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pikotaro - Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen

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Topic Starter
Kampetos
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dragontail
You need a preview point!!!!
Important, reach there by Timing- set current position as preview point.


Easy
At 00:15:831, the slider should end on the white note two ticks before instead of the red tick. It does not match.
Try making some more sliders with curves, everything is too predictable and has a linear pattern.
After 00:35:734 beat, you should consider putting a short break because there is a lot of time between that note and the next.

Normal
Put less spinners, for such a short song you probably do not need any, stretching it is at 1 spinner.
The slider at 00:36:616 is a little confusing since it repeats more than once. Try making two different sliders.
The note at 00:41:249 and the slider at 00:41:469 should be moved to the left, the jump is way too big.
Consider making the spinner at 00:43:675 into a slider, it is quite short for a beginner.

Hard
Either move the note at 00:10:366 to match the spacing or move the slider right after to the right. The spacing is odd.
Do not repeat patterns too much in the beginning, show originality.
Too much spinners; makes it boring.
Change the note at 00:29:778 and the three other notes right after so that it does not overlap, makes it easier for newbies.
Do not stack sliders at 31 to 36 seconds. They are confusing and it is an unwritten law that it is unrankable.

Zarkav's Insane
Some note stacks were confusing, but besides that, it was good.
Zarkav

Quadtail wrote:

You need a preview point!!!!
Important, reach there by Timing- set current position as preview point.


Easy
At 00:15:831, the slider should end on the white note two ticks before instead of the red tick. It does not match.
Try making some more sliders with curves, everything is too predictable and has a linear pattern.
After 00:35:734 beat, you should consider putting a short break because there is a lot of time between that note and the next.

Normal
Put less spinners, for such a short song you probably do not need any, stretching it is at 1 spinner.
The slider at 00:36:616 is a little confusing since it repeats more than once. Try making two different sliders.
The note at 00:41:249 and the slider at 00:41:469 should be moved to the left, the jump is way too big.
Consider making the spinner at 00:43:675 into a slider, it is quite short for a beginner.

Hard
Either move the note at 00:10:366 to match the spacing or move the slider right after to the right. The spacing is odd.
Do not repeat patterns too much in the beginning, show originality.
Too much spinners; makes it boring.
Change the note at 00:29:778 and the three other notes right after so that it does not overlap, makes it easier for newbies.
Do not stack sliders at 31 to 36 seconds. They are confusing and it is an unwritten law that it is unrankable.

Zarkav's Insane
Some note stacks were confusing, but besides that, it was good.
can you give me the time stamp on the confusing part. also thanks for modding!
Topic Starter
Kampetos

Quadtail wrote:

You need a preview point!!!!
Important, reach there by Timing- set current position as preview point. forgot add this


Easy
At 00:15:831, the slider should end on the white note two ticks before instead of the red tick. It does not match.
Try making some more sliders with curves, everything is too predictable and has a linear pattern.
After 00:35:734 beat, you should consider putting a short break because there is a lot of time between that note and the next. forgot add this, well what ever fix this

Normal
Put less spinners, for such a short song you probably do not need any, stretching it is at 1 spinner.fixed
The slider at 00:36:616 is a little confusing since it repeats more than once. Try making two different sliders.fixed
The note at 00:41:249 and the slider at 00:41:469 should be moved to the left, the jump is way too big.fixed
Consider making the spinner at 00:43:675 into a slider, it is quite short for a beginner. fixed

Hard
Either move the note at 00:10:366 to match the spacing or move the slider right after to the right. The spacing is odd. fixed
Do not repeat patterns too much in the beginning, show originality. well i dont have any idea but i'll try to fix this
Too much spinners; makes it boring.i'll try to fix this
Change the note at 00:29:778 and the three other notes right after so that it does not overlap, makes it easier for newbies.
Do not stack sliders at 31 to 36 seconds. They are confusing and it is an unwritten law that it is unrankable. fixed

Zarkav's Insane
Some note stacks were confusing, but besides that, it was good.
sorry my english is bad XD
btw thanks a lot for mods :^)
Grim Rapper
from PC (personal chat)


Easy
overall aesthetic is needed

00:12:572 (4) - easy player won't hit this, move it closer to the 00:11:911 (3) slidertail
00:26:028 (3,4) - this is too close, consider make a gap between them
00:31:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - using the slider to cover all the white ticks is better imo

Normal
flow is pretty good, but still need aesthetic in some place (mainly in 00:10:587 (1,2,3) and 00:31:322 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1)

why you didn't use 00:10:146 ? It has beat in it
00:31:322 (5) - NC
00:36:616 (4) - NC
00:37:499 (1) - remove NC
00:43:675 - add something?

Hard
00:16:102 (8) - why making the HS 10%
00:29:337 (1) - move this to the blue tick
00:29:778 (2,3,4) - avoid stacks
00:30:440 (5) - slider end is better
00:31:322 (1,1) - make the SV slower

Zarkav's Insane
you are not shiirn

00:17:425 (1,3) - UNRANKABLE
00:19:411 (4,6) - UNRANKABLE
00:22:499 (3,5) - UNRANKABLE

00:10:146 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:014 (2,1) - dont stack a NC
00:13:014 (2,3,1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:29:999 (1) - move it slightly towards the slider-end
00:31:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aesthetic?
00:39:264 (1,2) - inconsistent with mapping concept?
00:43:896 (2,3) - ^
Zarkav

Grim Rapper wrote:

from PC (personal chat)


Easy
overall aesthetic is needed

00:12:572 (4) - easy player won't hit this, move it closer to the 00:11:911 (3) slidertail
00:26:028 (3,4) - this is too close, consider make a gap between them
00:31:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - using the slider to cover all the white ticks is better imo

Normal
flow is pretty good, but still need aesthetic in some place (mainly in 00:10:587 (1,2,3) and 00:31:322 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1)

why you didn't use 00:10:146 ? It has beat in it
00:31:322 (5) - NC
00:36:616 (4) - NC
00:37:499 (1) - remove NC
00:43:675 - add something?

Hard
00:16:102 (8) - why making the HS 10%
00:29:337 (1) - move this to the blue tick
00:29:778 (2,3,4) - avoid stacks
00:30:440 (5) - slider end is better
00:31:322 (1,1) - make the SV slower

Zarkav's Insane
you are not shiirn

00:17:425 (1,3) - UNRANKABLE
00:19:411 (4,6) - UNRANKABLE
00:22:499 (3,5) - UNRANKABLE

00:10:146 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:014 (2,1) - dont stack a NC
00:13:014 (2,3,1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:29:999 (1) - move it slightly towards the slider-end
00:31:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aesthetic?
00:39:264 (1,2) - inconsistent with mapping concept?
00:43:896 (2,3) - ^
So many mistake in my part Lul, im still a newbie mapper so this is expected. Gonna fix it. Thanks for mod!
Topic Starter
Kampetos

Grim Rapper wrote:

from PC (personal chat)


Easy
overall aesthetic is needed

00:12:572 (4) - easy player won't hit this, move it closer to the 00:11:911 (3) slidertail fixed
00:26:028 (3,4) - this is too close, consider make a gap between them fixed
00:31:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - using the slider to cover all the white ticks is better imo so better thanks

Normal
flow is pretty good, but still need aesthetic in some place (mainly in 00:10:587 (1,2,3) and 00:31:322 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1)
mybe
why you didn't use 00:10:146 ? It has beat in it why im not notice that,well what ever tanks
00:31:322 (5) - NC fixed
00:36:616 (4) - NC fixed
00:37:499 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:43:675 - add something? mybe some slider

Hard
00:16:102 (8) - why making the HS 10% because that sound is small but mybe its good using 25 or 50%?
00:29:337 (1) - move this to the blue tick what do you mean?
00:29:778 (2,3,4) - avoid stacks fixed
00:30:440 (5) - slider end is better what do you mean?
00:31:322 (1,1) - make the SV slower fixed

Zarkav's Insane
you are not shiirn LOL XD :D

00:17:425 (1,3) - UNRANKABLE
00:19:411 (4,6) - UNRANKABLE
00:22:499 (3,5) - UNRANKABLE

00:10:146 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:014 (2,1) - dont stack a NC
00:13:014 (2,3,1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:29:999 (1) - move it slightly towards the slider-end
00:31:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aesthetic?
00:39:264 (1,2) - inconsistent with mapping concept?
00:43:896 (2,3) - ^
plz
if you want to mod some map you need make the reason for it.
because, some mapper will not know what do you mean or mapper will confuse your mod ;)

thanks for mod :D
Zarkav

Grim Rapper wrote:

Zarkav's Insane
you are not shiirn LOL xd

00:17:425 (1,3) - UNRANKABLE
00:19:411 (4,6) - UNRANKABLE
00:22:499 (3,5) - UNRANKABLE

00:10:146 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:014 (2,1) - dont stack a NC
00:13:014 (2,3,1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:29:999 (1) - move it slightly towards the slider-end
00:31:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aesthetic?
00:39:264 (1,2) - inconsistent with mapping concept?
00:43:896 (2,3) - ^
i already update it, pls check
Grim Rapper

Mr kamfret wrote:

Grim Rapper wrote:

from PC (personal chat)


Easy
overall aesthetic is needed

00:12:572 (4) - easy player won't hit this, move it closer to the 00:11:911 (3) slidertail fixed
00:26:028 (3,4) - this is too close, consider make a gap between them fixed
00:31:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - using the slider to cover all the white ticks is better imo so better thanks

Normal
flow is pretty good, but still need aesthetic in some place (mainly in 00:10:587 (1,2,3) and 00:31:322 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1)
mybe
why you didn't use 00:10:146 ? It has beat in it why im not notice that,well what ever tanks
00:31:322 (5) - NC fixed
00:36:616 (4) - NC fixed
00:37:499 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:43:675 - add something? mybe some slider

Hard
00:16:102 (8) - why making the HS 10% because that sound is small but mybe its good using 25 or 50%?
00:29:337 (1) - move this to the blue tick what do you mean?
00:29:778 (2,3,4) - avoid stacks fixed
00:30:440 (5) - slider end is better what do you mean?
00:31:322 (1,1) - make the SV slower fixed

Zarkav's Insane
you are not shiirn LOL XD :D

00:17:425 (1,3) - UNRANKABLE
00:19:411 (4,6) - UNRANKABLE
00:22:499 (3,5) - UNRANKABLE

00:10:146 (1,2,3) - inconsistent spacing
00:13:014 (2,1) - dont stack a NC
00:13:014 (2,3,1,2) - incosistent spacing
00:29:999 (1) - move it slightly towards the slider-end
00:31:322 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - aesthetic?
00:39:264 (1,2) - inconsistent with mapping concept?
00:43:896 (2,3) - ^
plz
if you want to mod some map you need make the reason for it.
because, some mapper will not know what do you mean or mapper will confuse your mod ;)

thanks for mod :D
Dude the reasoning is all there lol
If u didn't know english, it's not my fault then
Usually a modder won't say this, but even that you didn't give kudosu for mod that you need, how rude

EDIT: When you made changes based on my modes, you MUST give them credits in form of kudosu, read the rules maybe?
Topic Starter
Kampetos
plz
if you want to mod some map you need make the reason for it.
because, some mapper will not know what do you mean or mapper will confuse your mod ;)

thanks for mod :D

Dude the reasoning is all there lol
If u didn't know english, it's not my fault then
Usually a modder won't say this, but even that you didn't give kudosu for mod that you need, how rude

EDIT: When you made changes based on my modes, you MUST give them credits in form of kudosu, read the rules maybe?
Sorry i forgot give you kudos XD

And yes maybe it's my fault because can't use English so well sorry :)
Grim Rapper
.
Adventure
saya boleh gd kah?
Topic Starter
Kampetos

arnoldusj wrote:

saya boleh gd kah?
Yes you can

Diff : whatever you want, but if you can pls do insane

AN : and plz making diff for ranked
Dragontail
I could make difficulty, if wanted
Topic Starter
Kampetos

Quadtail wrote:

I could make difficulty, if wanted
Sure, plz do :D
Dragontail
I will make harder hard.
Adventure
maaf lama. ane sibuk jadi gk on
GD
osu file format v14

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 2.1

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Title:Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen
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Creator:Mr kamfret
Version:arnold's Insane
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32,104,42315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,224,42535,1,0,1:0:0:0:
96,272,42756,5,0,1:0:0:0:
264,32,42977,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,352,43197,5,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,45403,12,0,48932,0:0:0:0:

offsetnya : 6.580 soalx gk pas tadi ketukannya

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Artist : ピコ太郎
Romainzed Artist : PIKOTARO
Title : ペンパイナッポーアッポーペン「ロング」バージョン
Romainzed Title : Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen
Tag : PPAP Zarkav arnoldusj
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arnoldusj wrote:

maaf lama. ane sibuk jadi gk on
wkwkwkw sama saya juga sibuk :v
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