You should consider making the OD somewhere around 8.5 and 8.8 because 9 just seems like a bit too much imo.
this was od8.5 before because i just wanted to play around with the pp values a bit, but ya ill keep it a bit high considering its dnb00:24:374 (1) -
http://i.imgur.com/XCV73K7.jpg (green applies to some other sliders and yellow for blankets)
did something here00:29:346 (5,6) - I think this is a bit overkill rhythm wise, you could just start 00:29:432 (6) - on 00:29:517 - and end on 00:29:689 -
ok00:35:689 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look very good. Consider moving or changing the shape of 00:36:374 (2) -
did something here00:47:003 (1,2,3,1,2) - pretty cluttered, you could probably change the placements of some of those notes.
did something00:54:546 (3,1) - spacing might be a bit too high.
changed something00:59:689 (7) - copy-paste it, CTRL+H CTRL+J it and replace 01:00:032 (8) - with that.
ok01:15:117 (7,8,1) - awkward flow.
o ya01:36:546 - I think this rhythm works better:
https://puu.sh/v4vKx/3a6fa2289e.png ops yea; i remapped this part and this rhythm was left out, thanks for pointing it out01:37:917 (2,3,4) - I think this should be a burst, map the 1/4s inbetween those notes.
ok03:14:774 (1,1,1,1,1) - overlap is a bit weird imo, you could make it a bit more similar to 01:25:060 (1,1,1,1,1) -
ya fixed03:36:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this is the same sound as 01:47:003 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - but it's mapped more like 02:09:289 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I'd suggest either making the spacing increase or making it more like the first one.
increased spacing04:10:917 (7) - You mapped this one for example, but the same sound repeats before every white tick. Right now it looks pretty random so I'd suggest making the triples more consistent.
alright04:27:803 (2,3,4) - I expected a way higher spacing for this part, doesn't really fit the music imo.
04:38:946 (4,5) - ^
04:44:432 (3,4) - this is the same sound as 04:38:946 (4,5) - but is suddenly mapped differently, I honestly like the sliders more, but that's your choice.
There are a lot of parts like that ^