m-flo + daoko - IRONY (el poco maro Remix)

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Kawa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 9, 2018 at 6:22:39 PM

Artist: m-flo + daoko
Title: IRONY (el poco maro Remix)
Source: 鷹の爪GO 〜美しきエリエール消臭プラス〜
Tags: collab hathz dnb marathon Taka no Tsume GO Utsukushiki Elleair Shoushuu Plus Himitsukessha Eagle Talon 秘密結社
BPM: 176
Filesize: 16489kb
Play Time: 07:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Endless (4.64 stars, 1393 notes)


Download: m-flo + daoko - IRONY (el poco maro Remix)
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Collab with Hathz



Big thanks to:

  • Hathz for the Gumi render and that banner holy crap (and for bearing with me for so long lmao)
    Neno Atsuki for allowing me to use the lyrics from this map (check it out)
    Bonsai for helping with the timing
    -Mo- and Kibbleru for pushing the beatmap forward
    Lanturn for fixing the metadata
    Hobbes2
    marth0
    heyronii
    Shyotamaze
    Mombei
    Arbane
    Trynna
    Net0
    Warpyc
    Curisu
    zev
    - Yoshimaro -
    Rizen
    Sidetail
    Cherry Blossom
    Reazen
    Kawashiro
    Secretpipe

    Thank you! :D
00:00:000 - 01:05:454 | Hathz
01:05:454 - 01:49:090 | Kawa
01:49:090 - 02:32:727 | Hathz
02:32:727 - 02:43:636 | Kawa
02:43:636 - 02:54:545 | Hathz
02:54:545 - 03:05:454 | Kawa
03:05:454 - 03:16:363 | Hathz
03:27:272 - 04:00:000 | Kawa
04:00:000 - 04:21:818 | Hathz
04:21:818 - 04:32:727 | Kawa
04:32:727 - 04:43:636 | Hathz
04:43:636 - 04:54:545 | Kawa
04:54:545 - 05:05:454 | Hathz
05:15:681 - 05:49:090 | Kawa
05:49:090 - 06:10:909 | Hathz
06:10:909 - 06:21:818 | Kawa
06:21:818 - 06:32:727 | Hathz
06:32:727 - 06:54:545 | Kawa
06:54:545 - 07:16:363 | Hathz
Hobbes2
requested by kisses, short mod

00:04:090 (5) - I think the red tick should be mapped. maybe circle on 00:04:090 - on a 1/2 slider on the red tick

00:09:545 (4,5) - ^ for a similar reason to the above id ctrl+g the rhythm. makes the vocals clickable which I think is important here

and same for this area pretty much, at least until the beat kicks in

00:22:500 (3,4,1) - I think this pattern would be improved if you could move so that its halfway between 3 and 4.

00:28:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh not really a fan here, the music doesnt really seem like it would call for a bunch of circles in a row equally spaced like this. 00:29:659 (6) - could be a slider
00:36:477 (5) - ^ hm looking at it now it might be fine. up to you I suppose

00:42:272 (2) - NC?

these combos could be 1 measure long, they dont have to be 2

01:05:454 (1,2) - well this pattern would look much better and cleaner if it was blanketed. looks kinda sloppy atm applies to all of these

01:18:238 (5,6,7) - line these up properly. copy paste 5 and 6 and move that on top of 6 to get the placement for 7

01:37:414 - This drum is rather prominent so i prefer it to be mapped

01:38:778 - triplet? seems it would be more consistent

01:38:863 (3,1) - avoid coming this close to overlapping, some more distance between the objects would be nice

01:42:954 (5) - rotate twice and ctrl+G? better flow to 6 that way

01:48:750 (1) - this NC is not necessary

@Hathz your part here lacks 1/4 rhythms which kinda confuses me. it is a dnb song after all! sounds like these blue tick hihats 01:52:414 - sound good spots for triplets. things like that, you could spice up this section by using some more 1/4

02:38:181 (1,2) - this stack feels inconsistent to me, would rather it just be normal movement

02:48:494 (6,8) - are overmapped

02:57:613 (3,4,1) - this all feels really cramped to me

03:15:852 (2) - would prefer more spacing to this note, this pattern feels kinda awkward atm.

03:16:193 (4) - giving this a jump kinda dilutes the emphasis on 3 and 1 which are the stronger sounds

03:50:795 (2) - NC not needed, also the lyricist does some cool 1/3 vocals here you could map em out!

03:58:977 (2) - the one fourth gaps are not usually spaced like this, keep it consistent with the other ones in this area (by using low spacing)

A lot of the stuff that can be improved will be fixed over time through mods, like blankets and aesthetics. You guys did a good job overall in terms of rhythm (outside of a general lack of 1/4 like I mentioned). The storyboard is pretty cool.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kawa

Hobbes2 wrote:

requested by kisses, short mod

these combos could be 1 measure long, they dont have to be 2

01:05:454 (1,2) - well this pattern would look much better and cleaner if it was blanketed. looks kinda sloppy atm applies to all of these
Fixed, maybe I changed the spacing a bit too much...

01:18:238 (5,6,7) - line these up properly. copy paste 5 and 6 and move that on top of 6 to get the placement for 7
Done

01:37:414 - This drum is rather prominent so i prefer it to be mapped
Done

01:38:778 - triplet? seems it would be more consistent
Almost felt like I made too many triplets but this one still fits, done

01:38:863 (3,1) - avoid coming this close to overlapping, some more distance between the objects would be nice
Not sure why I used such low spacing there, fixed

01:42:954 (5) - rotate twice and ctrl+G? better flow to 6 that way
I don't think it makes much of a difference but I guess it looks better, done~

01:48:750 (1) - this NC is not necessary
That NC ninja'd its way in there, fixed

02:38:181 (1,2) - this stack feels inconsistent to me, would rather it just be normal movement
CTRL+G'd 2 & 3 until I come up with a better pattern

02:57:613 (3,4,1) - this all feels really cramped to me
Changed, should be better now

03:50:795 (2) - NC not needed, also the lyricist does some cool 1/3 vocals here you could map em out!
I messed around a bit with 1/3 rhythms but nothing seems to fit that well...

03:58:977 (2) - the one fourth gaps are not usually spaced like this, keep it consistent with the other ones in this area (by using low spacing)
Reduced spacing a bit

A lot of the stuff that can be improved will be fixed over time through mods, like blankets and aesthetics. You guys did a good job overall in terms of rhythm (outside of a general lack of 1/4 like I mentioned). The storyboard is pretty cool.

Good luck~
Thank you very much!
Hathz

Hobbes2 wrote:

requested by kisses, short mod

00:04:090 (5) - I think the red tick should be mapped. ok

00:09:545 (4,5) - ^ for a similar reason to the above id ctrl+g the rhythm. no, the slider would end up on a clap in the drum track

00:22:500 (3,4,1) - I think this pattern would be improved if you could move so that its halfway between 3 and 4. fair enough

00:28:977 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - eh not really a fan here, the music doesnt really seem like it would call for a bunch of circles in a row equally spaced like this. fair enough


00:42:272 (2) - NC? ok

@Hathz your part here lacks 1/4 rhythms which kinda confuses me. it is a dnb song after all! sounds like these blue tick hihats 01:52:414 - sound good spots for triplets. things like that, you could spice up this section by using some more 1/4 it's a calm song, i don't feel like it needs it.

02:48:494 (6,8) - are overmapped it's a dnb song

03:15:852 (2) - would prefer more spacing to this note, this pattern feels kinda awkward atm. fixed some stuff around there since there was an overlap as well

03:16:193 (4) - giving this a jump kinda dilutes the emphasis on 3 and 1 which are the stronger sounds ^
Thanks for your mod.
marth0
hi, from #modreqs :)

[Endless]

Just a little idea. how about making all the sliders like this 00:02:386 (6) flow like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7149676 you do it here 00:05:113 (8) and here 00:13:295 (6) and looks pretty good imo. this of course until 00:21:818 (1)

00:38:693 (2,3,4) - don't make a straigh line here. do it like this or similar. 00:35:965 (2,3,4)
00:53:863 (1) - personally I would make stacked 3 singles here.
01:25:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this might be a little nazi but rotate 10º this so it flows better with 01:25:738 (4)
01:59:829 (6) - move this down to avoid the overlap. it feels off because everything else isn't overlapped.
02:04:602 (3) - ^ same.

02:45:255 (2,3) - move this down as you do here 02:39:801 (2,3) its a nice notice that this is actually a collab ^^
02:47:301 (4,5) - ^ same.
02:48:238 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this plays a little weird. maybe just crtl+H and rotate 90º.

03:40:568 (5,1) - blank these better with 03:40:056 (4)
04:11:250 (2,3) - blank this

06:37:159 (3,4,5,6,7) - space this so 6 is the one that is further from the others.

love the song and the SB.
keep up the good work ;)
Topic Starter
Kawa

marth0 wrote:

hi, from #modreqs :)

[Endless]
01:25:909 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - this might be a little nazi but rotate 10º this so it flows better with 01:25:738 (4)
Done~

03:40:568 (5,1) - blank these better with 03:40:056 (4)
Fixed

06:37:159 (3,4,5,6,7) - space this so 6 is the one that is further from the others.
Increased the spacing between 5 & 6 a bit so it should be fine now

love the song and the SB.
keep up the good work ;)
Thanks for the mod!
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