1. Eternal (5,82 stars, 1463 notes)

Skeep wrote:

bad mod tbh

00:53:517 (1) - Either make this into two sliders or put the changing point in the slider (idk what it's called) to 00:54:032 - instead. ok
01:09:460 (6) - I would make this into a curved slider, it looks nicer imo but it doesn't really matter lol i think it was planned to be slightly curved, but something got fucked while changing
01:47:003 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - You could maybe change it to something like this? It's basically just putting the circle after the slider right next to it instead of stacking it onto the next one. It would make it more interesting I think. yea sure
03:44:946 (1,1) - I would make these multiple sliders because there's multiple sounds there. I don't think I can hear a sound where they end so it ends up being a bit weird. ill talk to the person in charge of this part
03:56:774 (2) - starts on the wrong tick, it should start on 03:56:860 - same here

I think that's it, I love the map and song good luck going for rank!

xChorse wrote:

Hello, m4m from my queue.

Eternal

You should consider making the OD somewhere around 8.5 and 8.8 because 9 just seems like a bit too much imo. this was od8.5 before because i just wanted to play around with the pp values a bit, but ya ill keep it a bit high considering its dnb
00:24:374 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/XCV73K7.jpg (green applies to some other sliders and yellow for blankets) did something here

00:29:346 (5,6) - I think this is a bit overkill rhythm wise, you could just start 00:29:432 (6) - on 00:29:517 - and end on 00:29:689 - ok

00:35:689 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look very good. Consider moving or changing the shape of 00:36:374 (2) -did something here

00:47:003 (1,2,3,1,2) - pretty cluttered, you could probably change the placements of some of those notes. did something

00:54:546 (3,1) - spacing might be a bit too high. changed something

00:59:689 (7) - copy-paste it, CTRL+H CTRL+J it and replace 01:00:032 (8) - with that. ok

01:15:117 (7,8,1) - awkward flow. o ya

01:36:546 - I think this rhythm works better: https://puu.sh/v4vKx/3a6fa2289e.png ops yea; i remapped this part and this rhythm was left out, thanks for pointing it out

01:37:917 (2,3,4) - I think this should be a burst, map the 1/4s inbetween those notes. ok

03:14:774 (1,1,1,1,1) - overlap is a bit weird imo, you could make it a bit more similar to 01:25:060 (1,1,1,1,1) - ya fixed

03:36:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is the same sound as 01:47:003 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - but it's mapped more like 02:09:289 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I'd suggest either making the spacing increase or making it more like the first one. increased spacing

04:10:917 (7) - You mapped this one for example, but the same sound repeats before every white tick. Right now it looks pretty random so I'd suggest making the triples more consistent. alright

04:27:803 (2,3,4) - I expected a way higher spacing for this part, doesn't really fit the music imo.

04:38:946 (4,5) - ^

04:44:432 (3,4) - this is the same sound as 04:38:946 (4,5) - but is suddenly mapped differently, I honestly like the sliders more, but that's your choice.

There are a lot of parts like that ^

fixed all

Pretty short mod. Most of the other things I would point out would be blankets, but I'm sure you could find them yourself ya, its just a bother tho zz

Very nice song, msg me ingame if I messed something up or you don't understand something. Good luck!

Neoskylove wrote:

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00:29:346 (5,6) - Check DS not sure what you want me to do here, so i suppose i am just going do the same spacing between 5 and 1
01:05:603 (2,3,4) - looks overmapping 02:55:317 (2,3,4) - ya
01:09:974 (1,3) - try to avoid overlap ok
01:42:032 (3,4,5,6,7,9) - blanket ok
01:47:003 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - only this part has overlap pattern, looks weird for me. used to be different, i think this is fine for now
04:17:860 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - looks not so strong music, but this pattern has too many jumps, don't fit with music imo reminded me to add whistle hitsound which is a kick, might change this later though

GL

DakiniBrave wrote:

modding v1, i love getting 1 kds for my mods now 2

Eternal

I don't see a connection between diff name and song tbh but thats just me uhhhhh

1. 00:23:003 (2,3,4) - Since this is a calm section, i would personally have this flow off the slider instead of a sharp angle did something here, i dont think it means much tho
2. 01:05:517 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like you could do something cool with a slider here instead of lower ds burst made two kick sliders here instead
3. 01:09:632 (7,8,1,2) - not a huge fan of how this flows personally, i feel the 1 could be more spaced, perhaps placing it to the right of the 5 note burst might be better? sure
4. 01:28:317 (3,4,5,6,7) - Perhaps just have this directly over where this section was? 01:27:117 (1,2,3,4,1) - moved slightly
5. 01:50:260 (3,4,5,9,3,4,5) - not a huge fan of the positioning of this due to stacking making a not very nice looking overlap (imo) on the 9. Your map does stuff like this a little bit and i feel it just makes the map look a little unpolished, if u could make adjustments here, i think it would improve the aesthetics of the map by a huge margin yea changed stuff here, and looked over and moved some other shit
6. 02:27:374 (3,4) - maybe something like this instead http://puu.sh/zsjCw/48a822ed7b.png ok
7. 02:55:232 (1,2,3,4) - same as before yeah b
8. 03:23:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - idk if im missing something here that justifies this jump section coz imo neither the instruments nor the vocals do i would say its justified because of the same intensity, because the same "pitch" maintains the intensity thus allowing for the same spacing;
   whether its actually necessary though is another case - i think its fine, i've seen worse *cough* pp compilation *cough*
   also like to note - Some of your slider art is fine and i like it, some is kinda ehhh, though this is purely subjective, id suggest trying to not cram so many red nodes close to each other such as 03:56:774 (2) - subjective indeed, but yea it might look a bit odd or weird but hey it was something that i came up with; should be fine though, will put it down for future reference
9. 04:01:403 (1) - personally dont like how this section is basically kiai rhythm just with really low spacing, i feel something else could be done well its like that because this part is literally just the same as the kiai just with less intensity
10. 04:57:117 (5,6,7,8,1) - stuff like this, due to slider leniency you can space the burst and it will still be playable, i feel in its current state it feels very claustrophobic yea, changed something

Decent map, doesnt do anything too special but still good just needs a general polishing cleaning up imo yea i've moved some notes that werent mentioned to improve aesthetics

Seulgij wrote:

rip modding v2 ;-; f
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please decrease the volume the music isn't that loud xd yes
00:21:974 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is the same but there's a smaller rythmic gap between the slider-end (1) and the (2) i changed this a while aho for blanketing purposes but OK
00:44:432 (2,3) - circle slider works better here dont think so
00:47:860 (1) - can be a 3/4 slider instead of the repeat its fine
00:52:660 (2) - why is this curve different compared to the one before? no idea, did something here
01:25:574 (1,1,1,1) - remove the NCs here ok
03:15:289 (1,1,1,1) - ^ ok
04:33:460 (1,1) - ^ not completely, since the svs change a bit
01:47:346 (2,2,2,2,2) - i feel like these should be emphasised more sure
02:27:374 (3,4) - could just follow the linear pattern instead of a slight curve (looks visually better imo)their curve follow their flow, clockwise/counter-clockwise
03:49:060 (3,1) - kinda high spacing for a calm part of the song should be fine

good map, keep it up.

corninho wrote:

hi ALLO

uhh

01:15:803 (2) - you could lower it a bit more, like in x:232 y:56 its fine as it is
01:25:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's really ugly.you could pull them out of the stack same sound
01:49:060 (1) - make this opinion with others 01:48:032 (1,1) - , it would be better i guess sure
03:14:774 (1,2,3,4,5) - same thing for the previous ones same as above

good luck