1. 00:34:806 (4,1) - blanket can be better, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8347207 现在是个歪的
2. 01:26:663 (4,1) - 。我忘了ez能不能放这么靠近的转盘了，是限制转盘前几条白线不能有音还是后来着...但是我还是建议给新手留点反应时间啊2333
   其实大概看了一些好多blanket都能继续优化，不过反正看不出来
   easy果然还是只有nazi可抓

1. 00:43:806 (1,2) - 全程就叠了这一个,是不是改成不叠比较好(虽然没啥必要

1. 00:32:663 - well,there has a drum obviously though I know you are following the vocal,maybe in Normal diff the more important rhythm is drum as it's more clearly.Plus 00:32:877 - after this time there hasn't any 1/1 space you put almost 20 secs,so maybe contain 1/2 rhythm fully is a better choice.
   the rest is perfect,Nice diff!

1. Nothing.

1. 01:07:806 (1,4) - whistle?
2. 恩...反正没法dt

1. 00:16:806 (2,3) - 个人不建议开头扔这种1/4 jump,kiai扔几个没问题但是扔开头显得有些难了(甚至kiai里也没有这种)
2. 00:30:306 (2,3,4) - ..nb
3. 后段1/4 jump比较多...挺好玩但是难死啦

H1me- wrote:

KittyAdventure's Normal
00:14:663 (1) -

个人倾向Blanket

https://puu.sh/wknpb/688957d36d.jpg

其实我是帮别人代改的，我觉得这个还ok啦..
00:44:663 (4) - 加一下finish的音效这个地方加finish比较奇怪....
00:51:092 (2,3,4,5) -

我的辣鸡排列

https://puu.sh/wknFN/3344b612b5.jpg

移动了一下23， 45保持原样
01:29:663 (1) - 删除.把01:29:235 (3) - 拉长到1的位置.正常上音效.我觉得目前这样也还ok啦...
图很好.我只是在挑刺

Normal
00:43:806 (1,2) - 这个在normal难度中可行么?fix
00:54:949 (2) - CRTL+G改了
01:24:949 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排个五边形跳吧.跨度挺大的.主要是想有个往上的flow所以
排列看着巨难受orz哎嘿xP

Pata-Mon wrote:

是的，谢谢

@2ha 帮我在01:07:806 (1) - 加上whistle吧，谢谢！

[Crz]Sword wrote:

mark for mod.
尼玛mons都给你预留好泡了你还找摸1111
[Easy]

1. 00:34:806 (4,1) - blanket can be better, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8347207 现在是个歪的blanket真的搞不掂,,搞不掂....fix
2. 01:26:663 (4,1) - 。我忘了ez能不能放这么靠近的转盘了，是限制转盘前几条白线不能有音还是后来着...但是我还是建议给新手留点反应时间啊2333
   其实大概看了一些好多blanket都能继续优化，不过反正看不出来fix
   easy果然还是只有nazi可抓

[Normal]

1. 00:43:806 (1,2) - 全程就叠了这一个,是不是改成不叠比较好(虽然没啥必要

fix
[KA's Normal]↑maybe need to change to Advanced?lolfix

1. 00:32:663 - well,there has a drum obviously though I know you are following the vocal,maybe in Normal diff the more important rhythm is drum as it's more clearly.Plus 00:32:877 - after this time there hasn't any 1/1 space you put almost 20 secs,so maybe contain 1/2 rhythm fully is a better choice.我觉得这个还口以啦，就是压vocal嘛，关键是这gder在打工中不好意思把人家揪回来看...总而言之我觉得还口以啦
   the rest is perfect,Nice diff!

[Extra]↑4.55星叫做extra大概不大好?这番有没有什么梗可以代替一下这个难度名啊2333懒得想名字啊就酱把........

1. 00:16:806 (2,3) - 个人不建议开头扔这种1/4 jump,kiai扔几个没问题但是扔开头显得有些难了(甚至kiai里也没有这种)这个是辣个bn让我这么搞的_(:зゝ∠)_
2. 00:30:306 (2,3,4) - ..nb啊？
3. 后段1/4 jump比较多...挺好玩但是难死啦

我删一些好了
跑路

Shogud wrote:

Hello!
From my modding queue:


Normal

00:09:520 (1,2) - this just isnt pleasing on the eyesfix
01:09:520 (1) - 01:11:235 (3) - These 2 are the same sound yet mapped differentlyfix
01:23:235 (1) - If you change the last 2 make sure this one is consistent toofix

Extra

00:11:556 (2,3) - The spacing you're using for these doubles is inconsistent throughout_(:зゝ∠)_....I want keep this
00:23:235 (1,2) - This would look better as an actual blanketfix
00:24:306 (5,6) - ^fix
00:29:235 (3,5) - ^fix
00:51:842 (8,1) - This gap feels really uncalled for fix
01:27:949 (6,7) - These would look better if the were parallel or mirrored angleshmmm I think is fine _(:зゝ∠)_

GL on rank!

gottagof4ast wrote:

You asked me for a quick look at the normal so no kds

Normal
00:18:092 (1,2,3) - this rhythm repeats itself a bit too much, it gets pretty boring, so I would try for some variety even if it's only a normal

01:23:235 (1) - There are too many sounds here to actually fit a 3/2 slider in this rhythm

also what is the use of the last inherited timing point as it's notlike there is a spinner fading out there

There is not much too say about the normal as everything is dsed, but it's just really repetetive especially that 1/1 slider, 1/1 slider, circle pattern

Monstrata wrote:

extra

01:29:770 (1) - Imo just delete this, or use a slider at the end. The spinner is really forced and you have to spin to fast just to get a 300 ;p.

normal

00:35:235 (1,2,3) - Why not just use the same rhythm as 00:36:949 (1,2,3) - .

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Do you have metadata source somewhere? if so please link me~ Thats all~ call me back when you've replied!

Monstrata wrote:

Bubbled~ Good luck ^^

Natsu wrote:

yo can I check this map instead for our m4m ?

1. 00:11:020 (2,1) - this needs more spacing according to the music, also the overlap looks bad imo
2. 00:44:663 (5) - add nc?
3. 00:54:092 (1) - touching the hp bar
4. 00:58:592 (2,1) - eh this is super hard to read, since it doesn't follows the logic of your pattern, should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9063493
   

1. 00:58:806 (1) - remove this object, to give more rest after the spinner, also feels better to start the map again at 00:59:235 (1) -

1. 01:20:663 (2,3) - fix blanket

Natsu wrote:

extra

1. 00:11:020 (2,1) - this needs more spacing according to the music, also the overlap looks bad imo
2. 00:44:663 (5) - add nc?
3. 00:54:092 (1) - touching the hp bar
4. 00:58:592 (2,1) - eh this is super hard to read, since it doesn't follows the logic of your pattern, should be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9063493

normal

1. 00:58:806 (1) - remove this object, to give more rest after the spinner, also feels better to start the map again at 00:59:235 (1) -

easy

1. 01:20:663 (2,3) - fix blanket

let me know

Pata-Mon wrote:

这么快的吗！

Natsu wrote: