
^ 03:04:393 - col 2 if ^ is applied?
(You have actually done this @ 03:07:018 - 03:07:393 - 03:10:018 - 03:10:393 - )

Do something with this sound? 03:04:956 - 03:05:237 - Maybe 1/4 single notes?

Advanced
Those speed changes.

Place a note? 01:00:831 - or if 01:01:018 (61018|3) - was meant to start at "how" then start it on 01:00:831 -

Place another note? 03:07:956 - on col 2?
^? 03:12:456 - on col 2?. This will mess up your idea of only have LNs though.
^? 03:13:956 - on col 4? Could also extend 03:13:581 (193581|2) - until 03:13:956 - instead. But I think placing another note would fit better.

Extend 03:30:831 (210831|0,210831|3) - until 03:31:581 - and delete 03:31:581 (211581|3) - ?

Hope this helps, didn't do hard because of a lack of time though.
Topic Starter
njoy

Sebbern wrote:

From my mod queue, as requested.

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Beginner
If you meant to map 00:35:331 (35331|0,35706|1) - to "welcome", then "come" starts on 00:35:612 - , not on 00:35:706 - . And it also ends on 00:35:893 - I'd rather not use 1/4th's in Beginner
Could be better to only use one LN, instead of 2. Since they both are pretty short if you adjust them. I find these kinds of things tricky when scaling down for easier diffs. Applied this and added a single with the LN end

These aren't really necessary, and will also make it more difficult for newer players. Also keep in mind that they are all the same in both pattern and melody:
Extend? 00:39:831 (39831|3) - until 00:40:487 - as "core" ends there, or 00:40:581 - like you do in the other various 00:43:581 - 01:55:581 - parts of the song. The last choice is also easier for the player, and is probably the better choice.[color=#40BF00 applied[/color]
^? 00:51:831 (51831|2) - until 00:52:487 - or 00:52:581 -
^? 01:51:831 (111831|3) - until 01:52:487 - or 01:52:581 -
^? 02:03:831 (123831|1) - until 02:04:487 - or 02:04:581 -
^? 03:39:831 (219831|2,219831|0) - until 03:40:487 - or 03:40:581 - ^^ applied all the things, good catch ^^

Extend? 00:46:206 (46206|3) - until either 00:46:674 - as "me" ends there or 00:46:768 - if you want it to be easier for the player. yes

End 00:58:768 (58768|0) - on 00:59:518 - Like you have done at 03:46:768 (226768|3) - as the sound ends there.
^ 02:10:768 (130768|3) - on 02:11:518 - yes

More or less only suggestions, except for the last two.
Intermediate
Realized that I forgot to turn off hitsounds for this and advanced after I did the mod. So some of the suggestions might not make sense.

01:00:081 (60081|1,60456|2) - Is pretty weird, because "show" starts on 01:00:268 - , not on 01:00:456 - Not too sure what to do with it though, as nothing really plays better with your current pattern. keep, it does start a bit late, but the strong vocal is right there

01:09:643 - shouldn't be empty. Maybe start these 01:09:831 (69831|3,69831|0) - LNs there? tuned, i still want emphasis on the stonger vocal

Extend 02:50:706 (170706|2) - until 02:51:081 - as its the same sound as 02:49:581 (169581|0) - yesh

Place a note 02:52:018 - col 1?
^ 02:52:393 - col 3 if ^ is applied?
^ 02:54:268 - col 2? If you place this note, maybe change 02:54:081 (174081|1) - to col 1?
^ 02:55:018 - col 4?
^ 02:55:393 - col 1 if ^ is applied?
^ 03:04:018 - col 1?
^ 03:04:393 - col 2 if ^ is applied?
(You have actually done this @ 03:07:018 - 03:07:393 - 03:10:018 - 03:10:393 - ) went over this part again, added some that I felt had enough emphasis to make the diff "harder". Hesitated, since low end diff

Do something with this sound? 03:04:956 - 03:05:237 - Maybe 1/4 single notes? pass, dont feel comfortable putting any more1/4th's in this diff
Advanced
Those speed changes.

Place a note? 01:00:831 - or if 01:01:018 (61018|3) - was meant to start at "how" then start it on 01:00:831 - it was for the cymbal sound but starting it there makes more sense

Place another note? 03:07:956 - on col 2? added. lenghtened the LN's but didnt add singles
^? 03:12:456 - on col 2?. This will mess up your idea of only have LNs though.
^? 03:13:956 - on col 4? Could also extend 03:13:581 (193581|2) - until 03:13:956 - instead. But I think placing another note would fit better.

Extend 03:30:831 (210831|0,210831|3) - until 03:31:581 - and delete 03:31:581 (211581|3) - ? yeeeeesh

Hope this helps, didn't do hard because of a lack of time though.
This helped big time, much appreciated!
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Deep Sea
http://puu.sh/tQRet/edf0915b0b.rar update

Thank you Dorian !
Unlucky_w
From my modding queue.

1/2/3/4

I only take a quick look since the length of each diff is long enough.

Beginner
01:28:581 - I feel like this part should have doubles (each at the side of columns) to keep the previous rhythm for a while.
01:40:581 - Same goes for here (one at first, and second at third column: same pattern).

Intermediate
00:46:206 - Add note here (to make it similar as 00:58:206 - )

In this section (this is considered as one entire suggestion):
02:16:581 - Add a note to 4 (or maybe somewhere else, it's missing something here) ;w;
02:19:581 - Add note here somewhere
02:20:518 (140518|2) - Then remove this
02:21:081 - Add note here somewhere again

02:31:581 - Add note
02:32:518 (152518|2) - Remove
02:33:081 - Add
I'm just following the vocal voice here.

Advanced
01:34:112 - Do it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244716; the pitch is higher than this part 01:33:362 ; so change the pattern.
01:46:018 (106018|1,106112|3,106206|2,106206|0) - Same goes for here.
03:28:018 - Follow the vocal voice seems better for the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244787
03:30:831 - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244798

Hard
00:04:768 (4768|3) - Move to 3, 'cause the sound is different with 00:05:143 (5143|3,5518|3) - so avoid that being similar.
00:06:737 (6737|0,7018|0) - Move these to 3, same reason but the opposite. And then you can move 00:07:206 (7206|2,7393|2) - to 2.
01:07:393 - Add a note here, it has the same sound as 01:04:407 - and 01:10:393 - ; so make it doubles.

Hyper
01:22:112 - I feel like this is missing a note or two.

Apart from that, everything looks fine, I think..

Extra
00:04:768 (4768|3,5143|3,5518|3) - Already mention that in the hard diff. (In my way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7255921&#41;
00:06:737 (6737|0,7018|0) - ^ (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7255921)

Hardcore
Finally at last diff, phew >w<'

00:08:706 - and also 00:10:206 - I would add another note, 'cause there's a sound higher than the other ones; so make it triples. (Only for this part tho.)
01:04:393 - and also 01:04:487 - Add notes to 3, 'cause there's a clapping sound in the song, and only in those particular times too; so that's quite a good reason.
01:10:393 - and 01:10:487 - add notes to 1, ^

That's everything, yep.

The patterns are so smooth. -3-
The song is good too.

Good Luck
Topic Starter
njoy

FastYoshi wrote:

From my modding queue.

1/2/3/4

I only take a quick look since the length of each diff is long enough.

Beginner
01:28:581 - I feel like this part should have doubles (each at the side of columns) to keep the previous rhythm for a while.
01:40:581 - Same goes for here (one at first, and second at third column: same pattern).

Intermediate
00:46:206 - Add note here (to make it similar as 00:58:206 - )

In this section (this is considered as one entire suggestion):
02:16:581 - Add a note to 4 (or maybe somewhere else, it's missing something here) ;w;
02:19:581 - Add note here somewhere
02:20:518 (140518|2) - Then remove this
02:21:081 - Add note here somewhere again

02:31:581 - Add note
02:32:518 (152518|2) - Remove
02:33:081 - Add
I'm just following the vocal voice here.

Advanced
01:34:112 - Do it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244716; the pitch is higher than this part 01:33:362 ; so change the pattern.
01:46:018 (106018|1,106112|3,106206|2,106206|0) - Same goes for here.
03:28:018 - Follow the vocal voice seems better for the flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244787
03:30:831 - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7244798

Hard
00:04:768 (4768|3) - Move to 3, 'cause the sound is different with 00:05:143 (5143|3,5518|3) - so avoid that being similar.
00:06:737 (6737|0,7018|0) - Move these to 3, same reason but the opposite. And then you can move 00:07:206 (7206|2,7393|2) - to 2.
01:07:393 - Add a note here, it has the same sound as 01:04:407 - and 01:10:393 - ; so make it doubles.

Extra
00:04:768 (4768|3,5143|3,5518|3) - Already mention that in the hard diff. (In my way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7255921&#41;
00:06:737 (6737|0,7018|0) - ^ (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7255921)

That's everything, yep.

The patterns are so smooth. -3-
The song is good too.

Good Luck
You did some fine sniping all over, muchos nachos. -3-

Applied most of it, skipped Intermediate stuff
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Janko
Hello o/
I found your map when I browsed queues in search cool sounds. I like S3RL so I decided mod this map

General
Remove from tags "s3rl", "nightcore", "this", "od3x". Artist, title, creator and source shouldn't be in tags
Shana's Hardcore
|1|2|3|4|

00:04:018 - hmm I think that you should add one more note (I propose column 1) because this is the same sound like this 00:03:737 - and this 00:03:456 -
00:10:018 (10018|1,10018|2) - move this to [34] in order to avoid this 00:09:643 (9643|1,9831|1,10018|1) - and for balance
00:17:143 (17143|2) - I propose move this note to column 2 for balance and I think that trill will fit
00:20:893 (20893|1) - the same situation as above. Move this note to column 3
00:24:362 (24362|2,24456|1,24549|2) - hmm maybe ctrl+H? It looks better
00:27:268 (27268|2,27362|3,27456|1,27456|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261145
01:17:518 (77518|0,77518|3,77612|1,77706|3,77706|2,77799|1,77893|2,77893|0,77987|1,77987|3,78081|2,78081|0,78268|3,78268|2,78362|0,78456|3,78456|1,78643|3,78643|0,78737|2,78737|1,78831|0,78831|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261207
01:27:643 (87643|2,87737|1,87831|2,88018|1) - ctrl+H for balance
01:30:268 (90268|0) - move to column 3
01:30:643 (90643|3,90737|1,90831|0,90831|2,90831|3,91018|1,91112|2,91206|1,91206|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261234
01:34:768 (94768|2,94862|0,94956|2,95143|0,95237|2,95331|0,95518|2,95612|0,95706|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261258
01:40:018 (100018|2,100112|3,100206|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261270
01:44:143 (104143|0,104331|0,104518|0,104706|0,104893|0,105081|0) - hmm I propose remap this part
01:52:018 (112018|2,112112|1,112206|2,112393|1,112487|2,112581|1) - ctrl+H for balance
01:59:143 (119143|1,119237|2,119331|1,119518|2,119612|1) - ^
01:59:143 (119143|2,119237|1,119331|2,119518|1,119612|2,120393|2,120424|1,120674|1,120706|3,120768|0,120799|1) - ghost notes?
02:02:518 (122518|1,122612|0,122706|1,122706|2,122893|2,122987|0,123081|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261340
02:08:518 (128518|2,128612|0,128706|2) - I propose 1 3 1
02:09:643 (129643|2,129737|3,129831|1,129831|2,130018|1,130112|3) - hmm... maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261360
02:11:143 (131143|1,131237|0,131331|1,131518|0,131612|1,131706|0) - I propose ctrl+G and 02:11:893 (131893|1,131987|1,132174|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7261379
02:18:643 (138643|3) - to column 3


Hmm... To chyba tyle. Fajna mapka ^^

Good Luck
Deep Sea
Dziękuję bardzo Janki and thank you FastYoshi for mods :)

http://puu.sh/tVkq3/3f89bc63fe.rar update
Aras
IRC stuff
23:30 od3x: Oi!
23:31 od3x: Did your movie end yet?
23:31 od3x: Kappa
23:33 Aras25: hai
23:33 Aras25: wanna do this now?
23:34 od3x: If you got time, sure
23:34 Aras25: cool
23:34 Aras25: now then
23:34 *Aras25 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1190901 S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This [Extra]]
23:35 Aras25: firstly, since you already have this diff
23:35 Aras25: I don't think aiku hyper is required
23:35 Aras25: since the diff spread is sama
23:35 Aras25: *same
23:35 Aras25: (diff spread not SR)
23:36 Aras25: you there>
23:36 Aras25: ?
23:36 od3x: Ye
23:36 od3x: I was thinking about that earlier
23:36 Aras25: see uwu
23:37 Aras25: I'll mod your EXTRA diff then since you asked so
23:37 Aras25: 00:12:081 (12081|1,12174|2,12268|3,12362|1,12456|2,12549|3,12643|1,12737|2,12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) -
23:37 Aras25: see this one?
23:37 od3x: And I still have no ruling yet on if my extra is even rankable
23:37 od3x: ye
23:37 Aras25: no map is unrankable as long as you listen to other and stop being stonehead dick like some specific mapper
23:37 Aras25: uwu
23:37 Aras25: about this
23:37 Aras25: 00:12:081 (12081|1,12174|2,12268|3,12362|1,12456|2,12549|3,12643|1,12737|2,12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) -
23:37 Aras25: I think
23:37 od3x: lol
23:38 od3x: okay bring it on
23:38 Aras25: 00:12:831 (12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) - that 4 note, I suggest you to trill them (prefer one hand trill) for the loud vocal echo efect
23:39 Aras25: tell me when you are done owo/
23:39 od3x: as in 2 -4 - 2 -4
23:39 od3x: ?
23:40 od3x: or 3434 imean
23:40 Aras25: 28
23:40 Aras25: lemme check
23:40 Aras25: 4 2 4 2 will do
23:40 od3x: screenshot ty :>
23:40 Aras25: make sure to arrange this LN thou 00:13:206 (13206|1,13206|2) -
23:41 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294247
23:41 Aras25: there
23:41 Aras25: the SS
23:42 od3x: Allright
23:42 od3x: that was almost what I ended up with
23:42 Aras25: shall we continue?
23:42 od3x: yesh
23:43 od3x: rdy
23:43 Aras25: 00:13:581 (13581|1,13581|0,13956|1,13956|0,13956|3) -
23:43 Aras25: about this...
23:43 Aras25: w8 I'll SS some stuff
23:43 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294265
23:43 Aras25: the left one is your diff
23:44 Aras25: right one is SHANA diff
23:44 Aras25: I think you might want to talk with shana about the diff spread here
23:44 od3x: So in that regard, I'd rather keep aiku's map
23:44 od3x: and have this as unofficial extra or something if it comes to that
23:44 Aras25: you can see you use 2 note for kick and 3 notes for for kick + clap
23:45 Aras25: while shan only use 2 notes for both of them
23:45 od3x: ye
23:45 Aras25: ok
23:45 Aras25: I'll go to next point then
23:45 Aras25: mainly diff spread reasoning
23:46 od3x: kay
23:46 Aras25: 00:24:456 (24456|1,24737|1,25018|1) -
23:46 Aras25: is this LN for vocal?
23:46 od3x: ye
23:47 Aras25: then I suggeest stuff like this ..........
23:48 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294322
23:48 Aras25: focus on vocal so the LN won't be stoo hard to realize that you are mapping the vocal
23:49 Aras25: also, make this 00:25:018 (25018|1) - 2 note
23:49 Aras25: I forgot to, lol
23:49 Aras25: and you don't need 4 note for this 00:25:581 (25581|1,25581|2,25581|3,25581|0) -
23:49 Aras25: 3 is enough
23:49 od3x: That seems pretty good
23:49 Aras25: tell me when you are done
23:50 od3x: rdy
23:51 Aras25: cool
23:51 Aras25: kay then
23:51 Aras25: next will be...
23:52 Aras25: 00:35:659 (35659|1,35659|0) - I'm not sure this LN really necessary
23:52 Aras25: also
23:52 Aras25: the vocal actually starts here
23:52 Aras25: 00:35:612 -
23:52 od3x: oversight
23:52 od3x: tyty
23:54 Aras25: 01:01:956 (61956|1) -
23:54 Aras25: unecessary 2 note
23:54 Aras25: no kick there
23:54 od3x: yush
23:55 od3x: fixd
23:55 Aras25: ok
23:55 Aras25: 01:04:487 (64487|0) - 2 note
23:56 od3x: oh
23:56 od3x: fixd
23:57 Aras25: 01:11:518 (71518|0,71549|1,71581|2,71612|3) -
23:57 Aras25: not 1/8
23:57 Aras25: it is 1/6
23:57 od3x: hoo
23:57 od3x: fixd
23:58 od3x: the next one too 01:13:206 -
23:58 od3x: ?
23:58 Aras25: that one snaps right already at 1/4
23:58 Aras25: owo
23:59 od3x: thought so
00:00 Aras25: next?
00:00 od3x: ye les go
00:00 Aras25: 01:34:581 -
00:00 Aras25: starting there
00:01 Aras25: you can hear the drum is changed into snare every 1/1 beat instead of kick and kick + clap right?
00:01 od3x: yeah
00:01 od3x: Just noticed
00:01 od3x: knew right away what you were going to say
00:01 od3x: haha >.<
00:01 Aras25: let me send some SS
00:01 Aras25: >o<
00:02 od3x: I nerfed the two triples
00:02 Aras25: no no
00:02 Aras25: I mean is this
00:02 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294448
00:03 Aras25: how about emphasize the sanre only there for uniqueness?
00:03 od3x: ooooooooooh
00:03 od3x: I dig that
00:04 od3x: -3-)_b
00:04 od3x: totally feeling that one
00:04 Aras25: yup nice
00:04 Aras25: ah, I see less mistake technically
00:04 Aras25: just some part that's kinda off beat
00:05 Aras25: can I give you tips?
00:05 od3x: Of course
00:05 Aras25: I see you want to emphasize the vocal at some part ye?
00:05 Aras25: and bac synth sound at some part
00:05 Aras25: right?
00:06 Aras25: well
00:06 od3x: Mebeh
00:06 od3x: +
00:06 Aras25: the best way to emphasize vocal like the one you did here
00:06 Aras25: 03:01:581
00:06 Aras25: 03:01:581 -
00:06 Aras25: is to map the vocal only
00:06 Aras25: uwu
00:06 Aras25: sometimes, when you layer too much
00:06 Aras25: ist's just confusing too play
00:07 Aras25: and there comes the time for you to play your "instinct"
00:07 Aras25: and decide which sound I should map
00:07 od3x: mmmmmh
00:07 od3x: I can see that
00:07 Aras25: and which I want to drop off for a moment
00:07 Aras25: =w=)b
00:07 od3x: This one one of the weirder parts definately to map
00:07 Aras25: I suggest vocal only there
00:08 Aras25: will be unique and fun to play
00:08 Aras25: and also, you might want to re- check your map for note count consistency
00:08 Aras25: cause I notice you sometime use 3 notes for kick + clap, but sometimes only 2
00:09 Aras25: owo
00:09 od3x: ~-~
00:09 od3x: I know
00:09 Aras25: cool then
00:09 od3x: ive been lazy after we went over some stuff with Dorian
00:09 Aras25: lol
00:09 Aras25: dorian
00:09 Aras25: just don't get lazy dude
00:09 od3x: lol?
00:09 Aras25: I know dorian owo
00:09 od3x: owo
00:10 Aras25: just so happy to hear his name
00:10 od3x: tell him hi lol
00:10 od3x: you both do good work
00:10 Aras25: feel free to poke me at later time when you feel like have gotten a lot more and want to re- check what to fix =w=)b
00:10 od3x: But finishing off this mod
00:10 od3x: Ima keep the funky part at 03:01:581 -
00:11 od3x: I like it in a weird way -3-
00:11 Aras25: that too is fine of course
00:11 od3x: and recheck hands / jumps for consistency
00:11 Aras25: as long as you have strong reason to shut off those complainer
00:11 od3x: Nothing major to come to your mind?
00:11 od3x: Haa
00:11 od3x: Good point
00:12 Aras25: I've point out the majority of it
00:12 Aras25: and give you some thinking basis so you can improve on youw own =3=
00:12 Aras25: and also
00:12 Aras25: change the BG please
00:12 Aras25: uwu
00:12 od3x: -w-
00:12 Aras25: I find it disturbing dud x(
00:13 od3x: xD
00:13 od3x: second one to point it out
00:13 od3x: maybe I will
00:13 od3x: Thank you so muuch for the mod
00:13 Aras25: ur welcome desu
00:13 od3x: I'll def poke you when this is more polished
00:13 Aras25: shalll I post for now?
00:13 od3x: Sure
00:13 Aras25: yeah, feel free to poke

change BG please ;w;
Topic Starter
njoy

Janko wrote:

Hello o/
I found your map when I browsed queues in search cool sounds. I like S3RL so I decided mod this map

General
Remove from tags "s3rl", "nightcore", "this", "od3x". Artist, title, creator and source shouldn't be in tags

Good Luck
Do did doned. C:

Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:

Aras25 wrote:

IRC stuff
23:30 od3x: Oi!
23:31 od3x: Did your movie end yet?
23:31 od3x: Kappa
23:33 Aras25: hai
23:33 Aras25: wanna do this now?
23:34 od3x: If you got time, sure
23:34 Aras25: cool
23:34 Aras25: now then
23:34 *Aras25 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1190901 S3RL feat. Tamika - Nightcore This [Extra]]
23:35 Aras25: firstly, since you already have this diff
23:35 Aras25: I don't think aiku hyper is required
23:35 Aras25: since the diff spread is sama
23:35 Aras25: *same
23:35 Aras25: (diff spread not SR)
23:36 Aras25: you there>
23:36 Aras25: ?
23:36 od3x: Ye
23:36 od3x: I was thinking about that earlier
23:36 Aras25: see uwu
23:37 Aras25: I'll mod your EXTRA diff then since you asked so
23:37 Aras25: 00:12:081 (12081|1,12174|2,12268|3,12362|1,12456|2,12549|3,12643|1,12737|2,12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) -
23:37 Aras25: see this one?
23:37 od3x: And I still have no ruling yet on if my extra is even rankable
23:37 od3x: ye
23:37 Aras25: no map is unrankable as long as you listen to other and stop being stonehead dick like some specific mapper
23:37 Aras25: uwu
23:37 Aras25: about this
23:37 Aras25: 00:12:081 (12081|1,12174|2,12268|3,12362|1,12456|2,12549|3,12643|1,12737|2,12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) -
23:37 Aras25: I think
23:37 od3x: lol
23:38 od3x: okay bring it on
23:38 Aras25: 00:12:831 (12831|3,12924|1,13018|2,13112|3) - that 4 note, I suggest you to trill them (prefer one hand trill) for the loud vocal echo efect
23:39 Aras25: tell me when you are done owo/
23:39 od3x: as in 2 -4 - 2 -4
23:39 od3x: ?
23:40 od3x: or 3434 imean
23:40 Aras25: 28
23:40 Aras25: lemme check
23:40 Aras25: 4 2 4 2 will do
23:40 od3x: screenshot ty :>
23:40 Aras25: make sure to arrange this LN thou 00:13:206 (13206|1,13206|2) -
23:41 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294247
23:41 Aras25: there
23:41 Aras25: the SS
23:42 od3x: Allright
23:42 od3x: that was almost what I ended up with
23:42 Aras25: shall we continue?
23:42 od3x: yesh
23:43 od3x: rdy
23:43 Aras25: 00:13:581 (13581|1,13581|0,13956|1,13956|0,13956|3) -
23:43 Aras25: about this...
23:43 Aras25: w8 I'll SS some stuff
23:43 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294265
23:43 Aras25: the left one is your diff
23:44 Aras25: right one is SHANA diff
23:44 Aras25: I think you might want to talk with shana about the diff spread here
23:44 od3x: So in that regard, I'd rather keep aiku's map
23:44 od3x: and have this as unofficial extra or something if it comes to that
23:44 Aras25: you can see you use 2 note for kick and 3 notes for for kick + clap
23:45 Aras25: while shan only use 2 notes for both of them
23:45 od3x: ye
23:45 Aras25: ok
23:45 Aras25: I'll go to next point then
23:45 Aras25: mainly diff spread reasoning
23:46 od3x: kay
23:46 Aras25: 00:24:456 (24456|1,24737|1,25018|1) -
23:46 Aras25: is this LN for vocal?
23:46 od3x: ye
23:47 Aras25: then I suggeest stuff like this ..........
23:48 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294322
23:48 Aras25: focus on vocal so the LN won't be stoo hard to realize that you are mapping the vocal
23:49 Aras25: also, make this 00:25:018 (25018|1) - 2 note
23:49 Aras25: I forgot to, lol
23:49 Aras25: and you don't need 4 note for this 00:25:581 (25581|1,25581|2,25581|3,25581|0) -
23:49 Aras25: 3 is enough
23:49 od3x: That seems pretty good
23:49 Aras25: tell me when you are done
23:50 od3x: rdy
23:51 Aras25: cool
23:51 Aras25: kay then
23:51 Aras25: next will be...
23:52 Aras25: 00:35:659 (35659|1,35659|0) - I'm not sure this LN really necessary
23:52 Aras25: also
23:52 Aras25: the vocal actually starts here
23:52 Aras25: 00:35:612 -
23:52 od3x: oversight
23:52 od3x: tyty
23:54 Aras25: 01:01:956 (61956|1) -
23:54 Aras25: unecessary 2 note
23:54 Aras25: no kick there
23:54 od3x: yush
23:55 od3x: fixd
23:55 Aras25: ok
23:55 Aras25: 01:04:487 (64487|0) - 2 note
23:56 od3x: oh
23:56 od3x: fixd
23:57 Aras25: 01:11:518 (71518|0,71549|1,71581|2,71612|3) -
23:57 Aras25: not 1/8
23:57 Aras25: it is 1/6
23:57 od3x: hoo
23:57 od3x: fixd
23:58 od3x: the next one too 01:13:206 -
23:58 od3x: ?
23:58 Aras25: that one snaps right already at 1/4
23:58 Aras25: owo
23:59 od3x: thought so
00:00 Aras25: next?
00:00 od3x: ye les go
00:00 Aras25: 01:34:581 -
00:00 Aras25: starting there
00:01 Aras25: you can hear the drum is changed into snare every 1/1 beat instead of kick and kick + clap right?
00:01 od3x: yeah
00:01 od3x: Just noticed
00:01 od3x: knew right away what you were going to say
00:01 od3x: haha >.<
00:01 Aras25: let me send some SS
00:01 Aras25: >o<
00:02 od3x: I nerfed the two triples
00:02 Aras25: no no
00:02 Aras25: I mean is this
00:02 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7294448
00:03 Aras25: how about emphasize the sanre only there for uniqueness?
00:03 od3x: ooooooooooh
00:03 od3x: I dig that
00:04 od3x: -3-)_b
00:04 od3x: totally feeling that one
00:04 Aras25: yup nice
00:04 Aras25: ah, I see less mistake technically
00:04 Aras25: just some part that's kinda off beat
00:05 Aras25: can I give you tips?
00:05 od3x: Of course
00:05 Aras25: I see you want to emphasize the vocal at some part ye?
00:05 Aras25: and bac synth sound at some part
00:05 Aras25: right?
00:06 Aras25: well
00:06 od3x: Mebeh
00:06 od3x: +
00:06 Aras25: the best way to emphasize vocal like the one you did here
00:06 Aras25: 03:01:581
00:06 Aras25: 03:01:581 -
00:06 Aras25: is to map the vocal only
00:06 Aras25: uwu
00:06 Aras25: sometimes, when you layer too much
00:06 Aras25: ist's just confusing too play
00:07 Aras25: and there comes the time for you to play your "instinct"
00:07 Aras25: and decide which sound I should map
00:07 od3x: mmmmmh
00:07 od3x: I can see that
00:07 Aras25: and which I want to drop off for a moment
00:07 Aras25: =w=)b
00:07 od3x: This one one of the weirder parts definately to map
00:07 Aras25: I suggest vocal only there
00:08 Aras25: will be unique and fun to play
00:08 Aras25: and also, you might want to re- check your map for note count consistency
00:08 Aras25: cause I notice you sometime use 3 notes for kick + clap, but sometimes only 2
00:09 Aras25: owo
00:09 od3x: ~-~
00:09 od3x: I know
00:09 Aras25: cool then
00:09 od3x: ive been lazy after we went over some stuff with Dorian
00:09 Aras25: lol
00:09 Aras25: dorian
00:09 Aras25: just don't get lazy dude
00:09 od3x: lol?
00:09 Aras25: I know dorian owo
00:09 od3x: owo
00:10 Aras25: just so happy to hear his name
00:10 od3x: tell him hi lol
00:10 od3x: you both do good work
00:10 Aras25: feel free to poke me at later time when you feel like have gotten a lot more and want to re- check what to fix =w=)b
00:10 od3x: But finishing off this mod
00:10 od3x: Ima keep the funky part at 03:01:581 -
00:11 od3x: I like it in a weird way -3-
00:11 Aras25: that too is fine of course
00:11 od3x: and recheck hands / jumps for consistency
00:11 Aras25: as long as you have strong reason to shut off those complainer
00:11 od3x: Nothing major to come to your mind?
00:11 od3x: Haa
00:11 od3x: Good point
00:12 Aras25: I've point out the majority of it
00:12 Aras25: and give you some thinking basis so you can improve on youw own =3=
00:12 Aras25: and also
00:12 Aras25: change the BG please
00:12 Aras25: uwu
00:12 od3x: -w-
00:12 Aras25: I find it disturbing dud x(
00:13 od3x: xD
00:13 od3x: second one to point it out
00:13 od3x: maybe I will
00:13 od3x: Thank you so muuch for the mod
00:13 Aras25: ur welcome desu
00:13 od3x: I'll def poke you when this is more polished
00:13 Aras25: shalll I post for now?
00:13 od3x: Sure
00:13 Aras25: yeah, feel free to poke

change BG please ;w;
Do did doned. :C

Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Meiju
Shana's Hardcore
00:01:768 - в этом парте почти на каждой 1/4 ноты, но ты чому то не везде поставил :?
00:36:081 - трипл
00:43:581 - ноту бы на третью колонку, 00:44:331 - 00:45:831 - а отсюда начинать джеки на других колонках
00:49:018 - ноту
01:01:018 - 01:01:206 - 01:01:393 - ноты
01:02:331 - 01:03:081 - 01:03:831 - и т.д - синглы, но если ты даблы ставил на войс, тогда 01:04:581 - 01:10:581 - тут даблы не нужны
01:37:393 - ноту, или начни лн
02:00:362 - вряд ли здесь зайдет 1/12, он не так выделяется как 01:22:581
02:01:393 - ^
02:25:393 - ноту
02:40:018 (160018|2) - начни этот лн 02:40:206 - тут
Extra
00:16:393 - http://puu.sh/tZEM5/34710c90d3.jpg - make sonething like this
00:19:768 - double
00:22:393 - same as first
01:23:174 (83174|1,83549|1,83924|1) - remove and 01:22:862 - 01:23:237 - add
01:23:331 - here's no 1/12, 01:23:331 - 01:23:424 - 01:23:471 - 01:23:518 - sounds only here
01:25:956 - 01:26:706 - 01:27:456 - and etc. - triples should be on these sounds
01:31:393 - double
01:43:393 - add note for double
02:47:706 - 02:48:081 - 02:48:456 - and etc. - triples for these sounds? make doubles
02:49:206 - here triple is ok :^)
02:50:331 - 02:50:706 - 02:51:831 - 02:52:206 - doubles
aiku's Hyper
00:55:581 - continue put notes on 1/2
00:57:081 (57081|2,57456|3) - LNs should finish/start 00:57:643 - here
00:58:768 - ^
01:01:956 - 01:02:706 - 01:03:456 - doubles
01:04:581 - note
01:12:456 (72456|2,72549|1,72643|0,72737|1,72831|2,72924|3,73018|2) - what the hell is this? 01:12:362 - 01:12:643 - 01:12:831 - 01:13:018 - notes should be only here
01:18:456 - these stairs are not following music, put doubles or http://puu.sh/tZGGm/10493f2548.jpg - smth like that
01:23:331 - there is no 1/6
02:55:581 - here starts 1/4, use it
Topic Starter
njoy

Mage wrote:

Extra
00:16:393 - http://puu.sh/tZEM5/34710c90d3.jpg - make sonething like this changed
00:19:768 - double changed
00:22:393 - same as first changed
01:23:174 (83174|1,83549|1,83924|1) - remove and 01:22:862 - 01:23:237 - add I will keep the patterns as they are. After testing, imo the simplified patterns work better with the speed of the bursts
01:23:331 - here's no 1/12, 01:23:331 - 01:23:424 - 01:23:471 - 01:23:518 - sounds only here changed
01:25:956 - 01:26:706 - 01:27:456 - and etc. - triples should be on these sounds I built it this way to avoid jacks but I do think this would make more sense. changed
01:31:393 - double changed
01:43:393 - add note for double changed
02:47:706 - 02:48:081 - 02:48:456 - and etc. - triples for these sounds? make doubles changeeed
02:49:206 - here triple is ok :^) :v)
02:50:331 - 02:50:706 - 02:51:831 - 02:52:206 - doubles changed
Hesitated a bit at first with the minijacks but ended up liking them afterwards!
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Aras
new BG is better than las one imo
Topic Starter
njoy
Undid the mini-jack change purely for comfort, reworked the chorus
Alsty-
forgive my laziness p/5786434

take my star '-')-*
Topic Starter
njoy
Thanks for dem ** Alsty- \('-'

Reworked my two highest diffs with some wise words from Feerum and renamed stuff around
Litharrale
From my queue! Only 2 months late

Folder looks fine.
1|2|3|4
Advanced
00:15:081 (15081|2) - No real reason for this to be a double. Remove to keep the claps emphasized.
00:16:581 (16581|2) - ^
00:18:081 (18081|3) - ^
00:19:581 (19581|0) - ^
etc
00:22:206 (22206|2) - add on 3
00:22:956 (22956|0) - Mapping the vocals instead of the strong drums feels wrong. Perhaps shift the LNs over and add a note on 1 here?
00:31:581 (31581|2) - same issue here with the overmapped doubles.
00:34:206 (34206|1) - add
00:34:956 (34956|0) - same as 00:22:956 (22956|0)
00:41:331 (41331|2) - add
00:47:331 (47331|3) - be consistent in mapping the drum beats. Before you doubled the clap and bass but here it's just a single
00:51:081 (51081|3,51456|0) - don't need to be here
00:52:206 (52206|2) - ^
etc
01:04:956 (64956|3) - Opposite problem in this section. Don't triple half the claps and single the others
01:15:643 (75643|2) - Missing a LOT of drum beats in this section in order to map the stuttering vocals.
01:24:643 (84643|1) - I'm not sure what this note is representing? The tone ends halfway through, the vocals don't fit with the start. Make it more clear
01:25:393 (85393|3) - ^
02:55:018 (175018|0) - add on 1
02:58:018 (178018|3) - add on 4
02:58:393 (178393|3) - add on 4
02:59:706 (179706|2,179706|3) - these end on the blue tick
03:01:018 (181018|1) - add on 2
03:24:456 (204456|2) - This LN either starts later or earlier but not on the white tick
03:27:081 (207081|2) - Missing a lot of drum beats in this section. Link is an example

Another
00:01:581 (1581|0) - Remove one. If higher diffs only have 3 notes here, this shouldn't have 4.
00:10:393 (10393|2) - remove
00:31:393 (31393|0) - remove
00:34:581 (34581|3,34581|0,34581|1,34956|1,34956|3,34956|0) - Why are these triples?
00:35:706 (35706|2) - Not mapping the drum beats to map the vocals is a bad idea
00:53:706 (53706|2) - These are actually 1/6th sliders. (probably don't change them to those though)
01:13:581 (73581|2) - remove one. your pick which
03:01:581 (181581|2) - ^

Shana's Hardcore
00:07:581 (7581|1,7581|3,7581|0) - Leaving out triples until here is really nice. gj
00:11:706 (11706|3,11706|2,11706|0) - Consider making a triple
01:11:893 (71893|3,72081|3,72362|2,72643|1,72831|0,73018|1) - I really liked how od3x left this are blank in this lower diffs. Consider doing the same. Mapping the sample doesn't add anything imo. Plus the lyrics will actually match it if you leave it blank

This is a good map, nice!

Sick song
Topic Starter
njoy

Litharrale wrote:

From my queue! Only 2 months late

Folder looks fine.
1|2|3|4
Advanced
00:15:081 (15081|2) - No real reason for this to be a double. Remove to keep the claps emphasized. tru dat
00:16:581 (16581|2) - ^ ^
00:18:081 (18081|3) - ^ ^
00:19:581 (19581|0) - ^ ^
etc cte
00:22:206 (22206|2) - add on 3 imo fine for <3*
00:22:956 (22956|0) - Mapping the vocals instead of the strong drums feels wrong. Perhaps shift the LNs over and add a note on 1 here? I like the twist + trying to keep it simple
00:31:581 (31581|2) - same issue here with the overmapped doubles. ^
00:34:206 (34206|1) - add ^
00:34:956 (34956|0) - same as 00:22:956 (22956|0) ^
00:41:331 (41331|2) - add whoops
00:47:331 (47331|3) - be consistent in mapping the drum beats. Before you doubled the clap and bass but here it's just a single would feel too off here with no other overlaps on that part (diff)
00:51:081 (51081|3,51456|0) - don't need to be here very true
00:52:206 (52206|2) - ^ keeping for consistency since mapped for the synth sound
etc
01:04:956 (64956|3) - Opposite problem in this section. Don't triple half the claps and single the others lost control of brain
01:15:643 (75643|2) - Missing a LOT of drum beats in this section in order to map the stuttering vocals. keepin it simple
01:24:643 (84643|1) - I'm not sure what this note is representing? The tone ends halfway through, the vocals don't fit with the start. Make it more clear prolly just slid over 1/2 beat on accident, changed
01:25:393 (85393|3) - ^ ^
02:55:018 (175018|0) - add on 1
02:58:018 (178018|3) - add on 4
02:58:393 (178393|3) - add on 4
02:59:706 (179706|2,179706|3) - these end on the blue tick
03:01:018 (181018|1) - add on 2
03:24:456 (204456|2) - This LN either starts later or earlier but not on the white tick pandering for simplicty on 5 above above
03:27:081 (207081|2) - Missing a lot of drum beats in this section. Link is an example Emphasizing vocals with some synth thrown in for this diff, drums not in layering.

Another
00:01:581 (1581|0) - Remove one. If higher diffs only have 3 notes here, this shouldn't have 4. doned
00:10:393 (10393|2) - remove doned
00:31:393 (31393|0) - remove doned
00:34:581 (34581|3,34581|0,34581|1,34956|1,34956|3,34956|0) - Why are these triples? I wish I knew
00:35:706 (35706|2) - Not mapping the drum beats to map the vocals is a bad idea I like it since the vocals are distinct
00:53:706 (53706|2) - These are actually 1/6th sliders. (probably don't change them to those though) Das what I thought
01:13:581 (73581|2) - remove one. your pick which Hopefully picked the right one
03:01:581 (181581|2) - ^ ^


Sick song osu! could use more S3RL but I dont think mania supports it too well on hindsight
Feels good when mods come outta the blue :D Some real good catches here.
Thank you very much for the mod! :idea:
Unpredictable
NO KUDOS FOR THIS POST PLEASE

I had modded this song awhile back and I typically do full mods for the song (of 4k thats under 5*) and I realized this is a good time to get some mods outta of the way. Besides that, enjoy!

Ok let's get started!

1|2|3|4

Advanced
Ok the hp on this I think is too much. For a song that goes up to almost 4 mins is a lot and for more unexperienced players, this can be quite hard. I suggest making the HP somewhere between 7-7.5 and the OD around 7.
00:21:268 (21268|2,21362|0,21456|1) - why not make this into a staircase? Like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7666713 ?
00:50:518 (50518|1,50706|2,50893|1,51081|2,51268|3) - we can change this up, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7724209 ?
00:58:956 (58956|1) - move to column 1
01:00:081 (60081|3,60456|3) - hmm i don't agree with these two notes, I feel as theres not enough emphasize on the song to put two notes there compared to something like 01:01:581 (61581|0,61581|2) - this. I suggest removing them
- also here 01:01:581 I think there should 3 notes(hands) here so add one on c2. doing so will be easier for players to differentiate impacted notes compared to some of the doubles you have in your song.
-switch 01:06:831 (66831|0) - this to column 4 and 01:06:737 (66737|3) - this to column 1. I think this can make it easier for players playing onto 01:07:018 (67018|2) - which is on c3
-just a suggestion, what if you put an SV here? I think it would be cool and a subtle good use of it as it emphasize the sound played (I have no idea what to call it lol) and if you're considering put it to .75 I think. If you've done that, make sure you put another one on 01:13:206 on 1.0 so the part after doesn't slow down as well
01:14:331 - 01:19:581 this part is super weird to play. I can't even explain really as it's going to be super long of me explaining but if you want, catch me in game cause theres a lot of things that could be improved as I think the LNs are off.
01:19:393 since you are doing a stream, why didn't start off here? it can be clearly heard that a note could be heard here
01:22:721 (82721|3,83096|3,83471|3,83846|3) - these LNs I feel are off as well. talk to me in game about them cause its harder for me to explain in a mod
01:36:456 you can put a note here and 01:36:831 here
01:48:081 - 01:49:581 uh im not sure what your really doing here but it doesn't really follow the song.
01:58:768 put a note here (I think column would do best here)
01:58:862 (118862|3) - I suggest moving this to column 1 if you use suggestion above.
02:13:768 (133768|1,133956|1,134143|1) - using stacks like these aren't really appropriate. I would suggest to change them. only use stacks when its a sound that being repeated for a certain amount of times, which in this case it's not doing that
02:16:393 (136393|3) - recommend changing this to column 3
02:13:581 - 02:35:331 throughout this whole part, i just disagree with the stacks you have in this area. it just doesn't feel right or play right as it doesn't reflect any use of repetition of the same sound. i would definitely reconsider changing this area.
02:35:893 (155893|1) - this LN should lead up to 02:36:456
02:36:081 (156081|0) - and this LN should't start 02:36:081 but should start at 02:36:456 and end at 02:37:393. if fixing this, change arrangement of notes so they don't mixed up with the LNs
02:43:581 (163581|1) - this should stop at 02:46:393
02:47:752 (167752|2) - this should start at 02:47:706
- i just want to point these out. I know was criticizing your stacks, but these 02:47:752 (167752|2,168081|2,168456|2,168831|2,169206|1) - are a good use of them. I suggest though that 02:49:206 (169206|1) - this should also go in the third column and 02:49:581 (169581|2) - should go in the 4th
02:54:081 - 02:54:831 why no LN(s) here? you could definitely add some. it feels weird when this part is using a large part of LNs and randomly cuts off like that
03:04:956 (184956|1,184956|2) - I don't agree with this double you got. I'd recommend moving this to column 1
03:19:018 (199018|1,199393|0) - again with these stacks, moving them to another column is my suggestion
03:19:581 (199581|3,199581|2,200331|3,200706|2,201081|2,201831|3,202206|2,202581|2,203331|3,203706|2) - why only have these LNs on column 3 and 4? why not have a balance with column 1-2?
03:32:143 there could be a LN here up to 03:32:331 so I recommend moving 03:31:768 (211768|2) - to column 1 so you can place a LN in column 3
03:46:206 (226206|2,226393|3) - this should be one whole LN, there's no change at all so they shouldn't be separated.

Ok wow that took forever, hope you enjoy it!

I might do more mods for the future, but it is super tiring to do 4 mins of a song that includes 7 diffs XD.

Please contact me though in game! Hopefully we can make an agreement to what I want to explain.

BTW I really like the song (i like hardcore lol). Push for rank! I believe! :D

Cya around sometime! :)
Topic Starter
njoy

[-Steven-] wrote:

NO KUDOS FOR THIS POST PLEASE

I had modded this song awhile back and I typically do full mods for the song (of 4k thats under 5*) and I realized this is a good time to get some mods outta of the way. Besides that, enjoy!

Ok let's get started!

1|2|3|4

Advanced
Ok the hp on this I think is too much. For a song that goes up to almost 4 mins is a lot and for more unexperienced players, this can be quite hard. I suggest making the HP somewhere between 7-7.5 and the OD around 7.
00:21:268 (21268|2,21362|0,21456|1) - why not make this into a staircase? Like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7666713 ?
00:50:518 (50518|1,50706|2,50893|1,51081|2,51268|3) - we can change this up, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7724209 ?
00:58:956 (58956|1) - move to column 1
01:00:081 (60081|3,60456|3) - hmm i don't agree with these two notes, I feel as theres not enough emphasize on the song to put two notes there compared to something like 01:01:581 (61581|0,61581|2) - this. I suggest removing them I think they go well with the accented vocals plus they match the earlier pattern.
- also here 01:01:581 I think there should 3 notes(hands) here so add one on c2. doing so will be easier for players to differentiate impacted notes compared to some of the doubles you have in your song.
-switch 01:06:831 (66831|0) - this to column 4 and 01:06:737 (66737|3) - this to column 1. I think this can make it easier for players playing onto 01:07:018 (67018|2) - which is on c3
-just a suggestion, what if you put an SV here? I think it would be cool and a subtle good use of it as it emphasize the sound played (I have no idea what to call it lol) and if you're considering put it to .75 I think. If you've done that, make sure you put another one on 01:13:206 on 1.0 so the part after doesn't slow down as well Will think about the SV for higher diffs
01:14:331 - 01:19:581 this part is super weird to play. I can't even explain really as it's going to be super long of me explaining but if you want, catch me in game cause theres a lot of things that could be improved as I think the LNs are off. Ima try to hit you up
01:19:393 since you are doing a stream, why didn't start off here? it can be clearly heard that a note could be heard here
01:22:721 (82721|3,83096|3,83471|3,83846|3) - these LNs I feel are off as well. talk to me in game about them cause its harder for me to explain in a mod havent touched them after some BN advice
01:36:456 you can put a note here and 01:36:831 here
01:48:081 - 01:49:581 uh im not sure what your really doing here but it doesn't really follow the song.
01:58:768 put a note here (I think column would do best here) having patterns go from singles to doubles doesn't fit this difficulty level, even for making layering more clear
01:58:862 (118862|3) - I suggest moving this to column 1 if you use suggestion above.
02:13:768 (133768|1,133956|1,134143|1) - using stacks like these aren't really appropriate. I would suggest to change them. only use stacks when its a sound that being repeated for a certain amount of times, which in this case it's not doing that
02:16:393 (136393|3) - recommend changing this to column 3
02:13:581 - 02:35:331 throughout this whole part, i just disagree with the stacks you have in this area. it just doesn't feel right or play right as it doesn't reflect any use of repetition of the same sound. i would definitely reconsider changing this area.
02:35:893 (155893|1) - this LN should lead up to 02:36:456
02:36:081 (156081|0) - and this LN should't start 02:36:081 but should start at 02:36:456 and end at 02:37:393. if fixing this, change arrangement of notes so they don't mixed up with the LNs Its a single sound, changing it up anyway
02:43:581 (163581|1) - this should stop at 02:46:393
02:47:752 (167752|2) - this should start at 02:47:706 <--
- i just want to point these out. I know was criticizing your stacks, but these 02:47:752 (167752|2,168081|2,168456|2,168831|2,169206|1) - are a good use of them. I suggest though that 02:49:206 (169206|1) - this should also go in the third column and 02:49:581 (169581|2) - should go in the 4th as the sound "fades out", so do the sliders
02:54:081 - 02:54:831 why no LN(s) here? you could definitely add some. it feels weird when this part is using a large part of LNs and randomly cuts off like that brainfart
03:04:956 (184956|1,184956|2) - I don't agree with this double you got. I'd recommend moving this to column 1
03:19:018 (199018|1,199393|0) - again with these stacks, moving them to another column is my suggestion
03:19:581 (199581|3,199581|2,200331|3,200706|2,201081|2,201831|3,202206|2,202581|2,203331|3,203706|2) - why only have these LNs on column 3 and 4? why not have a balance with column 1-2? Why balance? It loses the feeling if I just make it like everything else
03:32:143 there could be a LN here up to 03:32:331 so I recommend moving 03:31:768 (211768|2) - to column 1 so you can place a LN in column 3 I didnt want to flood a 2,7* diff too bad. Plenty of spots where they would go in as well.
03:46:206 (226206|2,226393|3) - this should be one whole LN, there's no change at all so they shouldn't be separated.pitch

Ok wow that took forever, hope you enjoy it!

I might do more mods for the future, but it is super tiring to do 4 mins of a song that includes 7 diffs XD.

Please contact me though in game! Hopefully we can make an agreement to what I want to explain.

BTW I really like the song (i like hardcore lol). Push for rank! I believe! :D

Cya around sometime! :)
Holy moley you went ham with this one. Pardon me for taking this long to respond. Needed to cool down for a while. Replied to only the suggestions I rejected.
Thank you for coming back! hehe :idea:
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