1. Ah! Easy (0.98 stars, 55 notes)
2. Ah! Hard (4.59 stars, 190 notes)
3. Ah! Normal (3.96 stars, 119 notes)
4. Ah! Ozzy's Taiko (4.83 stars, 315 notes)
5. Ah! Phyrearms' Insane (4.94 stars, 198 notes)

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Ah! Normal] (I like regular difficulty names better but okay)
00:29:089 (1,2,3) - Was this supposed to form a right angle? Ooos D:
01:23:180 (1) - This spinner starts at a weird time. Fixed
I would keep the kiai time going until the end, in my opinion. Maybe even decrescendo? It ends when the music slows so I think it's okay there.

I was feeling nice, so here is your guest Insane! Rename it to whatever you want and pm me if I get mods.


Lastly, I hope you don't mind if I test out my storyboarding "skills" on this map. Make sure to download the image and put it in your Song Folder!

Copy into .osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"kawaii desu.jpg",320,240
F,0,15150,15756,1,0
S,0,15150,15756,1,1.28
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"kawaii desu.jpg",320,240
F,0,36968,37574,1,0
S,0,36968,37574,1,1.28
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"kawaii desu.jpg",320,240
F,0,87271,87877,1,0
S,0,87271,87877,1,1.28
//Storyboard Sound Samples

dkun wrote:

Ah! Hard
00:20:286 (4,5) - Consistency, match with vvvDone
00:22:105 (5,6) - Consistency, match with ^^ Done
00:22:711 (1,2,3,4,1) - the spacing on this is just what.Done
00:23:620 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is ugly, re arrange to something nicer? Done
00:25:438 (4) - move a grid to the left Done
00:33:317 (5) - move to white tick Done
00:35:438 (2,3) - stack? Done
00:36:044 (1,2,3,4) - what is this I don't even (rearrange 3,4) Done
00:41:196 (7) - grid leftDone
00:41:499 (8) - this would go great if repeated Done
00:42:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^if taken, please re-arrange Done
00:45:741 (1,2) - what the balls are these slider shapes Oh shit fixed.
00:49:680 (6) - snap to the end of 5, it's off Done
00:50:286 (2,3,4,5) - move down a grid Completely re-did this combo.
00:51:499 (6,7,8,9) - 6, put on 2 Done

Overall
Good mapset!
SG's Insane is specifically good. Good luck, have my star. Ty I'll need some koon luck.

1. The hitsounds's volume is too low, it's not very agreable to play when we can't hear the hitsounds clearly. So put ~60% to the hitsounds's volume ? They will be clearly hearable and they will not be loud.
2. Add "Aa! Megami-sama!" in the tags ? (The japanese anime's title)
3. As Haneii said, your mp3 is 320kbps and the max bitrate allowed in osu! is 192kbps. You have to re-encode it. (don't forget to fullsubmit after fix)

1. The spinner-background.jpg is 1024x768, it has to be 1023x692, so resize it (don't forget to fullsubmit after fix)

1. The map will be fluider with AR2 than with AR1
2. 00:46:044 (1) - Finish don't really fits here, it would fit better on the beginning of 00:46:650 (2).
3. 01:01:196 (3) - I don't think this kind of sliders are good in easy difficulties, at first sight, it looks like a normal rectilinear slider, but its path is made such that the "slider speed is slower" than the other sliders, if you see what I mean. That's why it can disrupt new players if the "slider speed" changes suddenly without any musical reason.
4. 01:19:377 (3) - The same for this slider.
5. 01:25:741 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really understand this part, the notes don't follow the music. It would be largely better if you make this part a spinner.

1. 00:26:953 (5) - The beginning of this slider don't really follow the vocal and it's kinda weird as the rest of the slider follows the vocal. So this slider should start 1/2 later (at 00:27:256)
2. 01:01:196 (4) - A finish would sound nice on the beginning of this slider :p
3. 01:22:711 (2) - Make this circle a 1/4 long slider like (1), else, the effect you wanted to do with (1) is broken :/
   
   SPOILER

   

1. AR5 is not enough for a hard difficulty, with AR5, There are too much notes on the playfield and it makes the map practically unreadable, AR6 or AR7 would fits better.
2. 00:41:196 (7) - The pattern will look nicer if you move this note 1 grid down
3. 01:16:802 (2) - The spot where this slider ends is not really appropriate to the music. If you want to follow the vocal, remove a repeat, if you want to follow the drums, add a repeat, but this slider can't ends on a blue tick :/

1. All notes are not correctly snapped, surely due to an offset change
2. 00:37:423 (1,2) - These circles are a bit offscreen on the top border, they may be hided by some custom lifebars. Move them 3~4 grid down, it will not make any spacing problem.

1. Two objects are not correctly snapped, check AImod

Haneii wrote:

Sorry for the late mod ;_;

~General~
Mp3 is 320kbps – max bitrate for mp3 is 192
Not sure what the “kawaii desu.jpg” in the folder is for o_O. It’s used in the .osb but it isn't doing anything at the moment lol (sb not done yet?)
Kiai time should start at 01:01:196 and end at 01:25:438 (prob forgot to readjust timing sections after a timing change)
Add ztrot to tags (atm it's only in the easy diff)

~Ah! Hard~
00:41:499 (8) – spacing OMG NAZI IT WAS ONLY 2 GRIDS jk ily.
01:02:408 - 01:07:862 – think the claps are on the wrong notes (sounds odd). I suggest taking the clap off the end of the spinner and remove the claps in btwn these times. Start the clap pattern at 01:03:014 (2) and continue every 2nd 1/1 note like you’ve been doing . Woopsie didn't notice I did that.

~Ah! SG's Insane~
AiMod is picking up a lot of unsnapped notes x_x
00:44:847 (6) – bring it down a bit? Hp bar overlaps it a bit
00:56:362 (1) – Don’t think this slider is rankable

About time this song got mapped. Good luck lizzy ^_^

~Twinkle twinkle little star~

KuraiPettan wrote:

Random mod~

General

1. The hitsounds's volume is too low, it's not very agreable to play when we can't hear the hitsounds clearly. So put ~60% to the hitsounds's volume ? They will be clearly hearable and they will not be loud. Hmmm yeah I'll got with 60%
2. Add "Aa! Megami-sama!" in the tags ? (The japanese anime's title) Hmmmm yeah this would make more sense.
3. As Haneii said, your mp3 is 320kbps and the max bitrate allowed in osu! is 192kbps. You have to re-encode it. (don't forget to fullsubmit after fix)

Gonna make someone fix it for me :3

Skin

1. The spinner-background.jpg is 1024x768, it has to be 1023x692, so resize it (don't forget to fullsubmit after fix)

Got a new spinner BG.

Ah! ztrot's Easy

1. The map will be fluider with AR2 than with AR1 Changed.
2. 00:46:044 (1) - Finish don't really fits here, it would fit better on the beginning of 00:46:650 (2). Changed.
3. 01:01:196 (3) - I don't think this kind of sliders are good in easy difficulties, at first sight, it looks like a normal rectilinear slider, but its path is made such that the "slider speed is slower" than the other sliders, if you see what I mean. That's why it can disrupt new players if the "slider speed" changes suddenly without any musical reason. I think it's fine.
4. 01:19:377 (3) - The same for this slider.
5. 01:25:741 (2,3,4,5) - I don't really understand this part, the notes don't follow the music. It would be largely better if you make this part a spinner.

There's two clap sounds there, I can hear them just fine.

Ah! Normal

1. 00:26:953 (5) - The beginning of this slider don't really follow the vocal and it's kinda weird as the rest of the slider follows the vocal. So this slider should start 1/2 later (at 00:27:256) Changed.
2. 01:01:196 (4) - A finish would sound nice on the beginning of this slider :p Ooo yeah I like that.
3. 01:22:711 (2) - Make this circle a 1/4 long slider like (1), else, the effect you wanted to do with (1) is broken :/ Can't do that since it'll be to close to the spinner, I had it like that before though.
   
   SPOILER

   

Ah! Hard

1. AR5 is not enough for a hard difficulty, with AR5, There are too much notes on the playfield and it makes the map practically unreadable, AR6 or AR7 would fits better. Changed.
2. 00:41:196 (7) - The pattern will look nicer if you move this note 1 grid down Nope
3. 01:16:802 (2) - The spot where this slider ends is not really appropriate to the music. If you want to follow the vocal, remove a repeat, if you want to follow the drums, add a repeat, but this slider can't ends on a blue tick :/

Changed.

Ah! SG's Insane

1. All notes are not correctly snapped, surely due to an offset change
2. 00:37:423 (1,2) - These circles are a bit offscreen on the top border, they may be hided by some custom lifebars. Move them 3~4 grid down, it will not make any spacing problem.

Ah! Yuna's Taiko

1. Two objects are not correctly snapped, check AImod

Well-done map Star~

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Easy]
Looks very lazy but good =w=
[Normal]
Same, lol.

01:19:377 (3) - Curve it around better ;__; Woops one for the lines was crooked on there didn't see T_T
[Hard]
01:10:590 (2,3,4) - make 2 and 3 flow into 4 :< Don't get what you're saying here.

But it's fine ww
[Insane]
SAPPHY I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

...but it seems you have many unsnapped objects. Fix daaat.
[Taiko]
- Make the slider velocity 1.4. This looks better.
- You have 2 unsnapped objects. Snap them!

00:17:256 (11,12) - katu katu?

00:20:741 (27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - Uh, patterns this long, even though the song is slow, don't seem to fit. Up to five would be fine, but this, this should probably be shortened. I'd recommend removing 00:21:499 (32).

But uh, you know, it's your decision lol.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yeah so I'm just saying hi here and whatnot.

[General]
- All your inheriting sections are unsnapped. Move all of them back 15 milliseconds. (already completed in my diff)
- The difficulty spread is kind of meh, but I can live.

[ztrot stuff]
00:33:923 (4) - This overlaps with (2) in a very ugly way, so reposition it somehow. k
00:38:165 (1,2,1,1) - Rework the new combos somehow? There are a lot here... Made one combo, oh you ztrot.
01:25:741 (2,3,4,5) - There are no 1/2 notes or stacks in the map other than here, so it would be nice if you could map this some other way. I really like this so I'll fight to keep it but if a BAT/MAT tells me the same I'll change it.
- Get someone like RandomJibberish to harp on your sliders. OH GOD.

[Normal But Really a Hard]
00:52:105 (1) - Why is there a clap here? woops
00:56:650 (3) - This doesn't fit the vocals perfectly but I don't know what else you would do. Actually it does. O_o
01:11:499 (3) - Random clap again. DAMMIT CLAPS GO HOME.
01:12:711 (3) - ^ ...
01:22:559 (1) - Remove New Combo. Same thing about not following the vocals. Slider fits and the singles notes are following the hitsounds that go through the whole map.

[Hard But Really an Insane]
- Because you already have two giant spinners at the beginning and ends of the map, it would be cool if you could map through the other ones. Honestly I've tried to map through it like 3 times, but i keeps ending up turning out like utter shit. :/
00:33:317 (5) - Could you put the note somewhere that's not under the slider?Sure

[SG's Insane]
Oh hi ~

[Yuna's Taiko]
Yay drums

Okay, so my updated version is below. Happy mapping.

Jarby wrote:

Normal:

01:05:741 (2) - Spacing got a bit off here, so move this up a space.
01:22:559 (1) - Might want to move this 1/4 forward and resnap to fit the vocals.

ztrot wrote:

SapphireGhost I don't really think the sliders are bad if you don't like my squiggles that is your problem

Jarby wrote:

Damnit Lizzehb.

Normal:

01:21:953 (1,1) - Move these both 1/4 forward.

Don't give this post kudosu etc

Jarby wrote:

Bubbling 'cause she did that shit.