General- 00:42:975 - 05:05:496 - Not convinced extra red lines are the correct way to remedy these. Will check with other people about this, though you could try ask/fix things too.
- 05:16:363 (3) - Sounds like it's too early, for example. Plus all of the sounds in the break 05:08:223.
- 05:15:681 - Red line here is also making it so the downbeat is off by half a measure, it makes much more sense having the downbeat on the piano chords. You end up resetting the metronome later anyway, when it's these red lines causing a problem in the first place.
Storyboard- 03:16:363 - 05:05:496 - Stars in a night sky are static, so they should move across the sky at the same speed. But for some reason you have some stars moving faster and overtaking other stars which is eehh.
- blur2.jpg and mblur2.jpg usused.
Hathz- 00:19:602 (2,3,4) - I guess I understand why the stacks are different, but I still can't help but feel that it looks weird aesthetically. I think you could get away with stacking them the same since it's early in the map and it's still possible to read based on approach circles, or you could just change the pattern to avoid doing this altogether.
- 01:51:818 (1) - Emphasis on the head of this seems underwhelming since low spacing and previous slider points staight into it. Easiest fix is Ctrl+H and increase spacing, but do whatever.
- 02:29:999 - Lower SV would've been cool for this section but I guess it's fine if you don't want to change.
- 04:16:704 (2,4,1) - Stacks are doing weird thinigs here. Turn on View -> Stacking and make it so first two sliders are neatly stacked.
- 06:24:545 (1) - Similar to before, emphasis is kinda lacking because spacing and previous slider.
- 06:55:568 (5) - Could Ctrl+H so overlap is avoided.
- 06:57:272 (1) - Linear slider like this just seems really out of place since most of this section is using regular curve sliders. Something like this I could see as being more suitable:
- 07:06:477 (5) - Off blanket, might as well fix.
Kawa- 01:36:732 (6) - Stack is broken.
- 04:23:181 (1,3) - Could avoid this overlap if you wanted.
- 04:25:908 (1) - This sort of slider just seems kinda weird to use especially for a 1/2 without any significant sound on it. I would just keep it a regular shape pointing leftwards.
- 04:31:363 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would be cooler if the 1/4 spacing was consistent through this.
- 05:33:068 (2,3) - Reducing spacing for this thing all of a sudden seems kinda odd.
- 06:50:625 (2) - I think there are better choices than doing an overlap like this. For example, this could be stacked on the tail, and then you could move 06:50:454 (1) to stack with 06:49:772 (3).
Pop is for timing concerns, happy to rebubble when that's resolved.