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Sorry for this late-as-hell mod 
But better late than never?
[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
well...nothing here, just some suggestions:
00:35:751 (1) - Maybe start this slider 1/1 earlier (00:35:145) to match the vocal section?
00:44:236 (2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider here instead? http://puu.sh/7SyV
01:17:569 (X) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider to end on 01:18:175 (1) to match the vocals? http://puu.sh/7SyN
[Ah! Normal]
The 2.0 SV seems a bit much especially for the first, more calm part of the song (all non-KIAI parts). It does fit very well in KIAI. Maybe use a slighty reduced SV multiplier for non-KIAI parts (~0,8x) combined with a slightly higher distance spacing (1,00x non-KIAI, keep 0,80x for KIAI). You'll have to rearrange all the sliders and spacings but you probably know this. The absolute distances between notes will stay almost the same for the non-KIAI parts after the changes but the slightly reduced SV fits much better in my oppinion.
00:03:024 (1,2,3) - first combo is set to 0,8x distance spacing but 2nd combo (00:04:842 (1,2,3,4)) starts off with 1,0x and ends with 0,8x and 0,9x. Is this intended or just by accident? I'd stick to one fixed spacing throughout a normal-diff and keep it that way as long as you don't have any SV changes (1,0x if you add the SV multiplier; 0,8x if you don't). Maybe disable grid-snapping to place the notes more exactly (you can hold [Ctrl] to snap them in line every 45° if you want to do straight lines).
00:23:630 (3) - I really didn't expect the 3x repeats in the first play, especially with all those 1x repeats before. It fits quite well but those unexpected kicksliders tend to throw off beginners (the "normal" players)
00:25:145 (2) - Remove the repeat to match the vocals? (like 00:19:690 (1,2))
00:56:660 (3) - I suggest keeping the vocal-follow you established before and therefore start this slider 1/4 later on 00:56:812 (use 25% or 50% to hear what I mean)
01:13:024 (4) - Maybe remove the repeat to fit the vocals
01:16:660 (7) - ^
Overall some sliders could be curved nicer around their neighbours but it is nothing major nor is it really necessary...just some cosmetic stuff if you want to make it look better:
before: http://puu.sh/7SCR after: http://puu.sh/7SDe
before: http://puu.sh/7SDi after: http://puu.sh/7SDn
[Ah! Hard]
00:27:266 (1) - Spinner ending should be 1/4 earlier on white tick. If you want to keep it consider silencing (5%-ing) the ending
00:48:781 (5) - for sliders covering two notes I suggest using the sharp turn (red dot) exactly where the middle note is (especially if this note is a big white tick/downbeat!!!) http://puu.sh/7SEd
done for you with (intended 2x jump) spacing to following combo:
01:13:175 (2) - add finish for ending point to make it consistent with 01:10:903 (4)?
01:22:115 (1,2) - personally I wouldn't overmap those two vocals, maybe just map them as they are (two notes each: just remove the repeats)
This map flows well and fits the song just right! I like it
[Ah! Phyre]
AR9 really doesn't go well with this one
AR8 fits much better imo.
Other than that: Some weird spacing and jump-distance decisions but it is playable 1st time and therefore I can't complain. (for insane diffs anyway). Doesn't have the same good flow of the [Hard] but differences in mapping style keep everything fresh and interesting.
Overall a well made mapset with a nice SB (as in "it doesn't bother me while playing"). Hope my suggestions help a bit
+1
But better late than never?[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
well...nothing here, just some suggestions:
00:35:751 (1) - Maybe start this slider 1/1 earlier (00:35:145) to match the vocal section?
00:44:236 (2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider here instead? http://puu.sh/7SyV
01:17:569 (X) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider to end on 01:18:175 (1) to match the vocals? http://puu.sh/7SyN
[Ah! Normal]
The 2.0 SV seems a bit much especially for the first, more calm part of the song (all non-KIAI parts). It does fit very well in KIAI. Maybe use a slighty reduced SV multiplier for non-KIAI parts (~0,8x) combined with a slightly higher distance spacing (1,00x non-KIAI, keep 0,80x for KIAI). You'll have to rearrange all the sliders and spacings but you probably know this. The absolute distances between notes will stay almost the same for the non-KIAI parts after the changes but the slightly reduced SV fits much better in my oppinion.
00:03:024 (1,2,3) - first combo is set to 0,8x distance spacing but 2nd combo (00:04:842 (1,2,3,4)) starts off with 1,0x and ends with 0,8x and 0,9x. Is this intended or just by accident? I'd stick to one fixed spacing throughout a normal-diff and keep it that way as long as you don't have any SV changes (1,0x if you add the SV multiplier; 0,8x if you don't). Maybe disable grid-snapping to place the notes more exactly (you can hold [Ctrl] to snap them in line every 45° if you want to do straight lines).
00:23:630 (3) - I really didn't expect the 3x repeats in the first play, especially with all those 1x repeats before. It fits quite well but those unexpected kicksliders tend to throw off beginners (the "normal" players)
00:25:145 (2) - Remove the repeat to match the vocals? (like 00:19:690 (1,2))
00:56:660 (3) - I suggest keeping the vocal-follow you established before and therefore start this slider 1/4 later on 00:56:812 (use 25% or 50% to hear what I mean)
01:13:024 (4) - Maybe remove the repeat to fit the vocals
01:16:660 (7) - ^
Overall some sliders could be curved nicer around their neighbours but it is nothing major nor is it really necessary...just some cosmetic stuff if you want to make it look better:
before: http://puu.sh/7SCR after: http://puu.sh/7SDe
before: http://puu.sh/7SDi after: http://puu.sh/7SDn
[Ah! Hard]
00:27:266 (1) - Spinner ending should be 1/4 earlier on white tick. If you want to keep it consider silencing (5%-ing) the ending
00:48:781 (5) - for sliders covering two notes I suggest using the sharp turn (red dot) exactly where the middle note is (especially if this note is a big white tick/downbeat!!!) http://puu.sh/7SEd
done for you with (intended 2x jump) spacing to following combo:
168,104,48781,2,0,B|174:103|210:165|152:196|152:196|165:258|211:294,1,220,0|001:01:206 (1) - Either end this spinner 1/2 later @01:02:721 or map this note (01:02:721) as it feels empty with the dominant vocals there but nothing mapped (notes 1/2 close to spinner endings should be ok for "hard" diffs)
206,290,49690,1,8
01:13:175 (2) - add finish for ending point to make it consistent with 01:10:903 (4)?
01:22:115 (1,2) - personally I wouldn't overmap those two vocals, maybe just map them as they are (two notes each: just remove the repeats)
This map flows well and fits the song just right! I like it
[Ah! Phyre]
AR9 really doesn't go well with this one
AR8 fits much better imo.Other than that: Some weird spacing and jump-distance decisions but it is playable 1st time and therefore I can't complain. (for insane diffs anyway). Doesn't have the same good flow of the [Hard] but differences in mapping style keep everything fresh and interesting.
Overall a well made mapset with a nice SB (as in "it doesn't bother me while playing"). Hope my suggestions help a bit
+1
Topic Starter
Thanks~p3n wrote:
Sorry for this late-as-hell mod
[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
well...nothing here, just some suggestions:
00:35:751 (1) - Maybe start this slider 1/1 earlier (00:35:145) to match the vocal section?
00:44:236 (2,3) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider here instead? http://puu.sh/7SyV
01:17:569 (X) - Maybe use a 1x repeat slider to end on 01:18:175 (1) to match the vocals? http://puu.sh/7SyN Aded a note instead.
[Ah! Normal]
The 2.0 SV seems a bit much especially for the first, more calm part of the song (all non-KIAI parts). It does fit very well in KIAI. Maybe use a slighty reduced SV multiplier for non-KIAI parts (~0,8x) combined with a slightly higher distance spacing (1,00x non-KIAI, keep 0,80x for KIAI). You'll have to rearrange all the sliders and spacings but you probably know this. The absolute distances between notes will stay almost the same for the non-KIAI parts after the changes but the slightly reduced SV fits much better in my oppinion. The sv is 2.0 since it's higher than easy and slower than hard and insane. Also, having a speed increase will chance the difficulty of the map, which in this case is only normal. Also I hate maps that change the spacing on a normal, it's to difficult. Thanks for the idea though.
00:03:024 (1,2,3) - first combo is set to 0,8x distance spacing but 2nd combo (00:04:842 (1,2,3,4)) starts off with 1,0x and ends with 0,8x and 0,9x. Is this intended or just by accident? I'd stick to one fixed spacing throughout a normal-diff and keep it that way as long as you don't have any SV changes (1,0x if you add the SV multiplier; 0,8x if you don't). Maybe disable grid-snapping to place the notes more exactly (you can hold [Ctrl] to snap them in line every 45° if you want to do straight lines).Changed the spacing on the whole beginning part.
00:23:630 (3) - I really didn't expect the 3x repeats in the first play, especially with all those 1x repeats before. It fits quite well but those unexpected kicksliders tend to throw off beginners (the "normal" players)
Since the first slider after the spinner and I have them in the beginning as well I think this is ok to have.
00:25:145 (2) - Remove the repeat to match the vocals? (like 00:19:690 (1,2))Oh I see, nice idea thanks.
00:56:660 (3) - I suggest keeping the vocal-follow you established before and therefore start this slider 1/4 later on 00:56:812 (use 25% or 50% to hear what I mean)done.
01:13:024 (4) - Maybe remove the repeat to fit the vocals THere's a beat there though as well.
01:16:660 (7) - ^k done.
Overall some sliders could be curved nicer around their neighbours but it is nothing major nor is it really necessary...just some cosmetic stuff if you want to make it look better:
before: http://puu.sh/7SCR after: http://puu.sh/7SDe
before: http://puu.sh/7SDi after: http://puu.sh/7SDn
[Ah! Hard]
00:27:266 (1) - Spinner ending should be 1/4 earlier on white tick. If you want to keep it consider silencing (5%-ing) the ending Spinners are all gonna end at the same poin in every diff.
00:48:781 (5) - for sliders covering two notes I suggest using the sharp turn (red dot) exactly where the middle note is (especially if this note is a big white tick/downbeat!!!) http://puu.sh/7SEd
done for you with (intended 2x jump) spacing to following combo:168,104,48781,2,0,B|174:103|210:165|152:196|152:196|165:258|211:294,1,220,0|0I don't really think I'll change this since it looks,sounds and plays fine.
206,290,49690,1,8
01:01:206 (1) - Either end this spinner 1/2 later @01:02:721 or map this note (01:02:721) as it feels empty with the dominant vocals there but nothing mapped (notes 1/2 close to spinner endings should be ok for "hard" diffs) Okay that works. :3
01:13:175 (2) - add finish for ending point to make it consistent with 01:10:903 (4)? ooooo yes.
01:22:115 (1,2) - personally I wouldn't overmap those two vocals, maybe just map them as they are (two notes each: just remove the repeats) Okay :3
This map flows well and fits the song just right! I like it
[Ah! Phyre]
AR9 really doesn't go well with this one
Other than that: Some weird spacing and jump-distance decisions but it is playable 1st time and therefore I can't complain. (for insane diffs anyway). Doesn't have the same good flow of the [Hard] but differences in mapping style keep everything fresh and interesting.
I talked to Phyrearms about this a bit ago.
Overall a well made mapset with a nice SB (as in "it doesn't bother me while playing"). Hope my suggestions help a bit
+1
THIS TOOK ME LIKE 20 MINUTES I AM SO LAZY AUGH SO SORRY
Download: Ishida Yoko - Shiawase no Iro (TV Size) (Lizzehb) [Ah! Ozzy's Taiko].osuIn exchange, it shouldn't need too many mods.
Topic Starter
FINALLY THANK YOU.OzzyOzrock wrote:
THIS TOOK ME LIKE 20 MINUTES I AM SO LAZY AUGH SO SORRY[attachment=0:38718]Ishida Yoko - Shiawase no Iro (TV Size) (Lizzehb) [Ah! Ozzy's Taiko].osu[/attachment:38718]In exchange, it shouldn't need too many mods.
in before my taiko mod....
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=52587&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=49
Is my last mod ignored? T_T (cries)
- No any offsensive meaning, I just want to know the reason to place the taiko diff o_o
[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:17:256 - k here? Drum sound is same as the last note and this emphasizes the coming D.
01:26:044 - quite meaningless without support from music. Just a long notes from the music and there's no 1/6, not even 1/4.
except the last stream everything seems fine.
kd this if this is useful only. remember to kd the last post ;w; (runs
p.s. the song just deserve another star -w-
viewtopic.php?f=6&t=52587&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=49
Is my last mod ignored? T_T (cries)
- No any offsensive meaning, I just want to know the reason to place the taiko diff o_o
[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:17:256 - k here? Drum sound is same as the last note and this emphasizes the coming D.
01:26:044 - quite meaningless without support from music. Just a long notes from the music and there's no 1/6, not even 1/4.
except the last stream everything seems fine.
kd this if this is useful only. remember to kd the last post ;w; (runs
p.s. the song just deserve another star -w-
Alright I went through all the pages and made all the mods -- even made the kiai time a little more "interesting", took out the double timing section, and changed the offset to 630 instead of 600.
I just noticed that Liz's avatar is wearing my headphones; 100% approved
But only with this and this too 
I'm totally done modding this time for real ~_~ the more I work on it the less intuitive it gets.
I just noticed that Liz's avatar is wearing my headphones; 100% approved
But only with this and this too I'm totally done modding this time for real ~_~ the more I work on it the less intuitive it gets.
Mod Request as Modding Queue 
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
00:29:720 (2): Hitfinish at the beginning
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped Kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
01:26:990 (4,5): Don't Stack here
01:27:296 (5): Replace Clap to Whistle?
Ah! Normal:
00:15:478: It's a TV Size, so you can map without breaks
00:20:933 (3): New Combo
00:30:326 (4): ^
00:32:751 (4): ^
00:36:993 (6): Hitfinish
00:37:296: The same in 00:15:478
01:01:206 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:08:205 (4): New Combo
01:25:448 (T): Unsnapped kiai
Ah! Hard:
00:15:478: The same in Normal
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
Ah! Phyre:
Names of difficulties: Ah! ztrot's Easy
Ah! Normal
Ah! Hard
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko
Ah! Phyre ...
For consistency in all difficulties you have to add Insane in the name of this difficulty. So, Ah! Phyre's Insane
00:41:084 (5): New Combo
01:01:367 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko:
01:01:211 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:478 (T): ^
Nice diff, but it's quite easy to be a Ozzy's Taiko
Well Lizz, that's all. Good Luck with your map
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
00:29:720 (2): Hitfinish at the beginning
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped Kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
01:26:990 (4,5): Don't Stack here
01:27:296 (5): Replace Clap to Whistle?
Ah! Normal:
00:15:478: It's a TV Size, so you can map without breaks
00:20:933 (3): New Combo
00:30:326 (4): ^
00:32:751 (4): ^
00:36:993 (6): Hitfinish
00:37:296: The same in 00:15:478
01:01:206 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:08:205 (4): New Combo
01:25:448 (T): Unsnapped kiai
Ah! Hard:
00:15:478: The same in Normal
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
Ah! Phyre:
Names of difficulties: Ah! ztrot's Easy
Ah! Normal
Ah! Hard
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko
Ah! Phyre ...
For consistency in all difficulties you have to add Insane in the name of this difficulty. So, Ah! Phyre's Insane
00:41:084 (5): New Combo
01:01:367 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko:
01:01:211 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:478 (T): ^
Nice diff, but it's quite easy to be a Ozzy's Taiko
Well Lizz, that's all. Good Luck with your map
Ah! Phyre:
00:24:569 (1,2) - I definitely recommend changing the position of these two notes. They're confusing as fuck and don't belong under (7) because of that pattern
Ah! Hard:
Looking good
Ah! Normal:
00:23:660 (3) - Multiple repeats like this have a time and place and this isn't one of them. Make it so (3) only has one repeat and then add a hit circle at 00:24:266. Mainly this is out of place because of the amount of times a single repeat was used right before this note. It's confusing to the player.
01:17:599 (1) - Make this a more practical slider shape. It's all scrunched up and shit :<
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
The only problem I have with this map are the sliders like 01:01:236 (3). Crunchy sliders don't belong in an easy difficulty like this. It's like basically like a SV change, especially if the person is using OpenGL and doesn't have the normal slider rendering on.
Anyways, good map. Good luck, hope I helped. I would have starred but you said not to. I still will if you want...
00:24:569 (1,2) - I definitely recommend changing the position of these two notes. They're confusing as fuck and don't belong under (7) because of that pattern
Ah! Hard:
Looking good
Ah! Normal:
00:23:660 (3) - Multiple repeats like this have a time and place and this isn't one of them. Make it so (3) only has one repeat and then add a hit circle at 00:24:266. Mainly this is out of place because of the amount of times a single repeat was used right before this note. It's confusing to the player.
01:17:599 (1) - Make this a more practical slider shape. It's all scrunched up and shit :<
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
The only problem I have with this map are the sliders like 01:01:236 (3). Crunchy sliders don't belong in an easy difficulty like this. It's like basically like a SV change, especially if the person is using OpenGL and doesn't have the normal slider rendering on.
Anyways, good map. Good luck, hope I helped. I would have starred but you said not to. I still will if you want...
Working on a few suggested mods. I figured someone would have a problem with the spot @ 24 seconds, but that's part of what makes it an insane diff -- changing anyway.
Um …
Isn’t the kiai time must be snapping ?
In order to get them snap, it must start from 01:01:236 and end at 01:25:478
I personally prefer all the diffs have the constant SV.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
00:23:660 (3) – I don’t think newbie can play well on this
01:01:236 (1) – maybe set volume for 80% for the finish at the beginning only ?
01:08:811 (6,7) – use two dots or whatever that’s call to make the slider look prettier ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192125 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192127
01:23:054 (1) – I think the finish doesn’t fit, probably no hitsound and change the volume to 30% ?
[Hard]
00:27:296 (1) – sounds better if you end this at 00:28:508
00:40:630 – missing a note here ? I heard a sound on this.
00:54:266 (4,5,6) – well … you have so many of them that are like this, I would change some to slider(like what you did in Normal)
01:10:933 (4) – it’s better if you put finish at the beginning and clap at the end
[Phyre]
Beautiful slider and wonderful hitsound arrangement …
Nice diff here !
I just figured out I did must of them as nazi
Sorry for very late mod
Isn’t the kiai time must be snapping ?
In order to get them snap, it must start from 01:01:236 and end at 01:25:478
I personally prefer all the diffs have the constant SV.
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
00:23:660 (3) – I don’t think newbie can play well on this
01:01:236 (1) – maybe set volume for 80% for the finish at the beginning only ?
01:08:811 (6,7) – use two dots or whatever that’s call to make the slider look prettier ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192125 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192127
01:23:054 (1) – I think the finish doesn’t fit, probably no hitsound and change the volume to 30% ?
[Hard]
00:27:296 (1) – sounds better if you end this at 00:28:508
00:40:630 – missing a note here ? I heard a sound on this.
00:54:266 (4,5,6) – well … you have so many of them that are like this, I would change some to slider(like what you did in Normal)
01:10:933 (4) – it’s better if you put finish at the beginning and clap at the end
[Phyre]
Beautiful slider and wonderful hitsound arrangement …
Nice diff here !
I just figured out I did must of them as nazi
Sorry for very late mod
Topic Starter
mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Mod Request as Modding Queue
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
00:29:720 (2): Hitfinish at the beginningk
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped Kiaik
01:25:438 (T): ^k
01:26:990 (4,5): Don't Stack here k
01:27:296 (5): Replace Clap to Whistle? Already is
Ah! Normal:
00:15:478: It's a TV Size, so you can map without breaks Fits, nice keeping it.
00:20:933 (3): New Combo k
00:30:326 (4): ^k
00:32:751 (4): ^k
00:36:993 (6): Hitfinishk
00:37:296: The same in 00:15:478
01:01:206 (T): Unsnapped kiaik
01:08:205 (4): New Combo A combo just for one slider? na.
01:25:448 (T): Unsnapped kiaik
Ah! Hard:
00:15:478: The same in Normal Fits, nice keeping it.
01:01:196 (T): Unsnapped kiaik
01:25:438 (T): ^k
Ah! Phyre:
Names of difficulties: Ah! ztrot's Easy
Ah! Normal
Ah! Hard
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko
Ah! Phyre ...
For consistency in all difficulties you have to add Insane in the name of this difficulty. So, Ah! Phyre's Insane
00:41:084 (5): New Combo
01:01:367 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:438 (T): ^
Ah! Ozzy's Taiko:
01:01:211 (T): Unsnapped kiai
01:25:478 (T): ^
Nice diff, but it's quite easy to be a Ozzy's Taiko
Well Lizz, that's all. Good Luck with your map
Topic Starter
You just don't NEED to but you're welcome too, it has more than 8 already so I don't need it for ranking.Sync wrote:
Ah! Phyre:
00:24:569 (1,2) - I definitely recommend changing the position of these two notes. They're confusing as fuck and don't belong under (7) because of that pattern
Ah! Hard:
Looking good
Ah! Normal:
00:23:660 (3) - Multiple repeats like this have a time and place and this isn't one of them. Make it so (3) only has one repeat and then add a hit circle at 00:24:266. Mainly this is out of place because of the amount of times a single repeat was used right before this note. It's confusing to the player. hmmmm k
01:17:599 (1) - Make this a more practical slider shape. It's all scrunched up and shit :< k :3
Ah! ztrot's Easy:
The only problem I have with this map are the sliders like 01:01:236 (3). Crunchy sliders don't belong in an easy difficulty like this. It's like basically like a SV change, especially if the person is using OpenGL and doesn't have the normal slider rendering on. BAT did it, don't care.
Anyways, good map. Good luck, hope I helped. I would have starred but you said not to. I still will if you want...
Topic Starter
tyGiNa wrote:
Um …
Isn’t the kiai time must be snapping ?
In order to get them snap, it must start from 01:01:236 and end at 01:25:478
I personally prefer all the diffs have the constant SV. Well, sucks to be you then. :3
[Easy]
Fine
[Normal]
00:23:660 (3) – I don’t think newbie can play well on thisChanged from a mod before.
01:01:236 (1) – maybe set volume for 80% for the finish at the beginning only ? Na
01:08:811 (6,7) – use two dots or whatever that’s call to make the slider look prettier ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192125 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/192127 Changed them the lazy way
01:23:054 (1) – I think the finish doesn’t fit, probably no hitsound and change the volume to 30% ?LOVE that idea thank you.
[Hard]
00:27:296 (1) – sounds better if you end this at 00:28:508 yessss
00:40:630 – missing a note here ? I heard a sound on this.hmmm ok
00:54:266 (4,5,6) – well … you have so many of them that are like this, I would change some to slider(like what you did in Normal) Needs to be harder than normal so this works.
01:10:933 (4) – it’s better if you put finish at the beginning and clap at the end hmmm sure.
[Phyre]
Beautiful slider and wonderful hitsound arrangement …
Nice diff here !
I just figured out I did must of them as nazi
Sorry for very late mod
Got a request for the taiko diff, Hi ozzy
I'm sure you know what the d's and k's mean so, here goes.
00:23:963 (2) - change to d
00:25:630 (2) - change to k
00:30:175 (4) - change to k 00:30:326 (1) - change to d (this pattern sounds and fits better imo)
00:36:387 (2) - change to k
00:38:357 (3) - change to k
00:38:357 (3) - change to d
00:44:720 (4) - change to k
00:48:054 (3) - ^
00:59:266 (5) - change this to K
01:26:084 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This does not fit, at all.
remove this ^ and add a spinner from 01:26:084 to 01:27:296
Thast's all I've got.
Flow 4/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 3.5/5
Nice map Ozzy, I really enjoyed it :3
Good luck on getting it ranked, you guys!
I'm sure you know what the d's and k's mean so, here goes.
00:23:963 (2) - change to d
00:25:630 (2) - change to k
00:30:175 (4) - change to k 00:30:326 (1) - change to d (this pattern sounds and fits better imo)
00:36:387 (2) - change to k
00:38:357 (3) - change to k
00:38:357 (3) - change to d
00:44:720 (4) - change to k
00:48:054 (3) - ^
00:59:266 (5) - change this to K
01:26:084 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This does not fit, at all.
remove this ^ and add a spinner from 01:26:084 to 01:27:296
Thast's all I've got.
Flow 4/5
Patterns 3/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 3.5/5
Nice map Ozzy, I really enjoyed it :3
Good luck on getting it ranked, you guys!
Taiko BG if your interested.
Oh hey Lizze~
General
* During kiai time, I see the SB Load is over 5.00x That's makes a lag for ancient PC. The tips is, use white BG.png instead of White Effect.png
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Ah! ztrot's Easy
00:33:357 (3,4) - Jump in easy diff? Are you serious?
00:41:509 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:53:963 (1) - Make this slider symetric? (Nazi)
00:56:387 (1) - ^
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Ah! Hard
* AR +1? Feels slow for me
00:42:418 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:59:842 (T) - ^
01:13:205 (2) - I don't like if this overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
01:23:205 (1) - Move to 01:23:054?
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Ah! Phyrearms' Insane
00:29:417 (1) - This has a new combo bug. Please enable the new combo button (Proof : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199515)
00:53:963 (8) - New combo, since it's a slowdown slider
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Ganbatte! Lizze-san!
General
* During kiai time, I see the SB Load is over 5.00x That's makes a lag for ancient PC. The tips is, use white BG.png instead of White Effect.png
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Ah! ztrot's Easy
00:33:357 (3,4) - Jump in easy diff? Are you serious?
00:41:509 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:53:963 (1) - Make this slider symetric? (Nazi)
00:56:387 (1) - ^
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Ah! Hard
* AR +1? Feels slow for me
00:42:418 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:59:842 (T) - ^
01:13:205 (2) - I don't like if this overlapped by previous slider (Nazi)
01:23:205 (1) - Move to 01:23:054?
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Ah! Phyrearms' Insane
00:29:417 (1) - This has a new combo bug. Please enable the new combo button (Proof : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199515)
00:53:963 (8) - New combo, since it's a slowdown slider
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Ganbatte! Lizze-san!
request from my queue
[easy]
00:33:963 (4) - whistle at the end
01:01:236 (3) - clap at the end
01:17:599 (1,2) - spcaing
[normal]
00:04:872 (1) - remove clap
00:41:842 (2) - finish at the beginning
01:16:690 (7) - end at 01:16:993
[hard]
00:41:539 (9) - finish at the repeat
01:10:933 (4) - spacing
[insane]
01:16:993 (8) - NC
01:25:478 (1) - finish at the beginning
[easy]
00:33:963 (4) - whistle at the end
01:01:236 (3) - clap at the end
01:17:599 (1,2) - spcaing
[normal]
00:04:872 (1) - remove clap
00:41:842 (2) - finish at the beginning
01:16:690 (7) - end at 01:16:993
[hard]
00:41:539 (9) - finish at the repeat
01:10:933 (4) - spacing
[insane]
01:16:993 (8) - NC
01:25:478 (1) - finish at the beginning
Topic Starter
Arigato!Leorda wrote:
Oh hey Lizze~
General
* During kiai time, I see the SB Load is over 5.00x That's makes a lag for ancient PC. The tips is, use white BG.png instead of White Effect.png I'll talk to someone about that.
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Ah! ztrot's Easy
00:33:357 (3,4) - Jump in easy diff? Are you serious? k, moved.
00:41:509 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point lol oops
00:53:963 (1) - Make this slider symetric? (Nazi) k
00:56:387 (1) - ^ k
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Ah! Hard
* AR +1? Feels slow for me I didn't notice much of a change honestly, so I'll bump it up one.
00:42:418 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point k
00:59:842 (T) - ^ k
01:13:205 (2) - I don't like if this overlapped by previous slider (Nazi) Changed it around a bit.
01:23:205 (1) - Move to 01:23:054? k
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Ah! Phyrearms' Insane
00:29:417 (1) - This has a new combo bug. Please enable the new combo button (Proof : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199515)
00:53:963 (8) - New combo, since it's a slowdown slider
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Ganbatte! Lizze-san!
Topic Starter
No_Gu wrote:
request from my queue
[easy]
00:33:963 (4) - whistle at the endk
01:01:236 (3) - clap at the endk
01:17:599 (1,2) - spcaingk
[normal]
00:04:872 (1) - remove clap k
00:41:842 (2) - finish at the beginning k
01:16:690 (7) - end at 01:16:993added repeat
[hard]
00:41:539 (9) - finish at the repeatk
01:10:933 (4) - spacingchanged
Thanks~
[insane]
01:16:993 (8) - NC
01:25:478 (1) - finish at the beginning
Finished all mods since my last post and made a handful of sections more fun. and there was much rejoycing.
00:48:054 (1) - add clap here to my diff liz~
00:48:811 (1) - and remove clap here
\o/ people, the last roll is in the song, and if you wonder why I bothered mapping to it, it's because yes
00:48:811 (1) - and remove clap here
\o/ people, the last roll is in the song, and if you wonder why I bothered mapping to it, it's because yes
change this:
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
to this
Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
in the storyboard. This will fix the over 5.00 section.
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
to this
Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
in the storyboard. This will fix the over 5.00 section.
Hello~ Sorry for late modding ><
[Ah! Normal]
00:26:084 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
[Ah! Hard]
00:38:205 - add a hitcircle on this point. (as I based on "00:40:630")
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
00:19:114 (10) - Remove the "whistle" at the start of this slider.
very nice map~
[Ah! Normal]
00:26:084 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
[Ah! Hard]
00:38:205 - add a hitcircle on this point. (as I based on "00:40:630")
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
00:19:114 (10) - Remove the "whistle" at the start of this slider.
very nice map~
Topic Starter
Thanks~Kirino Kousaka wrote:
Hello~ Sorry for late modding ><
[Ah! Normal]
00:26:084 (2,3) - Fix spacing. lolololol k
[Ah! Hard]
00:38:205 - add a hitcircle on this point. (as I based on "00:40:630") Removed a note at 40 sec instead, slowed it down and there's not much of a sound there.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
00:19:114 (10) - Remove the "whistle" at the start of this slider. Nope, I like this.
very nice map~
Clever Team modding queue, derp.
~General~
[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
~General~
- Folder seems to be okay.
- Breaks are inconsistent between difficulties.
[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
There are... Almost no hitsounds?
- 00:03:054 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe.. hitsound this start? It feels reeeeeally empty right now.
- 00:20:023 (1) - Add finish?
- 00:22:448 (2,4,2,4) - Add whistles here?
- 00:27:296 (2) - Whistle through the whole slider?
- 00:32:145 (1,3) - Whistles?
- 00:41:842 (2) - Whistle at the end? Fits with the vocals.
- 00:46:084 (1) - Whistle at the hitcircle? Same reason as above.
- 00:53:963 (1,1) - Whistles here? It sounds so empty..
- 01:09:720 (3) - Whistle at the entire slider then finish at the end? Sounds less empty...
- 01:12:145 (1) - Add whistle? Feels empty.
- 01:13:357 (3) - Whistle at start and end?
- 01:17:599 (1) - Add clap? Consistent with the rest of the diff.
- 01:19:417 (4) - Add whistle? sounds empty atm.
- 01:25:781 (2) - Eh, remove this note? The entire map was 1/1, and this might confuse the newbies.
- Overall Rating: 7.9/10 ~ I just didn't understand the lack of hitsounds. The map itself is nice, but there are almost no hitsounds, and the map feels empty and boring without them.
AR +1? The sliderspeed seems a bit too fast for this Approach Rate.
This difficulty also feels empty and barely uses any whistles. I suggest you to add them when the vocal is more high-pitched, like 00:55:175 (3).
- 00:07:902 (4) - Whistle at the start?
- 00:26:084 (2) - Add clap? Sounds a little less empty.
- 00:27:296 (5) - Whistle throughout the whole slider?
- 00:50:326 (2) - Add whistle? Sounds empty...
- 00:51:236 (5) - ^ at the end of the slider.
- 01:10:629 (2) - Add a finish at the end?
- 01:13:054 (4) - ^
- Overall Rating: 8.1/10 ~ Seems okay as a diff itself, but also a bit boring and empty because of the lack of hitsounds. Try using them a bit more!
Approach Rate +1? Seems a bit better to read.
Same thing about hitsounds.
- 00:33:660 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing seems a bit weird here... Is this intentional?
- 00:44:569 (8) - New combo since the jumps stop here?
- 01:00:326 (2,4) - Remove finishes here to prevent abuse? D:
- 01:17:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit weird. Why isn't (6) in the same line as (1,4)? >:
- Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ Not much I could find except for the lack of whistles in the most part. The difficulty itself is very nice, I like it. :3
The 1/8s in the start may be a bit weird to follow, but they're following the song and that's okay.
- 00:03:054 (1) - No hitsounds here either? >:
- 00:17:599 (4) - New combo since it's kind of a jump? Feels a bit better to read, I guess.
- 00:21:236 (7) - New combo? A new verse in the song is starting here.
- 00:45:478 (5) - Move 4 grids down (using grid 4)? Looks a bit better and... symmetrical?
- 00:47:599 (6) - New combo? Same reason as 00:21:236.
- 00:51:539 (4) - ^
- 01:16:993 (8) - New combo? The combo is too long D:
- 01:25:478 (1) - Goddamn awesome slider.
- Overall Rating: 9.4/10 ~ Simply excelent difficulty. The spacing may be a bit weird, but it's really fun to play and I got used to it instantly. Excellent difficulty!
Shohei Ohtani
OH HEY THERE BD GIVING DECIMAL RATINGS FOR MAPS.
Note: I might be an ass in this mod because I'm trying incredibly hard to stay unbiased, which in return might make me just more nazi.
Insane:
It's a bit jumpy ;~;
00:30:630 (3) - THIS JUMP
00:56:842 (3) - OH GOD 4.62x
01:16:993 (8) - I think the middle sliderpoint needs to be moved to the right or something. It looks not-symmetrical to me ;~;.
Hard:
01:23:054 (1) - End this at the same time as normal? :3
Easy:
00:39:417 (3) - Kinda hunchbacked slider~.
Here's your star~.
Note: I might be an ass in this mod because I'm trying incredibly hard to stay unbiased, which in return might make me just more nazi.
Insane:
It's a bit jumpy ;~;
00:30:630 (3) - THIS JUMP
00:56:842 (3) - OH GOD 4.62x
01:16:993 (8) - I think the middle sliderpoint needs to be moved to the right or something. It looks not-symmetrical to me ;~;.
Hard:
01:23:054 (1) - End this at the same time as normal? :3
Easy:
00:39:417 (3) - Kinda hunchbacked slider~.
Here's your star~.
Sent in all updates, map is up-to-date again.
Blue DragonI adjusted the 00:45:478 note and added *some* of these combos, but with a few minor tweaks. During background changes, several large jump combos were too camouflaged on all three red, green, and blue BGs to read them. I moved a couple up and added a few of the suggestions to find a happy medium.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
The 1/8s in the start may be a bit weird to follow, but they're following the song and that's okay.
00:03:054 (1) - No hitsounds here either? >:
00:17:599 (4) - New combo since it's kind of a jump? Feels a bit better to read, I guess.
00:21:236 (7) - New combo? A new verse in the song is starting here.
00:45:478 (5) - Move 4 grids down (using grid 4)? Looks a bit better and... symmetrical?
00:47:599 (6) - New combo? Same reason as 00:21:236.
00:51:539 (4) - ^
01:16:993 (8) - New combo? The combo is too long D:
01:25:478 (1) - Goddamn awesome slider. Thanks :3
Kirino KousakaI did not remove this because I like the "finish" it adds to the intro, helping players aurally move on to the verse that follows.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
00:19:114 (10) - Remove the "whistle" at the start of this slider.
Topic Starter
Thanks BD, gl on MAT brah.Blue Dragon wrote:
Clever Team modding queue, derp.
~General~Because different people mapped it.
- Folder seems to be okay.
- Breaks are inconsistent between difficulties.
[Ah! Normal]
AR +1? The sliderspeed seems a bit too fast for this Approach Rate.Tested this on my bf's mouse and since I could play it with a mouse I'm not used to with the AR +1, I'll change it, thanks.
This difficulty also feels empty and barely uses any whistles. I suggest you to add them when the vocal is more high-pitched, like 00:55:175 (3). I'll do the ones you suggest below, but the song is already really pretty, I don't wanna ruin it with a ton of hitsounds.^ (5)
- 00:07:902 (4) - Whistle at the start? k
- 00:26:084 (2) - Add clap? Sounds a little less empty. k
- 00:27:296 (5) - Whistle throughout the whole slider? k
- 00:50:326 (2) - Add whistle? Sounds empty... Re-hitsounded this part
- 00:51:236 (5) - ^ at the end of the slider. k
- 01:10:629 (2) - Add a finish at the end? Put a finish on the (3) instead.
- 01:13:054 (4) - ^
[Ah! Hard]
- Overall Rating: 8.1/10 ~ Seems okay as a diff itself, but also a bit boring and empty because of the lack of hitsounds. Try using them a bit more!
Approach Rate +1? Seems a bit better to read.
Same thing about hitsounds. Changed a lot of them hereFixed.
- 00:33:660 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing seems a bit weird here... Is this intentional? Eh oops there. lol it's fixed.
- 00:44:569 (8) - New combo since the jumps stop here? Sure
- 01:00:326 (2,4) - Remove finishes here to prevent abuse? D: Omg sounds much better.
- 01:17:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern seems a bit weird. Why isn't (6) in the same line as (1,4)? >:
- Overall Rating: 8.7/10 ~ Not much I could find except for the lack of whistles in the most part. The difficulty itself is very nice, I like it. :3
Sorry if I was kinda nazi or something. Not my intention D: I need nazis so this can get ranked!
Topic Starter
Thanks! :3CDFA wrote:
OH HEY THERE BD GIVING DECIMAL RATINGS FOR MAPS.
Note: I might be an ass in this mod because I'm trying incredibly hard to stay unbiased, which in return might make me just more nazi.
Insane:
It's a bit jumpy ;~;
00:30:630 (3) - THIS JUMP
00:56:842 (3) - OH GOD 4.62x
01:16:993 (8) - I think the middle sliderpoint needs to be moved to the right or something. It looks not-symmetrical to me ;~;.
Hard:
01:23:054 (1) - End this at the same time as normal? :3 Honestly, noticed that when I was doing BD's mod.
Easy:
00:39:417 (3) - Kinda hunchbacked slider~.
Here's your star~.
From queue... ages ago.
Wall of text, mostly hitsounds:
Excellent mapset. I hope it gets ranked soon!
Star! <3
Wall of text, mostly hitsounds:
SPOILER
[Ah! ztrot's Easy]
01:06:084 (1) - Remove the clap from the start.
01:07:902 (3) - Add clap.
01:17:599 (1) - ^
01:19:417 (4) - Add finish to the end?
01:24:872 (1) - ^
[Ah! Normal]
Up to you of course, but I think this section would sound better in "swing feel" using 1/6. Here's how I changed 00:04:064 (2,3) and 00:07:094 (3) to fit.
00:07:902 (4) - Remove finish from the end and change it to a whistle.
00:09:114 (1) - Add finish.
00:40:933 (1) - Whistle on repeat.
00:43:054 (4) - Whistle?
00:44:266 (4) - Whistle on start.
00:46:690 (4) - Finish?
00:47:599 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:51:236 (5) - Finish on end.
00:52:751 (3) - Whistle.
00:55:175 (3) - Whistle.
00:56:084 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:58:205 (4) - Whistle.
00:58:508 (1,2,3) - Whistle on the end of each slider.
01:00:630 (3) - Clap on start.
01:01:236 (1) - Whistle on end.
01:03:660 (4) - Whistle on start and end.
01:06:084 (3) - Finish.
01:06:993 (2) - Whistle on end.
01:08:508 (5) - Whistle.
01:09:417 (7) - Whistle on end.
01:10:629 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end and repeat (leave the start), and add a finish to the end.
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle.
01:13:054 (4) - Whistle on end.
01:14:569 (1) - Whistle.
01:15:781 (4) - Whistle.
01:16:690 (7) - Whistle on end.
01:17:599 (1) - Add clap to the start and whistle to the end.
01:18:811 (2) - Clap on start.
01:19:417 (3) - Add whistle to the start and finish to the end.
01:21:236 (1) - New combo, remove finish, add clap.
01:22:145 (2) - Remove new combo.
01:23:054 (1) - Change finish to a whistle?
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1) to 00:09:013 (7) - This first section really needs to be 1/6 to match the music. Here's a suggestion for the new times; obviously you'll need to move objects though.
00:03:660 (4) - Whistle.
00:04:872 (3) - ^
00:06:084 (6) - ^
00:07:296 (3) - ^
00:07:902 (5) - Whistle on end.
00:09:114 (1) - Finish.
00:20:023 (3) - ^
00:20:478 (5) - Whistle.
00:21:842 (4) - Clap.
00:22:448 (7) - Whistle.
00:24:569 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:27:296 (1) - Whistle.
00:29:114 (1) - Clap on start, whistle on end.
00:30:781 (4) - Whistle.
00:32:145 (3) - ^
00:33:357 (5) - ^
00:34:569 (4) - ^
00:36:084 (1) - ^
00:36:993 (4) - Finish.
00:37:902 (3) - Whistle.
00:38:357 (4) - ^
00:39:114 (8) - Whistle on end.
00:40:326 (3) - Whistle.
00:40:781 (4) - ^
00:43:054 (3) - ^
00:44:266 (7) - ^
00:45:781 (1) - Clap on end.
00:46:387 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:47:902 (2) - Whistle.
00:50:326 (2) - ^
00:51:539 (6) - ^
00:52:448 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:53:660 (3) - ^
00:54:872 (1) - ^
00:56:387 (5) - Whistle.
00:57:296 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:58:508 (1) - Remove the whistle from the repeat.
00:59:114 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:59:569 (4) - ^
01:00:023 (1,2,3,4) - This is pretty loud. Maybe fade them in? (Add inherited sections)
01:03:660 (3) - Whistle to both start and end.
01:05:781 (2) - Whistle on end.
01:06:387 (3,4,5) - These hitsounds don't fit the music. I'd suggest removing all the finishes and whistles, and add a clap to (5).
01:07:296 (3) - Change the start clap to a whistle, and change the end finish to a clap.
01:08:508 (2) - Whistle.
01:09:720 (1) - Whistle on start.
01:10:933 (4) - Change the start clap to a finish, and remove the finish from the end (leave the clap).
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle on start.
01:13:205 (4) - Change the end finish to a clap.
01:14:569 (2) - Whistle on start.
01:15:781 (5) - Whistle.
01:18:205 (3) - ^
01:19:417 (7) - Whistle on start.
01:23:054 (1) - Should end at 01:27:296, and add a whistle.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
Can't really fault this one.
01:25:478 (1) - I love the little kick on this!
01:06:084 (1) - Remove the clap from the start.
01:07:902 (3) - Add clap.
01:17:599 (1) - ^
01:19:417 (4) - Add finish to the end?
01:24:872 (1) - ^
[Ah! Normal]
Up to you of course, but I think this section would sound better in "swing feel" using 1/6. Here's how I changed 00:04:064 (2,3) and 00:07:094 (3) to fit.
00:07:902 (4) - Remove finish from the end and change it to a whistle.
00:09:114 (1) - Add finish.
00:40:933 (1) - Whistle on repeat.
00:43:054 (4) - Whistle?
00:44:266 (4) - Whistle on start.
00:46:690 (4) - Finish?
00:47:599 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:51:236 (5) - Finish on end.
00:52:751 (3) - Whistle.
00:55:175 (3) - Whistle.
00:56:084 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:58:205 (4) - Whistle.
00:58:508 (1,2,3) - Whistle on the end of each slider.
01:00:630 (3) - Clap on start.
01:01:236 (1) - Whistle on end.
01:03:660 (4) - Whistle on start and end.
01:06:084 (3) - Finish.
01:06:993 (2) - Whistle on end.
01:08:508 (5) - Whistle.
01:09:417 (7) - Whistle on end.
01:10:629 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end and repeat (leave the start), and add a finish to the end.
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle.
01:13:054 (4) - Whistle on end.
01:14:569 (1) - Whistle.
01:15:781 (4) - Whistle.
01:16:690 (7) - Whistle on end.
01:17:599 (1) - Add clap to the start and whistle to the end.
01:18:811 (2) - Clap on start.
01:19:417 (3) - Add whistle to the start and finish to the end.
01:21:236 (1) - New combo, remove finish, add clap.
01:22:145 (2) - Remove new combo.
01:23:054 (1) - Change finish to a whistle?
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1) to 00:09:013 (7) - This first section really needs to be 1/6 to match the music. Here's a suggestion for the new times; obviously you'll need to move objects though.
00:03:660 (4) - Whistle.
00:04:872 (3) - ^
00:06:084 (6) - ^
00:07:296 (3) - ^
00:07:902 (5) - Whistle on end.
00:09:114 (1) - Finish.
00:20:023 (3) - ^
00:20:478 (5) - Whistle.
00:21:842 (4) - Clap.
00:22:448 (7) - Whistle.
00:24:569 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:27:296 (1) - Whistle.
00:29:114 (1) - Clap on start, whistle on end.
00:30:781 (4) - Whistle.
00:32:145 (3) - ^
00:33:357 (5) - ^
00:34:569 (4) - ^
00:36:084 (1) - ^
00:36:993 (4) - Finish.
00:37:902 (3) - Whistle.
00:38:357 (4) - ^
00:39:114 (8) - Whistle on end.
00:40:326 (3) - Whistle.
00:40:781 (4) - ^
00:43:054 (3) - ^
00:44:266 (7) - ^
00:45:781 (1) - Clap on end.
00:46:387 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:47:902 (2) - Whistle.
00:50:326 (2) - ^
00:51:539 (6) - ^
00:52:448 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:53:660 (3) - ^
00:54:872 (1) - ^
00:56:387 (5) - Whistle.
00:57:296 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:58:508 (1) - Remove the whistle from the repeat.
00:59:114 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:59:569 (4) - ^
01:00:023 (1,2,3,4) - This is pretty loud. Maybe fade them in? (Add inherited sections)
01:03:660 (3) - Whistle to both start and end.
01:05:781 (2) - Whistle on end.
01:06:387 (3,4,5) - These hitsounds don't fit the music. I'd suggest removing all the finishes and whistles, and add a clap to (5).
01:07:296 (3) - Change the start clap to a whistle, and change the end finish to a clap.
01:08:508 (2) - Whistle.
01:09:720 (1) - Whistle on start.
01:10:933 (4) - Change the start clap to a finish, and remove the finish from the end (leave the clap).
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle on start.
01:13:205 (4) - Change the end finish to a clap.
01:14:569 (2) - Whistle on start.
01:15:781 (5) - Whistle.
01:18:205 (3) - ^
01:19:417 (7) - Whistle on start.
01:23:054 (1) - Should end at 01:27:296, and add a whistle.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
Can't really fault this one.
01:25:478 (1) - I love the little kick on this!
Excellent mapset. I hope it gets ranked soon!
Star! <3
Topic Starter
Thanks youuuuuuSamah wrote:
From queue... ages ago.
Wall of text, mostly hitsounds:SPOILER[Ah! ztrot's Easy] DIFF REMOVED
01:06:084 (1) - Remove the clap from the start.
01:07:902 (3) - Add clap.
01:17:599 (1) - ^
01:19:417 (4) - Add finish to the end?
01:24:872 (1) - ^
[Ah! Normal]
Up to you of course, but I think this section would sound better in "swing feel" using 1/6. Here's how I changed 00:04:064 (2,3) and 00:07:094 (3) to fit. If anyone else mentions it then I'll consider changing it.
00:07:902 (4) - Remove finish from the end and change it to a whistle k
00:09:114 (1) - Add finish. k
00:40:933 (1) - Whistle on repeat. k
00:43:054 (4) - Whistle? k
00:44:266 (4) - Whistle on start. k
00:46:690 (4) - Finish? k
00:47:599 (2) - Whistle on end. k
00:51:236 (5) - Finish on end. k
00:52:751 (3) - Whistle. k
00:55:175 (3) - Whistle. k
00:56:084 (2) - Whistle on end. k
00:58:205 (4) - Whistle. k
00:58:508 (1,2,3) - Whistle on the end of each slider. k
01:00:630 (3) - Clap on start. k
01:01:236 (1) - Whistle on end. k
01:03:660 (4) - Whistle on start and end. k
01:06:084 (3) - Finish. k
01:06:993 (2) - Whistle on end. k
01:08:508 (5) - Whistle. k
01:09:417 (7) - Whistle on end. k
01:10:629 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end and repeat (leave the start), and add a finish to the end. Kepping this the way it is.
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle. k
01:13:054 (4) - Whistle on end. k
01:14:569 (1) - Whistle. k
01:15:781 (4) - Whistle. k
01:16:690 (7) - Whistle on end. k
01:17:599 (1) - Add clap to the start and whistle to the end. k
01:18:811 (2) - Clap on start. k
01:19:417 (3) - Add whistle to the start and finish to the end. k
01:21:236 (1) - New combo, remove finish, add clap. k
01:22:145 (2) - Remove new combo. k
01:23:054 (1) - Change finish to a whistle?
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1) to 00:09:013 (7) - This first section really needs to be 1/6 to match the music. Here's a suggestion for the new times; obviously you'll need to move objects though.
00:03:660 (4) - Whistle. k
00:04:872 (3) - ^ k
00:06:084 (6) - ^ k
00:07:296 (3) - ^ k
00:07:902 (5) - Whistle on end. k
00:09:114 (1) - Finish. k
00:20:023 (3) - ^ k
00:20:478 (5) - Whistle. k
00:21:842 (4) - Clap. k
00:22:448 (7) - Whistle. k
00:24:569 (1) - Whistle on end. k
00:27:296 (1) - Whistle. k
00:29:114 (1) - Clap on start, whistle on end. k
00:30:781 (4) - Whistle. k
00:32:145 (3) - ^ k
00:33:357 (5) - ^ k
00:34:569 (4) - ^ k
00:36:084 (1) - ^ k
00:36:993 (4) - Finish. k
00:37:902 (3) - Whistle. k
00:38:357 (4) - ^ k
00:39:114 (8) - Whistle on end. k
00:40:326 (3) - Whistle. k
00:40:781 (4) - ^ k
00:43:054 (3) - ^k
00:44:266 (7) - ^ k
00:45:781 (1) - Clap on end. k
00:46:387 (2) - Whistle on end. k
00:47:902 (2) - Whistle. k
00:50:326 (2) - ^ k
00:51:539 (6) - ^ k
00:52:448 (1) - Whistle on end. k
00:53:660 (3) - ^k
00:54:872 (1) - ^k
00:56:387 (5) - Whistle. k
00:57:296 (1) - Whistle on end. k
00:58:508 (1) - Remove the whistle from the repeat. k
00:59:114 (2) - Remove whistle. k
00:59:569 (4) - ^ k
01:00:023 (1,2,3,4) - This is pretty loud. Maybe fade them in? (Add inherited sections) Changed
01:03:660 (3) - Whistle to both start and end. k
01:05:781 (2) - Whistle on end. k
01:06:387 (3,4,5) - These hitsounds don't fit the music. I'd suggest removing all the finishes and whistles, and add a clap to (5). Changed
01:07:296 (3) - Change the start clap to a whistle, and change the end finish to a clap. Keeping this one
01:08:508 (2) - Whistle. k
01:09:720 (1) - Whistle on start. k
01:10:933 (4) - Change the start clap to a finish, and remove the finish from the end (leave the clap). Changed
01:12:145 (1) - Whistle on start. k
01:13:205 (4) - Change the end finish to a clap. k
01:14:569 (2) - Whistle on start. k
01:15:781 (5) - Whistle.k
01:18:205 (3) - ^ k
01:19:417 (7) - Whistle on start. k
01:23:054 (1) - Should end at 01:27:296, and add a whistle. k
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
Can't really fault this one.
01:25:478 (1) - I love the little kick on this!
Excellent mapset. I hope it gets ranked soon!
Star! <3
Hi Lizzehb, Well actually you need to rank this and i want to help you so let's do it
General
General
- Keep the tick rate consistent on every difficulty if possible, try tick rate 1 in Easy
- Disable the letterbox during breaks
- - 00:27:296 (1) - Considered to extend this spinner at 1/2 sounds pretty nice
- 00:39:417 (1,2) - Spacing here with the previous object
- -- Considered to put AR:+1 for being a Normal
- 00:20:933 (1) - Remove new combo please
- - 00:25:781 (5) - New combo to follow your pattern
- Nice.
- - 00:32:145 (5) - If you can follow the music,i recommend a new combo here
- 00:47:599 (6) - ^
- 00:52:448 (5) - ^
- 01:23:054 (6) - ^
- 01:25:478 (1) - WUT? What happend here?
thanks for your request :3
i can't mod taiko, sorry
[Ah! Easy]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Normal]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Hard]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Phyream's Insane]
more than 3 slider speeds are used... but i think, that isn't a great problem (i have seen maps with ranked errors, so... >.>)
[SB]
bgfinal - end at 1:32:145?
short mod xD
very nice song, good luck ^^
i can't mod taiko, sorry
[Ah! Easy]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Normal]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Hard]
nothing to say ^^
[Ah! Phyream's Insane]
more than 3 slider speeds are used... but i think, that isn't a great problem (i have seen maps with ranked errors, so... >.>)
[SB]
bgfinal - end at 1:32:145?
short mod xD
very nice song, good luck ^^
I'm re-modding this to give you an inundation of mods all at the same time, and because I want to see it ranked.
[storyboard]
I guess I'll tell you again how to fix it: change bg.jpg to BG.jpg or change the storyboard from BG.jpg to bg.jpg. Either one will work. Taiko goes on forever, so something happened there I'll have to look at later.
[phyream]
The beginning is nasty for me because you're sliding onto the downbeat. Either way you look at it, you're going to have to choose which notes are going to be sliders and which ones can't. I just think you made the wrong decisions here.
00:09:417 (4,5) - these 2 notes, if following the pattern you've been following, need to start 1/8th later. It's not perfect, and is to the point where I say don't even bother, but if you instead make them 1/8th longer and move them back 1/2 note, you get the proper rhythm. You can further improve the accuracy by changing the slider ends so they aren't snapped to the beat like this:
00:15:099 (5) - I don't like any of these triples. Even if they are somewhere in the song and not overmapping, they usually sound terrible and play terrible for me.
00:26:993 - add a note
00:27:296 (1) - start this 1/8 earlier
00:33:811 (7,8,9) - so the lyrics here are on the end of the slider. It creates a very awkward rhythm to play, and you should just reverse this entire selection.
00:42:599 (4) - move this 1/1 earlier. I don't hear anything in the music here, and there is a part in the guitar 1/1 earlier.
00:43:811 (8) - same with this one, except I would figure out a way to put it 00:43:205 - here where there's a clear note.
00:45:781 (1) - this whole section here has a LOT of sliders starting on the red tick. It plays very strange since the emphasis is on the end of the slider rather than the beginning.
01:18:205 (9) - new combo.
[storyboard]
I guess I'll tell you again how to fix it: change bg.jpg to BG.jpg or change the storyboard from BG.jpg to bg.jpg. Either one will work. Taiko goes on forever, so something happened there I'll have to look at later.
[phyream]
The beginning is nasty for me because you're sliding onto the downbeat. Either way you look at it, you're going to have to choose which notes are going to be sliders and which ones can't. I just think you made the wrong decisions here.
00:09:417 (4,5) - these 2 notes, if following the pattern you've been following, need to start 1/8th later. It's not perfect, and is to the point where I say don't even bother, but if you instead make them 1/8th longer and move them back 1/2 note, you get the proper rhythm. You can further improve the accuracy by changing the slider ends so they aren't snapped to the beat like this:
216,176,9114,2,0,B|96:176,1,105
296,176,9720,2,0,B|412:176,1,105
00:10:630 (6) - 1/8 later296,176,9720,2,0,B|412:176,1,105
00:15:099 (5) - I don't like any of these triples. Even if they are somewhere in the song and not overmapping, they usually sound terrible and play terrible for me.
00:26:993 - add a note
00:27:296 (1) - start this 1/8 earlier
00:33:811 (7,8,9) - so the lyrics here are on the end of the slider. It creates a very awkward rhythm to play, and you should just reverse this entire selection.
00:42:599 (4) - move this 1/1 earlier. I don't hear anything in the music here, and there is a part in the guitar 1/1 earlier.
00:43:811 (8) - same with this one, except I would figure out a way to put it 00:43:205 - here where there's a clear note.
00:45:781 (1) - this whole section here has a LOT of sliders starting on the red tick. It plays very strange since the emphasis is on the end of the slider rather than the beginning.
01:18:205 (9) - new combo.
[General]
*Please convert your " spinner-background.jpg" in a png file
*Actually, AIBat says to me that you're not using "i" and "kii" files; checking your .osb I cannot find anything related to that, so you might consider to delete/add them in another way
*I strongly reccomend to fix what ziin said on [storyboard]
[Ah! Easy]
00:27:296 (1) - You are mixing vocal and instrumental voice wrongly, in my opinion. and since this is a bad position for a spinner too, I'd suggest you replace it with some simple hitobjects.
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh gawd this rhythm. But I undersand you, since you probably wanted to keep a 1/2 rhythm instead of a more complex one. In order to make this pattern more consistent I'd suggest you to add a hitcircle here 00:05:023 (x) -
and another one here 00:09:114 (x) -
[Taiko]
No letterbox i guess it's fine, even if I think that everything plays fine, I want just to complain a minor thing:
01:26:084 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/6 BSD sounds just too unexpected and out of place, please consider to use another rhythm.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
you know, the intro sounds a bit weird. It is still playable for me, I'm gonna ask to some bats (if they answer to me çAAAAAç)
Good work by the way, ask to me a recheck when you think you fixed almost eveything related on sb
*Please convert your " spinner-background.jpg" in a png file
*Actually, AIBat says to me that you're not using "i" and "kii" files; checking your .osb I cannot find anything related to that, so you might consider to delete/add them in another way
*I strongly reccomend to fix what ziin said on [storyboard]
[Ah! Easy]
00:27:296 (1) - You are mixing vocal and instrumental voice wrongly, in my opinion. and since this is a bad position for a spinner too, I'd suggest you replace it with some simple hitobjects.
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh gawd this rhythm. But I undersand you, since you probably wanted to keep a 1/2 rhythm instead of a more complex one. In order to make this pattern more consistent I'd suggest you to add a hitcircle here 00:05:023 (x) -
and another one here 00:09:114 (x) -
[Taiko]
No letterbox i guess it's fine, even if I think that everything plays fine, I want just to complain a minor thing:
01:26:084 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/6 BSD sounds just too unexpected and out of place, please consider to use another rhythm.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
you know, the intro sounds a bit weird. It is still playable for me, I'm gonna ask to some bats (if they answer to me çAAAAAç)
Good work by the way, ask to me a recheck when you think you fixed almost eveything related on sb
this doesn't matter. The jpg saves space. You can rename it to a png, but that doesn't really matter either.Armin wrote:
[General]
*Please convert your " spinner-background.jpg" in a png file
I implemented most of ziin's mods. Transitioning slider entrances away from off beats was a big step in the right direction. One beat circle and one spinner were 1/8 off. Couple jumps felt awkward. Other things.
Some of the more minor changes I wasn't really a fan of; some I made slight variations of and others I didn't include at all, but the map is definitely better any way you look at it now
Transitioning slider entrances away from off beats was a big step in the right direction. One beat circle and one spinner were 1/8 off. Couple jumps felt awkward. Other things.Some of the more minor changes I wasn't really a fan of; some I made slight variations of and others I didn't include at all, but the map is definitely better any way you look at it now
Topic Starter
Armin wrote:
[General]
*Please convert your " spinner-background.jpg" in a png file okie
*Actually, AIBat says to me that you're not using "i" and "kii" files; checking your .osb I cannot find anything related to that, so you might consider to delete/add them in another way no idea whatcha mean.
*I strongly reccomend to fix what ziin said on [storyboard] Background is now BG.jpg
[Ah! Easy]
00:27:296 (1) - You are mixing vocal and instrumental voice wrongly, in my opinion. and since this is a bad position for a spinner too, I'd suggest you replace it with some simple hitobjects. fixed
[Ah! Hard]
00:03:054 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Oh gawd this rhythm. But I undersand you, since you probably wanted to keep a 1/2 rhythm instead of a more complex one. In order to make this pattern more consistent I'd suggest you to add a hitcircle here 00:05:023 (x) -
and another one here 00:09:114 (x) -The one at 9 secs is the head of the spinner hnnnnngggg, But I changed the other one.
[Taiko]
No letterbox i guess it's fine, even if I think that everything plays fine, I want just to complain a minor thing:
01:26:084 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 1/6 BSD sounds just too unexpected and out of place, please consider to use another rhythm.
[Ah! Phyrearms' Insane]
you know, the intro sounds a bit weird. It is still playable for me, I'm gonna ask to some bats (if they answer to me çAAAAAç)
Good work by the way, ask to me a recheck when you think you fixed almost eveything related on sb