-Mo-d Queue
General
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- 03:16:704 - 05:05:539 - 20 seconnds for a break is pretty long and are pretty boring in my opinion. You could map parts of it with slow sliders or spinners maybe.
- 00:00:000 - Make it so both your inherited and uninherited points are using the same sound samples so it doesn't break anything. Currently the red is using the default soft while the green is using the custom soft.
Storyboard
- 04:18:750 - The lyrics say "mou, もう" at this point so I would consider adjusting your lyrics as such.
- 04:36:818 - It's hard to see "Kimi wa, 君は" so high up in the screen there, so I guess move it? It looks like a mistake to me though.
- 05:05:795 - Any reason for not SBing the words "Tell me"?
- 06:03:579 - Maybe consider moving the "te, て" to this point since that's where that sound is.
Very nice SB though.
Endless
Hathz
- 00:20:454 (5,1,2) - This stacking looks kinda weird to me in my opinion. I'd try to fix this so that it stacks as normal.
- 01:54:204 (5) - Maybe Ctrl+G or rotate this around since this is a fairly different sound to 01:53:863 (4) so it's probably better if the flow is different too.
- 01:55:568 (5,2) - Minor off stack thing if you care about that.
- 02:12:784 (3,4,5) - Poor spacing emphasis in my opinion, the click sound is stronger than the others so I would expect 4-5 to have larger spacing.
- 02:18:409 (3,4) - I'm not sure if the music calls for continuing with increasing the spacing in my opinion.
- 02:54:034 (1) - I would space this further away to emphasise the kick sound personally.
- 03:15:170 (2,1) - Personally I would prefer these as circles to make triples, but its up to you.
- 04:10:568 (7,8,1) - 04:55:227 (3,4,5) - 05:01:875 (2,3,4,1) - 06:21:477 (5,1) - Spacing emphasis thing.
- 06:22:500 (4,5,6) - I don't think I like having such a linear flow for these beats, given that in most other places angles are used to emphasise these beats better.
- 07:04:431 (2,1) - This is poor polarity sine you would normally expect the timing to be a consistent 1/2 rhythm when you suddenly offset this. A potential fix could be making 07:04:431 (2) a slider?
Kawa
- 01:21:477 (4,5,1) - Seems kinda odd to have 4-5 be larger spacing than 5-1 if you listen to the emphasis of those beats.
- 01:28:977 (2) - Maybe consider a Ctrl+G so that the spacing 1-2 isn't so short and that it continues circular flow? I'd say smoother flow and larger spacing suits better.
- 01:29:488 (4,5,6) - Similar point to before, I feel having 4-5 be larger spacing compared to 5-6 would be better to emphasise the click.
- 01:30:511 (2) - Maybe stack this ontop of 01:31:022 (4) so that there's some better spacing emphasis through this combo?
- 01:35:113 (7) - Similar thing again. Fancy patterning, I'll give you that, but I would avoid making 6-7 have small spacing, especially after you emphasised 3 and 5.
- 01:36:818 (1) - - 01:42:784 (3,4,5) - Minor thing, the stack looks like it messed up.
- 01:43:636 (1,2) - I'd probably increase the spacing of these to emphasise the (synth? piano?) sound.
- 01:45:000 (5) - NC here for consistency.
- 01:45:852 (10,11) - Stacking these seems to be inconsistent with how you mapped these sounds, and doesn't really emphasise the kick and click sounds right in my opinion.
- 02:40:227 (5,6) - Minor thing, you could pair these and make them the same shape so it looks neater.
- 02:58:125 - Instead of missing the kick sound with the 1/1 slider, you could make 02:57:954 (3) a reverse to map it instead.
- 02:59:659 - I don't think mapping the kick to a passive slider end is a good idea given that all other clicks have been on an active beat so far.
- 03:02:556 (6,1) - Spacing emphasis thing, maybe move this further apart.
- 03:39:034 (5,6) - As before, I would unstack these to emphasise the kick and click sounds better.
- 03:54:375 (6,1) - 04:32:386 (8,9,1) - 04:34:772 (5,6) - 05:32:215 (3,1) - 06:13:636 (1,2) - 06:18:409 (4,5,6) - 06:36:988 (2,3) - 06:45:000 (1,2,3) - Spacing emphasis thing.
- 04:45:000 (1) - I would adjust the curve of this so it's not so sharp so that it looks a little smoother. - 06:44:318 (3,4) - I would probably pair these and make these the same shape too.
Good luck.
General
- Your banner doesn't work with people who have osu!direct.
- 1920x1080 is the maximum dimensions allowed for SB sprites. flare.jpg is 2000x2000.
- Unused files:
sb\featherD.png
sb\lyrics\300c.png
sb\lyrics\300d.png
- 03:16:704 - 05:05:539 - 20 seconnds for a break is pretty long and are pretty boring in my opinion. You could map parts of it with slow sliders or spinners maybe.
- 00:00:000 - Make it so both your inherited and uninherited points are using the same sound samples so it doesn't break anything. Currently the red is using the default soft while the green is using the custom soft.
Storyboard
- 04:18:750 - The lyrics say "mou, もう" at this point so I would consider adjusting your lyrics as such.
- 04:36:818 - It's hard to see "Kimi wa, 君は" so high up in the screen there, so I guess move it? It looks like a mistake to me though.
- 05:05:795 - Any reason for not SBing the words "Tell me"?
- 06:03:579 - Maybe consider moving the "te, て" to this point since that's where that sound is.
Very nice SB though.
Endless
Hathz
- 00:20:454 (5,1,2) - This stacking looks kinda weird to me in my opinion. I'd try to fix this so that it stacks as normal.
- 01:54:204 (5) - Maybe Ctrl+G or rotate this around since this is a fairly different sound to 01:53:863 (4) so it's probably better if the flow is different too.
- 01:55:568 (5,2) - Minor off stack thing if you care about that.
- 02:12:784 (3,4,5) - Poor spacing emphasis in my opinion, the click sound is stronger than the others so I would expect 4-5 to have larger spacing.
- 02:18:409 (3,4) - I'm not sure if the music calls for continuing with increasing the spacing in my opinion.
- 02:54:034 (1) - I would space this further away to emphasise the kick sound personally.
- 03:15:170 (2,1) - Personally I would prefer these as circles to make triples, but its up to you.
- 04:10:568 (7,8,1) - 04:55:227 (3,4,5) - 05:01:875 (2,3,4,1) - 06:21:477 (5,1) - Spacing emphasis thing.
- 06:22:500 (4,5,6) - I don't think I like having such a linear flow for these beats, given that in most other places angles are used to emphasise these beats better.
- 07:04:431 (2,1) - This is poor polarity sine you would normally expect the timing to be a consistent 1/2 rhythm when you suddenly offset this. A potential fix could be making 07:04:431 (2) a slider?
Kawa
- 01:21:477 (4,5,1) - Seems kinda odd to have 4-5 be larger spacing than 5-1 if you listen to the emphasis of those beats.
- 01:28:977 (2) - Maybe consider a Ctrl+G so that the spacing 1-2 isn't so short and that it continues circular flow? I'd say smoother flow and larger spacing suits better.
- 01:29:488 (4,5,6) - Similar point to before, I feel having 4-5 be larger spacing compared to 5-6 would be better to emphasise the click.
- 01:30:511 (2) - Maybe stack this ontop of 01:31:022 (4) so that there's some better spacing emphasis through this combo?
- 01:35:113 (7) - Similar thing again. Fancy patterning, I'll give you that, but I would avoid making 6-7 have small spacing, especially after you emphasised 3 and 5.
- 01:36:818 (1) - - 01:42:784 (3,4,5) - Minor thing, the stack looks like it messed up.
- 01:43:636 (1,2) - I'd probably increase the spacing of these to emphasise the (synth? piano?) sound.
- 01:45:000 (5) - NC here for consistency.
- 01:45:852 (10,11) - Stacking these seems to be inconsistent with how you mapped these sounds, and doesn't really emphasise the kick and click sounds right in my opinion.
- 02:40:227 (5,6) - Minor thing, you could pair these and make them the same shape so it looks neater.
- 02:58:125 - Instead of missing the kick sound with the 1/1 slider, you could make 02:57:954 (3) a reverse to map it instead.
- 02:59:659 - I don't think mapping the kick to a passive slider end is a good idea given that all other clicks have been on an active beat so far.
- 03:02:556 (6,1) - Spacing emphasis thing, maybe move this further apart.
- 03:39:034 (5,6) - As before, I would unstack these to emphasise the kick and click sounds better.
- 03:54:375 (6,1) - 04:32:386 (8,9,1) - 04:34:772 (5,6) - 05:32:215 (3,1) - 06:13:636 (1,2) - 06:18:409 (4,5,6) - 06:36:988 (2,3) - 06:45:000 (1,2,3) - Spacing emphasis thing.
- 04:45:000 (1) - I would adjust the curve of this so it's not so sharp so that it looks a little smoother. - 06:44:318 (3,4) - I would probably pair these and make these the same shape too.
Good luck.