Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori

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Rakuen
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 9 January, 2018 at 1:36:20 AM

Artist: Shikata Akiko
Title: Katayoku no Tori
Source: うみねこのなく頃に
Tags: Umineko no Naku Koro ni walaowey [_-Scarlet-_] opening op tv size
BPM: 220
Filesize: 8846kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. [ -Scarlet- ]'s Phantasy (5.45 stars, 353 notes)
  2. Easy (1.04 stars, 54 notes)
  3. Hard (3.24 stars, 259 notes)
  4. Insane (4.6 stars, 323 notes)
  5. Normal (1.98 stars, 121 notes)
  6. Walao's Insane (3.74 stars, 294 notes)


Download: Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Umineko no Naku Koro ni(うみねこのなく頃に) OP
Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori
志方あきこ - 片翼の鳥

- Rakuen
- Rakuen
- Rakuen
- walaowey
- Rakuen
- [ -Scarlet- ]

F D Flourite
Kibbleru
Kurai (Metadata: source fix)
Kurai

Check out full version of the song made by IceKalt: Shikata Akiko - Katayoku no Tori

Metadata Source: http://umineko.tv/web/main/collection/themesong.html (Thanks to kunka)
Rhythm (metronome) credit to Narcissu
Hailie
kunka
Narcissu
-Tochi
Gibcio
Milar001
Underforest
F D Flourite
Kibbleru
MrDorian
Lama Poluna
Kurai
Cheri
Idk if I be much help for this map at all but I'll sure try...

Phantasy

00:26:679 (4,1) - tbh I find this part much easier if it was move maybe something like x: 325 y: 48 but that is just me

01:10:724 (6,7,1) - right here seems 01:10:861 (7) - have a bigger jump than 01:10:997 (1) - when it should be the other way around

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Sorry for not finding much still a newbie to modding...
kunka
Hi~
General

  1. Recommended of switch of source "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" and tag "うみねこのなく頃に". Anime title which suits the source is "うみねこのなく頃に". It's good for a tag because "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" is a romaji notation of the anime title.
  2. Add "opening" and "tv size" to tag. Official site / image
Phantasy

  1. 01:24:361 (3,4) - I think symmetry like a 01:24:906 (5,6) - is good.
  2. 00:54:088 (2,3,4,1,2) - Flow felt a little cramped. Moving 00:54:906 (2,3,4) - to the bottom right will make the flow more relaxed and easier to play. For instance https://puu.sh/xjUhv.jpg
Walao's Insane

  1. 00:35:543 (3) - Curve feels cramped. Using a loose slider like a 00:33:361 (1,2,3) - looks good.
Hard

  1. 00:06:088 (3) - I think 1/4 slider is suitable. Important that you have to click a 00:06:088 - . like this 01:18:361 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:12:634 (3) - ^
  3. 00:13:724 (1,2) - I recommend ctrl+G. 00:13:997 - has a sound but slider-end is enough. Rather, 00:14:269 - is better because there is a vocal.
  4. 00:19:861 (4) - In this triplet, 00:19:997 - makes a strong sound. Would you change to 1/4 slider? https://puu.sh/xk2pH.jpg
  5. 00:21:770 (5) - fmm,,I guess I don't need in hard diff.
  6. 00:24:361 (3,4,5) - I felt sense of incongruity a little. try this https://puu.sh/xk2Ds.jpg
  7. 00:39:770 (5) - I don't think this is necessary ,too.
Normal

  1. 00:01:452 (2) - I think that the pattern of this rhythm has a good reverse like a 00:11:270 (2) -
  2. 00:54:634 (3) - The sound has the same pattern as 00:52:997 (1) - or 00:53:815 (2) - . It'd be nice to change the same and add a circle at the end. https://puu.sh/xk3aH.jpg
Easy

  • fine

Overall good map.
Also, soft4 is only used in a small part of easy diff. I felt your seriousness there. GL ;)
Topic Starter
Rakuen

DJ Lucky wrote:

Idk if I be much help for this map at all but I'll sure try...

Phantasy

00:26:679 (4,1) - tbh I find this part much easier if it was move maybe something like x: 325 y: 48 but that is just me It's a stack and has changes in rhythm so no

01:10:724 (6,7,1) - right here seems 01:10:861 (7) - have a bigger jump than 01:10:997 (1) - when it should be the other way around Its a smaller one now

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Sorry for not finding much still a newbie to modding...
Thanks for the mods!

kunka wrote:

Hi~
General

  1. Recommended of switch of source "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" and tag "うみねこのなく頃に". Anime title which suits the source is "うみねこのなく頃に". It's good for a tag because "Umineko no Naku Koro ni" is a romaji notation of the anime title.
  2. Add "opening" and "tv size" to tag. Official site / image Fixed meta, thanks!
Phantasy

  1. 01:24:361 (3,4) - I think symmetry like a 01:24:906 (5,6) - is good. Fixed
  2. 00:54:088 (2,3,4,1,2) - Flow felt a little cramped. Moving 00:54:906 (2,3,4) - to the bottom right will make the flow more relaxed and easier to play. For instance https://puu.sh/xjUhv.jpg Fixed
Hard

  1. 00:06:088 (3) - I think 1/4 slider is suitable. Important that you have to click a 00:06:088 - . like this 01:18:361 (4,5,6,1,2,3) -
  2. 00:12:634 (3) - ^ Keeping these 2 because I want to emphasize the music after them, but I might change soon
  3. 00:13:724 (1,2) - I recommend ctrl+G. 00:13:997 - has a sound but slider-end is enough. Rather, 00:14:269 - is better because there is a vocal.
  4. 00:19:861 (4) - In this triplet, 00:19:997 - makes a strong sound. Would you change to 1/4 slider? https://puu.sh/xk2pH.jpg Fixed
  5. 00:21:770 (5) - fmm,,I guess I don't need in hard diff. Fixed
  6. 00:24:361 (3,4,5) - I felt sense of incongruity a little. try this https://puu.sh/xk2Ds.jpg Fixed
  7. 00:39:770 (5) - I don't think this is necessary ,too. Reduced triplet, made changes in rhythm
Normal

  1. 00:01:452 (2) - I think that the pattern of this rhythm has a good reverse like a 00:11:270 (2) - The reverse is only used to connect between long rhythms
  2. 00:54:634 (3) - The sound has the same pattern as 00:52:997 (1) - or 00:53:815 (2) - . It'd be nice to change the same and add a circle at the end. Emphasize on the finish, but I don't wanna 'overmap' in Normalhttps://puu.sh/xk3aH.jpg
Easy

  • fine

Overall good map.
Also, soft4 is only used in a small part of easy diff. I felt your seriousness there. GL ;)
Thanks for the mods!
Narcissu
這歌的拍號是6/8 110BPM,因為3/4 和6/8 是兩回事而6/8 跟6/4沒有區別所以我建議用6/4 220BPM …… 可以參考其他圖感受一下兩者的不同

6/8 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/115080 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/620982 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/438512 (這裡的BPM都是兩倍)

3/4 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/734910 https://osu.ppy.sh/b/419860
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