Thank you very much!
Hobbes2 wrote:requested by kisses, short mod
these combos could be 1 measure long, they dont have to be 2
01:05:454 (1,2) - well this pattern would look much better and cleaner if it was blanketed. looks kinda sloppy atm applies to all of these
Fixed, maybe I changed the spacing a bit too much...
01:18:238 (5,6,7) - line these up properly. copy paste 5 and 6 and move that on top of 6 to get the placement for 7
01:37:414 - This drum is rather prominent so i prefer it to be mapped
01:38:778 - triplet? seems it would be more consistent
Almost felt like I made too many triplets but this one still fits, done
01:38:863 (3,1) - avoid coming this close to overlapping, some more distance between the objects would be nice
Not sure why I used such low spacing there, fixed
01:42:954 (5) - rotate twice and ctrl+G? better flow to 6 that way
I don't think it makes much of a difference but I guess it looks better, done~
01:48:750 (1) - this NC is not necessary
That NC ninja'd its way in there, fixed
02:38:181 (1,2) - this stack feels inconsistent to me, would rather it just be normal movement
CTRL+G'd 2 & 3 until I come up with a better pattern
02:57:613 (3,4,1) - this all feels really cramped to me
Changed, should be better now
03:50:795 (2) - NC not needed, also the lyricist does some cool 1/3 vocals here you could map em out!
I messed around a bit with 1/3 rhythms but nothing seems to fit that well...
03:58:977 (2) - the one fourth gaps are not usually spaced like this, keep it consistent with the other ones in this area (by using low spacing)
Reduced spacing a bit
A lot of the stuff that can be improved will be fixed over time through mods, like blankets and aesthetics. You guys did a good job overall in terms of rhythm (outside of a general lack of 1/4 like I mentioned). The storyboard is pretty cool.