00:00:200 (1,2,3,4) - should be a 5 note stream
00:00:745 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - this could be all jumps, having an impactful sound on the sliderend is kinda meh
00:03:472 (3) - shorten this to be like this
http://i.imgur.com/md5sikT.png00:14:745 (2,3,4) - can be stream or something, theres noticable 1/4 sounds that can be mapped to
00:18:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - have this part end like this
http://i.imgur.com/RU1wC7L.png before it was kinda weird and awkward, might have just been spacing and flow issue tho
00:29:290 (8) - why isnt there a note after this
00:31:109 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what is this.
http://i.imgur.com/EX260wi.png is more appropriate. it can end with a slider if you think its needed
00:38:563 (8) - could be a triple
00:40:472 (5,6) - ? this is overmapped it should only be a single
00:44:018 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think this is only a triple i cant really hear it too well so this is kinda ok, ill let this one slide
00:53:017 (3) - overmapped you could make it into a slider>triple with 1/4 spacing between the slider and triple
00:58:381 (4,5,6,7,8) - ???? why this pls. also the jumps should end at 00:59:109
01:09:290 (2) - it should start here
01:11:109 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmap
01:11:835 (9) - i think i hear stuff around here for a 5 note stream
01:16:836 (7,8) - again should be a single note
01:17:290 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not sure about this
01:17:836 (8) - a triple starts here tho
01:23:836 (9) - end with a slider
this is just rhythm stuff so id recommend you go through your map at 25% speed and find where you have sliders ending on strong sounds and replace with two circles instead unless you think it fits at that part of the map
note placement is a whole other time id rather just talk about some theorys instead of modding for that xd